Karam

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Cast:




Hiten Tejwani as Karan

Gauri pradhan as Gauri

Smriti Irani as mrs. kapoor [ Karan`s mom ]

Anupam kher as mr. kapoor [ karan`s Dad ]


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Story is centers about a middle class girl "Gauri" from kolkata. when suddenly destination meets her with "Karan" a rich handsome & a Big name in buisness world .

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Concept - Diipendu

Credit - thanxx 2 anchal !
Pictures by - http://i42.servimg.com/u/f42/11/12/24/05/nwp10.gif


Lyrics By - Gayathri(Gauri), Vadehi

Production Group - S creations

[VVS]

Please tell me when this serial came? and which channel and what the time?

Hiten and Gauri real a best couple. I waiting this serial:D

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dear yeh koi serial nahi hai... iam starting new online serials in serial killer here.
i love star tv that`s why maine star forum ko choose kiya :)

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[ Aaj new york se karan aaraha hai . wahin kapoor`s mansion mein karan ke aane ka intezaar hou raha hai. ghar ke sabhi loug karan ke swaagat ki tyaari kar rahe hain par bauji karan se naaraz hain aur ghar ke kuch loug eesi topic pe kone mein khare hou ke baat kar rahe hain .]

[ udhar ghar se office ke liye harbari mein nikalti hui ek ladki "Gauri pradhan as Gauri" ]

Gauri : maa main office ke liye late hou rahi hoon.....

Maa: arre ruk jaa , yeh le dahi-shakkar ......

Gauri : achha ebaar aami aashi.....

[ Gauri bus-stop pe bus ka intezaar kar rahi thii tabhi achaanak ek gaari wahaan se guzarti hai aur keechar ki cheete gauri ke kapro pe parti hai ]

Gauri : [ gusse se ] dikhaayi nahi deta !! andhe ho !! ......

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[ Gauri bus-stop pe bus ka intezaar kar rahi thii tabhi achaanak ek gaari wahaan se guzarti hai aur keechar ki cheete gauri ke kapro pe parti hai ]

Gauri : [ gusse se ] dikhaayi nahi deta !! andhe ho !! ......

[ woh car ruk ke peechey aata hai aur darwaaza khulta hai aur usmein se ek chehra baahar aata hai "Hiten tejwani as Karan Kapoor" ]

Karan : iam sorry.... mere wajah se aapka dress..... kya main aapko lift dey sakta hoon?....

Gauri : theek hai......

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Gauri :theek hai......

[ karan gaari roukta hai ]

Gauri : arre , aapko kaise pata ke mera oofice yahaan hai ?.....

Karan : kyuki main yahaan ka boss hoon......

[ gauri yeh soon ke hayraan ho jaati hai ]

Gauri : sir aap ?.... SORRY.....

Karan : koi baat nahi, sorry tou mujhe kehna chahiye........

[ office mein ]

[ karan ka dost gautam oos se milta hai ]

Gautam : yaar kahaan thha tu ?.... pata hai tere dadaji ne elaan kar diya hai ke jab tak tu shaadi nahi karega tujhe property mein se footi-kouri bhi nahi milegi......

Karan :[ hayraan houte hue ] what ?......

[VVS]

Thanks diipendu,

Your story is very nice and good.

pls continue......

I'm waiting...:)

what is next...:D

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thank u vvs ! :D :p

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Karan : [ hayraan houte hue ] what ?......

Gautam : haan , uhoune yeh farmaan sunaya hai ke 1 mahine ke andar-andar tumhe shaadi karni hougi.....

Gautam: ab soch lo agar tumhe apni property pyaari hai.... tou shaadi tou karni hi paregi..... mujhe pata hai ke yeh shaadi naam se hi tumhe problem hai.... magar dadaji ne tou ees baar bahut hi takdi baazi kheli hai.....

[ tabhi karan bola ]

Karan : magar woh bhi bhool rahe hain ke main onka pyaara grandson hoon..... yunhi haarna meri fitrat nahi.... jeetna karan ki aadat hai..... main shaadi zaroor karunga magar...... contract marriage.... sirf ek saal ka contract marriage....

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Karan : magar woh bhi bhool rahe hain ke main onka pyaara grandson hoon..... yunhi haarna meri fitrat nahi.... jeetna karan ki aadat hai..... main shaadi zaroor karunga magar...... contract marriage.... sirf ek saal ka contract marriage....

Gautam : magar aise kaun ladki hougi jo tumse contract marriage karegi ?.....

Karan : paise ke liye eensaan kuch bhi kar sakta hai..... jise eeski sabse zyada zaroorat hougi.....

[ tabhi saamne se gauri aarahi thii. woh file padtey hue aarahi thii aur achanak karan se takrai ]

[ files ke saare papers eedhar-udhar geer rahe thhe aur gauri karan ke baaho mein. gauri ki nazar karan se mili aur woh dono ek dusre mein kho gaye.] http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/505855.gif

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[ tabhi saamne se gauri aarahi thii. woh file padtey hue aarahi thii aur achanak karan se takrai ]

[ files ke saare papers eedhar-udhar geer rahe thhe aur gauri karan ke baaho mein. gauri ki nazar karan se mili aur woh dono ek dusre mein kho gaye.] http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/505855.gif

http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/505855.gif[ mahol ekdum romantic ho gaya thha ] http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/505855.gif

Gautam : hello !.................:rolleyes:

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Gautam : hello !.................

[ sapna toot gaya ]

[ gauri ke wahaan se jaate hi ]

Karan : yehi toh hai woh....

Gautam : [ hayraan houte hue ] what ????.....http://illiweb.com/fa/i/smiles/icon_scratch.png

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Karan : yehi toh hai woh....

Gautam : [ hayraan houte hue ] what ????.....

Karan : gauri kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi ?..........

[ yeh soon gauri ek dum se shock ho gayi ke ooska boss oose direct propose kar raha hai shaadi ke liye ]

Gauri : ???? :eek:

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[ Gautam gauri ko poori baat samjhata hai ]

Gautam : tou eseliye.... kya tum ees contract mariage ke liye tyaar ho ?.....

[ yeh soon gauri ko bahut gussa aata hai ]

Gauri : aapki himmat kaise hue ! ........... aapne apne employees ko samajh kya rakha hai..... jab chaha oone apne matlab ke liye use kar liya ? ....... shaadi aap ke liye ek khel houga mazaak houga..... magar mere liye eeski ahemiyat bahut hai......

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Gauri : iam sorry mr.karan magar main aapse shaadi nahi kar sakti...... goodbye !.........
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[ gauri wahaan se chale jaati hai ]

Gautam : yaar , yeh mamla tou ulta par gaya....

Karan: main shart lagata hoon..... woh waapas zaroor aayegi..... mera mann na jaane yeh kyun kehta hai..... `woh waapas aayegi zaroor......`

[ gauri ghar pahuchti hai ]

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[ gauri ghar pahuchti hai ]

[ poore gharwaale pareshaan thhe ]

Gauri : kya hua , aap sab pareshaan kyu hain ?....

Ma : gauri , beta dekhna yeh notice aaya hai.... esme likha hai ke do din ke andar-andar yeh ghar khaali karna hai.... agar do dino ke andar 40 lakh rupaye na chukaya gaya tou.......... tere papa ne 10 lakh rupaye ka intezaam kar liya hai magar.... baaki ke 30 lakh....

[ gauri ko yaad aata hai ke gautam ne kaha thha ke agar woh yeh contract marriage kar leti hai tou oosey 30 lakh rupaye milenge ]

[ Gauri bahut sochti hai magar ooska mann nahi maanta ]

[ gauri ghar waalo ko pareshaan dekhti hai aur aakhir faisla kar leti hai ]

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[ gauri ghar waalo ko pareshaan dekhti hai aur aakhir faisla kar leti hai ]

[ Agle din ]

[ karan ke office mein ]

Gauri : mujhe yeh contract marriage manzoor hai..... magar meri ek shart hai....

Karan : shart ?.....

Gauri : [ pareshaan houte hue ] haan , mujhe apne ghar ko neelami se bachaane ke liye 30 lakh rupaye chahiye.... magar....

Karan : mill jayenge.... oski tum chinta mat karo bas !.... sirf ek baar mere dadaji mujhe meri property dey de phir hum ees jhoothi shaadi ke dekhave ko khatam kar denge....

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Karan : mill jayenge.... oski tum chinta mat karo bas !.... sirf ek baar mere dadaji mujhe meri property dey de phir hum ees jhoothi shaadi ke dekhave ko khatam kar denge....

[ gauri wahaan se route hue chali jaati hai ]

[ raaste par chalte-chalte gauri soch rahi hai ]

Gauri : maine bachpan se har ladkiyo ki tarah apne rajkumar ka intezar kiya hai jo ek din safed ghore par ayega aur mujhe ley jayega..... magar... main dosh kise doo ?.... apne kismat ko ?... ya halat ko ?.....

[ gauri ghar pahuchti hai ]

[ shanta tai (gauri ki masi) ]

Shanta tai : arre beta gauri , tu itni udaas si kyun hai ?.... kya baat hai ??.... eedhar dekh mere taraf... ab bata chal kya baat hai ?..... bol ! arre bolna !....

[ Gauri shanta tai ko sab kuch bata deti hai ]

Shanta tai : [chaukte hue ] kya !! .... tujhe pata bhi hai tu kya bol rahi hai.... jab ghar pe sabko yeh baat...

Gauri : nahi masi , aap yeh baat kisi ko nahi bataogi.... karan ke gharwaale do din baad hi aarahe hain... ghar pe mera haath mangne.....

Shanta tai : tu fikar mat kar !... jab tak teri shanta tai hai koi problem nahi hougi....:cool: magar ek baat bata ke kya tere papa manenge ??....

Gauri : pata nahi.....

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Gauri : pata nahi.....

[ Udhar karan ke ghar mein situation bahut serious hai ]

Karan : maa , jab main shaadi nahi karna chah raha thha tab aapsab ne mujhe force kiya ke main shaadi kar lu aur ab jab mujhe apni pasand ki ladki se shaadi karni hai tab aap sab mujhpar naaraz hou rahe ho.....

[ Tabhi Mitthi bua teekhe tarah se karan ko boli ]:mad:

Mithi bua : arre beta hum toh teri bhalai ki soch rahein hain..... warna 20 saal pehle tere papa ne bhi apni marzi se ek middle class ladki se shaadi karke....

[ karan ki mom ko yeh baat achhi nahi lagi aur woh wahaan se route hue chali gayi ]

Deeda [ karan ki dadi ] : mithi !.... tu chup nahi reh sakti ?.... jo bhi zaban mein aaye bole chali jaati hai.....

Mithi bua : [ gusse se ] huh !!... maine kahaan kuch bola hai.... yahaan har koi mujh bechaari par hi zulm dha te hou.....

[ mithi bua wahaan se chali jaati hai ]

Deeda : theek hai karan , agar tere dadaji ko yeh rishta manzoor hua toh hum kal hi gauri ke ghar shagun leke jayenge....

Karan : thankyou deeda....

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Karan : thankyou deeda....

[ Gauri gharwaalon ko shaadi ki baat batate hue hich-kichati hai. ]

Gauri : woh , maine.......... papa , ma maine ek faisla liya hai....

Papa : faisla ?... kaisa faisla ?......

Gauri : maine........... shaadi karne ka faisla kiya hai......

[ yeh soonke gauri ke papa aur ma khush hou jaate hain. ]

Ma : (khush houte hue)arre yeh tou bahut achii baat hai..... durga maa ka lakh-lakh shukar hai ke gauri ne aakhir shaadi karne ka mann bana hi liya.....

[ tabhi kanta tai boli ]

Kanta tai : magar eesne abhi tak poori baat nahi batayi.... [ kanta tai gauri ko eeshara karti hai ke woh poori baat bata dey. ]

[ gauri mann mein sochti hai ke agar poori baat gharwaalo ke saamne aajayega tou maa aur papa ka dil toot jayega aur ees ghar ko bhi bachana hai. ]:(

[ udhar maa aur papa ek hi baat soch rahe thhe ke gauri ki aadat aur oosey dekhkar tou koi middle class ladka hi gauri se shaadi karne ke liye tyaar houga kyunki gauri bahut shaant swabhav ladki hai. ]

Gauri : uska naam , karan hai.....

[ tabhi kanta tai boli ]

Kanta tai : tu kya kab se dheere-dheere bata rahi hai.... asal mein baat yeh hai ke ees shey-hey ke sabse badey buisness tycoon aur rising buisness man karan ka rishta aaya hai apni gauri ke liye !....................

[ gauri ke liye itne badey ghar se rishta aaney ko sunkar maa aur papa chauk jaaye hain aur hayrat mein par jaatey hain. ]:eek: :eek:

Kanta tai : kyun , yakeen nahi araha na ?..... magar gauri tu poori baat bataeygi ya nahi ?......

[ gauri darr jaati hai ]

Ma : poori baat ?.........

Kanta tai : haan !... woh....... [ gauri kanta tai ko eeshara kar rahi hai ke woh ma-papa ko kuch bhi na bataye. ]

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Kanta tai : haan !... woh....... [ gauri kanta tai ko eeshara kar rahi hai ke woh ma-papa ko kuch bhi na bataye. ]

Kanta tai : tune mujhe bolne kyun nahi diya sab such such ?..... hum jo chupa rahe hain ek na ek din tou yeh baat sabke saamne aayega hi.....

Gauri : main jaanti hoon , magar mujhe durga maa par poora vishwaas hai.... woh sab theek kar degi aur dekhte-dekhte yeh ek saal beet jaayega.....

Kanta tai : akhri baar soch le beta.... tune jo faisla liya hai woh..... theek tou hai na ?....

Gauri : atleast ghar ko bachaane ke liye gharwaalo ke liye yeh faisla.... bilkul theek hai.....

Kanta tai : magar eske baad tujh se kaun shaadi karega ?....

Gauri : masi , maine kaha na.... durga maa sab theek kar degi.... sabka Apna-Apna karam.....

