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diipendu
July 18, 2009, 11:34 AM
Pyaar ki ek kahaani | Sundays






A sweet romantic story of two lovers 'Pratham' and 'Gauri'. How they met and how they fell in love.






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CREDITS

Story Creations By- Munir

Dialouges Written By- Munir

Episodes Directed By- Diipendu Dutta

Production Group- S Creations

diipendu
August 3, 2009, 12:06 PM
Hello every one..Its Munir(Jai) and I am posting the introductory part of my story. I hope you will like it. Whether you like, dislike or have suggestions, comments any thing please do post it. I really wish to get honest and sincere comments from you friends. If I will get good response, then I will try to post every Sunday one part of the story.

I will be starting one or two more stories very soon here. Meanwhile read the first part.

As this is just introductory part its short and in summarization way...






Gauri lives in Panchgani in beautiful bungalow while Pratham lives in Mumbai.


Gauri is cryingfor her fate remembering the past incidences of her life when she was little girl. Her mother and father had passed away. After her grandfather’s death, her aunt and uncle have came living with her and she had to bear all their cruel acts all the time.


She remembers two years back when she was eighteen years old and attended a party after a long time. She saw a very smart guy who was of course Pratham but he was very far away from her. She kept watching him from that distance and just then her cousin Meghna cruelly scolded her that where are you lost. She made her insult infront of every one.


Among the family her only little cousin brother Shashank used to realize that every one is so cruel towards Gauri. Once when her Aunt Mandira, asked her to sweep and
make every thing clean while she was busy watching movie and eating popcorns.


By mistake of Gauri, the flower vase was broken and that day Aunt got extremely very angry on her and said she will not get dinner that day. Shashank asked her every one here hates you then why don’t run away some where. Gauri don’t know where to go..but now she thinks enough is enough. She heard her Uncle, Manik was talking with her Aunt that there is man who is 67 years old and is very rich and he likes Gauri. He said if we will make Gauri marry with him then he can give us lot of money but don’t tell this to Gauri now.


Gauri thinks
now she has not any option then to leave the house.


In dark night
she runs away from the house.





Pratham Mittal,
belongs to a very rich family in Mumbai. His father Umesh Mittal is Strict and gets angry easily while his mother is a loving mother.


Pratham had
holidays and he wanted to go to some hill station but his father not agreed. At last he had convinced his father, “Dad..Its not so far away. I will come back after 15 days.”





Now in dark
night he is in Panchgani in his car. While Gauri is running fastly as she feels some people are following her shouting like “ A..chikni kahan jaa rahi hai…

a ruk kahan bhaag reli hai..Apun ka paas jara aa to idhaar..haila ye shaari to rukti hi nahi hai pakdo issey..”. She runs fast and is very afraid…She is in forest type area and is running fast… Its dark and horrible night and winds are blowing fast… Oh God help me. She tries to recite Hanuman Chalisa but she has forgotten all words in fear…only she remembers at that time was yelling of her
aunt towards her.





She finds a beautiful car..She run fast and ask please help me..Meri madad karo. Car stops and Pratham comes out of it.

diipendu
August 3, 2009, 12:09 PM
Pyaar ki ek kahani
Part 2



Prathams family members were talking about Pratham's marriage.



Ajay Chachu : Array jab bhi mai Saniya Mirza
ko dekhta hun mai sochta hu Pratham ki shaadi is jesi ladki say honi chahiye..


Badi Daadi : Array nahi nahi..agar is say
hui to ghar mai kab rahey gi..Mainay soch liya hai Pratham ki shaadi kis say
hogi. Pratham ki shaadi kissi sanskarri aur adarshwadi ladki say hogi aur mai
aisi ladki ko jaanti hun…


Chotti Daadi : Badi..tu to rehnay
dey..Mainay bhi soch liya hai Pratham ki Shaadi Katrina Kaif jessi kissi ladki
se hogi.


Umesh Mittal : Bas kijiye.Mai nahi chahta
abhi Pratham ki shaadi kay baaray mai kuch bhi discuss ho. Pratham abhi
university mai hai aur jab tak uski prahai puri nahi hoti tab tak aap mai say
koi bhi uski shaadi kay baaray mai baat nahi karay.

