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diipendu
January 12, 2009, 11:41 AM
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Story will follow the journey of two lives "Pratham and Gauri" who face many challenges before and after the marriage but they never giveup. This journey will define their every moment of their love.




Characters-


Hiten Tejwani as Pratham
Gauri Pradhan Tejwani as Gauri


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Concept - diipendu dutta

Produced & scripting by - diipendu dutta

Production group - S-CREATIONS

Originally posted on - 13th mar. 2007

********** Episodes will be re-posted on given time slot ***********

diipendu
January 12, 2009, 11:50 AM
[ INTERVIEW KA DIN HOTA HAI AUR GAURI INTRVIEW KE LIYE AATI HAI ....]

Gauri : Excuse me sir kya main andar aa sakti hoon ?

[special apperance ke saath PRATHAM ]

Gauri : sir mujhe ees job ki bahut zaroorat hai ,yeh
rahe mere certificates

Pratham : 1 wajah do mujhe ki main tumhe yeh job doon

Gauri : sir main ees job ke liye poorhi tarah se kaabil hoon

Pratham : i like your Confident ms. ... gauri aur aapke
qualification ees job ke liye bhi kaafi hain

Gauri : sir tou kya mujhe yeh job mil gayi yeh samjhoon ???

Pratham : oh sure... aap kal se aa sakti hain Rita aapko
sab samjha degi

Gauri : [ KHUSH HOTE HUE ] thank you sir !

diipendu
January 12, 2009, 11:54 AM
[ Tina ko gauri pasand nahi aayi aur woh decide karti hai ke woh gauri ko naukri se nikaal degi ]

AGLE DIN

Tina: arre gauri aao main tumhe tumhaara kaam bataa deti hoon

[Tina gauri ko Files dekhaati hai]

Tina: gauri tum yeh saarey files check karo

Gauri: theek hai

Mr. Mehta : Gauri ji aap please yeh files bhi check kar lijeye

Gauri : magar mr. Mehta yeh tou bahut saarey files hain aur
Mujhe tou sirf itney hi files check karney ko kaha Gaya hai …….

Mr . Mehta : please gauri ….

[ SHAAM KE 5 BAJ JAATEY HAIN ]

Tina : arre gauri tumhe ghar nahi jaana ?

Gauri : Tina tum jaao bas mujhe thoda aur der lagega

Tina : Theek hai…..

[ Yeh tou sirf shuruaat hai ms. Gauri Aagey Aagey dekh hota hai kya tum agar chaho tou bhi main tumhe yahaan teekney nahi doongi ]

[ Agle din ]

[ Pratham Gusse mein ]

Pratham : Tina gauri kahaan hai !!!

Tina : Gauri abhi tak nahi aayi hai

Tina : ( mann mein sochte hue ) gauri ab tumhe kaun bachaayega...

[ Gauri tabhi wahaan pahuchti hai ]

diipendu
January 12, 2009, 11:56 AM
[ Pratham gauri pe gussa hote hue ]

Pratham : gauri kal tina ne tumhe kuch important files check
Karney ko de thhi aur tumne usse abhi tak complete karke mere table pe nahi rakha !!!!!!

Gauri : maine saarey files complete kar liye hain…….

Pratham : kya ! oh iam so sorry

[ Tina hairaan ho jaati hai ]

Pratham : [ pratham maafi maangtey hue ] gauri iam
sorry maine tumhe gusse mein bahut Kuch bol diya :(

Gauri : its ok :)

[ cabin se bahaar nikal kar ]

Gauri : Tina main jaanti hoon ki tumne yeh sab jaan bhujkar
Kiya hai aur kisliye kiya hai ye mujhe nahi pata

Tina : aou …. Tou tumhe pata chal hi gaya , waise manna
Parega kaafi smart ho tum pehle naukri itni aasani
Se paa li aur ab pratham ki hamdardi bhi….

Gauri : mujhe tumhe safaai dene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai
Kyouki jiski soch hi Gandhi ho tou uski zabaan kaise
Saaf hogi[ yeh kehke gauri waahaan se chali jaati hai ]

Tina : main ees beyzati ka badlaa zaroor loongi gauri ……

diipendu
January 13, 2009, 10:04 AM
[ Udhar pratham gauri se ]


Pratham : gauri kya aaj shaam tum mer saath dinner karoge ?


Gauri : magar…….


Pratham : magar wagar kuch nahi aaj shaam coffee shop mein tyeh raha…


Gauri : theek hai


[ shaam ko dono coffee shop mein miltey hain aur tab ]


Pratham : gauri aaj subah ke liye iam sorry


Gauri : koi baat nahii

diipendu
January 13, 2009, 10:07 AM
Gauri : Koi baat nahii


Pratham : tou main yeh samjhoo ke tumne mujhe maaf kar diya ?


Gauri : [ muskuraatey hue ] haan


Pratham : tou ab hum dost hain , right !


Gauri : [ muskuraatey hue ] haan


[ SAB KUCH THEEK HO JAATAA HAI ]


Pratham : aao main tumhe ghar chhor deta hoon


Gauri : sir magar........


Pratham : mujhe tumhaari 2 baaton se bilkul shikaayat hai ek tou
mujhe sir kehna , tum mujhe pratham keh sakti ho sirf pratham aur doosri baat yeh ke dost bhi kehti ho aur aitraaz bhi jataatii ho .......


Gauri : theek hai chalo


[ Pratham gauri ko ghar chhor deta hai ]

diipendu
January 14, 2009, 03:20 PM
Gauri : sir magar........

Pratham : mujhe tumhaari 2 baaton se bilkul shikaayat hai ek tou
mujhe sir kehna , tum mujhe pratham keh sakti ho sirf pratham aur doosri baat yeh ke dost bhi kehti ho aur aitraaz bhi jataatii ho .......

Gauri : theek hai chalo

[ Pratham gauri ko ghar chhor deta hai ]

Pratham : tou kal miltey hain , bye.......

Gauri : Bye:)

[ AGLE DIN ]

[ GAURI OFFICE AATI HAI JALDI MEIN AUR OOSE DIKHAYI NAHI DIYA KE SAAMNE PRATHAM PHONE PE BAATEY KARTEY HUE AARAAHA HAI AUR PRATHAM KO BHI NAHI DIKHA KE GAURI SAAMNEY SE JALDI MEIN AA RAHI HAI ]

[ WOH DONO TAKRAA JAATEY HAIN AUR GAURI KE FILES NEECHEY GIR JAATEY HAIN AUR YEH SAB TINA DEKH LETI HAI ]

Pratham : oh , iam sorry ....

Gauri : nahi pratham galti meri thhi maine tumhe dekha nahi

Tina : [ mann mein sochtey hue ] bahut khoob gauri , pratham ko apne jaal mein itni jaldi fasaa liya magar pratham mera hai sirf mera .....

diipendu
January 14, 2009, 03:22 PM
[ WOH DONO TAKRAA JAATEY HAIN AUR GAURI KE FILES NEECHEY GIR JAATEY HAIN AUR YEH SAB TINA DEKH LETI HAI ]

Pratham : oh , iam sorry ....

Gauri : nahi pratham galti meri thhi maine tumhe dekha nahi

Tina : [ mann mein sochtey hue ] bahut khoob gauri , pratham ko apne jaal mein itni jaldi fasaa liya magar pratham mera hai sirf mera .....

[ Pratham ki ma aur mittal group ki owner Mrs. Mittal ]

[ tina ko phone karti hai ]

Mrs. Mittal : aur bataao tina wahaan sab kaisa hai aur pratham kaisa hai ?

Tina : aunty yahaan kuch bhi theek nahii

Mrs. Mittal : theek nahii , kya matlab !!!!

diipendu
January 14, 2009, 03:23 PM
[ Pratham ki ma aur mittal group ki owner Mrs. Mittal ]

[ tina ko phone karti hai ]

Mrs. Mittal : aur bataao tina wahaan sab kaisa hai aur pratham kaisa hai ?

Tina : aunty yahaan kuch bhi theek nahii

Mrs. Mittal : theek nahii , kya matlab !!!!


Tina : jab se woh middle class ladki gauri yahaan aayi hai
usne pratham pe na jaaney kya jaadoo kar diya hai ke pratham
ussi ke aagey peechey ghoomta hai

Mrs. Mittal : kya....... ! theek hai main aaj hi london se waapas aa rahii hoon

Tina : theek hai aunty .

[ tina mann mein ]

Tina : ab tumhaaraa kya hoga gauri [ khush hote hue ]

diipendu
January 15, 2009, 10:30 AM
Mrs. Mittal : kya....... ! theek hai main aaj hi london se waapas aa rahii hoon

Tina : theek hai aunty .

[ tina mann mein ]

Tina : ab tumhaaraa kya hoga gauri [ khoosh hote hue ]

Pratham : Gauri aaj shaam 7 baje mere ghar party hai aur main
chahta hoon ki tum aaj shaam party mein aao

Gauri : magar main kaise ......

Pratham : agar magar kuch nahi tum aa rahii ho bas

Gauri : theek hai :)

[ shaam saat baje pratham ke ghar gauri party mein pahuchti hai ]

[ gauri party mein pratham ko khojti hai tabhi pratham gauri se milta hai ]


Pratham : thanks gauri party mein aaney ke liye

Gauri : eesme thanks ki kya baat hai...

[ TABHII PRATHAM KI MA LONDON SE WAAPAS AATI HAI ]

diipendu
January 15, 2009, 10:32 AM
Pratham : thanks gauri party mein aaney ke liye

Gauri : eesme thanks ki kya baat hai...

[ TABHII PRATHAM KI MA LONDON SE WAAPAS AATI HAI ]

[ sab mrs. mittal ko dekhte hain ]

Pratham : mom !

Mrs. mittal : oh my beta , kaise ho tum

Pratham : mom main theek hoon , mom yeh hai gauri meri bahut achhi
dost

[ tabhi tina peechey se ]

Tina : aur ek secetrary !

diipendu
January 15, 2009, 10:49 AM
[ TABHII PRATHAM KI MA LONDON SE WAAPAS AATI HAI ]

[ sab mrs. mittal ko dekhte hain ]

Pratham : mom !

Mrs. mittal : oh my beta , kaise ho tum

Pratham : mom main theek hoon , mom yeh hai gauri meri bahut achhi
dost

[ tabhi tina peechey se ]

Tina : aur ek secetrary !

Pratham : [ gusse mein tina ko kehte hue ] gauri secetrary se
pehle meri dost hai samaj gai tum

Gauri : Pratham please , yeh sahi waqt nahi hai

Gauri : Pratham mujhe lagta hai mujhe ab chalna chahiye

diipendu
January 15, 2009, 10:51 AM
Pratham : [ gusse mein tina ko kehte hue ] gauri secetrary se
pehle meri dost hai samaj gai tum !

Gauri : Pratham please , yeh sahi waqt nahi hai

Gauri : Pratham mujhe lagta hai mujhe ab chalna chahiye

Pratham : Nahi gauri tum kahiin nahii jaaogi

[ pratham ka gauri ke liye yeh kehna uske ma ke saath tina ko achha nahii laga ]

[ UDHAR MRS. MITTAL AUR TINA ]



Mrs. mittal : tum fikar mat karo kal pratham birthday hai aur main
kal hi pratham aur tumhaari sagaayi ka announcement kar doongi

Tina : [ khush hote hue ] kya ! oh thanx aunty , ooops ! mom
[ Gauri waahaan se chali jaati hai ]

diipendu
January 16, 2009, 09:31 AM
Mrs. mittal : tum fikar mat karo kal pratham birthday hai aur main
kal hi pratham aur tumhaari sagaayi ka
announcement kar doongi

Tina : [ khoosh hote hue ] kya ! oh thanx aunty , ooops ! mom
[ Gauri waahaan se chali jaati hai ]



[ PRATHAM GAURI KO ROKTA HAI MAGAR GAURI CHALI JAATI HAI ]


Pratham : Tina yeh tumne theek nahii kiya ...

