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SHITHI
January 1, 2009, 05:35 PM
this is a combined story .. ye story create ki gayi hai 'miley

jab hum tum' aur 'dill mill gayye' ki charecters ko leke ...

thanx to my bestest frnd ever ayesha for giving me this idea..

actually ye story mai post jarur karungi .. par episodes hum

dono milke banayenge ...


jans college , one of the best college in mumbai .. pure

indiase hajaro students ate hai yaha parne ... education ho ya

sports sab me jans college ke students expert hai .. chaliye

ek nazar dalte hai is college ke faculti members pe :

1.Mr. Shashank sharma - principal


2.Mr. shukla - professor


3. Ms. kirti mehra - professor

4. Mr. shuvankar - professor

5. Ms. Aha - professor

ye to rahe teachers aur principal ... students ke bareme apko

dhire dhire pata chal jayegi ..

SHITHI
January 1, 2009, 05:46 PM
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aaakjj
January 2, 2009, 12:31 PM
:eek:..wowwwwwwwwwwww :D:D:D

SHITHI
January 2, 2009, 05:14 PM
:eek:..wowwwwwwwwwwww :D:D

thanx vai ... :D

SHITHI
January 2, 2009, 05:58 PM
jaypur : 6 a.m : in ridhima's house

nupur sorahi hai aur apni rajkumar ke sapne dekhrahi hai ...
nupur's dream : koi ladka sehra bandhke bike me charke araha

hai ...

achanak alarm ke sound se uski sapna tut jati hai .. aisa uske

sath ye pehli bar nehi horahi hai.. bachpanse wo ye sapne

dekhte arahi hai .. lekin wo sapnoka rajkumar uske pas anese

pehlehi sapne kisina kisi tara tut jate hai...

sapne tut janeke bad nupur jump karke uth jati hai ..

nupur : aj ferse sapna tut gaya .. lagta hai kabhi pura sapna

dekh hi nehi paungi ..

nupur hat muh dhoke kitchen me jati hai ... waha padma ji

nashta bana rahi thi ..

nupur : gud morning ma ...

padma : gud morning beta ... hat muh dholi ??

nupur : kab ki ... di kaha hai ??

padma : aur kaha hogi ?? humesha ki tarah mandir gayi hogi ..

nupur : hmm ..



in the temple :

ridhima : hey vagwan ajtak jo bhi maine chaha apne diya ..

mujhe aur nupur ko jans college me admission milgayi hai ..

kal hi hum mumbai chale jayenge .. ma aur apko chorke janeka

man nehi karta .. lekin jana parega ... ma ka dhyan rakhna ...

aur pls nupur ki sapno ka raj kumar use dikha dejiye .. jaldi

... plssss

nupur pichese : pls kehke koi fayda nehi .. ye to apke har

bat mante hai .. bsa meri liye jo mango wahi nehi dete ...pata

nehi kis janam ka dushmani niva rahe hai mujhse .. by god ..

ridhima : aise nehi kehte nupur ... sorry bol ..

nupur : accha di , sorry

ridhima : mujhe nehi inse bol ...

nupur kan pakarke : sorry ..

ridhima : ab ghar chale ?? :D

nupur : ha chalo ...


in ridhima's house :

sab breakfast table me :

nupur : di ek bat bolu ?? tum itne subha kaise uth jati ho ??

suraj bhi tumhare uthneke bad uth ti .. kabhi kabhi to lagta

hai ke suraj tumhe nehi , tum suraj ko jagati ho ..

padma in a sad face : fer to kalse yahake suraj nehi uthegi

ridhima feels sad : aisi kiu kehti ho ma ?? agar ap aise

kahenge to mai nehi jaungi ..

padma : sorry beta ..

nupur : are bas bas bas .. aplog to daily soaps ke tarah rone

beth gaye ...

ridhima aur padmaji has deti hai ..


after breakfast :

nupur : di ... chalo na thora ghumke ate hai .. pata nehi fer

kab ayungi yaha .. chalo na ..

ridhima : chal ...


nupur aur ridhima ghumne nikalte hai ... wo dono dour rahe the

.. achanak ridhima kisise takra jati hai .. uski ek earing gir

jati hai .. par use pata nehi chalta .. uski dupatta us ladke

ke shirt ke button ke sath attak jati hai .. wo use churane ki

koushish karti hai..

nupur durse : di !!! jaldi ao ..

ridhima : ha .. arahi hu ..

ridhima jaldise apna dupatta churake nupurke pas jati hai ..

aur wo ladka khare khare ridhima ko dekhraha tha ..


ridhima aur nupur ghar pouch ti hai .. dono apna bag pack

karti hai ...

padma : chalo ab sojao .. kal subha jaldi uthna hai ..

wo dono sojati hai ...


next morning :

ridhima aur nupur padma ke sath rail station me ...

padma : tum dono apna dhyan rakhna .. thik se parai karna ..

aur waha pouchtehi mujhe phone karna .. i'll miss u ..

ridhima :hum bhi ma ..

ridhima aur nupur padmako hug karte hai ... tabhi train ajati

hai ..

nupur : di , train agayi ..

ridhima : bye ma ..

nupur : ma .. ap pls apna kheyal rakhna .. aur jyada kam mat

karna ..

padma : are bas bas .. jaldise train me jao warna train ****

jayegi .

ridhima aur nupur train me charte hai ..

sit me beth ke :

nupur : finally hum mumbai ja rahe hai by god ...

ridhima : ha , pata nehi wahake log kaise honge ..

nupur :i m sure acche hi honge .. kya pata .. waha jake mujhe

meri rajkumar bhi dikh jaye .. waise di hum to yahase sidha

hostel jaynge na ??

ridhima : ha ..

nupur : chalo thik hai ...

SHITHI
January 13, 2009, 08:16 PM
in jans girls' hostel :

ridhima aur nupur hostel reception me pouchti hai ..

receptionist lovely ji : welcome ji ..

ridhima : thank u .. mai ridhima gupta aur ye nupur gupta .. humne register karwai thi ..

lovely : accha . thoda wait kijiye .. mai dekhti hu ..

lovly ji register book check karke ridhima aur nupur ko unke kamre tak lejati hai ..

lovely : lo ji .. ye hai ap donoka kamra ..

nupur : par yaha to tin bed hai ..

lovely : ji kya hai ki yaha ek aur student ane wali hai ..

nupur : o ..

ridhima aur nupur room me apne saman rakhna shuru karti hai ..

tabhi darwaja jorse khul jati hai aur ek ladki gir jati...

nupur : lagta hai yehi hai humura room mate ..

ridhima : hm .. chal madat karte hai ..

nupur : ha chalo ..


ridhima aur nupur uski madat karte hai ..

ridhima : tum thik to ho na ??

ladki : hanji . mai to thik hu .. ye bag itna vari hai ke samval nehi payi ..

nupur : lagito nehi ??

ladki : nehi .. chaddho ji .. waise mai muskaan , muskaan chadda ..aur tum dono ??

ridhima : mai ridhima gupta aur ye nupur gupta ..


muskaan : behen ho ??

nupur : ha ..

muskaan : are wah .. kounse year mai ho tum dono ??

nupur : mai 1st year .. aur di 2nd year ...

muskaan : iske matlab mai tumhare classmate banungi ..

ridhima : bohot bate hogayi .. ab thodda est karlo ... kal clg jana hai ..


next day:

nupur : di mai muskaan ke sath college jarahi hu .. ap bhi chaliye na ..

ridhima : lekin class shuru hone me abhi bohot time hai .. abhi jake kya karungi ???

muskaan : koi bat nehi .. hum dono jate hai .. tum badme ajana ...

nupur : lekin di ap akele kaise jayenge ??

ridhima : koi bat nehi .. waise bhi mujhe kuch kitabe kharidni hai .. mai book store se sidha college ajaungi ...


nupur : thik hai .. fer college me milte hai ..


nupur aur muskaan chali jati hai ..

ridhima bookstore ke bahar taxi ke liye wait karrahi hai .. ahanak ek bike ake uske samne break karti hai .. bike me betha hua ladka wahi ladka hai jise ridhima jaipur me takrayi thi ..

ridhima : ap ?? ap to wahi hai na jaipurwale ...

ladka : ji ha .. lift chahiye ??

ridhima : nehi mai taxi me chali jaungi

ladka : taxi milna ahsan nehi hai .. apko kaha jana hai batayie mai lift detahu

ridhima : mujhe nehi chahiye ...

ladka : kiu ?? kya problem hai ??

ridhima : are !! aise kaise lift lelu ?? na koi jan na pehchan ..

ladka : mai tera armaan !!!!!!!!

ridhima : what ???

armaan : i mean mera nam armaan ...

