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diipendu
March 15, 2009, 11:51 PM
Tujhh Mein Rabb Dikhta Hai | Tuesday

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Love can change life, tujhh mein rabb dikhta hai is set on the picture where two lovers will cross every hurdles with together and they believe ''Tujhh Mein Rabb Dikhta Hai...".

Cast :
Hiten Tejwani
Gauri Pradhan Tejwani


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Concept - Usha

Produced By - Usha

Episode director - Diipendu Dutta

Pictures By - S-Creations Motion Pictures

Creative Head - Diipendu Dutta

Production Group - S-Creations


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diipendu
March 16, 2009, 12:12 AM
Tujhh Mein Rabb Dikhta Hai...
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Aankhein kholu tou samne mujhe tu hi dikhta hai,
ankhein bandd karu tou saamne tu hota hai...


Tere mere zindagi mein aane se, kyun mujhe achhi lagne lagi hai yeh saari duniya,
Tere mere zindagi mein aane se kyun bann raha hai ek naya afsana ?...

Pyaar kya hota hai yeh main kya jaanu,
shayad yeh rishta woh hota hai jo saason ka saason se, dil ki dhadkan se...
Agar main jaanu tou bas sirf itna ke tujhh mein rabb dikhta hai...

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diipendu
March 16, 2009, 12:26 AM
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diipendu
April 7, 2009, 11:01 PM
TUJHMERABDIKHTAHAI*

* PROLOUGE*



Hello everyone. I read the msgs u all wrote & was very happy to read it. Thank u so much. This is my new story. It’s about Love-hatred relationships. There is love, comedy, drama, Fame, jealousy, hatred & murder. This is its prologue. Hope u all will love it.



1) Hiten Tejwani as Aditya Kashyap.

= A Handsome businessman & a patient, also known as AAdi.






2) Gauri Pradhan as Dr. Aditi Pradhan

= A pretty Psychiatrist, also known as Adi.





3) Ronit Roy as Dr. Rahul Pradhan.

= The Dean as well as Adi’s Bro, good personality.







4) Gautami Kapoor as Dr. Diya Pradhan.

= Soft & caring Wife of Rahul.



5) Jennifer Winget as Riya Singh.

= Sweet Sis of Aadi & a best friend of Adi as well as wife of Yash.



6) Yash Tonk as Yash Singh.

= A business man, Best friend as well as brother-in-law of Aadi.



7) Shilpa Saklani as Dr. Anuskha Patil.

= A nice Doc, colleague & friendof Pradhan’s & girlfriend of Anup.



Amit Sarin as Dr. Anup Patil.

= A good coleeague & friend of Pradhan’s.





9) Shefali Chhaya as Shefali Kashyap/ Mehra.

= A soft human being & mom of

Aadi.



10) Monish Behl as Monish Mehra

=ThecruelPersonality,The villain of ourStory.





By,

Diipenu & Usha.

diipendu
April 7, 2009, 11:27 PM
* TUJHME RAB DIKHTA HAI: 1 *




A narrow road in the middle of the jungle was taking them towards their destination
http://i42.tinypic.com/ekj7fn.jpg(). She peeped outside the window of her Scorpio car. Wooww, she murmured. She felt as though she was in heaven. She spoke softly: Wht a pretty place, isn’t it Bhai??? He nodded slowly. Abruptly something strikes into her mind. Her mood slowly got saddened. She felt soo bad. She got lot in her thoughts. Tear pouring from her eyes amazed Diya. She asked gently: Kya hoa Adi?? Kyun roo rahi hoo??”



Adi replied: Bhabhi aisa kyun hoa. She was soo nice, loving, caring, soft human. Kya humesha acche logo ke saath he aisa hota hai??”



Diya: Mujhe nahi pata Adi. I have no idea abt it beta.”



Adi’s watery eyes went down. She then slowly looked outside the window. Darjeeling, Queen of Hills, is a wonderful hill station.

They reached their destination. She got out off the car. They went towards the door & she pressed the door bell. A servant came running towards the door. He opened the door & asked them who they were. They told him tht they have come to meet Mr. & Mrs.Singh. He welcomed them in. The house was huge & royal. It had a wonderful ceiling. The servant requested them to have a seat on the neighboring couch. They made their seat whereas the servant climbed the stairs to tell his boss abt their new guest. Knowing abt their guest Mrs. Singh came running down the stairs. Suddenly her legs stopped. She saw her sitting on a couch lost in her thoughts.

She called slowly: AA…Aditi…”Aditi looked up at her.



She got up from the couch & replied: Riya…” Riya ran down & hugged Aditi tightly.

Aditi made Riya sit on a couch & sat beside her. Riya looked behind her. She saw them nervously looked at her.



She called: Rahul Bhai, Diya bhabhi!!”



They came towards her & hugged her. Mr. Singh too came down the stairs.



Rahul: Yash.”



Yash took blessing from Rahul & Diya.



Rahul asked: How r u beta??”



He said tht he was fine.



Aditi crying: Riyu ye kya ho gaya??? Shefali aunty ki maut kisse huye??”



Controlling her tears Riya said: Ac.. Accident hooa tha.Unka car smash hoo…”



Saying she burst out crying. Aditi: Kya?? Kisse??” Riya: Bhaiya khete hai ki unka murder hoa hai.”



Adi: Kisne kiya murder??” Riya: Papa ne..” Aditi: Kya?? Kyun??”



Riya: Nahi pata Adi. Aur issi wajah se dono ke beech jhagda chalo hai. Aur to aur maa ki maut ne bhaiya ke mental status ko bohot affect kiya hai.”



Adi:“Kya??”

diipendu
April 7, 2009, 11:34 PM
Adi: “Kya??”



“Hai Aditi. Aur toh Pappa ne yeh bhi kaha ki Maa ko bhaiya ne mara hai kyunki bhaiya psycho hai. Pata hai, bhaiya acchanak chilane lagte hai. Marne lagte, Chikhe fhekne lagte hai. Aur….”



Suddenly they heard a voice.



Diya: Yeh kon chila raha hai??”



Riya: Bhaiya. Unko sambhalne ke liya ek nurse ko bhi rakha hai. Par woh kissi ki bhi baat nahi mante.”



They heard someone was throwing things. The door got open. A nurse came out requesting



Nurse: Sir plzzz aap shant ho jaeye. Plzz.”



A voice inside the room: I said get out.”



Saying this he threw a ball on her face. Luckily she bent down & it missed her. But someone wasn’t lucky. That ball straight came down & hit on Aditi’s head & she fell down. All shouted watching Aditi in tht situation. Hearing shouts he came down. He saw a small crowed surrounded someone. He came behind her & saw it was a girl.



Riya in a tensed tone: Aditi. R u ok??? Aree khon bhee raha hai. Aree koi ice lao.”



Adi:“Its ok Riya. Maine thik hoo. U see I’m used to this. Mere patients jab aggressive ho jate hai toh jo kuch mile lekar marne lagte hai.”



And she giggled even in tht situation. Riya looked behind Adi & saw him standing, peeping round.



Riya called: Bhaiya. Kya kar diya aapne. Dekho Aditi ko kitna laga. Dekho..”



Aditi said slowly: Riya mat chila usspe. Woh nahi janta woh kya kar raha hai. Tu agar uspar chilayegi toh woh aur aggressive ho jayega.”



Saying this she turned back at him. She saw him standing straight with his hand straight joined each other through palm. He looked at her terrified. As she turned he looked at her. Ohh, shez soo pretty, he thought. He looked at her watery, lusterous eyes, rosy lips. Then his attention went towards her forehead. She was bleeding. Rapidly he took out his handkerchief out off his pocket and tired to wipe out the blood from her forehead.



He slowly said like a child: Sorry!! Khoon bhehh raha hai. Bohot lagi na??”



A beautiful smile appeared on her face & she nodded in –itve. Watching her smiling he too grinned.



She said him in same childish manner: Nahi. Mujhe nahi laga. Par tumne ball kyun faka??”



He replied: Woh dekho na ye nurse mujhe bohot tang karti hai. Yeh kar woh mat rako. Mujhe yeh nahi pasand.”



Adi:“Thik hai toh Riya ko bata do. Nurse ko plzz mat maro. Usse lagta hai na.”



Aadi:“Ha. U r right.”



They both smiled. They were astonished by seeing them.



Aditi asked softly: Waise tumhara naam kya hai???”



Aadi:“Mera naam Aaditya Kashyap hai(forwarding his hand for a hand sheck) .. Maine Riya ka bhai hoo(smiling). Waise tum kon hoo??”



Adi:“Maine???”

He nodded.

Adi:( Giving him a handshek) Maine Riya ki best friend hoo Aditi. Dr.Aditi Pradhan,”



As she touched him he felt as though butterflies were flying in his tummy.



Aaditya: Kya tum Docter hoo??”



Adi(smiling):“Haa.”



Later Riya introduced Aaditya to Rahul & Diya. Later a doc was called & he treated Adi. Aaditya was always with her.



Aditi to Riya: Chal maine chalti hoo. Tum Aaditya ko gussa mat dilo. Warna uski halat aur karab hi gayegi.Ok??”



Riya agreed. She went to Aaditya’s room said him Good Bye.



Aaditya said: Tum jaa rahi hoo? Phir aaogi na??”



Adi nodded in +tive & said: Haa. Maine phir jaroor aaongi, Ok??”



He nodded & said: Take care.”



She pinched his nose & said: Bye.”



As she touched him he again felt butterflies in his tummy.



They went out by saying good bye. When Aditi was gonna sit in the car she looked up at Aaditya’s room window. He was standing there looking at her. He shook his hand gesturing bye. She too did the same. He flew a flying kiss to her. Watching this she laughed loudly and sat into her car. He watched her car going & it got disappeared in the fog.

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*COMING UP NEXT*


Riya in a concerned tone: Aditi kya tum bhaiya ki docter banogi?????? Plzzzzzzzz.









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diipendu
May 5, 2009, 09:21 PM
*Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 2 *






Ø Pradhan house:





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Diya shouted: Breakfast is ready!! Sab jaldi aaoo.” Rahul & Aditi ran downstairs. Aditi was 1st to reach the breakfast table. She shouted: Yeh! Maine 1st aayee.” Saying this she started dancing like a small kid. Looking at her Rahul & Diya felt happy. Aditi was their life. Diya smiling: Aree waha! Meri Bitto toh jeet gaye.” “ Ha bhabhi. Lagta hai Bhai budhe ho gaye hai. (Moving towards him) And look at ur tommy. Soo big bhai! U r growing fat dude!” Rahul giggled. Opening each & every bowl Aditi asked : Bhabhi aaj nashte me kya hai???” “ Aloo ke parathe.” “Woo….” Rahul cutting the talks: Dekha. Itni fat khana teri bhabhi banaygi toh maine kya karu??” Saying this Rahul started filling his plate with paratha & dahi. Aditi: Aaa.. hello? Apne motape ka reason meri bhabhi ka banaya hoe khane ko mat do. (Still filling his plate)Aur agar khana me itna he fats hai toh (snatching the plate) mat khao.” Saying this she started & followed her requesting to give his plate back. Watching this scenario Diya burst of laughing.







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Riya was moving towards Aadi’s room with a breakfast plate. It contained 2 chapatis, califlower’s bhaji & Bhaindi bhaji. She opened the door & saw him sitting on a couch watching outside the window. She stood beside him & also saw the beautiful scenario. The mountains were covered with thick fog. The river water stood chill.