[ Agle din karan ke ghar se Pandit ko lekar dadaji , dadi aur karan aate hain shagun leke udhar gauri ke gharwaale unki khaatir-daari karte hain. ]

[ Dadaji ko gauri ka swabhav bahut achha laga aur karan ke liye gauri ke rishte ko ek hi nazar mein haan dey diya ]

[ Karan aur Gauri ke gharwaalo ke beech rasam ke sabhi kaam poore hou gaye aur panditji ko dono ki kundli dekhai. ]

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[ Karan aur Gauri ke gharwaalo ke beech rasam ke sabhi kaam poore hou gaye aur panditji ko dono ki kundli dekhai. ]

[ Karan pandit ko dara raha thha ke woh yeh kundali mein sab theek-theek hi bol dey " Warna !....http://illiweb.com/fa/i/smiles/icon_pirat.png " ] :cool:

[ pandit ne darr ke maare kundali mein sab bahut achha hai keh ke shaadi ke liye agle 7 din baad ka taarik dey dala ] :o

[ Dono pariwaar bahut khush thhe ees rishte se. Dadaji aur dadi ne gharwaale gauri ko aashirwaad diya aur jald se jald shaadi ke tyaari ke liye ghar chaley gaye. ]

[ Gauri ko bahut bura lag raha thha yeh jhooth-muth ki shaadi ke dekhave se. ] :(

[ Gauri kanta tai se udaas houte hue kehti hai ]

Gauri : [ udaas houte hue ] masi , mujhe yeh sab dekhavse se bahut bura lag raha hai......... main apne hi gharwaalon ke emotions ke saath khel rahi hoon..... kitna achha lagta hai yeh sab dekne mein magar suchai kya hai.... yeh ootna hi bura hai jitni main hoon..... kya meri kismat mein kabhi yeh sab such houga ?.... kya kabhi meri shaadi aise hi kisi badey ghar mein mere sapno ke rajkumar se hougi ?......

Kanta tai : aisa zaroor houga....

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plzz post ur questions , doubts or any other feedback so we can provide u more entertainment episodes....;)

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Kanta tai : aisa zaroor houga....

[ Agle din office mein ]

[ Gauri office mein kaam rahi thi ke oosey tabhi ek phone aata hai. Gauri ko pata chalta hai ki ooski behen ka accident hou gaya hai. ]

[ tabhi wahaan se karan jaa raha thha gauri ko pareshaan dekh oosne gauri se ooske pareshani ki wajah poochi. ]

Gauri : [ pareshaan houte hue ] meri behen ka accident hou gaya hai.... mujhe abhi turant jaana houga.... please karan....

Karan : theek hai main bhi tumhare saath chalta hoon.....

Gauri : theek hai...

[ gauri karan ek saath gauri ke behen ko dekhne jaa rahe thhe. ]

[ karan car ko tezi se chala raha thha. ]

Karan : tumhari behen kaun se hospital mein admit hai ?......

Gauri : city hospital.....

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Karan : tumhari behen kaun se hospital mein admit hai ?......

Gauri : city hospital.....

[ Car tezi se jaa rahi thii eseliye raaste ke ubar-khaabar houne se gauri ko thode problem hou rahe thhe. ]

Karan : tum theek hou na ?....

Gauri : haan....

[ ees baar raaste mein bahut bara ghadhha thha aur car ki speed bhi zyada thi jiske wajah se gauri ka haath karan ke haathon ko touch kar gaya. ]

[ dono ek doosre ko dekh rahe thhe. situation thoda romantic se houne laga thha. ]http://i42.servimg.com/u/f42/11/12/24/05/heart11.gif

Gauri : iam sorry....

Karan : koi baat nahi.....

[ dono city hospital pahuch jaate hain. ]

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[ dono city hospital pahuch jaate hain. ]

[ Gauri receptionist se poochti hai tou receptionist oosey ward no. 17 batati hai. ]

[ Karan aur Gauri ward no.17 mein admit gauri ke behen shilpa ko dekhne jaate hain. ]

[ Gauri jaake dekhti hai tou shilpa ab theek houti hai aur ooske injury ka dressing hou raha thha. yeh dekh gauri ki jaan mein jaan aayi ke ab shilpa theek hai aur ghabrane wali koi baat nahi. ]

Gauri : meri tou jaan hi nikal gayi thi.... ab kaisi hai tu ?.....

shilpa : main theek hoon di....

[ shilpa gauri ke saath karan ko dekhti hai. ]

shilpa : hmmm...... abhi sagaayi hui nahi ke jeju ke saath ghumna shuru.....

Gauri : [ gussa houte hue ] chup !.... kuch bhi bolti hai...... tu ghar chal ma se teri shikayat karungi......

[ shilpa ko discharge mill jata hai. karan shilpa aur gauri ko ghar drop kar deta hai. shilpa ke andar jaate hi gauri karan ko thanx bolne ke liye waapas daurte hue aarahi thii ke gauri ka payr fissal jata hai aur karan oosey thaam leta hai. ]http://i42.servimg.com/u/f42/11/12/24/05/heart11.gif


[ gauri aur karan ek doosre ke nazro mein dekhte-dekhte kho jaate hain ke tabhi wahaan kuch bachhe aajate hain aur oondono ko dekh haste hain. ]

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Karan : gauri , i think shilpa ko tumhari zaroorat hougi eseliye aaj tumhe office aane ki zaroorat nahi.....

Gauri : magar.....

Karan : agar magar kuch nahi..... hum dost hai tou main jo kahunga woh maanna parega.....

Gauri : theek hai.....:)

[ karan car mein beith jaata hai. gauri ghar ke taraf jaane lagti hai. tabhi gauri phir waapas aati hai. ]

Gauri : karan....

Karan : haan ?...

Gauri : woh.... thanx.....:)

Karan : tum bhool rahi hou.... dosti mein no thanx......

Gauri : bye.....

Karan : bye.......:)

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[ engagement ka din ajata hai. jahaan gauri ke ghar mein zor-shor se tyaari chal rahi thii wahin karan ke dadaji ne nayi will banvane ke liye apne lawyer ko keh diya thha. jab karan ko yeh pata chala ke dadaji ne naye will banvane dey diye hain tou yeh jaan oosey tasali hou gaya ke ab uska plan kaam karne laga hai. ]

[ engagement bahut achhe se nipat jata hai. Dadaji gauri aur karan ko aashirwaad dete hain. ]

[ karan ke gharwaale jaa rahe thhe. karan gauri se akele mein baat karne wapas aata hai. ]

Karan : jaisa humare beech baat hua thha ke tum mujhse shaadi karogi aur main tumhe tumhara ghar waapis karunga..... mere jaate hi tumhare ghar kuch papers aayenge.....

Gauri : thanx karan......

[ karan ke kehne ke mutabik uske jaate hi kuch papers gauri ko milte hain jispar likha houta hai ke aaj se unka ghar bilkul safe hai. ]

[ tabhi gauri ke kamre mein kanta masi aati hai. ]

Kanta masi : ( khush houte hue ) aaj woh karan ekdum hero lag raha thha na ?..... tu bahut khush hougi...

Kanta masi : arre gauri tere haath mein yeh papers kaise hain ?....

Gauri : ghar ke papers hain masi..... karan ne apna vaada nibha diya hai.... ab mujhe mera vaada nibhana houga.....

Kanta masi : such gauri , tune ees ghar ko bachaane ke liye........ kisi anjaane se.... jisko tu jaanti bhi nahi.... oos se shaadi karne jaa rahi hai.... bhgwaan teri jaise beti har kisi ko dey.........

Kanta masi : ab chal-chal , mujhe rulayegi kya !..... 2 din baad teri shaadi hai...... na jaane kaisa houga woh ghar aur kaise hounge wahaan ke loug !...... ey gauri , maine decide kar liya hai.....

Gauri : kya ?...

Kanta masi : main bhi tere saath wahaan jaoongi.... wahaan oos ghar mein rehne.... main tujhe oos karan ke saath oos ghar mein akele jaane nahi doongi.....

Gauri : ( mana karte hue ) magar masi....

Kanta masi : nahi nahi nahi mujhe kuch nahi sunna !......

Gauri : theek hai.......

Kanta masi : haan , main wahaan tere saath jaungi aur oos karan ne agar tujhe zarra sa bhi tang kiya na.... tou main oska band baja doongi !......

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Dear viewers,

S creations & me diipendu we all want to thank u for ur lovely views... hope we entertain u all by giving more intresting episodes of karam....
there is a big & intresting twist:eek: is coming till then u have 2 watch karam daily.:)

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Kanta masi : haan , main wahaan tere saath jaungi aur oos karan ne agar tujhe zarra sa bhi tang kiya na.... tou main oska band baja doongi !......

[ udhar karan ke ghar mein ]

[ Karan ki shaadi ki khabar sunkar karan ki bari behen (Shilpa) aaj ghar pahuchti hai. ]

[ mithi bua ghar ke servents ko daat-te hue ]

Mithibua : arre aaj shilpa kisi bhi waqt aati hi hougi..... poori villan hai jo bhi bolti hai tou ek dum dheere silent baat aur jo karti hai woh khatarnaak !..... oos se bachh ke rehna tou hi achha hai warna jaan se jaoge..... aur haan ! oose kaala rang se bahut pyaar hai.... eseliye uske room ka colour bhi poora black hai.....

Mithibua : ab shilpa ka favourate colour agar black hai tou zahir se baat hai.... hehehe.... ke oose safed yaane whyte rang se nafrat hai.... ees baar shaadi mein dadaji karan ko ees poore property ka maalik bana rahey hain......

[ mithibua ek naukar ke kaan mein kehti hai. ]

Mithibua : arre andar ki khabar hai..... mujhe lagta hai ke karan ke ees poore property ke maalik bann jaane se shilpa ko yeh bahut achha NAHI laga hai eseliye woh karan se apne bhai-behen wala pyaar dekhava karne ki koshish karegi.....

Servent 01 : magar madam , agar shilpa madam ko karan sir ke ees property ke maalik bann-ne se aitraaz hai..... tou woh karan sir se achhe se kyun pesh aayegi ?......

Mithibua : arre u idyit !.....:mad: haamare bihar mein koi tumsa ooloo nahi hai !...... arre u full.... zahir si baat hai ke shilpa yeh sab property hathyane ki koshish mein hai....... mujhe tou lagta hai ke zaroor koi saajish karke aarahi hai woh........... ` SHILPA '......

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[ Shilpa ghar pahuch jaati hai. ]

Mithibua : arre.... shilpa , beti aao !...

[ Tabhi Achaanak Shilpa boli ]

Shilpa : ( gusse se ) beti kehke yeh rishta banane ki himmat bhi matt karna !....

Karan`s mom : [ khush houte hue ] :) arre shilpa !.... aao kaise hou ?....

Shilpa : Shilpa ko kabhi kuch hua hai jo woh achii na hou ?.... kyun ma ?.....

Karan`s mom : tum abhi bhi nahi badli ho.... bilkul waise ke waise hi ho... wahi teekhe jawaab dil mein nafrat..... karan upar apne kamre mein hai.... agar apne bhai ki itne dino mein yaad aayi ho tou jaake mill lena.....

[ yeh kehke karan ki mom wahaan se shilpa se disappoint houke chali jaati hai. ]

Shilpa : ( Gusse se ) MY.... FOOT !!!!.............. nafrat hai mujhe karan se !.....

[ Shilpa Karan se milne ooske kamre mein jaati hai. ]

Karan : [ khush houte hue ] arre shilpa di aap ?.... good to see you !..... kaise hain aap ?....

Shilpa : main theek hoon... waise maine sunna hai ke tum shaadi ?....

Karan : haan di , woh dadaji.....

Shilpa : dadaji ki tou umar hou gayi hain.... unhe tou bas tumhare shaadi hi nazar aati hai.... bhala tumhari apni bhi zindagi hai... yeh tumhari zindagi hai... woh houte kaun hai ees tarah tumhe force karne waale ?....

Shilpa : waise..... maine suna hai ke shaadi houte hi dadaji apni nayi WILL announce karenge ?.....

Karan : haan di , dadaji tou mere peechey hi pare hue hain kisi bhi tarah unke ees buisness ko main sambhalu.... ees poore ghar mein aap hi hain jo mujhe samjahti hain... jinpar main itna bharosa karta hoon.... ab aap hi bataiye... kya dadaji kuch zyada-zyada nahi kar rahe ?.....

Shilpa : Haaaaan......... i agree with bro !....

Karan : achha , ab main chalta hoon office mein kuch kaam hai.....

Shilpa : theek hai.....

[ KARAN KE JAATE HI ]

Shilpa : ( Bahut zyaada Gusse se ) MY......... FOOT !!!!!................... abhi itne bhi bare mat ban jana ke ees poore property ko apne naam kar lo..... mujhe yeh bilkul bardaash nahi houga ke yeh poori property tumhare naam hou jaaye...... na hi main kisi ka interferance bardaasht karungi !......

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[ SHAADI KA DIN ]

[ Gauri ke ghar mein zor-shor se tyaari chal rahi hai. Gauri dulhan ke jode mein bahut soondar lag rahi thi. ]

[ Baarat darwaaze par thi. ladki waale baarat ka swaagat karne pahuchti hai. ]

Panditji : kanya ko bulaiye.... shubh mahurat bitaa ja raha hai.....

[ Gauri siriyon se neechey aati hai. Karan ki nazar gauri par parti hai aur woh bas gauri ko dekhta hi rehta hai. :rolleyes: ]

[ Gauri uske paas aake beith jaati hai aur karan abhi bhi khayalo mein khoya hua hai. ]http://i42.servimg.com/u/f42/11/12/24/05/heart11.gif

Gauri : karan... karan !...

[ karan khayalo se bahar ajata hai. ]

Karan : haan ?... :eek:

Gauri : dhyaan kahaan tumhara ?.....

[ karan muskurata hai. ]:D

[ Shaadi ki rasam shuru hou jaati hai. karan gauri ke maang mein sindoor aur gale mein mangal-sutra pehna deta hai. ]

[ Shaadi ke phere houte hain. ]

[ idhar shilpa mann-hi-mann karan ki shaadi se jall rahi thi. ]

Shilpa : ( Bahut gusse se ) MY................ FOOT !!!!..... aaj shaadi aur kal..... kal poori property apne naam pe ?..... aisa main houne nahi doongi !...... main apna hakk leke hi rahungi chahe eske liye mujhe kisi ki jaan bhi lene pare......