SHITHI
January 21, 2009, 06:18 AM
in jans girls' hostel :

ridhima aur nupur hostel reception me pouchti hai ..

receptionist lovely ji : welcome ji ..

ridhima : thank u .. mai ridhima gupta aur ye nupur gupta .. humne register karwai thi ..

lovely : accha . thoda wait kijiye .. mai dekhti hu ..

lovly ji register book check karke ridhima aur nupur ko unke kamre tak lejati hai ..

lovely : lo ji .. ye hai ap donoka kamra ..

nupur : par yaha to tin bed hai ..

lovely : ji kya hai ki yaha ek aur student ane wali hai ..

nupur : o ..

ridhima aur nupur room me apne saman rakhna shuru karti hai ..

tabhi darwaja jorse khul jati hai aur ek ladki gir jati...

nupur : lagta hai yehi hai humura room mate ..

ridhima : hm .. chal madat karte hai ..

nupur : ha chalo ..


ridhima aur nupur uski madat karte hai ..

ridhima : tum thik to ho na ??

ladki : hanji . mai to thik hu .. ye bag itna vari hai ke samval nehi payi ..

nupur : lagito nehi ??

ladki : nehi .. chaddho ji .. waise mai muskaan , muskaan chadda ..aur tum dono ??

ridhima : mai ridhima gupta aur ye nupur gupta ..


muskaan : behen ho ??

nupur : ha ..

muskaan : are wah .. kounse year mai ho tum dono ??

nupur : mai 1st year .. aur di 2nd year ...

muskaan : iske matlab mai tumhare classmate banungi ..

ridhima : bohot bate hogayi .. ab thodda est karlo ... kal clg jana hai ..


next day:

nupur : di mai muskaan ke sath college jarahi hu .. ap bhi chaliye na ..

ridhima : lekin class shuru hone me abhi bohot time hai .. abhi jake kya karungi ???

muskaan : koi bat nehi .. hum dono jate hai .. tum badme ajana ...

nupur : lekin di ap akele kaise jayenge ??

ridhima : koi bat nehi .. waise bhi mujhe kuch kitabe kharidni hai .. mai book store se

sidha college ajaungi ...


nupur : thik hai .. fer college me milte hai ..


nupur aur muskaan chali jati hai ..

ridhima bookstore ke bahar taxi ke liye wait karrahi hai .. ahanak ek bike ake uske samne

break karti hai .. bike me betha hua ladka wahi ladka hai jise ridhima jaipur me takrayi

thi ..

ridhima : ap ?? ap to wahi hai na jaipurwale ...

ladka : ji ha .. lift chahiye ??

ridhima : nehi mai taxi me chali jaungi

ladka : taxi milna ahsan nehi hai .. apko kaha jana hai batayie mai lift detahu

ridhima : mujhe nehi chahiye ...

ladka : kiu ?? kya problem hai ??

ridhima : are !! aise kaise lift lelu ?? na koi jan na pehchan ..

ladka : mai tera armaan !!!!!!!!

ridhima : what ???

armaan : i mean mera nam armaan ...

ridhima : oh ..

tabhi ridhima ko taxi miljati hai ...

ridhima : sorry .. aj tumhara luck thora kharab hai u know ..

armaan : jate jate ye to batati jao ke fer kabhi milenge ya nehi ..

ridhima : agar kismatme likha hai to jarur milenge ..

ridhima college pouchti hai .. waha enter kartehi nupur uske pas ati ..

nupur : di !! tum agai .. mai to dar hi gayi thi .. by god .. itni der kaise kardi ??

ridhima : ha wo taxi nehi milrahi thi na ..

nupur : oh .. accha .. ab chalo na .. mujhse aur wait nehi ho rahi ..

ridhima : itni excited kiu ???

nupur : di !! rajkumarse milna hai na ... sapnoka rajkumar ... bike pe charke ayega aur

mujhe urake lejayega ...

bate karte karte nupur ek cycle se takra jati hai...

ridhima : are samvalke !! tujhe lagi to nehi ..?

nupur : nehi di .. pata nehi kis bewakuf ne yaha bij sarak pe yu cycle park karke rakkha

hai .. bye god ..

nupur gusseme cycle ko kick karti hai ..

ridhima : nupur !!!

koi pichese : excuse me ..!

nupur aur ridhima piche murti hai ..

maaynk : tumhe kisine tamij nehi sikhaya kya ??? kisi aurke cycle me aise koi kick karta

hai kya ??

nupur gussese : meri pyer hai mai jise chahe kick karu tumhe kya ???

mayank nupur ke dress me coke daldeta hai .. ridhima shocks ... nupur gets angry ..

nupur chillake :abe akkal ke dushman ye kya kiya ???

mayank : mara hat hai hai mai jo chahe wo karu ... !!

mayank wahase chala jata hai .. nupur gussese use dekhti hai ..

nupur : di !!! tumne us bandar ko kiu kuch nehi kaha ??

ridhima : galti teri thi nupur !!i think u should say sorry to him ..

nupur : mai sorry bolu ??? us gadhe ko ??? by god di tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho ??

ridhima : nupur !!

nupur : di!!

ridhima : accha chal washroom jake dress saf karle ..

nupur : ha chalo ..


ridhima aur nupur washroom jati hai .. there they meet anjali ..

anjali : tum log !!! i guess tum dono naye ho iscollege me , right ???

ridhima : absolutly ... actually aj humura pehla class hai u know ..

anjali : tum dono ek sath ...

nupur : actuaally hum dono behen hai na isiliye .. mai choti aur ye bari .. mai 1st year

aur ye 2nd year .. hum dono na jaipur se aye hai .. yaha hostel mai thehre hai .. aur pata

hai

anjali : hey hey hey .. relax .. maine tum donoki biodata nehi mangi .. you know .. but

nice to meet u .. mai anjali .. second year ... ok chalo mai tum donoko college dikhati hu

...

SHITHI
February 2, 2009, 04:01 PM
anjali : hey hey hey .. relax .. maine tum donoki biodata nehi mangi .. you know .. but

nice to meet u .. mai anjali .. second year ... ok chalo mai tum donoko college dikhati hu

...


nupur khush hoke : are wah .. thik hai chalo .. chale di ??

ridhima : thik hai chalo ..

anjali undonoko cafeteria me lati hai ..

anjali : you know what .. is colllege ke maximum student tumhe yehi milenge .. wo

miniskirtwali ladkiko dekhrahe ho ?? wo hai dia .. is college ki diva ... sare ladke marte

hai ispe .. thori stylish hai .. but dilki bohoti acchi hai .. aur dia ke sath jo ladka

betha hai wo hai uday .. dia ke vai ... dono twins hai .. uday thoda dumb hai .. saradin

ladkioke piche vagta rehta hai ..

nupur : jogging karne ke liye ladkioke piche vagne ki kya jarurat hai ??

anjali : what ?? jogging ???

ridhima : nupur !! uske kehneki matlab hai flirting .. uday flirting bohot karta hai ..

anjali : right ... lekin ajtak isse koi ladki nehi pati ... but still he flirts ... ye dono

first year me hai ..

anjali age barti hai .. piche piche ridhima aur nupur bhi ...

anjali : waise uday football kafi accha khelta hai .. aur wo dekhrahe ho us ladke ko .. jo

ladkio ke bij me betha hai .. wo hai samrat ... first year ... ladkiya dewani hai iske liye

... ye bhi unhe naraz nehi karta hai .. u know what i mean .. very passionate about music

.. aur wo do ladke ko dekhrahe ho waha bethe hai .. wo dono hai rahul aur atul .. rahul 1st

year aur atul 2nd year .. donohi bohot friendly hai .. abhi tak to yehi log hai .. waqt

anepe baki sabko bhi jan jaoge .. ap class me chale .. time hogayi hai ..

ridhima : are ha ... nupur all the best ..

nupur : tumhe bhi di .. class khatam honeke bad milte hai ..

ridhima : ok ..

nupur chali jati hai .. ridhima aur anji bhi apne class ke taraf barte hai .. ridhima

achanak kisise takra jati hai .. uski kitabe sare gir jate hai .. wo use uthane lagti hai

.. wo ladka bhi uski help karti hai .. he was our very own armaan !!!

ridhima use dekhke : tum ??!!!

armman : hey tum ??? yaha kya karrahi ho ??

ridhima : i m a student here

armaan : wooww .. merehi class me ho tum .. iske matlab hum dost huye .. right ..??

anji : hey hey wait ..do u guys know each other .. ???

armaan : bohoti acchi tarase .. pehle nazar mehi mere bahome ake jo giri thi ..!!!!

anji : what ???!!!

ridhima : jhut mat bolo .. it was just an accident ... mai jan bujke nehi giri thi ..

armaan : relax .. i was just joking .. waise mai armaan .. armaan malik ..

ridhima : ridhima .. ridhima gupta ..

anji : guys kirti maam arahi hai ... jaldi chalo ..

armaan : shit !! chalo chalo ..

ridhima : par ..

armaan : shhh .. let's go barna bohot problem hojayega ..

sab class me enter karte hai .. baki students bhi jaldise apne appne sit me beth jate hai

.. ridhima anji ke pas beth ti hai


kirti class me enter karte hai .. sab sidhe beth jate hai ..

kirti : gud morning class ... i guess humesha ki tarah aj bhi aplog koi na koi galti jarur

karenge !!! aur meri mood kharap kardenge .. mujhe apni time waste karneki koi shouk nehi

hai .. lekin ha .. agar koi class karneke mood me nehi hai to class chorke ja sakte hai ...

aur agar kisiko class me rehna hai then pls be attentive ..


ek ladki chewinggum chaba rahi thi ..

kirti use dekhke : breakfast karneki time khatam ho chuki hai .. aur agar ferbhi apko

kuchbhi khane pineki man kare to jaiye .. cafeteria me jake khaiye .. out !!!

student : sorry ma'am .. galti hogayi ..

kirti : i hope aisi galti fer kabhi nehi hogi ..

ek ladka hat me bracelet aur kan me chotasa ring pehna tha ..

kirti uske pas jake : agar churiya pehennaka itnahi shouk hai to kalse churiyo ke sath sari

bhi pehenke ajana ... aur bhi acche lagoge ..

ridhima : ye ma'am kafi strict lagti hai ...

anji : kafi !!! bohoti jyada strict hai .. inke samne sab kuch perfect honi chahiye ..

ridz : mujhe to inhe kuch puchnese bhi dar lagrahi hai ..

kirti ridz ko anji ke sath bat karte huye dekhti hai ..

kirti : u stand up !!!