[ PRATHAM GUSSE MEIN APNE KAMRE MEIN CHALA JAATAA HAI ]

Mrs. Mittal : Pratham mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hai....

diipendu
January 16, 2009, 09:50 AM
Mrs. Mittal : Pratham mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hai....

Pratham : party mein ees tarah aapne tina ke saath milkar gauri ko
jitna apmaan kiya ab aapko kya kehna hai hai [ pratham gusse se kehte hue ]

Mrs. Mittal : maine tumhaare zindgi ka ek ehem faisla liya hai

Pratham : [ pratham hayraan houte hue kehta hue ] faisla ?

Mrs. Mittal : maine yeh tyeh kiya hai ke..... ke kal hi main tumhaari
aur tina ki saagai kar doon

Pratham : Kya !!! [ pratham chaukte hue ] nahii main yeh saagai nahi karoonga

Mrs. Mittal : Pratham tum yeh mat bhoolo ki main tumhaari maa hoon

Pratham : kiis rishtey ka vaasta dey rahiin hain aap mujhe ! woh rishta jise20 saal se meri zaraa se bhi parwaa nahii thhi aur ab aap meri maa hone ka daawaa kar rahiin hai !

Mrs. Mittal : maine tyeh kar liya hai aur yeh mera aakhri faisla hai !

diipendu
January 20, 2009, 12:13 AM
Mrs. Mittal : maine tyeh kar liya hai aur yeh mera aakhri faisla hai !

[ Agle Din ]

[ Gauri office aati hai tabhi woh tina s milti hai ]

Tina : oh gauri , kal jo hua tum ab bhi ees office mein ho

Tina : agar main tumhaare jagah hoti tou main ees job se resign
kar detii

Gauri : achha yehi hoga ke tum apne yeh nek khayaal apne paas
hi rakho, tumhaare een bakwaas se zyaada mere paas abhi
bahut kaam hai

Tina : [ apne mann mein ] kiske saath kya hoga yeh tou baad mein
pata chalega magar tumhaare saath kya hoga yeh sirf main
decide karoongi

[ PRATHAM GAURI SE MILTA HAI ]

Pratham : gauri woh...... kal jo kuch bhi hua uske liye iam sorry

Gauri : arey pratham esmein sorry kyoun keh rahe ho , galti
tumhaari nahi thii

[ tabhi tina aati hai ]

Tina : haan haan ab tumhe kyun esmein galti nazar aayegi

Pratham : tina zabaan sambhaal ke baat karo ! [ gusse se ]

Tina : ees middle class ladki ki wajah se tum mujhse ees tarah
se baat kar rahe ho

diipendu
January 20, 2009, 12:14 AM
Gauri : arey pratham esmein sorry kyoun keh rahe ho , galti
tumhaari nahi thii

[ tabhi tina aati hai ]

Tina : haan haan ab tumhe kyun esmein galti nazar aayegi

Pratham : tina zabaan sambhaal ke baat karo ! [ gusse se ]

Tina : ees middle class ladki ki wajah se tum mujhse ees tarah
se baat kar rahe ho

[ tina gauri se ]

Tina : tumhe tou main nahi chorungi gauri !

Pratham : Gauri tum eske baaton ka bura mat maano

Gauri : Nahi ....

diipendu
January 22, 2009, 02:26 PM
Tina : tumhe tou main nahi chorungi gauri !

Pratham : Gauri tum eske baaton ka bura mat maano

Gauri : Nahi ....

[ Pratham ki ma gauri ko office mein phone karti hai ]

Gauri : hello

Mrs. Mittal : Gauri ! Mujhe tumhe yeh bataana thha ke aaj Pratham
ka Janamdin hai aur eesliye aaj ghar mein ek party
hai aur tumhe zaroor aana hai . mujhe pata hai ke
kal maine jo bhi kaha woh thek nahii thha magar
main aaj tumse ussi ke liye maafi maangana chahti
hoon , plz beta agar tum aaogi tou mujhe achha lagega

Gauri : Mam, main zaroor aaoongi

Mrs. Mittal : Thanx beta , aur haan tum mujhe aunty keh sakti ho

diipendu
January 22, 2009, 02:28 PM
Mrs. Mittal : Gauri ! Mujhe tumhe yeh bataana thha ke aaj Pratham
ka Janamdin hai aur eesliye aaj ghar mein ek party
hai aur tumhe zaroor aana hai . mujhe pata hai ke
kal maine jo bhi kaha woh thek nahii thha magar
main aaj tumse ussi ke liye maafi maangana chahti
hoon , plz beta agar tum aaogi tou mujhe achha lagega

Gauri : Mam, main zaroor aaoongi

Mrs. Mittal : Thanx beta , aur haan tum mujhe aunty keh sakti ho

Gauri : :) theek hai

[ UDHAR PRATHAM KI MAA]

Mrs. Mittal : Tum aa tou rahi ho gauri magar tumhe yeh nahi pata ke
aaj pratham ki sagaai Tina se hogi

Mr. Mittal [ pratham ke papa ] : Arunima yeh main kya soon raha hoon ke tumne pratham ki sagaai tina se tyeh kar dii hai

Mrs. Mittal : Tumne bilkul sahi suna

Mr. Mittal : magar kya pratham ees ke liye raazi hai ?

Mrs. Mittal : Woh raazi ho na ho , usse mera yeh faisla maanna hi hoga !

diipendu
January 22, 2009, 02:49 PM
Mr. Mittal [ pratham ke papa ] Arunima yeh main kya soon raha hoon ke
tumne pratham ki sagaai tina se tyeh kar dii hai

Mrs. Mittal : Tumne bilkul sahi suna

Mr. Mittal : magar kya pratham ees ke liye raazi hai ?

Mrs. Mittal : Woh raazi ho na ho , usse mera yeh faisla maanna hi hoga !

Mr. Mittal : Tou theek hai main aaj hi Sushant aur Priya ko bulaa leta hoon

Mrs. Mittal : theek hai , aakhir yeh sagaai pratham ke bhai behen ke
bena kaise hogi tum unhe bula lo

[ Party ka waqt hota hai ]


[ Gauri party mein aati hai ]

[ Mrs. Mittal gauri se milti hai ]

Mrs. Mittal : welcome gauri ! mujhe achha laga ke tum party mein aayi

diipendu
January 22, 2009, 02:53 PM
Mrs. Mittal : welcome gauri ! mujhe achha laga ke tum party mein aayi

Gauri : :)

Mrs. Mittal : Gauri aao party bas shuru hona wala hai

[ mrs. mittal apna dhyaan hata te hue ]

Mrs. Mittal : mrs. bhatiya ! gauri ek minute main zaraa aayi



[ Party shuru hota hai ]


[ Pratham birthday cake kaat ta hai aur tina pehle aagy aati hai yeh samjhtey hue ke pratham cake usse khilaayega magar pratham tina ko cake nahi khilaata hai. tina ko bahut bura lagta hai phir pratham ki maa saamney aati hai aur pratham ko wish karti hai magar pratham apni maa ko bhi cake nahi khilaata hai . pratham kissi ko dhund raha hai aur phir woh mike leta hai ]

diipendu
January 22, 2009, 03:02 PM
[ Pratham birthday cake kaat ta hai aur tina pehle aagy aati hai yeh samjhtey hue ke pratham cake usse khilaayega magar pratham tina ko cake nahi khilaata hai. tina ko bahut bura lagta hai phir pratham ki maa saamney aati hai aur pratham ko wish karti hai magar pratham apni maa ko bhi cake nahi khilaata hai . pratham kissi ko dhund raha hai aur phir woh mike leta hai ]

Pratham : gauri please kya tum yahaan aaogi ....

[ GAURI WAAHAAN AATI HAI ]

Gauri : janamdin mubaarak ho pratham

[ PRATHAM GAURI KO CAKE KHILAATA HAI ]

diipendu
January 22, 2009, 03:14 PM
[Pratham ne gauri ko cake khilaaya tina aur mrs. mittal ko nahi yeh baat unhe achha nahi laga ]

[ tabhi pratham ki ma stage par jaati hai ]

Mrs. Mittal : ladies & gentlemen yaahan ek bahut important announcement hone jaa raha hai

Mrs. Mittal : ji haan , aaj yaahaan pratham ki saagai hone jaa rahi hai ....

[ Tina khush hote hue dekhti hai ]

Mrs. mittal : and that preety girl is.... Tina !

diipendu
January 22, 2009, 03:22 PM
Mrs. Mittal : ji haan , aaj yaahaan pratham ki saagai hone jaa rahi hai ....

[ Tina khush hote hue dekhti hai ]

Mrs. mittal : and that preety girl is.... Tina !

[ Pratham ees sagaai se khush nahi hai ]

Mrs. Mittal : pratham aur tina please yahaan aao

[ pratham aur tina stage par aatey hain ]

Mrs. Mittal : aur ab pratham tum tina ko ring pehnaao

[ Pratham na khush hote hue tina ko ring pehnaa ta hai ]

[ taaliyaan bajti hain ]

Mrs. Mittal : aur ab tina tum pratham ko ring pehnaao

[ tina khush hote hue pratham ko ring pehnaati hai ]

[ taaliyaan bajti hain ]

[ Gauri rotey waahan se chali jaati hai ]

diipendu
January 22, 2009, 03:27 PM
Mrs. Mittal : aur ab tina tum pratham ko ring pehnaao

[ tina khush hote hue pratham ko ring pehnaati hai ]

[ taaliyaan bajti hain ]

[ Gauri rotey waahan se chali jaati hai ]

Gauri : [ Gauri mann mein sochtey hue ] Pratham ki saagai ho rahe hai tou mujhe kyoun achha nahi lag raha hai .... Kyou main khush nahi hoon
Kahiin mujhe pratham se pyaar tou nahi hua .... nahii aisa nahi ho sakta main pratham se pyaar ke baarey mein soch bhi nahi sakti

[ GAURI GHAR CHALI JAATI HAI ]

[ AGLE DIN ]

Pratham : gauri tum kal ees tarah party chorr ke kyoun chali gayi ?

Gauri : woh..... :(

diipendu
January 22, 2009, 03:32 PM
Pratham : gauri tum kal ees tarah party chorr ke kyoun chali gayi ?

Gauri : woh.....

Gauri : woh..... meri tabiyat kuch theek nahi thhi esliye

[ Pratham gauri se kuch kehna chahta hai magar woh keh nahii paa raaha ]

Pratham : gauri...

