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diipendu
June 13, 2009, 01:48 AM
CHORICHORI CHUPKE | Fri-Sun
CHUPKE CHUPKE:
PROLOGUE
Hello Friends. I am writing a story which is abt Mahek and Pratham. Mahek’s nature is quite similar to my friend’s nature. This story will have 10 to 12 parts. Hope u will like it. No suspense in khalnayak.
.CHARACTERS:
1}Main Characters:
a)Hiten Tejwani as Pratham Mittal, also known as PM
b)Gauri Pradhan Tejwani as Mahek Punj also known as PM.
c) Akshadeep Saigal as Ansh Gujral.
d) Shabbir (Hrishi of Kaahin Toh Hoga) as Krrish Gujral.
e) Abhey Gujral: Harsh of Dulhan)
f) Aditya Gujral( Father of Ansh, Krrish and Abhey)
2} Other Characters:
A] Punj Family.
a) . Shekar Punj =dad of gauri in old kutumb
b) Sumi Punj =mom of gauri in old kutumb
c) Shashank Punj - Deepak Qazir.(Comedy) ,as shekar pradhan’s brother,sanju’s dad.
d) Shanti Punj -Mom of sanjana( dadi of Ek Ladki Anjani si))
(e) Saahil Punj =Saahil of kyunki(in this elder brother of priyanka)
f) Sanjana Punj.Sanju =Ganga of kyunki(cousin sis of Mahek, Mahek’s chacu’s daughter.
g) Komal Punj,Komo-=Rakshanda khan,Younger sis of gauri in this.
h) Niharika Punj :Nihu: Mansi Verma ( same of TLS)
i) Kasak Punj- Surveen chawla. .(Comedy)
j) Vicky khanna- Vikas Seth( Abhir of Kyunki) .(Comedy)
k)Pari Malhotra –Maninee Mishra.(Comedy)
l)Bobby darling. .(Comedy)
m) Riya Mittal =Sneha of Kasautii.
n)Dara Singh as Siddharth Punj.
o)Dadi of Kavvanjali as Mahek’s dadi.
p)Saahil of kyunki as Aryan Mittal.
q) Eijaz Khan as Nishant Mittal.
r) Yash Tonk as Yash Mittal. .(Comedy)
s) Punit Mittal: Vrajesh Hirjee(Comedy)
.Intro of the story:
Most important thing is tht ki Pratham’s family,i.e., his mom and dad, are not there. They died in a plane crash when all were small. They were killed by Aditya Gujral. Yash and Punit were adopted sons of Pratham’s father and mother. Sumi and Shanti Jethani- Devrani.
After the death of Pratham’s family Punj family took care of pratham and others. They treated them like their own child and grand children. They gave everything. They made the strong, self reliant so tht they will take revenge from Aditya Gujral..
Then later PM became ACP. Aryan becomes Advocate. Kunal becomes Boxer, Yash becomes A spy. And Riya becomes an Forensic expert. And Punit becomes a computer master. Yash loves riya.
In this story Saahil is ACP. Sanju, mehek, komu, nihu r like dons in their colony.
All of them r good in fighting. They r like Angles to the people. When ever sumi shouted at any of them all colony people used to get angry. They were like socialist. Surveen,i.e., Kasak is Qazir,i.e.,Shashank’s daughter. Kasak is in love with Vicy ,i.e,. Vikas. Everyone likes their jodi .But Shashank hates him. His thinking was tht only a military man will marry his daughter. Shashank has a moustache like an military officer., Big one.(HEHEHEHE)
Baki sab u will come to know. Hope u will like this part. Do Comment
Usha.
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Concept - Usha
Produced By - Usha
Episodes Directed By - Diipendu Dutta
Creative Head - Diipendu Dutta
Production Group - S Creations
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June 13, 2009, 02:14 AM
waiting 4 it to start !!
diipendu
June 14, 2009, 02:51 AM
Ø Chori chori chupke chupke
Hello. I am back with my new story CHORI CHORI CHUPKE CHUPKE. It’s a comedy story. Hope tht u will like it. I got a lot of comments regarding this story. Hope tht u will continue ur comments. And plzz tell me if there are some mistakes or something u all didn’t understand. I’ll surely help u.
Ø Chori chori chupke chupke
Delhi. A big city which has lakhs of peoples. HMM so beautiful. The streets are so quiet. Hey whtz tht. A man is snatching a woman’s purse. He snatched it and started running. Suddenly his way was stopped by a Black Scorpio car. From tht climbed down seven people. 2 boys and 5 girls. All had worn black top with black pant. Tht thief’s face turned white with fear as if he has seen a gang of ghost. He took a different direction and started running. All seven people with a gr8 force stared running behind him. 2 girls took a short cut to reach him. In no time the thief was surrounded by those 7.
Saahil came running and made 180 degree circle on the ground and the thief fell on the ground. He saw a girl coming towards him. She had black hairs, black brown eyes which had anger, she is Mahek. ( Mahek denoted as PM2): I hate crime.’’ Saying this she gives tht a big punch and kicks him down to ground. ‘’AAAAAAAaa’ ’ A noise came from front.6 more thieves were running towards them. But they were ready. With one kick and one punch they all fell down on the ground. They were better than ninjas and boxers. No BEST. At the same time police came and took them and took those thieves with them. They were Saahil(ACP), Sanjana, Mahek(PM), Komal, Niharika, Kasak and Vicky. Komal took the purse and gave it to that woman. Woman thanked her.Saahil: Chalo aaj phir ek mujrim pakda gaya.’’ Sanju: Ha. Hey PM chal. Chal kar party karte hai.’’ PM2: Hai chal. Lekin kaha???’’ Komu: Aree apna ROCK AND ROLL CLUB. Toh.. Chale???’’ All nodded.
AT THE SAME TIME:
In Nanital, a culprit was running faster than a horse. He was followed by an ACP. They saw a grass land beside him. He just layed on that land so tht he could be invisible from the eyesight of ACP. ACP came and looked here and there. He couldn’t find the culprit. In disappointment he went away. That culprit got up and turned. He got afraid as he saw a man with dark blue shrit with lite blue jeans and with black gogs. He was ACP. The culprit said in fear: PMMM!!!!!’’ ACP: Yes, PM. PRATHAM MITTAL.’’(Pratham will be denoted as PM1) He gave him a forceful punch. Then the culprit started running. ‘’SHOOT HIM!!!’’, shouted his officials to PM1. He took his gun and adjusted him gun towards the target. His target was 30 feet’s away from him. With concentration he pressed his trigger. And the culprit fell on the ground. From backside came a big black car, Travelta. 4 boys climbed down the car. They had worn black shirt with black jeans with black googs. ‘Good bhai.’’ Kunal told. They were Aryun, Kunal, Yash and Punit. There seniors came and told to them: Good job.’’ They all: Thank you sir.’’ Kunal: Bhai chal na masti karte hai.’’ Aryan smilingly: Kaha pe??” PM1: Rocking Club.(looking everyone) Chale??’’ All: Chalooo!!!!!!!
( Song is Dhoom again. THIS SONG IS FOR BOTH. Dances r the same. The starting part of
Hrithik, think abt Pratham and his brothers. And of Ash think abt Mahek and her sis and bro. And between the music think abt Sanju-Saahil and Kasak-Vicky.)
dhoom again and run away with meon a rollercoaster ridedhoom again and see your wildestdreamsslowly come alivedhoom again and gotta break therulesand party all the timedhoom againwe gotta steal theshowyou know that ain't no crimeso steal all that you canthe magic you begunlet's shout,break outcomes on once againlets hear itdhoom machaale.........dhoom againand feel the beat ofthe rythemrythem of the nightdhoom again and hear the voicescallingcreatures of the nightdhoom again and see the shadowsdancingin the pale moonlightdhoom againa and feel yourheartbeat pumpingnow the time is rightso go walk out the doorget down....get on the floorlet's shout break outcome on once again let's hear itdhoom machaleand when love comes your wayyou'll know its here to stayyou'll steal the chance 'cose you'rethe thief of hearts yeahyou'll win with a galancewalk away with your romancethere's no more ther's no backingout nowdhoom again and make the wholeworld crazyset your spirit freedhoom again anf take a break rightnowcome celeberate with medhoom again 'cos all wanna dois steal the showsomehowshoom again 'cos all i wanna sayis hey the time is nowlet nothing get you downgo out and paint the townlet;s shout break outcome on once again lets hear itdoom machale....