SHITHI
February 8, 2009, 06:45 PM
ridz dar jati hai .,.. dheere dheere uthti hai ..

kirti : what's ur name

ridhz : ridhima gupta ..

kirti : nayi ho ??

ridz sar hilati hai ..

kirti : ayinda mere class me mere siwa kisi aurse bat karneke bareme sochna bhi mat ..

ridz : sorry ma'am ..

kirti : thik hai beth jayiye ..

ridhima beth jati hai .. tabhi nikita vagi hui room me enter karti hai .. kirti ko dekhke

ruk jati hai ..

kirti : ms. nikita !! aneki jarurat kya thi ajka din gharpe hi ruk jate !!!

nikita : ma'am i m extremely sorry .. wo actually meri car kharab hogayi thi .. to use thik

karte karte late hogayi ..

kirti : agese paydal chalke ayiga .. !!! come in ..

niki chup chap jake armaan ke pas beth jati hai ..

armaan nikise : teri car bhi na .. jab dekho bigar jata hai ..

niki dheerese : tere pehi gaya hai .. !! ab chup reh barna kirti maam se ferse dat paregi

..


udhar nupur apni class ke taraf barti hai .. muskaan bhi use mil jati hai ..

muskaan : are nupur !! ye teri dress ko kya hua ???

nupur : puch mat yaar .. ek bandar mila gaya tha raste me .. coke fekdiya mere dress pe..

mayank pichese : puri bat kiu nehi kehti ???!!!

nupur aur muskaan piche murti hai ..

mayank : ye kiu nehi batati ke tumne us BANDAR ka cycle pe lath mari isiliye usne tumpe

coke feka .. !!!

nup : tum !!! mujhe follow karte karte yaha tak pouch gaye ???

mayank : tumhara picha ??!!! mai kiu karne laga tumhe follow ?

nup : a .. wo .. a ..

maya : a o a kya karrahi ho ?? batao na ? batao batao ..

nup : mujhe kya pata ?? tum batao tum kiu karrahe ho follow ?

may : may follow nehi karraha hu ..

nu : tum karrahe ho ..

ma : nehi

nu : ha

ma : nehi

nu : ha

muskaan :oye bas karo ..

tulsi agarwal
February 8, 2009, 06:54 PM
wow awesome....cool part...plz..post next part soon

SHITHI
February 15, 2009, 08:47 PM
thankx tulsi .... :D i hope u r enjoying this story ..

tulsi agarwal
February 15, 2009, 08:49 PM
ya i am so when r u going to post next part

SHITHI
February 15, 2009, 08:55 PM
here is the next part :

muskaan :oye bas karo ..


muskaan : tum log kya yaha vote dene ayeho jo nehi ha nehi ha karrahe ho ?? waise tum ho koun ??

mayank : mayank . mayank malik .. is bach ka first boy ..

nu : first boy ?? huh !!! isiliye itna ghamandi ho..

ma : mai ghamandi hu ???

nu : tumhe kisine abhi tak bataya nehi ye bat !!!!

mus: chor na nupur .. kiu is bechare ko pareshan karrahi hai ??

nu : dekh muskaan ...

may : ha ha samjha do apni dost ko ... aur ek advice du ?? ye to pagal hai hi .. lekin agar tum iske sath jyada der tak rahe to tumbhi pagal ho jaoge ..

nu : pagal kisko bola ???

ma : tumhe ...

nu : mai pagal hu to tumbhi sarki ho ..

ma : mai sarci hu ??

nu : ha .. mr. M3 !!!

mus : mr. M3 ?!!??!!??

nu : ha , mr. monkey mayank malik ... hui na m3 ???

mus : wah !!!

ma : tumhe to mai ..

mus : oye bas karo ... class nehi karni kya ??? dekh nupur , aj waise hi pehli class hai .. chal ...

muskaan nupur ko wahase khich ke le jati hai ..

mayank bhi piche piche class me enter karta hai ..

unke first class ms. aha lengi .. ms. aha class me enter karti hai ..

muskaan - nupur ek sath , mayank-uday eksath , dia-samrat ek sath bethe ai ..


ms. aha nupur aur muskaan se : tum dono shahed naye ho ..

nupur : ji ha ma'am .. wo actually kya hai na mai jaipur se hu .. meri behen bhi yaha mere sath admit hui hai ... wo na 2nd year mai hai .. to ma ne kaha kiu na dono ekhi sath admit ho jao ?? to hogayi admission .. waise ekbat bolu maam .. ye sari na ap pe bohot jach rahi hai by god ... agar ap iske sath black color ki earings pehnengi na to aur bhi acchi lagenggi ..

nupur ki ye continuous bak bak sunke mayank irritate hone lagta hai .. sammy aur diya hasne lagte hai ... uday as usual confused ho jata hai ..

ms.aha khush hoke : really ???!!

muskaan : ha maam reaalyy .. ye bilkul sahi kehrahi hai ..

ms.aha : that's so sweet of both of u ... waise tum donoka nam kyahai ???

nupur : mai nupur aur ye muskaan ...

mayank slowly : in short chatter box no.1 & chatter box no.2 !!! donoko ekhi class me honi thi kya ???

sweetpragya_mohta
February 18, 2009, 04:26 PM
heyy i am new to this forum i just read ur ff its really nice

SHITHI
February 20, 2009, 04:58 PM
heyy i am new to this forum i just read ur ff its really nice

welcome in this forum pragya .. [ i guess ur name is pragya] ... have fun in this forum .. :D

SHITHI
February 20, 2009, 05:03 PM
ridhima ki class khatam hoti hai .. sab class se bahar nikalte hai ..

anji : canteenme chale ??

ridz : wo .. nupur ..

anji : dont worry nupur bhi wahi mil jayegi .. canteen me chalte hai , waha sabse mulakat bhi hojayegi ..

ridz : thik hai ..

anji : a... 1 minute .. [ niki aur ammy se ] hey niki tum dono bhi ajaona ..

niki : ha chalo .. [ ridz se ] btw i m nikita , in short niki ... aur tum ??

ridz smile karke : ridhima

armaan : in short ridz ??

niki : wow armaan !! tune itni jaldi iski short name bhi decide karli .. [ ammy ke kan me ] chakkar kya hai ??

ammy : nothing .. kuch nehi .. tu chalna yaar canteen me .. chalo ridhima cantten chalte hai ..

niki : yah let's go RIDZ !!!


sab canteen me chalte hai ..

waha nupurke class bhi khatam hote hai .. sab usse introduce karte hai ..

dia : hi babes .. i m dia ..

sammy : i m sammy ..

uday [ thora style marke ] : hi .. i m uday U D A Y .. uday ..

dia : dodo !!! atleast inhe to tang mat karo .. aj inke pehli class hai

uday : maine kaha inko tang kia ..?? [ nup aur mus se ] tum donohi batao .. kya maine tumhe tang kiya ??

nup : bilkul nehi ..

uday : dekha dids .. nehi kiya ..

dia : dodo ..!!

uday : dids !!!

sammy : okk guys .. canteen chale ..?? baki bate wahi karte hai .. ok ??

dia : sure .. chale ??

sab canteen jate hai .. baki sab bhi wahi milte hai ..ridz nupur ko gale lagati hai ..

ridz : pehli class kaisi rahi ??

nupur : bohoti acchi .. ms. aha ki to jawab hi nehi by god .. aur apki ??

ridz : meri bhi acchi rahi ..

ammy pichese : bas kirti ma'am ki dat pargayi .....

ridz armaan ke taraf dekhti hai .. aur fer sar jhuka leti hai ..

ammy : ah .. i m sorry .. mujhe shahed ye nehi kehna chahiye tha ..

nupur : to kya hua ?? tum nehi bhi kehte , tab bhi mujhe pata chal jati ..

amy : kaise ??

ridz : mai khud hi bata deti ..

ammy : tum ??

nup : aur nehi to kya ?? di mujhse kabhi kuch nehi chupati hai .. hai na di ??

ridz smiles .. baki sab bhi smile karte hai .. ab nupur ridz ke dostose aur ridz nupurke dostose introduced hoti hai ... sab milke hasi mazak karte hai .. bohot jalidi hi nupur , ridz aur muskaan unke acche dost ban jate hai ..

tabhi waha mayank ake armaan se : vai !! mai ghar jaraha hu .. tum abhi aoge ya badme ??

nupur shocked hoke : vai ??? armaan !! ye monkey tumhara vai hai ???

ridz : nupur !!!???

mayank : ji ha .. mai inka vai hu ?? tmhe kya ab isse bhi koi prob hai ?? waise mai kiu puch rahahu .. tumhe to mera hak ek chiz se prob hai ...


sammy : chill dude .. jhagro mat yaar ...

anji : ha mayank .. aj inke 1st day hai is clg me .. pls larai mat karo ...

mayank : larai karna bhi koun chahta hai ?? mai to iski shakal bhi nehi dekhna chahta hu .. vai mai jarahahu .. tumhe jab time miljayega tab ajana ..

sweetpragya_mohta
February 24, 2009, 10:38 AM
heu nice update but wat abt gunjan ?????? where is she ??

SHITHI
February 25, 2009, 08:24 PM
heu nice update but wat abt gunjan ?????? where is she ??

dont worry .. she will be there very soon ... :D

SHITHI
March 1, 2009, 09:01 PM
ridz , nupur aur muskaan hostel pouchti hai ..

mus : clg ki 1st day kamalki rahi .. hai na ????

nu : ha .. bohot maja aya by god ... bas us monkey se mulakat nehi hota to

aur bhi accha hota ...

ridz : ab jane bhi dena nupur .. kiu us bechare pe itna gussa horahi hai ??

nupur : bechara !!!!!!! usne mere dress kharap kiya !!!

ridz : to tune bhi to uske cycle kharap ki na ??? ab dekh tune uska loksan ki

.. usne bhi teri luksan kardia ... bas dono taraf hi barabar hai .. ab kis

batki narazgi ???

mus : bat to sahi hai .. meri man .. dosti karle usse ... waise bhi bara

brilliant banda hai ... har exm me top karta hai .. aur cute bhi to hai na ??

nupur : tujhe bara pasand araha hai wo ??!! tu meri dost hai ya dushman ??

ridz : muskan teri dushman nehi hai .. tu khud hi apni dushman banrahi hai ..

dekh tu itni gussa karrahi hai ke khamkha muskaan ko bate sunadi .. ek bar

bhi nehi socha ke use bura laga ya nehi ???

nupur ko bat samajh me ati hai .. she feels guilty ...

nupur : sorry yaar .. gusse me tujhe bura vala kehdi ... maf karde plss ...

mus : koi bat nehi yaar .. waise bhi dost ko sorry nehi keht .. by god !!!

muskaan has deti hai .. sath me nupur aur ridz bhi hasne lagte hai ..