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[ Gauri ki Bidaai hou jaati hai. ]

[ Gauri kapoor mansion mein pahuchti hai. ]

[ Darwaaze par sab gauri ke swaagat ke liye khare thhe. gauri ne kalash giraya aur ghar ke andar aayi. Saamne thali thi. ]

Mithibua : beta gauri ab tum ees thaali mein payr rakho aur apne kadam aage badaao.

[ Gauri oos thali mein payr rakhne hi waali thi ke karan ne oose rouk liya. ]

[ Ghar ke sabhi loug hayraan hou gaye ke karan ne gauri ko rouka kyun ?. ]

Karan : ees thali mein kuch hai.....

[ karan neechey jhuka aur oos thali mein pare oos chiz ko uthaya. woh chiz ek kaanch ka tukra tha. ]

[ ghar ke loug ees kaanch ke tukre ko dekh pareshaan hou gaye. ]

Shilpa : ( gusse se ) yeh sab kiska kaam hai !..... zaroor ees ghar ke servants ne hi aisa kiya houga.....

[diipendu]

[ tabhi mithi bua dheere se boli ]

Mithibua : woh naukar bhi hou sakta hai ya......... koi ghar ka sadasya bhi....

[ Shilpa gusse se mithibua ke taraf dekhti hai. ]:mad:

mrs. kapoor ( karan`s mom ) : aao beta , andar aao.....

[ Tabhi peechey se ]

Kanta : ( zorr se kehte hue ) lo , main aagayi !!!........:D :cool:

Mrs. kapoor : aap ?..... yahaan ?....

[ kanta masi karan ko ishare se bolti hai ke woh gharwaalo ko kahe ke kanta tai bhi yahaan reh sakti hai. ]:cool:

[ Karan gharwaalo ko samjhata hai ke kanta masi bhi aaj se yahaan sabke saath rahegi yeh jaan ke mr. & mrs. kapoor khush hou jaate hain. ]

Dadaji : chalo , itne dino ke baad ees ghar mein aapke rehne se kuch machines insaan bann jayenge....

Kanta masi : hahaha.... agar nahi bhi bane tou dont worry kanta sabko ek second mein theek kar degi....

Shilpa : ( Bahut gusse se ) MY......FOOT !!!!!!......... [ Shilpa wahaan se chali jaati hai. ]

[diipendu]

[ kamre mein Gauri khirki se chaand ko dekhe jaa rahi thi ke tabhi darwaaze par awaaz hui. Gauri ne jaake dekha tou wahaan karan tha. ]

Karan : gauri , aaj main sofa pe sou jata hoon....

Gauri : arre nahi iski koi zarorat nahi.... main..

Karan : maine kaha na.... ab jaao jaake sou jaao...

[ AGLE DIN ]

[ Karan ne apna wardrobe khola. oose kuch samjah nahi araha tha ke woh office ke liye kaun sa shirt pehne. ( background music mein : "main aisa kyun hoon ? - lakshya ") ]

[ karan ke saamne bahut saare kapre parey thhe. ]

Karan : oh no , mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi araha hai......:confused:

[ tabhi wahaan gauri aati hai. ]

Gauri : kya main kuch help kar doon ??.....

Karan : theek hai....

[ gauri ne karan ke liye black shirt choice kiya. ]

Karan : oh THANK GOD !....... i think mujhe yehi chahiye thha.... thanks
gauri.....

[ gauri wahaan se jaane wali thi ke tabhi oski churi karan ke shirt mein atak gayi. ]

[ Dono ek dusre ko dekh rahe thhe ke tabhi darwaaze par kisi ne knock kiya. ]

[ gauri ne darwaaza khola. ]

Kanta masi : gauri !... itne deir se main darwaza khat-khata rahi thi..... tu bhi na !.....

[ yeh kehte hue kanta masi andar agayi. ]:D

Kanta masi : achha gauri sun , tujhe pag-phere ke rasam ke liye ghar ke liye jana hai.... chal jaldi se tyaar hou main tou tyaar houke tip-top beithi hoon....

[ gauri ne karan ke taraf dheere se dekha. Karan ne bhi gauri ko dekha. ]

Kanta masi : kahaan kho gayi hai ??... chal jaldi se tyaar ho !......

Gauri : je masi....

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thanks for ur lovely comment !...:D

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[ karan kanta masi aur gauri ko ghar chorrne ata hai. ]

Karan : main kal tumhe tou ley jaunga par.... kanta masi ko bhi ??....

Kanta masi : ( chillate hue ) haaaaaaaaaaaannnnnn !!!!.........:mad:

Karan : achha achha theek hai....

[ gauri jaane lagti hai tou uska anchal karan ke ghar mein atak jaata hai. ]

[ Karan gauri ke anchal ko nikalne ki koshish karta hai. ]

Gauri : main dekhu ?....:)

[ Gauri anchal ko ghari se nikal deti hai. ]:)

Karan : :D


[ Karan ke jaate hi ]

Ma : arre , gauri tu agayi.... karan kahaan hai ??...

Gauri : maa , unhe kuch zaroori kaam thha...

Ma : achha achha...

Gauri : papa kaise hain ?...

Ma : papa theek hai..... aur bata kahin kanta ne wahaan kisi ka jeena mushkil tou nahi kiya na ?.....

Kanta masi : arre !!... saari duniya mein buraai ka poora theka kya maine hi liya hai ?.....

[diipendu]

[ kuch deir baad darwaaze par ghanti bajti hai. Gauri jaake darwaaza kholti hai. ]

[ Gauri ke naam par ek bahut baraa flower ka bouquet aata hai. jispar kisi ne shayari likhi houti hai jisey parr ke gauri ke chehre par muskaan ajati hai. ]

Kanta masi : arre tu wahin khari hou gayi.... kya aaya hai ?....

Gauri : masi , kisi ne phool bheje hain.....

Kanta masi : yeh fool kaun bhej sakta hai ?..... main abhi jaake dekhti hoon....

Ma : arre kanta....

Papa : dekhne do... aakhir woh jasoos jo thehri.... bina jaasoosi kiye kanta kabhi reh paay hai ?....

[ kanta masi woh shayari dekhti hai tou shock hou jaati hai ke itna romantic shayari gauri ko kaun bhej sakta hai. ]http://illiweb.com/fa/i/smiles/icon_eek.gif

Kanta masi : hmmm..... samajh gayi.... yeh koi aur nahi... balki wahi houga...... poocho kaun ??.....http://illiweb.com/fa/i/smiles/suspect.gif

[ SAB MILKE POOCHTE HAIN " KAUN ?? " ]

kanta masi : karan !... aur kaun..... dekha mera dimaag... kanta bond hoon main.....

[ sab milke kanta masi ke baaton par zorr-zorr se hass parte hain. ]

Kanta masi : arre , maine koi joke maara ??.... aur mujhe khud hi pata nahi ?.....

[diipendu]

[ Agle din SUBAH ]

[ Karan gauri ko lene aaya hai. gauri ke maa aur papa gauri aur karan ko aashirwaad dey rahey hain. ]

[ Karan , Gauri aur Kanta masi Ghar pahuchte hain. ]

Shilpa : arre karan , aaj mom aur papa ko urgently new-york ke liye jana para hai....

Karan : magar kyun ?....

Shilpa : woh actually....... woh.....

Kanta Masi : kya hua bol na !......

[ Shilpa gusse se kanta masi ko dekhti hai. ]

Shilpa : woh actually , papa ka jo wahaan factory hai wahaan kuch problems chal rahi hain.... eseliye ab papa aur mom ab wahin settle ho gaye hain.....

Gauri : magar yeh sab kuch bahut jaldi mein ho gaya hai.....

Karan : haan gauri.....

Shilpa : aur ek baat..... aaj dadaji apna WILL parne waale hain.... lawyer ata hi houga.....

Mithibua : haan haan , aapko tou zyada jaldi hai..... WILL par apna naam sunne ko ?.....

Shilpa : ( bahut zyaada gusse se ) JUST MIND YOUR LANGUAGE !..:mad: ...... huh !!!!.......

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THIS IS THE WARNING MSG FOR THOSE WHO R POSTING THERE ADS EVERYWHERE IN SERIAL KILLER FORUM !!!! :mad: THIS IS NOT ANY KIND OF JOKE SO PLZZ B ATTENTION !!!!:mad: THIS IS NOT ANY KIND OF RIGHT PLACE WHERE U PLACE UR ADS.... :mad:

[diipendu]

[ dadaji sabko apne room mein bulaate hain apni WILL parke sabko sunane ke liye. ]

Lawyer : ees Will mein likha hai ke main dhanraj kapoor , apni power of attorney...... mere poute.... Karan ke naam karta hoon... aur.... kapoor industries bhi apne poute karan kapoor ke naam karta hoon.... eseliye aaj se..... mere ees poore property ke haqdaar karan aur uski patni gauri hai......

[ Shilpa mann-hi-mann dadaji ke ees faisle se jall rahi thi. ]

Shilpa : [ bahut zyada gusse se ] MYYYYYYYY.......... FOOT !!!!!!..............:mad: [ shilpa wahaan se chali jaati hai. ]

[ Ab karan pe ek bahut barii zimmedari agayi thi. Akhir karan jaisa chahta tha oosey woh mill gaya tha. ]

[ Karan kamre mein gauri ko apna agla plan batata hai. ]

Gautam : karan , tab kya houga jab tum dono ki yeh contract marriage khatam hougi ?...

[ Gautam ki baaton se karan aur gauri apne pyaar bharey khayaalo se bahaar nikal aate hain. ]

Gautam : jab gauri aur tumhari yeh shaadi tootegi tou ghar mein dadaji , aur baaki gharwaalon se kya kahoge ??..... kuch socha bhi hai ?.....

Gautam : mere paas ek plan hai.....

Karan : plan ?... kaisa plan ?.....

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Gautam : agar gauri ees ghar ke saare lougo se buraa bartaav kare ya sabke samne apna image ko kharaab kare then.... tab !..... tab jaake kuch baat bann sakta hai.... aur ees se houga yeh ke agar gauri ees ghar se chali bhi jaaye tou kisi ko buraa bhi nahi lagega aur sab ees divorce ko maan bhi lenge....

[ Gauri ees idea se khush nahi. ]

Karan : [ na-khush houte hue ] excellent...... achha idea hai... :(

[ gauri karan ke taraf hayraani se dekhti hai aur uske ankhon pe aasoo ajate hain. ]

[ Gauri wahaan se chali jaati hai. ]

Gautam : arre , eese kya hou gaya ?........

[ kuch deir baad ]

[ Gautam ki nazar karan par parti hai. Karan bahut pareshaan tha aur oosey khud yeh nahi pata ke woh pareshaan kyun hai .]

Gautam : hmmm..... tou yeh baat hai.............

Karan : kya ??.....

Gautam : such such bata..... kahin tujhe gauri se.... pyaar tou nahi hou gaya hai ??.......

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Gautam : such such bata..... kahin tujhe gauri se.... pyaar tou nahi hou gaya hai ??.......

[ karan ki zubaan ne bhi ab oska saath chorr diya. karan larkharate hue bola. ]

Karan : yeh.... tu tu ... tu yeh kaise baat kar raha hai....[ gauri wahaan ati hai. ] main aur gauri se pyaar ??...... Aisa hou hi nahi sakta.... maine oos se shaadi sirf ek property ko paane ke liye ki thi.... BAS !!...... eske aage mera aur gauri ke beech aisa kuch bhi nahi hai......

[ Gauri wahaan se route hue chali jaati hai. ]

Karan : magar such kahun ?.... pata nahi kyun par aaj mujhe itna bura lag raha hai.... ees se pehle itna bura nahi laga kabhi....:(

Gautam : kyunki tab shayad tumne ees jhooth ko such maan liya tha.....

[ karan hayraani se gautam ko dekhta hai. ]

Gautam : haan !..... jhootha shaadi hi sahi.... magar kahin-na-kahin tumhe oos se pyaar hou gaya hai...... haan ab yeh such hai aur ees such ko tum maano ya na maano...... main chalta hoon.... bye.....

[ Wahaan Gauri karan ke baaton ko yaad kar routi hai. ]

[ sad theme : Yeh jo sabki hatheli hai...... yeh tou ajab paheli hai..... likha hai jo bhi lakeero mein..... milta wahin hai.... takedeero mein.... jo kho jaye woh mitti hai...... jo kho jaye woh mitti hai , jo milta hai..... woh hai souna..... yeh sab hai..... apna Karam...... yeh sab hai..... apna Karam...... ]

[diipendu]

[ Ek din office mein shilpa karan ke office ati hai kuch zaroori papers sign karvane ke liye magar karan ko kya pata ke shilpa ne khud oski bari behen ne kitna bara saajish rachha hai karan ke khilaaf. Karan oon papers ko bina parey oon par sign kar deta hai. ]

[ 2 din baad ]

Karan : gauri main office ke liye jaa raha hoon main late hou raha hoon.....

Gauri : theek hai... magar aaj kanta masi kolhapur se waapas aarahi hai.....

Karan : main unhe shaam ko aatey waqt unhe station se pickup kar loonga... aaj office mein ek bahut barii meeting hai i hope sab kuch theek ho......

Gauri : sab kuch theek hoga tum chinta matt karo durga mein hai na.......

[ Karan jaane lagta hai ke gauri ka aanchal karan ke coat ke button mein atuck jata hai. ]

Gauri : main dekhoo ?.....

Karan : hamesha ki tarah.... [ dono ees baat pe hassne lagte hain ke tabhi onke chehre se yeh hassi bhi chali jati hai yeh sochkar ke yeh sab kaash agar such houta. ]

Karan : main chalta hoon....

Gauri : humaare yahaan bengali mein.... kabhi jata hoon nahi kehte.... yeh kaho ke main ata hoon......

Karan : :) main ata hoon......

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[ Karan office pahuchta hai toh wahaan saare workers saare employees office chorr kar jaa rahey thhe. Karan yeh sab dekh hayraan hou jata hai ke achaanak aisa kya hou gaya ke yeh sab yahaan se jaa rahe hain. ]

Karan : yeh sab yahaan kya hou raha hai !!..... aaploug yahaan se aise nahi jaa sakte.....

Worker : karan sir , magar ab jab humey nikaal diya gaya hai ees office se tab hum jaaye nahi ??.....

Karan : nikaal diya gaya hai ?.... kisne yeh order diya hai ?.......