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He looked at Riya & got up. Riya gently said: Chalo bhaiya. Aaj hum garden me baitkar khana khayange.” A huge smile appeared on his face. He rapidly took his coat, put on the gloves & holded Riya’s arms. He said: Chalo Chalo. Jaldi.” Riya took him outside. She made him sit on a bamboo chair & she sat on another chair. She started feeding him. He was so joyous & was eating nicely. He looked at Riya who was very happy to see him happy. He asked: Riyu tumne nashta kiya??” “Na. Pehle aap kho phir maine khongi.” “aisa kaise”.. He tored a piece of chapatti with bhaji & feed her. Watching this Riya got soo sad. In childhood days Aadi always used to feed her. Tears poured from her eyes. To avoid Aadi’s questions she quickly wiped it off. After having their breakfast they took a walk down the streets. Later, at home, she gave him the medicines & made him sleep.



A car was moving at a gr8 speed. Suddenly 4 trucks smashed the cars from all the sides. He shouted: Maa!!!!” With a jerk he got up. He looked around & saw tht he was in room. Suddenly he remembered the dream. It wasn’t a dream. It was the reality. This was how his mother, Shefali, died. Suddenly he felt uneasy. He started feeling afraid of something. He started beating themselves. He screamed, shouted saying “Maa….” The nurse came running towards him but he pushed her back & started throwing things at her. Even she got hurt. She came running towards Riya. Riya came running towards Aadi & found him unconscious on the ground. She found tht he made him injured by banging his head on the wall. She made him sleep on the bed. Later she called Yash & told him everything. He left at once. He got tensed. As he reached home he saw tht Riya had called a doc & Aadi’s head was bandaged. Yash was staning near the window, next to Aadi’s bed. He started remembering everything.




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diipendu
May 5, 2009, 09:24 PM
A car was moving at a gr8 speed. Suddenly 4 trucks smashed the cars from all the sides. He shouted: Maa!!!!” With a jerk he got up. He looked around & saw tht he was in room. Suddenly he remembered the dream. It wasn’t a dream. It was the reality. This was how his mother, Shefali, died. Suddenly he felt uneasy. He started feeling afraid of something. He started beating themselves. He screamed, shouted saying “Maa….” The nurse came running towards him but he pushed her back & started throwing things at her. Even she got hurt. She came running towards Riya. Riya came running towards Aadi & found him unconscious on the ground. She found tht he made him injured by banging his head on the wall. She made him sleep on the bed. Later she called Yash & told him everything. He left at once. He got tensed. As he reached home he saw tht Riya had called a doc & Aadi’s head was bandaged. Yash was staning near the window, next to Aadi’s bed. He started remembering everything.



Aadi was his best friend. Aadi was his life. Aadi paid Yash’s fees & made him educated. He felt sad to see his best friend in this situation. Riya saw him & stood beside him. Putting her hand on his shoulder she consoled him. Aadi’s murse came & said: Mam. I’m sorry. Magar maine aapke bhai ka care nahi kar sakti. Woh meri ek baat nahi sunta. Mujhe usse bohot dar lagta hai. Mujhe yeh job choodna hai.” Listening to this Riya & Yash both pleaded to her but she didn’t budge. That nurse left her job.



Later Riya saw Yash on a comfortable couch next to Aadi’s bed. Yash looked at Aadi & again started to remember their past. Their childhood, their friendship, his marriage, shefali’s death… Riya sat beside him & placed her head on his right shoulder & said: Yash, Bhaiya ko kisi aache docter ko dikhana hoga. Unki halat bighadti jaa rahi hai.” Yash: Magar kissko dikhayenge?? Darjeeling me aisa konsa docter hai ??? Hearing to this a maid, next to them, came towards Riya & said: Mam. Aaditya bhaiya kisse hai??? Koi naya docter mila??” Riya: Nahi malti.” “Madam, Aapki woh saheli bhi ek docter hai na. Aap usse kyu nahi puchte hai. Maine suna hai unka hospital bohot aacha hai. Waha ke docters bohot aache hai.” Riya: Konsi saheli ki baat kar rahi hoo tum???” “Dr. Aditi Pradhan.” A strike of light came into Yash’s mind, he got up & said: Chalo Riya. Hum abhi mikalte hai.” He called an ambulance to carry Aaditya. They started towards their destination.





The car stopped near a tall mansion type building. It named “Mental rehabilitation”. They climbed down the car & went inside.



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They reached towards the reception & asked: Where is Dr. Rahul’s cabin??” The nurse took them towards it. They knocked the door. “Come in”, a voice came from inside. The nurse opened the door. They too entered the room. Rahul got astonished to see them there. He asked: Riya, Yash tum yaha???”



She heard a knock at the door. She said them to come in. A ward boy came inside & said tht she has been called by Dr. Rahul. She closed down the file which she was revising a minute earlier & rushed towards Rahul’s cabin. She stood outside the door & knocked. She got permission to come inside. Even she was astonished to see them their. She came towards her & asked: Riya? Tu yaha kya kar rahi hai? Sab thik hai na???” Riya burst out crying. Watching her in such a situation Yash too started crying. Suddenly they heard the door open. They turned & saw Diya coming inside with another two doctors. Aditi consoled Riya. Riya explained her everything. Hearing to this Aditi felt sad. Riya looked at her & asked: Aditi kya meri madat karegi??” Aditi: Yaar wht type of question is this? Ofcourse maine madat karongi.” Riya in choked voice: Toh.. Toh kya tu mere bhaiya ka ilaj karegi?? Plzz. Meri madat karo na. Plzzzz….” Aditi looked at her & smiled. She said: Ha.. Zaroor.”







*Coming up next *



Aaditya & Aditi’s second encounter. Their friendship.




By,



Diipendu & Usha


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diipendu
May 28, 2009, 02:02 AM
*Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 3*






Recap:








A.
Riya takes Aadi to the garden
to make him feel fresh.


B.
Aadi watches her mother’s
accident as hallucination.


C.
After waking up he realizes
tht his mom is no more & gets attacked by fits. He gets himself wounded.


D.
Riya & Yash takes him to
Mental Rehabilitation. On Rohan’s saying they admit him to Mental
Rehabilitation.


E.
Riya requests Aditi to treat
his bro & she agrees:






*Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 3*







Mental rehabilitation:









Aditi looks at Riya & says: Ha zaroor. Maine Aditya ka ilaj zaroor karongi.” She
turns towards the door & saw them. She turned to Riya & said: Riya yeh
mere best friends hai aur colleague bhi. (Pointing towards the boy who was at
his 25) Yeh Anup Patil hai. Aur yeh Anushka Patil.” She introduces them to Yash
& Riya. Anup in a concerned tone. Don’t worry. Hum vada karte hai ki hum
apke bhai ko jaldi thik karenge.” Sanju: Lekin Aditi Aaditya hai kaha?” Adit: 3rd
floor par, ek special ward me.” Suddenly a ward boy came running towards the
room. Breathing heavily he said: Dr. Aditi. Aapka woh patient hosh me aa cuka
hai. Par woh kissi ki bhi baat nahi maan raha hai. Hum sab ko pillow se mar kar
bahar bhej diya. Aap plzz usse zaara dekhiye.” Listening to this all ran towards
the 3rd floor. Riya went close to the door & tried to open it.
Aditi stopped her & said tht she’ll go 1st.





Aditi came
inside the room. The room was dark. So she switched lights on. She found no
one. Riya & others were watching this from outside through window. Abruptly she sensed someone behind her. She
turned & saw a person who was trying to hit her. She screamed loudly &
fell down. Her hair was open. Thus, her hair covered her face. She sat properly
& uncovered her face. She placed her hair behind her ears. She was
astonished to find Aaditya in front of her. He recognized her. It was Aditi. He
looked at innocently knowing tht he has made her fall. She gave him an angry
stare & asked: Aaditya kya aise darate hai? Pata hai maine kitni darr gayi thi??” Suddenly her
eyes went towards a steel glass in his left. She widened her eyes & asked:
Toh kya tum mujhe isse marne wale the??” Abruptly Aaditya nodded his head in

diipendu
May 28, 2009, 02:03 AM
Aditi came
inside the room. The room was dark. So she switched lights on. She found no
one. Riya & others were watching this from outside through window. Abruptly she sensed someone behind her. She
turned & saw a person who was trying to hit her. She screamed loudly &
fell down. Her hair was open. Thus, her hair covered her face. She sat properly
& uncovered her face. She placed her hair behind her ears. She was
astonished to find Aaditya in front of her. He recognized her. It was Aditi. He
looked at innocently knowing tht he has made her fall. She gave him an angry
stare & asked: Aaditya kya aise darate hai? Pata hai maine kitni darr gayi thi??” Suddenly her
eyes went towards a steel glass in his left. She widened her eyes & asked:
Toh kya tum mujhe isse marne wale the??” Abruptly Aaditya nodded his head in


–tive. He said in an innocent tone: Maine tohh (thinking)
paani per aha tha. (Making an innocent puppy face) Sorry…” Outside everyone
(Rahul, Diya, Yash, Anup & Anusha with a ward boy) giggled slowly to avoid
Aadi hear it. Aditi narrowed her eyes making Aadi terrorize. Then she smiled.
Watching her smile Aadi felt relaxed. He got up but Aditi shouted: Hey
hello???” She indicated him her situation. He smiled & gave her his hand.
She held his hand & got up.





They got
up. Aditi went towards the window
& opened the curtains due to which sun light came inside. She turned &
saw him behind. She smiled & made him sit on the bed. She too sat beside
him. She looked at him & asked: Kyun tumne uss ward boy ko mara?” Aadi in
an childish tone: Kyunki woh mere sawalo ka jawab nahi diya. Aditi plzz batoo
na maine kaha
hoo??? Riya aur Yash kaha hai?? Batoo na plzz….” “ Aree ha. Bata te hoo. Tum
Mental Rehabilitation centre me hoo. Aur..” “Kyun?? Maine pagal nahi hoo.. Maine…” “Aadi suno meri baat plzz??” He
nodded. “ Aadi tum hi humesha kehte the na Riya aur Yash se ki tumhe bohot gussa
aata hai. Tum aageeb behave karte ho. Isliye unhone tumhe yaha laya hai. Aur
pata ha kya?? Maine
tumhari Doc hoo.” He got up & started clapping cheerfully. But he again sat
& asked: Maine
yaha aakela ho jaonga. Kya tum meri dost banogi??” Aditi: Ofcourse. Aaj se hum
dost hoa. Ok??” Aadi, still smiling, asked: Sacchi?” Aditi: Muchhi!” They both
bust out laughing.





They entered the room
& found both of them laughing. Aadi saw them. He abruptly got up & said
in excitement: Riya! Yash! Dekho Aditi. Woh keh rahi hai ki maine uska patient hoo. Good news na?” Riya
came towards him & pulled his cheeks & said: Ha bhaiya. Ha.” Yash
hugged him tightly. Even others entered the room. Aadi looked at Anup &
Anushka cautiously. Aditi recognized his cautiousness & called them. Aditi
introduced them to him. Aditi: Aadi yeh Anup aur Anushka hai. Mere best
friends.” Aadi looked at her & then later them. Anup & Anushka forwarded
their hand. Then he smiled & shaked their hands with both his hands. Then Suddenly
Aadi scream. Riya asked cautiously: Kya hoa bhaiya?” “Seer me dard hoo raha
hai.” Aditi took him towards bed & said: Aadi tum soo jao. Maine tumhe medicines
deti hoo. Ok??” Aadi nodded slowly. Aditi gave him medicines & made him
sleep.