next day in clg :

nupur apni cls me jati hai .. ridz ki cls shuru hone me abhi 1 hr baki hai

.. isiliye wo canteen me bethke chay piti hai aur parai karti hai ..

ammy waha ake : hey ridz !! lecture shuru hone me abhi bhi 1 hr baki hai ..

itni jaldi kiu agayi ??

ridz :bas nupur ke sath agayi .. lekin tumbhi to jaldi aaye ho .. kiu ??

ammy : are mujhe to basketball practise karna hai .. isiliye ..

ridz : basket ball !!! to tum basket ball pLayer Ho !!

ammy :aUR KYA ?? are mai to basket ball , football , cricket sab khelta hu ..

i m allrounder u know ???

tabhi niki waha ati hai : no , she dont .. are use kaise pata hoga ?? kal hi

to ayi hai ... tu bhi na .. ate hi iski dimag khane lag gayi .. [ridz ko ]

aur kya ?? tum yaha bhi parne lag gayi ??? achi bat hai .. isbar hum fail

nehi honge !!

ridz :matlab ??!!

niki : matlab hum har exm me fail hote hai .. aur agar tum itni acchi student

ho to hume notes ke bareme sochneki koi jarurat nehi !!!

ammy : aisa nehi hai .. fail tu hoti hai .. mai nehi !!

niki : accha !! principal sirne jo tumhe warning di o kya dream thi ?

ridz : warning !!?

niki : wo kya hai ki ..

ammy niki ke muh pe hat rakhke : kuch nehi .. kuch nehi .. hehe [ niki ke kan

me ] pls yaar iske samne meri izzat puncture mat kar ... tujhe jo chahiye mai

de dunga ..

niki : pakka ??

ammy : pakka ..

niki : sochle !!

ammy : soch liya ..

niki : thik hai .. ha ridhima kya kehrahi thi mai ??

ridz : principal sirne armaan ko warning di hai ..

niki : ha !! wo actually armaan itna parai karta hai na ke principal ne majak

me ise warning dedi .. ke armaan agese kam parai karna .. agar humesha tum

top karoge to bakika kya hoga ?? hehehehe

SHITHI
March 5, 2009, 08:45 AM
guys , bad news .... mai bohot bimar hu .. doctor ne kaha hai ke mujhe tumour hai .. so kuch dino tak mujhe ye story stop karni paregi ... so pls wait and pray for me .... and i request to the moderator not to delete this thread .. i'll be back very sooon .... :D

SHITHI
March 10, 2009, 05:42 PM
ridz : principal sirne armaan ko warning di hai ..

niki : ha !! wo actually armaan itna parai karta hai na ke principal ne majak me ise warning dedi .. ke armaan agese kam parai karna .. agar humesha tum top karoge to bakika kya hoga ?? hehehehe

ridz : oh !! to armaan humesha top karta hai .. ha ??

niki : top!!!! are top to kuch bhi nehi .. arre mai to kehti hu pure india me compition laga do .. usme armaan ke aspas bhi koi nehi ayega ..hehehe

armaan : hehe .. nikkkkiiiii ... bas ha .. bohot hogaya ... tu jana cls me ??

ridz : par ab kiu jayegi wo ?? cls shuru honeme abhi deri hai !!

nikki :koi bat nehi .. mere liye aj cls 1 ghante pehlehi shuru ho jaye to accha hai .. barna aj mujhe koi nehi bacha sakta !!!

ridz : ha !!!????

niki : kuch nehi .. mai chalti hu .. cls me !!! u guys enjoy !! ..

niki chali jati hai...

ridz armaan se : wow armaan .. tum to kafi acche student nikle .. lagta hai tumhe takkar dena vari paregi !!! .. waise ek bat bolu tumhe dekhke lagta nehi hai ke tum itne acche student ho ...

ammy ghabra jata hai : ab .. wo actually .. nehi mai hu accha student .. seriously .. ab .. chaho to anji se puch sakti ho ...

ridz : nehi nehi .. pls dont mind .. mai to aise hi bol rahi thi .. anji se puchneki koi jarurat nehi hai .. i trust u ..


ridz smiles ... armaan also smiles ... par tabhi wo tensed ho jata hai .. use ridz ko juth nehi bolna chahiye tha ...

ridZ : armaaan !!!

armaan : ha !!!???

ridz : kya hua ?? kaha kho gaye ???

ammy : kuch nehi ..

ridz : ru sure ke kuch nehi hai ? i mean agar koi problem hai then u can share wid me .. may be mai tumhara koi help kar sakti hu ..

ammy : arre aisa kuch bhi nehi hai ...class ka time hogaya hai .. chale ...

ridz : ha chalo ..

udhar nupur ke class me aj ek naya ladka aya hai .. rahul .. wo muskaan ki parosi bhi hai .. patiala me muski aur rahul ke family ek sath rehte the .. abhi rahul uske family ke sath mumbai shift hogaye hai ..

rahul bohot jald hi sabke dost ban jate hai ..except muski ke .. ye dono pehle sehi ekdusre ke dushman the ..

SHITHI
March 22, 2009, 07:59 AM
nup rahul se : hi .. class me naye ho ??? mai bhi nayi hu , pata hai .. accha aur bhi naye student ane wale hai kya ??? aur waise bhi .. tum mumbai me rehte ho ya kahi aur se aye ho ?? meri aur muskaan ki tarah ??? ha ???

rahul : pehla wala question kya tha ?? mai bhul gaya !!!!

muski gusse se : tu to vule gahi na !! yaha bhi mera picha karte huye agaya !! sharam nehi ata kiya ?? besharam kahika !!

rahul : tujhe kya problem hai ?? aur mai nehi karraha teri picha .. mere pas faltu kam ke liye itna time nehi hai .. jo tera picha karu .. waise tjhe koi akkal nehi hai kya ?? mai yaha kisise bat karrahahu aur tu bijme ake bak ne lagi ...

dono larai karne lagte hai .. nupur shocked hoke dono ko dekhne lagte hai ...

ridz waha ati hai aur nup se puchti hai : in donoko kya hua ??

nup : pata nehi di .. kabse ladai karrahe hai ..!!!

ridz : arre tum dono chup ho jao ..!!!

muski aur rahul chup ho jate hai ..

rahul : aj ridhima ji ne ake tujhe bacha liya.. barna ...

muski : barna kya ?? ha .. ???? kya karlega tu ??

muski ferse rahul ko marne jati hai .. par nupur use pakar leti hai ..

nupur : arre muskaan ab ruk bhi ja .. jan le legi kya ??

muski : chor de nupur !! aj to ise mai mar hi dalungi !!! patialame kya kam sataya jo yaha bhi chala aya ???

bohot mushkilse nupur aur ridz undono ferse chup karate hai ..

ridz : bas ab bohot ho gaya ... kirti maam ke anese pehle tumlog class me jao ...

muski aur rahul ekdusre ko gussese dekhne lagte hai ..

ridz chillake : jaaaaaooo !!!!!!!!!

sab apne class me chale jate hai ..

nupur : class ke bad milte hai di ..

ridz : ok .. :D

ridz apni cls ke taraf chalne lagti hai .. tabhi pichese armaan ..

armaan : hey ridz !!!

ridz : oh !! hi armaan ..

pichese dia ati hai ...

dia : hey ammy !!! how r u ??

dia armaan ko hug karti hai ...

armaan : as usual i m gr8 !!!

dia fer ridz ko dekhti hai ..

dia : hi ridhima dear ... tum kaisi ho ?? aur nupur kaha hai ???

ridz : mai thik hu aur nupur cls me gayi hai .. :D

dia : oh !! then mai bhi chalti hu ... u guys enjoy ... ammy , cls ke bad canteen m ... ok ???

armaan : as u wish ...

dia : so sweeeeet :D

SHITHI
April 3, 2009, 10:12 PM
ridz aur aramaan cls ke taraf chalne lagte hai ...

ridz : armaan !! mujhe tumhare help chahiye thi ...

armaan : farmayesh kijiye madam .. apki khidmat me banda humesha hajir hai ...

ridz has deti hai ...

ridz : armaan !! haha ... well .. kirti madam ne jo assignment diya hai na mujhe bohot mushkil lagrahi hai ..i dont know how to do it .. aur tum to kirti maam ko jante hi ho ... tum to bohoti acche student ho na is college ke ..??? kya tum meri madat karoge !!!

ye sunke armaan ke hosh ur jate hai ...

armaan : assignment !!!!!!! sure .. why not ??

ridz : thank u soooo much armaan ... mujhe pata tha tum meri madat jarur karoge ... thanks ... ab chale cls me ???

armaan : ha?? ha .. chalo ...


cls khatam hone ke bad : armaan cafeteria me pareshan hoke betha rehta hai .. niki enters ..

niki : armaan !!! what's wrong wid u ?? kya hua ?? aise chup chap kiu bethe ho ???

armaan : arre teri bajase fas gaya hu mai !!!

niki : mere bajase !!??

armaan : ha teri bajase !!!

niki : kya hua ye to bata !!!

armaan : chor yaar ...

niki : arre batayega nehi to mai samjhungi kaise ke maine kiya kya ???

armaan : kisne kaha tha tujhe ridz ke samne mere bareme itna lamba lamba fakne ke liye ???

niki : maine to ye sab isliye kahi thi taki wo tujhse impress ho jaye .. kiu ?? use pata chal gaya kya tere bareme ??

armaan : pata chal jata tobhi shahed itna problem nehi hota ..

niki : yaar tu sidhe sidhe problem kya hai bata dena ...

ammy : tune ridhima ko kaha ke mai is clg ka top student hu .. aur ab wo kirti maam ke assignment ke liye meri help mangrahi hai ..

niki : what !!!???

ammy : what nehi wat ... mera wat lagne wala hai aur wo bhi sirf teri bajase ...

niki : ok ok .. relax .. mai kuch soch ti hu ..