Worker : yahaan ke ees company ke naye boss ne......

Karan : ees company ka owner main hoon !.....

Worker : kaash agar yeh such houta sir..... magar ab ees company ke owner koi aur hain.... aap khud hi andar jaake dekh lijiye......

[ Yeh soon karan ke payro taley se zameen chali gayi. ]

[ Karan bhaagta-bhaagta apne cabin mein jaata hai aur dekhta hai ke kisi Aur ne hi ees company par apna kabzaa jama liya hai. ]

Karan : ees company par apna kabzaa jama lene waale tum houte kaun ho !!......:mad: himmat hai tou apna chehra dekhaao.....

[ ees poore company par apna kabzaa jaamane wala woh koi Aur nahi balki Shilpa thi. Karan ne jab shilpa ko dekha tou maano ab ooska apni barii behen par se vishwaas dag-magane wala tha. ]

Karan : aap ?..........

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Shilpa : mera pyaara bhai mujhe yahaan dekh hayraan kyun hou raha hai ?....... arre main toh teri madad kar rahi hoon buisness mein tera haath bata kar..... ya kaha jaaye tou..... poora buisness empire apne naam kar oosey sambhal rahi hoon.......

Karan : mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi araha hai shilpa di ke aap yeh sab kya keh rahi hain ?..... aur yeh loug keh rahe hain ke ees company ka naya owner agaya hai

Shilpa : woh owner...... main hi hoon......

Shilpa : let me explain my sweet & Foolish bro !....... woh documents oos din jo maine tumse sign karvaye thhe ?...... tumhe oon documents ko achhe se parr lena chahiye tha......

Shilpa : oon documents par yeh likha tha ke...... tum apni saari property , power aur apne saare shares..... mere yaane.... Shilpa kapoor ke naam transfer kar rahey ho...... ab tumne jab itne pyaar se dadaji ki de hui property mere naam kar de hai...... tou eesey main tumhe waapas karke tumhara apmaan nahi karungi.......

Shilpa : eseliye ab se abhi se main ees company ki bhi nayi owner hoon......

[ itna baraa dhoka apni behen se milne par Karan ko bahut bara sadma lagta hai. Karan wahin par bey-hosh ho jata hai. ]

Shilpa : ( khush houte hue ) oh no , ab tum beyhosh hou jaoge.... tou meri ees jeet ko achhe se kaise dekh paoge mere bhai...... abhi tou maine tumse apne raksha-bandhan ka hi gift liya hai...... aagey-aagey dekho !...... tumpar kitni bari bijli girrne waali hai.......

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Shilpa : let me explain my sweet & Foolish bro !....... woh documents oos din jo maine tumse sign karvaye thhe ?...... tumhe oon documents ko achhe se parr lena chahiye tha......

Shilpa : oon documents par yeh likha tha ke...... tum apni saari property , power aur apne saare shares..... mere yaane.... Shilpa kapoor ke naam transfer kar rahey ho...... ab tumne jab itne pyaar se dadaji ki de hui property mere naam kar de hai...... tou eesey main tumhe waapas karke tumhara apmaan nahi karungi.......

Shilpa : eseliye ab se abhi se main ees company ki bhi nayi owner hoon......

[ itna baraa dhoka apni behen se milne par Karan ko bahut bara sadma lagta hai. Karan wahin par bey-hosh ho jata hai. ]

Shilpa : ( khush houte hue ) oh no , ab tum beyhosh hou jaoge.... tou meri ees jeet ko achhe se kaise dekh paoge mere bhai...... abhi tou maine tumse apne raksha-bandhan ka hi gift liya hai...... aagey-aagey dekho !...... tumpar kitni bari bijli girrne waali hai.......

[ Karan ko doctor ne poora bed-rest karne ko kaha hai. ]

Gauri : doctor , karan ki aise haalat achaanak se ?.......

Doctor : dekhiye, aksar koi baraa sadma lagne par hi aisa houta hai...... zaroor karan ko koi baraa gehra sadma laa houga.... jiske wajah se unki yeh haalat hou gayi hai......

[ karan bilkul chup tha. uske mann mein abhi bhi shilpa ki woh baatein kisi khanjar si chubh rahi thi. ]

Gauri : karan , tum kuch soch rahey ho ?.......

[ karan ka vishwaas apni behen par se poori tarah toot chuka tha. Karan bahut toot chuka tha. woh gauri ke kandho par sarr rakh kar rou raha tha. ]

Gauri : karan , koi problem hai tou mujhe bata sakte ho.......

Karan : dhoka !....... jis par vishwaas kiya tha..... osi ne mujhe itna baraa dhoka diya hai......

Gauri : kya ?.....

Karan : haan , shilpa de..... jise main ab tak apni bari behen samjha...... oosi ne mujhe itna baraa dhoka diya hai...... mujhe se dhoke se meri poori property apne naam transfer.........

Gauri : tum chinta mat karo karan....... maa durga sab dekh rahi hai..... jisne buraa karam banaye oose osi ka buraa anjaam bughatna parega......
shilpa de se aise umeed nahi thi......

Karan : umeed tou mujhe bhi ees baat ki nahi thi ke shilpa de mujhi se ?.... apne bhai se dhoka karegi ?.......

[diipendu]

[ Udhar shilpa ]

Mithibua : ( tana martey hue ) manna parega tumhare dimag ko shilpa beti...... ek taraf behen ka pyaar jatake bhai se dhoke se saari property apne naam kar li..... aur dusre taraf..... oosey aisa jhatka diya ke.... oski bolti hi band karva di....... doctors patient ko jo shock treatment dete hain.... agar oske jagah tumhe use kia jaye.... tou beechara patient tou..... ram-naam ????.....

Shilpa : apni bakwaas band karo !!!!!..... apni zabaan ko kabu mei rakho warna.......

Shilpa : abhi tou maine sirf khel mein apna pehla kadam rakha hai...... abhi tou yeh khel baaki hai.......

Mithibua : hmmm...... mujhe tumhare iraadey kuch theek nahi lagte..... shilpa beti....

Shilpa : :mad:

[ Udhar karan ]

Gauri : jab dadaji ko yeh sab pata chalega..... tab ?....

Karan : woh yeh such bardaasht nahi kar payenge.....

[ tabhi wahaan shilpa ati hai. ]

Shilpa : kaise ho karan ?...... ab tumhari tabiyat theek hai ?......

Shilpa : gauri , tum mere pyaare bhai ka dhyaan hi nahi rakhti..... dekho kitnaaaaa kamzor ho gaya hai......

Gauri : yeh dekhne wali aap kaun houti hai ?!........ pehle zakham deti hain aur phir osey dekhne ati hai ke woh insaan abhi tak mara kyun nahi......

Shilpa : bahut zabaan chalaane lagi ho...... mujhse adab se baat karo...... warna dhakke maarke ees ghar se nikaal dungi !........

Karan : rehne do gauri, aise lougo se baat karke apna zabaan ganda matt karo......

[ Gauri wahaan se chali jaati hai. ]

[ Shilpa ki nazar karan ke davaai par parti hai. ]

[ Shilpa chupke se jaakar karan ke medicines ke jagah kuch doosre medicines rakh deti hai. ]

Shilpa : ( mann mein sochte hue ) ab chein se zindagi jiyo......

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Watch Karam every Mon-thu

[diipendu]

[ Shilpa chupke se jaakar karan ke medicines ke jagah kuch doosre medicines rakh deti hai. ]

[ Agle din ]

Gauri : karan, ab tumhari tabiyat theek hai ?....

Karan : haan, kal se thoda behtar....

[ Karan ke ankho ke saamne andhera chane lagta hai. oose kuch dkhayi nahi dey raha hai. Gauri ghabra jaati hai. ]

Gauri : karan tum theek ho na ?..... main abhi doctor ko phone karti
hoon.....

[ Udhar Shilpa ne doctor se pehle se baat karke oose wahi karne ko kaha hai jo woh chati hai. ]

[ Doctor karan ko dekhne wahaan aate hain. ]

Dr. : oh no !..... enhe kaun si dava di gai hai ?....

Gauri : wahi jo roz di jaa rahi hai....

Dr. : inhe kisi ne galat dava di hai jis se inka yeh haal hai !.....

[ yeh soon gauri ki poori tarah se hayraan reh jaati hai ke achaanak se davaai kaise badal gayi ? ]

Dr. : inhe abhi turrant hospital shift karna houga.....

[ Karan ko hospital ley jaya jata hai. ]

Gauri : [ routey hue ] karan tumhe kuch nahi hoga...... karan please housla rakho......

Sister : aap yahin rukiye.....

[ gauri karan ke ees halat ko dekh bahut udaas hou jaati hai. ]

[diipendu]

[ Kuch deir baad ]

[ Doctor bahar aate hain. ]

Doctor: mrs. kapoor..... iam sorry aapke pati mr. karan kapoor coma mei chale gaye hain.....

[ Yeh soon gauri ke payro taley zameen hill jaati hai. ]

Gauri : aisa nahi ho sakta !!..... aap jhooth bol rahe hain... zaroor karan ne aapko aisa kehne ko kaha hai mujhe pata hai ke osey mazaak karna bahut pasand hai keh dijiye aap jhooth bol rahe hain !..............

Doctor : please mrs. kapoor, aap apne aap ko sambhaliye...... mr. karan ab coma mei chale gaye hain yeh such hai......

[ Gauri yeh soon ke poori tarah toot jaati hai. ]

[ Doctor apne cabin mei jaata hai aur kisi ko phone lagata hai. ]

Doctor : hello mam, aapka kaam ho gaya hai.......

[ woh koi aur nahi balki Shilpa hai jisne yeh sab saajish racha hai. ]

Shilpa : [ khush houte hue ] good !....... veryy good !!!........

[crYstal_in_love]

awsme !!!!!:D but i hate dat shilpa :mad: i hope aisi sis. kisi ki na ho even mere enemy ki bhi nahi:mad: :p

[diipendu]

[ Tabhi hospital mei mithibua aati hai. ]

Mithibua : arre beta gauri.... kya hua ?.....

Gauri : buaji, karan......

Mithibua : kya hua karan ko ?....

Gauri : [ route hue ] aaj subah karan ki tabiyat achanak kharaab ho gayi.... doctors keh rahe hain ke.... karan... coma mei chale gaye hain.......

Mithibua : haaye raam !...:eek: .. beta gauri tu chinta matt kar sab theek ho jayega.... bhagwaan par bharosa rakh..:) ...

Mithibua : gauri, tu abhi esi waqt chal mere saath.....

Gauri : magar karan ko ees halat mei chorr ke ??

Mithibua : karan ke bhalai ke liye mandir chal.... chal mere saath....

[ Gauri mithibua ke saath durga maa ki mandir pahuchte hain. ]

Mithibua : ees mandir ki bahut maanyata hai.... kehte hain jo sachhe mann se yahaan kuch bhi maange.... maa sab poora kar deti hai..... jai durga maa.....

[ Gauri karan ke liye prarthna karti hai. ]

[diipendu]

[ Gauri karan ke liye prarthna karti hai. ]

[ kuch deir mandir mein beetane ke baad gauri mandir ke peechey khai ko dekhti hai. Woh khai bahut ghehraa aur bahut khatarnak deekh raha tha. ]

Gauri : buaji, yeh khaai ?.....

Mithibua : jaise ees mandir ka bahut naam hai waise hi ees khaai ke baare mei bhi ek kahavat hai....

Gauri : kaise kahavat ?....

Mithibua : kehte hain ke maa durga ne ek bahut badey asurr raakshas ka antt yehin kia aur esi khaai mei oska antt kar dia.....

Mithibua : achha ab jaldi se hospital chalte hain....

[ Mithibua aur Gauri hospital pahuchte hain tabhi doctors wahaan aate hain aur gauri se karan ke baare mei kehte hain ke karan ab bilkul theek hai. Gauri yeh soon ke bahut khush ho jaati hai aur jaldi se karan se milne jaati hai. ]

[ Udhar Shilpa pata chalta hai ke karan ko hosh agaya hai. Tabhi ghar par lawyer ata hai. ]

Shilpa : vakeel sahab aap ?.... koi khaas kaam tha ?...

Lawyer : actually, yeh kuch zaroori papers hain jin par aapke dadaji ke signatures chahiye thhe.....

Shilpa : papers ?.... kaise papers ?....

[diipendu]

Shilpa : papers ?.... kaise papers ?....

Lawyer : ji unka ek factory hai banglore mei jo ab woh chahte hain ke yeh factory mr.karan ke naam transfer ho jaaye...

Shilpa : [ mann mei sochte hue ] dadaji ne tou kabhi apni koi factory ke baare mein nahi bataya tha.... tou aaj yeh kaun si factory karan ke naam ho jaane wali hai ?....

Shilpa : kya main yeh papers dekh sakti hoon ?...

Lawyer : ji yeh papers kisi ko dekhne ki ijazat nahi hai....

Shilpa : shayad aap bhool gaye hain ke aap abhi jahaan khare hain yeh ghar aur poori kapoor empire ki maalkin main khud hoon... aur jab chahe aap par koi bhi case thop kar aapko 10-12 saal ke liye andar kar sakti hoon.....

Lawyer : [ darrte hue ] ji mam, sorry mam.... yeh lijiye papers....:D

[ Shilpa woh papers dekhti hai jispar yeh likha hai ke dadaji chahte hain ke banglore ki factory aur wahaan ki zameen ab karan ke naam transfer ho jaaye. ]

Shilpa : [ bahut zyada gusse se ] MYYYYY FOOT !!!!!!!..............

[ Shilpa aur Lawyer ek saath dadaji ke room mei jaate hain. ]

[ Shilpa Dadaji ke saamne woh papers fekhti hai. Lawyer seer jhukaye wahaan khara dekh raha tha. ]

Shilpa : dadaji, kya hai yeh sab ?..........

[diipendu]

Shilpa : dadaji, kya hai yeh sab ?..........

Dadaji : aww... tou tumne yeh papers dekh hi liya..... jab tumhe yeh sab pata chal chuka hai tou pooch kyun rahi ho ?....

Shilpa : shayad aapko ees buraape mei apka dimaag kuch zyada hi kaam karne laga hai......