They came out of his room. They
went towards Aditi’s cabin. All sat on chairs & started discussing Aadi’s
case. Riya asked: Aditi kya maine
yaha bhaiya ke saath reh sakti ho?” “Kya??” “Ha. Plzz. Can I??” Aditit started
thinking. Riya got puzzled & asked: Kya hoa. Kuch nahi. Pata hai. Yaha job
hi log hai na wonke family wale unnhe dekhne kabhi nahi aate. Aur tum toh yaha
rehne ki aat kar rahi hoo.” Yash: Plzzz Aditi. Plzzzz” Aditi looked at his
Bhai. Rahul & Diya nodded. Riya & Yash smiled. Sanju asked: Lekin tum
log rahoge kaha??” Yash: Mere ghar me ek couch-cum-bed hai. Maine woh mangata hoo aur Aadi ke kamre me
rakhta hoo.” They nodded. Yash called his driver to bring tht couch from house.
He bought it & placed it in Aadi’s room near Aadi’s bed. Aadi was still
sleeping. All staff of the rehabilitation got puzzled.





Later they sat in Rahul’s cabin. Anup
looked at Aditi who was in deep thought. He asked her: Aditi kya tu Aadi se
pehle bhi mil chuki hai??” She nodded in +tive. Anup: Kab??” “ U see Anup. I’m
born & brought up in Darjeeling.
Yaha maine
aur Riya ne ek saath schooling ki. Tabhi Aadi London ke college me padh raha
tha. Jab hume last year se vacation mile tabhi Aadi Apni puri padhye puri karke
aaya tha. Aur…” A man entered her cabin without permission. All got up &
looked towards the door. Rahul got up & asked: Dr. Pankaj aap??”





Dr. Pankaj Sharma entered the cabin. He was
at his 50’s, was short which royal moustache.





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He
forcefully came inside & looked at everyone. He looked at Aditi smiled at
him but he didn’t. He asked: Yeh kya hoo raha hai Rahul. Woh couch kiske liye
laya gaya hai??”
Everyone looked at each other.










* COMING UP NEXT*








Flash back: 7yrs back:











BY USHA & DIIPENDU.




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diipendu
June 4, 2009, 02:47 PM
* Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 04*

*
RECAP:






1.
Adi agreed to treat
Aaditya.


2.
Aadi & Adi become
friends.


3.
Aadi makes friendship
with Anup & Anushka.


4.
Yash & Riya
requests to stay with Aadi & Rahul agrees.


5.
But someone is not
happy with his permission, Dr. Pankaj Sharma.





* Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 04*





Later they sat in Rahul’s cabin. Anup looked at Aditi who was in
deep thought. He asked her: Aditi kya tu Aadi se pehle bhi mil chuki hai??” She
nodded in +tive. Anup: Kab??” “ U see Anup. I’m born & brought up in Darjeeling. Yaha maine aur Riya ne ek
saath schooling ki. Tabhi Aadi London ke Oxford University
me padh raha tha. Jab hume last year se
vacation mile tabhi Aadi Apni puri padhye puri karke aaya tha. Aur…” A man
entered her cabin without permission. All got up & looked towards the door.
Rahul got up & asked: Dr. Pankaj aap??”





Dr. Pankaj Sharma
entered the cabin. He was at his 50’s, was short with royal moustache.





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He forcefully came
inside & looked at everyone. He looked at Aditi who smiled at him but he
didn’t. He asked: Yeh kya hoo raha hai Rahul. Woh couch kiske liye laya gaya hai??” Everyone
looked at each other.





Pankaj looks at Rahul
& says: Beta u know u r breaking the rules of this Rehabilitation. Aaj tak
kissi ne issa nahi kiya.” Adi in middle: Sir aaj tak aisa nahi hoa kyunki aaj
tak inn becharo ke pariwaro ko unki fikar nahi hai. Magar Aaditya ki fikar Yash
aur Riya dono ko hai. Plzzz sir aap plzz understand kigiye.” Pankaj gave her a
stink eye. Then he looks at Rahul & says: Apni ladli behen ke pyaar me tum
kuch jada he kooye hoa hoo.” Saying this he goes away.





They all were sitting on
their chair confused, lost in their thoughts. Anup suddenly realizes tht he was
asking Adi something. SO he asks her: Adi tum Aadi ko kabse janti hoo??” Adi:
Anup Jab London
se Aaditya aapni padhye karke wapas aaya tha. Tum meri uar Riya ki school ke
last vacation chalo hoa tha. Tab maine
usse pehle bar mili thi. Then humare results aaye aur maine aur Riya ne top kiya tha. Phir maine Auckland chali gaye aur
Riya London. Hum wapas Riya ke shaadi me. Aur…” Riya cutting her in middle:
Aadi bhaiya loves u Adi.” Adi looked at
her shocked. She exclaimed: Wht???” Riya: Haaa. Unhone humesha tujhe propose
karne ki koshish ki magar kabhi kar na paye. Jo insaan iss duniya me kissi se bhi
nahi darta woh propose kar ne darr rahe
the bcoz he didn’t want to loose u. Mere shaadi me bhi unhone aapko propose
karma chaha. Magar…” Adi still in shock
asked: Kya?? Saachi??” Riya nodded in +tive. Riya cont’d: Pata Adi Maa ki tu
fav thi. Isliye Maa tujhe bahu banana chati thi. Woh humesha yehi kehti thi ki
ek din who\oh tujhe apne ghar ki bahu jaroor banaye gi. Kehti thi ki yehh…
yeh..” Adi looked at her. Adi said: Yeh?? Kya?? Bol na..” Riya crying: Yeh kli
unki ye he aakhri iccha thi.” Adi got more studded after hearing this. She said:
Kyaa??” Aunty bhi…” She closed her mouth with her hands. Tears started pouring
from her eyes.

diipendu
June 4, 2009, 02:49 PM
They all were sitting on
their chair confused, lost in their thoughts. Anup suddenly realizes tht he was
asking Adi something. SO he asks her: Adi tum Aadi ko kabse janti hoo??” Adi:
Anup Jab London
se Aaditya aapni padhye karke wapas aaya tha. Tum meri uar Riya ki school ke
last vacation chalo hoa tha. Tab maine
usse pehle bar mili thi. Then humare results aaye aur maine aur Riya ne top kiya tha. Phir maine Auckland chali gaye aur
Riya London. Hum wapas Riya ke shaadi me. Aur…” Riya cutting her in middle:
Aadi bhaiya loves u Adi.” Adi looked at
her shocked. She exclaimed: Wht???” Riya: Haaa. Unhone humesha tujhe propose
karne ki koshish ki magar kabhi kar na paye. Jo insaan iss duniya me kissi se bhi
nahi darta woh propose kar ne darr rahe
the bcoz he didn’t want to loose u. Mere shaadi me bhi unhone aapko propose
karma chaha. Magar…” Adi still in shock
asked: Kya?? Saachi??” Riya nodded in +tive. Riya cont’d: Pata Adi Maa ki tu
fav thi. Isliye Maa tujhe bahu banana chati thi. Woh humesha yehi kehti thi ki
ek din who\oh tujhe apne ghar ki bahu jaroor banaye gi. Kehti thi ki yehh…
yeh..” Adi looked at her. Adi said: Yeh?? Kya?? Bol na..” Riya crying: Yeh kli
unki ye he aakhri iccha thi.” Adi got more studded after hearing this. She said:
Kyaa??” Aunty bhi…” She closed her mouth with her hands. Tears started pouring
from her eyes.









*After a While:






Riya & Adi were walking on the corridor.
Suddnely Riya found someone similar face. Her eyes got widened. She called her
name. IT was Aadi’s nurse who refused to treat him further. Riya came towards
her & asks: Tum yaha?? Kaise?? Tumhe toh pagal logo sse darr lagta hai
na??? Phir??” Nurse didn’t answer to her question. She says Dr. Pankaj ji ne
mujhe appoint kiya hai.” Adi said: Hmm. Jaoo tum.” Tht nurse looked at her
strangely. She asks: Aap??” Adi: Dr. Aditi Pradhan. Aaditya ki Doctor.” Nurse in shock: Kya! Aaditya sir yaha admit hoa
hai?” Adi nodded. Riya in angry: Kya koi problem??” She nodded in –tive &
goes away.







*In
adi’s cabin:






Adi
was reading abook. Suddenly something suck her mind.







* COMING UP NEXT*



Adi to Rahul: Bhai kya hum music yaha
par suru kare?? U know its good for these ppl.” Pankaj in angry tone: Nahi.
Bilkul nahi.





WILL ADI BE ABLE O START MUSIC IN
REHABILITATION???






BY,





USHA &
DIIPENDU.
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gayathri_ght@yahoo.com
June 7, 2009, 04:36 AM
this is really fresh conept ...... i liked it ... plss keep updating soon

diipendu
June 11, 2009, 01:44 AM
* Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 04*






*RECAP:







1) Dr. Pankaj Sharma’s entry. He’s not happy with
the permission given by Dr. Rahul to Yash & Riya.





2) Adi comes to know tht Aaditya loved her very
much & Shefali wanted to her daughter in law.





3) Aadi’s nurse joint Mental Rehabilitation. When
Riya found her she gave reason tht she left her job bcoz she got good salary
here.
















*Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 04*







*MENTAL REHABILIATION:




Aadi was talking to Riya. Adi entered his
room. Looking at Adi he got happy Aadi wished her & said: Aditi tum kaha
thi?? Maine tumhari bare maine he baat kar rahe the.” She smiled
& said: Accha! Kya baat kar rahe tum aur Riya??” Aadi: Yahi ki tum kitni
acchi hoo.” Adi gave a short laugh & thanked him. She took Aadi’s medicines
& gave it to him. Aadi pleading: Plzz Aditi mujhe medicines nahi pasand. I
hate them.” Adi: Aaditya, agar tum dawaye nahi loge toh tum jaldi thik kaise
hoge. Hai na??” He nodded in +tive. She smiled & made him drink the black
bitter syrup. After drinking it he made a ugly face. Looking at his expression
Aditi & Riya gave out a huge laugh.





Adi went out of Aaditya’s room.
Taking permission from Riya & Adi, Aadi too followed her. Aditi went to
general ward where several patients were there. All were wearing white top
& pants like Aaditya. She entered the room while Aaditya & Riya
preferred to stay at the doorstep. AS she entered the ward she found tht all
were not at there position. She found aloud noise there. All were shouting.
Even the ward boy & nurse were not able to handle them. As the nurse saw
Aditi she shouted: Dekho Dr. Aditi aa gaye. Sab shant bethoo.”





Suddenly silence filled the room.
All went & sat in their bed. Aditi went towards the nurse & said her to
bring everyone’s medicines in cold voice. After bringing their medicines, Aditi
went towards the 1st patient. He was short, fat with curly hair. He
was sitting on his bed with his legs folded & with finger-on-the-lips. Adi
wished him: Hi Joseph. Aaj kaise hoo tum??” He smiled & just nodded. She gave him the medicines & gave him a
red rose. He looked at gave her a mouth tight shut smile & pointed towards
him sayng is this for him. Adit nodded in =+tive. He took it & got very happy.





Aditi went owards 2nd patient & he was in a
attire of a saint. He had rudraksh mala
in his hand. She went towads him & did namaste. He said: Sukhi rahoo.”
Looking at this Riya smiled slowly. Then
Adi requested with her hand doing namaste: Sadhu maharaj kya aaj apni aushadhi
lenge.” He said: Awashye!” Then he took his medicines. Aditi again did namaste
& he says: Tathastoo!





