Koi Tum Sa Nahi

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A story filled with fun, laughter and romance... A fresh story revolving around two lives who are really diffrent but what will happen when they fall in love???




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Story Creation By- Munir

Pictures By- Munir

Episodes Directed By- Diipendu Dutta

Production Group- S Creations

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Koi tum sa nahi

Part 1

It was a beautiful atmosphere. There was beautiful garden. Rain was falling and a beautiful girl was dancing in rain. She was calling her name Pratham…wahan kya kar rahe ho yahan au dekho kitna maza aaraha hai. As he was about to go there, the sound of alarm clock made him wake up from his dream.
Pratham: Oh no…ye subha itni jaldi kyun hojaati hai. Abhi college jaana hai.
(Pratham Mittal is handsome, smart, naughty and funloving type of person. He belongs to a rich family who lives in Mumbai. Yash and Hiten are his best friends)

Gauri was combing her hair and getting ready for the college. Before going for the college she prays infront of the idol of Ganeshji..hai bhagwan aaj mera college mai pehla din hai. Sab kuch acche se ho.


(Gauri Pradhan is very cute, intelligent and fun loving girl. She belongs to middle class family. Her family has shifted from Hyderabad to Mumbai some time back so Gauri has got admission in new college. Its her first day in college. Her only friend here is Priya, who is also one of the friend of Pratham)

As Pratham was getting ready, chotti daadi comes there.
Chotti daadi: Kya hua aaj college badi jaldi jaa raha hai
Pratham: Haan wo kuch kaam hai
Chotti daadi: Kissi ladki se kaam hai na..Sab samjhti hu mai
Pratham smiles and goes away.

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As Pratham was getting ready, chotti daadi comes there.
Chotti daadi: Kya hua aaj college badi jaldi jaa raha hai
Pratham: Haan wo kuch kaam hai
Chotti daadi: Kissi ladki se kaam hai na..Sab samjhti hu mai
Pratham smiles and goes away.

Pratham went to the college and while he was busy talking with Yash and Hiten he remembers that Natasha is waiting for him in library. Gauri was in very much hurry as she got late because of traffic problem. She was running and Pratham was also running. Both bumped into each other and fell down. Pratham looked into eyes of Gauri..what a beautiful eyes, beautiful face. She was looking very nice in blue salwar kameez. Gauri was lost in thoughts as she finds Pratham very good looking. As she stood up…
Pratham: Will you marry me?
Gauri: What do mean?

Pratham smilingly: Oh maine kaha excuse me. Don’t you know what it means?

Gauri: Oh sorry. I thought you said some thing else.
She went away while Pratham was thinking of her only.


Coming up next:



* Gauri : Next time if you will try to come on my way then I will teach you lesson. Yaad rakho gey ki Gauri koun hai !



* PM smiles towards Gauri and Gauri says to her self accha ab dekhna mai kya karti hun.

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KOI TUM SA NAHI
Part 2






It was morning. Pratham was still sleeping. Yash came to Pratham’s room and made him wake up…Pratham…Pratham….!

Pratham: Haan bol yaar kya hua?

Yash: Aaj Natasha ka birthday hai !

Pratham: Kya? Arre haan mai toh bhool hi gaya tha. Tu kya kal mujhey yaad nahi dila sakta tha?

Yash: Arrey aaj subha us ney mujhey call kiya. Mujhey khud pata nahi tha. Mai bhi bhool gaya tha Lekin wo bol rahi thi mujhey pata tha Yash tum bhool jaugey lekin dekhna Pratham ko yaad hoga.

Pratham: Accha tu collge jaa mai abhi gift shop se gift ley kar aata hun.

Gauri was standing in corridor and was reading a book. Pratham after buying gift for Natasha came running to the college and once again by mistake he bumped into Gauri and both fell down.
Pratham saw Gauri was today in beautiful pink top and black pant and was looking nice.

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Gauri was standing in corridor and was reading a book. Pratham after buying gift for Natasha came running to the college and once again by mistake he bumped into Gauri and both fell down.
Pratham saw Gauri was today in beautiful pink top and black pant and was looking nice.

Pratham: Will you marry me??

This time Gauri burst out

Gauri: What you think of yourself?

Pratham: Some one who deserves to be your boy friend !

Gauri: How dare you ! Mr…

Pratham: Pratham !

Gauri: Whatever ! I am not that type of girl . Don’t dare to…

Pratham: I am sorry..Actually I was joking. Galti say mai tum sey takra gaya mai jaldi mai tha is liye mainey tumhein nahi dekha believe me..!