Dadaji : buraape tak insaan ko duniya ke baare mein sab gyaan ho jata hai..... yahaan kaun apna hai aur kaun paraya hai yeh sab buraape mei hi pata chala jata hai...... aur maine jo bhi faisla kia hai..... sab apno ke bhalaai aur begaano se apno ki hifaazat karne ke liye kia hai.......

Shilpa : mujhe aapke kisi bhi bakwaas mei koi intrest nahi hai !........

Shilpa : vakeel sahaab...... woh dusre papers zara dikhaye tou......

[ lawyer apne bag se dusre documents nikaalta hai aur shilpa ko woh thama deta hai. ]

[ Shilpa woh dusre papers dadaji ke saamne rakhti hai ( anjaane mei theek oon pehle papers ke paas. ) ]

Shilpa : [ dheere se kehte hue ] dadaji, shayad ab mujhe yeh batane ki zaroorat nahi hai.... ke aapko ab een papers par chup-chap sign karne hounge...... warnaa..... aapke pyaare karan aur gauri ki kismat main khud apne haathon se likhoongi..... aur kuch aise likhoongi unki yeh kahaani ke..... sadiyon tak har koi ees kahaani ko kabhi nahi bhulega.....

[ dadaji ko yeh soon ke bahut gussa ajata hai. ]

Dadaji : arrre tu kya likhegi oon dono ki kismat !!!!...... likhne wala tou woh !... upar beitha sab dekh raha hai.... woh tera bhi kismat likhta hai yeh tu bhool rahi hai.... ab agar..... tujhe upar waale se zaraa bhi darr hai..... tou abhi bhi waqt hai.... sambhal jaa warna bahut baraa anarth ho jaayega......

Shilpa : [ haste hue ] ssshyaa !!!!....... aww please..... ab aap apna yeh bhaashan band bhi kijiye...... aur chup-chaap een papers par sign kar dijiye......

[ Dadaji ki nazre saaf inkaar kar rahi thi par oon inkaaro par har waar shilpa apna chala kar bas yehi kahe ja rahi thi ke agar onhoune aisa nahi kia tou unke hi apno ke khoon ka zimmedaar dadaji khud hounge. Ab dadaji bahut majboor ho chuke thhe. Unke aankhon se aasu beh rahe thhe. ]

[ dadaji ne neechey parey oon papers ko sign karne ke liye uthaya. Shilpa yeh dekh bahut khush hou rahi thi. ]

[diipendu]

[ dadaji ne neechey parey oon papers ko sign karne ke liye uthaya. Shilpa yeh dekh bahut khush hou rahi thi. ]

[ dadaji ne jab woh papers ko dhyaan se dekhaa tab pata chala ke yeh tou wahi poorane papers hain jinmei yeh likha tha ke dadaji apne banglore waali poori property karan ke naam transfer kar rahey hain. ]

[ Lawyer ko bhi yeh andaza ho jata hai ke yeh wahi poorane papers hain par woh shilpa ko kuch bhi nahi batata hai. ]:eek:

[ Udhar khare-khare shilpa khush hue jaa rahi thi ke dadaji ka yeh suprise gift hai jo osey mill raha hai. ]

[ dadaji ne turrant oon papers par sign kar diyaa. ]

[ Lawyer ko idea ata hai. Een papers par jahaan dadaji ne sign kar diya hai agar ab karan ne bhi sign kar diya tou yeh property karan ko mill jayegi. ] ;)

Lawyer : mam, woh.... bas ek aur chotaaa sa kaam reh gaya hai.... bas bahut chota kaam hai....

Shilpa : boliye vakeel sahab....

Lawyer : mam agar een papers par karan sir ke signature mill jate tou yeh formality poori hou jaati.....

[ shilpa yeh soon bahut gussa ho jaati hai par phir woh sochti hai ke yeh koi barii baat nahi hai. udhar karan ko tou hosh ab tak aa bhi gaya houga tou kisi bhi tarah woh een papers par sign karva sakti hai. ]

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Watch Karam every Mon-thu

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[ Udhar Hospital mei Karan aur Gauri ]

[ Gauri karan ke paas beithi thi. Karan ko hosh ata hai. ]

Mithibua : hehehe... tum dono baatein karo main abhi ayi....

[ Gauri ke ankhon pe aasu thhe. Karan ne gauri ke taraf dekha tou gauri ke aasu karan ke haathon par pare. ]

Karan : gauri, tum rou rahi ho ?....

Gauri : ( route hue ) ees tarah achanak tumhari tabiyat kharab ho gayi.... rouoo nahi tou kya karu ?.....

Karan : [ karan gauri ka haath thaamte hue ] gauri, tum mere liye itna parwa karti ho ?.....

[ Dono ek dusre ke aankhon mei dekhte-dekhte ekdusre mei kho jaate hain aur woh saari shikyate durr hou jaati hain. ]

[ Gauri`s Theme : Thoda sa pyaar hua hai..... thoda hai baaki.... *** *** **** **.... thoda sa pyaar hua hai thoda hai baaki.... hum tou dil dey hi chuke.... hum tou dil dey hi chuke bas teri haan hai baaki.....

( gauri karan se nazre pheyr leti hai. )

Karan`s Theme : haathon mei haath rahey dil hi main ek aas baaki.............. thoda sa... pyaar hua hai......... thodaaa hai baaki..... ]



[ Tabhi wahaan Shilpa aa pahuchti hai. ]


[ Karan aur gauri shilpa ko dekh chauk jaate hain. ]

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*Watch Karam every mon-thu*

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Shilpa : [ fikar karte hue ] karan, tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai ?.... yeh kya haal bana rakha hai tumne apna.... mere bhaai ki yeh halaat hai aur main wahaan ghar pe kaise reh sakti thi.... eseliye apne pyaare chote bhai ko dekhne ayi hoon... :o

Karan : :( gauri, keh do ense ke yehaan se chali jaaye.....

Shilpa : nahi karan....... aisa mat bolo..... main janti hoon ke maine tumhare saath... gauri ke saath aur poore gharwaalon ke saath bilkul achha nahi kia....:( . magar kya.... kya tum apni didi ko ek mauk tak bhi nahi douge ??...... agar mujhe apne pachhtava ka saboot dena padey tou theek hai.....

[ Shilpa wahaan fruits mei rakhe chaaku ko uthati hai aur apni kalaai kaatne ki koshish karti hai. ]

[ Karan chauk jata hai aur shilpa ko rokne ki koshish karta hai. ]

Karan : arre, yeh aap kya kar rahi thi.... chorr dijiye yeh chaaku !......
Shilpa : ab tou tumhe mera yakeen ho gaya hai na ?..... { karan apni shilpa didi ko galey lagata hai. Gauri ko abhi bhi shilpa ke ees chehre par yakeen nahi araha hai. }

[ Shilpa apne mobile se kisi ko sms karti hai. Tabhi wahaan Doctor ajata hai. ]

Dr. : mr.kapoor ab aap bilkul theek hain.... you are fit now :) mrs.kapoor, ab aap enhe ghar ley jaa sakti hain..... yeh rahe kuch papers jinpar mr.karan ke signature chahiye......

[ Gauri doctor ke haath se woh paper lekar karan ko dey rahi thi ke gauri ki nazar oon papers par padi. Papers kuch stamp papers ke tarah lag rahe thhe jo ki hospital ke dis-charge papers tou hou hi nahi sakte thhe. ]

[ Karan oon papers par sign kar deta hai. ]

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*Watch Karam every mon-thu*

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[ Karan oon papers par sign kar deta hai. ]

Shilpa : [ khush houne ka dikhava karte hue ] arre wah !... yeh tou khushi ki baat hai... karan, main abhiii ghar jaati hoon aur jaake tum dono ka swaagat ke saare intezaam karti hoon :)

Karan : :)

[ Gauri ko woh papers kuch gadbad lagey. woh doctor se baat karne chal deti hai. ]

Gauri : [ bulate hue ] doctor sahaab....

[ doctor ne peechey gauri ko dekha tou woh gauri ko ignore karte hue kahin aur chala jata hai. ]

Gauri : yeh doctor sahab ne mujhe ignore kyun kia ?......

[ gauri reception mei jaati hai receptionist se oon papers ke baare mei poochti hai. ]

Gauri : mujhe discharge papers ke baare mei poochna hai.... kya aapke yahaan discharge papers koi stamp papers ke tarah houte hain ?...

Receptionist : yeh aap kya baat kar rahi hain ?.... bhala kisi bhi hospital ke discharge papers aise kyun hounge ?....

Gauri : [ mann mei sochte hue ] ho na ho.... oon papers ka aur shilpa didi ka koi na koi sambhand zaroor hai..... warna aisa bhi hou sakta hai ke woh karan ko koi nuksaan pahuchana chahti ho..... mujhe yeh baat karan se karni hougi... nahi-nahi karan ko shayad mere baaton par yakeen na ho..... agar such janna hai tou mujhe shilpa didi ka peecha karna houga......

[ Gauri hospital ke bahaar aake dekhti hai tou shilpa apni gaari mei beith rahi houti hai. ]

[ Gauri apne gaari mei jaake beith jaati hai aur shilpa ke gaari ka peecha karti hai. ]

[ Udhar Shilpa ek sun-saan khandar mei apna gaari roukti hai. ]

Gauri : [ mann mei sochte hue ] yeh shilpa didi ne aise sun-saan jagah par gaari kyun rouk di ?..... aise veeran jagah par shilpa didi ko kya kaam ho sakta hai ?.....

[crYstal_in_love]

intresting epside ! :D :) plzz continue soon as posible :D ;)

[diipendu]

thankz ashka ! yeah i will... abhi mon ka episode k saath saath tue ke epside mei bahutt badaa intresting thing hai woh tou tue ko hi pata chalega ;)

[khushi jain]

yaar tum episodes ko delay mat kiya karo b'coz it is so outstanding story of the show mon-thurs ki jagah yeh roz dikhana shuru kar do yaani mon-sun

[khushi jain]

yaar tum episodes ko delay mat kiya karo b'coz it is so outstanding story of the show mon-thurs ki jagah yeh roz dikhana shuru kar do yaani mon-sun
plz cont. the story

[diipendu]

yaar tum episodes ko delay mat kiya karo b'coz it is so outstanding story of the show mon-thurs ki jagah yeh roz dikhana shuru kar do yaani mon-sun

Iam glad 2 see such gud responses about s-creation`s online serials :) ab time slots ke hisaab se hi episodes post karna houta hai otherwise s-creations ke 15 alag-alag sites mei bhi stories chal rahey hain dats why thoda late tou kabhi delay... but episodes mon-thu ke slots mei hi post hou payenge...

Karam will b air on star-forum on every mon-thu jis din kisi bhi serials ke episodes ko post karne mei delay hua then i will post last episodes with current episodes pakka ! :D dear viewers plzz do post ur comments ;)

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[ Udhar Shilpa ek sun-saan khandar mei apna gaari roukti hai. ]

Gauri : [ mann mei sochte hue ] yeh shilpa didi ne aise sun-saan jagah par gaari kyun rouk di ?..... aise veeran jagah par shilpa didi ko kya kaam ho sakta hai ?.....

[ Shilpa oos gufaa ke andar jaati hai. Wahaan kuch goondey shilpa ka intezaar kar rahe thhe. ]

Gauri : yeh shilpa didi aise jagah par woh bhi goondo se milne kyun ayi hai ?.....

[ gauri chupke se shilpa ko oon gundo se baat karte hue dekhti hai. Kuch deir baad shilpa ne ek bag oon goondo ko dia. Goondo ne woh bag khola. Oos bag mei bahut saare rupaye thhe. Gauri thoda aur paas jaake chupke se oon logon ki baatein sunne lagi. Shilpa ne oon goondo ko ek photo bhi dia. ]

Shilpa : samajh gaye na tum loug ?.... ees photo mei jo insaan hai woh agle 24 ghante ke andar-andar khatam hou jana chahiye....



[ shilpa oon gundoo ko woh photo dene jati hai ke woh photo neechey dirr jata hai. shilpa osey uthati hai tabhi Gauri oos photo mei jo insaan hai osey dekh leti hai. ]


[ woh insaan aur koi nahi Karan hai jisey shilpa maar dena chahti hai. ]

[ yeh dekh gauri bahut darr jati hai. Woh jaldi se apne phone se wahaan shilpa aur oon goondo ki photo ley leti hai. Phone ke flash light se wahaan oon goondo ko aur shilpa ko shakk hou jata hai ke onke ilava bhi wahaan koi aur chupke se onki baatein soon raha hai. Gauri wahaan se chali jaati hai. ]

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[ Shilpa goondo se kehti hai. ]

Shilpa : ghabraao matt wahaan koi nahi hai.... mera kaam aaj hi hou jana chahiye... warnaa yaad rakhna tumloug bahut pachhtaoge....

[ Shilpa wahaan se chali jaati hai. ]

[ Udhar Gauri hospital waapas jaate-jaate yehi soch rahi thi ke shilpa didi khud karan ki sagi behen apne hi bhaai ko jaan se maarna chahti hai. Gauri hospital pahuch jaati hai aur karan se milti hai. ]

[ Gauri bahut darri si thi. ]

Gauri : karan tum theek ho na ?....

Karan : main tou theek hoon gauri magar tum gayi kahaan thi ?....

Gauri : karan mujhe tumhe kuch bahut zaroori baat batani hai....

[ Tabhi wahaan Hospital ke senior doctor aate hain. Doctor Gauri ko bahaar bulaate hain karan ke baare mei kuch zaroori baat batane ke liye.]

Doctor : mam, apko shayad pata na hou par maine aapko yeh batana zaroori samjha eseliye main aapko yeh batana chahta hoon....

Gauri : kaise baat ?...

Doctor : karan ko kisi ne galat davaaiya di thi jiske wajah se karan ka yeh haalat hua hai....

[ yeh soon gauri aur darr jati hai. ]

Doctor : agar yeh davaai zyada quantity mei aur dii gayi tou mr. karan ka dimaagi santulan poori tarah se bigar sakta hai.... ya tou woh.... woh marr sakte hain yaa unki yaadasht bhi jaa sakti hai.....

