Fan Fiction....Kasam Se (Hame Tumse Pyar Kitna)

[sweet20]

hey guys this is the first fan fic in this forum .
so let me tell u what it is .
it is a story which member viewing this show creates . they become ekkta and plan thier episode .
for the first i am contuining the kasamh se . pls tell me ur comments as it is my first time .
also in this thread only i can make the episode u can make urs in another thread . but u can definately give me ur suggestion .
this fan fic is contuining after sangeet.

so here it goes .

PART - NO - 1

JAI GOES TO HIS ROOM AND IS LOOKING VERY TENSED .

IN THE ROOM

JAI GOES TO CHANGE HIS COSTUME INTHE WASH ROOM .
BUT FORGETS TO CARRY HIS NIGHT SUIT. LOL . THEN HE CALLS BANI BANI GIVE ME MY NIGHTSUIT . BANI COMES RUNNING AND GIVES HIM HIS .

JAI COMES OUT

BANI -- MR. WALIA AAPKO KYA HOA AAP ITNE TENSE KYU HAI .
JAI -- NOTHING BANI I AM NOT TENSED ACTUALLY ACTUALLY I AM WORRIED BOUT SAHIL . HE WASNT LOOKING HAPPY .

BANI -- U R CORRECT . HE WAS SAD BUT I AM SURE ONCE RAASHI MARRIES SAHIL HE WILL BE HAPPY .

JAI - I HOPE SO .

JAI-- BANI TDAY U R LOOKING VERY BEAUTIFUL .

BANI BLUSHES AND SAYS THANK U .

BANI THEN OPENS HER ALMIRAH AND IS PICKING HER NIGHT SUIT .

JAI FROM BEHIND COMES AND TELLS HER WHY DO U WEAR THE SAME NIGHTSUIT EVERY DAY .

BANI - COZ I LIKE IT .

JAI - OK .

BANI THEN CHANGES AND COMES . THEN BAN IS REMOVING HER NECKLACE

JAI TELL HER THAT I WILL DO IT .
BANI SAID OK

JAI REMOVES IT AND TOUCHES HER BACK .
BANI IS STUNNED AND SAYS MR.WALIA YEH AAP KYA KAR RAHE HAI

JAI - KUCH NHI TU NAHI . APNI BIWI KO CHU RAHA HO

BANI - PLS LEAVE ME I HAVE TO GIVE SOMETHING TO MASSI .
JAI THEN LET HER FREE .

THEN AGAIN SHE ENTER HER ROOM

SEES JAI SLEEPING SHE ALSO SLEEPS

SUDDENLY JAI HUGS HER .

BANI TRIES TO FREE HERSELG BUT CANNOT .
SHE THEN SLEEPS .
BOTH SLEEPS HUGGING EACH OTHER .


IN THE MORNING

BANI WAKES UP FIRST BY THEN ALSO JAI IS HOLDING HER HAND . HOW ROMANTIC.

BANI SEES THIS AND A SONG IS PLAYED

JIYA DHADAK DHADAK JIYA DHADAK

THEN BANI TELL MR . WALI PLS LEAVE ME I WANT TO GET UP .
JAI WAKES UP AND SAYS OH I AM VERY SORRY .

BANI THINKS IN HER MOND BUT I AM NOT .

THEY BOTH GET READY AND GO DOWNSTAIRS TO HAVE BREAKFAST .

THERE MASSAI TELLS THEM TO BUY A GIFTS FOR ROHIT , RAASHI , SAHIL AND ANU .
THEY BOTH SAY OK

THEY BOTH LEAVE THE HOUSE

IN THE SHOP ---

Bani takes jewellary for the girls and jai says they r beautiful.
they bani goes somwhere else for taking something for boys .
jai makes an excuse and goes agian into jewellary shop and buys a diamond st for bani .
they both leave the shop after bani did her shopping also bani bought a nice suit for jai .

both enters the house

and gives the gift to massi and goes to thier room.
masi surprised what is the other bag left in thier hand.
they both make a excuse
jai - massi this is for ranveer
bani-massi this is for rano.

massi says ok .

both enter s the room.

bani first says to jai -
i have to give u something and gives it and jai saya thanks its very beautiful
then gives her the diamond set .
again jia jia dhadak dhadka is played.

in the evening they both get dressed

bani then goest to see rano
but is shocked to see rano not there .