SHITHI
April 14, 2009, 06:39 PM
kirti aur shuvankar shashank sir ke cabin me :

shashank : so professors !!! sare classes thik thak chal rahe hai na ?

shuv: perfectly sir ...

shashank : students rules ko follow to karrahe hai na ???

kirti : follow to karrahe hai sir .. lekin kuch students abhi bhi parai me kam aur yaha waha jyada dhyan lagarahe hai ...

shashank : jaise ke ???

kirti : armaan !!! unhe parai me kam aur sports me jyada interest hai ... dia jab clg ati hai to wo books kam aur make-up box jyada lati hai .. samrat apne music ke duniya me khoye huye hai ... nikita as usual shararat karke apni time pass karrahi hai ... aur brilliant students pure lagan se study karrahe hai ... unmaise mayank aur anjali age hai ...

shashank : to apdono kya kehte hai ... irresponsible students ko clg se nikal de??

shuv : nehi sir !!! hum aisa nehi kar sakte ???!!!

shashank : kya mai iski koi reason jan sakta hu ???

shuv ; sir valei ye students paraime utne fast na ho par dusre mammlo me ye log bohoti talanted hai ... inke wajase humare clg ka kafi naam hua hai ... har sport compitition me jans clg ko jitane me armaan ka kafi bara hat hai .. samrat kafi sare music compitition aur dance compitition jit chuka hai .. aur dia bhi kafi sare beauty contest jiti hai .. inlogone jans clg ka naam kafi had tak roushan kiay hai ...

kirti : yes sir .. mr. shuvankar sahi keh rahe hai .. unhe nikalna sahi decision nehi hogi ...

shashank : kuch naye students bhi to aye hai ..?? unka kya haal hai ???

kirti : sar abtak jitne bhi naye students aye hai unmese ridhima kafi briiliant student hai ... unse kuch umid ki ja sakti hai .. baki hai nupur , rahul aur muskaan ... wo bhi thik thak hai .. par mujhe nehi lagta nupur itne acche result kar payenge ...

shashank : jitne bhi naye students ane wale the sare agaye ??

shuvankar : nehi sir ... gunjan aur atul abhi baki hai ...

shashank : i hope atleast ye dono better student ho !!!!


shuv aur kirti cabinse nikalte hai ,...

shuv : cafeteria me chale coffee pine ke liye ???

kirti smiles : sure !!! ... arre ha .. mai apni mobile room me vul ayi ... tum chalo mai ati hu ..

shuv : ok ...

shuv chalte chalte miss aha se takra gaye ... miss aga girne wali thi par shuvankar sir ne unhe pakar liya ..

shuv : i m so sorry miss aha ... maine apko notice nehi kiya tha !!

aha : takrana to thik tha par ye sunke bura laga ke apne hume notice nehi kiya !!!! apse hume ye umid nehi thi !!!

shuv : nehi aisi koi bat nehi hai ...

aha : oh !! to iske matlab ap mujhe notice karte hai ... right ???

shuv confused ho jate hai .. tabhi kirti ati hai .. kirti shuvankar aur aha maam ko eksath dekhke thodi possesive feel karti hai ...

shuv : kirti tum agayi .. !!! lets go !!!

aha : kaha jarahe hai aplog ??

shuv : cafeteria !! ap chalengi humure sath ...

aha : well ... agar apdonoko koi problem na hoto jarur chalungi ..

shuv : nehi nehi ... hume kya problem hoga . ap chaliye .. chale kirti !!!!

kirti : nehi!!!! mujhe cls me jana hai .. apdono jayiye ... !!!!!!!!!

SHITHI
April 23, 2009, 02:25 PM
niki aur armaan apne problems me uljhe huye hai ...

ammy : nikki batana kya karu ???

nikki : sochne to de ...

kuch der sochneke bat nikki irritate ho jati hai ...

niki : ridhima ko aur koi nehi mili kya ??? anjise madat mangleti ...

tabhi dia waha ati hai ...

dia : hey niki babes kya hal hai ??? ammy tum itne worried kiu lagrahe ho ??

ammy : nothing dia ...

ammy : oh really !!! tumhara face dekhke to aisa nehi lagraha ... kya hua ammy mujhe nehi bataoge ??

nikki : wo kya hai na samne exam hai na usike bareme tensed hai ...

dia : what !!!??? ammy aur exam ko leke tensed ?? ammy basket ball chorke study me kabse interested ho

gaye ??

niki : abhi do ghante pehle !!!!

dia : what !!!!!!! are u joking niki ???

ammy : arrehh !! dia tumhe to samrat dhund raha tha .. usse mili kya ??

dia : sammy mujhe dhund raha tha ??? mujhe kisine nehi batayi !!!!

nikki : ab AMMY ne bata diya na ?? to jao na jaldise !!!!

dia : ok !!

dia chali jati hai ...

ammy : yaar hume use is tarah vagana nehi chahiye tha .. usse koi suggestion bhi to mang sakte the na ??

niki : armaan !! dia se sirf make-up ke bareme suggestions lene chahiye .. paraike bareme nehi !!!

mayank is passing the cafeteria ..

armaan use dekhke : hey mayank .. come join wid us !!

mayank : nehi bhai !! mai library ja raha hu ...

mayank chala jata hai ..

armaah :: ye mayank bhi na .. clg me jitnabhi time rehta hai yato cls me hota hai ya fer library me ... !!

niki : library !!!!

chillake : armaan !! tera kam hogaya .. !!

SHITHI
May 4, 2009, 10:18 AM
armaah :: ye mayank bhi na .. clg me jitnabhi time rehta hai yato cls me hota hai ya fer library me ... !!

niki : library !!!!

chillake : armaan !! tera kam hogaya .. !!

armaan : matlab !!

niki : arre library !!! library ja .. aur project ke bareme study shuru karde ..

armaan : heheheh !!! flop idea ... !!! zindegi me ajtak kabhi library gaya hu jo aj jau ??? kuch aur soch ..

niki : dekh yaar mujhe jo kehna tha so mai kehdi .. ab teri marji ...

niki wahase chali jati hai .. armaan apna basket ball leke praktise karne lagta hai aur apne apse bate karne lagta hai ..

ammy : niki has gone mad .. how can i go to library yaar ??!! its not my style ... mai aur libray ??? never .. its not possible ... i have to think something else ..


suddently the ball slips from ammy's hand and it enteres in the library ... armaaan bhi library me enter karta hai .. he is very tensed and that's why he doesnt notice that it's library !!!!

when he enters he sees that there r lots of books and ppl r studying .. then he realizes that he is in the library room !!! he feels more tensed ... wo bahar janehi wala hai ke ridz waha ajati hai ..

ridz : hey armaan !! accha hua tum milgaye .. !! waisebhi mai bohot confused horahi thi ke konsi book use karu project ke liye .. will u help pls help me ??

ammy : book !!!!

ridz : ha book !! tum itne shocked kiu lagrahe ho ??

ammy : shocked !! no no .. nothing ..

tabhi nana[ he is the librarian !!! ] waha ate hai : kya hai !!! yeh koi basket ball khelneki jaga hai ?? ha !!???

ridz : shant nana shant !! ye library hai ..

nana : tum mujhe sikhaoge ?? ha !! mai librarian hu is clg ki !!! samjhi ??

ridz : lagta to nehi hai ...

nana : kya kaha !!!!!!

ammy : arre nana chup bhi hojao .. sare students parrahe hai ..

nana : aur tu yahape basket ball khelne aya hai ???!!

ridz : basket ball !!!!

nana : ha ! basket ball .. ye dekh ..

nana ridz ko basket ball dikhate hai ...

ammy: nehi !! ye mera nehi hai .. kisi aur ka hoga shayed .. !!

tabhi wahase ek student jaraha tha ..

ammy : ye .. ye ball iska hai ..

student : mera !!!!

ammy : dekha !! bolbhi raha hai ke ye uska hai .. see .. !!!

ridz : :confused:

SHITHI
May 12, 2009, 04:22 PM
ammy : ye .. ye ball iska hai ..

student : mera !!!!???

ammy : dekha !! bolbhi raha hai ke ye uska hai .. see .. !!!

ridz : ye bol nehi raha hai .. ye puch raha hai ..

ammy : arre nehi . bolhi raha hai ... abe tu ja na ??!!


wo student chala jata hai ..

nana : yeh thik nehi ha i!! mere library me dadagiri nehi chalegi ..

ammy : nana pls ab ap shuru mat hojayie ...

nana : haha jata hu !!!

ammy ridz ko : let's go ..

ridz : arre kaha jarahe ho ?? mujhe books lene hai .. tum help karona ..

ammy : mai !!!???

ridz : ha tum !! is clg ki brilliant boy ki help lungi to meri to kismat hi badal jayegi ..

ammy man hi manme : kismat to badlegi hi .. tumhe nehi pata meri help lenese tuhara kitna bura halad hone wali hai ..

ridz : kuch kaha ??

ammy : nehi !! chalo help karta hu !!!!!

udhar dia samrat ke pas jati hai ..



samrat : hey candy !! kitne ashiq ke dil todke arahi ho ??


dia : matlab ?


samrat : nehi aj kuch jyadahi beautiful lagrahi ho .. isiliye kaha ..


dia smiles : thank u soo much sammy ..
ammy ne kaha tum mujhe dhund rahe the ..

sammy : tumhe dhund neki kya jarurat hai babes ?? tum to humesha mere dil me ho !!

dia : tum bhi na sammy .. iske matlab ammy ne muujhse jhut kaha ??

sammy : usne sach bhi kab kaha ?? wo jo bhi kehta hai usme jhut hi hota hai !!

dia : sammy !! i know tum use pasand nehi karte .. but ..

ammy : sirf mai hi nehi is clg me koi bhi use pasand nehi karta .. !!

anji pichese : that's not true !!!

sammy : hey anji tum kab ayi ??

anji : abhi abhi .,. aur atehi dekha ke tum dono armaan ko leke discuss kar rahethe ...

sammy : ha ..armaan ne candy se jhut kaha !!

anji : what ??

dia : ha .. wo niki ke sath bat karraha tha .. mai uske pas gayi to mujhe simply ignore kar diya aur kaha ke sammy mujhe dhund raha hai .. par yaha ake pata chala aisa kuch bhi nehi hai ..


anji : isme itni upset kiu horahi ho ?? there must be any reason .. barna wo aisa kabhi nehi karta ..

dia : u know na anji ke ye clg aur tum log mere liye kitni important ho ??? tum logoke elawa mere aur uday ke hai e koun ?? mom dad to humesha apne kam me busy rehte hai barna jhagharne me .. bas tumhi log ho humure ... aur tum log hi agar hume ignore karoge to ...

sammy : relax candy .. chalo mai tumhari mood thik kartahu .. let's go for a drive ..

dia : nehi sammy .. mera mood nehi hai ..

sammy : c'mon candy .. let's go .. barna tumhe liye bina mera bike aj chalega nehi ..

anji : ha . agar tum nehi jaoge to iska bike ka tabiyat kharap ho jayegi !!

dia smiles : ok ..