Like this e went to many patients. Then she came towards a
patient who was at his 50’s. He was short, thin & was wearing specks. But
Aditi didn’t give him medicines. Riya asked: Adi tum inhe da.” Adi: Jinhe koi
bimari nahi ha wonhe dawaye kyun dena??” Riya & Aadi got shocked. Tht
person wasn’t ill. He was fine. Adi said: Hey Anil chachu hai. Yeh bilkul thik
hai.” Anil said: Aditi beta yeh kon hai?” Adi explained him everything. She
said:Yeh Aaditya hai,. Mera naya patient hai.
Anil got happy to see him.






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Then Adi introduced
Aaditya to everyone. She said: Guys! Hey humara naya family member hai.
Aaditya. “ All got happy to see & started to have a funny chat with him.
Even Aadi was happy & got engrossed in the chat.





*In adi’s cabin:





Adi
was reading abook. Suddenly something stuck her mind.








*In Rahul’s cabin:



In tht room, Rahul, Diya, Aditi &
Pankaj were present. She requested Rahul: Bhai agar hum music yaha
introducedkare toh yeh humare patients ke liye bohot fayedemand hoga. Aur maine
insab ka arrangem,ets karne ke liye bhi tyaar hoo.





Adi to Rahul: Bhai kya
hum music yaha par suru kare?? U know its good for these ppl.” Pankaj in angry
tone: Nahi. Bilkul nahi. Music ke nam par yaha masti hogi. Mujhe yaha
discipline chahiye, masti nahi.. Isliye……” Aditi getting angry, got up from her
seat : Aap kehna kya chate hai?? Maine yaha
een logo ki acche ki baat kar rahi hoo aur aap hai ki kehrahe hai ki maine yaha music apne maze
ke liye introduce kar rahi hoo???”





Rahul was sitting in his
chair with his hand on his head. He was confused as to whom to support. If he
supports Aditi then Pankaj will get a chance to pinpoint him & he cant
support Pankaj bcoz he knows tht Aditi is right. Diya placing her face on her
palm kept looking at both Aditi & at Pankaj. Diya was getting as confused
as Rahul.





Pankaj, also getting
up from his seat says: Ha! Mujhe lagta hai ki tum music apne maze ke liye kar
rahi hoo. Dekhna yeh log response nahi karenge tumhari iss music therapy ko. Aur..”
Adi: Thik hai! Toh ek deal karte hai.” Rahul getting more puzzled got up from
his seat: Deal?? Kaisi deal??” Diya too got up. Adi looked at Rahul, then at Diya & later
at Pankaj & says: Agar een logo ne mere iss music therapy par response nahi
kiya toh….” Pankaj suspiciously: Toh??” Adi coming closer to him said: Toh maine apkli under kaam
karongi.” Pankaj’s eyes widened & he gave a big smile . He always wanted to
make Adi work under him. Rahul & Diya got shocked. Diya said: Aditi baccha
tu janti hai tu kya keh rahi hai??” Adi
said with a wide smile, slowly: Bhabhi! Rukho na. (Looking at Pankaj) Meri baat
abhi tak katam nahi hoye hai.” Again Dr.
Pankaj gave her a suspicious look. She cont’d: Aur agar yeh logo ne mujhe
response diya toh
AAP KO HAR PATIENT KE SAATH HAS KAR BAAT KARNA PADEGA. AUR …”
Rahul & Diya came closer to hear clearly. Aditi cont’d: AAP HAR MUSIC PAR
HUMARE SAATH, HAR PATIENT KE SAATH, DANCE KARENGE!”
Rahul & Diya’s eyes
widened . “Oohh”, a voice came from the door. They saw all doctors (Including
Anup & Anushka) standing near the door. Aditi smilingly said: Loh! Yeh log
bhi humare is deal ke witness ban gaye.” In over confidence Pankaj agreed. He
said: Thik hai. DEAL! ” Aditi interrupting: Lekin koi cheating nahi chalegi.”
Pankaj agreed. They both shook hands .







**Will Aditi BE SUCCESSFUL TO WIN this deal??? Or she’ll loose
this TO PANKAJ??





**Keep watching!








* coming up
next*




Diya
curiously says: Adi agar tu haar jayegi toh..” Adi: Nahi bhabhi! Maine nahi haarongi.
Mujhe jeetna hai. Apne liya na sahi magar een logo ke liye toh jeetna hai.”





Aaditya
sings: Tu he to meri dost hai.”







BY



USHA & DIIPENDU















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diipendu
July 8, 2009, 12:32 PM
RECAP:





1 Aditi & Aaditya’s friendship gets stronger.



2) Entry of every patient in M.R.



3) Pankaj & Aditi challenge each other whether MR ppl will accepted & response to Music OR wont response.







* Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 06 *



*Pradhan house, at night*



" Ha Pande ji!” Aditi was talking in phone: Aap music ke saare instruments aur unke players kal bhej degiye. Maine aapko yaha ka address sms se bhej te hoo. Thik hai. Maine rakhti hoo!” Saying this she cancelled the call. While she was sending address of MR through SMS, Diya entered her room. Diya sat on her bed near Adi. Diya asked: Adi? Kisse baat kar rahi thi beta??” Aditi looking at the phone: Woh mere ek jaan pehchan wale uncle hai. Jab maine school me thi na tu maine unse sangeet sikh ti thi. Kal Music Therapy ka 1st class hai. Usske liye musical instruments manga rahi thi. Kal thak sab pohoch jayega. Aur….” Aditi saw tension on Diya’s face. Aditi asked keeping her phone aside: Bhabhi?? Kya hoa? Aap itni tension maine kyun hai??”



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Diya looked at her & said: Aditi tune Deal toh kar di Dr. Pankaj ke saath. Lekin Aditi. Agar tu haar gaye toh….” Adi: Nahi bhabhi! Maine nahi haarongi. Mujhe jeetna hai. Apne liya na sahi magar een logo ke liye toh jeetna hai.” Rahul entered her room. Aditi looked at both of them & requested: Plzzz! Aap toh mera saath doo. Plzzz!” Rahul sat at on his knees in front of Aditi & says (touching her chubby cheeks): Adi! Hum dono tumhari saath hai! Aur humesha rahenge!” Tears poured from her eyes. Diya waved her hand on Aditi’s head & Says: Tum jaroor jeetogi beta.” Aditi said in choked voice: Maine nahi. Hum! Hum Jeetenge!”




*MENTAL REHABILIATION*



A nurse was announcing to all the patients tht today there will be Music Class in which everyone should be present. She also said tht it will be conducted by Dr. Aditi. This was seen by Dr. Pankaj. He, later went towards his patients. Watching Pankaj they sat in their places. Pankaj threatened them: Agar tum log koi bhi uss Aditi ki Music class me gaya tho maine tum sab ko Shock Therapy de donga.” Poor Patients, in fear of getting shock, agreed to him. Pankaj, when turned towards the door, saw Anup & Anushka standing. They had heard him. Anup came near to him & showed him his mobile & said: Maine aapki sari baate mere mobile me record kar liya hai.” Saying this he plays it.



Listening to it Pankaj starts sweating. Anushka gives him a tissue & says: Aree apko toh pasina aa gaya. Tab kya hoga jab hum yeh Dr. Rahul ko sunayenge??” Dr. Pankaj said in choked voice: Kya?? Rahul koo?” Anup & Anushka smilingly nodded in +tive. Anup: Agar aap chahte hai ki hum yeh Dr. Rahul ko naa bataye toh AAP ADITI KE THERAPY KE BECH NAHI AAYENGE. Thik hai??” Dr. Pankaj gave them a stare then just nodded. Later he went outside & Anup- Anushka said sweetly to all patients to attend Aditi’s class.



Aadi went towards Yash & requested him to bring his blue diary. After few mins Yash brought Aadi’s diary.









*In the garden*



[b]LATER, at evening, all the musical instruments had arrived with their players. Aditi called every patients as well as Doctors. There were no chairs. Patients were allowed to sit on long benches. Pankaj came towards her & said: Best of Luck Aditi!” Aditi turned & saw him giving her wicked smile. Aditi too gave him a huge smile & wished: Thnk u! Well same to u!” Saying this she smiled & went towards her patients

diipendu
July 8, 2009, 12:36 PM
In the garden*



LATER, at evening, all the musical instruments had arrived with their players. Aditi called every patients as well as Doctors. There were no chairs. Patients were allowed to sit on long benches. Pankaj came towards her & said: Best of Luck Aditi!” Aditi turned & saw him giving her wicked smile. Aditi too gave him a huge smile & wished: Thnk u! Well same to u!” Saying this she smiled & went towards her patientshttp://i41.tinypic.com/29blcfl.jpg

Aditi went towards the patients & said: Hey guys! Aaj humara Music Therapy ka pehla class hai. Aur pata hai aaj hum bohot maze karenge.” Then Aditi signals the flute player to play the flute. He started playing the flute. But no one pays any attention. All were lost in their own thought. The musicians played each & every instrument but no one paid attention. Aditi tried to talk with them, tried to make them understand, but it was in vain.



Slowly she felt as if she is losing her battleL. All doctor felt sorry of her. Looking at her Pankaj came near to her & said: Toh maine samaj leta hoo ki main Shart jeet gaya. Aur tum haar gaye.” Aditi kept quiet. Pankaj turned towards all doctors & said: Lo! Miss Aditi Pradhan haar gaye aur maine jeet gaya. Aaj se woh mere niche se post par kaam karegi.” Saying this he gave a huge smile to Rahul & Diya , Yash & Riya. Aditi slowly went back towards the fences & turned to looked at the beautiful scenario.





The climate was soo cool! The mountains were covered with thick layer of cloud.



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Tears started pouring her eyes. Aadi saw her crying. He felt soo sad. He couldn’t see her crying. He went to the musicians & gave his blue diary.

diipendu
July 9, 2009, 11:40 AM
Suddenly Aditi heard Aaditya singing (Tu he to meri dost hai from Yuvraj):



Hooooooooo……



{Music is played. Aditi turns around & sees Aaditya dancing, snapping his fingers, doctors singing}



{(Violence music) Aadi comes running towards her, brings his face closer to her & sings)



Aaja Main Hawaon Pe Bithake Le Chalun
Tu Hi Toh,



{Nodding his head continuously, catching the rythem, even Aditi does the sameJ}



Tu Hi Toh Meri



{Nodding & tilting his head to left}
Doost Hain



{Pointing the sky, holding her shoulder}

Aaja Main Khalaon Mein Uthake Le Chalun



{Removing tears from her cheeks}
Tu Hi Toh Meri Doost Hain



{Coming towards the fences, dancing like a small kid with hand expression}
Awaaz Ka Dariya Hoon, Behta Hoon Main



{Pointing the sky}

Nili Raaton Mein



{Bringing his face closer}
Main Jaagta Rehta Hoon,



{Sings with expression, widening his eyes}

Neend Bhari Jheel Si Aankhon Mein (Aditi laughs)



{Raising his both hands}

Awaaz Hoon Main…



{Rahul sings dancing}
Aaja Main Hawaon Pe Bithake Le Chaloon
Tu Hi Toh, Tu Hi Toh Meri Doost Hain



{Anup sings dancing}

Aaja Main Khalaon Mein Uthake Le Chaloon
Tu Hi Toh Meri Doost Hain



{Aditi laughs. Due to Aadi singing all patients concentrate. Rahul & Anup dances with the patients}



{(Violence music) Aadi dancing with Aditi, they do ball dancing}



{Coming towards the edge, it was almost night, Aditi sings pointing at the moon (yaar subha bhi kabh kabhi moon dekhaye deta hai) tells to Aadi with expression.}


Raat Mein Chandni Kabhi, Aisi Gungunati Hain



{Sings with hands expression, keeping her hands behind her eyes}

Sunn Zara



{Pointing Aadi}

Lagta Hain Tumse,



{Joining her palm}

Awaaz Milati Hain



{Aadi sings with expression}

Main Khayalon Ki (pointing his nose)Mehek Hoon,



{Expresses with hand}

Gungunate Hain Saaz Par



{Aditi brings him near piano, makes him sit)



Ho Sake Toh Milale…., Awaaz Ko… Le Saaz Par..