Gauri : haan bolo pratham

Pratham : kuch nahii

[ Gauri chali jaati hai ]

Pratham : main tumhe kaise bataaoon gauri ke mujhe tumhaara saath
achha lagney laga hai , kab se yeh main nahi jaanta
par shaayad mujhe tumse pyaar ho gaya hai.....

diipendu
January 22, 2009, 03:34 PM
[ Tabhi tina pratham ke cabin mein aati hai ]

Tina : Pratham ! iam so happy pratham tum yakin nahi karoge

[ yahaan pratham gauri ke yaadon mein khoya hua hai ]

Pratham : [ apne mann mein sochtey hue ] yakin tou mujhe khud par
nahii ho raha hai , kab kaise mujhe gauri se pyaar ho gaya
mujhe khud hi yeh pata nahi chala

Tina : pratham kahaan ho tum , main kya keh rahiin hoon soon rahey
na ? shaadi ke baad na hum switzerland jaayenge apne
honeymoon ke liye

Pratham : tina mujhe bahut zaroori kaam karna hai please abhi tum
jaao

Tina : Magar pratham ..... theek hai

diipendu
January 22, 2009, 03:37 PM
Pratham : tina mujhe bahut zaroori kaam karna hai please abhi tum
jaao

Tina : Magar pratham ..... theek hai jaisa tum kaho

[ Kuch ghanto baad tina gauri ke cabin mein gayi ]

Tina : ms. gauri sharma , mujhe bahut afsos ho raha hai ke tumhaare
itni koshisho ke baawajood bhi tum pratham ko apne pyaar
ke jaal mein fassa nahii paayi

Gauri : afsos tou mujhe pratham par aur uske ghar waalon par ho
raha hai ke unhe tumhaari jaise bad dimaag ladki ko apne
ghar ki bahu banaaney jaa rahin hain

Tina : aou shut up !!!

Gauri : You shut up !!!

[ een dono ke aawaaz se tabhi Pratham cabin mein aata hai ]

Pratham : yeh kya ho raha hai yaahan ! aur tina tum yaahaan gauri ke
cabin mein kya kar rahi ho...

diipendu
January 22, 2009, 03:43 PM
Pratham : yeh kya ho raha hai yaahan ! aur tina tum yaahaan gauri ke
cabin mein kya kar rahi ho...

Gauri : pratham poocho essey , yeh yahaan aakar kya bakwaas kar rahi
thhi ? zarra poocho esse kyou yeh hamesha bina kissi kaam ke
yahaan aakar tumhaare aur apney rishtey ka taana deti hai

Pratham : tina yeh main kya soon raha hoon !!!

[ Office ke saary staff members wahaan ek kahtta ho jaatey hain ]

Pratham : [ pratham office staff members se ] aaploug yaahaan kharey kya koi tamaasha dekh rahin hai ! jaayi ye yaahaan se !!

Pratham : aur tina tum ! tum agar yeh soch rahi ho ke mujhse sagaai karney ke baad tum yahaan kuch bhi kar sakti ho tou tum bilkul galat ho ! tum yeh matt bhoolo ke main jab chaahey yeh sagaai toud sakta hoon !

diipendu
January 22, 2009, 03:45 PM
[ een sabke baad tina wahaan se gussa hoke chali jaati hai ]

Pratham : Gauri , tina ne jo kuch bhi kaha uska bura mat maanna

Gauri : Pratham Mujhe bura ees baat ka nahi laga ke oosne mujhe
kuch kaha mujhe bura ees baat ka laga ke oosne mere
aur tumhaari dosti ko gandi nazron se dekha hai ....
woh samjhte hai ke main tumse pyaar karti hoon

Pratham : [ PRATHAM MANN MEIN KEHTA HAI ] keh do na gauri ke
tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho

Gauri : jab ki aisa kuch bhi nahii hai pratham , haan pratham main
tumse pyaar...... [ gauri pratham se pyaar karti hai magar
jaan bhooj kar nahi keh rahi hai ]

Gauri : main tumse pyaar nahii karti .....

diipendu
January 22, 2009, 03:47 PM
Pratham : [ PRATHAM MANN MEIN KEHTA HAI ] keh do na gauri ke
tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho

Gauri : jab ki aisa kuch bhi nahii hai pratham , haan pratham main tumse
pyaar...... [ gauri pratham se pyaar karti hai magar jaan
bhooj kar nahi keh paa rahi hai ] main tumse pyaar nahii karti .....

[ Pratham ko yeh jaan ke achha nahi laga esliye woh cabin se baahar chalaa jaata hai ]

Gauri : Pratham yeh meri majboori hai ke main tumhe nahi bataa sakti
ke main tumse kitna pyaar karti hoon

Gauri : magar main yeh tumse kaise keh sakti hoon , tumhaare pariwaar
waaley kabhi raazi nahi hnge aur ab tou tumhaari shaadi hone
jaa rahi hai....

diipendu
January 24, 2009, 08:09 AM
Gauri : Pratham yeh meri majboori hai ke main tumhe nahi bataa sakti
ke main tumse kitna pyaar karti hoon

Gauri : magar main yeh tumse kaise keh sakti hoon , tumhaare pariwaar
waaley kabhi raazi nahi hnge aur ab tou tumhaari shaadi hone
jaa rahi hai.... mujhe maaf kar dena pratham

[ Pratham ki ma tina ko phone karti hai ]

Mrs. Mittal : Tina , beta kaise ho ?

Tina : main bilkul theek nahi hoon

Mrs. Mittal : [ pareshaan hote hue ] kyoun beta , kya hua ?:(

diipendu
January 24, 2009, 08:10 AM
Mrs. Mittal : Tina , beta kaise ho ?

Tina : main bilkul theek nahi hoon

Mrs. Mittal : [ pareshaan hote hue ] kyoun beta , kya hua ?

Tina : aapko pata hai , ooos gauri ke wajah se aaj pratham ne mujhe
saarey staaf ke saamney beyzzat kiya

Mrs. Mittal : Beta tum fikkar kyoun kar rahi ho , ab tou tumhaari aur
pratham ki sagaai bhi ho gayi hai eesliye gauri ab koi bhi
chaal chalegi yeh sochna beykaar hai aur baaki raha pratham ka tumhaarey oopar gussa woh main oosse samjha doongi

Tina : Thanxx aunty [ tassali hote hue ]

diipendu
January 24, 2009, 08:17 AM
Tina : Thanxx aunty [ tassali hote hue ]

Mrs. Mittal : yeh middle class ladki ko uski hadd dikhaani hi hogi !

[ Gauri ghar waapas aati hai ]

Mr. Sharma : [ Gauri ke papa ] Beta aaj aaney mein itna late hua ?

Gauri : Papa aaj bahut kaam thha eeseliye

Mr. Sharma : koi baat nahi , jaao jaakey fresh ho jaao

Gauri : theek hai papa....

diipendu
January 26, 2009, 01:03 PM
Mr. Sharma : [ Gauri ke papa ] Beta aaj aaney mein itna late hua ?

Gauri : Papa aaj bahut kaam thha eeseliye

Mr. Sharma : koi baat nahi , jaao jaakey fresh ho jaao

Gauri : theek hai papa....

[ Udhar Pratham ]

Pratham : [ apne mann mein sochtey hue ] tumne kaha ke tum mujhse pyaar nahii karti tou kyoun tumhaari zabaan tumhaare aakhon ka saath nahi dey rahii thii ..... jo bhi ho , kal main yeh tumhe baataa hi doonga ke main tumse pyaar karne laga hoon

[ Aur Udhar ]

Tina : woh middle class ladki gauri ! oosney tou pratham par aisa
jadoo kar diya hai ke pratham ooskey baarey min kuch buraa
sunna bhi nahii chahega

diipendu
January 26, 2009, 01:05 PM
[ Aur Udhar ]

Tina : woh middle class ladki gauri ! oosney tou pratham par aisa
jadoo kar diya hai ke pratham ooskey baarey min kuch buraa
sunna bhi nahii chahega

Mrs. Mittal : just chill tina , oos gauri ke baarey mein sochna chhoro
aur apni shaadi pratham se hone ke sapney dekho

Tina : magar aunty aapkey paas aisa kya aagaya jo aap itni beyfikar
ho ke keh rahiin hai ?

Mrs. Mittal : woh mera hukum ka ikka hai jisse main waqt aaney par hi
este maal karoongi......

diipendu
January 26, 2009, 01:05 PM
Tina : magar aunty aapkey paas aisa kya aagaya jo aap itni beyfikar
ho ke keh rahiin hai ?

Mrs. Mittal : woh mera hukum ka ikka hai jisse main waqt aaney par hi
este maal karoongi......

Tina : hukum ka ika ..... aunty plz bataao na ! plzzzzz

Mrs. Mittal : woh tou main waqt aaney par hi bataaoongi
[ khush hote hue ]

Mrs. Mittal : tina ab bas tum dekhte jaao kaise gauri khud pratham
ko apney se door karti hai.....

diipendu
January 26, 2009, 01:09 PM
Mrs. Mittal : woh tou main waqt aaney par hi bataaoongi
[ khush hote hue ]


Mrs. Mittal : tina ab bas tum dekhte jaao kaise gauri khud pratham
ko apney se door karti hai.....



[ MRS. MITTAL AUR TINA SAAJISH KAR RAHEIN HAIN PRATHAM AUR GAURI KO DOOR KARNEY KE LIYE MAGAR UNHEY YEH NAHII PATA KE PEECHEY ROOM KE BAAHAR PRATHAM KI
BEHEN PRIYA NE SAB SOON LIYA HAI ]




Priya : [ mann mein sochtey hue ] oh no, mummy aur tina ne itna badi
saajish ki hai . mujhe yeh bhaiya ko bataana hi hoga....

diipendu
January 26, 2009, 01:10 PM
[ priya pratham ko sab kuch bataaney jaati hai ]

Priya : bhaiya ! .......

Pratham : priya , aao

Priya : bhaiya mujhe aapko kuch bahut zaroori baat bataani hai......

Pratham : zaroori baat , haan bataao.......

[ PRIYA PRATHAM KO POORI SACHAAI BATAA DETI HAI ]

Pratham : priya !! tum jaanti bhi ho tum kya keh rahi ho , tum ma par
elzaam laga rahi ho , yeh matt bhulo woh hamaari ma hai.....

Priya : bhaiya yeh sach hai.....

diipendu
January 26, 2009, 01:11 PM
Pratham : main nahi maanta !

[ pratham waahaan se chala jaata hai ]

Priya : [ priya mrs. mittal aur tina se :mann mein sochtey hue ]
aap dono chahe kuch bhi kar lo magar aap dono apney ees gandi
chaal mein kaamiyaab nahi hoge , aap dono ees tarah pratham
bhaiya ke zindgi ke saath khel nahi sakte. Nahi main aisa nahi
honey doongi ! Yeh mera vaada hai.......


[ Priya gauri ko phone karti hai ]


Priya : hello gauri ......

diipendu
January 26, 2009, 01:13 PM
Gauri : ji bol rahii hoon , aap kaun ?

Priya : gauri , mujhe tumse bahut zaroori baat karni hai

Gauri : magar , tum kaun ho ...

Priya : main kaun hoon yeh fark nahi padta magar please tumhi
ab pratham ko kisi ka chaal ke shikaar hone se bachaa
sakti ho

Gauri : kya ! pratham ko kya hua ? kaisa hai woh ??

Priya : abhi tou kuch nahii hua , agar abhi kuch nahi kiya gaya
tou ho sakta hai....

Gauri : yeh tum kya keh rahi ho [ pareshaan hote hue ]

diipendu
January 26, 2009, 01:14 PM
Priya : pratham theek nahi hai , pratham ki shaadi tina se zabardasti
karaayi jaa rahi hai eeseliye please gauri ab tum hi pratham
ko yeh shaadi karney se rok sakti ho....... kyouki mujhe
pata hai ke tum bhi pratham se pyaar karti ho

[ Gauri tyaar ho jaati hai ]

Gauri : theek hai , main tumhaari madad zaroor karoongi.....

Priya : thanks gauri , tum mandir pahucho.....

Gauri : theek hai

diipendu
January 26, 2009, 01:16 PM
[ Pratham gauri ko mandir mein dekh kar khush ho jaata hai ]


[ Pratham daude daude gauri ke paas jaata hai aur gauri bhi pratham ke paas aati hai ]


Pratham : Gauri aaj muhe tumse kuch kehna hai .....