[ Gauri yeh soon bahut hayraan houti hai ke aise davaaiya kisne aur kab dii ? tabhi gauri ko yaad ata hai ke oos din room mei jab shilpa ayi thi kahin tabhi osne wahaan davaai kisi bahaane rakh di houngi. ]

[ Karan ka discharge hou jata hai. Karan aur gauri apne car mei ghar ki taraf jaane ke liye houne hi waale thhe ke tabhi gauri ko phone ata hai ke gauri ke ghar par gauri ke papa ko heart attack aya hai. ]

Karan : gauri, chalo main bhi chalta hoon....

Gauri : nahi karan tum abhi abhi hospital se discharge hue ho..... tum ghar jaake aaram karo main 1 ghante ke andar-andar ghar aarahi hoon....
( yeh kehke gauri jaane hi waali houti hai ke karan gauri ka haath thaam leta hai. )

Karan : karan ki zindagi.....

Gauri : gauri se hai... aur gauri ki zindagi

Karan : karan se... :)

Gauri : :)

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[ gauri apne ghar chali jaati hai aur karan apne ghar ]

[ Gauri apne ghar pahuchti hai aur paati hai ke gauri ke papa bilkul theek hain. ]

Gauri : papa aap theek hai na ?...

Papa : arre beta mujhe kya hua hai ?...

Gauri : maa, papa ko heart attack ?....

Maa : kya baat kar rahi hai !... tere papa sahi salamat hai....

Gauri : [ mann mei sochte hue ] phir mujhe kisne phone kiya aur yeh bataya ke papa ko heart attack aya hai ?.....

[ Udhar Karan ghar pahuchta hai. Dadaji se milne jata hai. ]

Dadaji : [ khush houte hue ] arre beta karan.... tum ab kaise ho ?.....

Karan : dadaji main theek hoon.... magar apki tabiyat kuch theek nahi ?....

Dadaji : mere tabiyat ka kya hai.... bas kuch hi din ki saasei chal rahi hain....( tabhi dadaji ko kuch yaad ata hai. )

Dadaji : karan, maine tumhare naam banglore wali property kar di hai....

[ Karan ko kuch samajh mei nahi ata hai ke dadaji kis property ki baat kar rahe hain ke tabhi wahaan mithibua ajati hai. ]

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Mithibua : hehehe... :D arre beta.... karan kaisa hai tu ?.... tujhe pata hai gauri ne tere theek ho jane ke liye mandir mei bahut prarthna kiye..... ab bhagwaan ji ki kripa se.... tu theek hai !..... waise yeh gauri kahin nazar nahi arahi.... kahaan hai woh ?....

Karan : woh zara apne ghar gayi hai.... papa ko.... heartattack...

KUCH NAHI HUA HAI PAPA KO !..........

[ tabhi wahaan gauri ati hai. ]

Gauri : [ khush houte hue ] papa bikul theek hai main unhe abhi dekh kar aarahi hoon....

Karan : tou gauri... tumhe woh galat khabar di kisne ?.....

[ Neechey ghar par orphanage se kuch loug aye thhey. woh loug shilpa ko shukriya kahe ja rahe thhe ke shilpa ne onko 40 lakh rupaiye donate kiye hain aur kuch garib aur kamzor lougon ko bhi 20 lakh rupaye diye hain.]

Shilpa : arre nahi nahi... aap mujhe shukriya kehkar mujhe sharminda kar rahe hain.... yeh tou mera farz hai... balki insaan insaan ke kaam nahi ayega tou kiske kaam ayega :)

[ oonlougo ke jaate hi kuch deir baad Karan siriyon se neechey raha tha. Karan ko pata na tha par siriyon par oil gira tha aur shilpa ki nazar siriyon par parii aur woh jaldi se bhaagkar gayi. ]

Shilpa : karan ruko !......

[diipendu]

Shilpa : karan ruko !......

Karan : kya hua shilpa didi ?.....

[ shilpa dheere se opar ayi aur ghar ke naukaro ko zorr se data. ]

Shilpa : karan, yeh dekho yehaan par een naukron ne tayl girakar enhe saaf nahi kia aur tum abhi-abhi hospital se loute ho agar tumhe kuch ho jata.... nahi nahi...

[ Karan ka shilpa didi ke liye izzat ab aur bhi oncha ho gaya tha aur
gauri ko bhi shilpa ke badalne ka thoda-thoda yakeen houne laga tha. ]

[ Gauri ke mann mei ab bhi woh baat chal raha tha ke agar shilpa didi badal gayi hai tou shilpa ne oon gundo ko karan ko maarne ke liye kehna woh kya tha ?... kahin woh koi galat-fehmi tou nahi ?... Gauri ko woh sab ek galat-fehmi lagta hai warna aaj shilpa didi ne orphanage walo ko donate kiya woh bhi 60 lakh aur Karan ki jaan bachai.yeh sab ek galat fehmi hi hou sakta hai. ]

[ Shilpa ne harr moud par karan ka saath dia aur aise hi 7 mahine beet gayye. ]

7 Months later

Shilpa : arre ramu kaka apne karan ko kahin dekha ?...

Servant : haan karan sahab opar apne kamre mei hain...

[ Udhar karan ]

Karan : Gauri, main aaj bahut khush hoon... peechle 7 mahino mei jo kuch bhi hua tha.... shayad woh sab ek galat fehmi hi tha... shilpa didi ne buisness eseliye mujhse ley lia kyunki agar buisness mei kuch bhi galati ho tou woh sara dosh apne opar ley le.... ohoune oos din meri jaan bhi bachai.....

Gauri : :)

[ tabhi wahaan shilpa didi ati hai. ]

Gauri : arre shilpa didi aap ?...

Shilpa : iam sorry, woh maine tum lougo ko disturb kar dia.... actually karan main tumhe yeh yaad dila doon ke ab se 3 din baad raksha-bandhan hai.... eseliye main chahti hoon ke woh din kuch khaas tarh se celebrate karey....

Karan : [ khush houte hue ] haan shilpa didi.... aap jaisa chahengi waisa hi hoga....

Shilpa : karan ek aur baat... [ khush houte hue ] maine tum dono ke liye malaysia ke tickets book kiye hain.... kal subah ki fliet hai....

Gauri : arre shilpa didi eski kya

Karan : nahi nahi !... theek hai.... thank you shilpa didi :)

Shilpa : :)

[diipendu]

Karam every mon-thu

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[diipendu]

[ Shilpa didi ke wahaan se jaate hi gauri ko phone ata hai. Gauri ko pata chalta hai ke Karan aur Gauri ne jo CONTRACT MARRIAGE kia tha Aaj 1 saal poora houne wala hai aur oondono ka yeh contract khatam houne wala hai eseliye onhe jald se jald lawyer ke office mei aakar DIVORCE PAPERS par sign karke osey submit karna hai. ]

[ Yeh soonkar Gauri ke haath se oska cell phone neechey girr jata hai aur cell phone toot jata hai. ]

Karan : kya hua gauri ?.....

[ Gauri Karan ko saari baat batati hai. ]

Karan : aaj, 1 saal beet gaye.... yakeen nahi ata ke.... ke waqt kitna jaldi beet jata hai........ Magar jo bhi ho gauri hum hamesha ek dusre ke ghamo-khushiyo mei saath rahenge..... vada karo gauri ?....

Gauri : vada raha karan....

Gauri : magar karan shilpa didi ne jo tickets..

Karan : woh cancel ho jayenge magar... ( karan apne mann mei kehta hai ) kabhi-kabhi humare saath aisa houta hai ke hum jiss se doorr bhagte hain baad mei pata chalta hai ke wahi humaari zindagi thi.... een 1 saalon mei maine agar kahin tumhare mann mei apne liye zara sa bhi jagah bana lia hai.... tou keh do ke karan ruk jaao....

Gauri : magar kya karan ?.... tum kuch kehne waale thhey ???....

Karan : kuch nahi, main tumhara baahar intezaar kar raha hoon....

Gauri : [ karan ke taraf dekhte hue apne mann mei sochti hai. ] een 1 saalon mei maine agar kahin tumhare mann mei apne liye zara sa bhi jagah bana lia hai.... tou keh do ke Gauri... ruk jaao....

[ Gauri car mei beithti hai. Karan car start karta hai magar uske chehre par yeh saaf jhalak raha tha ke woh yeh rishta khatam karna nahi chahta tha magar woh yeh chah raha tha ke gauri oosey rouk ley tou Wahin Gauri bhi yeh samajh gayi thi ke woh bhi karan ko chahne lagi hai aur karan bhi divorce lena nahi chahta hai magar woh intezaar kar rahi thi ke karan osey rouk ley. ]

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Every Mon-thu

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Karan : [ mann mei kehte hue ] kuch kaho gauri.... please kuch kaho kahin ess se pehle deyr ho jaaye ruk jaao....

Gauri : [ mann mei kehte hue ] please ruk jaao karan.....

[ Gauri`s theme : ( sad version )

mann mei ek uljhan hai... haaye ! mein kaise kahu tujh se ke.... ees dil mei basaa hai tu.... tu sirf tu.. tu sirf tu..... ruk jaao..... na... jaao...... ]

[ Karan`s theme :

Dil hai majboor kaise kahu...................... kaise kahu ke....


[ Dono ke aankhon mei aasu thhey magar zubaan abhi bhi bandd thi. Na Gauri ne kuch kaha aur na karan ne. ]


[ Karan & Gauri`s Theme :

Pyaar houne lagaa hai........ Pyaar houne lagaa hai..... Pyaar houne..... laga hai..... ]



[ DONO EK DUSRE SE KUCH KEHNE HI WAALE THHEY KE TABHI. ]

[ Lawyer ke office se phir se ph. ata hai. Karan car start karta hai aur dono lawyer ke office ke liye nikal jaate hain. ]


[ RAASTE MEI ]


[ Karan ko yaad atey hain woh pal jab shaadi hui thi aur Gauri dulhan ke libaaz mei saji thi. ]

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[ Gauri ko yaad atey hain jo haseen lamhe karan ke saath beetey thhey. ]

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[ Waqt ka pata bhi nahi chalta aur dekhte-hi-dekhte Karan aur Gauri lawyer ke office pahuch jaate hain. ]

[ Karan aur Gauri ko baahar intezaar karne ko kaha jata hai. Tabhi wahaan se ek punjabi couple mr. & mrs. kaur guzarr rahey thhey unki nazar gauri aur karan par padii. woh unke paas gayye. ]

Mrs. Kaur : aaye haaye !... kinni soni jodi hai.... aap dono ko dekhne par lagta hai ke raab ne aapdono ko ekdusre ke liye banaya hai...

Mr. Kaur : magar bhai sahab ek gal dusso ji... aapdono yehaan kya kar rahey ho ?....

Karan : woh.....

Gauri : lawyer se ek chota sa kaam tha... usi ke silsilay mei aaye hain :) ....

Mr. Kaur : o achha ji.... changa ji changa.... :)

Mrs. kaur : rab aapdono ki jodi hamesha salaamat rakhey....

Karan-gauri : :) :)

[ Karan aur Gauri ko andar bulaya jata hai. ]

[ AMITABH BACHHAN LAWYER KE ENTRY MEIN. ]

[diipendu]

[ AMITABH BACHHAN LAWYER KE ENTRY MEIN. ]

Lawyer : aayiye !... beithiye.... woh actually kya hua... ke... aapke lawyer ko bahut zaroori kaam se baahar jana pada... tou unhoune mujhe aapdono ko attend karne ko kaha hai.... aapdono ke liye maine specially yeh documents tyaar karvaye hain... I hope aapdono tyaar hain ?....

[ Karan aur gauri ka dill yeh kehna aur karna nahi chahta thha aur unki zabaan ne tou bandd rehne ki thaan hi li thi magar majbooran kehna hi padda. ]

Karan aur gauri : haan......

[ Lawyer ne DIVORCE ke papers saamne rakhey aur karan aur gauri ko oon papers par sign karne ko kaha. ]

[ Karan ki saasei rukk gayii aur gauri ki dhadkane bhi tham gayii. Karan kabhi divorce ke papers ko dekhta tou kabhi gauri ko aur gauri kabhi karan ke taraf dekhti aur divorce ke papers ko taraf dekhne se katraati. ]

[ Dono ke aankho mei aasu thhey aur dill mei sirf ek hi sawaal chal raha tha.

Kya gauri een papers par sign karegi aur wahin gauri bhi yehi sochti ke kya karan asani se een papers par sign karke woh sab kuch bhulaa dega ???... ]

[ Lawyer ne phir poocha ke kya woh dono tyaar hain ees divorce ke liye ? Gauri ne apna haath aagey badaya aur pen ka cap khola. Gauri ke haath uska saath chorrna chahte thheyy magar gauri ne phir bhi himmat ki.Himmat zyaadatar naakam houne jaise thi magar gauri ne phir bhi oon par sign karne ke liye apna haath aagey badaya. ]

[ Ab Karan ki saasey rukk sii gayi thi. ]

[diipendu]

[ Lawyer ne phir poocha ke kya woh dono tyaar hain ees divorce ke liye ? Gauri ne apna haath aagey badaya aur pen ka cap khola. Gauri ke haath uska saath chorrna chahte thheyy magar gauri ne phir bhi himmat ki. Himmat zyaadatar naakam houne jaise thi magar gauri ne phir bhi oon par sign karne ke liye apna haath aagey badaya. ]

[ Karan`s Theme :

Do, Pal Ruka, Khwaabon Ka Kaarvaan
Aur Phir, Chal Diye, Tum Kahaan, Ham Kahaan
Do Pal Ki Thi, Ye Dilon Ki Daastaan
Aur Phir, Chal Diye, Tum Kahaan, Ham Kahaan
Aur Phir Chal Diye, Tum Kahaan, Ham Kahaan ]

[ Tabhi ACHAANAK !... ]

[ Gauri ne Lawyer ko request kia ke pehle Karan oon papers par sign karey. Karan ko kuch samajh mei nahi araha tha ke woh kya karey kya kahey kyunki shaayad yehi kasauti thi unke pyaar ki yeh gauri ko samajh aaney laga tha. ]

[ Karan ke haath kaapne se lagey thhey magar usney himmat jutai aur jaisa osney aur gauri ne socha tha ke 1 saal baad yeh shaadi toot jaegi woh aaj houne wala tha. KARAN NE OON PAPERS PAR SIGN KAR DIYE. ]

[ Karan & Gauri`s Theme :

Tum The Ke Thi Koyi Ujli Kiran
Tum The Ya Koyi Kali Muskaayi Thi
Tum The Ya Tha Sapnon Ka Tha Saawan
Tum The Ke Khushiyon Ki Ghata Chhaayi Thi
Tum The Ke Tha Koyi Phool Khila
Tum The Ya Mila Tha Mujhe Naya Jahaan
Do Pal Ruka Khwaabon Ka Kaarvaan
Aur Phir Chal Diye Tum Kahaan Ham Kahaan
Do Pal Ki Thi, Ye Dilon Ki Daastaan
Aur Phir Chal Diye, Tum Kahaan, Ham Kahaan
Aur Phir Chal Diye, Tum Kahaan, Ham Kahaan ]

[ Gauri ka vishwaas abhi bhi majboot tha. Karan ne dheere se woh papersgauri ke taraf kiye. Gauri ne jab karan ke taraf dekha tou uske aankhon mei dard hi dard tha. Dard ke elava ek majboori bhi thi jo gauri bhi samajh sakti thi. ]

Lawyer : ab aapki baari hai... gauri ji ?...

