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mehendi516
November 4, 2007, 08:51 PM
Hiiii, im new forum-member & also a PRC & RT fans. i write a story 4 u, you like or not plz plz post ur comments.
RAJAT, MEHUL,GAURAV, HARSSH & RAJA & MY FORUM-FRIENDS this is the story....................


((the story brgins that time when Arjun & Pundir was diedin battle fiend,PRC & Chand also died & Sanyogita komited suicide,caled JAHARBRATA ..................))

EK sundar jagah, charon taraf lightist violet kilor ki dhua hai, halki si khusbu chari hai.PRC our Chand zamin par soya hai. kuch der baad PRC ki ankh khulti hai our woh apne apko bachpan me pata hat(RT),use samajh nahi ati baat kya hai. pass me woh chand ko dekh kar use jagata hai............

prithvi(rajat): chand utho, utho chand.
chand(raja): prithvi! (charon taraf dekh kar) yeh kaun si jagah hai? kya yeh swarg hai?
Prithvi : pata nahi, chalo dekhte hain.

(dono age badte hain, par kuch dikhai nahi deta, charon taraf dhua hi dhua......tavi achanak..... koi bulata hai......)

.........prithvi..chand.........prithvi...chand... .
chand: kon hai?
voice: chand, main hu.
prithvi:tum hamare samne kyun nahi ate? samne aao.
voice: main tumhare piche hun>

(dono chuk k ghumte hain aur khusi se chillate hai.......)

prithvi+chand: sanjam. (famous hugging k baad)
prithvi: sanjam , kyse ho tum? kitne dino baad mile hai?
sanjam(mehul): haan, par yaha savi acche hi rehte hain. .....chalo tuhe kisi se milana hain.
prithvi: kis se?
sanjam: chalo to sahi.

( woh log kuch dur jate hain aur fir se chillate hai.........................)

prithvi+chand: arjun, pundir. (famus hugging again)
prithvi: ab hum kavi alag nahi honge, sab saath rahenge.
chand: ab koi dukh nahi, koi gum nahi.
arjun(gaurav): prithvi jara dekho to koun hai!

(prithvi mudkar dekhta hai aur daur k jata hai maharaj someswar chouhan aur maharani kamladevi k paas....dono ko pranam karte hai.........)

prithvi: maa, pitaji.

(dono prithvi & friends ko ashirbad sete hai... tavi pundir sanyogita,chamki,maya aur vaishali ko lekar ata hai...prithvi ki khusi dugni ha jati hai. sanyogita maharaj aur maharani ko pranam karti hai.....dono asirbad dete hai.....)

arjun: ab hum sab saath hai.
prithvi: haaan, par ab hum kya karenge?
sanjam: ab chand hume kavita sunayega.
chamki(laveena): kavita baad me sun lena. chalo ankh me choli khelte hain.
arjun: haan,haan,bahut din ho gaye khele huye. par patti sanyogita k akhon me bandhegi.
prithvi: kyun??
Pundir(harssh): han, tumhe yaad nahi hume kita paresan karti thi.aur mayama k ashram me hume mirchi v khilayi thi.
sanjam: yeh thik rahega.
maya(arjun's wife,just 2 eps.): par ye to rajkumari hai aur maharani v.
prithvi: to kya hua, patti bandho.

(vaishali sanyogita k akhon me patti bandhti hai...)
vaishali(khusbu): dard to nahi ho raha??
sanyogita(mugdha): nahi, bilkul nahi.pitaji k mahal me hum khel ka koi v maza nahi le paye. ab hum puri maza lenge,puira din khelege.

( khel suru hota hai. sab log dur te hain, sanyogita ko ****e hai,haste hain, par sanyogita kisi ko pakad nahi pati......khel chalta rehta hai...... kuch dur maharaj someswar chouhan aur maharani kamla devi ye sab dekh kar kush hokar haste rehte hain.... utsah dete rehte hain............... )


background music : jai jai prithviraj chouhan
ye hain sarre mitra mahan...