In Punj house, Sumi was busy in kitchen. As she heard the door bell, she came running towards the door bell. She got shocked because she never expected them. She saw her sasur, husband and devar on the door footsteps. She exclaimed: Aap. Lekin aap toh kal aane wala the Nanital se,aaj kaise???? Kaam khatam ho gaya???’’ Shekar: Saab idhar he puchogi???’’ She looked all surrounding. She smiled nad said: Sorry. Aaeye.’’ They all came inside. Shanti coming out of the kitchen: Kaun hai didi??’’ AS she saw them she smiled and run inside the kitchen. She came out of the kitchen with three glass of water. Siddarth: Bacche kaha hai???’’ Hearing smile disappeared from Sumi’s face: Social service karne gaye hai.’’ Siddarth: Kya hua bahu?? Kya baat hai???’’ Shanti watches Sumi and nods her head in negative. Sumi: Chup reh tu shanti. Apko pata hai kal kya hoa???” Shekar: Kya hoa??” Sumi: Kal Mahek ko dekhne aachanak ladke wala aaye the. Toh ussene ladke walo se maafi maga aur kaha ki who shaddi nahi karegi. Aur use Panditji ko jhadu se mara.’’ Shekar,Siddarth and Shashank together: Kya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
diipendu
June 14, 2009, 02:56 AM
Ø CHORI CHORI CHUPKE CHUPKE: part 2
Hello friends. I am back with 2nd part of 4C(Its short form). Plzzzzz read the part and tell me about ur views.
Ø CHORI CHORI CHUPKE CHUPKE: part 2
Shekar came there and give a file to Mahek. She said: Yee kya hai???’’ Shekar: Ek file. Isme ek ladke ka photo hai.” Pm2: Dad plzzzz u don’t start now” Shekar: Plz beta. Ek baar dekhoo. Plzzzz.” She looked at him and nodded. She knew tht she will never force her. She opened tht file. ‘’ Yee kaun hai???’’ PM2. Pratham. Pratham Mittal. Umesh ka beta.” She looked at him clearly: Sanju idhar aaa zara.” Sanju came towards her and looked at the photo. Both started thinking. Looking at each other: YEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! ”
They were surrounded by Nihu, Kasu, Komu, Saahil and Vicky. PM2: Hey toh wahi traffic wala hai na??” Sanju: Nahi. Airport wala.. Hai na??” Komu: NOO. Flirt guy. Mahek: Exactly. ( Looking at Shekar] kya ye Pratham hai???” Nodding in positive Shekar: Tum isse kaha mile thi???” Mahek: Nanital mein. Last year mein aur Sanju picnic ke liye gaye the. Yaad hai??? Waha mile the. U know dad, he is damn flirt guy. Who airport maine jo ticket collector hote hai na unko bhi nahi choodta hai ye. My god.” Sumi: Tunhe ussese baad ki?? PM2: Ha. Who actually ye hoa.(Remembering)
FLASHBACK:
In Nanital, the street was full of car. Landslide had taken place. Also a thief had escaped. Thtz y PM and other were present. Due to this there was traffic. Mahek and Sanju were sitting in a cab. The window of the cab was little bit open. PM was busy in reading some files. Suddenly he saw a taxi. In tht he saw Mahek’s beautiful brown laughing eyes. Tht cab was 3 feet away from him. He was just busy in watching her. At the same time Aryan, Kunal, Yash and Punit arrived. They saw him watching someone. Aryan keeping his hand on PM’s shoulder: Kya hoa. Kisse dekh raha hai??? PM pointed towards Mahek. All of them looked at her. They kept their mouth wide open. Suddenly Mahek looked at them. Sanju too watched them. PM fell in a trance of her beauty. He was so lost in his thoughts tht he fell down. Both Sanju and Mhek started laughing:lol: . PM gets up and watches Mahek. Mahek then got busy in reading a book. After sometime when she looked at him he was still looking at her. She felt very uncomfortable. Sanju also looked at both of them and started smiling. Mahek got very angry. Then a police inspector came towards the cab and called them out of the cab. Then checking took place. PM got a golden chance. He came near the cab. He said: Inspector aap jao maine dekhta hoo.” Inspector nods and goes away.
PM looks at Mahek but she ignored him. She turned her face. Sanju: Kya hoa hai?? Kab traffic khatma hoga??? PM looking at Mahek(trying to impress her): Woh…… ek choor bhag gaya hai. Toh MAINE:D (specifying) ussko pakadne ke liya….” AS Mahek heared choor she turned and said before he could complete his words: Kya. Chor bhag gaya???” PM looked at her deep beautiful eyes strangely. PM: Ha.” Sanju kept her hand on Mahek’s shoulder indicating wht she was talking. Mahek then kept herself calm. PM got happy after hearing her voice. Police started checking the cab. Then a he told them to go. PM wanted to talk to her. Sanju and Mahek were going to sit into the cab when a police man came near Mahek and said: Madam. Aap kya MISS INDIA ya fir MISS UNIVERSE hai kya???” Mahek got puzzled: Kyun?” Police man: Woh aap bohot sundar dehk thi hai.” Mahek looked at him in anger. She started fuming with anger:(Smiling) Thnk u. (Catching his coller) Muhje lagta hai ki aapko aapne kam par zada dhyan rakhna chahiye. Cab driver: Madam chaliye.” Sanju: Chalo”. Mahek leaved his coller and looked at PM in anger. She went towards the cab and sat inside the cab. Then the cab went towards the airport. Pantnagar is the nearest airport (71km from there). Tht Police inspector got scared. PM got felt it very strange.
In Airport, Sanju and Mahek were sitting on one of the bench. PM followed them and reached the airport. He saw them going to check their tickets (a person which checks the ticket inside the airport. For checking their tickets, a woman was there. She was beautiful. But not beautiful more than Mahek. PM went towards her and started talking with her. He was trying to make Mahek an impression. He took her hand and started telling abt her future husband. Mahek and Sanju were standing in line. When their turn came the woman was busy in talking with PM. Mahek got irritated. Not bcoz she was getting jealous but bcoz her time was getting wasted. They waited for 5 mins. But no response. Mahek was short tempered. She just banged her hand on the desk. Everyone looked Woman: Sorry wohh… (Removing her ticket) maine… (Smiling, looking at the ticket) Ohh aap Delhi jane wali hai??” Mahek: Ha.” She sat on the bench. Sanju brought two cups of coffee for both of them and had their coffee. PM was just looking at her. She was getting very angry. She was reading her book and was moving from here to there. Suddenly she fell down. When she saw back she was dumped by a small boy. She sat on the floor and looked at tht boy. Tht boy was just 3 yrs old. He had got scared after seeing her behavior with tht woman. Mahek was really getting angry. But when she saw tht boy’s cute face her heart melted. She smiled, waved her hand on his head and asked: Kya hoa??? Tum gir gaye????” She made him stand up on his legs. She sat on her knees and asked: Tumhara naam kya hai???” Tht boy: Hrishi. Ek baat kaho???” PM2: Kaho.” Tht boy: Aap kya MISS INDIA ya fir MISS UNIVERSE hai kya???” Mahek(Smiling): Kyun??” Tht boy: Woh aap bohot sundar dehk thi hai.” Mahek looked at him and smiled and said: Nahi. But u r very cute.” She kissed him on his head and asked: Aap kaha ja rahe ho??” Tht Boy: Delhi.” PM2: WOOW!! Maine bhi. Chalo plane mein betkar masti karege.” He nodded. He went running towards his parents. PM watched this whole affair. Sanju: Chal Mahu(They also called mahek mahu).” Mahek got up and looked at PM who was busy watching her. She ignored him. Tht boy came running towards him and they all went towards the exit door. PM was gonna stop her but she went away. Suddenly PM2 cell rang and she picked it up and exclaimed: Mamma!! Woow kaisi ho??? Hum abhi airport par hai. Jaldi aange.” Sumi: Thik hai. Bye” Mahek: Bye.
FLASHBACK ends:
Everyone looked at her and started laughing. PM2: Kya hoa?? Ussme hasne jaisa kya hai????” Siddarth: Nahi. Hum Pratham par has rahe the. Bada Flirt hai. Pata hai humme.” PM2: Aur aap aise insaan se meri shaddi karwana chahte hai???” Sumi: aise insaan matlab?? Toh tuhje kaisa pati chaheye??” PM2(moving here and there like old film actress): Joh bahoot handsome hoo. Joh bahot accha hoh. Joh mujhese pyaar kare. Sirf muhjese. Joh mere pyaar ko samjhe. Joh mere feelings samhje. Joh mere….” Sumi: Ha. Mera pratham bahot accha hai. Tujhse aur bhi sundar, intelligent hai.” PM2: Kya matlab??? Muhjese bhi intelligent. Muhje intelligent sirf mera dreamboy hai. Woh PM nahi. Woh toh buddhu hai.” Sumi (pointing her fingers towards Mahek) AA mera pratham bahot intelligent hai ha. Bohot se cases solve kiye hai ussne. Har paheli ka raaz janta hai woh” PM2: Acchaaaaa, Thik hai. Muhje waqt chahiye.