MEAN WHILE JAI ALSO GOES TO SAHIL ROOM AND IS NOT ABLE TO FIND HIM THERE.
HE IS PUZZLED .


WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT . WILL TELL U IN THE NEXT EPISODE.
DO TELL ME HOW WAS IT???

I HOPE U LIKE IT

[Kiran1]

awwwww,i lykd ur episode,it was gud!!

[*blossom*]

very good fanfic sweet20 plz cont soon loved it
and dont let anything go wrong between jai and bani.:)

[nano878]

really u have done a great job
i think u must direct this epsiode 4 them;) ;)
i just like jai and bani jodi sooooooooooooooooo much:) :)

[Simar]

Beautifully done...Tanu
Reli enjoyed the scene i wish u cud direct it rather then Ekta....u'll do a better job then her...anwyaz plz continue and update us with another episode..thx:D

[swatinarang]

hi
really good fanfic i think new for this forum.
keep posting.

[sweet20]

hey i am back with my fan fic.
sorry for the delay .
i was busy shopping.
recap-- both jai and bani gave gift to each other . bani not able to find rano.

well here goes 2nd part

in the hall

bani tries to search rano but is not able to .she then goes to sahil room .

in the sahil room

jai is there and is reading the letter .
he is very surprised and angry.
bani suddenly comes in the room.
jai says bani sahil has left wid rano .
what the hell is this ??

bani hesistatly says i also came to know bout this.
she starts crying why did rano do this to me.
meri parvrish main hi koi kami rehgi hogi.
agar meri mummy hoti to shayad pia aur rano aisi na hoti.

jai is shocked and again park road comes into his mind.
by listening to this he says in his mind.
i am the only one to blame for it.

suddenly sonali calls jai.

jai is surprised. she says where were u .
sonali says jai i want to tellu rano ans sahil came here for my help.
but i refused them coz i knew if they will run u will again hurt bani but its not bani fault rano told me.
they have gone to mandir near by my house.
jai held up the call and says to bani lets go and find both of them .
they r getting married .

they both leave.

in the mandir.......

both get down from the car .

jai sees sahil putting sindor in the rano mang.
suddenly jai comes and takes the sinddor.

sahil and rano satnds up.
sahil - jai mama app.
jai gives one tight slap to sahil
jai - didu not think of anu.
how can u do this to her.

jai takes his hand and goes. sahil says mama plz plz i want to marry rano.
she is my life .
jai stops .

bani is shocked.

jai- why didnt u tell me this before hand.
sahil - i tried but cud not.

bani is standing wid rano surprised .

jai then goes to bani leaving them aside
jai says to bani-
what shud we do.
i dont want to separate two luvers .

bani says but it will effect anu .
jai says but this will ruin three lives .

the they both go to rano and sahil who r holding thier hand and crying.

then four of them make a plan .

and say rano and sahil to get marry and come tom . mean while they will handle the situation.
both agree.

all of them sit near pandit.
pandit says kanya ke mata pita ko bulao.

jai says bani and i will do the kanyadaan.
bani is surprised but happy.
marriage is done.

jai and bani go to walia mansion.
where everybody is waiting for them .

ranveer had read the letter which jai left behind by mistake.
he says wrong thing to bani.
jai stops him and says dont u dare call my wife my wife like that .

adi says but now will we do.
jai tells ranveer to marry rashi but he refuse but then he agrrees.

all of them r shocked.

in the marrige ------

all of them sit.
ranveer with rasshi with a the thing which a boy wears.
rohit with anu.

when all the things r done.
every guest go and then ranvijay raashi ranveer anu rohit and roshini r left so that anu can do last rasam.
ranvijay tells ranveer why r us till not openining the thing.
all r socked and surprised.

i will continue it later.

hey i know the current track of kasam se is going fine.
but i had written this earlier.
but for sure.
next part will be more interesting

[animateash]

hey sweet20 gud fic

luv ash

[*blossom*]

great fanfic sweet20
plz cont soon.:)

[Simar]

good update on the fan fiction
plz continue with sum more:p

[ankitashah599]

gud fan fic.
please keep it up

[awall21]

Why did they make Bani go bi-polar on Jai last minute in today's episode, it took so much time and effort to get them to like each other...sari menhath baykar.