{Holding his hands, she plays piano. After playing they both laugh. Even all patients laugh}


{Aadi sings, taking around of the whole garden. Pankaj gets angry while Rahul, Diya, Yash, Riya & Anup, Anushka r happy watching all of them dancing}



Aaja Main Hawaon Pe Bithake Le Chalun
Tu Hi Toh Meri Doost Hain



{Aadi comes near to patients & they all dance but Aadi dances with expression. Aditi & others doctors laughs(expect Pankaj)}


Aaja Main Khalaon Mein Uthake Le Chaloon
Tu Hi Toh Meri Doost Hain
Awaaz Ka Dariya Hoon, Behta Hoon Main Nili Raaton Mein Main Jaagta Rehta Hoon, Neend Bhari Jheel Si Aankhon Mein



{Rasing his hand}

Awaaz Hoon Main…



{(Violence music) they all listen to the music. All patients r lost in the music}



{Adi & Aadi r standing near the fence, Adi & Aadi sings with hand expression}


Ooooooooo………………………….

Kabhi Kehta Hai Saahil,

Jahan Shaam Utarti Hain
Kehte Hain Samunder Se,

Ek Pari Gujarti Hain
Woh Raat Ki Rani Hain,

Sargam Par Chalti Hain,



{Aadi sings slowly, Adi nods her head}
Re Sa Re Sa Re Sa, Sa Re Sa Re Sa Re



{Adi runs towards the fences, raising her hand}
Aaja Main Hawaon Pe Bithake Le Chaloon



{Pointing to Aaditya}

Tu Hi Toh,



{Pointing towards Aadi & coming towards him}

Tu Hi Toh Mera Doost Hain



{Dancing Aditi sings}

Aaja Main Khalaon Mein Uthake Le Chaloon



{Coming closer to Aadi, pinching her nose, Aadi smiles}

Tu Hi Toh Mera Doost Hain

diipendu
July 9, 2009, 11:40 AM
{Coming closer to Aadi, pinching her nose, Aadi smiles}

Tu Hi Toh Mera Doost Hain



{Dancing with patients, giving a stink eye to Pankaj}

Awaaz Ka Dariya Hoon, Behti Hoon Mein Nilli Raaton Mein



{Running towards the fences, calling with actions to all patients}
Main Jagti Rehti Hoon, Neend Bhari Jheel Si Aankhon Mein



{Rasing her hands, she sings loudly}

Awaaz Hoon Main



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{ Echo comes…..}
Awaaz Hoon Main...



{ Everyone laughs, shouts happily}

diipendu
July 9, 2009, 11:41 AM
Aditi went towards him & said: Ligiye Dr. Pankaj main shart jeet gaye! Aur aap haar gaye! Abt oh aap ko apna promise mibhana padega.” She turned towards the musician & gave signal to play the music. All doctors took him at the centre. The musician played Kajra re song & made him dance.



Aaditya & Aditi were still laughing remaining the scenario. Aditi looked at Aaditya who was laughing very sweetly. She said: Thnks Aadi! Meri madat karne ke liye!” Aadi: Dosto maine NO THNKS NO SORRY. OK???” Aditi nodded.



“ Hello Aaditya!” Listening to this they both turned back & saw him. Both of them got shocked. Aadi looked at him shocked. He went near him. Aditi got shocked & said to herself: Ohh no! Monish uncle!” He was wearing business suit.





Aadi went close to him & said: Papa!” Mohish nodded & held him with both his hands on Aadi’s shoulders. Aditi came close to them. Aadi said to Monish: Papa Aditi hai. Meri doctor.” Looking at Aditi he said: Aditi yeh mere Papa hai aur..” Aditi looked at him suspiciously & asked: Aur?” Aadi looked at her http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/916238.gif & then at Monish & said: Aur meri MAA KA KAATIL!” Aditi & Monish’s eyes widened. Aadi threw Monish’s hands from his shoulders & tried to hit him. But Aditi stopped him. Adti shouted: Ward boy! Nurse! Koi hai???” Hearing Aditi’s voice Riya & Yash came running outside. Aadi was shouted: Maine tumhe nahi chodunga! I’ll kill u! Tumne meri maa ko mara hai. I’ll not leave u!!” Saying this he tried to free himself from Aditi.



Ward boys came & forcefully took Aaditya away. After taking Aaditya away Riya came towards Monish & started shouting: Aap ko kisne kaha yaha aane ke liye?? Kyun aaye hoo aap yaha?? Aadi bhaiya kyun milne aaye hai aap??’ Monish: Kyunki woh mera beta hai aur maine apne bete se milne aaya hoo!” Riya: Beta? Aadi bhaiya aapke sabse bete ban gaye??” Monish maintained silence. Riya cont’d: Ab kyun apki boli band hoo gaye?? Dekho Mr. Monish Mehra, Mere bhaiya ab jaldi thik ho janyenge toh plzz aap yaha nahi aayenge toh apki bohot kripa hogi.” Saying she went inside & Yash followed her.



Aditi looked at Monish & Mohish looked at her. Monish asked: Kaise hoo tum??” Aadi carelessly said: Thik hoo.” Turning towards him she said: Dekhiye uncle, aap plzzz yaha mat aayeye. Aap jante hai Aaditya aapko dekh kar kitna violent hoo jata hai. Phir aap..??” Monish: Mujhe aapne bete se milne ke liya tumhari permission ki koi jarorat nahi hai.” Aditi looked at him amazed. He cont’d: Samjhi tum??” Aditi nodded in +tive & said: Thik hai. Magar jab aap next time aayenge na tab maine Aadi rokungi nahi. Aapse aachi tarah milne dungi usse. Thik hai??” She gave him a sarcastic smile & went away.



He saw her going inside. He smiled wickedly & said to himself: Tumhe maine dekh longa. Aur yeh bhi dekhta hoo ki tum uss Aaditya ko thik kaise karogi”



This episode ends with Monish’s wicked smile!








To be continued……..





* questions*



Wht will monish do??? How will he take his revenge??



Will Aditi be able to control aaditya’s agitation???



Keep watching!







*Coming up next*





Riya to Aditi: Yaar mujhe chk up ke liye jana hai. I’m not feeling well.”



Pankaj to himself: Maine apne apmaan ka badla jaroor longa.”





Monish: Iss Aaditya ka kuch toh karma padega.”











*By*

*Usha & Diipendu*


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diipendu
July 9, 2009, 11:47 AM
* Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 06 *







*RECAP*







1) Aditi wins the deal. She makes Pankaj dance with other patients.





2) Monish Mehra, step father of Aadi. Visits MR to meet Aadi.





3) Aadi gets annoyed after watching him. He tries to hit
Monish.





4) Adi requests Monish not to visit Aadi again or else she
wouldn’t be responsible for wht Aadi will do.











*Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 06*





*MENTAL REHABILIATION*













Adi was moving towards
Aaditya’s room when she saw Riya standing outside Aadi ‘s room. She hurried
towards Riya & asked: Kya hoa?? Aadi??” Roya: Woh apne room me hai. Bohot
chila rahe hai.” Suddenly the door got open & Diya came out. She saw Adi
& said: Tu yaha kya kar rahi hai?? Ja andar jaa! Aadi needs u!” Aditi
entered the room & saw Aadi shouting, screaming, trying to free himself:
Mujhe chhod doo! Maine
usse nahi chhodunga! LEAVE ME!! ” Adi came near him & tried to console him.
She said: Aadi! Plzz control ur
self. Meri baat suno. Suno Aadi.” Still Aadi was still shouting: Aditi plzz
mujhe chhod do na. Plzz!” The situation was out of control. Rahul said: Adi.
Beta! Aadi ko control karma impossible hai. Tum plzz usse neend ka injection de
do.” Adi nodded & filled the syringe with the liquid medicine. Later Rahul,
Yash & Anup held him tight. Adi went close to him & said: Sorry
Aaditya. Par iske alawa mere paas aur koi option nahi hai.” Saying this she
injected him. Slowly Aadi was fallin asleep murmuring: Aditi … plzz
mujhe..chodo.. mujhe… mujhe jana hai..
plzz…” Watching Aadi’s condition Riya burst of crying. Yash went towards her
& consoled her. Rahul & Anup
freed Aadi. Adi, exhausted, went near the couch & sat down. She covered her
face with her hand.





Pankaj was sitting on his chair at his cabin. He was remembering
the deal, how he made the deal & how he loosed it. He remembered how he was
insulted. Pankaj said to himself: Yeh sab uss Aaditya ki vajah se hoa hai.”
Suddenly he remembered something. He said to himself: Aaditya.” He remembered
wht happened in the garden btwn Aadi & Monish. Pankaj smiled wickedly &
said to himself: Maine
apne apmaan ka badla jaroor longa! Maine
tum logo se apna badla jaroor longa Aaditya aur Aditi! I’ll take my revenge.
Tum dono ki zindigi barbaad kar donga maine.
Thtz my promise to u both. ”





Adi was standing in
the corridor. She was looking outside the scenario. Riya came towards Adi &
asked: Kya hoa?? Yaha is tarah kyon khadi hai?? Ghar nahi jana hai kya??” Adi
nodded her head in –tive.


Riya got studded. Riya asked: Kya??” Adi looked at
her & said( with blank expression):
Yeh sab kya hogaya Riya?? Aaditya kitna khush tha.


Aur aachanak!” Riya
said quickly: Yeh sab uss Monish Mehra ke wajah se hoa hai. I’LL KILL HIM !!” Adi
said with blank expression looking at the



scenario: Same here.” Rahul , Yash,
Anup, Anushka & Diya came towards them. Diya asked: Aditi kya tu kya raat
bhi rukne wali hai kya??” Riya: Nahi bhabhi. Isseghar le jao. Subha se over
loaded thi.” Looking at Adi Riya said: Tu ghar jaa. Tere chehre se pata chal
raha hai ki tu kitni thak gaye hai. U need rest.” Adi defending: Nahi agar Aadi
utha gaya too…”

Yash said: Toh maine
tumhe call kar dunga. But I think ki woh itne jaldi nahi uthega. Tumne he uss
neend ki dawa de thi na?? Phir??” Adi smiling nodded. Saying this everyone went
home except Yash & Riya.

diipendu
July 9, 2009, 11:48 AM
Yash said: Toh maine
tumhe call kar dunga. But I think ki woh itne jaldi nahi uthega. Tumne he uss
neend ki dawa de thi na?? Phir??” Adi smiling nodded. Saying this everyone went
home except Yash & Riya.