Angles bedroom:
Angles were sitting on bed and on the phone riya was there. The phone was on speaker. PM2: Maine ek plan karonge jo sabit karega ki woh intelligent nahi hai. Muhjse toh nahi. Lekin…” She turned towards them and gave a naughty smile: Pratham Mittal aa rahe hai. Usse welcome karne ki responsibility humari hai. Usse welcome hum aapne tarike se karenge.” All understood wht she wanted to tell. Vicky: Itna bata diya hai toh tumhara plan kya hai ye bhi bata do.” PM2 smiling: Ha. Toh suno….” Saying this she started describing her plan. Everyone understood wht was there work.
Coming up: Mahek was running with Pratham’s laptop. Pratham: Hey. “Chorrr Chorr!!!!!!!!!!!.”.
Usha.
diipendu
June 14, 2009, 02:59 AM
In Punj house, Sumi was busy in kitchen. As she heard the door bell, she came running towards the door bell. She got shocked because she never expected them. She saw her sasur, husband and devar on the door footsteps. She exclaimed: Aap. Lekin aap toh kal aane wala the Nanital se,aaj kaise???? Kaam khatam ho gaya???’’ Shekar: Saab idhar he puchogi???’’ She looked all surrounding. She smiled nad said: Sorry. Aaeye.’’ They all came inside. Shanti coming out of the kitchen: Kaun hai didi??’’ AS she saw them she smiled and run inside the kitchen. She came out of the kitchen with three glass of water. Siddarth: Bacche kaha hai???’’ Hearing smile disappeared from Sumi’s face: Social service karne gaye hai.’’ Siddarth: Kya hua bahu?? Kya baat hai???’’ Shanti watches Sumi and nods her head in negative. Sumi: Chup reh tu shanti. Apko pata hai kal kya hoa???” Shekar: Kya hoa??” Sumi: Kal Mahek ko dekhne aachanak ladke wala aaye the. Toh ussene ladke walo se maafi maga aur kaha ki who shaddi nahi karegi. Aur use Panditji ko jhadu se mara.’’ Shekar,Siddarth and Shashank together: Kya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
A loud sound came : Hiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!’’ Shekar: Areee mere bacche aa gaye.’’ Mahek and other came towards them. Hugging them Mahek said: Aap itne jaldi aayee. WOow thtz gr8. U know we all missed u a lot." Shekar to Mahek: Tumne pandit ke sath kya kiya??? They looked at Sumi and Nihu said: Ohh toh aate he mom ne complaints batana shuru kiya. Gr8.’’ She got annoyed with sumi. Shekar: Tum lag aisa kise kar sakte ho. Humare aanae se pehele tumne Pandit ko mara. YYYYY. Humhe bhi mazza lena tha. Kya Shashank??? Shashank: Hain bhiya. U r right.’’ Everyone looked at them and laughed. ’’ Shekar: Gr8. Accha kiya. Usse pandit ko asee he hona chahiye. Hamesha jabardasti karta hai.’’ Sumi looked at him in anger.” Mahek: Ohh . U all r soooooooo sweet. Next time I’ll keep tht in mind.’’ Sumi was fuming with anger:evil: . Shanti got happy tht they all didn’t shouted at them. As Shashank looked at Vicky he got angry. Shashank: Tum??’’ Vicky in fear: HHHHEELOOO Uncle:pale: .’’ Shashank nodded. Kasu got angry. But she kept quiet. Siddrath: Beta kaise ho??” Vicky: Fine dadu.” Siddarth nodded and smiled.
IN NANITAL:
Pratham came out of his bathroom. He was wiping his hair with a towel. He saw an image of a girl who was standing behind him wearing blue sleeveless Punjabi. He smiled and exclaimed: Riya!!!.” Riya too smiled: Hi bhaiya. Take juice." From gym room Yash came out. He looked at riya. She was looking like angle. He smiled and said: Hi.” She looked at him and smiled. Hi! Take juice. Aur backi sab ko de dena. Bhaiya maine kitchen maine jati hoo. Khana banana hai.” PM1 nodded. Yash followed her. When PM1 noticed it he smiled. Then turned towards the mirror. He saw Mahek. He got happy. (Guys He doesn’t know his name, address nothing. U all will come to u when did they met in the next part). But when he turned back there was no one. He just waved his hand towards his hair and smiled.
When Mahek and others got fresh they came out of their room. Mahek and her sis had same room while Saahil in other. They came down in the hall. Mahek had worn Blue sleeveless top and short white skirt. She caught her dadu from backside and said: Hi Boy friend.( She used to call him boy friend and her dadi her saut, hehehehehe:D Then she sat beside him. Sunaina came and sat beside Siddrath. PM2: Hi Mere Saut.” Sunaina looked at her and laughed. Shekar came there and give a file to Mahek. She said: Yee kya hai???’’ Shekar: Ek file. Ism eek ladke ka photo hai.” Pm2: Dad plzzzz u don’t start now” Shekar: Plz beta. Ek baar dekhoo. Plzzzz.” She looked at him and nodded. She knew tht she will never force her. She opened tht file. ‘’ Yee kaun hai???’’ PM2. Pratham. Pratham Mittal. Umesh ka beta.” She looked at him clearly: Sanju idhar aaa zara.” Sanju came towards her and looked at the photo. Both started thinking. Together: YEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
COMING UP: “AABB AYAEGA MAZZA” Mahek gave a mirthful smile:twisted: .
Ab kya hoga???? Kya Pratham aur Mahek ek dusre ko jante hai?????? Kaise??? Kab?????
U will come to know abt it soon. DO COMMENT.
Usha:D .
~k!nG oF QuEenZ~
June 14, 2009, 01:00 PM
nice story
diipendu
June 27, 2009, 04:00 PM
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Ø CHORI CHORI CHUPKE CHUPKE: part 2
Hello friends. I am back with 2nd part of 4C(Its short form). Plzzzzz read the part and tell me about ur views.
Ø CHORI CHORI CHUPKE CHUPKE: part 2
Shekar came there and give a file to Mahek. She said: Yee kya hai???’’ Shekar: Ek file. Isme ek ladke ka photo hai.” Pm2: Dad plzzzz u don’t start now” Shekar: Plz beta. Ek baar dekhoo. Plzzzz.” She looked at him and nodded. She knew tht she will never force her. She opened tht file. ‘’ Yee kaun hai???’’ PM2. Pratham. Pratham Mittal. Umesh ka beta.” She looked at him clearly: Sanju idhar aaa zara.” Sanju came towards her and looked at the photo. Both started thinking. Looking at each other: YEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! ”
They were surrounded by Nihu, Kasu, Komu, Saahil and Vicky. PM2: Hey toh wahi traffic wala hai na??” Sanju: Nahi. Airport wala.. Hai na??” Komu: NOO. Flirt guy. Mahek: Exactly. ( Looking at Shekar] kya ye Pratham hai???” Nodding in positive Shekar: Tum isse kaha mile thi???” Mahek: Nanital mein. Last year mein aur Sanju picnic ke liye gaye the. Yaad hai??? Waha mile the. U know dad, he is damn flirt guy. Who airport maine jo ticket collector hote hai na unko bhi nahi choodta hai ye. My god.” Sumi: Tunhe ussese baad ki?? PM2: Ha. Who actually ye hoa.(Remembering)
FLASHBACK:
In Nanital, the street was full of car. Landslide had taken place. Also a thief had escaped. Thtz y PM and other were present. Due to this there was traffic. Mahek and Sanju were sitting in a cab. The window of the cab was little bit open. PM was busy in reading some files. Suddenly he saw a taxi. In tht he saw Mahek’s beautiful brown laughing eyes. Tht cab was 3 feet away from him. He was just busy in watching her. At the same time Aryan, Kunal, Yash and Punit arrived. They saw him watching someone. Aryan keeping his hand on PM’s shoulder: Kya hoa. Kisse dekh raha hai??? PM pointed towards Mahek. All of them looked at her. They kept their mouth wide open. Suddenly Mahek looked at them. Sanju too watched them. PM fell in a trance of her beauty. He was so lost in his thoughts tht he fell down. Both Sanju and Mhek started laughing:lol: . PM gets up and watches Mahek. Mahek then got busy in reading a book. After sometime when she looked at him he was still looking at her. She felt very uncomfortable. Sanju also looked at both of them and started smiling. Mahek got very angry. Then a police inspector came towards the cab and called them out of the cab. Then checking took place. PM got a golden chance. He came near the cab. He said: Inspector aap jao maine dekhta hoo.” Inspector nods and goes away.