### im not a hidivasi, so sorry 4 gramatical & pronounciation mistakes.........
:o :)

garvita
November 6, 2007, 06:47 PM
Hiiii, im new forum-member & also a PRC & RT fans. i write a story 4 u, you like or not plz plz post ur comments.
RAJAT, MEHUL,GAURAV, HARSSH & RAJA & MY FORUM-FRIENDS this is the story....................


((the story brgins that time when Arjun & Pundir was diedin battle fiend,PRC & Chand also died & Sanyogita komited suicide,caled JAHARBRATA ..................))

EK sundar jagah, charon taraf lightist violet kilor ki dhua hai, halki si khusbu chari hai.PRC our Chand zamin par soya hai. kuch der baad PRC ki ankh khulti hai our woh apne apko bachpan me pata hat(RT),use samajh nahi ati baat kya hai. pass me woh chand ko dekh kar use jagata hai............

prithvi(rajat): chand utho, utho chand.
chand(raja): prithvi! (charon taraf dekh kar) yeh kaun si jagah hai? kya yeh swarg hai?
Prithvi : pata nahi, chalo dekhte hain.

(dono age badte hain, par kuch dikhai nahi deta, charon taraf dhua hi dhua......tavi achanak..... koi bulata hai......)

.........prithvi..chand.........prithvi...chand... .
chand: kon hai?
voice: chand, main hu.
prithvi:tum hamare samne kyun nahi ate? samne aao.
voice: main tumhare piche hun>

(dono chuk k ghumte hain aur khusi se chillate hai.......)

prithvi+chand: sanjam. (famous hugging k baad)
prithvi: sanjam , kyse ho tum? kitne dino baad mile hai?
sanjam(mehul): haan, par yaha savi acche hi rehte hain. .....chalo tuhe kisi se milana hain.
prithvi: kis se?
sanjam: chalo to sahi.

( woh log kuch dur jate hain aur fir se chillate hai.........................)

prithvi+chand: arjun, pundir. (famus hugging again)
prithvi: ab hum kavi alag nahi honge, sab saath rahenge.
chand: ab koi dukh nahi, koi gum nahi.
arjun(gaurav): prithvi jara dekho to koun hai!

(prithvi mudkar dekhta hai aur daur k jata hai maharaj someswar chouhan aur maharani kamladevi k paas....dono ko pranam karte hai.........)

prithvi: maa, pitaji.

(dono prithvi & friends ko ashirbad sete hai... tavi pundir sanyogita,chamki,maya aur vaishali ko lekar ata hai...prithvi ki khusi dugni ha jati hai. sanyogita maharaj aur maharani ko pranam karti hai.....dono asirbad dete hai.....)

arjun: ab hum sab saath hai.
prithvi: haaan, par ab hum kya karenge?
sanjam: ab chand hume kavita sunayega.
chamki(laveena): kavita baad me sun lena. chalo ankh me choli khelte hain.
arjun: haan,haan,bahut din ho gaye khele huye. par patti sanyogita k akhon me bandhegi.
prithvi: kyun??
Pundir(harssh): han, tumhe yaad nahi hume kita paresan karti thi.aur mayama k ashram me hume mirchi v khilayi thi.
sanjam: yeh thik rahega.
maya(arjun's wife,just 2 eps.): par ye to rajkumari hai aur maharani v.
prithvi: to kya hua, patti bandho.

(vaishali sanyogita k akhon me patti bandhti hai...)
vaishali(khusbu): dard to nahi ho raha??
sanyogita(mugdha): nahi, bilkul nahi.pitaji k mahal me hum khel ka koi v maza nahi le paye. ab hum puri maza lenge,puira din khelege.

( khel suru hota hai. sab log dur te hain, sanyogita ko ****e hai,haste hain, par sanyogita kisi ko pakad nahi pati......khel chalta rehta hai...... kuch dur maharaj someswar chouhan aur maharani kamla devi ye sab dekh kar kush hokar haste rehte hain.... utsah dete rehte hain............... )


background music : jai jai prithviraj chouhan
ye hain sarre mitra mahan...


### im not a hidivasi, so sorry 4 gramatical & pronounciation mistakes.........
:o :)
nice but it is too long ill rea it latter