* Next day at MR*







Adi came to MR soon. As soon
as she entered MR she ran towards Aadi’s room. She opened the door & found
no one there. She got shocked to see no one there. AS she turned Aadi scared
her saying: Bhooo!!! ” She got scared & went back. Aadi, Rahul, Anup &
Yash burst out laughing :D . Aditi had kept her hand on her chest due to fear . They
were laughing while Aditi gave them an angry look . Adi shouted: Aaditya! Tumne
mujhe dara diya!” Listening to this they again burst out laughing . Aditi gave
them an amazed look while Riya, Anushka & Diya were smiling from a corner .





In Aadi’s room Aditi, still in shock,
was sitting on the couch having a cup of tea. Others were still laughing. Aadi
said: Riya tumne dekha na ki maine
Aditi ko kaise daraya.” Riya nodded smiling. Adi getting angry: Ha. Haso sab.”
Aadi suddenly burst out laughing . All looked at puzzled . Adi asked him: Tum ko
kya hoa??? Hasss rahe hoo??” Aadi said innocently: Tumhe ne kaha na ki sab
haso. Toh main hasne laga.” Listening to this all laughed loudly. Suddenly Yash’s cell ranged. He accepted it.
After lil conversation he asked to Riya: Riya wo office me meeting hai.. toh
kya??” Riya said smiling: Jao.” Yash smiled & said: Thnk u!” He wished
everyone a good bye & went towards the door when Riya held him & said:
Jaldi aana.” Yash smiled, kissed her on forehead & nodded in +tive.








* In
Aditi’s cabin*








Adi heard a knock at her door. She said: Yes. Come in.” Riya came
in. Adi said: Riya?? Mere kamre me aaneke liye tumhe permission lene ki koi
jarorat nahi hai. Samjhi??” Riya smiled & nodded. Riya sat on the chair
& asked: Adi?? Kya tu mere saath hospital chalegi??” Adi asked puzzling:
Hospital?? Kyun??” Riya: Main tujhe raste me batati hoo.” Saying this at lunch
break they went to hospital.

diipendu
July 9, 2009, 11:55 AM
* After ½ hr at mr*






Yash arrived from his office to MR. He was searching for Riya here
& there. He went to Aadi’s room & saw everyone there except Riya &
Aditi. Yash went towards Diya & asked: Bhabhi?? Riya aur Aditi kaha hai??”
Diya: Wo dono doctor ke paas gaye hai.” Yash shocked: Doctor ke paas?? Kyun???”
A voice came from the door: Tum Riya se he pooch loo.” Everyone looked at the
door. Adi & Riya were standing at the door. Yash forcefully came towards
Riya & asked: Kya hoa tumhe?? Tum doctor ke paas kyun gaye thi?? Tum thik
to hoo na??” Riya & Aditi looked at each other & smiled . Yash: Tum log
has kyun rahe hoo ??” Adi said: Kyunki Isliye jijaji, aap Papa banana wale hai,
main maasi banana wali hoo aur apki
“dharmpati” Maa banana wali hai.” Yash got studded . He hugged her tighly .
Everyone gathered around them & congratulated them.






* After few mins*












Aadi was searching for
something . He looked at every corner of the room. All got puzzled . Adi, who was
sitting on a couch asked: Adi! Kya dhoond rahe hoo tum ??” Aadi: Ruko. Mujhe
dhoond ne doo. Don’t disturb me plzzz.” Adi smiled . Riya: Aree bhaiya bata to
do ki aap kya doond rahe hoo?? Hum apki madat karenge.” He turned towards Riya,
came close to her & asked: Baccha kaha hai??” Riya: Kya?? Baccha??” Aadi
nodded in +tive & said: Tum Maa banene wali hoo na, toh baccha kaha hai??”
Everyone laughed . Riya bought him closer, took his hand & placed it on her
stomach saying :Yaha hai baccha.” Aadi laughed & said: Tum mujhe ooloo bana
rahi hoo??” Riya nodded in –tive.








* After
few mins*










For 10mins Aadi was peeping Riya’s stomach . All were looked at
Aadi’s expressions. Even Adi. He was making very funny faces . Placing her head
on her palm Riya asked: Kya kar rahe hoo bhaiya??” At last Aadi responded: Woh
tumhari tummy me fit kaise hoa ??” All smiled: Adi said: Kyunki baccha abhi
bohot chota hai. Isliye.” Aadi: Chota hai?” Adi nodded. Aadi cont’d: Kitna
chota hai?? Dekho!” Riya: Kya??” Adi explained him nicely: Ab nahi dikha
sakte.” Aadi: Kyun??” Adi: Kyunki usse abhi iss duniya me aane me waqt hai.
Isliye.” Aadi: Kitna waqt hai??” Adi: Ab do mahine toh hoo gaye hai toh total 7
months.” Aadi’s eyes widened. He screamed: 7 months !!!” All laughed . Adi nodded
+tively. Aadi getting annoyed demanded: Nahi! I cant wait for 7 month! Mujhe
abhi chahiye .” Riya & Yash looked at each others confused . Adi explaining
him: Aaditya…” Cutting her off he said: Nahi! Mujhe abhi chahiye varna MAIN KHANA NAHI
KHAOONGA !” All were in a hot soup!!

diipendu
July 9, 2009, 11:55 AM
Riya,
came close to her & asked: Baccha kaha hai??” Riya: Kya?? Baccha??” Aadi
nodded in +tive & said: Tum Maa banene wali hoo na, toh baccha kaha hai??”
Everyone laughed . Riya bought him closer, took his hand & placed it on her
stomach saying :Yaha hai baccha.” Aadi laughed & said: Tum mujhe ooloo bana
rahi hoo??” Riya nodded in –tive.








* After
few mins*










For 10mins Aadi was peeping Riya’s stomach . All were looked at
Aadi’s expressions. Even Adi. He was making very funny faces . Placing her head
on her palm Riya asked: Kya kar rahe hoo bhaiya??” At last Aadi responded: Woh
tumhari tummy me fit kaise hoa ??” All smiled: Adi said: Kyunki baccha abhi
bohot chota hai. Isliye.” Aadi: Chota hai?” Adi nodded. Aadi cont’d: Kitna
chota hai?? Dekho!” Riya: Kya??” Adi explained him nicely: Ab nahi dikha
sakte.” Aadi: Kyun??” Adi: Kyunki usse abhi iss duniya me aane me waqt hai.
Isliye.” Aadi: Kitna waqt hai??” Adi: Ab do mahine toh hoo gaye hai toh total 7
months.” Aadi’s eyes widened. He screamed: 7 months !!!” All laughed . Adi nodded
+tively. Aadi getting annoyed demanded: Nahi! I cant wait for 7 month! Mujhe
abhi chahiye .” Riya & Yash looked at each others confused . Adi explaining
him: Aaditya…” Cutting her off he said: Nahi! Mujhe abhi chahiye varna MAIN KHANA NAHI
KHAOONGA !” All were in a hot soup!!





Adi sat beside him
& said: I’m sorry magar abhi nahi de sakte .” Aadi crying: Kyun !! Mujhe abhi
chahiye :cool: !” Aadi started crying like a baby :cool: ! Adi rubbed his tears from his checks
& cupped his face with her hand & said: Agar baccha abhi aa gaya toh wo bemaar hoo
gayega. Kya tum chahte ho ki tumhara Bhanga bemaare hoo??” Aadi rubbing his
eyes nodded in –tive & asked: Agar who bahar aaya toh kya bemaar padega??”
Adi nodded innocently in +tive. Rubbing his tears he said: Toh main nahi
rounga.” Saying this he gave her a big smile . Watching him everyone’s eyes
filled with tears . Aditi kissed Aadi’s forehead .








Suddenly Riya laughed .
All looked at her puzzled. Yash asked: Tumhe kya hoa??” Riya smiling: Yash jab
baby hilta hai na to aisa lagta hai ki tummy me butterflies uud rahe hoo.
Tickle hone lagta hai.” All laughed. Aadi asked: Sachi ??” Riya nodded in +tive.
Aadi laughed loudly . Diya said: Ha. Pata hai. Jab maien expect kar rahi th tab maine aise he aachanak
hass deti thi. Rahul toh kabhi kabhi kehte the ki Meri Biwi Pagal Hoo Gaye
Hai! ” All laughed loudly . Riya Asked: Aree ha Bhabhi! Gungun kaha hai?? Kissi
hai woh??” Diya: Acchi hai. Yaha aane se pehle usse London ke ek famous boarding school me
admission karwa kar aaye hoo. Thode deno me Rahul jakar usse lekar aayen ge.” Riya
asked: Aap Gungun ko miss karti hogi
na??” Diya nodded in +tive& said: Ha! I miss her a lot.”





Suddenly a voice came
from the door.” Mamma r u missing me??” All turned & saw Gungun standing at
the door. Rahul & Diya got shocked .





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TO BE
CONTINUED…..



*How did gungun came to India from London???





*Keep reading!!!





* coming up next*













Gungun forwarding her hand: Hi. I’m Gungun
aur tum??” Aadi looked at her &
smiled.





Monish to
Riya: Congratulations Beti! I heard abt the good news!








Monish to
a stranger: Kill Aaditya! I want him dead!










*By*


*Usha & Diipendu*












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diipendu
July 9, 2009, 12:00 PM
* Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 06 *







*RECAP*





1)
Adi tries to control
Aaditya’s angry. As it wasn’t controllable she gave him sleeping injection.





2)
Pankaj owes to take
revenge from Aaditya & Aditi for insulting him in front of his colleagues
& patients.





3)
Next day Aadi is back
to normal.





4)
Everyone comes to know
tht Riya is expecting.





5)
But Aadi demands tht he
wants to see baby now. However, Adi explains him nicely as not to be stubborn.





6)
Gungun’s entry.





{Guys I made a
mistake in last part. While coming to India, Rahul & Diya had kept
Gungun in her friend’s house.}














*Tujhme
Rab Dikhta Hai: 06*





*MENTAL REHABILIATION*








Riya Asked: Aree ha Bhabhi! Gungun kaha hai?? Kissi hai woh??”
Diya: Acchi hai. Yaha aane se pehle usse uske friends ke ghar rakh kar aaye
the. Thode deno me Rahul jakar usse lekar aayen ge.” Riya asked: Aap Gungun ko
miss karti hogi na??” Diya nodded in +tive& said: Ha! I miss her a lot.”





Suddenly a voice came
from the door.” Mamma r u missing me??” All turned & saw Gungun standing at
the door. Rahul & Diya got shocked http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/733699.gif .





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Rahul couldn’t believe his eyes. He
exclaimed: Gungun!!” They both ran towards her & hugged her. Diya started
kisses her face http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/818217.gif . Tears started following from her eyes. Diya asked: Kaisi hai
meri bacchi???” Gungun: Maine
thik hoo Maa. (Removing tears from Diya’s cheeks) Aap kaisi hoo??” Diya smiled
& said cupping her face: Maine
thik hoo baccha.” They both smiled & hugged each others. Diya asked; Beta
tu yaha kaise aaye???” Gungun looked towards the door. It was Gungun’s friends
mother. She said tht Gungun was feeling homesick, So she brought her here. Diya
& Rahul Thanked her. She went away.

diipendu
July 9, 2009, 12:02 PM
Suddenly a voice came
from the door.” Mamma r u missing me??” All turned & saw Gungun standing at
the door. Rahul & Diya got shocked http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/733699.gif .