SHITHI
May 23, 2009, 08:11 PM
dia aur smrat canteense nikal hi rahe the ke tabhi uday waha ata hai ..

uday : hey guys ..!! kahi jarahe ho kya ?

dia : ha dodo ... eo actually ..

uday : arre pehle meri bat suno ..dids guess what !!! maine abhi abhi 100 push ups complete karke araha hu .. aur isi khushi me mai apni pyari sister ko lunch ke liye bahar lene wala hu .. so dids let's go !!

dia : oh !! that's soo sweet of u dodo ... but mai abhi samrat ke sath long drive me jarahi hu ..


uday sad hojata hai ...

samrat : thik hai ekkam kar.. kal le jana apne dids ko .. lekin aj dia mere sath hi jayegi ..

uday : ok !! to phir mai tum logoko gate tak drop kardeta hu ..

dia : ok ..

uday , dia aur samrat eksath college gate me pouchte hai .. tabhi ek ladki ati hai .. she is the new student of jans college... GUNJAN .. samrat ka najar uspe tham jata hai .. dia ye notice karti hai..dia smiles ..

dia : dodo i think mujhe tumhare sath hi lunch ke jana parega .. samrat ko shayed koi jaruri kam hai.. right samrat !!!??

samrat : right ..

dia : all d best !!

sammy : thanx ..

dia : let's go dodo ...

dia aur uday wahase chale jate hai .. aur samrat gunjan pe line marne jata hai ..

sammy : hey beautiful .. i m samrat ... aur tum ??

gunjan thodi hayran hoke : gunjan ..

sammy : nayi ho is college me ??

gunjan : ha ..

sammy : good !!

gunjan : ji ??!!

sammy : g for gunjan !! i know .. waise is college ka ek rule hai ..

gunjan : rule ???

sammy : ha .. rule .. aur kiuki tum is college me naye ho tumhe help karne keliye mai tumhe bata deta hu ke tumhe kya karna hoga .. yahaka rule hai ke sare students ko principal sirke sath aise behave karna hoga jaiseke principal sir unke best friend hai ..

gunjan : mai kuch samjhi nehi !!

sammy : samajh neki jarurat bhi nehi hai .. tum bas sidha principal sir ke office jao .. aur unhe hasaneki koushish karo .. funny behave karo u know .. cartoon jaise face banao and blah blah blah ..
gunjan aur bhi jyada hayran hoke : cartoon jaise face !!!


sammy : ha .. cartoon jaise face .. ab jaldi jao barna sir naraz hojayenge ..


gunjan college ke andar jati hai .. aur samrat ne jaise kaha waisa karne lagti hai ..



gunjan shashank sirke room me ..


gunji : may i come in sir ??


shashank : yes ..


gunjan : sir mera nam gunjan hai .. is college ki nayi student ..


shashank : good .. to ap yaha kya karrahi hai ?? jayiye class me jayiye .. lecture shuru ho chuka hoga ..

gunjan : ok sir ..

gunjan jane ke liye murti hai ..

fer shashank sir ke taraf dekhke : sir !!

shashank : yes ??

gunjan shashank sirke samne cartoon jaise face banati hai ..

lekin sirko haste huye na dekhke aur bhi jyada cartoon jaese face banane lagti ..

shashank sir gussa ho jate hai ..

shashank : ye kaisa battamiji hai ?? stop this !!

gunjan ghabra jati hai .

gunjan : lekin sir ye to is college ka rule hai na ??

shashank : ou really ?? kisne kaha apko ye ??

gunjan samrat ka nam lene jati hai lekin chup ho jati hai ye sochke ke samrat ko punishment mil sakta hai ..

shashank : kya hua ? /ap chup kiu hai ?? bataiye kisne kaha ..

gunjan : koi nehi ! i m sorry sir ..

sashank : it's ok .. class me jaiye ..

gunjan : ji sir ..


gunjan rote huye room se nikal ti hai .. sammy sab kuch dekh leta hai ..

sammy : isne mera nam kiu nehi li ??

hanky panky
May 31, 2009, 06:43 PM
hey when are going to post the next part???

SHITHI
June 1, 2009, 06:19 PM
hey when are going to post the next part???

actually i m lill busy wid my studies.. so i m taking sometime before posting a epi.. the next part will be there very soon .. :D

hanky panky
June 2, 2009, 03:36 PM
actually i m lill busy wid my studies.. so i m taking sometime before posting a epi.. the next part will be there very soon .. :D

no problem take your time
i will wait:)

SHITHI
June 3, 2009, 08:08 PM
no problem take your time
i will wait:)

thnx.............. :D

SHITHI
June 3, 2009, 08:11 PM
mayank library enter karraha hai .. tabhi nupurse takra jata hai ..

nupur : dekh ke nehi chal sakte ? akhe pocket me leke chalte ho kya ??

mayank : suno nupur mai library jarahahu aur mujhe iswaqt tumse larneka bilkul mood nehi hai .. samjhi ??
nupur : mujhe koi shokh nehi hai tumse bat karke apni time waste karne ka .. bas chalneke waqt akhe khula rakhna !!


muskan : kya hua ?? tum log pherse larrahe ho kya ??

nupur : isse to koi pagal hi larega ...

mayank : ha !! aur wo pagal tum hi ho!! .. tum batao muskan tum kaisi ho :D

nupur : sambhal ke dat nikalo ... kahi sara gir na jaye !!

mayank : wakei !! tumhari soch kitna gira hua hai !!!!!

nupur : kya kaha !!!!!!!!


mayank : suna nehi kya kaha ?? behre ho kya ??

nupur : jahannum me jao !!!

ye kehke nupur wahase gussese chali jati hai ..

mayank pichese : tumhara kya varosa !! tum wahabhi chali aogi mujhse larne keliye !!

muskaan : kya mayank tum bhi .. !!!

muskaan bhi nupur ke piche chalti hai .. mayank smiles ..

armaan pichese : are wah !! mera vai ajkal chillake bhi bat karta hai ..

mayank : ha !! wo nupur .. jab dekho jhagharti rehti hai ..

armaan : accha hai .. atleast tu parai ke elawa kuch aur chizome bhi dhyan deraha hai .. very gud .. ma ko ye gud news dena parega!!

mayank : mujhe koi shokh nehi hai kisi aur chiz me dhyan laganeki ... aur tum pls ma ko kuch nehi bolna ... barna mai bat ko pata nehi kaha le jayegi .. aur fer mujhe chirane lagegi ..


ARMAAN & MAYANK'S HOUSE :

ma: to kaisa raha ajka din !!

armaan : accha tha .. aur mayank ka to aur bhi accha tha .. pure din ek ladki ke sath jo busy tha !!

ma : ladki !!!!


armaan : ha ladki !!

diipendu
June 4, 2009, 01:42 PM
Concept is really intresting! Continue ur gudwork shithi... :)

SHITHI
June 16, 2009, 04:37 PM
Concept is really intresting! Continue ur gudwork shithi... :)


thanx for appriciating my work .. :)

SHITHI
June 16, 2009, 06:56 PM
ma : ladki !!!!


armaan : ha ladki !!

ma : nam kya hai ??

armaan : nupur ! N for nupur ...

mayank : N for noutanki !! ma tum kya vai ke batome arahe ho ?? aisa kuch bhi nehi hai .. wo bohoti badmash ladki hai .. mujhse humesha larti rehti hai .

armaan : koi bat nehi mere vai .. larai hi pyar ki pehli stage hoti hai ..

mayank : vaiya bas bohot hogaya ha !! waise vabi ke sath to apka larai hua bhi nehi .. to pher pyar kaise hua ??


ma : vabi !!!??? tune shadi karli armaan !!!!!!!!!!????

armaan : nehi ma ! ye jhut bolraha hai .. mai kiu shadi karunga .. mai kya pagal hu mayank ke tarah ??

mayank : mai pagal nehi hu ...


armaan aur mayank larne lagte hai ..

aur ma unhe rokneki try karti hai ..


next day in jans college :

muski phone pe chilla chilla ke bat karrahi hai ..

muski : pls mummyji .. mujhe nehi jana waha .. tussi kiu fikar karti ho ?? mai thik hu yaha ... mummyji pls .. pappa ji o samjhaona ... nehi .. mummyji !!!

muski phone rakhneke bad nupur : kya hua ? ro kiu rahi hai ??

muski : mummyjine phone kiya tha .. keh rahi hai ke mujhe ab rahul ke family ke sath rehna parega .. soch yaar .. us rahulke shakal dekhne parenge 24 hrs .. impossible !!!

nupur : rahul ke family ke sath kiu ??

muskaan :arre rahulke mummy papa mere parents ke dost hai ... uncle aunty to acche hai .. par is rahul ke bacche ka kya karu ?

nupur : to fer aunty ko mana karde ..

muski : itni derse kya mai vajan ga rahithi ??? mummyji ko samjhaneki kitni koushish ki .. par koun sune kiski bat ..

nupur : to ab kya karegi ???

muski : aur kya karungi !!!??? rehna to parega unke sath .. pappaji ne warn kiya hai ke waha nehi rahi to mujhe mumbai mehi rehne nehi denge ..

pichese ridzi ati hai..

ridz : kya hua ???

nupur ridz ko sab kuch kehti hai ..

ridz : agar uncle aunty keh rahe hai then there must be reason .. i think tumhe unke bat man leni chahiye ..

muski : oyee ridzi ab tu lecture mat de yaar .. tu acchi hai isiliye tujhe sab acche lagte hai ..

ridz : to tum kya buri ho ?? tum bhi to acche ho ... samjha karo muskaan !! uncle aunty bas tumhare safety ke bareme soch rahe hai .. nothing else ..

muski : maf karde yaar.. tujhse to bat karnahi bekar hai .. ja rahi hu mai ..

muski chali jati hai ..

ridz : chal nupur .. ab mai bhi library jati hu .. tu apne clsme ja ...

nupur : ok di ..