PM looks at Mahek but she ignored him. She turned her face. Sanju: Kya hoa hai?? Kab traffic khatma hoga??? PM looking at Mahek(trying to impress her): Woh…… ek choor bhag gaya hai. Toh MAINE:D (specifying) ussko pakadne ke liya….” AS Mahek heared choor she turned and said before he could complete his words: Kya. Chor bhag gaya???” PM looked at her deep beautiful eyes strangely. PM: Ha.” Sanju kept her hand on Mahek’s shoulder indicating wht she was talking. Mahek then kept herself calm. PM got happy after hearing her voice. Police started checking the cab. Then a he told them to go. PM wanted to talk to her. Sanju and Mahek were going to sit into the cab when a police man came near Mahek and said: Madam. Aap kya MISS INDIA ya fir MISS UNIVERSE hai kya???” Mahek got puzzled: Kyun?” Police man: Woh aap bohot sundar dehk thi hai.” Mahek looked at him in anger. She started fuming with anger:(Smiling) Thnk u. (Catching his coller) Muhje lagta hai ki aapko aapne kam par zada dhyan rakhna chahiye. Cab driver: Madam chaliye.” Sanju: Chalo”. Mahek leaved his coller and looked at PM in anger. She went towards the cab and sat inside the cab. Then the cab went towards the airport. Pantnagar is the nearest airport (71km from there). Tht Police inspector got scared. PM got felt it very strange.
In Airport, Sanju and Mahek were sitting on one of the bench. PM followed them and reached the airport. He saw them going to check their tickets (a person which checks the ticket inside the airport. For checking their tickets, a woman was there. She was beautiful. But not beautiful more than Mahek. PM went towards her and started talking with her. He was trying to make Mahek an impression. He took her hand and started telling abt her future husband. Mahek and Sanju were standing in line. When their turn came the woman was busy in talking with PM. Mahek got irritated. Not bcoz she was getting jealous but bcoz her time was getting wasted. They waited for 5 mins. But no response. Mahek was short tempered. She just banged her hand on the desk. Everyone looked Woman: Sorry wohh… (Removing her ticket) maine… (Smiling, looking at the ticket) Ohh aap Delhi jane wali hai??” Mahek: Ha.” She sat on the bench. Sanju brought two cups of coffee for both of them and had their coffee. PM was just looking at her. She was getting very angry. She was reading her book and was moving from here to there. Suddenly she fell down. When she saw back she was dumped by a small boy. She sat on the floor and looked at tht boy. Tht boy was just 3 yrs old. He had got scared after seeing her behavior with tht woman. Mahek was really getting angry. But when she saw tht boy’s cute face her heart melted. She smiled, waved her hand on his head and asked: Kya hoa??? Tum gir gaye????” She made him stand up on his legs. She sat on her knees and asked: Tumhara naam kya hai???” Tht boy: Hrishi. Ek baat kaho???” PM2: Kaho.” Tht boy: Aap kya MISS INDIA ya fir MISS UNIVERSE hai kya???” Mahek(Smiling): Kyun??” Tht boy: Woh aap bohot sundar dehk thi hai.” Mahek looked at him and smiled and said: Nahi. But u r very cute.” She kissed him on his head and asked: Aap kaha ja rahe ho??” Tht Boy: Delhi.” PM2: WOOW!! Maine bhi. Chalo plane mein betkar masti karege.” He nodded. He went running towards his parents. PM watched this whole affair. Sanju: Chal Mahu(They also called mahek mahu).” Mahek got up and looked at PM who was busy watching her. She ignored him. Tht boy came running towards him and they all went towards the exit door. PM was gonna stop her but she went away. Suddenly PM2 cell rang and she picked it up and exclaimed: Mamma!! Woow kaisi ho??? Hum abhi airport par hai. Jaldi aange.” Sumi: Thik hai. Bye” Mahek: Bye.
FLASHBACK ends:
Everyone looked at her and started laughing. PM2: Kya hoa?? Ussme hasne jaisa kya hai????” Siddarth: Nahi. Hum Pratham par has rahe the. Bada Flirt hai. Pata hai humme.” PM2: Aur aap aise insaan se meri shaddi karwana chahte hai???” Sumi: aise insaan matlab?? Toh tuhje kaisa pati chaheye??” PM2(moving here and there like old film actress): Joh bahoot handsome hoo. Joh bahot accha hoh. Joh mujhese pyaar kare. Sirf muhjese. Joh mere pyaar ko samjhe. Joh mere feelings samhje. Joh mere….” Sumi: Ha. Mera pratham bahot accha hai. Tujhse aur bhi sundar, intelligent hai.” PM2: Kya matlab??? Muhjese bhi intelligent. Muhje intelligent sirf mera dreamboy hai. Woh PM nahi. Woh toh buddhu hai.” Sumi (pointing her fingers towards Mahek) AA mera pratham bahot intelligent hai ha. Bohot se cases solve kiye hai ussne. Har paheli ka raaz janta hai woh” PM2: Acchaaaaa, Thik hai. Muhje waqt chahiye.
Angles bedroom:
Angles were sitting on bed and on the phone riya was there. The phone was on speaker. PM2: Maine ek plan karonge jo sabit karega ki woh intelligent nahi hai. Muhjse toh nahi. Lekin…” She turned towards them and gave a naughty smile: Pratham Mittal aa rahe hai. Usse welcome karne ki responsibility humari hai. Usse welcome hum aapne tarike se karenge.” All understood wht she wanted to tell. Vicky: Itna bata diya hai toh tumhara plan kya hai ye bhi bata do.” PM2 smiling: Ha. Toh suno….” Saying this she started describing her plan. Everyone understood wht was there work.
Coming up: Mahek was running with Pratham’s laptop. Pratham: Hey. “Chorrr Chorr!!!!!!!!!!!.”.
Usha.
diipendu
June 27, 2009, 04:04 PM
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diipendu
June 27, 2009, 04:05 PM
Chori Chori Chupke Chupke: Part: 3(i)
Hello friends. Back with 3rd part. Hope u all will like it. If I’m wrong anywhere then plzz tell me about it.
Chori Chori Chupke Chupke: Part: 3(i)
Angles were sitting on bed and on the phone riya was there. The phone was on speaker. PM2: Maine ek plan karonge jo sabit karega ki woh intelligent nahi hai. Muhjse toh nahi. Lekin…” She turned towards them and gave a naughty smile: Pratham Mittal aa rahe hai. Usse welcome karne ki responsibility humari hai. Usse welcome hum aapne tarike se karenge.” All understood wht she wanted to tell. Vicky: Itna bata diya hai toh tumhara plan kya hai ye bhi bata do.” PM2 smiling: Ha. Toh suno….” Saying this she started describing her plan. Everyone understood wht was there work.
Next day, at 8am, Angles climbed down the stairs. Mahe: Maa We r getting late. Kuch khane ko dona.” In kitchen Sumi replied: Laa rahe hoo. Bas do minute.” Then she came out with a bowl and a food box. The box had parathas and in bowl it was pickles. Angles did their breakfast. Suddenly Mahek’s cell phone started ringing. Accepting the call she whispered: Haa Arjun( Alek from LRL). Kuch pata chala??” Arjun: Ha. Pratham toh kal he Darjeeling me aa cuka hai.” Mahu: Fine. Tune tickets toh book kiye hai na??” Arjun: Haa. Don’t worry. Woh sab hoo gaya hai.” Mahu: Fine me rakhti hoo. Mom ko tu yaha aa aur bata ki hum trip ke liye Darjeeling jaaa rahe hai. Ok??” Arjun agreed and cancelled the call. After canceling the call Vicky enquired Mahu in a low voice: When r we leaving for airport.” Kasak: Soon.” Then after few seconds Arjun with his GF Tanu( Reshmi Ghosh) reached Sumi’s house and said her tht they r getting bored now-a-days, so they have decided to visit Darjeeling. But they need her and others permission. Netheir Sumi nor dadi nor Shanti restricted their children to go anywhere. They knew they can take care of themselves as well as of others. So they agreed and gave permission to visit Darjeeling. Angles had already packed their bags as they knew their parents would agree.
At 2pm they had their flit. They reached Darjeeling at dusk. Arjun had a house in Darjeeling. Mahek had already informed Sumi that they had reached their destination in one piece. Then Mahek made dinner for others. And at night they discussed their plan.
At cock-crow they got ready to start their plan. At 8 Arjun called in CID office from PCO. He asked for PM. When PM took the phone Arjun started crying (in a offend tone): Sahab….” PM( in bold tone): Yes.” Arju: Saheb maine maara jaoonga. Woh muhje maar dalengi.. ” PM: Kon?? Tum kaha hoo??” Arju: Maine shooping center ke paas… “Saying this he cut off the line. Arju turned and smiled at others. Mahek( smiling): Ab aayega mazza:twisted: .”