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Pratham stops his
car and finds a very cute girl standing near him looking very afraid.


Gauri : Mujhey
bachalo wo mera peecha kar rahey hain
And the she fells down.


Pratham got worried. He sat down and looked towards the face of Gauri. He took out bottle of
water and sprinkled some water on her face. she
opened the eyes and got nervous and confused.


Gauri : Kuch log
pata nahi kyu mera peecha kar rahay hain…Please mujhey bacha lo.


Pratham : Sure !


He opens the car
and Gauri sits inside. He drives the car fastly and then tells her..ab
ghabranay ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.Mera
naam Pratham hai aur mai Mumbai mai rehta hun. Tumhara naam kya hai?


Gauri who is still
afraid and confuse tells : Mera naam Gauri hai.


Pratham : Oh ! Nice
name Gauri…Accha tumhein jaana kahan hai ?


Gauri : wo is taraf
dekho wahan par Mandir hai mujhey wahin par chod do.


Pratham : Kya ???
Itni raat ko mandir mai kya kaam hai…


Gauri : Kyu? Matlab
kay….mujhey..mujhey haan Mandir mai Puja karni hai is samay..


Pratham : Itni raat
ko ?


Gauri : Haan please
mujhey wahan par chod do please..


Pratham was
surprised but yet he said : ok jesa tum chaho..


He drops her
towards Temple and goes away to his home.





Pratham is not
staying in any hotel over there. Instead there is old bunglow of Ajay Chachu
over there so Ajay Chachu had given him keys of the house so he may stay there.
Pratham goes to house and whole night he thinks only about Gauri? Wo ladki koun
hogi..Kya wo Mandir jaana chahti hogi ya phir jhoot bol rahi hogi?





Gauri spent all
night in Temple and in morning goes to her friend’s home
whose name was Peenal. Peenal is childhood friend of Gauri. She and Gauri were
nice friends but Gauri never visited her home because of restrictions imposed
by her aunt and uncle.

diipendu
August 3, 2009, 12:10 PM
Gauri spent all
night in Temple and in morning goes to her friend’s home
whose name was Peenal. Peenal is childhood friend of Gauri. She and Gauri were
nice friends but Gauri never visited her home because of restrictions imposed
by her aunt and uncle.


Peenal got happy to see Gauri..



Peenal :
Gauri kesi ho tum?..tum itni subha subha..come inside


Gauri : Peenal,
Kya mai tumharay ghar mai kuch din ruk sakti hu agar tumhein koi problem na ho
to?


Peenal : zaroor
Gauri..kyun nahi? Magar ye bata aaj tu itni udaas kyu hai.


Tears came from
eyes of Gauri and she says : Peenal mera is duniya mai koi bhi nahi hai. She
tells every thing to Peenal.


Peenal : Come on
Gauri ! don’t cry please ! Dekho mai tumhari dost hun aur meray saamnay agar
tum rougi to mujhey bhi rona aajayega. Tum fikar nahi karo mai tumharay liye
kuch na kuch zaroor karungi. Tumhein chinta karnay ki zaroorat nahi hai.


After saying this
she gives tight hug to Gauri.


Gauri : Peenal
Uncle aur Aunty ghar mai nahi hai?


Peenal : Mom to Delhi gayi hai apni dost ki shaadi attend karnay
kay liye aur Dad office mai gaye hain. Shaam ko ayeingey.


Accha ruk mai abhi
aati hun..She brings golla ganda for her and Gauri..Pratham opens the
car and finds purse of Gauri…Array ye to apna purse yahin par bhool gayi..Kahan
dhundoo? Ho sakta hai wo abhi bhi ussi Mandir mai ho. He goes to Temple finding her..Oh God please mujhey us ladki
say milwa dijiye..He finds every where there but Gauri was not there.





Peenal shows some
of her dresses to Gauri..Gauri ye dekho..Mai kal shopping per gayi thi mainay
kal hi ye khariday..


Accha aik kaam karo
ye white wala skirt abhi mai pehnti hu aur ye black wala tum try kar ke dekho
kesa lagta hai tumhein..


Gauri : Nahi
Peenal wo mai…


Peenal : Oh please
Gauri please issey pehen kar dekho na please..