SHITHI
July 7, 2009, 05:51 PM
anji and dia are gossiping .. suddenly kisike girneki awaaz ate hai ..

anji : oh god !! koun gira ??

dia : chalo jake dekhte hai ..

anji : yah ... let's go ..

wo dono jake dekhte hai ek ladka wahape para hai ..

anji : lagta hai new student hai ..

dia : hmm

anji us ladke ko uthneme help karti hai ..

boy : thanx ..

anji : u welcome .. agese sambhal ke chalna ..

dia : ha .. kiunki humesha anji nehi hogi tumhe sahara dene keliye ..

boy : anji !! nice name .. waise mera nam atul hai ..

dia : aur mai dia .. waise iski nam anjali hai .. par hum sab ise pyar se anji bulate hai ..

atul : anjali nam bhi bohot pyari hai .. sounds like angel u know ..

dia : i know .. aur anji hai bhi angel ki tarah .. bohoti acchi hai ... sabki help karti hai ...

anjali : meri nam ki bhajan gana khatam hogaya ho to ab hum chale dia !!!

tabhi waha mayank ata hai ..

mayank : anjali , vai ko dekha kya ???

anji : tumne ridz ko dekha ???

mayank : ha .. library ke taraf gayi hai ..

anji : to ammy ko bhi tum library ke window ke bahar hi paoge .. ajkal ridz ke piche kafi ghumraha hai wo ..

mayank smiles ...

anji : well meet our new frnd atul .. aj hi aya hai jans clg me ..

mayank : hi , i m mayank ... 1st year ..

atul : atul , 2nd yr ..

mayank : i m sure tumhe humara clg accha lagega .. kisi bhi chiz ki jarurat ho to anji ko boldena .. she is always ready to help people ..

anji : oh pls mayank .. ab tum shuru mat ho jao ..

nupur pichese : kise kya kehrahi ho anji ?? ye to kahi bhi shuru ho jata hai ..

mayank : to tumhe kya prob hai ??

nupur : sirf mujhe nehi sabko problem hai .. tumhare lambi lambi lecture sunke sabki sar dard hojate hai .. tumhe samajhna chahiye ye bat ..

mayank kuch kehne jata hai par nupur use chup karwa deti hai ..

nupur : waise anji tumne di ko kahi dekha kya ???

anji : join the club !!! mayank bhi usehi dhund raha hai ..

nupur mayankse : tum meri di ko kiu dhund rahe ho ?? meri sar khake chain nehi mila tumeh ?? ab meri di ke piche pargaye ??

mayank : mai tumhare di ke piche nehi para hu .. mai to apne vai ko dhund raha hu ..

nupur : ab armaan bij me kahase aya ??? bat to meri di ki horahi thi na ?? dekho mayank batko mat ghumao .. bohot sunli tumhara bakwas .. ab aur nehi .. meri di ka picha chor do samjhe .. barna ...

mayank shouts : oh shut up nupur !!! :mad:

nupur : :mad:

diipendu
July 8, 2009, 10:34 AM
Hiii!

Hey u had potrayed nupur-mayank's chemistry sooo reall... Episode is really awsme!... Keep itup;)

SHITHI
July 8, 2009, 01:48 PM
Hiii!

Hey u had potrayed nupur-mayank's chemistry sooo reall... Episode is really awsme!... Keep itup;)

thanx for such a sweet compliments .... :)

ekta_1234
July 10, 2009, 05:19 PM
Hey you write awesome stories.They r just Mindblowing! pls continue!:D

SHITHI
July 10, 2009, 06:40 PM
Hey you write awesome stories.They r just Mindblowing! pls continue!:D

thank u soooooooo much ekta ... the cmnts u pple give me reallyy means a lot for me .. :D thanx again ..

ekta_1234
July 21, 2009, 08:36 PM
thank u soooooooo much ekta ... the cmnts u pple give me reallyy means a lot for me .. :D thanx again ..

Welcom and do continue soon! ;)

SHITHI
July 30, 2009, 07:08 AM
anji : guyss !!! tum dono ladna bandh karoge plss ??? humare yaha eknaya student aya hai nupur .. agar jhagrese fursat mile

to use jara hi to boldo ..

mayank : arre ye kya bolegi ? ise kuch ata hai kya ?? ye to bas jhagarna janti hai ... mannerless ..!!!

nupur : kya kaha ??

tabhi kirti ati hai ..

kirti gusseme : kya horaha hai yahape ??

sab sidhe hojate hai ..

dia : nothing .. we're just gossiping ...

atul kirtise handshake karke : hello i m atul ... 2nd yr .. aur tum ??

kirti : mai kirti .. is clg ki lecturer !!!!!!

atul : oh nohhh !!!

kirti : oh yeess .. aur aplog ?? cls nehi hai kya ??? jayiye apne apne cls me jayiye ..

sab apne apne cls me jate hai ..

udhar gunjan aur ridz library me par rahe the .. armaan ridz ko dekhraha tha aur samrat gunji ko ..

armaan samrat kor dekhke apne apse : abbe ye yaha kya karraha hai ?? kahi ridz pe line to nehi marraha ??

ammy sammy ke pas jata hai : yaha kya karrahe ho ?

sammy : tumse matlab ??

ammy : dekho tum uspe line nehi marsakte ??

sammy : kiu ?? tumhara gf hai kya ??

ammy : ha hai to !!!

sammy : kya ?? abbhi abhi to ayi thi clg me .. itni jaldi kaise pata lia ??

ammy : jaise bhi patao tujhe kya ?? dekho tumhara senior hai wo ..

sammy : arre senior kaise hogi ?? mere cls me hi to parti hai ..

ammy : abbe kiski bareme bat karraha hai ?

sammy : gunjan ke bareme .. kiu tum kiski bareme bat karahe ho ??

ammy : mai !! mai to .. mai to kirti ma'm ke bareme puch rahi thi ..

sammy : kirti ma'am ?? r u sure kirti ma'am tumhara gf hai ? mujh to laga tha kirti ma'am shuvankar sir pe flat hai ...

ammy : kamal karte ho yaar.. mai kab kaha ke wo mera gf hai ..??!!!

sammy : abhi abhi to kaha !!!

pichese shukla sir pure hindi me : balak !!! ap yaha kaunsa kariya karam karrahe hai ...

ammy slow voice me : ferse shuru hogaya inke greek me lacture ...

sammy : :P

ekta_1234
July 30, 2009, 05:55 PM
anji : guyss !!! tum dono ladna bandh karoge plss ??? humare yaha eknaya student aya hai nupur .. agar jhagrese fursat mile

to use jara hi to boldo ..

mayank : arre ye kya bolegi ? ise kuch ata hai kya ?? ye to bas jhagarna janti hai ... mannerless ..!!!

nupur : kya kaha ??

tabhi kirti ati hai ..

kirti gusseme : kya horaha hai yahape ??

sab sidhe hojate hai ..

dia : nothing .. we're just gossiping ...

atul kirtise handshake karke : hello i m atul ... 2nd yr .. aur tum ??

kirti : mai kirti .. is clg ki lecturer !!!!!!

atul : oh nohhh !!!

kirti : oh yeess .. aur aplog ?? cls nehi hai kya ??? jayiye apne apne cls me jayiye ..

sab apne apne cls me jate hai ..

udhar gunjan aur ridz library me par rahe the .. armaan ridz ko dekhraha tha aur samrat gunji ko ..

armaan samrat kor dekhke apne apse : abbe ye yaha kya karraha hai ?? kahi ridz pe line to nehi marraha ??

ammy sammy ke pas jata hai : yaha kya karrahe ho ?

sammy : tumse matlab ??

ammy : dekho tum uspe line nehi marsakte ??

sammy : kiu ?? tumhara gf hai kya ??

ammy : ha hai to !!!

sammy : kya ?? abbhi abhi to ayi thi clg me .. itni jaldi kaise pata lia ??

ammy : jaise bhi patao tujhe kya ?? dekho tumhara senior hai wo ..

sammy : arre senior kaise hogi ?? mere cls me hi to parti hai ..

ammy : abbe kiski bareme bat karraha hai ?

sammy : gunjan ke bareme .. kiu tum kiski bareme bat karahe ho ??

ammy : mai !! mai to .. mai to kirti ma'm ke bareme puch rahi thi ..

sammy : kirti ma'am ?? r u sure kirti ma'am tumhara gf hai ? mujh to laga tha kirti ma'am shuvankar sir pe flat hai ...

ammy : kamal karte ho yaar.. mai kab kaha ke wo mera gf hai ..??!!!

sammy : abhi abhi to kaha !!!

pichese shukla sir pure hindi me : balak !!! ap yaha kaunsa kariya karam karrahe hai ...

ammy slow voice me : ferse shuru hogaya inke greek me lacture ...

sammy : :p

Awesome,Terrific,Mindblowing! Pls continue soon! :)

SHITHI
August 18, 2009, 12:44 PM
sammy enters in the class .. everybody gets surprised ... dia comes to him ..

dia : aj suraj west se aya hai kya ???

sammy : matlab ??

dia : samrat the cool dude jiske liye class sirf ek boring place ke siwa aur kuch nehi hai wo aj class me apna kadam rakkha hai .. isiliye puch liya .. tum thik to ho na sammy ??