Gauri: Next time if you will try to come on my way then I will teach you lesson. Yaad rakho ge ki Gauri koun hai

Gauri went from there.

Yash : Arrey Pratham koun thi wo?

Pratham: Pata nahi !

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KOI TUM SA NAHI PART 2 CONTINUES....

Chotti Daadi: Mai to ja rahi hun. Tu chal rahi hai ?

Badi Daadi : Kahan per?

Chotti Daadi: Beauty parlor mai aur kahan ? Facial, Wax, manicure karanay..

Badi Daadi : Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram ! Chotti tu kab badi hogi. Kalyug agaya hai kalyug !

Chotti Daadi: Tujhey aaj pata chala hai. Kal tak kya tu apney aap ko Treta yug mai samjh rahi thi. Dekh badi 2009 zamana agaya hai. Mai toh ja rahi hun..

Gauri was reading some thing from notice board and Pratham came from back and says
Will you marry me ?

Gauri in anger turned and saw Pratham with mobile in his hand.

Pratham (to Gauri) : Kya hua? Mai tumhein nahi keh raha hun. Apni dost Kali se baat ker raha hun.

Pratham : Haan toh mai tum say keh raha tha ki {Watching towards Gauri, he says in phone} kal tumhein blue salwar kurtey mai dekha. Bohot sundar lag rahi thi tum aur aaj is Pink top mai to tum bohot hi acchi lag rahi ho !

Gauri { in anger} Now will you please Shut up !

Pratham : Excuse me ! Whats your problem, Mai toh apni dost say baat ker rah hun.

Gauri goes from that place and Pratham also goes in same way following Gauri and pretending that he is talking with some one on phone.
Pratham { in phone but looking towards Gauri} toh mai keh raha tha tum gussay mai bohot acchi lagti ho par kya tum kabhi smile nahi kar sakti ho?
I love you Gauri..

Now Gauri turned towards him in extreme anger..

Pratham continues : Gauri Gauri si Kali !

Pratham smiles towards Gauri and Gauri says to her self accha ab dekhna mai kya karti hun. Gauri saw Prathan has brought gift for some girl. She exchanged that gift and packs Cauliflower In same type of gift paper and puts there !

Pratham gives gift to Natasha and says

You are such a special friend that I have bring special gift for you. Open it now and see the Surprise !

Natasha : Thank you Pratham

Gauri was looking all………
THE END
What will happen Next for that wait for the next part !

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KOI TUM SA NAHI
PART 3

I hope you all will continue to read this
and will give me your feedbacks, your likes, dislikes and suggestions.


Pratham : Natasha you are such a special friend
that I have brought a special gift for you. Open it now and see the surprise!


Natasha : Thank you Pratham and yeah sure I
am opening it…


Pratham : wait a minute first guess what will be
in it….


Gauri who was standing near, was smiling that
what will happen now !


Pratham : Guess karo na


Natasha : Pratham, I can’t guess



She opened the gift and Pratham was shocked.
There was Cauliflower in it


Pratham had written beautiful verses of poem
along with gift but instead of


that there was a note on paper which was :
“Dear friend I am giving you


in gift some thing special , cauliflower
because its good for health and you know


There is vitamin
C in cauliflower."





Natasha gets really shocked. Pratham was not expecting that this will happen.






He
begins to laugh and says: Natasha this was just a prank. This is not your gift.I was just joking. As for your gift, after
college we will go to restaurant and there I will Present you your birthday gift.




Now Pratham is in college canteen. He says: Yash
wait I am coming.




Pratham says to him self : Pata nahi ye
Hiten Kahan reh gaya
hai. Wo milley to saath mai discuss Karun ki
Natasha ko kahan le kar jaun. Kuch socha bhi nahi aur phir se gift bhi lena hoga. Gauri...usko toh mai nahi chodunga.



Gauri see Yash alone. She comes towards him


Gauri : Yash tum hi ho na !


Yash : haan

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Pratham says to him self : Pata nahi ye Hiten Kahan reh gaya hai. Wo milley to saath mai discuss Karun ki Natasha ko kahan le kar jaun. Kuch socha bhi nahi aur phir se gift bhi lena hoga. Gauri...usko toh mai nahi chodunga.



Gauri see Yash alone. She comes towards him


Gauri : Yash tum hi ho na !


Yash : haan


Gauri : Wo aik ladki kab say tumhein dhoond
rahi hai.


Yash : Koun ?


Gauri : Mai nahi jaanti usko. Abhi thodi der
pehlay canteen kay bahir thi.