[ Gauri ne apna haath aagey badaya. Gauri ke aankhon se 2 boond aasu beh kar oon divorce ke papers par padey. ]

[diipendu]

Lawyer : ab aapki baari hai... gauri ji ?...

[ Gauri ne apna haath aagey badaya. Gauri ke aankhon se 2 boond aasu beh kar oon divorce ke papers par padey. ]

Lawyer : aapdono zara jaldi kijiyega... humko aur bhi kaam hai....

[ Gauri ne pen uthaya aur sign karne ke liye apna haath aagey badaya. ]

[ Gauri ne pen uthaya aur sign karne ke liye apna haath aagey badaya. Gauri ne pen papers par touch kia aur tabhi gauri ke aankhon ke saamne woh saare pal, tasveery ek ke baad ek saamne aarahey thhey jo osney peechley ek saal mei karan ke saath bitaaye. ]

[ Karan aur Gauri ekdusre ke galey mill jaate hain. ]

[ Lawyer dono mei yeh observe kar leta hai ke dono ko divorce nahi chahiye. ]

[ karan lawyer ke taraf dekhta hai aur poochne wala houta hai ke tabhi lawyer bol padta hai. ]

Lawyer : main samajh gaya aap dono ka problem.... but aise situation mei raasta sirf ek hai.....

Karan-gauri : kya ???...

Lawyer : aapdono ees divorce ko hi bhool jaaye.... aur khushi khushi apni zindagi ekdusre ke saath ek naye tarah se manaye....

Karan-Gauri : :)

Lawyer : ab aapdono ghar jaaye aur ees divorce ke baare mei bhool jaaye....:) meri best wishes aap dono ke saath mei hain.... :)

[diipendu]

Karam every mon-thu
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[crYstal_in_love]

hey kya shilpa didi achii ho gayi hai ??? kya woh ab achi bann jayegi ??? wow ! dats gr8 but i want 2 ask u a question abt karam:(

in ur words kya karam bahut jald off air hone wala hai ???:( i heard dis news frm other members hope it is fake news :)

[khushi jain]

hey kya shilpa didi achii ho gayi hai ??? kya woh ab achi bann jayegi ??? wow ! dats gr8 but i want 2 ask u a question abt karam:(

in ur words kya karam bahut jald off air hone wala hai ???:( i heard dis news frm other members hope it is fake news :)
even i'm hope so too that it's a fake news ki karam off air hone wala hai

[diipendu]

Karan : gauri, aaj se hum ek nayi zindagi shuru karenge...

Gauri : :) haan karan...

[ Udhar Shilpa didi mandir mei garibo ko blankets daan kar rahi thi. Wahaan se Shilpa ek anaath-alay mei gayi wahaan par jaakar onhoune 50 lakh ka donation dia. ]

[ Shilpa ghar pahuchti hai. Shilpa apne kamre ke taraf jaa rahi thi ke oski nazar karan-gauri ke kamre ke taraf padii. Darwaza khula tha. ]

Shilpa : arre yeh darwaza tou khula hai... main abhi bandh kar deti hoon...

[ shilpa didi ki nazar table par rakhey papers par padi jo ki karan-gauri ke contract marriage ke papers thhey. ]

Shilpa : arre yeh papers ?... ( shilpa didi ne oon papers ko uthaya aur dekha )

[ Udhar karan aur gauri ghar ke taraf aarahey thhe. Gauri kuch soch rahii thi. ]

Karan : kuch soch rahi ho ?...

Gauri : :) soch rahi thi ke... zindagi kitne imtehaan leti hai.... har rishton ki kasauti houti hain... kabhi koi jeet ke haar jata hai... tou kabhi koi haar ke bhi jeet jata hai....

Karan : matlab ?...

Gauri : ab humey hi dekh lo na... hum jab miley thhey tab hum ek dusre se nafrat karte thhey aur aaj :) .... karan mujhe ek vaada karo....

Karan : kaisa vaada ?...

[diipendu]

Karan : kaisa vaada ?...

Gauri : agar kabhi zindagi ne mera saath chorr dia ( Karan gauri ko kuch aagey kehne se rouk deta hai. gauri karan ka haath hata kar kehti hai. ) agar zindagi ne kabhi mujhse muhh morr lia... tab tum mere liye yeh gaana zaroor gaana....

[ Gauri`s theme : jab koi baat bigar jaaye... jab koi mushkil padd jaye... tum dena saath meraa O humnavaa......
na koi hai na koi tha zindagi mei tumhare siva.... tum dena saath mera... O humnava...... ]

Karan : aur maan lo ! agar kabhi mujhe (gauri karan ko kuch kehne se rouk leti hai) tou kya tab tum mere liye yehi gana gaogi ?....

Gauri : bhagwaan karey agar kabhi tumhari saasei rukey oos se pehle meri saasein thamm jaaye....

[ Karan aur Gauri ghar pahuch jaate hain. ]

Shilpa : arre karan-gauri aao.... :) karan-gauri mujhe tumse kuch poochna tha...

Gauri : kahiye shilpa didi...

Shilpa : maine jo tumlougo ko jo tickets diye thhey.... tum lougo ne tou tickets hi cancel kar diye ?....

Gauri : woh actually....

Karan : didi hum aapko yeh batane hi waale thhey... ki

Shilpa : ki achanak tum dono ko lawyer ke paas jaana pada ?....

[ Karan aur gauri yeh dekh shock ho jaate hain ke shilpa didi ko kahin suchai ka pata tou nahi chal gaya ? ]

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Shilpa : :( mujhe sab pata chala chuka hai.... yehi ke tum dono ne ek saal ka contract marriage kia aur.... ab... divorce ?....

Gauri : shilpa di hum aapko batane waale thhey ki.... sab kuch achanak se ho gaya..... yakeen maaniye humara irada apko dukhi karna nahi tha... magar haalat hi kuch aise ho gaye thhey....

Karan : haan, aur....

Shilpa : aur kya ?...

Karan : aur humne decide kia hai ke.... ab hum hamesha saath rahenge... :)
Shilpa : :) aaj main bahut khush hoon... tum dono ne yeh bahut hi sahi faisla kia hai...

[ Agle din ]

[ Aaj rakhi ka din hai. ]

Gauri : arre, yeh ghar par koi dikhai kyu nahi dey raha hai ?...

[ Tabhi karan wahaan ata hai. ]

Karan : kya hua gauri ?...

Gauri : dekho na karan ghar mei koi nahi hai....

[ Tabhi wahaan naukar aakar kehta hai ke Shilpa didi ne karan aur gauri ko abhi Durga maa ke mandir aaney ko kaha hai. ]

Karan : aww haan ! aaj tou raksha bandhan hai... shilpa didi ne kaha tha ke rakhi wahaan bandhengi...

Gauri : phir tou humey jaldi chalna chahiye shilpa didi humara intezaar kar rahi hougi....

[ Karan aur Gauri Maa Durga ke mandir pahuchte hain. Wahaan karan aur gauri maa durga se aashirwaad lete hain. Karan ko shilpa didi ka phone ata hai. ]

Shilpa : arre karan kahaan ho ?....

Karan : didi hum mandir pahuch gaye hain magar aap kahaan ho ?....

[diipendu]

Karan : didi hum mandir pahuch gaye hain magar aap kahaan ho ?....

Shilpa : oh ! main tou batana hi bhool gayi ke mandir ke paas tumhe ana hai... ab jaldi se ajaao.... :)

Karan : :)

[ Karan aur Gauri Mandir ke paas waale jagah par jaate hain. ]


[ Saamne shilpa didi rakhi ka plate lekar khari thi. Karan ko yeh dekh bahut achha laga. Karan ne jaakar Shilpa se rakhi bandhai. ]


Shilpa ::)

Karan : aaj ka din main hamesha yaad rakhunga... aaj shayad mujhse zyada khush-naseeb aur koi bhai nahi hoga... kyunki har kisi ko aap jaise behen nahi milti....

Shilpa : :)

[ Karan aur Gauri shilpa se aashirwaad lete hain. ]

[ Karan peechey gauri ke taraf jata hai aur ]

Karan : [ khush houte hue ] dekha gauri !.... shilpa didi ne mere liye specially yehaan mandir mei rakhi celberate karne ka socha hai.... aaj main such mei bahutt khush hoon.... aaj mujhe aisa lag raha hai jaise mujhe sab kuch mill gaya hai....


TABHI !!!


[ Achanak GOLI CHALTI HAI ! ]


[ GOLI KARAN KO LAGTI HAI. KARAN PEECHEY PALAT KAR DEKHTA HAI TOU WOH GOLI CHALANE WALA KOI AUR NAHI BALKI
OSKI APNI SHILPA DIDI THI. ]

Gauri : karan !!!.........

{12 seconds ago : karan jab gauri se baat kar raha tha tabhi peechey khari shilpa ne rakhi ki plate mei chupaye hue pistol ko nikala. }

Shilpa : [ mann mei sochte hue ] aaj ! aaj hi woh din hai ja main apne raaste ke sabse badey kaate ko hatakar apni manzil haasil kar loongi....

{Shilpa ne Karan ki or pistol kia aur goli chala dii magar gauri ne dekh lia tha aur...}

{3 seconds remains : gauri ne oos goli ko dekh lia aur karan ko hatakar khud saamne agayi. }

Gauri : karan !!!........

------Karan ko gauri ki baatei yaad ati hain.-------

Karan : aur maan lo ! agar kabhi mujhe (gauri karan ko kuch kehne se rouk leti hai) tou kya tab tum mere liye yehi gana gaogi ?....

Gauri : bhagwaan karey agar kabhi tumhari saasei rukey oos se pehle meri saasein thamm jaaye....

[ Shilpa ne jab dekha ke oska waar sahi jagah na laga tab osne dobara goli chalai. Ees baar pistol ki saari goliyan Karan aur Gauri par chala di. ]

[ karan ne peechey murr kar dekha tou gauri ko goli lagi thi aur woh goli chalane wala shaks AUR KOI NAHI BALKI OSKI APNI SHILPA DIDI THI JISPAR KARAN NE ITNA YAKEEN KIA THA MAGAR OSEY KYA PATA THA KE SHILPA DIDI RAKHI KE DIN HI APNE BHAI PAR GOLI CHALA DEGI. ]

[ EES BAAR SHILPA KE GOLI KARAN KO LAGI THI AUR WOH BAHUT DOORR JAAKAR KHAAI MEI GIRRNE HI WALA THA. ]

[ Gauri ne jab dekha ke karan ki jaan khatre mei hai woh uthi aur karan ke taraf gayi tabhi shilpa ne ek aur goli chalai ]

Karan : gauri !!!

SCENERIO : Gauri aur Karan khaai mei girrne se bas zara sa hi doorr thhey ke tabhi wahaan SHILPA AGAYI AUR

Shilpa : my dear bro... tum mere liye musibat hi nahi balki slow poison bann gaye thhey jo mujhe har roz maar raha tha... magar aaj... aaj se achha aur kaun sa din hou sakta tha tumse chootkara paane ka ? hmm ???....

[ Shilpa dhakka dene jaati hai magar karan ka rakhi shilpa ke haath se atuck jata hai. ]

Karan : bahut bharosa kia tha aap par... agar property hi chahiye thi tou maang lia houta....

Gauri : mujhe tou pehle se shak tha shilpa didi par magar....

Shilpa : aww bas ! ab rehne do.... aaj main tum dono se ****kara paa loongi aur property mere naam hou jayegi....

[ Shilpa aakhir dono ko bahut hi beydardi se maut dey deti hai. ]

[ Karan aur Gauri ke duje ke saath hi ees duniya se chaley jaate hain. ]

TABHI !!!

[ Achanak se bijli bahutt zorr se karakti hai. Shilpa ko achanak dadaji ki baatei yaad ati hain " Dadaji : arrre tu kya likhegi oon dono ki kismat !!!!...... likhne wala tou woh !... upar beitha sab dekh raha hai.... woh tera bhi kismat likhta hai yeh tu bhool rahi hai.... ab agar..... tujhe upar waale se zaraa bhi darr hai..... tou abhi bhi waqt hai.... sambhal jaa warna bahut baraa anarth ho jaayega......"]

[ Shilpa bahutt darr jaati hai. ]

Shilpa : myyyy foot !!!.... ab koi mera kuch nahi bigaar sakta !....

[crYstal_in_love]

myyy karu and gauri r dead ???? :(

dats soooo not gud yaa ! sab kuch theek chal raha tha and dat shilpa killed my kg ???http://forum.indya.com/images/icons/icon5.gif plzzz bring back kg d story is going in gud track but now widout main characters dis story is also dead now :(

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myyy karu and gauri r dead ???? :(

dats soooo not gud yaa ! sab kuch theek chal raha tha and dat shilpa killed my kg ???http://forum.indya.com/images/icons/icon5.gif plzzz bring back kg d story is going in gud track but now widout main characters dis story is also dead now :(

watch mon epi. !:)

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[crYstal_in_love]

iam despretly waiting for monday`s epi. :(

[diipendu]

[ Udhar Gauri ke ghar mei panditji aaye thhey. Mausam ke ees tarah achaanak se bigarr jaane se sab bahut pareshaan ho gayye thhey. Panditji bahut gyaani thhey eseliye onhoune bahut jald ees baat ko jaan lia ke kahin na kahin kuch bahut hi buraa hua hai. ]

Panditji : anarrth ! ghor annarrth !!!....