Like everyone else I to hope Bani is pregnent, otherwise after Massi leaves I don't think she plans to stick around and for once and a change Jai wants Bani to stay.

Looking forward to the new the new fanfic from you sweet20. Later all.

[sweet20]

well part three fanfic-

imp - as the raaz is out so i am continuing my fanfic after tuesday episode --

bani hugs jai and put a stone on the bomb and tells him to side away -
bani says then to jai that was just an accident but u shud have told me before.

suddenly they heard someone approaching them in a saree-

of course roshini was there

roshini says to bani that jai killed ur mother ruined ur wife . now he is ruining ur life. also roshini says to bani that he is not giving u divorce so that u may not file a case against her.
jai says this is absolutely wrong.
roshini says to bani he is just saying this for the heck of it. i know him very well. and she touch bani -
bani then gives her a slap and says i am big enough to know whom i have to believe and roshini u u were the only one who told mr.walia to take that route and holds jai hands and say he is husband and no women can withstand anything wrong against her husband.
suddenly when she was holding jai hand . she fell on the floor.
jai says - bani bani and then he switches to roshini and says agar roshini bani ko kuch bhi hua to i will kill u and takes bani away .
they both reach the hospital and bani is rushed into the room.
then suddenly the doctor come to jai who is crying bitterly and tell him that u r wife is preganent.
jai si shocked and roshini has reached there by the time and is shocked .
she leaves the room.
jai si happy but at the same time he is unhappy ..


what will happen to thier life.
watch it out.

[awall21]

Sweet20, defn like your take on the situatuon a lot better than what they showed in the episode. Bani totally does a 360 on Jai at the end of the episode. She should have supported Jai and stuck it to Roshni while she was there. Then she should have flipped out after Roshni and Sandy left.

Can't belive Jai antagonizing the girls at all throughout their stay at the Walia mansion, esp with the whole Pi- Pushkar bit. Everyone's worried about Bani and Jai, ever wonder what will happen to him when Pia finds out?

[ankitashah599]

well part three fanfic-

imp - as the raaz is out so i am continuing my fanfic after tuesday episode --

bani hugs jai and put a stone on the bomb and tells him to side away -
bani says then to jai that was just an accident but u shud have told me before.

suddenly they heard someone approaching them in a saree-

of course roshini was there

roshini says to bani that jai killed ur mother ruined ur wife . now he is ruining ur life. also roshini says to bani that he is not giving u divorce so that u may not file a case against her.
jai says this is absolutely wrong.
roshini says to bani he is just saying this for the heck of it. i know him very well. and she touch bani -
bani then gives her a slap and says i am big enough to know whom i have to believe and roshini u u were the only one who told mr.walia to take that route and holds jai hands and say he is husband and no women can withstand anything wrong against her husband.
suddenly when she was holding jai hand . she fell on the floor.
jai says - bani bani and then he switches to roshini and says agar roshini bani ko kuch bhi hua to i will kill u and takes bani away .
they both reach the hospital and bani is rushed into the room.
then suddenly the doctor come to jai who is crying bitterly and tell him that u r wife is preganent.
jai si shocked and roshini has reached there by the time and is shocked .
she leaves the room.
jai si happy but at the same time he is unhappy ..


what will happen to thier life.
watch it out.






hi sweet20
what's ur name?
that is nice episode written by u
& i expect that it would happne in the serial but that's not happen.
so thanks u had written what i thaught.
& that is really very nice episode
keep it up
sweet20

[sweet20]

thanks to everybody .
my name is tanu.

well part - 4

jai calls the whole family member to tell them .

and after few min.everybody reaches.
massi hugs jai aditya also congrt s him.
jig also say congrats in front of massi but jai came to know that she does not mean .

