Noorr

[diipendu]

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Story is about ambitions , dreams love & Sacrifice . A small town ambitious girl Noorr is talented classical singer and wants to fulfill her & her mother`s dream by becoming a great singer . but she had to face with many challenges & difficulties .

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Special Thanks to - Aanchal, Gayathri, Tanu di & Maria

Concept - diipendu dutta

Produced & titled by - diipendu dutta

Production group - S-Creations

Pictures by - S-Creations motion pictures

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[ Subah Hoti hai ]

[ Subah suraj ke pehle kiran ke saath saath ek suriili si
madhur sangeet koi gaa rahi hai ]

[ Garima Noor ki saheli noor ke ghar aati hai aur tabhi
oosey bagiche se ek madhur sangeet sunaayi deti hai . ]


Garima : [ khush hote hue] itni achhi aawaz tou sirf
noor ki hi ho sakti hai .....


[ Tabhi wahaan noor ki maa ( aarti )aati hai ]


Aarti : [ khush hote hue ] bilkul sahi kaha beta tumne ....

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Garima : [ khush hote hue] itni achhi aawaz tou sirf
noor ki hi ho sakti hai .....


[ Tabhi wahaan noor ki maa ( aarti )aati hai ]


Aarti : [ khush hote hue ] bilkul sahi kaha beta tumne ....

Garima : aunty , Noor ke eese kala ko ek nayi roshni mill
gayi hai ....... haan aunty yeh raha form .....

Aarti : Form ?.....

Garima : [ khush hote hue ] haan aunty ! ek talent hunt
ho raha hai channel [ v ] ka , yeh form oosi ka hai ....... bas inhe fill up karna hai aur mumbai post kar dena hai aur aap dekhiye ga Noor ki ees
kala ko har koi saraahey ga ......

[ Noor ki maa aarti bahut khush ho jaati hai yeh khabar
soon kaar tabhi Noor aati hai ]

[ Gauri Noor ke kirdaar mein special entry ke saath ]

Noor : arre .... Garima !!! [ khush hote hue ] itne subah ,
kaho kaise ho ?

Garima : main theek hoon aur tumhe abhi sabse pehle
een forms ko fillup karna hoga...... aunty samjhaaye na !........

Aarti : haan beta ....

[diipendu]

Noor : arre .... Garima !!! [ khush hote hue ] itne subah ,
kaho kaise ho ?

Garima : main theek hoon aur tumhe abhi sabse pehle
een forms ko fillup karna hoga...... aunty samjhaaye na !........

Aarti : haan beta ....

[ Noor ko jab pata chalta hai ke ek talent hunt ho raha hai tou woh khush ho jaati hai aur een forms ko fillup kar deti hai . Forms ke saath saath noor ko apne awaaz ka ek gaana bhi ek tape mein record karke dena hoga eeseliye noor uss tape ke bhi oosi form ke saath attached kar deti hai ]

Garima : aur haan , ees form ko tumhe kal tak post karna hoga ....

Noor : theek hai ! aur thanx garima .....:)

Garima : dosti mein no thanx ! ....:)

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[ 1 mahine baad ]

[ Noor ko audition round mein entry mill gayyi hai aur ab woh mumbai jaane ke liye tyaar hai ]

Noor : garima , mujhse vaada kar ke mere mumbai jaate hi tu mom ka dhyaan rakhegi .... aur unhe waqt se davaaiyan degi .... promise ? ...

Garima : promise .....

Noor`s mom : [ routey hue ] apna dhyaan rakhna ......

Noor : mom , aap rou tou aise rahi ho jaise meri doli jaa rahi hai ..... aap fikar matt karna main apna dhyaan rakh loongi .....

Noor`s mom : maine nirmala se keh diya hai ke mumbai pahuchte hi woh tujhe receive kar le ..... woh meri bachpan ki saheli hai .....

Noor : theek hai ......

[ noor station ke liye rawana hou jaati hai ]

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[ noor station ke liye rawana hou jaati hai ]

Nirmala : [ gusse se ]arre yeh ladka abhi tak utha ya nahi !! ..... wahaan noor station pe wait kar rahi hougi .....

[ Hiten pratham oberoi ke special appereance ke saath ]




Pratham : oh no ! ..... noorr ko pickup karne station jaana thha ...



[ pratham tyaar houta hai aur jaldi se noorr ko lene station jata hai ]

[ Noor mumbai pahuch jaati hai ]

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[ Noor mumbai pahuch jaati hai ]

[ Noor train se utar jaati hai aur intezaar kar rahi houti hai magar bahut deir houne ke wajah se woh nirmala ko phone karti hai ]

[ peechey pratham station ajata hai aur noor ka intezar karta hai tabhi aagey khari ladki ki phone pe baatein soon leta hai aur pata chal jata hai ke yehi noor hai ]

Pratham : excuse me .....

Pratham : noor ?...

Noor : haan ..... magar aap ? ......

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Pratham : [ haath baratey hue ] hii ! iam pratham ..... pratham oberoi ......

Pratham : tumhari nirmala aunty ka beta ......

Noor : thank god , main toh darr gayii thii ke yahaan se main nirmala masi ke ghar tak kaise jaaongi ......

[ pratham aur noor ghar pahuchte hain ]


[ nirmala masi darwaza kholti hai ]




Nirmala : [ khush houtey hue ] arre beti noor , tum kitni badi hou gayii ho ..... yakeen nahi ata ke kal ki itni ****ki aaj itni badii singer hou gayii hai ........

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Noor : nahi masi aise baat nahi hai ...... singer tou main ees audition mein paas houne ke baad banoongi ....

[ pratham eenki baaton se bored houtey hue keh utha ]

Pratham : ma , kya ab hum andar aajaye ?? ........

Nirmala : arre ... aao aao .....

Nirmala : noor , beta tum jaake aaram karo kal tumhara audition hai .....

Noor : je masi ...... http://illiweb.com/fa/i/smiles/icon_smile.gif

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[ noor apne kamre mein jaaney lagti hai tabhi uska dupatta flowerpot mein fass jata hai tou woh nikaalne ki koshish karti hai tabhi pratham ata hai aur dupatta flower pot se nikaal deta hai ]

Noor : thanx .....