Yash : Mai abhi aata hun. He goes to find
that girl.


Meanwhile Gauri puts lots of spices {laal
Mirchi} in Pratham’s Sandwich


Now after few mins Yash comes back as he
found no such girl and Pratham


And Natasha also comes and sit and start eating
sandwich.


Pratham takes a bite and quickly drinks a full glass of
water


Pratham: Whats this..itni zyada mirch ! kitna
teekha hai yai !


Yash : Nahi yaar roz jaisa hota hai waisa hi to
hai.


Natasha : Mujhey bhi accha lag raha hai.


Pratham again takes a bite. It was very very
spicy just then he saw


Gauri was very near to him.


Gauri tooks her mobile in hand and looking
towards Pratham


Says: Hi Mirchi lagi kya?


Pratham turns angry..!


Gauri : Wait a minute…(then says to Pratham) why
you are so angry? Mai


Tum say nahi apney dost Kalu say baat kar
rahi hun. Tumhein koi


Problem?


Pratham is silent now and understood that Gauri
is taking revenge in similar manner.


Gauri : Haan to aaj jo mai nay Cauli flower
tumhey diya wo kesa laga. Maza aya

And looks smiling towards Pratham.




{Back ground song from Kutumb…fast song}


“tu hai unnis har baat mein main bees hun



kehte hain college mein aisi one piece hun



ulajh naa mujhse bahut pachhtaayegaa



sabke aage mazaak ban ke reh jaayegaa



sheesha hun jisse patthar bhi toote


sach
bolte hain mere aage jhootthe


tu
cheez kya hai ja-ja re jhootthe”

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Hi friends,
I am posting part 4 of the story. I am getting very less response nowadays..hope to get more comments on this part.
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Now Pratham was really angry with Gauri. He
was more angry because she exchanged the gift which he bought for Natasha and
because of this prank there was possibility


Of misunderstanding and fight between Pratham
and Natasha.








Next day: There is Puja in Mittal Parivaar
because they are launching a new project in business.


{Note : I had earlier mentioned that Gauri
along with her family used to live in Hyderabad but
had shifted recently in Mumbai. Umesh Mittal and Gauri’s dad were childhood
friends but Gauri and Pratham don’t know about that. Umesh has now invited Gauri’s
dad along with his family to come in his house to attend the Puja.”}





Gauri’s dad : Gauri aaj tum college se jaldi
se ghar aana. Tumhein mainey bataya hai na aaj hum Sab ko jaana hai aur aaj mai
tumhein apney bachpan kay bohot hi acchay dost say


Milwaney wala hun.


Gauri : Ji Papa !


She goes to college thinking aaj ke baad Pratham
kabhi meri taraf dekhay ga bhi hi nahi Accha sabak sikhaya us ko.


Pratham comes infont of Gauri and pretending
that he is talking with some girl says


Hi Preity wo aaj mai tumharay saath nahi
chal sakta kyunki aaj mujhey bohot Zaroori kaam hai. Hum baad mai chalaingey.
Take care bye…


Now he again dial some number and pretends
to talk with some another girl


Hi Jasmine, kaisi ho tum. Mai soch rah tha
aaj mai aur tum disco chaltay hain.


Theek hai shaam ko miltey hain bye…


Then he says to Gauri : aisay kya dekh rahi
ho mujhey?


Gauri : Kuch soch rahi thi tumharay baarey
main !


Pratham : Mai bhi soch raha hun tumharay
baaray mai !


Gauri : Kya ?


Pratham : That will you marry me? He laughs
and goes away.





There was science exhibition and for that
those who have participated had made several creative things i.e, crafts and
models like solar system. Priya who was friend of both Pratham and Gauri had
made model of Volcano which she had given to Gauri to take care of it.


Pratham watches it and in absences of Gauri
comes and throw that volcano and it get break into pieces.


Gauri comes : Pratham ! enough is enough !
Sharam nahi aati hai tumhein aisa kartay huway? Tumhara jhagda mujh say tha tum
ney Priya ka banaya hua model kyu tod diya?


Pratham : Jhagda toh tum ney shuru kya.
Mainey toh mazak ki thi tum nay Natasha
ka gift exchange ker kay uski jaga Cauliflower rakh ker ladai shuru ki. Ab kya mai tum say poochu Kay tumhein problem
toh mujh sey thi toh phir


tum ney Natasha kay gift ki jagah
cauliflower kyu rakha ?


Gauri : Pratham tumhein is ki maafi mangni
hogi..


Pratham laughs and says Gauri tum mujhey
jaanti nahi ho. Pratham kissi say maafi nahi mangta.