Parked his car beside the shopping center, PM came out of the car. On the other hand, Angles were sitting in their Scorpio car. They saw PM coming out of his car. Angles had parked their car behind the wall opposite to PM. PM2( Mahu) Came out of the car. She was wearing a black gown which had a slit at the side. It had little bit deep neck. She had worn diamond necklace with similar earrings gifted by dadu to her. Arju and Vicky just kept on staring at her keeping their mouth wide open. Mahek( in stylish tone): How I’m looking???” Vicky and Arju both: Hot and Sexy.” Girls too nodded on this comment. Kasak: Di agar PM apko iss roop dekhega toh toh faint hoo jayega.” Mahek: I know darling. Well toh maine chalti hoo.” Vicky: Kaha???” Arjun: Kyun tu nahi janta??? Tune file nahi padi??’” Vicky: Kunsi file????” Niharika: Well leave it now. Baad me padna. Abhi PM di aap joo.” Mahek nods and goes away from there.
PM was working on his mobile. He had worn stylish glasses. His back was facing Mahek. She kept her hand on PM’s shoulder. First he looked at her hand and turned towards her to see who she was. He was shocked to see her. He couldn’t believe his eyes. He remembered her. He had never forgotten her. He remembered each and every moment. He used to pray that once he could she her. And now his aspiration was full filled. She looked dashing. She too had worn light blue glasses. She was grinning at him. Mahu: Hello.” He remembers me, Mahu thought. PM(Smiling): Hi.” Mahu; Kya aap ke address kaha hai jante hai????” She could recognize smile fading from PM’s face. He was not expecting this type of question. PM: Sorry???’” Mahek: Well dekhiye Maine yaha nayee hoo. Toh kya aap muhje VICEROY HOTEL ka rasta batayenge???” PM; Actually maine yaha khud naya hooo. So Sorry...” Mahek: Oooohhh it’s ok. I’ll ask someone else.” Saying this she turned her attention towards his car. She saw a laptop in PM’s car. PM said to her: Wow nice chain(the chain was made of beeds).” Mahu: Ha. Maine kal mele(FAIR) me se liya tha. AAJ BHI MAINE WAHI JAONGI. Well nice car. Maine chalti hoo.” Saying this she went away. PM realized that he should have asked her for lift. When he turned to ask her she had already gone away.
Vicky was watching the whole scene through his binoculars. Vicky: Yaar ye PM kaha gaye.” A voice came from behind. Yahi toh hoo.” “ Tu itne jaldi kisse??” Vicky asked. “Bhagkar aaye hoo” PM2( For mahu PM2) said. Turning to her car she removed a gaun which covered her head and face. It was of black colour. Wearing that guan she asked Komal: Komo tujhe pata hai na ki kya karma hai???” Komal nodded in +tive. Komo went infront of the wall opposite to PM.
Pratham was searching Mahu here and there. He didn’t even ask her name. Then suddenly his attention turned towards Komal who was reading a newspaper. She was wearing black skirt and blue top with her hairs open. He had worn brown shoe with hill. She smiled at him and vice- versa. Then he again started searching for Mahu. He had already forgotten y had he came there. Then again he was attracted to see Komal due to her expression. She was just staring at him. She looked stunned. When he asked her what happened through his actions she pointed towards his back. When he again asked her she did the same. When he turned back he saw a man wearing gaun had his laptop. Then he turned towards Komal.
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diipendu
June 27, 2009, 04:06 PM
Pratham was searching Mahu here and there. He didn’t even ask her name. Then suddenly his attention turned towards Komal who was reading a newspaper. She was wearing black skirt and blue top with her hairs open. He had worn brown shoe with hill. She smiled at him and vice- versa. Then he again started searching for Mahu. He had already forgotten y had he came there. Then again he was attracted to see Komal due to her expression. She was just staring at him. She looked stunned. When he asked her what happened through his actions she pointed towards his back. When he again asked her she did the same. When he turned back he saw a man wearing gaun had his laptop. Then he turned towards Komal. Realizing tht what idiotic thing he has done PM again turned back. That man started running. Pm sat in his car. Then he realized that the car’s key was missing. He knew it must have been taken by that thief. He came out of this car and started running behind tht thief. Nearly 30mins he was running behind that thief. They were running through fields, roads and now near lake. Then PM was at 10 feet away from that thief. Now btwn them at least 2 feet distance was there. He snatched that thief from his back and threw him towards the tree.
PM turned tht thief and was astonished to observe tht thief’s face. It was Mahek( I know u all must have expected her). Shocked PM shouted: TUM!!!!” Mahek gave him a wicked smirk:twisted: . She praised him with a smile: WOOOOO!!! U run really good. HATS OFF TO U.” PM who was still in the state of shock said: Tum ek chorr hoo??? I just don’t believe this.” Mahu: Tuh ab believe kar loo.” PM has holded her both hands. She warned him to leave her hands. But he didn’t. Mahu in anger: Leave me.” PM: Nahi. Pehle batao mera laptop kaha hai???” She warned him again and again. But all in vain. Now he has crossed his limits. She got enraged and kicked him from down with her legs. Then wht???? “ OOOCCCHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ”
The pain was unbearable. He turned towards the lake. And PM2 again kicked him from backside. And he fell inside the lake. And Mahu started running with gr8 speed. Angles came there and stopped the car in front of PM2. She climbed inside the car and it rode off. After few mins PM got up from the lake. He was full drenched. He searched for Mahu but she was no where. Then he came back to his car. He was shocked to find car’s keys in the car. But laptop was missing. There was a letter in the car. E opened the letter and read it. It was written: “THNKS FOR COMING.” He threw that letter, sat in the car and went away. Mahu and others was watching this and burst out laughing noticing his condition.
PM parked his car in the parking lot and went inside the office. He went inside his cabin where Aryan, Kunal, Yash and Punit were doing their work. After watching PM’s condition everyone burst out laughing. Aryan laughingly: Yaar PM ye kya halat bana rakhi hai apni??? Bahar barish toh nahi diri toh tu itna gila(wet) kaise???” Kunal: Aur bhai uss insaan ka kya hoa jisne aapko phone kiya??’ Pratham in anger: Aree ohh gya khade me. Tumhe pata hai aaj maine kissko dekha??” Punit: Yaar humme kaise pata hoga ki tune kissko dekha.” Pratham in stern voice: Dekh maine aaj mazak ke mood me nahi hooo. Samjha??” Yash getting up from his seat: Bas. Chood. Ab bata PM tune kissko dekha??” Taking Punit’s laptop Pratham opened Mahu’s photo taken in Nainital he pointed at her: Isse.” All surrounded him. Aryan(with a smie): Kya baat hai yaar. Toh tune usse baat ki.” PM: Ha. Tumhe pata hia woh kun hai???” Yash and Punit: Nahi. Kun hai woh.” PM; Ek CHORR.” All shouted in surprise: Kya!!!!!!!!!” PM told them the whole story what all happened. Punit: Yaar. Kya ladki hai. Lekin uss insaan ka kya hoa.”
Suddenly PM’s cell started ringing. It showed RIYA CALLING. He answered the call: Ha riya. Bol. Kaisi hai??” Riya: Maine thik hoo. Aap kisse hai??” PM; Ha. I am fine.” Riya: What happened bhai?? Any tension??” PM told her everything. PM(moving his hand through his soft hair: Ab pata nahi muhje aapna laptop milega ya nahi.” Riya; Milega. Jaroor milega. Aap mele maien kyun nahi jate??” PM: Me mele me jake kya karonga??” Then he suddenly remembers something: AAJ BHI MAINE WAHI JAONGI.. PM: Muhje pata hai riya ab muhje kaha jana hai. Thnks for reminding me baccha. Me rakta ho?? OK?? Bye.” Riya: Bye bhaiya.” She cancelled the call and dialed the no. of PM2. Riya: Hi PM. Tera kaam hogaya. Maine bhaiya ko Mele ki baat yaad diyae hai. Ab woh jaroor aayenge. Dekhna.” PM2 (smiling)(the call was on speaker): Thnks riyu. Tu janti hai me hum bohot miss kar rahe hai.” Riya: Me too guys. Chal me rakti hoo. Ok. Bye.” PM2: Bye.”
In fair, PM and his bro’s were searching Mahu. Atleast PM found her. She was 20 feets away from him. Mahu was chewing chewing gum. She was wearing black panjabi suit. The top was short and pants were parallel. She was wearing ox raise earings, chain and bangles. Her hairs were open. She was looking incredible. His knees were getting weaker and weaker as she was coming closer to him. Not only did PM was losing his control but also others. She was busy playing games in her mobile. She didn’t even realize PM. But abruptly KOMU came btwn them. KOMU: Di. Ye loo. Pani ka bottle.” PM2 looked at her and took the bottle with a smile thanked her and took a mouthful of water. When KOMU was having a mouthful of water she noticed PM at least 5 feet away from her. PM recognized her. Smiling at PM KOMU said: Di Pratham.” Mahu looked in the direction of Pratham. Smile appeared on Mahu’s face. Her smile had PM barmy. He lost his control and fell on the ground, head first. Mahu and Komu burst out laughing. Due to her laugh Komu had made a place in Aryan’s heart.