Pratham : arre , thanx kyun ?? ..... agar tumhare wajah se yeh pot toot jata tou ?? ......

Noor : [ gusse se ] mujhe tumhari soorat bilkul pasand nahi ! ......

Pratham : haan kyunki tum bandariya jo ho ! .... [ zor zor se hasta hai ] http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/916672.gif

Noor : tou tum bhi muh chara peepa ho ! .... huh ! :mad: .... [ apne kamre mein jaatey hue ]


Pratham : huh ! ... [ apne kamre mein jaatey hue ]

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[ Agle din ]

[ Pratham noor ko channel v ke audition office tak chorr ne ata hai ]

Pratham : noor , agar mujhe aane mein late hou jaaye tou tum yaheen rukna .....

Noor : theek hai , magar jaldi aana ......

Pratham : kyun agar nahi aya tou tumhe koi utha ke zoo mein daal dega ... :p


[ noor gussa hou jaati hai ] :mad:




[ pratham jaldi se wahaan se chala jata hai ]


Noor : mooh chara peepa .......


[ Noor audition ka paper apne purse mein khojti hai magar uska audition ke form ke paper nahi milte ]

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[ Noor audition ka paper apne purse mein khojti hai magar uska audition ke form ke paper nahi milte ]

[ Noor pratham ko phone karti hai aur oosey ghar se audition ke form laane ko kehti hai ]


[ 1 ghantey beet jaatey hain aur audition ka waqt bahut kam hai aur pratham abhi tak nahi aya ]

[ Noor pareshaan hou jaati hai ]



[ 15 minute baad pratham ajata hai ]



[ noor woh papers leke counter par jaati hai magar pata chalta hai ke auditions poore hou gayen hain ]


[ noor ko ab yeh samajh mein nahi aata ke woh kya kare kaise woh yeh news maa ko dey ]


Pratham : noor iam sorry ...

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Pratham : noor iam sorry ...

Noor : [ gusse se ] rehne do ! ...... yeh sab tumhare liye ek mazaak houga magar ...... magar mere liye yeh mere sapne thhe ......

Pratham : noor main jaanta hoon ke mujhse bahut bari galti hui hai ...... magar .....

Noor : mujhe kuch nahi sunna pratham .... bas ! bahut hua .......

[ noor aur pratham ghar pahuchte hain ]

[ Yeh baat jab nirmala masi ko pata chala tab woh pratham pe bahut gussa hui ]

Noor : [ routey hue ] nahi aunty ab kuch nahi hou sakta ........

Pratham : nahi noor aise himmat haarne se kuch nahi milega ......... ab tumhe ek famous singer banana meri zimmedari .....

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Noor : [ routey hue ] nahi aunty ab kuch nahi hou sakta ........ http://illiweb.com/fa/i/smiles/icon_sad.gif

Pratham : nahi noor aise himmat haarne se kuch nahi milega ......... ab tumhe ek famous singer banana meri zimmedari .....

[ tabhi nirmala masi noor se kehti hai ]

Nirmala : noor , beta main kuch dino ke liye tumhari maa ke paas jaa rahi hoon ....... beech beech mein phone karte rehna .....

Noor : [ galey lagate hue ] je masi .....


[ Noor kamre mein beith apne maa ke photo ko dekh kar rou rahi thii tabhi pratham wahaan ata hai ]


Pratham : noor ..... kya main andar aa sakta hoon ? .....

[diipendu]

Noorr



Aakhein sapne dekhti hai ,
een aankhon mein bhi ek khwaab hai .....

Shuruaat ees dil ki ..... oon ummedon tak .....

Een aankhon ki ...... noor hoon main .... noor hoon main .....


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Pratham : noor , main jaanta hoon ke aaj jo hua ...... woh nahi houna chahiye thha ..... magar zindagi mein mouke tou bahut baar aate hain ..... aur ab tumhara sapna .... mera sapna hai .....

Pratham : eseliye kal se hum oon sapno ke liye ..... oon sapno ko such karne ki koshish mein joot jaayenge .....

Pratham : tum mera saath dougi na ?? .........

[ pratham noor ke taraf apna haath aagey baraata hai ]

[ noor apna haath aagey karti hai aur sab kuch theek hou jaata hai ]

[ Agle din ]

[ Noor aur Pratham nirmala masi ko station chorr dete hain ]

Nirmala : apna dhyaan rakhna ....

Noor : je masi ....

[diipendu]

[ Masi ke jaane ke baad noor aur pratham station se seedha sheyher ke jaane-maane music director se milne jaatey hain ]

Music director : sorry magar maine naye singers ko break dena chhor diya hai .....

[ noor aur pratham ke bahut try karne par bhi koi result nahi nikalta end mein ek ummed ki kiran nazar aati hai ]


[ Pratham ka dost oose idea deta hai ke kyun na pehle noor pehle kisi achhe se studio mein jaake apne gaaney ka Recording karva le ]

[ Agle din noor aur pratham eesi ummed ke ek kiran ko haqeeqat banaane ke liye nikal parte hain ]

[ dono studio pahuchte hain aur recording hou jaati hai . Noor ke gaane ko soon studio ka owner noor aur pratham se kehta hai ke woh ek achhe music composer aur saath ek music director ko bahut achhe se jaanta hai . kyun na yeh cd woh oos director (shaanu) ko sunaaye ]

[ Pratham aur noor aisa hi karte hain aur shaanu jab woh gaana soonta tab woh noor ko break dene ke liye tyaar hou jata hai aur agle din noor ko aaney kehta hai ]

[ Aaj noor ki mehnat rang laane waali thii . Noor sucessfully apne zindagi ka woh pehla break sign karti hai .]


[ udhar pratham apne office mein jaake apna resignation letter apne boss ko deta hai ]

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[ pratham ke resignation se uska boss aur bahut achha dost Vicky oosey samjhata hai ]

Pratham : nahi vicky , main yeh job eseliye chhorr raha hoon kyunki ..... noor ko singer se superstar banane ka zimma maine liya hai .....