Gauri : Magar
mainay aisay dress kabhi pehnay nahi hai…


Peenal : Oh Gauri !
mujhey pata hai ye short hai magar yahan hum dono kay illawa aur koi nahi hai
is liye kya problem hai? Gauri believe me tum to is dress mai pariyon ki raani
lago gi.


Gauri smiles and
says ok…


Both of girls
change the dresses and wear skirt blouse whose skirt was just little above their knees.


Then Peenal says to Gauri:
aik minute mujhey aik kaam yaad agaya..Tum yahin raho mai padosi aunty Shanta
Bai kay ghar say abhi 10 minute mai aati hun..ok


Gauri says ok and
smiles.. Now Peenal goes away…After 3 minutes door
bell rings…


Gauri : Array
Peenal itna jaldi aagayi…Chalo accha hai


And as she opens
the door, it was PRATHAM.


Pratham looks at
her and gives her a big smile.


(How Pratham came there?...what will happen now. For that you have to wait for the next part)



Coming up next:


Gauri’s Uncle,
Manik will order Chakan bhai and Chiman bhai to kidnap Gauri.

diipendu
August 3, 2009, 12:12 PM
Recap : Gauri asked help from Pratham to give her lift and she stayed night at temple. In morning she went to the home of her friend Peenal. Peenal told Gauri that she will help her. She had bought two mini skirts. She requested Gauri to try one. Gauri wore that dress. Peenal goes to her neighbour’s home. Some one knocked the door. Gauri opens and find Pratham.


Part 3:

Gauri is very surprise. Pratham smiles and is too stunned to look at Gauri.
Pratham : Gauri tum yahan ! ye lo apna purse…
Gauri took her purse just then Peenal comes and in excitement
Says : Pratham Tum ! Tum kab Panchgani aye…au ander chalo..Kesay ho tum?
Pratham : Peenal mai theek hu aur mai kal raat ko hi Panchgani aya hu.Subha socha tum say milney chala au by the way (looking towards Gauri) who is that cute girl?
Peenal : Oh Pratham ye meri dost hai Gauri aur Gauri he is my friend Pratham. He is from Mumbai.
Pratham shakes hand with Gauri
Gauri : Peenal mai abhi dress change ker kay aati hun..
Pratham : No Gauri, you are looking nice in it.
Pratham talks with Peenal and Gauri for some time, then he says bye and go away.

Mandira Aunty comes running towards Manik Uncle.
Mandira : Tum yahan baithay muskura rahe ho.Pata hai kya hua…
Manik: Kya hua.bas kuch mahino baad Gauri 21 saal ki hojayegi. Is ke baad kuch na kuch kar k Gauri say is ghar ke papers per sign karwa lunga aur is paper per sign ka matlab samajhti hai…ye ghar humaray naam ho jaye ga.
Mandira : Array sapnay dekhna band karo.Gauri ghar chod kar bhaag gayi hai.
Manik : Oye thand rakh thand.ye to aur Accha hua.Mai nakli papers bana lunga
Mandira : Array..agar baad mai chal kar Gauri agayi aur us nay property par claim kya aur court mai case kya…Mujhey pata hai aisa wo nahi kar sakti magar agar aisa hojata hai toh..
Manik : Mushkil say aik aadmi mila jo is say shaadi karna chahta tha aur us nay bola tha kay ussay Gauri kay paisay nahi chahiye..agar Gauri ki us say shaadi ho jaye to wo humein bohot paisay dey ga aur….kuch na kuch toh karna padey ga us chorri ka..Tu fikar na kar mai kuch karta hu..he gives wicked smile.

Then Manik calls Chakkan Bhai and Cheeman Bhai…
Manik gives photo of Gauri and says them : is ladki ko kidnap karna hai. Kahin se bhi issay dhoond kar kidnap kar lo. Agar aik haftey mai issay kidnap kar liya to aik laakh milley ga..
Chakkan : Aik lakh ! bas apun us ko jaroor dhoond ker kidnap kar ley ga.Ye apun kay liye bohot chotta kaam hai.
Manik : Toh jau aur kaam shuru karo…bohot chalaki say kaam karna !
Cheeman : Array boss ! tension nahi lene ka rey ! Apun bola na aik haftey mai tera kaam ho jaye ga..