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Rahul couldn’t believe his eyes. He
exclaimed: Gungun!!” They both ran towards her & hugged her. Diya started
kisses her face . Tears started following from her eyes. Diya asked: Kaisi hai
meri bacchi???” Gungun: Maine
thik hoo Maa. (Removing tears from Diya’s cheeks) Aap kaisi hoo??” Diya smiled
& said cupping her face: Maine
thik hoo baccha.” They both smiled & hugged each others. Diya asked; Beta
tu yaha kaise aaye???” Gungun looked towards the door. It was Gungun’s friends
mother. She said tht Gungun was feeling homesick, So she brought her here. Diya
& Rahul Thanked her. She went away.





“Gungun”, a voice came from her back. She
turned & saw Aditi there. She shouted: Atu!!!” They both ran towards each
other & hugged tightly. Adi kissed her tightly on her cheeks & in turn
Gungun too gave her a tight kiss. Gungun said: Atu! Aap kaisi hoo???” Adi made
her sit on her lap & said: Maine
toh thik hoo. Tum kaisi hoo??” Gungun smiled & said: EK dum mast hoo.” Adi
smiled & said: Aacha!!” Saying this Adi gave out a laugh . Riya came towards
Gungun & said: Hi!!! Kaisi hoo??” Gungun exclaimed: Hi Riya Atu???” Riya:
Ohh! So u remember me??” Gungun: Ya!” Riya smiled. Yash asked: Hi Gungun!”
Gungun: Hi Yash Mamu!” Yash smiled & asked Adi: Adi Atu ka matlab kya
hai??” Adi: Actually Yash wo Atu nahi Atya hai. Marathi me Bua ko Atya bolate
hai. Aur Atu Atya ka short form hai. Aur Atya ke husband ko ko Mama kehte hai.”
Yash: Ooo..”





Suddenly remembering Adi said to Gunu:
Gunu aa. Maine
tujhe apne naye patient se milati hoo.” They turned & saw Aadi sitting on
his peeping at Gunu. Gunu got shocked . She whispered in Adi’s ears: Atu yeh toh
Aadi hai.” Adi asked: Tum isse janti hoo??” Gunu nodded in +tive. Riya said:
Adi pata hai tujhe meri shaddi me yeh dono mile the. Bohot acche dost ban gaye
the.” Gunu said: Atu yeh mera best friend hai. Isse kya hoa hai??” Adi
explained her everything, how he got mad, whispering in her ears. Gunu started
crying but Adi told her to control her tears. Adi said: Roo mat. Tum roogi toh
Aadi ko bohot bura lagega. Tum usse dosti karlo. Ok??” Wiping her tears Gunu
nodded in +tive.





Gunu came towards Aadi
while Aadi gave her a suspicious look. Gungun said forwarding her hand: Hi
Aadi!!” Aadi looked at her hand . He gave an puzzled look to Adi . Adi said:
Aaditya yeh Rahul Bhai aur Diya bhabhi( vahini, marathi me bhabhi ko Vahini
bolte hai) ki beti hai. Gungun.” He looked at Gunu & she smiled at him. She
asked: Mujhse dosti karoge???” Aadi gave her a huge smile & shaked http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/36486.gif hands
with her. Aadi asked: Tum mujhe janti hoo??’ Gunu nodded in +tive & said:
Ha! Maine
tumhari best dost thi. Magar tum mujhe bhool gaya na??? lekin maine nahi bhooli tumhe.” Aadi laughed &
said: Promise ab maine
tumhe kabhi bhi nahi bhoolunga.” Saying this they both smiled. Diya said: Gunu.
Beta ghar chal. Jara fresh hoo jao.” Gunu said: Ok Mamma. Aadi maine ghar jakar jaldi
fresh hokar tumse milne aaongi. Phir hum milkar khelenge. Ok??” Aadi nodded in
+tive. Due to happiness he started clapping.
Gunua& asked: Mamma! Kya maine
Aadi se milne aa sakti hoo??” Diya smiled & nodded. Aadi & Gunu both
got happy. After a while Diya took Gunu home.








* AFTER 1HR*





Gunu came from home to MR. She was went toward Aadi’s
room & started playing with him. Riya was happy tht Aadi got a nice friend
to play with. While passing beside Aadi’s room, Pankaj peeped inside . He saw
Gungun playing with Aadi. He entered the room & saw shocked to find Gunu
playing with Aadi with Rahul. He said: Rahul yaha kya kar rahe ho???”





Rahul turned & saw him
standing. Rahul said: Good morning uncle!” Pankaj just nodded. Rahul introduced
Gungun to him. Pankaj greeted her. He asked: Beta! Tum iss pagal ke saath kyun
khel rahe hoo??” Adi got angry & even Aadi . Riya got annoyed . Gunu asked:
Pagal ?? Kyun pagal uncle?? Ye toh mera best friend hai.” Pankaj said: Lekin kya
tum nahi janti ki yeh mentally ill hai??” Gunu smiled & said: Aree uncle
sab mentally ill he hote hai. Papa kehte hai ki sare logo me koi na koi mental
problem rehta hai. Jaise gussa hona, marna, jealousy feel karma bhi ek mental
problem hai. Sab ko hota hai. Toh iska matlab saare log pagal hote hai??”
Pankaj was taken a back by her answer.
Everyone tried hard to control their laugh .

Pankaj said clearing his throat,
maintaining a smile on his face: Maine
toh sirf Isliye kaha tha ki yeh tumhe koi choot na pohochaye.” Gunu smiled
& said: Don’t worry uncle. Mujhe kuch nahi hoga. Atu ne mujhe patients logo
se kaise baat karte hai, kaise behave karte hai yeh sab sikhaya hai.” Pankaj
just smiled & said: Rahul tumhari bacchi bohot hoshiyaar hai.” Rahul smiled
& Pankaj went towards the door when Gunu stopped him & said; Uncle, aap
plzz mere dost ko pagal mat kaheye na! Plzzz! Mujhe accha nahi lagta.” Pankaj
just smiled & went out of the room. Pankaj got very angry while others
burst out laughing. Diya said to Gunu: Baccha aisa nahi kehte. Woh…” Rahul
interrupted saying: Diya. Rehne do. Gunu ne thik kaha hai. Tum usse dato mat.
(Turning towards Gunu) Very good Gunu. I’m proud of u.” Gunu gave him a big
smile .

diipendu
July 9, 2009, 12:04 PM
*AT GARDEN*








Riya was watching Gunu & Aadi playing
in the garden when her cell rang. The no. wasn’t similar so she accepted the
call. She asked: Hello??” From opposite side: Hello Riya beti! Kaisi hoo??
Mujhe abhi pata ki tum Maa banana wali hoo. Congrats!!” Riya asked in a stern
tone : Who is this?? Kon bol raha hai??” From opposite side: Tumhare Pita!”
Riya’s eyes widened http://illiweb.com/fa/i/smiles/icon_eek.gif . She warned him: Mujhe phone karne ki himmat kaisi hoye
aapki??? How dare u!!! Ab toh aapne mujhe phone kar diya hai magar phir se call
karne ki koshish mat karma! Samjhe aap??? Warna mujhe aapke khelaf legal action
lena hoga! Mind it !! Mere aur mere bhaiya ke zindagi se aap dorr chale jayeye.”
Saying this she cancelled the call.





Suddenly she felt someone’s
hand on her shoulder. She turned & saw Yash. She hugged him. Yash asked:
Unka phone tha??” Riya said: Kyun http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/714657.gif ??? Kyun woh hume pareshaan kar rahe hai???
Kya chahte hai wo humse??” Yash hugged her tightly, kissed her forehead &
said: Tum chinta mat karo. Aisi halat me tension lena acchi baat nahi hai.
Hmmm??” Riya just nodded her head .








* AT MEHRA MANSION*








Monish was sitting on a royal couch. She
came & hugged him from behind. But he did respond to her. She came in front
of him & asked: Kya hoa hai tumhe?? Itne tension me kyun ho tum???” She was
Monish’s PA as well as his girl friend, Alisha. Monish explained her
everything. He said : Aaditya ke wajah se Riya mujhe se dorr hote ja rahi hai.” He
went on saying her but Alisha was least interested . As he finished she asked:
So?? Ab tum kya karoge??” Monish: Aadi mere raste ka kaata ban gaya hai. Ab mujhe iss
raste ke kaate ho hatana hai.” Saying this he picked up his cell & dialed a
number. He said: Raghu kaha hai??” From opposite side: Woh toh jail me hai. Kal
wo jail se bahar chhotega.” Monish: Thik hai.”





Then after canceling the call
he dialed another no. He said: Sharad, kal Raghu jail se chhot jayaga. Tum usse
receive karma jao aur usse seedha mere secret farm house me lekar aao. Thik
hai??” Sharad: Yes sir!” Saying this he cancelled the call. Alisha asked:
Raghu?? Tumhe usse kya kam hai??” Monish: Kissi ko kahe bhejna hai.” Alisha got
confused & asked: Kisse aur kaha??” Monish gave a vicious smile & said:
Aaditya ko apni Maa aur Pita ki yaad aa
rahe hai na. Toh mujhe usski yeh tadap dekhi nahi jaa rahe hai. Toh socha kyun
na usse unhe ke paas bhej do??” Alisha: Aur Aditi???” Monish uske liye bhi mane
kuch socha kar rakha hai.” He turned towards Alisha & both gave each others
a vicious look . They came close to each other & kissed each other.

diipendu
July 9, 2009, 12:07 PM
They came close to each other & kissed each other.








* AT MR *





Gungun met everyone at MR. Adi introduced her to Anil. He was happy to
meet her. Gungun was shocked to know tht even though Anil wasn’t mentally ill
he was allowed to stay in MR.





* AT ADI’S CABIN*





At 4pm, Aadi & other patients were busy
sleeping while Adi, Diya, Rahul, Riya, Yash, Anup, Anushka & Gungun were
busy chatting with each other. Gunu was sitting on Adi’s lap. Adi & Gunu
were busy playing, laughing http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/916672.gif with each other. Others were happy to see them
laughing. Suddenly Gunu became silent . Tears started pouring from her eyes . Adi
got anxious as wht happened to her. Adi got terrified. She brought her close,
removed tears from Gunu’s cheeks & hugged her tightly. Even others too got
anxious http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/210387.gif .





Adi asked, cuddling her: Kya hoa
baccha tujhe?? Kyun roo rahi hai tu??” Gunu asked crying: Atu?? Kya Aadi thik
ho gayega??? Mujhe usse aise dekh kar bohot bura lagta hai. Atu usse aap plzz
jaldi se thik kar do na!” Adi felt soo bad for her. She said: Gunu I’ll try my
best to treat him. Hmm??” Gunu rubbing her eyes said http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/279872.gif : Atu Aadi bohot aacha hai.
Woh aap se bohot pyaar karta hai.”





After hearing this Adi’s eyes
widened http://illiweb.com/fa/i/smiles/icon_eek.gif . Adi asked: Kya???” Gunu nodded in +tive. Gunu said: Woh aapse bohot pyaar karta hai. Riya Atu ki shaddi se pehla main usse mili thi. Tab mujhe pata chala ki woh aapse pyaar karta hai. Mujhe Aadi bohot pasand hai isliye maine usski madat karne ke liye ha raha.