Vicky : magar pratham , are you sure ?? ........

Pratham : haan vicky ......

[ udhar noor ka recording hou jata hai ]

[ wahaan maujood sab noor ko congrats karte hain ]

[ Pratham wahaan aata hai ]

[diipendu]

[ wahaan maujood sab noor ko congrats karte hain ]

[ Pratham wahaan aata hai ]


Pratham : noor , main bahut aaj main bahut khush hoon .......

Noor : main bhi pratham ....:)

[ noor pratham ko hugh deti hai ]

Pratham : tum dekhna , aage bhi sab theek hoga......

Noor : haan pratham......

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[ Mumbai ke bahut barey business tycoons mein se Dherendra Maan (Amitabh bachhan) hain aur unki laadli aur ghamandi beti palak (Kareena kapoor) .]




Palak : mera juice kahaan hai ?.....

Servant : je mam, woh.....

Palak : now , you are ..... fired !!!!

Palak : palak ko koi bhi bahaana pasand nahi hai ! ......:mad:

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Palak : palak ko koi bhi bahaana pasand nahi hai ! ......


[ palak tv on karti hai tou news mein noor ke singing ki bahut taarife dekhayi jaati hai aur noor apne success ka saara credit uski ma aur pratham ko deti hai ]

[ pratham stage pe aata hai aur noor ko congrats karta hai ]


[ palak tv mein noor ke saath saath pratham ko dekhti hai ]

Palak : pratham ...... hmm intresting .....

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[ pratham stage pe aata hai aur noor ko congrats karta hai ]

[ palak tv mein noor ke saath saath pratham ko dekhti hai ]

Palak : pratham ...... hmm intresting .....

[ palak tyaar houke neeche jaati hai ]

Dhirendra : [ Amitabh bachhan as dhrirendra maan ] goodmorning princess .....

[diipendu]

Dhirendra : [ Amitabh bachhan as dhrirendra maan ] goodmorning princess .....

Palak : good morning papa !!.....

Dhirendra : kya baat hai ?? aaj humaari princess itni khush hai ??.....

Palak : haan papa , maine soch liya hai mujhe apna carieer kahaan se shuru karna hai .....

Dhirendra : tou bataao , kya socha hai ? .....

[diipendu]

Palak : [ khush houtey hue ] singer ! ..... yes papa, palak singer banna chahti hai..... aur palak ne oos ensaan ko dhund bhi liya hai jo oosey india ka sensation banayega ......

Dhirendra : tumne jis cheez par haath rakha hai woh tumhe mila hai..... tou baatao.... kaun hai woh ?.....

Palak : Pratham.....

[diipendu]

Palak : Pratham.....

[ udhar ghar pe pratham ko phone aata hai pratham phone uthata hai aur pratham ko kal subah 10 baje aaney ko kaha jaata hai ]

[ Agle din ]

Pratham : may i come in sir....

[ saamne dhirendra maan houta hai ]

Dhirendra : come in mr.oberoi ......

[diipendu]

[ pratham soch mein par jaata hai ke enhe etna kaise pata chala ? ]


Dhirendra : main chahta hoon ke tum meri beti palak ke manager ban jaao aur usey har tarah se woh sucess dilaao jis se woh ek mashoor singer .... na ... ek bahut bari rockstar bann ke india ka dil jeet sake.....


[ pratham confuse houte hue bola ]


Pratham : magar sir main ?? .....

Dhirendra : haan tum , tumhe agar paison ki zaroorat hou tou main paani ki tarah paise baha doonga magar .... magar ek cheez ka dhyaan rakhna ...... kabhi bhi ooske kisi bhi baat ke khilaaf mat jaana ......

[ pratham mann mein sochta hai jis beti ka baap sirf paison ki boli bolta hou tou uski beti bhala kaise sidhi hou sakti hai ]

[ pratham maan`s ke ghar pahuchta hai ]


[ pratham ghar mein chaaron or ghar ko dekh raha thha tabhi upar se ek awaaz aayi "tou tum ho pratham..."]

[diipendu]

[ pratham ghar mein chaaron or ghar ko dekh raha thha tabhi upar se ek awaaz aayi "tou tum ho pratham..."]

[ woh palak houti hai ]

Pratham : aap ? ....

Palak : palak ko apna intro dene ki koi zaroorat nahi.....

[ pratham palak ko apni strategy batata hai ]

Palak : intresting ! ..... palak ko yeh plan bahut pasand aaya..... waise tumhe manna parega.... itni jaldi startegy bana li.... aaj se tum mere manager ho .....

Palak : palak ke manager ho tou eseliye.... aaj se tumhe ek cabin aur ek bmw di jaati hai.... aur monthly salary tumhe 40,000 rupaye di jaayegi.....

Pratham : done !

[ pratham ghar pahuchta hai aur noor ko yeh sab batata hai ]

[diipendu]

[ pratham ghar pahuchta hai aur noor ko yeh sab batata hai ]

Pratham : ek baar zara socho.... palak ke contacts baad mein chalke humaare kitne kaam aasakte hain.....

Noor : pratham , mujhe yeh theek nahi lag raha hai......

[ noor wahaan se yeh keh ke chali jaati hai ]

[ pratham agle din se apne naye naukri mein lag jaata hai ]


[ palak oosey bada cabin , ek expensive cell phone deti hai ]


[ ek din palak ko pata chalta hai ke music industry mein ek nayi awaaz ne entry li hai "Noor". jab palak ko yeh pata chala ke noor aur pratham ek saath rehte hain aur bahut achhe dost hain tab palak ko pratham pe bahut gussa aajata hai. woh pratham ke cabin mein jaati hai.]

Palak : pratham !! ........

Pratham : palak , kya hua tum itni gusse mein??......

Palak : suna hai noor tumhaari bahut achii dost hai..... aur uske pehle album ke success ke peechey tum ho...... kya yeh such hai ?? ......

Pratham : haan , tou kya ? .....

Palak : pratham , tum samajh nahi rahey ho...... noor abhi se mujhe takkar dey rahi hai...... aur aagey chalke yehi mere liye bahut problems khari kar sakti hai......