Gauri : Pratham mujhe bhi tumse kuch kehna hai

[ dono eksaath kehte hain ]

Pratham : i love you

Gauri : I love you.........

diipendu
January 26, 2009, 01:19 PM
[ Background music mein " jab koi baat bigar jaaye jab ki mushkil padd jaaye " ]

Pratham : gauri hum aaj eesse mandir mein shaadi karenge


[ shaadi hoti hai ]


Priya : bhaiya ab shaadi tou ho gayi hai magar gharwaalon ko
kya kahenge ....

Gauri : Pratham priya sahi keh rahi hai

Pratham : mujhe eeski parwa nahi hai , chalo.....

diipendu
January 26, 2009, 01:20 PM
[ Pratham gauri ko lekar apney ghar pahucta hai tabhi ]


[ pratham ki ma gusse se ]


Mrs. Mittal : pratham ! yes sab kya hai

Mrs. Mittal : tumne humse bina poochey ees ladki se shaadi karli......

Pratham : magar main gauri se pyaar karta hoon.....

Mrs. Mittal : pyaar ! ya tum ees ladki ko choro ya yeh ghar chor ke
chale jaao

Pratham : theek hai ! main aaj abhi yeh ghar chor ke jaa raha hoon......

diipendu
January 28, 2009, 06:17 AM
Pratham : theek hai ! main aaj abhi yeh ghar chor ke jaa raha hoon......

[ Ghar se baahar nikalkar ]

[ Gauri rotey hue ]

Gauri : pratham aaj tumhe meri wajah se apne ghar se baahar
hona para hai....

Pratham : nahi gauri .... aisa nahi hai

Pratham : ekdin yehi loug humme apnaayenge....


[ 2 saal baad ]

diipendu
January 28, 2009, 06:27 AM
[ SAB KUCH THEEK HO JAATA HAI ]


Mrs. Mittal : [ Mrs. Mittal ko apne galti pe pachhtaava hota hai ]
Mujhe apne galti ka ehsaas ho gaya hai ...... main pratham aur gauri ke pyaar ko samaj nahii paayi...... magar ab aisa nahi hoga ....... main khud pratham aur gauri ko ghar waapas laaoongi


Mr. Mittal : dekh ke achha laga ke aakhir tumhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho
gaya hai........


Mr. Mittal : magar shaayad tum een sab baaton mein Tina ko bhool rahi
ho ..........


Mrs. Mittal : Tina meri Zimmedaari hai ........ main soch rahi hoon .....
soch rahii hoon ke agar Tina Ki shaadi hamaare dusre bete
Arjun se ho jaaye tou shaayad tina apne ees sadmein se
ubhar paaye .........


Mr. Mittal : Tum sahii keh rahi ho....... ees se tina pratham ko bhool jaayegi magar kya arjun ees rishtey ke liye raazi hoga ?

diipendu
January 28, 2009, 06:39 AM
Mrs. Mittal : Tina meri Zimmedaari hai ........ main soch rahi hoon .....
soch rahii hoon ke agar Tina Ki shaadi hamaare dusre bete
Arjun se ho jaaye tou shaayad tina apne ees sadmein se
ubhar paaye .........


Mr. Mittal : Tum sahii keh rahi ho....... ees se tina pratham ko bhool jaayegi magar kya arjun ees rishtey ke liye raazi hoga ?

Mrs. Mittal : Main baat karoongi oon dono se.......


[ AUR UDHAR TINA ]


Tina : aaj bhi main tumhare oos dhoke ko nahi bhooli hoon pratham ! ......
main tumse aur oos gauri se apna badla lekar hi rahoongi.......



[ Tabhi Mrs. Mittal aati hai ]


[ Tina Mrs. Mittal ko dekh kar chauk jaati hai ]




Tina : arrrre aunty aap........[ darr ke bolti hue ]

diipendu
January 28, 2009, 06:52 AM
Tina : arrrre aunty aap........ [ darr ke bolti hue ]

Mrs. Mittal : Beta , kya main tumse zaraa baat kar sakti hoon ? ...........

Mrs. Mittal : Beta mujhe pata hai ke 2 mahiney pehle jo hua
tumhaare saath woh theek nahi hua magar .............
magar pratham aur gauri ek doosre se bahut pyaar karte hain ...............

Mrs. Mittal : Tina main chahti hoon ki tum .........
meri ghar ki bahu bano......


[ TINA HAYRAANI SE DEKHTI HAI ]


Mrs. Mittal : maine pandit ji se tumhaari aur arjun ki kundli dikhaayi hai aur unhone tumhaari aur arjun ki shaadi eesse mahine ke 24 taarik ko tyeh kiya hai ...... tou kya main yeh rishta ................


Tina : theek hai aunty , main ees shaadi ke liye tyaar hoon..............
mujhe pata hai aapney mere liye jo bhi socha hoga sahi socha
hoga........

diipendu
January 28, 2009, 06:56 AM
Mrs. Mittal : maine pandit ji se tumhaari aur arjun ki kundli dikhaayi hai aur unhone tumhaari aur arjun ki shaadi eesse mahine ke 24 taarik ko tyeh kiya hai ...... tou kya main yeh rishta ................


Tina : theek hai aunty , main ees shaadi ke liye tyaar hoon..............
mujhe pata hai aapney mere liye jo bhi socha hoga sahi socha
hoga........

[ Tina mann hi mann khush ho jaati hai kyunki ab oosey pratham aur gauri se badlaa lene kaa mauka mill gaya ]




Mrs. Mittal : tou beta main chalti hoon bahut tyaari karni hai [ khush hote hue ]




[ Mrs. Mittal ke jaatey hi ]

Tina : Pratham aur gauri se badlaa lene ka ab yehi ek tarika
hai ke main arjun se shaadi kar loon ................

Tina : haan ! ab arjun ko mujhe apney pyaar ke jaal mein fassa na
hoga aur baaki khel ki poori dor mere haath mein .........................

[ AGLE DIN ]


[ Tina Arjun se college mein milti hai ]


Arjun : tum yahaan ! :mad:

Tina : arjun mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat kani hai ......

diipendu
January 28, 2009, 06:57 AM
Arjun : tum yahaan ! :mad:


Tina : arjun mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat kani hai ......


Arjun : [ arjun gusse mein ] mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni !


[ udhar Pratham aur Gauri ]


Pratham : Nahi gauri ! hum waapas waahan oos ghar mein waapas nahi
jaayenge .....................

Gauri : Pratham main maanti hoon ..............
ke mummyji pehle hamaarey rishtey ke khilaaf thii .............
magar ab haalaat badal gaye hain ..................

Gauri : Pratham please .......... kya hum ekbaar unhe mauka
nahi dey saktey ...............

Pratham : theek hai gauri ........... sirf tumhaare kehne par
he hum waahan jaayenge .............

diipendu
January 29, 2009, 12:20 PM
[ Aur Udhar Tina ........ ]


Arjun : Tumne mere ghar waalon se hamaari shaadi ki baat ki
hai ........... magar mujhe tumse shaadi nahi karni ! soon
liya tumne ............

Tina : [ Dhamki dete hue ] tou tum bhi meri baat soonlo ! ...........
agar tumne mujhse shaadi nahii ki tou ................
tou main tumhaare ghar waalon ko tumhaare aur paayal
ke pyaar ke baarein mein bata doongi ..............
aur yakeen maano mujhe yeh bataa ke bahut
khushi hogi ..............
aur eska saboot photographs ke taur par mere paas hain ...............

Arjun : Tum Mujhe blackmail kar rahi ho ....

Tina : jo samaj na ho samaj lo magar tumhaare paas sochne ke liye
samay bahut kam hai ............

Arjun : [ arjun thode der baad soch ke bolta hai ] theek hai main
raazi hoon .......... magar yeh shaadi 1 saal ka contract
marriage hoga ............

Tina : manzoor hai ........

[ ARJUN PAAYAL KO BATAATA HAI ]

Paayal : kya ! tum mujhe chorr ke Tina se shaadi kar rahe ho ..........
main eske liye tumhe kabhie maaf nahi karoongi ..................

Arjun : magar paayal ............... [ Arjun gusse mein kasam khaata hai ] Tina aaj tumhaare wajah se paayal mujhe chorr ke chali gayi hai.............. Ab tum dekhti jaao yeh shaadi tumhe bahut bhaari paregi .............. Main tumhaari zindgi narak se battar bana doonga .................

diipendu
January 29, 2009, 12:23 PM
[ Pratham aur Gauri ke aaney aur Arjun aur tina ki sagaai ke Khushi mein poora ghar sajaaya jaata hai ]

[ PRATHAM AUR GAURI GHAR PAHUCHTEY HAIN ]

[ Ghar mein Pratham aur Gauri ka swaagat Dulhe aur dulhan ki tarah hota hai .sab khushi manaa rahey hain ]

[ Gauri kalash giraati hai ]

Mrs. Mittal : pratham ..... gauri ...... 2 mahiney pehle mujhse
jo galti hue thhi mujhe uske liye maaf kardo ............


Gauri : Mummyji please ...... maafi maangkar aap humme sharminda
kar rahi hain ...........


Mrs. Mittal : Gauri , betaa aaj se tum meri bahu nahi beti ho ..........


[ SAB THEEK HO JAATA HAI ]

diipendu
January 29, 2009, 12:25 PM
Mrs. Mittal : mujhe tum dono ko kuch aur bhi bataa na hai ........
aaj yaahan tina aur arjun ki sagaai ho rahi hai .........
aur eesse mahine ke 24 taarik ko oon dono ki shaadi
bhi hai ...............

[ Pratham mann mein sochta hai ]

Pratham : Tina ke eeraadey theek nahi lagtey .......
kahi woh arjun se shaadi karke mujhse aur gauri
se apna badlaa tou nahi legi ..................

[ Tina Aur Arjun ki sagaai ho jaati hai ]


[ Sagaai ke baad ]


Arjun : [ arjun tina ko dheere se boltey hue ] tina ,
tumhe apna vaada yaad tou hai na ?

Tina : ghabraao mat , mujhe yaad hai ...........
[ tina apney mann mein sochtey hue ] sagaai tou ho gai hai , aur ab main apna badla bahut jald loongi aur gauri tumhe tou main ees ghar se nikalwaa ke hi rahoongi ............. dekhna tum !

diipendu
January 31, 2009, 11:35 AM
[ Sagaai ki Party chalti rehti hai . Bahut shor ke wajah se gauri thoda baahar jaati hai magar tabhi wahaan tina bhi aa jaati hai ]




Tina : Kya hua , tum baahar kyun chali aayi ....... party mein mann nahi lagg rahaa thaa .........

Gauri : woh actually .........

Tina : Koi baat nahi [ attitude dekhaate hue ]
tumhe tou shaayad aadat nahi hogi aise parties ki ........ hai na ?

Gauri : Mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni !

Tina : arre tum tou gussa ho gayi ....... maine tou bas aise hi keh
diya thha


[ Tabhi Pratham waahan aata hai ]



Pratham : gauri tum baahar kyun chali aayi ?
[ pratham tina ko waahan dekhta hai ]

Pratham : tina , congratulation tumhaari sagaai ke liye ..........

Tina : thanks ....

diipendu
January 31, 2009, 11:36 AM
[ Tina ke andar jaatey hi ... ]


[ Gauri pareshaan hote hue pratham se bolti hai ]

Gauri : pratham , aaj tina ke baaton se mujhe aisa laga ke
uske iraadey theek nahii hai ................... kahiin aisa tou nahi ke woh yeh shaadi humse badlaa lene ke liye kar rahii hai ?