Its now 9:30 at night. Ramesh (Peenal's father) comes home.
Ramesh : Peenal aaj mujhey office mai late ho gaya.
Gauri : Namastey Uncle
Ramesh : Namastey.
Peenal : Dad ye meri dost hai Gauri. Kuch dino kay liye meray saath rahey gi..
Ramesh : Gauri ! bohot accha naam hai.

After few minutes Peenal brings coffee for her dad.
Ramesh takes a sip and says : Peenal aaj to coffee bohot hi acchi lag rahi hai.
Peenal : Dad waisay ye mainay nahi Gauri nay banayi hai.
Ramesh : Oh ! coffee bohot acchi hai.
Ramesh : Accha tumhari mom to hai nahi.Ghar mai khana to nahi hai. Aaj bahar chal kar Pizza khatey hain..
Peenal : Sorry dad mujhey bhook lagi hai wo kya hain na ki aap ne kaha tha aap ko der lag jayegi aur mujhey bohot bhook lagi thi toh maine khana thodi der pehlay kha liya..
Ramesh : Its ok magar khana?
Peenal : Dad ! Gauri nay masala dosa banaya hai.bohot hi tasty hai.Aap bhi kha kar dekhiye.
Ramesh : Sure.
Ramesh eats masala dosa and then says : Gauri…
Gauri : Ji uncle..
Ramesh : Ye tum nay banaya hai…
Gauri who is nervous : Ji uncle.kya accha nahi bana hai.
Ramesh smiles : Accha nahi ye to bohot hi accha hai. It is very tasty and delicious.Gauri you are brilliant.
Gauri : Thank you uncle.
Tears have come in eyes of Gauri because cooking and working was her daily routine but she used to get only harsh words and after her Grand father’s death..first time she found sweet words for her from her friend’s dad.

On other hand Pratham is playing guitar. He is imagining Gauri. Her image has got fixed in his eyes. All the time her beautiful face comes infront of him when he begins to think.

Its now next day morning.
Peenal : Chalo Gauri Pratham say milney chaltey hain..
Gauri : Par mai…
Peenal : Chalo wo apnay Ajay Chachu kay ghar mai hoga.
Gauri : ok
Both girls are walking and talking happily in very pleasant weather. In garden near bungalow they find Pratham doing exercise.
Pratham : Hi girls how are you?
Both of them reply: fine
Peenal: Pratham is samay tum bohot handsome lag rahe ho
Pratham: Kya sirf is samay? Mai hamesha hi handsome lagta hu
Gauri slowly asks Peenal: Peenal kya tum Pratham se pyaar karti ho
Peenal: Gauri Pratham is like my good friend and brother.
They kept talking for some time.



Coming up next :



Peenal : Gauri aik bohot hi badi bad news hai.




>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> THE END<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

diipendu
August 3, 2009, 12:14 PM
(http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/serial-one-f14/pyaar-ki-ek-kahani-t1898-20.htm?p_vote=20731&eval=minus)
Hello every one..Its Jai and I am posting the introductory part of my story. I hope you will like it. Whether you like, dislike or have suggestions, comments any thing please do post it. I really wish to get honest and sincere comments from you friends. If I will get good response, then I will try to post every Sunday one part of the story.
I will be starting one or two more stories very soon here. Meanwhile read the first part.

As this is just introductory part its short and in summarization way...



Gauri lives in
Panchgani in beautiful bungalow while Pratham lives in Mumbai.


Gauri is crying
for her fate remembering the past incidences of her life when she was little
girl. Her mother and father had passed away. After her grandfather’s death, her
aunt and uncle have came living with her and she had to bear all their cruel
acts all the time.


She remembers
two years back when she was eighteen years old and attended a party after a
long time. She saw a very smart guy who was of course Pratham but he was very
far away from her. She kept watching him from that distance and just then her
cousin Meghna cruelly scolded her that where are you lost. She made her insult
infront of every one.