Palak : doosre shabdo mein kaha jaaye tou...... noor meri competitor hai..... mere raaste ka sabse bada kaata !......

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Palak : doosre shabdo mein kaha jaaye tou...... noor meri competitor hai..... mere raaste ka sabse bada kaata !......

Palak : ab decide tumhe karna hai..... tum sabse zyada priority kise douge?..... ambitions ya.... dosti......

Pratham : nahi.... main noor ke saath aisa nahi kar sakta.....

[ pratham ke een baaton se palak ko ab aur gussa ajata hai ]

Palak : kyun nahi kar sakte..... pyaar karte ho noor se ? .......

[diipendu]

Palak : kyun nahi kar sakte..... pyaar karte ho noor se ? .......

[ palak ke een baaton se pratham kuch bol nahi pata ]

Palak : jawaab kyun nahi dete ! kaho na ....

Pratham : haan haan haan !!!!! ....... main noor se pyaar karta hoon.... aur kisi bhi haal mein main oosey dhoka nahi dey sakta .......

[ yeh kehke pratham wahaan se chala jaata hai magar pratham ka yeh jawaab palak ko ek thappar jaisa laga ]

Palak : jis pyaar pe tumhe itna guroor hai..... main oos pyaar ko hi khatam kar doongi !!! .......

[diipendu]

[ palak cabin ke bahaar jaati hai aur ]

Palak : pratham ruko !......


[ pratham peechey murr ke palak ko dekhta hai ]

Palak : pratham , maine tumse gusse mein aake jo bhi kaha.... woh meri galti thii.....

Palak : kya tum apni ees dost ko maaf nahi karoge ?? ......

Pratham : dosti mein maafi ke liye koi jagah nahi houti ......

[ pratham palak ko maaf kar deta hai ]

[ udhar ghar pe noor ko phone aata hai ]

Noor : hello....

[diipendu]

Noor : hello....

unknown Person : hello , je mujhe aapko yeh bataane ke liye kaha gaya hai ke aapko kal subah dus baje khandelwaal music company mein aake milna houga.....

Noor : magar aap bol kaun rahe hain ? .....

[ tabhi woh phone rakh deta hai ]

Noor : hello ? ....

Noor : kaun hou sakta hai yeh ?..... aur khandelwal music company ne mujhe bulaya hai ? ..... kahin unlougon ne mera gaana sunkar mujhe break dene ki..... pratham yeh soon ke bahut khush houga ! .....

[ pratham aata hai ]

[ Noor pratham ko goodnews dene jaati hai ]

Noor : [ khush houtey hue ] pratham , mujhe tumhe ek bahut bari goodnews....


[ pratham noor ko dekh palak ki oon baaton ko yaad karta hai " palak : tumhe noor se singing chorr dene ko kehna houga ! " ]




Pratham : dekho noor , main bahut thak gaya hoon..... please hum baad mein baat kare ? ......

[ pratham ke aise behaviour se noor ko bura lag jata hai ]



[ Agle din ]



[ noor khandelwaal ke office mein jaane ke liye ghar se nikalti hai ]

[ noor khandelwaal`s ke office pahuchti hai ]

Noor : may i come in sir ? .....

[ tabhi ek awaaz aati hai "come in ms.noor..." ]

[diipendu]

[ mumbai ke rich aur famous music company `khandelwaal companies ke owner - karan khandelwaal(rajeev khandelwaal)' ]




[ Karan noor ke saamne contract papers pehle se rakhwa deta hai ]

Karan : papers aapke saamne hain aur aapke paas sochne ke liye sirf dus minute hain..... eske baad een papers par sign karne ke baad aap khandelwaal company ki member ban jaayengi.....

[ noor ko samajh mein nahi aata hai ke woh ees agreement par sign kare ya nahi kyuni aaj uske paas ooska sabse achha dost pratham saath nahi thha ]


[ phir ek pal noor ko samajh men aagaya ke ees agreement ko sign karte hi ooske aur uski ma ke sapne poore ho jaayenge aur noor ka yeh sapna poora ho jaayega ]



Karan : soch lijiye..... ees paper par sign karte hi aapki awaaz ko roshni mill jaayegi......

[ noor papers par sign karne haath aagey barati hai ]


[ tabhi noor apne haathon ko roukti hai ]


Noor : magar , ees se aapko kya faayada houga ? ......

Karan : bahut suna hai aapke baare mein..... aapki awaaz mein jo jaadoo hai.... woh kisi aur mein nahi..... aur mujhe sirf wahi loug pasand hain jo lagan aur mehnat se aagey barne mein belive rakhte hou.....


[ noor ko yeh faisla sahi lagta hai aur woh oon papers par sign kar deti hai ]

[diipendu]

[ noor ko yeh faisla sahi lagta hai aur woh oon papers par sign kar deti hai ]

[ noor pratham ko yeh baat bataati hai ]




[ noor ko naya contract mila magar pratham khush nahi hai ]




Pratham : maine tumse vaada kiya thha noor.... kya tumhe ab mujh par bharosa bhi nahi hai.......

Noor : aisi baat nahi hai pratham.... mujhe yeh theek

Pratham : [ chilaate hue ] kya theek laga !!.... mujhe nahi pata magar mujhe aisa lag raha hai ke tum badal gayi ho.... tum pehle jaise noor nahi rahi....

Noor : badal tou tum gaye ho pratham..... shaayad eeska sirf ek hi naam hai... palak....

Pratham : just shut up !!..... palak ka eesmein koi dosh nahi hai......

Noor : keh do pratham..... kyu tumhe palak se itni humdardi hai ?......

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Pratham : agar yehi sawaal main karu tou ?...... aakhir achanak se tumhe yeh naya shaks jisne tumhe itna bara opurtunity diya hai..... oos se itni humdardi ?....

Noor : tumhari yeh ek galat-fehmi hai pratham...... [ yeh kehke noor wahaan se route hue chali jaati hai ]

[ noor ke jaate hi ]

Pratham : iam sorry noor..... magar mujhe jaan-bhuj ke tumhara dil torna hoga..... jis se ki main tumhare liye ek buri yaad ke siva aur kuch na reh jaaoon..........