Riya Atu ki shaddi me hum don one bohot koshish ki aapko batane ki lekin Aadi kabhi bhi aapko bata nahi paya. Woh humesha aapko batane ki koshish karta tha magar uski gale se aawaz he nahi aata tha.” Adi gave her a puzzled look. Gunu asked: Atu aap Aadi se shaddi karogi na??” Adi gave her an anxious look .

diipendu
July 13, 2009, 12:30 AM
* AT PANKAJ’S CABIN*





Pankaj was sitting on his chair thinking as how to take revenge from Aadi & Adi. Suddenly his cell rang. He picked up the call. From
opposite side: Un dono se badla lene ki soch rahe hoo??” Pankaj got shocked. He
asked: Kon bol raha hai??” From opposite side: Tumhara dost! Monish Mehra” The
person told him everything.

Pankaj asked: Tum unke saath kya karne wale
hoo.” Monsih said: I’m going to KILL
THEM .” Monish: Toh kya tum meri madat karoge??” Pankaj smiled wickedly &
said: Ha! Jaroor!!” Both gave out a vicious laugh .










* COMING UP NEXT *





*Flash back, 2yrs back. Riya & Yash's marriage.





* Press
at MR.





*Monish to Raghu (Giving him Aaditya’s pix):
Tumhe isse marna hai.





* Music class.







*By*


*Usha & Diipendu*



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diipendu
August 13, 2009, 12:10 AM
* Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai: 09 *











*RECAP*







1)
Gungun’s
entry. She’s the only daughter of Rahul & Diya.




2)
Gungun
recognizes Aadi as they had met each other in Riya’s marriage & had become
best friends.




3)
She felt
sad after knowing abt Aadi’s mental problem.




4)
Monish
calls Riya & congratulates her but she warns him not to call her again.





5)
Pankaj says
to Gunu not to play with Aadi as he’s a mental patient but Gunu says tht she
knows how to talk & handle him.





6)
Monish
plans to kill Aadi & Adi by sending his one goon. He & Pankaj become
friends.





7)
Gunu says to Adi tht Aadi loved her very much
& even she helped him.





Gunu meets
every patients of MR.



*
Tujhme
Rab Dikhta Hai: 06*





*PRADHAN HOUSE*






* ADI’S
ROOM *






Adi was sitting in her room lost in Gunu’s questions. All questions
were roaming in her mind: Atu kya aap bhi Aadi se pyaar karti hoo?? Aap Aadi se
shaddi karogi na??” Gunu entered the room & saw her lost somewhere. Gunu
came near her & asked: Atu??” But still Adi was lost somewhere. Gunu
brought her lips near Adi’s ears & shouted: Atu!!!” With a jerk Adi came
out of her thoughts. Watching Adi’s condition Gunu burst out laughing. Adi
pulled Gunu towards her & started tickling her.





Later Adi said: Tumhe pata
hai tumne mujhe kitna dara diya!!” Gunu was still laughing. Gunu asked: Aap
Aadi ke bare me socha rahi thi na??” Adi got quiet. Then Adi said: Gunu mujhe
yeh bata ki tera aur Aadi ka toh pehla nahi jamta tha. Tum toh usse baat bhi
nahi karti thi. Phir???” Gunug said; Maine
batati hoo.” Saying this Gunu started narrating the story.













*NEXT DAY, AT MR *




As she entered the
gate of MR, she was surrounded by dozens of reporters, having mikes in their
hand, with their camera men. She climbed down from her car & saw at the
crowd wondering why they were here. As she climbed down the car all reporters
rushed towards her as if there was any kind of race going on & she’s the
end point. She got terrified watching them running towards her. Suddenly she
was pulled by someone. She turned & saw Rahul was holding from her arms. He
said the reporters to stand outside until he calls them inside.





Rahul takes her
inside. After reaching her cabin Adi asked: Bhai! Yeh kya hoo raha hai??? Yeh
reporters??” Rahul breathed heavily & said: Adi!! Maine aur Diya jab yaha aaye toh inn logo ko
yaha dekha. Humne inhe thodi der intazaar karne ko kaha. Aur jab tumhe phone
karne ki koshish ki toh line busy aaya.”
Adi: Ha! Woh main apna cell charge karna bhool gaye thi. Toh cell bandh ho gaya.” Rahul nodded in
+tive. Adi asked: Magar Bhai in logo ko yaha kisne bolaya??? MR me toh kabhi
bhi reporters aaye nahi hai na??” Rahol nodded in +tive & said: Maine bhi yehi socha
raha tha. Waise maine
peon se keh kar hall me chairs lagva diye hai in reporters ke liye. Let’s see
yeh log kya kehte hai.” Adi nodded while peon came & said tht the chairs
have been arranged.



* HALL ROOM *





All
reporters were allowed to seat in the hall room in their respective chairs. Rahul,
Diya, Pankaj ,Adi, Anup, Anushka, Riya & Yash were sitting near Aditi while
other doctors were standing behind them.


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diipendu
August 13, 2009, 12:11 AM
* HALL ROOM *





All
reporters were allowed to seat in the hall room in their respective chairs. Rahul,
Diya, Pankaj ,Adi, Anup, Anushka, Riya & Yash were sitting near Aditi while
other doctors were standing behind them.


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Rahul said: U all can
ask ur
questions one by one. One reporter raised his hand. Rahul asked: Yes?” Tht
reporter asked: Dr. Aditi??” Adi moved her mike near & said: Ya??” Reporter
1: Dr kya aap The Gr8 Business Tycoon Aaditya Kashyap ko treat kar rahi hai???”
Adi (nodding): Ha. Aaditya mera patient hai.” R2: Kya hoa hai Mr. Kashyap ko??”
Adi: Apni Maa ki maut se unha bohot bada sagma hoa hai. Dil par choot lagi hai.
Isliye woh depression me chala jata hai. Aur kabhi kabhi wonka mind dus saal ke
bache jitna hoo jata hai.”





R3: Hume pata chala hai ki kuch dino
pehla Mr. Monish par hamla kiya tha Mr. Kashyap ne??” Adi & Riya got
shocked. R3 cont’d: Aur upar se Mrs. Riya ji ne unhe milne se mana kar diya??
Kya yeh sach hai??” Riya said: Ha! Yeh sach hai.” R4: Lekin Mr. Kashyap ne
unpar hamla kyun kia??” Riya: Kyunki Mr. Monish ne meri Maa ka khoon kiya hai.
Isliye jab Bhaiya ne uss insaan ko dekha toh unhe gussa aa gaya aur unhone Mr. Monish par hamla kiya.”
R5: Toh kya MR ki responsibility nahi hai ki woh apne patients par control
rakhe. Agar Mr. Kashyap ne Mr. Monish par jaan lewa hamla kiya toh…??”





Adi said: Toh eh Mr.
Monish Mehra ki galti hai. Dekhiya, MR ki kuch rules hai. Agar Mr. Monish ko
Aaditya se milna tha toh unhe sabse pehla Mr ke dean, yani ki Dr. Rahul se
permission leni chahiye thi. Phir Aaditya se Dr. ke nate mujhe se permission
leni chahiye thi. Yeh ek basic rule hai jo unhone follow nahi ki. Upar se wo
jante hai ki Aaditya cant bear him. Phir bhi wo unse milne aaya. Mana ki wo
unka beta hai magar yeh MR hai. Yaha bhi kuch rules hai. Jo unhone follow nahi
kiya.” R5: Toh kya Riya ji abhi lagta hai unki Maa ka khon Mr.Monish ne kiya
hai??” Riya: Ha! Mujhe ab bhi yeh lagta hai ki Maa ka khoon Mr. Monish ne kiya
hai. Aur maine
janti hoo ki aapko yeh information kisne diya hai. Mr. Monish ne.”


R6: Aap
itne confidence se kaise keh sakti hai??”


Riya:
Kyunki doctors ke alawa unhe he pata thain sab ke bare me. Ab docs toh batane
se rahe toh baccha kon???” Hearing this a huge conversation started btwn the
reporters.





Monish sitting on a couch
watching this news in a news channel. After hearing this news he gets annoyed.
He calls Pankaj & tells him to meet him at his secret farm house &
gives him the address. Later he calls his private driver to receive Raghu from Central Jai & bring him to his secret farm house.

diipendu
August 13, 2009, 12:14 AM
* ADI’S CABIN *






Adi was again lost in her thoughts. Riya came
into her cabin & saw Adi lost. Riya: Adi??” Adi looked at her & said:
Aree! Riya! Aa na. Waha kya khadi hai??” Riya came inside & says: Adi I’m
bored!!” Adi laughed & said: Chal bata! Kaha jaye??” Riya asked: Tujhe kam
nahi hai kya??’ Adi nodded in-tive & said: Aaj maine thodi der ke liye free hoo.” Riya
getting happy jumped & said: Wow!! Thtz gr8!!” Adi said: AA!! Aste. Jada
kudh mat. Chal na college chalet hai.
Purane din yaad tazza karte hai!” Both looked at each other & gave a
mischievous smile to each other.





* LORENTO COLLEGE *






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She
horned twice to see whether there was any watchman. They saw a man came running
from a distance towards the gate. He removed the gate. They brought their car inside
the gate & halted at the entrance door of the college door. They climbed
down the car.





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They went inside & met their teachers.
All teachers were happy to them. They chatted with them for a while & went
towards the college garden.








Later
they visited the church. Riya prayed to God to make his brother well soon.





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*COLLEGE GARDEN
*




They sat there on a bench
in the corner of the garden. A cool breeze flowed around them.


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They looked at
each other & were lost in their past.

diipendu
August 13, 2009, 12:17 AM
They looked at
each other & were lost in their past.















* 8 YEARS BACK*


*FLASH BACK*






A black Lamborghini stooped
near the ground.




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Two
handsome men climbed down the car. They were in their business suit with their goggs
on. They took a look around. There was a huge crowd gathered at the corner of
the ground. There were two bikes standing on the edge of ground, White &
Black. As the coach whistled, the bikes were in the air. So as to win the race
they increased their pace.








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At last the
white bike won the race.





The crowd cried of joy. The guy
climbed down the bike & looked at the ground. As the helmet was removed both
business suited guys were shocked. It was a girl. Long, shoulder length hair, fair
like a fairy in white suit with white helmet.





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She flew
the kiss to the crowd. The black bike guy climbed down the bike & threw his
helmet on the ground. The girl turned around the see while the guy giving her a
stink eyes goes away. The girl, least bothered, got again engrossed in the
giving flying kiss. .





A girl came running toward her &
hugged her from behind. She looked behind & saw her best friend standing
with a huge smile. They both hugged each other. She said: Congrates Aditi!!!”
Smiling 18yr old Adi said: Thnks Riya!!” 18 yr Riya gave a huge smile. Suddenly
Adi’s attention went towards the Lamborghini Car & those two men standing
right beside the ground. Puzzled Adi asked: Riya! Yeh log kon hai???” Riya turned & shouted: Bhaiya!!!” Riya
ran towards him & hugged him tietly while Adi just followed him. Riya
peeped behind him & smiled. She said: Yash!” Yash smiled & Riya hugged
him.





Riya turned & saw Adi
standing there. Riya introduced her to them. She said looking at her bro: Aadi Bhaiya
yeh meri dost Aditi hai. Aur Adi Yeh mere Bhaiya Aaditya hai.” Aadi: Ohh! Toh
humara pet name same hai. (Giving her a side smile) Hi!!” Adi gave him a
suspicious look from head to toe & then giving a short smile she said: Hi!!”
As he touched her hand a spark of light went through his body. He gave her a
huge smile while she smiled lil.









* COMING UP NEXT *





*Flash
back continues………*












*By*


*Usha & Diipendu*





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