Among the
family her only little cousin brother Shashank used to realize that every one
is so cruel towards Gauri. Once when her Aunt Mandira, asked her to sweep and
make every thing clean while she was busy watching movie and eating popcorns.
By mistake of Gauri, the flower vase was broken and that day Aunt got extremely
very angry on her and said she will not get dinner that day. Shashank asked her
every one here hates you then why don’t run away some where. Gauri don’t know
where to go..but now she thinks enough is enough. She heard her Uncle, Manik
was talking with her Aunt that there is man who is 67 years old and is very
rich and he likes Gauri. He said if we will make Gauri marry with him then he
can give us lot of money but don’t tell this to Gauri now.


Gauri thinks
now she has not any option then to leave the house.


In dark night
she runs away from the house.





Pratham Mittal,
belongs to a very rich family in Mumbai. His father Umesh Mittal is Strict and
gets angry easily while his mother is a loving mother.


Pratham had
holidays and he wanted to go to some hill station but his father not agreed. At
last he had convinced his father, “Dad..Its not so far away. I will come back after 15 days.”





Now in dark
night he is in Panchgani in his car. While Gauri is running fastly as she feels
some people are following her shouting like “ A..chikni kahan jaa rahi hai…a
ruk kahan bhaag reli hai..Apun ka paas jara aa to idhaar..haila ye shaari to
rukti hi nahi hai pakdo issey..”. She runs fast and is very afraid…She is in
forest type area and is running fast… Its dark and horrible night and winds are
blowing fast… Oh God help me. She tries to recite Hanuman Chalisa but she has
forgotten all words in fear…only she remembers at that time was yelling of her
aunt towards her.





She finds a
beautiful car..She run fast and ask please help me..Meri madad karo. Car stops
and Pratham comes out of it.

diipendu
October 31, 2009, 09:31 PM
Recap :


In last part
you had read Peenal got to know that Mandira had called her mother and inquired
about Gauri. Peenal asked Gauri to live in Pratham’s home meanwhile she plan
some thing for her. Pratham tries to impress Gauri..Gauri fells down on floor
because of ice cream there..





Part 5:





Gauri fall down
on floor..Pratham comes running towards her..


Gauri: Its ok
Pratham...She tries to get stand but is unable to do so..


Gauri: lagta
hai meray pair (leg) mai moch agayi hai


Pratham holds
her hand and help her in standing..


Pratham looks
in innocent eyes of Gauri the pain which she is having because of some thing..


She took Gauri
to her room and made her rest on bed..


Gauri: Thanks
Pratham..


Pratham : Wait
a minute Gauri…


Pratham goes
some where..Gauri closes her eyes and Pratham comes again with turmeric powder
(haldi)..


Pratham sits
near Gauri in bed and holds her leg..ab dekhna tumhein kitna jaldi theek
hojayega..


Gauri : Pratham
ye kya kar rahey ho..You don’t need to do this..I am fine sure…


Pratham: Gauri
don’t say any thing! Pata hai aik baar mujhey bhi aisay lag gaya tha aur maa nay mujhey lagaya tha..Tab
mujhey bhi laga ye kya maa laga rahi hai lekin phir mujhey jaldi theek bhi
hogaya…


He say this
while applying turmeric powder on her legs.


Gauri feels
like crying because her own aunt and uncle have never concerned or cared for
her pains and Pratham who is just like unknown is caring for her so much.


Pratham when
see tears in eyes of Gauri gets afraid that is she feeling pain as I am
applying turmeric powder in her legs or what?


Pratham: Kya
baat hai Gauri? Ro kyu rahi ho? Kya dard ho raha hai?


Gauri : Nahi,
bohot wakt kay baad dard kam ho raha hai..Thanks for so much caring..


Pratham smiles
and says : uff baar baar thanks mat karo..From now we are friends aura b tum
aaram karo subha tak theek ho jayega..


Aur me abhi
Khana bana kar laata hu..


Gauri : Kya !
Tumhein khana banana aata hai..thats sweet


Pratham get
confuse now : haan par tum yahan aaram karna..





Pratham go to
kitchen: Mai nay to socha tha roz restaurant mai say khana khaunga lekin ab
Gauri !


Kuch try karta
hu..nahi garbar ho jaye gi..best idea ye hai chupkey say bahir nikal jau aur
samany wali hotel say kuch le au..


He go out side
home silently..then thinks saamnay wali hotel say khana laya to Gauri ko shak
ho jayega kay itna jaldi mainay khana kesay bana liya.. Gauri waisay bhi aaram
kar rahi hai mai kahin aur say lay kar aata hu..