Pratham : haan gauri , mujhe bhi yehi lagta hai .......
magar tum chintaa matt karo ........ agar tina ne koi bhi chaal chali aur tumhe ya mere ghar waalon ko koi bhi nuksaan pahuchaaney ki koshish ki
tou main oossey nahi chorunga ................

[ tabhi mrs. mittal waha aati hai ]

diipendu
January 31, 2009, 11:37 AM
[ tabhi mrs. mittal waha aati hai ]



Mrs. Mittal : arrey tumdono yaahan ho .........
andar party chal rahi hai jaao enjoy karo !




Pratham : je mumma ......


Mrs. Mittal : betta mujhe tumdono ko kuch aur bhi bataana
thha ....... aaj se tina humaarey saath humaare ghar mein hi rahegi , ab uska koi ees duniya mein nahii hain ab sirf hum hi tina ke apne hain ......... i hope tum dono ko koi problem nahi hogi ?


Gauri : mummyji , humme koi aitraaz nahi hai ........... :)

diipendu
February 3, 2009, 01:12 PM
[ AGLE DIN ]

[ subah pratham office chale jaata hai aur gauri apne room mein hai tabhi tina waahan aatii hai ]




Tina : good morning gauri ! :)

Gauri : tum ! yaahan ....... [ gussey mein ]


Tina : gauri , tum shaayad bhool rahi ho .........
ab tumhaare saath saath ab main bhi ees ghar ki bahu banney waali hoon ........ eesiliye mujhe tou yaahan
hona hi chahiye .............

diipendu
March 5, 2009, 08:07 PM
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diipendu
March 19, 2009, 05:34 PM
(http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/serial-one-f14/kutumb-ek-nayi-kahani-t3.htm?p=200&eval=minus)
[ AGLE DIN ]

[ subah pratham office chale jaata hai aur gauri apne room mein hai tabhi tina waahan aatii hai ]

Tina : good morning gauri ! [ khush hotey hue ]

Gauri : tum ! yaahan ....... [ gussey mein ]

Tina : gauri , tum shaayad bhool rahi ho .........
ab tumhaare saath saath ab main
bhi ees ghar ki bahu banney waali hoon ........ eesiliye mujhe tou yaahan hona hi chahiye .............

Gauri : main tumhaari koi bhi bakwaas
sunney mein intrest nahi rakhti ......
eesieliye tum yaahan se jaa sakti ho .........

Tina : main abhi tou chali jaaongi magar ......
ab se 8 din ke baad main ees ghar mein
humeshaa ke liye aa rahin hoon aur ....... phir tumse aur sabse main apna badlaa loongi ........... jo karna hai karlo !

diipendu
March 19, 2009, 05:49 PM
Gauri : tum ! yaahan ....... [ gussey mein ]

Tina : gauri , tum shaayad bhool rahi ho .........
ab tumhaare saath saath ab main
bhi ees ghar ki bahu banney waali hoon ........ eesiliye mujhe tou yaahan hona hi chahiye .............

Gauri : main tumhaari koi bhi bakwaas
sunney mein intrest nahi rakhti ......
eesieliye tum yaahan se jaa sakti ho .........

Tina : main abhi tou chali jaaongi magar ......
ab se 8 din ke baad main ees ghar mein
humeshaa ke liye aa rahin hoon aur ....... phir tumse aur sabse main apna badlaa loongi ........... jo karna hai karlo !

Gauri : jinhoney tumhe itnaa pyaar diya hai ......
tumhaare maa baap se badkar tumhaara
dhyaan rakha hai tum oonse badlaa lougi ? ......... jis pyaar ko paa na saki oos sey badlaa lougi .......... ? magar tumhe een sab se pehle mujh par se hokar guzar na
padega !

Tina : manzoor hai ........ main tumhe ees ghar se tou dooor
karungi magar shaayad ........ tum ees duniyaa se bhi doooor ho jaao .........

diipendu
March 19, 2009, 05:51 PM
Gauri : tum ! yaahan ....... [ gussey mein ]

Tina : gauri , tum shaayad bhool rahi ho .........
ab tumhaare saath saath ab main
bhi ees ghar ki bahu banney waali hoon ........ eesiliye mujhe tou yaahan hona hi chahiye .............

Gauri : main tumhaari koi bhi bakwaas
sunney mein intrest nahi rakhti ......
eesieliye tum yaahan se jaa sakti ho .........

Tina : main abhi tou chali jaaongi magar ......
ab se 8 din ke baad main ees ghar mein
humeshaa ke liye aa rahin hoon aur ....... phir tumse aur sabse main apna badlaa loongi ........... jo karna hai karlo !

Gauri : jinhoney tumhe itnaa pyaar diya hai ......
tumhaare maa baap se badkar tumhaara
dhyaan rakha hai tum oonse badlaa lougi ? ......... jis pyaar ko paa na saki oos sey badlaa lougi .......... ? magar tumhe een sab se pehle mujh par se hokar guzar na
padega !

Tina : manzoor hai ........ main tumhe ees ghar se
tou dooor karungi magar shaayad ........ tum ees duniyaa se bhi doooor ho jaao .........

Gauri : mujhe tumhaare een dhamkiyon se koi fark nahi
padtaa ........ jaao aur jaake koi mazboot chaal socho
kyunki tumhaare har chaal ko ab main naakaam karungi !

[ Kutumb ka background music hota hai ]

diipendu
March 21, 2009, 06:28 AM
[ KUCH DEIR BAAD ]

[ Mrs. mittal kamrey mein aati hai ]

Mrs. Mittal : gauri , mujhe tumse ek help chahiye thhii ........

Gauri : kahiye mummyji ....

Mrs. Mittal : betaa tumhe tou pata hai ke ghar min abhi shaadi ka maahol
hai eesliye main chahti hoon ke tum ees tyaari mein meri
haath bataao ......

Gauri : ji mummyji ....

diipendu
March 21, 2009, 06:29 AM
Mrs. Mittal : betaa tumhe tou pata hai ke ghar min abhi shaadi ka maahol
hai eesliye main chahti hoon ke tum ees tyaari mein meri
haath bataao ......

Gauri : ji mummyji ....

[ Priya apne kamrey se nikalti hai tabhi waahan tina aati hai ]

Priya : tum !

Tina : shaayad tum mero shaadi se khush nahi ho ...... koi baat nahi ,
tumhaare chahne se kya hoga yeh shaadi tou ho ke hi rahegi .......

Priya : jitna abhi aasmaan mein urnaa hai oor lo , kyunki kya pata kal tum
apne chaal mein itni bhi khushi manaa paao gi bhi ya nahi .......

diipendu
March 23, 2009, 07:09 AM
Priya : jitna abhi aasmaan mein urnaa hai oor lo , kyunki kya pata kal tum
apne chaal mein itni bhi khushi manaa paao gi bhi ya nahi .......

Tina : Tou tum ees shaadi ko rouk lougi ? mujhe nahi lagta ........
kyunki jab tumhaari gauri bhabhi hi kuch nahi kar paayi tou tum kya
karogi ......

Priya : Gauri ka naam tumhaare zabaan pe achha nahi lagta eeseliye
agar tumne bhaiya ya gauri ko zarra sa bhi nuksaan pahuchaaya tou ...

diipendu
March 23, 2009, 07:10 AM
Tina : Tou tum ees shaadi ko rouk lougi ? mujhe nahi lagta ........
kyunki jab tumhaari gauri bhabhi hi kuch nahi kar paayi tou tum kya
karogi ......

Priya : Gauri ka naam tumhaare zabaan pe achha nahi lagta eeseliye
agar tumne bhaiya ya gauri ko zarra sa bhi nuksaan pahuchaaya tou ...

Tina : tou mera raaz sabko bata dougi ..... bata do , kaun yakeen karega

Priya : koi yakeen kare ya na kare ..... sachaai ko tou saamney aana hi hai ......

[ Tina waahaan se gussa hoke chali jaati hai ]

diipendu
March 24, 2009, 07:28 AM
[ tina aur priya ki saari baatein mrs. mittal (pratham ki ma) soon leti hai aur gusse se tina ke paas jaati hai apna jawaab maangne ]




[ Tina apne kamrey mein chali jaati hai aur kamrey mein jaaney ke baad gusse se saarey chizon ko idhar udhar fekhti hai tabhi mrs. mittal wahaan aajati hai ]




Mrs. mittal : [ gusse se ] tina ! ....


[ tina peechey palat ke dekhti hai tou wahaan mrs. mittal hoti hai ]



Mrs. Mittal : maine tumhari aur priya ki saari baatein soon li hai ....

diipendu
March 24, 2009, 07:30 AM
[ yeh jaan ke tina ke chehre ke hosh hi oor jaatey hain aur woh ghabraa jaati hai ]

[ udhar gauri pratham se kehti hai ]

Gauri : [ pratham busy hota hai ] pratham .... pratham zara suno tou ....

Pratham : kya hai gauri ? ....

Gauri : [ khush hotey hue ] pratham tumhe pata hai 30 october ko
ght pariwaar awards hai ....

[ pratham yeh soon ke khush hotey hue gauri se kehta hai ]

Pratham : kya ! ... phir tou main abhi se
mein ght pariwaar awards forum mein jaake wahaan har
topics mein jaakey vote karoonga .... aur tum ? ....

Gauri : haan main bhi zaroor vote karoongi apne fav. ke liye aur
aap saarey loug bhi zaroor vote kariyega aur apne fav. ko jetaayega ....

diipendu
March 24, 2009, 07:40 AM
[ udhar tina aur mrs. mittal ]

Mrs. mittal : mujhe tumse yeh ummed nahi thii tina .... maine tumhe
apni beti maana thha aur tumne ?.....


[ Tabhi tina peechey moor ke boli ]


Tina : [ gusse se ] aur pratham ki shaadi ko swikaar bhi kar liya ! ....
magar ab nahi.... main apne apmaan ka badlaa aap sabse aur
oos gauri se tou le ke hi rahoongi ..... haan main yeh
shaadi eesse maksad se kar rahi hoon ....

[ Ab tina apna asli roop dikhaatey hue mrs. mittal se kehti hai ]

Tina : magar maine socha thha .... ke meri yeh baat kissi ko pata
nahi chalega kyunki mere ees poorey saajish ki ehem mohra tou
aap thii .... [ tina hastey hue ] mummyji .... magar kya
karey .... ab aapko meri suchaai pata chal hi gayi hai tou ....
[ paaglo ki tarah harkat kartey hue ] ab tou mujhe aapko maarna
hi parega na mummyji ......

diipendu
March 24, 2009, 07:41 AM
Tina : magar maine socha thha .... ke meri yeh baat kissi ko pata
nahi chalega kyunki mere ees poorey saajish ki ehem mohra tou
aap thii .... [ tina hastey hue ] mummyji .... magar kya
karey .... ab aapko meri suchaai pata chal hi gayi hai tou ....

[ paaglo ki tarah harkat kartey hue ] ab tou mujhe aapko maarna hi parega na mummyji ......




Mrs. Mittal : magar main tumhaari suchaai sabko bataa
doongi ....

[ shaayad eendono mein se kissi ko nahi pata agar inki saari tasveere ek video camere mein record ho rahi hai ]


[ Tina ne table mein rakhe fruits ke saath chaakoo ko oothaaya aur mrs. mittal ko jaan ki dhamki dene lagi ]




Mrs. mittal : main tumhaari een giri hue harkaton se nahi darti .....
arrey mere samjh mein tou ab
aaraha hai ke maine kyun gauri ko hamesha galat samjha .... gauri jisse se main nafrat karti thii .. woh ab meri beti saabeet hue aur .... tum ! ..... tum ek nagin .... jo poorey ghar ko dasne aayi ho ....