[ kuch deir baad noor apne kamre se baahar aati hai ]

[ noor ke haath mein bag hai. ]

Noor : pratham main ghar chorr ke jaa rahi hoon..... mujhe yeh afsos rahega ke maine aise ensaan se pyaar kiya thha jise apne pyaar pe yakeen nahi.....

[ noor apne aasoo pochti hue ]

Noor : alvida pratham......

[ noor ke jaate hi pratham noor ko roukne ke liye apne haath aage barata hai magar tabhi woh ruk jaata hai. ]

[diipendu]

[ noor ke jaate hi pratham noor ko roukne ke liye apne haath aage barata hai magar tabhi woh ruk jaata hai. ]

[ noor ek soon-saan raaste se jaatey hue pratham aur apne oon saare beetey lamho ko yaad karti hue routi hue chalti jaati hai ]




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Sad theme - Tu tu hai wahi dil ne jise apna kaha tu hai jahaan main hon wahaan ab tou jeena tere bin hai sazaa...... hou mil jaaye jis tarah.... do lamhe jis tarah... fir hou na judaa ab yeh vaada raha.....
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[ Tabhi ek gaari wahaan se houte hue jaati hai ]

[ woh car aagey jaa ke ruk kar fir waapas peechey aata hai noor ke taraf ]

[ car ka mirror khulta hai aur woh chehra karan hai ]


Karan : noor..... tum yahaan ees waqt aise raaste pe kya kar rahi ho?..... aur yeh bag ?.......



[ noor apne aasu pouchti hai ]

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[diipendu]

[ noor apne aasu pouchti hai ]


Noor : woh....


[ Karan samajh jaata hai ke noor aur pratham ka jhagra hou gaya hai ]

Karan : koi baat nahi... company ke taraf se tumhe jo flat diya gaya hai tum wahaan abhi se reh sakti ho..... magar ek shart par...

Noor : shart ?....

Karan : pehle ek chota smile ?....

Noor : [ khush houte hue ] thanx....


[ karan noor ko ooska naya Flat dikhata hai ]

[diipendu]

[ karan noor ko ooska naya Flat dikhata hai ]


Karan : yeh rahi tumhari flat ki chaabi......


[ noor ke mann mein abhi bhi pratham ki woh baatein ghoom rahi thii ]



Karan : hello ?.... kya hua ?....

Noor : kuch nahi.....

Karan : yeh lo chaabi and goodnight.....

Noor : thanx....



[ udhar palak ]



Palak : na jaane kyun , aajkal sirf main tumhare baare mein sochne lagi hoon pratham..... aankhein band karti hoon tou tum nazar aate ho...... aankhein kholti hoon tou yeh nazre tumhe dhoondti hai......

Palak : yeh mujhe kya ho gaya hai ?.... kahin mujhe pratham se........ pyaar tou nahi hou gaya hai ?.........



Palak : ( khush houte hue )haan haan !!! mujhe pratham se pyaar hou gaya hai..... oh my god ! i cant belive that ke mujhe bhi pyaar hou sakta hai..... I love you pratham !..............




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[diipendu]

Palak : ( khush houte hue )haan haan !!! mujhe pratham se pyaar hou
gaya hai..... oh my god ! i cant belive that ke mujhe bhi pyaar hou sakta hai..... I love you pratham !..............



[ udhar karan car drive karte hue baar baar noor ke baare mein soch raha thha ]

[ uske aankhon ke saamne baar baar sirf noor ka chehra saamne aaraha thha ]



Karan : ( mann mein sochte hue ) yeh mujhe achaanak se kya ho gaya hai ?........ noor ke saamne aate hi yeh mujhe kya hou jaata hai....... kyun hamesha noor ka saath itna achha lagta hai ?........ kahin mujhe noor se pyaar ?..... http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/505855.gif



[ udhar noor ]


[ noor pratham ke baare mein sochte hue aankhein band kar leti hai ]


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Noor aur pratham : Jaanam dekh lo meet gayi dooriyan..... main yahaan... hoon yahaan... hoon yahaan.... hoon yahaan... ...... ..... ........... ........ .......

Jaanam dekh lo meet gayi dooriyan..... main yahaan... hoon yahaan... hoon yahaan.... hoon yahaan. kaise sarhaden kaise majbooriyan.... main yahan hoon yaahan hoon yahaan hoon yahaan..... mujhko tum awaaz dougi main tumhare paas hoon.... mujhko bhulaa na sakogi main woh andaaz hoon..... tum jahaan dekhogi hoon main wahaan main wahaan main wahaan hoon wahaan.........
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[ Agle din ]




[ office mein noor karan ka intezaar kar rahi hai wahaan karan noor ke liye achhe flowers leta hai aur ek diamond ring bhi.] http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/505855.gif



[ karan office pahuchta hai ]



[ noor peechey karan ko dekhti hai. karan aagey badta hai aur jhuk jaata hai aur noor se poochta hai ]

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Karan : noor , will you marry me ?.........









[ noor yeh dekh ke hayraan hou jaati hai ]




[ noor ko samajh mein nahi aata ke woh kya kahe. noor soch mein padd jaati hai ke kya jawaab dey woh karan ko? Haan, ya na??? ]

[diipendu]

[ noor ko samajh mein nahi aata ke woh kya kahe. noor asmanjas mein par jaati hai ]


Noor : iam sorry karan , main tumse shaadi nahi kar sakti......



[ noor ke yeh jawaab karan ke baney hue sapno ko torne ke liye kaafi thhe ]




Karan : magar kyun noor ?........



[ noor chup rehti hai ]


Karan : jawaab do noor !.......



[ noor karan ko apne aur apni maa ke sapne ko lekar mumbai mein aaney ki saari kahaani bataati hai aur apne aur pratham ke beech par gaye ees daraar ko bataati hai ]




[ karan yeh soon ke tyeh kar leta hai ke ab woh noor ko har haal mein poori tarah se support karega. Noor ko uski manzil tak pahuchayega. ]



Karan : yeh mera vaada raha noor.... magar sirf ek shart par..... main jaisa kahoonga tumhe bilkul waisa karna houga.......