He go out
side..





Shyla has come
her home.


Peenal : Mom Delhi mai kesa laga..Hope you enjoyed there..


Shyla : Haan
maza to bohot hi aaya..Tumhein bohot miss kya..Agar tum chalti toh kitna enjoy
kerti.


Waisay Peenal
tumhari dost Gauri ka kuch pata chala. Uski aunty ko uski bohot chinta ho rahi
hai.


Peenal get
confuse. She don’t want to say lie to her mother but she also don’t want to put
life of Gauri in danger. She don’t know what to say. Before she say any thing
Ramesh says : Shyla yaha aana..


And she goes
there in next room.


Peenal feel
relax for a moment. She thinks of Gauri how she will be in Pratham’s home.
Mujhey pata hai Pratham bohot friendly hai..Hope kay Gauri theek ho aur khush
ho..





Pratham comes
home silently and goes to kitchen. Then he comes to Gauri and says Gauri :
Gauri chalo khana tayyar ho gaya hai..


Both eat food.
Gauri smiles : Pratham khana kahan say laye ho?


Pratham : wo wo
kitchen say..haan kitchen say hi toh laya hu..


Gauri smiles
and says : kya sach mai…?


Pratham : Nahi
wo actually Gauri tum bohot smart ho..ye mai bahar say laya hu par yaar I don’t
know how to cook..


Both smiles and
enjoy the food.





Next day
morning.


Pratham: Gauri
mai abhi jogging karnay ja raha hu. Is kay baad Peenal kay paas jaunga..I will
come back soon so don’t worry..


Gauri : its ok


Pratham :
Waisay How are you feeling now?


Gauri : I am
fine..Dont worry..


Pratham goes
for jogging..


Gauri now feels
she is quite fine. She looks at the home which she finds untidy..She thinks to
give Pratham a surprise by doing the work..


After some time
when Pratham comes he get surprise. He find house clean then before, things at
their proper places.


Pratham : Array
ye mai kis kay ghar agaya hu?


Gauri smiles
and says: Tumharay Ajay Chachu ke.





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diipendu
October 31, 2009, 09:32 PM
Pratham : Array
ye mai kis kay ghar agaya hu?


Gauri smiles
and says: Tumharay Ajay Chachu ke.


Pratham: Ye
Ajay Chachu ka ghar ho hi nahi sakta..Itna Saaf?


Gauri looks
towards Pratham and Pratham says : Mera matlab hai Ajay Chachu apna ghar saaf
nahi rakhtey is liye..





Chakkan : Array
cheeman abhi tak apun nay kuch kaam shuru nahi kya ..aik hafta to yuni khatam
ho jayega rey !


Cheeman : Abay
khajoor apun kay dimaag mai aik Solid idea hai rey..


Chakkan : Kya
rey?


Cheeman : dekh
wo Manik lagta hai bohot rich hai..


Chakkan : Reech
? ye to aik jaanwar ka naam hai


Cheeman : Abey apun ki baat sun ! us kay paas say bohot
saara rokraa mil sakta hai rey ! Apun ko uski baton say idea ho gayala hai wo
kuch bhi apun ko de sakta hai agar us ka apun nay kaam kar diya to..Apun is
haftey kuch kaam nahi karey ga..Baad mai apun us ko ye bol dega kay jis ladki
ko usney kidnap karnay ka bola tha wo itna aasaan kaam nahi hai..is liye agar
thoda zyada paisa milley tho hi kaam ho sakta hai…phir dekhna !


Chakkan : Haila
ye to mast idea hai lekin tujhey lagta hai wo aur jaada paisa dega..


Cheeman : Tu
dheeraj to rakh..Apna idea kabhi flop nahi hota.





Peenal comes
with flowers for Gauri..


Peenal : Hi
Gauri how are you?


Gauri : Mai to
blikul theek hu


Peenal :
Pratham nay bataya tumhray per mai moch agayi..Mujhey to both fikar honey
lagi..


Gauri : Chalo
accha hua tumhein apna promise to yaad hai roz milney ka..


Peenal : Sure
aur dekhna mai try karti hu jaldi kuch na kuch karu gi..






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