[ yeh sab soon ke tina ka gussa ab fat para aur oosney chaakoo se mrs. mittal ko behrehmi se maar diya ]

diipendu
March 24, 2009, 07:51 AM
[ Tina ne table mein rakhe fruits ke saath chaakoo ko oothaaya aur mrs. mittal ko jaan ki dhamki dene lagi ]

Mrs. mittal : main tumhaari een giri hue harkaton se nahi
darti ..... arrey mere samjh mein tou ab
aaraha hai ke maine kyun gauri ko hamesha galat samjha ....
gauri jisse se main nafrat karti thii .. woh ab meri beti saabeet hue aur .... tum ! ..... tum ek nagin .... jo poorey ghar ko dasne aayi ho ....

[ yeh sab soon ke tina ka gussa ab fat para aur oosney chaakoo se mrs. mittal ko behrehmi se maar diya ]

[ mrs. mittal ko maar diya yeh sab oos video camere mein shoot ho gaya magar kisne woh recording ki yeh abhi tak patanahi aur jab woh shaks video camera leke jaaney laga wahaan se tou galti se oos se paas mein
rakhi ek flower pot gir gayi aur tina samajh gayi ke wahaan koi hai aur woh shaks jaldi se wahaan se bhaagne laga ]

[ jab tina oos awaaz hone waale jagah par pahuchi tou woh shaks jaa chuka thha aur ab mrs. mittal ke khoon ka elzaam aur laash ka woh kya kare woh sochne lag gayi ]

diipendu
March 24, 2009, 07:52 AM
[ jab tina oos awaaz hone waale jagah par pahuchi tou woh shaks jaa chuka thha aur ab mrs. mittal ke khoon ka elzaam aur laash ka woh kya kare woh sochne lag gayi ]

[ udhar party mein pratham aur gauri saath dance kar rahe thhe ]

[ party mein bol halke halke - jhoom barabar jhoom film ka gaana chal raha thha aur maahol romantce hai ]

[ jab pratham ki nazar gauri par parti tab gauri ki nazre neechey ho jaati aur jab gauri pratham ko dheeme se dekhti tab pratham halke se has deta ]

[ pratham ke saath dance kartey waqt gauri ke kaan se ear rings gir jaatey hain ]

[ pratham oosey utha ke gauri ke kaano mein pehna deta hai . party mein har kissi ki nazarein ees khoobsorat jodi par hai aur ear rings pehnaate hi party mein saarey loug taaliyan bajaatey hain ]

diipendu
March 24, 2009, 08:10 AM
[ udhar tina mrs. mittal ki laash ko chhor kar apne kamrey se neechey chal rahey party mein chali aati hai ]

[ Ghar ke ek naukar jab oos kamrey ke paas se guzar raha tha tab oosney kamrey ka darwaaza khula dekha tou oosey bund karne gaya ]

[ woh kamrey tak pahucha hi thha tab oosney mrs. mittal ko zameen par marra paaya aur wahaan se bhaag kar nichey aaya ]

[ oosney yeh baat mr. mittal aur arjun ko bataaya ]

[ jab arjun aur mr. mittal ne soona ke mrs. mittal ko kuch ho gaya hai tab woh dono bahut pareshaan ho gaye aur oopar kamrey ke taraf chaley gaye ]

[ ab mr. mittal aur arjun ke saamney woh aaney wala thha jo kisi badey toofaan se kam nahi jo poorey mittal pariwaar ko hilaa ke rakh deta. ]

[ arjun aur mr. mittal oos kamrey mein pahuch gaye aur darwaaza khola aur dekh ke maano bijli se girr gayi ho jab onhone mrs. mittal ko khoon se latpat dekha ]

diipendu
March 24, 2009, 08:11 AM
[ arjun aur mr. mittal oos kamrey mein pahuch gaye aur darwaaza khola aur dekh ke maano bijli se girr gayi ho jab onhone mrs. mittal ko khoon se latpat dekha ]

[ Mr. mittal yeh sab dekh ke ekdum se shock ho gaye ]

Arjun : mom ! .....

Arjun : [ rotey hue ] dad yeh sab kya ho gaya ..... mom ....
main abhi hospital phone karta hoon ....

[ arjun hospital se ambulance ko aaney ke liye kehta hai ]

[ jahaan oopar kamrey mein mrs. mittal ke saath etna sab kuch ho gaya thaa neeche party mein kissi ko yeh khabar na tha ke aaj oonhone kissi apne ko khoya hai . pratham aur gauri bhi ees baat
se anjaan thhe sivaye tina ke ]

diipendu
March 24, 2009, 08:11 AM
[ ghar ke baahar ambulance aajati hai ]

[ Arjun ghar ke peechey ke darwaaze se mrs. mittal ko ambulance tak ley jaata hai ]

[ mr. mittal aur arjun dono hi ambulance mein mrs. mittal ko leke city hospital pahuchte hain ]

Dr. : oh no , yeh tou police case hai

Mr. mittal : [ gusse se ] arre kyapolice case hai !!! ...... yahaan koi apne zindagi ki aakhri saase ley raha hai aur aap hain ki .....

[ tabhi saamney se ek dr. aata hai ]

Dr. verma : [ pareshaan hotey hue ] arre yeh bhabhi ji ko kya ho gaya ? .....

diipendu
March 24, 2009, 08:25 AM
Dr. : oh no , yeh tou police case hai

Mr. mittal : [ gusse se ] arre kyapolice case hai !!! ...... yahaan koi apne zindagi ki aakhri saase ley raha hai aur aap hain ki .....

[ tabhi saamney se ek dr. aata hai ]

Dr. verma : [ pareshaan hotey hue ] arre yeh bhabhi ji ko kya ho gaya ? .....

Mr. mittal : praveen , achha hua tum mil gaye ... dekho na yeh
dr. kya keh rahe hain ....... arunima ki yeh haalat hai aur ....

[ dr. verma oos pehle vaale dr. ko samjhaatey hue kehte hain ]

Dr. verma : dr. aap chinta matt kariye ..... eenki zimmedaari main
leta hoon ..... aap enhe admit kariye ......

diipendu
March 24, 2009, 08:26 AM
Dr. verma : dr. aap chinta matt kariye ..... eenki zimmedaari main leta hoon ..... aap enhe admit kariye ......

[ kuch deir baad ]

Dr. : mr. mittal .....

Dr. verma : woh bhabhi .....

Mr. mittal : arunima ab theek tou hai na ? .....

Dr. verma : woh bhabhi ab ..... ees duniya mein nahi rahi ............

[ yeh soonkar mr. mittal aur arjun jaise maano poorey tarah se shock ho jaatey hain ]

Mr. mittal : kya .....

diipendu
March 24, 2009, 08:38 AM
Arjun : aisa nahi ho sakta .... papa aisa nahi ho sakta ............. mom humey chhor ke nahi
jaa sakti ....

[ 2 Ghantey baad hospital mein mrs. mittal ki body ko post-martam ke liye bhej diya jaata hai ]

Mr. mittal : Arjun, beta tum yeh baat pratham aur gauri se nahi kahoge ke ab ..... ke ab arunima ees duniya mein nahi hai ..... warna pratham aise haalat mein kya kar lega pata nahi ...... kyunki woh apne maa se bahut pyaar karta thha ....

Arjun : ji dad .... magar dad mom ko kissi ne chaakoo maara thha .....

[ tabhi wahaan police aati hai mr. mittal se poochh taachh ke liye ]

Mr. seth (police) : mr. mittal mujhe aapse kuch sawaal poochne hain .....

Mr. mittal : ji ...

diipendu
March 28, 2009, 11:01 PM
Mr. seth : aakhri baar aapne mrs. mittal ko kab dekha tha ? ....

Mr. mittal : aaj ghar mein party thii .... mujhe kuch theek se yaad
nahi kyunki ghar mein bahut shor sharaaba thha tab maine arunima ko ........ tina ke kamrey mein aakhri baar jaatey hue dekha thha ..............

Mr. seth : oh , i see .... aur mrs. mittal ghaayal haalat mein kahaan thii ? ....

Mr. mittal : tabhi bhi woh tina ke kamrey mein thii ... infact jab mere naukar gopi ne aake mujhe
bataaya ke .... arunima ... tou tab bhi woh wahin thii .....

Mr. seth : tina , hmmm ..... yeh tina kaun hai ? ....

Mr. mittal : ji tina mere bete arjun ki hone waali biwi hai aur aaj ghar mein oonki sagaayi ki party thi ....

diipendu
March 28, 2009, 11:03 PM
Mr. mittal : ji tina mere bete arjun ki hone waali biwi hai aur aaj ghar mein oonki sagaayi ki party thi ....

[ udhar party mein ]

Pratham : yeh papa aur arjun kahaan gaye ? ......

[ tabhi pratham ki nazar tina par pari aur tina pareshaan deekh rahi thi ]

Pratham : yeh tina eetni pareshaan kyun hai ? ....



[ wahaan hospital se mr. mittal aur arjun ghar pahuchte hain ]

[ arjun gusse mein party mein tina ka haath pakarta hai ]

Tina : arjun ! yeh kya tarika hai .....

Arjun : pehle tum mujhe yeh bataao aakhri baar tumne mom se aisa kya kaha ya kiske saath dekha ? ......


[ tina yeh soon ke ghabraa gayi ]

diipendu
March 30, 2009, 06:23 PM
[ tina yeh soon ke ghabraa gayi ]




Tina : nahi nahi arjun ...... main mummyji se nahi mili .....


[ Arjun routey hue ]




Arjun : tina ..... mom ka kissi ne murder kar diya hai ..... mom humaare beech nahi rahi .....



Tina : kya .... [ tina yeh soon ke khush ho jaati hai ke ooski saajish ko pardafaash karne waali ab nahi rahi ]

diipendu
March 30, 2009, 06:24 PM
[ tina mann mein sochtey hue ]

Tina : mera pardafaash karne waali ka tou ab parda ooth gaya hai ..... ab main azaad hoon .....

[ party ke khatam hotey hi mr. mittal saarey gharwaalon ko neechey bulaate hain ]


[ pratham gauri neechey aane hi waale thhe oos se kuch samay pehle mr. mittal wahaan maujood arjun ,tina aur baaki sabse kehte hain ]

Mr. mittal : [ pareshaan hote hue ] maine yahaan tum logon ko ek zaroori .... bahut hi zaroori baat bataane ke liye yahaan bulaaya hai .....

Mr. mittal : anupama ab nahi rahi .... aur eeske baare mein pratham aur gauri ko nahi pata hai ..... aur main chahoonga ke yeh baat unse koi bhi na kahe .....

Arjun : magar papa ... woh ek hi ghar mein hain aur eese shey-her mein hai... tou unhe aaj nahi tou kal pata chalna hi hai .....

diipendu
March 31, 2009, 04:11 PM
Mr. miital : eese baat ko madde nazar rakhte hue maine pratham aur gauri ko singapore bhejne ki tyaari kar di hai ...kal subah hote hi woh dono singapore ke liye rawana ho jaayenge ...

Pratham : kaun jaa raha singapore bauji ? ....


[ sab loug peechey palat kar dekhte hain tou peechey pratham khara hota hai ]


[ sab loug yehi soch rahe thhe ke kahin pratham ko suchai pata tou nahi chal gayi ?? ]




Arjun : ah... bhaiya actually .... singapore aap aur bhabhi jaa rahein hain .....

Mr. mittal : haan beta ... maine socha ke shaadi ke baad se tum aur gauri kahin baahar nahi gaye .... kyun na tum dono ko yeh suprise dey doon ....

diipendu
March 31, 2009, 04:33 PM
Pratham : yeh tou bahut achii baat hai phir main gauri se yeh keh deta hoon .... woh yeh soon ke khush ho jaayegi .... i love you bauji ....

mr. mittal : i love you son ....