PM got up and walked towards Mahu. Still smiling Mahu said: Hello ACP PRATHAM MITTAL. HOW R U?? Kahi lagi toh nahi??” PM: Tuuuum mera naam kaise janti ho??” PM2: Maine toh sab janti ho. Each and everything about u and ur family.” Punit came near PM and whispered his ears: Yaar ye toh bohot pohoci hoe cheez hai.” Komu: Tum lago se zada hum pohoce hoa cheez hai.” PM to PM2: Dekho mera labtop do.” PM2: Kunsa laptop???” PM: Jo tumne chori ke thi.” PM2: Maine kaha chori ki tumhari laptop.” PM: Dekho jhot mat bolo. Maine dekha tumhe mera laptop chori karte hoa.” PM2: Any clue??? Sabut???” PM opened his maw to talk but kept silence. He had no clue. PM2: Kya hoa?? Chup kyun baat gaye. Still he kept silence. Saying this PM2 and Komu went towards there car. At least PM broke his silence(to Mahu): Apna naam toh batao.” Mahu turned towards him and said: Tumhare peeche jo dukan ka naam hai wahi mera naam hai.” Pm turned and read the shop’s naam. Turning towards Mahu he said: NANDINI??” Mahu smiled and went towards her car. Angles were watching this sitting in their car. PM noticed them. She sat in the car and went away.
Coming up: PM: Tum DIAMOND CHORI NAHI KAROGI NANDINI.” PM2: Accha kun rokega muhje??” PM: I’ll stop u” PM2: Ok. Then try it.”
I know u all must be wondering yyy Mahek said wrong name to PM. Thtz bcoz she didn’t want to reveal her identity that she is Shekar Punj’s daughter.
Hope u liked this part. The 3(i) part will be sent soon. Do comment.
USHA.
diipendu
June 27, 2009, 04:13 PM
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Ø Chori chori chupke chupke:Part3(ii)4C
Hello friends. Back with 3(ii) part pf 4C.
Ø Chori chori chupke chupke:Part3(ii)4C
In Arjun’s house, Angles were discussing about their next step. But Vicky
was sitting on bed was wondering about something. Kasu: Vicky kya soch rahe hoo??” Vicky
(keeping his fingers near his lips): Yaar muhje ek baat samajh me nahi aaraha hai.”
Arjun: Tujhe aaj tak kuch samjhe me aya hai bhala.” All started laughing. Vicky: Shut up! (To Mahu) Mujhe yeh nahi pata chal raha hai ki tumne PM ko jhota naam kyun btaya??” Kasu: Aree buddhu agar Mahu di usse apni pehechan batati toh who samaj jata he hum kon hai and usske saath masti kar rahe hai. Samajhe??” Vicky just nodded. Mahu: Tumhe pata hai na tumhe kya karma hai??” Arju: Ha. Muhje Mirchi Seth ke ghar jana hai jo 2 din pehele aaya hai, usse ye glass ka hira dena hai, aur usse samajhana hai who PM ke paas jakar kahe hai ke ye asli hira hai aur waha khatre me hai. Right???” Mahu: Yah! Right. Toh ab jaldi jao. We don’t have much time Arju.” Arju took his eyes and went away. After few mins Arju called Mahu and said tht the work is over. Mirchi Seth was a person to whom Angles had helped once. They rescued her daughter from some culprits and he said once tht he will help them whenever they need. He had his own house in a hill. It was like a museum.
PM and other parked the car near gate & climbed down. They glanced at the huge house. They did notice tht it was like a museum. They saw Mirchi Seth standing near the gate. They saw his fearful eyes and said: Sahab mere hire ko kuch nahi hoga na???” PM(keeping his hand on Mrichi seth’s shoulders): Aap kyun darr rahe hai. Aap chinta na kare. Maine apke hire ko kuch nahi hone donga. OK??” He just nodded in agreement. PM said Yash & Kunal to take their positions near two gates & said Punit to take his attach cameras on each corner of the wall. He didn’t want to take any risks. As ordered by PM they were engrossed in their work. PM & Aryan took their positions outside the room where the Diamond was placed at the center of the hall surrounded by electric eyes and vibration alarms and was placed in an eight-sided glass case.
Half an hour was passed but there was no sign of thiefs. Mirchi Seth came and said: Sahab koye nahi aaya.” With a victorious grin in his face PM said: Lagta hai humme yaha dekhkar sab darr gaye” Both started laughing. PM: Chalo andher chalkar ke baar dekhte hai. As they entered inside their face went chalk white and mouth flopped open and shut without a word coming out. For a moment PM thought Mirchi Seth was going to collapse like a balloon with the air let out. PM: Its empty.” Aryan and PM searched here and there for some clues. Then alarms began to shriek. “This is all urs fault,” Mirchi Seth yelp. PM: Look Plzz don’t yelp. We’ll find ur diamond. Don’t worry.” Mirchi Seth controlled himself.
PM & Aryan studied the case & then the room. Nothing seemed to be out of place. Puzzled he glanced up into the darkness of the spire. About sixteen feet up a flicker of motion caught his eyes. PM cried.: A rope! Someone hit the lights. Aryan yaha aao.” As Mirchi Seth hit the switch tht lit the spire. Aryan reached his brother’s side. “Get me up there Aryan.” PM said. Aryan cupped his hands together & in seconds PM stepped from Aryan’s hands to shoulders & was leaping for the rope. It was just within his grasp. Quickly PM started to work himself up hand over hand. As his eyes adjusted to the lights, he looked straight up.
Almost at the top of the spire, also climbing the rope, was a woman in a black jumpsuit. When she glanced down at him, PM saw she was young & beautiful with black hair sweeping over her shoulders. “I don’t believe this. Yeh toh Nandini hai,” PM said when he got a glimpse of woman’s face. “ Yeh Nandini kon hai??” Aryan: Don’t ask,” asking his head Aryan muttered. The beautiful young thief had made a fool of them once again. “Get outside & have the building surrounded” PM called down. “I’ll keep climbing.” Already he could hear the sirens of reinforcements arriving outside. They had trapped Mahek. For wht seemed an eternity, PM continue to pull himself up. He was almost within the reach of the woman dangling above him.She was peering out through the skylight at the top of the spire as if she were waiting for something or someone.
Kyun Pratham???” she said, finally deciding to acknowledge him,” Kyun tum har bar mere kaam ke beech aate ho?? YY???” “Give it up, Nandini.” His voice was gravelly from the exertion of the climb,” We have got u surrounded.” “Tht may be,” Mahek admitted, the lovely smile never leaving her rosy lips. Her hand slipped into her jumpsuit and came over a second later with a glint of silver. She moved so fast, he hardly saw the knife as she slashed the rope. PM sucked in a last breath & pictured with horror the long plunge to the marble floor below. But she didn’t cut the rope all the way through. “BEST OF LUCK DARLING” she said blowing a flying kiss. ‘The rope slipped another inch and he froze to stop its swaying:affraid:. But he slowly climbed up putting little strain on the rope.
Slowly he crawled out the window & fell on scaffolding. He was setting on the roof and peeped inside the hall. He breathed hard. A cool wind washed over him & he opened his eyes. Mahu exclaimed,“OOO!!! Wow! U r marvelous PM. Manana padega dear u has a lot of guts.” He tried to stand and warned her gaspingly: U r still here???” “Yes I was waiting for u. I doubt whether u will come or..?” PM: Whatever… Now u r trapped Nandini. Tum DIAMOND CHORI NAHI Kar PAOGI NANDINI.” PM2: Accha kun rokega muhje?? Kiski himat hai jo mujhe roke??” PM: I’ll stop u” PM2: OOOO… Ok. Then try it.” Mahu stands in a Karate style with her hands forward. Then their fighting started. ONE KICK, ONE PUNCH AND ONE 90 DEGREE MADE PM FALL DOWN. PM2: Come on Pratham. U can’t give up so quickly. Come on.” He got up & started fighting. PM2 GAVE PM A PUNCH AND HE AGAIN FALLS DOWN. He looks down in shock:shock: . He watched Yash, Nathesh & Punit tied on chairs with mouth closed with tape:lol!: . “Idiots”, PM said. They looked at him. HE AGAIN GOT UP & BEFORE HE WAS GOING TO WARN HER SHE GRAPPED HIS WRIST AND PUT THE HATKADDI (SORRY DON’T KNOW ITS NAME IN ENGISH)IN ONE WRIST & OTHERS SIDE WITH THE ANTINA EXSISTED BESIDE HER. SHE WENT BACK AND JUMPED FROM ROOF & SHE WAS IN ONE PIECE (HEHEHHEEH). SHE LOOKED BACK AND BLEW HIM A FLYING KISS. BEHIND HER STANDED A SCORPIO CAR CAME TO A HALT. PM TRIED TO SEE THE NO OF THE CAR BUT HE WAS UNABLE.