Noor : matlab ?....

Karan : tumhe palak se badla lena houga.... ooska ghamand torna houga..... tumhare aur pratham ke beech ki daraar yeh..... palak hai.......

Noor : mujhe manzoor hai......

Karan : aajse tum noor ke naam se nahi balki " Gauri " ke naam se jaani jaogi..............

Karan : aur maksad sirf ek !........ palak ko har haal mein haraana......

Karan : noor , tumhe............. mujhse shaadi karni hougi.........



[ yeh soon ke noor shock ho jaati hai ]



Noor : kya ??......

[diipendu]

Noor : kya ??......

Karan : haan noor , tumhe ek nayi pehchaan banani hougi..... apne sapno ke liye , apni ma ke liye ?......

Noor : main tyaar hoon......


[ Karan noor ka make-over karata hai aur kuch hi dino mein Noor "Gauri " bann jaati hai ]



[ 1 month later ]


[ Media Gauri ke ghar pahuchti hai ooska interview lene ]



Media : gauri ji , itne kam samay mein aapne singing sensation ka khitaab jeetkar palak maan ko bhaari takkar di hai.... eske baare mein kuch kehna chahengi ?.....


[ Gauri apne naye andaaz mein ]



Gauri : eska credit meri maa ko jata hai.... woh meri prerna rahi hain.....

Media : suna hai ke aap karan khandelwaal se shaadi karne waali hain ?....


[ tabhi peechey se karan kehta hai ]


Karan : bilkul sahi suna hai aapne !.......

[diipendu]

Karan : bilkul sahi suna hai aapne !.......

Karan : eesi mahine humari shaadi hougi....



[ yeh baat jaan ke media waale shock hou jaate hain aur ek saath Gauri se bahut saare sawaal poochte hain ]



Karan : yeh sab filhal ek suprise hai.... aur suprise ko suprise rehne dey tou achha houga.....

Media : ji bilkul... gauri ji aapka kimti samay dene ke liye thanx.....



[ media waalon ke jaate hi ]

[ Interview live tv pe aaraha thha aur jab yeh interview palak ne dekha tou oose bahut gussa aagaya ]




Palak : ooski himmat kaise hui !.... main jaanti hoon ke woh gauri nahi noor hai....... main oosey nahi chorungi !...... wooh kya samajhti hai aisa karke woh pratham ko mujhse chinn legi ??..... main pratham ke mann mein ooske liye itna nafrat bhar doongi ke woh kabhi bhi ooske baare mein soche bhi tou.......... nafrat se !.......

[diipendu]

Palak : ooski himmat kaise hui !.... main jaanti hoon ke woh gauri nahi noor hai....... main oosey nahi chorungi !...... wooh kya samajhti hai aisa karke woh pratham ko mujhse chinn legi ??..... main pratham ke mann mein ooske liye itna nafrat bhar doongi ke woh kabhi bhi ooske baare mein soche bhi tou.......... nafrat se !.......



[ Pratham wahaan aata hai ]

[ palak routey hue pratham se kehti hai ]




Palak : pratham dekho na.... dekho oos noor ne kya tamasha bana kar rakh diya tumhare dosti ka.... dekho apne ankhon se....


[ pratham tv pe news dekhta hai ]



Palak : woh noor apna naam change karke yahaan tak ki oosne karan khandelwaal se shaadi bhi karne ka elaan kar diya hai.....



[ pratham noor ke karan se shaadi karne ko soon ke shock ho jaata hai ]




Palak : woh noor yeh samajhti hai ke woh mujhe hara degi... barbaad kar degi....



[ tabhi pratham gusse se bola ]



Pratham : nahi palak !....... main aisa houne nahi doonga.... agar oosne jung ka elaan kar hi diya hai tou yeh jung hougi !.....

Pratham : palak..... kya tum mujhse pyaar karti ho ?..... shaadi karogi mujhse ?........



[ palak yeh soonke khush hou jaati hai ]





Palak : haan pratham !.... o pratham aaj main bahut khush hoon [ yeh kehke woh pratham ke gale lag jaati hai ]



Pratham : theek hai , humaari shaadi oosi din oosi jagah hougi jahaan noor mera matlab hai gauri ki shaadi hougi.....




[ yeh kehke pratham wahaan se chala jaata hai ]





Palak : aaj main bahut khush hoon pratham..... kyuki aaj mujhe mera woh mohra mill gaya hai jiske sahare main ees poore khel ko ek hi second mein jeet loongi.... aur woh mohra..... tum ho my dear pratham !....



[ palak khush houte hue ]




Palak : main tumhe hatyaar bana ke noor ko barbaad kar doongi........ ab dekhti hoon noor.... ees khel mein kiski jeet houti hai.... tumhari.... ya... meri....

[diipendu]

Palak : main tumhe hatyaar bana ke noor ko barbaad kar doongi........ ab dekhti hoon noor.... ees khel mein kiski jeet houti hai.... tumhari.... ya... meri....

Palak : bas , ab mujhe sirf ek akhri chota sa chaal chalna houga.... jis se tumhare mann mein noor ke liye bey-inteha nafrat fayl jaaye.... agar tumhe jail hou jaaye.... aur eski zimmedar noor hou...... tou mere liye raasta aur aasan hou jaayega..... noor ko hamesha-hamesha ke liye tumhare dil-o-dimag se nikaal fekh ne ka......



[ palak kisi ko phone karti hai ]



Palak : hello , tumhe samajh mein aagaya hai na aage kya karna hai..... good !......

Palak : [ khush houte hue ] tyaar hou jaao noor, oops ! gauri.... pratham ke nafrat ka saamna karne ke liye..... eesbaar tou pratham poori tarah se mera houke hi rahega !.......



[ Udhar noor ki shaadi karan se houne wali hai aur pratham ki shaadi palak se yeh baat noor ki maa aur pratham ki ma ko pata chalte hi woh mumbai pahuch jaate hain. ]



[ nirmala aur sharda mumbai pahuch jaatey hain ]




Nirmala : sharda, na jaane een dono ke beech aise kya galat-fehmi khari hou gayi..... jo yeh dono pyaar karne waale aaj ek doosre se itna nafrat karne lage hai ki apni zindagi barbaad karne par tuley hue hain..........:(

Sharda : haan nirmala, achha houga ke main noor se milne jaaoo....... aur tu pratham ke paas ja..... main koshish karungi noor ko samjhane ki.....