[ pratham upar apne kamre mein chala jaata hai ]

[ tabhi mr. seth (acp) aate hain ]

mr. seth : iam sorry to disturb you all magar mujhe aap sabhi ke fingur prints chahiye ....

Mr. mittal : magar ....

mr. seth : agar magar kuch nahi ! .... aap sab yahaan ek side mein khare ho jaaye ....

diipendu
April 2, 2009, 01:49 AM
[ sabka fingure prints liya jaata hai aur ab baari aati hai tanvi ki ]



[ tanvi fingure prints dene mein darr rahi thii magar ghar waale jab ooske ees harkat par shak karne lage tab woh jaldi se fingure prints dey kar wahaan se chali gayi ]


Mr. seth : agar zaroorat pari tou main aap sabko phir se pareshaan zaroor karunga .... thank you ! ...



[ udhar tanvi ]


Tanvi : oh no .... agar mera jurm sabke saamne aagaya tou .... nahi .... mujhe kuch karna hoga ....


[ agle din ]

diipendu
April 2, 2009, 01:50 AM
[ agle din ]





[ Gauri aur pratham airport ke liye ghar se nikal jaate hain udhar ghar mein ]

[ tina office jaati hai aur talaash karti hai tou uske haath woh saare saboot aajate hain jisse se yeh saabit houta hai ke khoon oosne kiya hai ]



[ tina woh Red file leke wahaan se chali jaati hai aur ghar aajati hai aur oos red file ko apne kamre mein chupa deti hai ]


[ Udhar air port mein gauri door khare ek paani puri waale ko dekhti hai tou woh pratham se zidd karti hai ke oose paani puri khaana hai tou pratham ko aakhir maana par jata hai aur woh dono paani puri khaane oos pani puri stall chale jaate hain ]


[ Pratham paani puri nahi khana chahta magar gauri oose zabardasti paani puri khilaati hai aur pratham ko apne haathon se ek ke baad ek khilaati hai aur khud bhi khaati hai ]

[ scene romantic ho jaata hai jab pratham apne se gauri ko pani puri khilaata hai ]




[ paani puri khate khate onki flight miss ho jaati hai aur jab unko pata chalta hai tou woh dono decide karte hain ke ek long drive hokar woh dono ghar aayenge ]

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 06:43 PM
[ Pratham paani puri nahi khana chahta magar gauri oose zabardasti paani puri khilaati hai aur pratham ko apne haathon se ek ke baad ek khilaati hai aur khud bhi khaati hai ]

[ scene romantic ho jaata hai jab pratham apne se gauri ko pani puri khilaata hai ]

[ paani puri khate khate onki flight miss ho jaati hai aur jab unko pata chalta hai tou woh dono decide karte hain ke ek long drive hokar woh dono ghar aayenge ]


[ udhar ghar mein priya (pratham ki choti behen) tina ko kuch chupate hue dekh leti hai tou oose shak ho jaata hai ]





Priya : [ mann mein sochte hue ] yeh tina kya chupa rahi hai ? ... etni ghabrai hue lag rahi hai .....

[ Tabhi tina apne kamre se bahaar aati hai aur priya ko zor se daat ti hai aur oospar jaasoosi ka ilzaam lagaati hai ]

[ tina ke ees bartaav se priya ka shak aur pakka ho jata hai ]

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 06:45 PM
[ tina ke ees bartaav se priya ka shak aur pakka ho jata hai ]

[ shaam ko pratham aur gauri ghar pahuchte hain aur ghar mein saare loug oonko dekh ke hayraan ho jaate hain ]

[ Ghar mein shraadh ka maahol thha aur yeh sab dekh ke pratham aur gauri beychen ho jaate hain ke ghar mein yeh sab kya ho raha hai ]

Mr. mittal : beta pratham , tum dono oopar apne kamre mein jaao ....

Gauri : magar papa , yeh sab ? ....

Mr. mittal : yeh sab kuch nahi .... tum pratham ko leke apne kamre mein jaao ...

Pratham : nahi papa , aap mujhe bata kyun nahi rahe ?.... [ pratham jab saamne aata hai tou saamne ooski maa ka dead body houta hai aur oonke photo par haar chara houta hai ]

[ pratham yeh sab dekh ke ek dum silent ho jaata hai aur dheere dheere apne kadam aage baraate hue ]

Gauri : pratham ...

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 07:13 PM
Pratham : nahi papa , aap mujhe bata kyun nahi rahe ?.... [ pratham jab saamne aata hai tou saamne ooski maa ka dead body houta hai aur oonke photo par haar chara houta hai ]

[ pratham yeh sab dekh ke ek dum silent ho jaata hai aur dheere dheere apne kadam aage baraate hue ]

Gauri : pratham ...

[ pratham yeh sab dekh ke bahut routa hai gauri pratham ko sambhalti hai ]

Pratham : yeh sab kaise hua papa ? .... [ gusse se ] maine aapse poocha yeh sab kaise hua papa !!

Arjun : pratham woh .....

[ arjun pratham ko saari baatein bata ta hai ]

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 07:15 PM
[ 1 day later ]

[ priya tina ke kamre ke saamne se jaa rahi thii tabhi ]

Tina : agar woh file kissi ke haath lagg gayi tou ees se yeh saabit ho jaayega ke ........ aunty ka katal maine hi kiya hai ....

[ yeh soon ke tina poore tarah se shock ho jaati hai jab oose yeh pata chalta hai ke ooski mumma ka kaatil tina hai ]

Priya : main abhi agar kisi ko yeh baat bataoo tou koi yakeen nahi karega ...... mujhe tina ke khilaaf saboot chahiye houga ...... woh file ... woh file jiske baare se tina bol rahi thii ..... ab mujhe tina ke room se oos file ko kissi bhi tarah oos file ko haasil karna houga aur phir acp mr. seth ko woh file dena houga ......

[ tina jab ghar se baahar gayii hue houti hai tab priya chupke se tina ke kamre mein ghoosti hai ]

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 07:19 PM
[ priya saare kamre ki talaashi leti hai aur aakhir mein jab almari ke oopar ke red file ko dekhti hai tab oose utaarti hai ]


[ Priya woh file padti hai tou osmein culprit ke fingure prints tina ke fingure prints se match ho jaate hain ]



[ Priya ghar ke sabhi lougo ko ek jagah bulaati hai tina ke absence mein ]



Mr. mittal : kya baat priya , tumne hum sabko kyun bulaya hai ? .... aisa kya zaroori baat batana hai tumhe ? .....

Priya : papa , mere paas saboot hai ....... mom ka kaatil eese ghar ka ek member hai .......

Mr. mittal : [ gusse se ] yeh tum kya keh rahi ho !!! ..... agar yeh koi mazaak hua tou tumhe sakt se sakt saza milegi .....

Pratham : nahi papa , hume ek baar priya ki baat soon leni chahiye ...... aakhir baat yahaan mumma ki hai ....

Gauri : priya , aisa kya saboot hai tumhare paas ? .....

Priya : yeh file ! .......... [ priya woh red file gauri ko deti hai ] ees file mein oos culprit ka fingure prints humare hi ghar ke ek member se full match houta hai ......

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 07:32 PM
[ gauri oos file ko kholti hai aur dekhti hai tou oosmein likha houta hai ke Tina ke fingure prints aur oos Culprit ke fingure prints 100 % match houte hain aur Tina ne hi mrs. mittal ka khoon kiya hai ]

[ tabhi ACP mr. seth wahaan aate hain file ke mutaabik oos culprit ko arrest karne ]

Priya : aaye acp ji ..... enhe maine bulaya hai aur saari baatein bhi bata diya hain ke khooni koi aur nahi ....
Tina hai !!! ....

[ arjun aur mr. mittal yeh such soon ke chauk jaate hain ke jispar itna bharosa kiya thha oosi ne hi yeh khoon
kiya hai ]

[ pratham poori tarah se gussa jata hai aur tina ko jaan se maarne ke liye revolver ootha leta hai ]

[ acp mr. seth pratham ko kaanoon haath mein na lene ko kehte hain aur aashvasan delate hain ke tina ke aate hi oonhe ek aakhri drama karna houga ]

[ kuch deir beetne ke baad ]

[ tina aati hai aur plan ke hisaab se ghar ke sabhi loug ees aakhri drama ke liye tyaar ho jaate hain ]

[ Tina Acp ko ghar mein dekh ke darr jaati hai aur tabhi sabse apna sympathy paane ke liye jhooth-mooth ka routi hai ]

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 07:35 PM
Tina : [ route hue ] papa , main abhi abhi mandir se aarahi hoon ..... maine bhagwaan se prarthna ki hai ke mummyji ki aatma ko shanti miiley .....

[ pratham ko tina ka natak dekh bahut gussa aata hai par gauri oose rouk leti hai ]

Mr. mittal : haan beta .... [ normal tarah se poochte hue ] tina beta , tumne aisa kyun kiya ? ....

Mr. mittal : kya galti thii anupama ki ? .... kyun chhin liya oose hum sabse ? ......

[ tina ko yeh jaan ke jhatka lagta hai ke ooski chori ab pakri gayi hai ]

[ tina ko ab pata chal chuka hai ke sab jaan chuke hain ke oosi ne mrs. mittal ka khoon kiya hai ]

[ Tina pagalo ke tarah zor zor se hasti hai ]

[ sabko tina ke ees bartaav se ajeeb lagta hai ]

[ tina route hue ]

Tina : maine ...... maine yeh sab sirf ... sirf [ tina pratham ke paas jaati hai ] tumhare liye kiya hai pratham .....

[ Pratham tina ko Zorrr se thappar maarta hai ]

Tina : haan haan !!! maar lo mujhe jeetna maarna hai ...... maine tumse pyaar kiya magar ees gauri ne ! .... ees gauri ne tumhe mujhse chin liya .......

mr. seth : hawaaldaar , arrest her ! ....

[ police tina ko le jaa rahe thhe aur jaatey jaate tina keh rahi thii ]

Tina : i love you pratham .........

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 07:38 PM
[ 2 mahine baad ]



Arjun : ab sab kuch theek ho gaya hai ....

Pratham : haan arjun , papa buisness mein busy hokar mumma ko bhulane ki koshish kar rahe hain ....

[ tabhi priya aayi ]

Priya : magar bhaiya , mujhe ek baat samajh nahi aayi ....

Pratham : woh kya ? ....

Priya : ke gauri bhabhi jab job ke liye aayi thhi tab aapne gauri bhabhi ko hi kyun woh job diya ? .... hmmmm...... kahiin aap gauri bhabhi ko pehle se tou nahi jaante thhe ? .....

[ yeh soon pratham muskurata hai ]

[ tabhi gauri aayi ]

Gauri : haan !! .... tumne sahi socha .....

Priya : kya ?? .... magar kaise ? ......

Gauri : [ khush houte hue ] jaanna chahti ho ? ....

Priya : haan ..

Gauri : tou suno , pratham aur main ek doosre ko college ke dino se jaante hain .....


[ 8 years Ago ]

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 07:41 PM
[ gauri aur pratham ek saath college mein aate hain ]

[ Gauri auto se utarti hai wahiin pratham bhi speed se apni car roukta hai ]

[ Gauri college ke mai gate se andar aane hi waali houti hai ke woh saamne kisi se takra jaati hai ]


Gauri : [ gusse se ] dekh ke nahi chal sakte ! ........