He kept his hand on his forehead. Yash, Nakul & Punit came towards him & said: Sorry bhai. Wohh…..” Before they could say further he got up & shouted: Shut up! Tumhare wajha se yeh hoa hai. Now just keep quiet. Ek kaam bhi thik se nahi hota hai tum logo se!” Abruptly his mobile rang. He answered the call. “Kyun apne bhaiyo par cilla rahe ho???? Isme unki kya galti hai???” “U just shut up!” “Maine kaha tha na tumse Pratham Muhje panga mat lena. Tum Muhje khabhi bhi pakad nahi paoge. U will have to pay for it.” Saying this she disconnected the call. He was fuming with anger. After few mins his mobile again rang. It was Riya. He told her tht he is too angry. She asked: Kya hoa bhaiya??? Wht happened???” He told her everything. Then she made him remind tht Nandini had called him in his mobile. So he can race her through the number. Then PM ordered his colleagues to trace the number. He came to know tht the no came from Delhi. He thnks Riya for helping her. He disconnected the call. He told to himself: Ab kaha jaogi tum Nandini???? He gave his cruel smile:twisted: .
Riya called Mahek & told: Maine bhaiya ko sab bol diya jo tumne kaha.” “Thnks riya.” “No probs Mahu.” “Aab aaya ga mazza.” She gave her naughty smile:lol: .
COMING UP NEXT:
Pratham: Maine tumhe aaj nahi chhodunga.”
“Kyun kaisa laga humara plan???”
Hope u all liked it.
USHA.
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diipendu
June 27, 2009, 04:13 PM
Ø Chori Chori Chupke Chupke:Part4(4C).
Riya called Mahek & told: Maine bhaiya ko sab bol diya jo tumne kaha.” “Thnks Riya.” “No probs Mahu. Don’t do this formality.” She disconnected the call. Appearing a naughty smile around her face she said: “Aab aaya ga mazza.”
{Mahek in her mind}
Hai unnis har baat mein main bees hun
Kehte hain duniya mein aisi one piece hun
Ulajh naa mujhse bahut pachhtaayegaa
Sabke aage mazaak ban ke reh jaayegaa
Sheesha hun jisse patthar bhi toote
Sach bolte hain mere aage jhootthe
Tu cheez kya hai ja-ja re jhootthe.
Next morning:
[size=18]Its 7am.PM & his brothers have reached at Delhi & they r trying to find Nandini. Mahu came to know tht PM had arrived in Delhi. PM calls his mother, i.e, Sumi, saying tht they r in Delhi. PM & others were tracing the number. On the other hand Sumi got busy preparing their fav.dishes. She tells Mahu to call Pm & ask his when will he came home, at wht time. There, abruptly Pm’s phone rang. He took a look at the number. It was an anonymous number. He replied it. The others said: Good morning ACP Pratham.” Astonishingly he asked: Yes???” “Hi. I’m Mahek. Mahek Punj.” She is in the garden, far away from Sumi.
{Guys u all must be wondering tht how come PM couldn’t recognize her voice. I’ll explain it. When Nandini talks to PM she uses an instrument which makes a difference in her actual voice. So that is y he didn’t recognize her voice.}
H[size=12]e remembered her. He said grinningly: Oh... Hi. Kaisi ho??” “:Fine. (with a naughty smile) Tum kaise ho?? Koi problem hai kya??” “Tumhe kaise pata chala??” “U see. I can recognize from ur voice.” “ Ohh.. Fine. Good.” “ Accha maine tumhe isliye phone taki maine tumse yeh puch pao kit um kitne baje aaoge.” “Mahek Mujhe jara dher hoga.” “(Innocently)Kyun???” He explains her everything. Controlling her laugh she consoles him: Don’t worry. Tum usse jaror pakoge. Dekhna. Dad kehte hai. Tum bahot genius ho. (Getting angry) Mujhe se bhi. Lets see. ” He laughed loudly: “Thnks Mahek for encouraging.” “ Mention not. Lekin agar tum usse har gaye toh tum mujhe se har jaye. Ok??? Bye” He cancelled the call. He couldn’t realize wht she said to him. Forgetting it he got busy in his work. There, Mahek wickedly smiled: Oolo ka pattha!!!”
diipendu
June 27, 2009, 04:14 PM
At last they (Pm & his brothers) reached the place from where Nandini had called. It was a huge market. There were many people out there. Aryan checked the PCO. No clue ( Hey shez Mahek. How will she live a clue???). Pm; Check it well Aryan. There must be something.” Suddenly he heard a voice from backside: Oye!!!!! Maine toh itthe hoo. Tum kisse dhod raha hai???” All looked at her. She had done black type of makeup, with balck nail paint, dark liner & mild & transparent gloss. She had worn full black & shinny jumpsuit. Her hair was open, shoulder length long. She was looking hot!!! An unknown feeling for her was rising in his heart. She smiled at him. His knees were trembling. He felt someone’s hand. It was Yash. PM restrained himself. Mahu shouted: Come on!! Letz have a race. Agar tum mujhe pakad paye toh u win. If not then I.” She gave him a wicked smile. Others warned him not to follow her instruction. He was in a huge dilemma. She again shouted: Kyun Pratham. Darr gaye??? Woh bhi ek ladki se?? Areee……” He replied: Nandini…, Maine kisi se bhi nahi darta.” She again smiled. She took a few steps backward. With hand action she called him. He too took a few steps forwards. She muttered something. He couldn’t understand. She said: Fas gaya machli jal me!” From back side of the PM’s car Kasak had punctured the tyres. Due to which others couldn’t follow them. She ran.
The race of cat & mouse saw turning interesting. He started running a fast as he could. But she was faster than him. They continuously ran for 15 mins. Suddenly he came to a halt. He was tired. He was exhaling highly. His voice was choked. He saw tht others didn’t follow him. He saw tht Nandu was abt 25feet far. He examined the road & smiled. Nandini turned around & saw PM wasn’t there. She took a few steps backward examining the whole road. Suddenly some one pulled her right hand from backside. It was PM. He gave a vicious smiled: Gotcha!!” He held her hand so tightly tht it gave her terrible pain. She was getting angry. With her left hand she punched PM so hard tht he fell aback & got unconscious. Pm’s fingers had raised marks in her hand. She gave a tit slap & shouted: U lose!!! I won!!! U couldn’t even recognize me Pratham!! So sad!!” He got up & saw her running. He wasn’t in a state to run any more. She turned & showed her thumb indicating tht he is a loser!!
With a huge grief he was sitting in his office. All had surrounded him. He was quiet right when he returned. Aryan, breaking the cool silence: Maine kaha tha tumse. Kyun gaye tum uske pecche???” He still kept silence. His phone rang. All looked at each other. PM stopped everyone to take the call. He took it by himself: Hello??” Other side: Hello beta. Kab aa rahe hoot um Pratham??” He recognized the voice. It was Sumi. He said: Maine aa raha hoo Maa.” “Thik hai beta. Toh tum sab jaldi aa.” He agreed & cancelled the call.
diipendu
June 27, 2009, 04:16 PM
hey reached home within 15 mins. They found Sumi & others(not Mahu’s paltan) in the garden. They went towards her. She gave them her blessings. Her eyes turned tearful. Dadu asked: How r u beta??” They answered tht they all were fine. Suddenly they heard a car coming to a halt. PM & others turned to take a look. His eyes turned wide!!!!!!!!
It was Komal. Others (PM’s paltan) were shocked!! She didn’t see them there. She was in her own world. She shouted: Maa Bhook lagi hai….!!!!” Sumi said: Komsl{Others shocked} Khjana tayar hai. Tu muh haath doh le.” Komu looked at her. She stayed still {Ofcourse she will as she has seen PM}. He kept on looking at her. Now he got a huge heart attack after watching her! Nandini!!!!!!!! She was wearing a mini skirt with pink full hand soft jacket(zip one). Her hair was open & her face had a light make-up. She had basketball in her hand & saw chewing gum( removing bubbles). Even she didn’t notice PM. She asked looking at Komu: Kya hoa. Ab toh jaan kha rahi the ki bhook lagi hai aur ab esse khadi hai jaise ki koi bhoot dekh liya hoa.” “Bhoot hi dekha hai di.” Mahu looked at her. Komu gave her a pale look & again looked at PM. Mahu too loked at the samw direct & got stunned. Even her bubble burst out. Pm kept on looked at her. Confused, Puzzled!!