Nirmala : theek hai.....

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[diipendu]

Nirmala : yeh sab kya hai noor !... tum aur _ bahut achhey dost thhey... tou ab aisa kya ho gaya jo... dekho noor mujhe nahi lagta ke tumhe aisa karna chahiye tha...

Noor : maa, maine aisa eseliye kia kyunki woh bhi kahin-na kahin yeh chahta tha... shayad humara milna... humare kismat ko manzoor hi na tha...

Nirmala : aisa mat kaho noor... mujhe poora yakeen hai... dekhna haalat pehle jaisa ho jayega... sab thik ho jayega...


[ Noor Nirmala ko saari baat batati hai. Noor nirmala ko yeh bhi batati hai ke usne karan se shaadi karne ka faisla kia hai aur oon dono ki shaadi bahut jald houne waali hai. yeh soon nirmala ke liye noor ko samjhana aur mushkil hou jata hai. ]




UDHAR PRATHAM ko police arrest kar leti hai. Pratham ko kuch samajh mein nahi araha hai ke police ne osey ees tarah arrest kyun kia hai.

Palak pratham se police station milne aati hai...



Palak : aww pratham... yeh sab kya ho gaya ?... :( tum thik tou ho na ?...

Pratham : palak, mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi araha hai ke police ne mujhe ?

Palak : wajah main jaanti hoon... noor !

Pratham : noor ?...

Palak : dekho main tumhe yehaan nahi bata sakti... maine apne lawyer se kehkar sab arrangement kar dia hai ab police tumhe yehaan jaaney denge...

Pratham : thank you palak... tum bahut achii ho... kam se kam noor ne mujhe dhoka dia magar aise mein tumne mujhe samjha...

Palak : thanks kehkar tum mujhe paraya bana rahey ho pratham...


[ Palak aur Pratham ghar jaatey hue- Palak pratham ko car mein noor ke khilaaf sab jhooth-jhooth batakar pratham ko noor ke khilaaf kar rahi thi. ]

[diipendu]

SHAADI KA DIN...


Noor poore tarah se dulhan ke roop mein saji thi. Noor aaj dulhan bann kar bhi khush na thi... oske aankhon mein pratham ki yaadein thi...

[ Shaadi ka mandap saja tha. Baarat aaney hi waali thi. ]


Nirmala aur sharda noor ko dekhne aaye thhey...



Sharda : noor, mere bahut armaan thhey ke... ke tum ek din mere ghar bahu bann kar aogi... pratham se tumhari shaadi hogi...

Nirmala : noor, ek baar phir soch lo...



Udhar Noor aur karan ke shaadi ka mandap saja tha tou thik uske paas Pratham aur palak ke shaadi ka mandap bhi zorr-shorr se tyaar tha. Saarey mehmaan aagaye thhey...




Guest : arre kya kisi ne gauri aur karan ko dekha hai ? unki jodi kuch khaas nahi lagti kam se kam mujhe tou bilkul bhi nahi !

Guest 02 : haan aur gauri dekhne mein bhi bahut sundar hai magar oski shaadi tou... woh pratham hai na ?... arre wahi jiski shaadi palak se hou rahi hai... osi se honi chahiye thhi...

Guest 03 : haan agar unki shaadi hoti tou kuch kaha jaa sakta tha ke... Rabb ne banaii hai jodi !...

[diipendu]

Noor : maine soch lia hai... main karan se shaadi kar rahi hoon !

Nirmala : noor, beta jo hua osey bhool kar ek nayi shuruat karo...

Noor : naye shuruat hi tou karne jaa rahi hoon maa... apni zindagi ki nayi shuruat karan se shaadi karke...



UDHAR KARAN KI BAARAT AATI HAI.

Sharda aur Nirmala ees shaadi se khush nahi thhey. Pratham ki baarat bhi aaney mein kuch hi deyr thi aur palak dulhan bannkar sajj chuki thi.



Palak : aakhir aaj pratham mera ho jayega ! aur... aur oos noor ko oska jawaab mill jayega...

Noor mandap par beith gayii thi aur panditji ne mantra padhna shuru kar dia tha.

Karan : gauri, maine tumhare liye ek suprise gift hai... mujhe tumhari pasand ki... tumhari pasand kis chiz mein hai maine aaj woh chiz tumhare liye chunn lia hai...

Noor : kya fark padta hai karan... jab dil kisi chiz ko chahe tab woh chiz khubsurat houti hai warna dil agar kisi ko chahna hi bandd kar dey tou koi bhi chizz pasand aaye-Na aaye... kya fark padta hai...


Noor ka yeh jawaab soonkar karan ko ajeeb laga.



Karan : gauri, kya tum ees shaadi se khush ho ?



Noor ke liye yeh sawaal bahut ooljha hua tha... woh chup rahi kyunki uske paas jawaab dene ke liye koi shabd na thhey...

[diipendu]

Pratham ki baarat aajati hai



[ Palak Pratham ke baarat ko dekh khush ho rahi thi. ]


ACHAANAK !


{ Pratham ghore se utarta hai aur kuch deyr baad... }


Pratham Palak ka haath pakar ke Noor aur Karan ke mandap ke taraf ley jata hai.



Palak : pratham yeh kya kar rahey ho ?... choro mera haath !...



Karan Noor ke maang mein sindoor bharne hi jaa raha tha ke tabhi-

RUK JAAO !...



Sharda : pratham ?

Pratham : yeh shaadi nahi ho sakti hai !...

Palak : pratham... ye sab kya kar rahe ho ?... tumhe kya ho gaya hai ?...

[diipendu]

Pratham : yeh shaadi nahi ho sakti hai !...

Palak : pratham... ye sab kya kar rahe ho ?... tumhe kya ho gaya hai ?...