Gauri : Accha tum bhi mujhey nahi jaantey
ho. Sorry to tumhein bolna hi padey ga Chahey kuch bhi hojaye…


Pratham : Best of luck..tum jo ker sakti ho
ker kay dekh lo


Pratham goes to Priya.


Pratham : Priya mujhey tum say aik baat
kerni hai.


Priya : Haan Pratham bolo


Pratham : tum ney jo volcano banaya ussey
tum ney kis ko sambhalney kay liye de diya. Us Gauri ney issey zamin per rakha
tha aur mujh say wo toot gaya.


Priya : Koi baat nahi Pratham. Its ok. Aaj
last date nahi hai. Mai baad mai doosra aur accha bana lungi.


Pratham : Bas aik request hai Gauri per
gussey mat hona. Yeh aur baat hai kay ussey care karni chahiye thi aur kisi
safe jaga per rakhna tha par galti toh aakhir insaan say hi hoti hai na !


Priya : Tum uski fikar mat karo.


Priya goes to Gauri.


Gauri : Priya tumhein aik baat batani hai.







Priya : Mujhey pata chal gaya
hai kay mera Volcano toot gaya
hai.






Gauri : Tumhein kis ney bataya ?




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Pratham : Bas aik request hai Gauri per
gussey mat hona. Yeh aur baat hai kay ussey care karni chahiye thi aur kisi
safe jaga per rakhna tha par galti toh aakhir insaan say hi hoti hai na !


Priya : Tum uski fikar mat karo.


Priya goes to Gauri.


Gauri : Priya tumhein aik baat batani hai.


Priya : Mujhey pata chal gaya
hai kay mera Volcano toot gaya
hai.


Gauri : Tumhein kis ney bataya ?


Priya : Pratham ney


Gauri : Us nay tumhein sorry bola ?


Priya : Nahi yaar. Friendship mai no sorry
no thanks !


Gauri : Kya ? tum ney us badtameez ko maaf
ker diya?


Priya : Haan ussey bhi aur tumhein bhi !


Gauri : Kya mujhey bhi…?


Priya : Haan tumhein bhi ! magar aik baat mujhey
samjh nahi ayi tumhein ussay sambhal kar sahi jaga rakhna tha. Tum issey zameen
per rakh ker kyu chali ayi. Anyways


Forget it. Mera waisay bhi itna zyada accha
nahi bana tha. Mai doosra bana ker laungi.


Gauri in her heart : Priya tum nay Pratham
ko maaf kar diya theek hai lekin mai ussay maaf nahi Karungi.


Pratham gets call from mobie.


Umesh Mittal : Pratham tum kab ghar aarahey
ho? Tumhien pata hai na aaj puja hai?


Pratham : Wo dad mujhey aaj bohot hi zarori
kaam hai !


Umesh Mittal : Kuch bhi kaam ho. Tum jaldi
say aa jau.


Pratham : Dad mai pooja mai zaroor aunga
lekin mujhey thoda late ho jayega. Mai koshish karunga jitna jaldi hosakey utna
jaldi aajaun.


Samay says to Umesh Mittal : Mujey samajh
nahi aata Pratham bhaya Ko aisa kya kaam agaya jo wo Puja mai late aarahey
hain.Puja say zyada zaroori kuch kaam hota hai kya?


UM gets more angry on Pratham.





Chotti Daadi : Badi thoda Prasad toh de !


Badi Daadi : Pehlay Puja toh honay dey !


Chotti Daadi : Arrey Pooja to hoti rahey gi
pehlay Prasad toh de dey !


Badi : Chotti sabar ker ! puja say pehlay
Prasad nahi milley ga.


Chotti : Badi tujhey to mai Pooja kay baad
theek karti hun.





Meanwhile Gauri is going to home and watches
Pratham.


Pratham : Yash chal swimming kernay chaltay
hain. Phir mujhey jaldi ghar per bhi jaana hai. Meray paas zyada time nahi hai.


Yash : Dekh Pratham mainey kaha mujhey abhi
Proffesor say zarori baat kerni hai. Aik kaam ker tu nikal mai bas thodi der
mai pohonchta hun.


Pratham : Chal theek hai…!


Pratham goes to swimming pool and Gauri
follows her and Pratham do not know about it.






>>>>>>>>> The End >>>>>>>>>>>






Now will Gauri play any prank on Pratham ?


Will Gauri meet Pratham in his home when she will go
for Puja?


For that read the next part ……………..!


What do you think will happen now? Can you
guess it?