Ø COMING UP Next:
LET IT BE SUSPENSE!!!!
diipendu
June 27, 2009, 04:18 PM
*Chori Chori
Chupke Chupke:5*
Mahu looked at PM & got stunned.
Even her gum’s bubble burst out. PM gave her a suspicious look. Others too
noticed PM. Sumi stood beside PM. Sumi: Beta idhar aa.”
PM got shocked as y Sumi called
Mahu beta. “Pratham pehchan ye kon hai.” PM again gave them a suspicious look.
Mahu slowly looked at him & gave a shot smile. Sumi(smiling): Aree yeh
Mahek hai.” PM & others eyes widened . Sumi slowly introduced everyone to them.
Sumi: Aur Mahu yeh Pratham hai.” Mahu looked at him & forwarded her hand
for a friendly handshake saying: Hey nice to meet u Pratham.” PM gave her a
look & she blinked at him . When he forwarded his hand she waved her hand
through her hair{ In short Mahu ne PM ka popat kiya} & said: Anyways mom we
r hungry. Aap khana paroso hum fresh hokar aate hai.” PM’s face got blanked. He
didn’t understand wht happened. Saying
this all went towards the door. Stopped them Sumi asked: Ek minute. Mahek yeh
sab kya hai. Tumne Pratham ke saath aisa bartav kyu kiya???” Chewing her gum she lazily replied: Kaisa
bartav kiya maine.
Ohh come on mom. Chill yaar!! Waise bhi I’m tired. (Looking at PM) Aaj bohot
mazza aaya. Aaj kisse stupid ko maine itna
bhagaya ki bechara thakan ke mare zameen par he gir gaya.” On mentioning him as stupid he
forcefully went towards her & asked: Maine
kya tumhe stupid lagta hoo?? ” She took a look at him from head to toe &
then said: Lagte toh waise he.” Sumi in a angry tone: Mahek yeh kya bol rahi ho???”
PM came in front of them & said in an anguish tone: Ma pata hai yeh ladki
mujhe karib ek mahene se chor banker sata rahi hai…” & explained
everything. Ignoring it Mahek & others went into their room to get fresh.
After 30mins they came out. Still then PM’s explanation
wasn’t over. She climbed down the stairs, sat on a couch with one leg on
another, holding her face with her palm she started listening to his story. As
he finished she asked dully : R u over or something is still remaining??”
Listening to this Dadu, Dadi & Shekhar burst of laughing . Shekar(
controlling his laugh): Beta Mahu ne tujhe oolo banaya??? Tujhe???” Sumi in
anger: Chup raho ji. Kyun mere bete ka mazzak bana rahe ho. {Looking at Mahek}
Mahek bata na kyun kiya tune aisa??? Bata???” Mahu got up in anger & said:
Apne ne he kaha tha na.” PM got shocked & looked at her confused. Sumi:
Kya?? Maine???”
Mahu: Ha. Aapine kaha tha na ki mera beta bohot intelligent hai. (Pressing the
words) MUJHESE BHI JADA! Aur aapne he kaha ki agar maine
usse bhi intelligent hoo toh maine
usse ek puzzle do jo aapka yeh MAHAN BETA SOLVE KAREGA. But unfortunately yeh
haar gaya aur maine jeet
gaye. As usual! Toh aap mujhe kyun data rahe hoo. Daatna hai toh inn
bewakoofo ko daato jo itni aasan puzzle ko bhi solve nahi kar paye.” All gave
her an angry stare. Nishant quickly says: Agar puzzle diya tha toh koi hint toh
dena chaheye. Are eek criminal bhi ek na ek clue chhodd deta hai. Toh phir….”
Niharika cutiing him in middle: Aaaahhhaaaaa cule dena chaheye tha. Idiot!
Stupid! Riya tumhe culue nahi bata rahe thi toh kya kar rahe thi bewakoof!” All
got shocked after listening this. PM:
Kya! Riya ko yeh sab pata tha??” Mahu: Ha.” PM got angry & said: Usse toh maine nahi chhodunga.” Mahu:
Oye! Riya ne madat ki hai tumhari. Magar tum usske clues ko samaj nahi paye toh
woh tumhari galti.” He gave her an angry stare but kept quite. Mahu got up
& said: Maine
thak gaye hoo & I want a break. Bye guys! Bye Losers.” Sumi just gave him a
warning stare but they ignored it. Saahil who was watching this whole drama
quietly, still kept himself silent.
diipendu
June 27, 2009, 04:20 PM
Mahu: Ha.” PM got angry & said: Usse toh maine nahi chhodunga.” Mahu:
Oye! Riya ne madat ki hai tumhari. Magar tum usske clues ko samaj nahi paye toh
woh tumhari galti.” He gave her an angry stare but kept quite. Mahu got up
& said: Maine
thak gaye hoo & I want a break. Bye guys! Bye Losers.” Sumi just gave him a
warning stare but they ignored it. Saahil who was watching this whole drama
quietly, still kept himself silent.
*AT NIGHT:
After having their dinner, PM & others went into their room
& started discussing their whole day. Shekhar knocked the door & came
inside the room. He said: Baccho kal 8 baje office pohoch jana. Humme aapna
naya misson shuru karma hai. Thik hai??” They agreed.
PM still
couldn’t believe how he got trapped into Mahek’s plan. His cell rang & he
accepted the call. It was Riya’s call. Riya: Hi bhaiya. Kaise hoo?” PM: Thik.
Tu??” “Maine
bhi thik hoo. Bhaiya??” “Hmm?” “Sorry! Maine
aapke saath aisa behave kiya.” “Its ok.” “Toh kya aapne mujhe maaf kiya?” “Ha.”
“Ohh thnk u bhaiya. Bhaiya toh maine
rakho??” He agreed & they cancelled their call. Yash asked hhim: Kya tune
Riya ko maaf kiya??” PM nodded. Yash got happy & went into his room to
sleep.
He was lost in
her thought. Maine
usske bare me kya socha tha aur kya hogaya. He got lost in her beauty. Suddenly
he heard foot steps outside the door. Someone was climbing down the steps. He
opened the door & saw tht the kitchen’s light was on. He too climbed down
to see who was there. He saw her near the fridge. She was drinking cold water.
He narrowly observed her. Her rosy lips, water which went down through her
throat. She kept the glass in the washing sink & turned towards the door.
She saw him standing near the door, looking at her. She got stunned He galped
& said coming inside : Maine
toh paani pine aaya tha. Kyun kya mujhe pyaas nahi lagti??” She still gave him
blank expression . She asked slowly, in dull voice: Kya maine tumse kuch pucha ya kaha??” He quickly
nodded in –tive . She asked slowly: Toh??” She rolled her eyes & went
towards the door. He went to drink water. She again came back & said in
dull voice: Tum aate waqt light off kar dena. Ok??” He slowly nodded. Yawning
& stretching her body she went out. A small smile appeared on his face.
*NEXT DAY AT OFFICE:
All(shekar, Dadu, Shashank & boys)
Were sitting in a huge, furnished room. Aryan to Shekar: Papa meeting sutru
kare??” Shekar: Ha. Bas Mahek aur baki sab aate he honge.” “Aate he honge nahi
aa gaye.” Girls entered the room. All boys eyes widened. PM was lost in Mahu
beauty .
Later all were shown their own cabin. All
went in their respective rooms. PM went & sat on his chair. He was a laptop
on the desk. Then he realized this was the same laptop Punit had given him. He
thought but the laptop was robbed by Mahek then how??” Suddenly he heard a
knocked at his door. He looked up & saw
Mahu there. She asked: May I?” He said : Sure!” She came in & said: Yeh
tumhari laptop jo maine
liya tha. Maine
tumhe yeh wapas de rahe hoo. Take care.” She went towards the door but he
called her back. He asked: Aur who Diamond??” “Maine nakli Diamond chori kiya tha. Usse
Diamond ke malik ki jaan maine
bacaye the. Iske badle me woh kuch bhi karene ke liye tyaar the. Toh maine unse ek natak
karvaya tha. Tht it.” He looked at her amazed. He asked: Toh kya tumne mujhse
woh fights, stunts sab karvaya sirf ek nakli Diamond ke liye.?” “Ha. Mujhe
tumaha fighting skills janana tha. Isliye.” She gave him a sweet smile . He
still gave her amazed looks . She said waving her hand: Bye!” She went out
whereas he still had foolish expression on his face .
Ø *COMING UP NEXT:
* Mahu & PM become friends .
* Riya comes to Delhi.
* GUJRALS ENTRY.
*BY
USHA*
diipendu
June 27, 2009, 04:25 PM
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diipendu
June 27, 2009, 04:27 PM
Here r some changes.
Ronit Roy As Shekhar Punj
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Gautami Kapoor as Sumi Punj
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