PRATHAM PALAK KO ZORR SE EK THAPPAR MAARTA HAI...


[ Yeh dekh wahaan ka mahol sab shaant ho jata hai. Kisi ko kuch samajh mei nahi araha tha ke achanak se yeh kya ho raha hai. ]



Pratham : ankhein khul gayi hain aaj meri... itney mahino se jo shaks... jo shaks mujhe aur noor ko alag karna chahta tha woh koi aur nahi... Palak hai !...



[ yeh dekh wahaan sab hayraan hou jaate hain ]

{ Pratham wahaan sabko woh saare baatein batata hai jo itney mahino mein Palak ne sajish karke Noor aur Pratham ko kis tarah alag kia. }



<Palak ne pehle Pratham ko jhoothe case mein jail mein bandd karvaya phir Noor aur Karan ke baare mein media ko galat information dena aur phir Noor ki shaadi yehaan karan se aur uski shaadi Pratham se >



Palak yeh sab dekhkar ekdum se chup reh gayii kyunki palak ka jurm ab sabke saamne achuka tha...

[diipendu]

Palak : yeh sab maine sirf tumhare liye kia tha pratham !... aaj tum jis makaam par ho sirf mere wajah se ho... aur tum ho ki mujhi ko ? HOWW DARE YOU PRATHAM !...



Tabhi wahaan Police aati hai.



Inspector : Mr. Karan, aapne bilkul sahi kaha tha... Mr.Pratham ko woh proof dey dene par Mr.Pratham Palak ko uska jurm sabke saamne kabool karne par majboor ho jayegi... ab enhe arrest karna humaare liye aur asaan ho gaya hai... thank you...

Karan : maine kuch nahi kia... jo hua achha hi hua... mujhe pehle se pata tha ke Noor Pratham se suchha pyaar karti hai... maine tou bas ek madad ki...

Noor : eska matlab... eska matlab tum sab jante thhey ? pehle se ?...

Karan : haan noor...

Karan : aur aaj meri aur tumhari shaadi nahi hogi... kyunki... aaj tumhari aur Pratham ki shaadi hogi...

Palak : nahi !... pratham, tum shayad woh baat bhool rahey ho ?

Pratham : haan noor... main tumse shaadi nahi kar sakta...

[diipendu]

Sharda : magar pratham, tum kyu noor se shaadi nahi karna chahte ? ab tou sab theek ho gaya hai... kya ?... kya tum noor se ab pyaar nahi karte ?

Pratham : nahi maa, aise baat nahi hai... magar maine palak ke saath ek contract sign kia hai jismei yeh likha hai ke... ke agar maine kabhi noor se shaadi ki tou... tou eska assar... noor ke carieer par padd sakta hai.............

Noor : nahi chahiye mujhe aisa carieer !... nahi chahiye aisa mukaam jo mujhe tumse alag kar dey pratham...



Noor ke ees sacrifise ko dekh Pratham ke aankhon mein aasu aajate hain...

Pratham Noor ko galey laga leta hai...



Palak : Pratham !... tum bhool rahey ho ke main agar chahu tou apne papa se kehkar tumhe aur noor ko barbaad kar sakti hoon... Pratham tum bahut badii galati kar rahey ho....



Palak ko inspector ka gun dikhta hai woh inspector se woh gun chhin leti hai aur Noor par woh gun target karti hai...



Inspector : dekhiye palakji, aap kaanoon apne haath mein ley rahin hain... aap aisa nahi kar sakti hain... woh gun wapas kar dijiye !...

Palak : shutup !...

Palak : ( palak route hue request kar rahi hai ) Pratham, please tum mere paas wapas aajao... woh noor tumhe mujhse chhin rahi hai... tum jante ho na ke main tumse kitna pyaar karti hoon ?...

Pratham : tum mujhse nahi khud se pyaar karti ho !... khud Noor se na haar jaao eseliye mujhe wapas pana chahti ho... magar tumhari koi bhi chaal ab kameyaab nahi hogi...

Palak : ( gusse se ) Pratham main noor ko goli maar dungi !...

Palak : dekho pratham, please tum wapas mere paas ajao... main papa se kehkar tumhe bahut ameer bana dungi... please...

Pratham : bhool jaao !...



Scene - Pratham jaakar Noor ko galey laga leta hai...



Palak ko yeh dekhkar gussa ata hai aur TABHI GOLI CHALTI HAI !

[diipendu]

Palak ne khud ko goli maar di thii.

Wahan Palak ke papa aate hain...



Scene - Palak ke aas-paas khoon thhey aur sab loug yeh nazara dekhkar shock hou gayye thhey... Palak zameen par padi thi aur tabhi wahaan oske papa bhaage-bhaage aatey hain aur aakar apni beti ko sambhalte hue -


Palak's dad : ( route hue ) ye kya kar lia tumne palak !...


Pratham aur Noor palak ke paas aatey hain...



Palak : ( apne akhri saasein lete hue ) dekha pratham... maine... maine khud ko... noor ke saamne haarne nahi dia... ees se pehle meri haar houti... maine khud ko goli maar li...


Pratham aur noor yeh dekh kar bahut upset thhey...


Palak : magar jaate-jaate main itna zaroor samajh gayii hoon... ke... ke pyaar ko na hi mitaya ja sakta hai... aur... aur... na hi osey zabardasti hasil kia ja sakta hai...

Palak ke aankhon mein aasu thhey shayad woh aasu osko apni ees zindagi mei suchha pyar na mill paane ka tha...





[ palak ke akhri words thhey - mujhe maaf kar dena noor... pratham... ]



Yeh kehkar palak ees duniya ko alvida keh deti hai...




8 mahine baad -




Ab Noor aur Pratham ki shaadi hou chuki thi aur Noor ek famous singer bhi thi... Noor ne India ki famous singer banne ka sapna poora kar lia tha aur ab pratham uske har kadam par saath deta hai aur dono eesi tarah poore life ek dusre ka saath dete hain...
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~ Moral of the story ~ - Pyaar ko kabhi zabardasti haasil nahi kia jaa sakta hai kyunki pyaar ka dusra naam sacrifise houta hai...

[diipendu]

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