meawhile doctor comes and tells them they can meet bani.
massi tells jai to meet her first .
but jai thinks for a second and says massi u shud go first i want to talk to doctor.
massi says ok.
jai then thinks that he is in such a state even though he is happy he is unhappy.
that may be bani will not be able to support him as much she was doing before.
then he goes awya.
in the room bani asks where is mr.walia.
massi says ab to use jai bolo parna tumhera baccha bhi use bhi use mr.walia papa kehkar bolaya ga.

bani laughs.
and then tells him voh doc ke pas gaya hai.
and bani thinks pata nahi vo kahi mujse phir gusa to nahi ho gay.
jai is seeing bani from outside meanwhile bani saw him and then jiya jiya dhaak is played.

jig tells roshini bout this and roshini says i know.
jig is shocked and the episode ends.

will continue later

[ankitashah599]

that's really very nice episode
i really like ur episode then serial
i wish it will happen in the episod of the serial
keep posting

[Simar]

Nice fan fic Tanu
plz continue with sum more
thxx

[sweet20]

sorry for the delay actually my school started after the summer vac .

here the part - 5 goes .

ji is shocked to hear that roshini knows that .
she ask her how do u know ?

roshini says i was in the hospital when doctor gave this news and i think now jai luvs bani . i dont know what i shud i do to make them separte and says i want jai at any cost.jig says i want bani out of this house. roshini recieves a call and she leaves.
then ranveer goes into jig room and says

ma yeh kya ho gaya .
jig-beat mujhe samajh nahi ara jai bhaiya itne bade ho gaye hai phir bhi .
ranveer -- maa ab app kya karogi
jig - hamein kuch aisa karna hoga ki bani walia house chodde .

meanwhile adi listens to this and bash into thew room and says to both of them

agar bani ko kuch bhi hoa na jig tu main jai ko sara kuch bata do . yadd rakhna tum . aur ha i meri dhamki nahi hai par warning hai .

ranveer - app tu hamesha bani ka hi saath do gaye ma ka saath apne pehle bhi nahi diya that na aaj do gaye.

adi slaps him and tells him arre tumhari maa ne to tumhe yeh bhi nahi samajya ki jab do bade baat kar reho tu bachho ko bich main nahi bolna chaiye .
and goes.
ranveer says papa ne mere upar haath uthaya main us bani ko nahin chodga and leaves.

meanwhile jai cumes with bani in the house and all welcumes her .

rano is standing with sahil and get emotinol

jai and bani goes to thier room .

jai says - bani i m very soor for what i have done . i know u r bit angry with me.

bani says- mr.walia mujhe is bat ka dukh nahi nahi hai ki appse meri ma ka katal hoa that vo sirf ek accident that aur honi ko koi nahin tal sakta but apne is baat main mujhe samil nahin kara is baat par main gussa ho .
jai says sory once again .
bani says - vo hamara bita va kal tha par ab hamara future aane vala hai .

jiya jiya dhadak is played .

=jai says hame bahut sari shopping bhi karni is chote bahe ke liya.bani tumhe kya chayihe boy or girl.
i want boy like u .
jai says no i want a girl like u .
they both laugh .

and then sleeps.

kya hoga inki zindagi main .
kya inka baccha inke bich main aur pyar badaga ????


i hope very one likes it. pls say ur comments.

[ankitashah599]

nice episode keeeeeeeeeeeep it uppppppppppppppp tanu

[sweet20]

Hi All Of U Thanks A Ton To Towhid And Unaiza .actually I Wanted To Ask U A Question Do U Want Me To Continue This Fic . If Yes Pls Tell Me Till Tom.

[sweeta_salaam]

cool fanfic but do u actually think this will happen on the show?
lol i wish it would... cuz then it woulda been chooo chweet but nooo ekta just has to kill the show :mad:

[awall21]

Hi Tanu,

Of course, I would like for you to continue the Fan Fic!!!!!!!!!! I was away on vacation last month and just got into the forums again last week. If' I'm the only one that I wouldn't want you to go through all that trouble for one person but I'd still love to read what you wote and well KS say been pretty sad lately and I could do with a pick me up. Well hope to see the next part here real soon.

Thanks in advance,
Anita