[ woh koi aur nahi balki pratham houta hai jis se gauri takrai thii ]

[ Pratham apna goggles ootarta hai phir gauri ka haath pakar leta hai ]

[ gauri darr jaati hai ]

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 07:47 PM
Gauri : [ gusse se ] dekh ke nahi chal sakte ! ........

[ woh koi aur nahi balki pratham houta hai jis se gauri takrai thii ]

[ Pratham apna goggles ootarta hai phir gauri ka haath pakar leta hai ]

[ gauri darr jaati hai ]

Pratham : aahinda ........ kabhi bhi .... mere raaste mein aane ki koshish matt karna .....

[ etne mein gauri ka chasma neeche geer jata hai magar toot ta nahi ]

[ Gauri routey hue apna chasma uthati hai { Background music mein piano wala emotional gana jo kutumb 2 mein gauri par thha } ]

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 07:50 PM
[ gauri darr jaati hai ]

Pratham : aahinda ........ kabhi bhi .... mere raaste mein aane ki koshish matt karna .....

[ etne mein gauri ka chasma neeche geer jata hai magar toot ta nahi ]

[ Gauri routey hue apna chasma uthati hai ]

[ pratham peechey palat ke dekhta hai gauri ko ]

[ gauri routey hue apna chasma utha rahi thii . tabhi gauri ke aasoo zameen par geerne waale thhe ke pratham oos ek aasoo ko apne haathon par neechey geerne se rouk leta hai ]

[ Pratham gauri ko ooska chasma pehnata hai ]

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 07:51 PM
[ Gauri routey hue apna chasma uthati hai ]

[ pratham peechey palat ke dekhta hai gauri ko ]

[ gauri routey hue apna chasma utha rahi thii . tabhi gauri ke aasoo zameen par geerne waale thhe ke pratham oos ek aasoo ko apne haathon par neechey geerne se rouk leta hai ]

[ Pratham gauri ko ooska chasma pehnata hai ]

Pratham : iam sorry ..... please .... tumne apna naam nahi bataaya ....

Gauri : Gauri ...

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 07:57 PM
[ Pratham gauri ko ooska chasma pehnata hai ]

Pratham : iam sorry ..... please .... tumne apna naam nahi bataaya ....

Gauri : Gauri ...

Pratham : [ halke se boltey hue ] tou ms. gauri .... tum yeh matt samajhna ke main tumhe aise hi jaane doonga ... just wait ... & watch ! ...

[ pratham wahaan se chala jaata hai ]



[ Scenerio : gauri aur pratham opposite direction mein jaate hue ]

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 07:59 PM
[ Scenerio : gauri aur pratham opposite direction mein jaate hue ]

[ gauri class mein pahuchti hai class shuru houta hai ]

[ proffesor blackboard mein notes likha raje thhe wahan pratham gauri ke friend ke saath flirt kar raha thha aur gauri ko yeh sab dekh bahut gussa aaraha thha ]

[ class over houne ke baad gauri class ke bahaar aati hai aur peechey pratham bhi aata hai aur gauri ka raasta roukte hue ooske saamne aata hai ]

Pratham : kyun .... jalan hou rahi hai .....

Gauri : what !! ...... jalan ... huh ... mujhe koi jalan kyun houne lagi .... aur woh bhi tumse ....

[ Pratham gauri ka haath pakarta hai ]

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 08:11 PM
[ proffesor blackboard mein notes likha raje thhe wahan pratham gauri ke friend ke saath flirt kar raha thha aur gauri ko yeh sab dekh bahut gussa aaraha thha ]

[ class over houne ke baad gauri class ke bahaar aati hai aur peechey pratham bhi aata hai aur gauri ka raasta roukte hue ooske saamne aata hai ]

Pratham : kyun .... jalan hou rahi hai .....

Gauri : what !! ...... jalan ... huh ... mujhe koi jalan kyun houne lagi .... aur woh bhi tumse ....

[ Pratham gauri ka haath pakarta hai ]

Gauri : haath choro ....

Pratham : [ attitude ke saath ] pratham ... mere dost mujhe pm bhi kehte hain ....

[ Gauri apne heels waale sandal ko pratham ke payr par zorr se maarti hai ]

Gauri : sorry mr. pm ... magar ees baar nahi .....


[ Scenerio : gauri aur pratham opposite direction mein jaate hue ]

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 08:15 PM
Pratham : [ attitude ke saath ] pratham ... mere dost mujhe pm bhi kehte hain ....

[ Gauri apne heels waale sandal ko pratham ke payr par zorr se maarti hai ]

Gauri : sorry mr. pm ... magar ees baar nahi ..... [ kutumb ke 'hey' waale gaane ke saath ]

[ Scenerio : gauri aur pratham opposite direction mein jaate hue ]

[ pratham gauri ka yeh jagra 7 din tak chal raha thha aur aise mein pratham aur gauri ke dost milke tyeh karte hain ]

[ Pratham ka dost Akshat aur Gauri ki dost neena ]

Akshat : hmmm.... lagta hai ab enki kahaani mein naya twist hume hi lana houga ....

Neena : bilkul sahi , aur eseliye hum eendono ko mila ke hi rahenge .... warna aisa hi chalta raha tou hum apni dosti kho denge .....

Akshat : aur aisa hum houne nahi denge ....

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 08:20 PM
[ pratham gauri ka yeh jagra 7 din tak chal raha thha aur aise mein pratham aur gauri ke dost milke tyeh karte hain ]

[ Pratham ka dost Akshat aur Gauri ki dost neena ]

Akshat : hmmm.... lagta hai ab enki kahaani mein naya twist hume hi lana houga ....

Neena : bilkul sahi , aur eseliye hum eendono ko mila ke hi rahenge .... warna aisa hi chalta raha tou hum apni dosti kho denge .....

Akshat : aur aisa hum houne nahi denge ....

[ akshat pratham ke paas jaata hai ]

[ udhar neena gauri ke paas jaati hai ]

Akshat : yaar pratham , yeh tune theek nahi kiya gauri ke saath ......

[ udhar gauri ]

Gauri : kyun maine aisa kya kiya .... meri koi galti nahi thii ....

Neena : magar oosne sirf mujhse has ke ek do baat keh di tou itni kyun pareshaan ho gayi ...

Gauri : main kyun pareshaan houne lagi .... dekh neena woh pratham mujhe kuch theek nahi lagta oos se tu door reh .....

[ udhar pratham ]

Akshat : tujhe nahi yakeen nahi hai na , nahi na .... [ akshat pratham ko class ke imp. notes deta hai ]

Akshat : yeh dekh .... class ke important notes jo peechle hafte tere se kho gaya thha ... khud gauri ne tere liye banaya thha ..... sorry kehne ke liye ....

[ udhar gauri ]

[ Neena gauri ko chasma deti hai ]

Neena : yeh dekh ... pratham ne khud yeh tere liye liya thha tujhe sorry kehne ke liye .....

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 08:21 PM
[ Agle din college mein ]

[ gauri pratham se milke oose thanx kehne ko bahut hi excited thii wahiin pratham bhi gauri ko thanx kehna chahta thha ]

[ dono mill jaate hain . gauri tabhi pratham ke gift diye hue chasme ko pehenti hai ]

[ dono ek doosre ko eksaath thanx kehte hain aur oon dono mein dosti ho jaati hai ]

[ pratham gauri ke dosti se akshat aur neena bhi haath mila lete hain ]

[ Scenerio: eske baad gauri wahan se jaane hi waali thii ke gauri ka payr fissal jata hai aur pratham oose geerne se bacha leta hai aur scene poora romantic ho jata hai ]

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diipendu
April 6, 2009, 08:22 PM
Akshat : hey pratham kal valentine day hai .... magar pratham tune kisey apna valentin banane ka socha hai ??....

Pratham : woh jo bhi hai .... main oose kal propose karne wala hoon ....



[ yeh soon ke gauri ko achha nahi laga aur woh wahaan se chali jaati hai ]

Neena : gauri , tujhe bura laga ? ...

Gauri : mujhe kyun bura lagega ..... woh propose kare jise karna hai ...... mujhe es se kya ...

Neena : waise akshat ne mujhe bataya hai .... ke pratham ka favourate colour red hai .... aur valentine party kal college mein shaam 6 baje hai ....

Gauri : tum yeh sab mujhe kyun bata rahii ho .....

Neena : kyunki kal tumhe party mein aana hai ....

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 08:30 PM
[ Agle din ]


[ Valentine ki party shuru houti hai ]




[ gauri party mein tyaar houke aati hai ]


[ party mein maujood sab ki nazre gauri ki khoobsorti par houti hai ]



Pratham`s friend : woh dekh pratham ! .....

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 08:44 PM
[ party mein maujood sab ki nazre gauri ki khoobsorti par houti hai ]


Pratham`s friend : woh dekh pratham ! .....

Pratham : arre kya hai ......

Pratham`s friend : gauri .......


[ pratham peechey palat ke dekhta hai tou gauri ko dekh oos pe fidaa hou jaata hai ]

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 08:45 PM
[ party mein maujood sab ki nazre gauri ki khoobsorti par houti hai ]

Pratham`s friend : woh dekh pratham ! .....

Pratham : arre kya hai ......

Pratham`s friend : gauri .......

[ pratham peechey palat ke dekhta hai tou gauri ko dekh oos pe fidaa hou jaata hai ]

[ Background music mein - hayye rabba , tu hi mera pyaar ..... tu hi meri jaan ....... tu hi ab meri manzil ....... haye rabba .... teri een adaao pe main qurbaan .... main qurbaan .... ]

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 08:47 PM
[ Agle din ]

[ Valentine ki party shuru houti hai ]

[ gauri party mein tyaar houke aati hai ]

[ party mein maujood sab ki nazre gauri ki khoobsorti par houti hai ]

Pratham`s friend : woh dekh pratham ! .....

Pratham : arre kya hai ......

Pratham`s friend : gauri .......

[ pratham peechey palat ke dekhta hai tou gauri ko dekh oos pe fidaa hou jaata hai ]

[ Background music mein - hayye rabba , tu hi mera pyaar ..... tu hi meri jaan ....... tu hi ab meri manzil ....... haye rabba .... teri een adaao pe main qurbaan .... main qurbaan .... ]

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 09:01 PM
[ Background music mein - hayye rabba , tu hi mera pyaar ..... tu hi meri jaan ....... tu hi ab meri manzil ....... haye rabba .... teri een adaao pe main qurbaan .... main qurbaan .... ]

[ Pratham gauri ke saamne jhuk jata hai ]

Pratham : gauri , will you be my valentine .......

[ Pratham haath badata hai ]

[ gauri muskurate hue apna haath pratham ke haathon mein deti hai aur haan kehti hai ]

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 09:28 PM
Pratham : gauri , will you be my valentine .......

[ Pratham haath badata hai ]

[ gauri muskurate hue apna haath pratham ke haathon mein deti hai aur haan kehti hai ]

[ pratham gauri aankhon mein teri ajab si ajab si adayein hain - om shanti om ke music par dance karte hain ]
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diipendu
April 6, 2009, 09:31 PM
[ Present day ]

Gauri : tou yeh thii humaari kahaani .......

Priya : wow , bhabhi yeh kahaani tou bahut intresting thi.....

Pratham : sabse zyada intresting kahani tou Kayaamat ke Dhruv aur Abhirupa ki hai ..... kya pariwaar ke bandhano ko tor ke abhirupa ko kabhi dhruv ka pyaar ka hawa choo payega ? ......

Gauri : yeh tou dekhne par hi pata chalega ...... Kayaamat

Pratham & Gauri - i hope aap sabko yeh kahaani pasand aayi hougi ......

diipendu
April 6, 2009, 09:36 PM
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