sammy smiles : mai to bilkul thik hu candy ... par ye log mujhe aise kiu dekhrahe hai ??

dia : aj tak ye sab jis samrat ko sirf canteen aur stage me dekhte aye hai ab us samrat ko class me dekh ke thoda farak to parega na ???

shukla sir enters ... everybody rushes to their sits ..

samrat gunjanke pass jake beth ta hai ... gunji feels uncomfortabli ...

dia : :confused:

sammy gunjanse : dekho usdin maine jo kuch bhi kiya uskeliye sorry .. it was just a joke ...

gunjan gussese use dekhti hai ...

sammy : kaha na sorry .. itne gussese kiu dekhrahi ho ??baccheka jan logi kya ??

gunjan : mujhe tumse koi bat nehi karni .. pls tum yahase jao ..

sammy : hum park me nehi bethe hai .. class me hai .. aur shukla sir class lerahe hai .. abhi kaise jau ???

gunjan : mujhe kuch nehi pata .. tum bas jao ..

sammy : ok fine ... class khatam hone do fer chala jaunga ... usse pehle tum kaho ke tumne mujhe maf kar diya ...

gunjan : pls ...

sammy : aha .. pehle bolo maf kar diya ..

gunjan : dekho ..

sammy : maaf !!

gunjan : mai ....

shukla sir gunjan ko bat karte huye dekh lete hai ...

shukla sir : miss gunjan !!!!!!!

dia and uday : :eek:

ekta_1234
August 21, 2009, 02:33 PM
sammy enters in the class .. everybody gets surprised ... dia comes to him ..

dia : aj suraj west se aya hai kya ???

sammy : matlab ??

dia : samrat the cool dude jiske liye class sirf ek boring place ke siwa aur kuch nehi hai wo aj class me apna kadam rakkha hai .. isiliye puch liya .. tum thik to ho na sammy ??

sammy smiles : mai to bilkul thik hu candy ... par ye log mujhe aise kiu dekhrahe hai ??

dia : aj tak ye sab jis samrat ko sirf canteen aur stage me dekhte aye hai ab us samrat ko class me dekh ke thoda farak to parega na ???

shukla sir enters ... everybody rushes to their sits ..

samrat gunjanke pass jake beth ta hai ... gunji feels uncomfortabli ...

dia : :confused:

sammy gunjanse : dekho usdin maine jo kuch bhi kiya uskeliye sorry .. it was just a joke ...

gunjan gussese use dekhti hai ...

sammy : kaha na sorry .. itne gussese kiu dekhrahi ho ??baccheka jan logi kya ??

gunjan : mujhe tumse koi bat nehi karni .. pls tum yahase jao ..

sammy : hum park me nehi bethe hai .. class me hai .. aur shukla sir class lerahe hai .. abhi kaise jau ???

gunjan : mujhe kuch nehi pata .. tum bas jao ..

sammy : ok fine ... class khatam hone do fer chala jaunga ... usse pehle tum kaho ke tumne mujhe maf kar diya ...

gunjan : pls ...

sammy : aha .. pehle bolo maf kar diya ..

gunjan : dekho ..

sammy : maaf !!

gunjan : mai ....

shukla sir gunjan ko bat karte huye dekh lete hai ...

shukla sir : miss gunjan !!!!!!!

dia and uday : :eek:

Awesome Update! Pls continue soon! Why don't you ost the story in MJHT Creative Thread? :D

Riyu_AR
September 3, 2009, 02:20 PM
all ur parts are mindblowing n interesting post soon waiting for ur posts n get well soon:)

SHITHI
September 5, 2009, 07:18 PM
Awesome Update! Pls continue soon! Why don't you ost the story in MJHT Creative Thread? :D

actually i dont have that much time .... i cant use my pc more than 20 minutes... it's my mom's order ... :p so its not possible for me to post it somewhere else ... i hope u r enjoying the story in this place ... :D

SHITHI
September 5, 2009, 07:39 PM
shukla sir : miss gunjan !!!!

gunjan stands up with fear ....

shukla sir : what the hell r u doing ??? if u r feeling bore then u can leave the class ..

gunji : sorry sir .... it wont happen next time ... i m really sorry ...

sammy also stands up at mean time ...

sammy : sir !! it's not her fault ... it's my fault .. i was talking wid her ..

shukla : i see ..... then samrat ... u can get out from the class ...

gunji : but sir ..

shukla : u shut up ... samrat !! didnt u hear what i said .. get out !!!!

sammy : ok sir ....

dia and uday : :(

nupur and muski was talikng wid each other .... suddenly a basket ball came infront of them ... nupur didnt see the ball and she fall down

nupur : hey vagwan .. mai to uth bhi nehi parahi hu .. chal kaise paungi .. ab mai hostel kaise jaungi ???

muski : mai ridzi ko bulake lati hu ...

nupur : arre pagal hai kya ?? uski class chalrahi hai ..

muski : are ha .. ab kya kare ???

mayank was crossing them ..

muski : oye mayank .. jara help karna .. nupur ko uthana jara ??

nupur : dimag kharap hoygayi kya muski ? ye to girahi dega mujhe ..

mayank : bilkul ... after all mujhe 80 killo ke weight uthane ki adat thodi na hai ??

nupur : kya kaha ?? mai 80 killo ka hu ???

mayank : to kya 100 killo ke ho ???

nupur gusse se : tumhe to mai ..

nupur uthne jati hai lekin ferse gir jati hai ...

mayank use utha leta hai .. nupur starts punching him ...

mayank use canteen me le jake ek chair pe betha deta hai... sab unke taraf dekhne lagte hai ...

mayu : pichle janam me wrestler thi kya ????

nupur : :mad:

SHITHI
September 22, 2009, 09:04 PM
aj JANS clg me diwali ki party hai ... sab log party ke taiyari karrahi hai ....

dia bohotsad hai ...

ridz : kya hua dia ?? itni sad kiu ho ???

dia : maine to abhi tak apni dress hi decide nehi ki ? kya pehnungi mai party me ??

nupur : to itni sad hone wali kya bat hai ?? di haina.. wo tumhari madat karenge ... di to expert hai expert is kam me ... har diwali me mujhe to di hi taiyar karke deti thi .. aur moholle ke sare ladke mujhe dekhke behosh ho jate the ..

mayank pichese : vut ko dekhke koi bhi behosh ho jate hai .. usme nayi bat kya hai ???

nup gusse se : monkey mayank tujhe to mai !!!!

nup mayu ke piche vagne lagta hai ... achanak nup fisal jati hai aur mayu use pakar leta hai ...

atul gana gate hiye waha ata hai ...

atul : gila gila gila dil gila gila .. mila mila mila koi mila mila ....

wo dono sidhe khare ho jate hai...

anji : tum sab yahape aise bat hi karoge ya fer kuch kam bhi karoge ?? aj koi bhi galti hui to kirti maam hume kaccha chaba jayenge ...


gunji wahape samrat ko dhund rahi thi sorry kehne ke liye .... uske wajase sammy ko cls rumse nikal diya tha isiliye ... par sammy kahi dikha nehi ...

muski wahase jarahi thi ..

gunji : muskaan ! samrat ko kahi dekha kya ?

muskan : maine to nehi dekha ... par tu itna mu latkake kiu khadi hai >> usne tera book leke vaga hai kya ???

rahul : abe har koi teri tara chor nehi hota hai ke kisike bhi kuch bhi leke vagjaye ...

muskaan bhi nup ke tara rahul ke piche vagne lagta hai .. udhar nup aur mayu dour raha tha aur idhar rahul aur muski dourraha hai ...

tabhi waha shashank sir ajate hai .. !!!

Simple_sweet
October 1, 2009, 09:52 AM
Awesome update. I loved da fights between muskaan-rahul n mayank-nupur, it's sho cute, plz continue soon

SHITHI
October 2, 2009, 04:32 PM
Awesome update. I loved da fights between muskaan-rahul n mayank-nupur, it's sho cute, plz continue soon

thnxxx ....... u r reallyyy sweet ..... :D

SHITHI
October 2, 2009, 04:47 PM
shashank sir ko dekhke muski , rahul , mayank aur nupur break marke khare hojaye hai .... atul ke hatme balloon tha .. wo fat jate hai ...

anji : mar gaye !!!!

shashank : ap log ye kar kya rahe hai ?????

niki : practise !!!! practise karrahe the ye log ... hai na ???

sab apne apne asr hilate hai ....

shashnk : ok .. but for ur kind information aj shamko yahape diwali ki party hai .. koi sports day nehi !!!!

ammy : nehi sir ye asb sports ke practise nehi karrahe hai ... ye log to damce practise karrahe hai .... aj dance karne wale hai na party me ...!!!!

shashank : i see .... lagta hai kafi interesting dance hone wala hai !!!!!!!

ammy : yes sir ....

shashank : ok den ... ap sab practise kariye ... shamko dekhte hai aplogoka dance .... !!!!!!

shashank chale jate hai ....

nup : bal bal bache .. by god !!!

muski : yaar bache nehi mare ....

nup : kya matlab ???

muski : asir ne kya kaha suna nehi ??? dance karna parega aj shamko .. warna shashank sir aj chorenge nehi .... :(

dia :guys tum tensed kiu horahe ho ??? karlenge dance .. itni bhi kya bari bat hai ....

muski : problem to mujhe hai .. mai is rahul ke bacche ke sath dance nehi karne wali ....
rahul : ha mai to tarap raha hu tere sath dance karne ke liye .... tere sath dance karunga to hospital admit hona parega ....

anji : stop it u ppl now !!!! kam kare ??? barna inhi dress me party karni paregi .. aise time waste karoge to ghar janeka time bhi nehi milegi !!!

dia : oh no!!! mai is dress mai party attend nehi karsakti ... lcome on guys jaldi kam khatam karte hai ....

sab kam pe lag jate hai ....

ridz ammy se : lkafi accha jhut bol lete ho !!!!

ammy : :eek:

ekta_1234
October 8, 2009, 06:48 PM
Fab,awesome Update Shithi! Continue soon! Waiting for sajan romantic scenes! ;)