Papa : kya hua panditji ?...

Panditji : kahin kuch na kuch bahut hi buraa hua hai ! kuch aisa jo nahi houna tha.... kisi ne prakarti ke niyamo ko tourra hai !......

Papa : aap kya keh rahey hain humaari kuch samajh mei nahi araha hai....

Panditji : baadalon ka ees tarah zorro se garajna aur itni tez toofan ka anaa yehi saabit kar raaha hai ke kisi ne zaroor bahut bada paap kia hai......

[ Udhar Karan ke ghar mei dadaji paani peene ke liye aagey baddh rahey thhey ke poora glass ka jar neechey girr kar toot gaya ]

Papa : agar aapki baat such hai tou.... maa durga osey kabhi maaf nahi karegi jisne kuch bura kia hoga...

Maa : arre magar mujhe chinta gauri aur karan ki ho rahi hai woh dono aaj yehaan ghar aaney waale thehy....

Panditji : gauri-karan ???....

Maa : haan, meri beti gauri aur hamara daamad karan.... mere paas dono ki kundali bhi hai.... aap yehaan aaye hain tou kyun na aapko mei oondono ki kundali bhi dikha du... (maa panditji ko karan-gauri ki kundali dikhate hue) yeh rahey kundali... aap zara dekhiye aur batayiye ke dono ka jeevan aagey kaisa houne wala hai ?...

[ Panditji dono kundali ko dhyaan se dekhte hain aur bahut dhyaan se dekhne par unhe kuch pata chal jata hai. ]

Panditji : kuch tou gadbad hai....

Maa : kaisi gadbad ?

Panditji : eendono ki shaadi se pehle aapne een dono ki kundali kisi pandit ko dekhaya nahi ?...

Papa : arrey humne apne saamne hi dekhaya tha.... magar aisa kya hua ?

Panditji : ees kundali ke mutaabik eendono ki shaadi ke kuch samay baad eendono ke jevan mei aisa badlaav ayega jiss se yeh dono ek dusre se alag ho jayenge aur shaayad hamesha ke liye ek dusre se door hou jayenge....

[ yeh soon gauri ke mata-pita bahut pareshaan hou jaate hain AUR TABHI Diwaar par gauri-karan ka photo frame neechey girr jata hai aur toot jata hai. ]

[ Gauri ki maa bahut pareshaan hou jaati hai aur zidd karti hai ke woh gauri aur karan se milne onke ghar jayegi magar gauri ke papa kharab mausam ke wajah se mana karte hain. Gauri ki maa bahut zidd karti hai aur panditji dono se poochte hain ke agar woh bhi unke saath chaley. ]

[ Panditji aur gauri ke mata-pita karan aur gauri ke ghar pahuchte hain. tou saamne Shilpa khari houti hai. ]

Shilpa : RUK JAAYIYE !!!..........

[diipendu]

Shilpa : RUK JAAYIYE !!!..........

Shilpa : aaplougon ki himmat kaise hui yehaan aaney ki !.....

Papa : beta yeh kya keh rahi ho ?..... hum yehaan karan aur gauri se milne aaye hain...

Shilpa : huh !..... karan aur gauri ???????? kaun hai ye dono ???

Shilpa : ees naam ke koi bhi member ees ghar mei aapko kabhi nahi milenge...

Maa : beta dekho ees tarah anap-shanap mat kaho....

Shilpa : hmmmm..... chaliye theek hai magar jo yeh papers keh rahey hain... eske baad aap dono kuch bhi..... kehne laayak nahi rahenge....

[ Shilpa Karan aur Gauri ke DIVORCE papers gauri ke mata-pita ke muh par maarti hai. ]

Shilpa : mujhe na hi zyada chillane waale loug pasand hai aur na hi bat-tameez loug so aaplougo ke liye achha hoga ke aaploug yehaan se chalye jaaye hamesha hamesha ke liye.....

[ Gauri ke parents woh divorce papers ko dekhte hain aur oske saath oon contract papers ko bhi. yeh dekh sabko abhi tak yakeen nahi araha tha woh phir bhi gauri aur karan se milna chahte thhey. Shilpa unhe wahan se lagatar jaane ke liye kahe jaa rahi thi ke tabhi ]

RUK JAAO !!!!....................

[ yeh awaaz dadaji ki thi. Shilpa ko dadaji ko dekh bahuttt gussa ajata hai. woh mann mei sochti hai. ]

Shilpa : gauri aur karan ko tou maine apne raaste se hata dia hai... magar ees buddhe ka kya karu ! lagta hai ab agli baari ees buddhe ki hai..... kuch na kuch tou karna padega.....

[ Gauri ke parents oon divorce papers aur oon contract papers ko lekar dadaji ke paas jaate hain. ]

[diipendu]

Dadaji : samajh mei tou mere bhi nahi araha hai ke yeh sab kya ho raha hai....

Shilpa : main batati hoon !.....

[ Shilpa sabko gauri-karan ke contract marriage ke baare mei batati hai. ]

Maa : magar ees waqt woh dono hai kahaan ?

Dadaji : karan aur gauri ghar par nahi hain.... shilpa tumhe zaroor pata hoga...

Shilpa : sorry dadaji magar mujhe nahi pata ke aapka ladla karan aur gauri kahaan hain.....

[ Tabhi ghar par Police aati hai. Shilpa police ko ghar par dekh darr jaati hai ke kahin osne jo kia hai woh police ko pata tou na chal gaya. ]

Inspector : shilpa kapoor ?.... kya aap hi hain shilpa kapoor ?.....

Shilpa : je...... main hoon shilpa kapoor.... kahiye inspector....

Inspector : mam, aapne complain likhvaya tha ke aapka cell phone chori ho gaya hai.... yeh raha aapka cell phone....

Shilpa : aww !... thank you inspector.... ab aap jaa sakte hain....

Panditji : beti shilpa, zara apna haath dikhana....

Shilpa : sorry panditji magar mujhe een bhavishyavani jaise bakwaas chizo mei koi intrest nahi....

Panditji : ho sakta hai tumhe apne sawaalo ke jawaab mill jaaye.....

[ Shilpa hayraan ho jaati hai ke panditji ko kaise pata ke woh kuch soch rahi hai. Shilpa apna haath dikhati hai. ]

Panditji : jaisa ki maine socha tha !.......... tumhe apne karmo ka hisaab dena padega !.......

[ shilpa yeh soon bahut darr jaati hai aur darr ke maare uske chehre par pasina ata hai. ]

Panditji : woh bahut jald aayenge tumse apna jawaab maangne !..... kuch dhoka ! dhoka diya hai tumne kisi apne ko !.... woh raaz bahut jald raaz na rahega aur tumhari barbaadi bann jayega !........

Shilpa : kyyyyaaa bakwaas hai !............

[ shilpa apne kamre mei chali jaati hai. ]

[ Sabko shilpa ka ye bartaav kuch ajeeb lagta hai. ]

[diipendu]

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[diipendu]

Agle Din

Maa : mujhe karan aur gauri ki bahut chinta ho rahi hai.... aakhir woh dono gaye kahaan ?....

Papa : woh dono jahaan kahin bhi hai saath hain humey chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi.... magar kal shilpa ne jis tarah baat ki humse.....

Maa : haan, kuch ajeeb tou mujhe bhi laga tha.... magar mujhe maa durga par poora bharosa hai..... woh karan aur gauri ke saath kuch galat nahi houne denge........ joye maa durga.....

7 DAYS LATER...

[ Udhar Kapoor Mansion mei police aati hai. ]

Shilpa : inspector saahab aap ?....

[ dadaji stairs se neechey aarahe thhey. ]

Inspector : humey pata chala hai ke aapke dadaji ke naam chandigarh mei ek factory hai....

Shilpa : je haan, tou ?

Inspector : wahaan drugs ki smuggling houti hai.... aur eseliye humey aapke dadaji ko arrest karna hoga....

Dadaji : yeh aap kya keh rahey hain... mujhe eske baare mei kuch pata nahi hai.....

Inspector : woh sab aap court mei kahiyega !.....

[ Dadaji ko police arrest kar leti hai. Dadaji ke paas koi proof na houne ke wajah se onhey hamesha ke liye jail ho jati hai. Magar ek din jail mei dadaji se milne wahaan shilpa aati hai. ]

Shilpa : arre arre arre.... bahut buraa hua dadaji....

Dadaji : shilpa tum ?

Shilpa : haan dadaji main !.... jab maine suna ke aap jail mei woh bhi hamesha ke liye mujhe bahut bura laga.... eseliye main yehaan apne gunaaho ke maafi maangne aapke paas aayi hoon....

Shilpa : agar main chahoon tou main aapko yehaan se 1 minute mei bahaar karva sakti hoon..... magar !

Shilpa : main aisa nahi karungi.... kyunki aapke oos factory mei drugs smuggling houti hai yeh ek jhooth hai magar maine ees baat ko such karke aapko jhoothe case mei andar kar dia.... bas etna hi bahut hai mere liye....

Shilpa : arre ! main aapko karan aur gauri ki suchaai tou abhi tak batai hi nahi....

[ Dadaji yeh soon hayraan ho jaate hain. ]

Dadaji : karan aur gauri ? kahaan hai mere karan aur gauri ?... bataao !

Shilpa : aapke pyaare karan aur gauri ko tou maine.... ( khush houte hue ) maar dala....

Dadaji : nahi !.... tum jhooth bol rahi ho... karan aur gauri nahi marr sakte....

Shilpa : arre arre dadaji.... aapke paas zindagi utne nahi hai eseliye maine socha ke aap oopar jaane se pehle yeh khush-khabri soon lijiye... ab kya pata aap kab tak ees jhoothi umeed mei jeyenge.... aap marr kayu nahi jaate ?.... dekha jaaye tou maine yeh sab eseliye kia hai.... kyunki mujhe poore property ka 100% chahiye aur main kisi ke saath bhi yeh property share nahi kar sakti !......

Dadaji : aaj jaise tuney apno ko dhoka dia hai... yeh meri badd-dua hai ke tu jeete hue bhi har pal marre.... zindagi itni battar ho jaaye ke tu maut ke liye tarse magar maut kabhi tujhe naseeb na ho !....

[diipendu]

Dadaji : aaj jaise tuney apno ko dhoka dia hai... yeh meri badd-dua hai ke tu jeete hue bhi har pal marre.... zindagi itni battar ho jaaye ke tu maut ke liye tarse magar maut kabhi tujhe naseeb na ho !....

Shilpa : main yehaan yeh bakwaas aur nahi soon sakti.... bas !... ab aap yehaan enjoy kijiye... aur maine jo itni mehnat ki hai oos property ka mujhe bas ab kuch hi minute intezaar karna hoga.... bahut jald saari property mere naam ho jayegi.... aur main Azaad !.....

[ Dadaji achaanak behosh ho jaate hain. Baad mei pata chalta hai ke dadaji coma mei chale gaye hain. ]

[ Kapoor`s ki poori property ki owner Shilpa bann jaati hai. Shilpa apne naam saari property kar lene ke baad India chorr kar Austrilia chali jaati hai. ]

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" kehte hain har kisi ko apne karmo ka hisaab esi janam mei dena padta hai. Shilpa ne apno ko dhoka dia aur pyaar karne waalo ko alag kar dia. Jo dusro ka tamasha banate hain woh khud bhi ek-na-ek din tamasha bann kar reh jaate hain. Magar shaayad shilpa ka waqt aagaya tha apne karmo ka jawaab dene ka. Kehte hain itihas khud ko dhorata hai."
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Shilpa ne ek orphanage se do bachho ko adopt kia- Aditya aur Ashka.

20 saal baad...

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Date- 16th September 2008
Location- Newyork
Place- Blue star Club
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*Reshmi Ghosh AS Shivangi...*
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[ Shivangi ne bahut drink kia tha. Club mei bahut shorr tha. ]

Achaanak se shorr kam ho gaya kyunki wahaan kuch houne wala tha.

Ho Kya Gajab Ki Tujhape Meherbaaniya, Main Ik Nazar Daalu Jo Tujhpe Toh
Badh Jaaye Mere Saath Teri Yaariya, Kadmo Mein Tere Laakh Jannat Ho
Aankhon Mein Baatein Hai, Baaton Mein Vaadein Hai
Vaadon Mein Baahein Hain, Tu Baahon Mein Aaja JaraLucky Boy
You Are My Lucky Boy, Jaane Kaun Banega Mera Lucky Boy
Lucky Boy You Are My Lucky Boy, Jaane Kaun Banega Mera Lucky Boy
Nain Pari Tu De, Beh Ja Beh Ja
Karde Rain Dupehari Dil Le Ja Le Ja
Karde Rain Pari Tu De..


Club mei kisi ne enter kia. Shivangi ne osey dekha aur shivangi ki nazar osi ek par tik gayi.


Khwaab Kitaabon Se Buna Hai Jaal Yeh Labjo Ka
Suna Hai Teri Hi Raahon Mein Khula Hai Mera Hi Najaara
Ek Ishaare Se Diya Hai Hosh Jawaani Ko
Mila Hai Mod Kahaani Ko, Huwa Hai Hai Julm Yeh Dobaara
Ha Sabki Jubaan Pe Kyun Mera Hi Sawaal Hai
Jo Ho Gaya Hai Yeh Mera Kamaal Hai
Lucky Boy You Are My Lucky Boy, Jaane Kaun Banega Mera Lucky Boy


Shivangi ooske paas jaate hue


Dekha Jo Tune Mujhko I Know That You Like It
I Need A Man That Can Get Me So Excited
Lucky ?? Wanna Tell You Don’ T Lie
Darta Kyun Hai Why Did You Shy, Main Bana Du Teri Life
From London To Japan But I Couldn’T Find My Man
Jo Churaale Mera Chain, He Makes Me Say Got Damn
Nain Pari Tu De, Beh Ja Beh JaKarde Rain Dupehari Dil Le Ja Le Ja

Shivangi oosko touch karte hue


One More Time
Ho Kya Gajab Ki Tujhape Meherbaaniya, Main Ik Nazar Daalu Jo Tujhpe Toh
Badh Jaaye Mere Saath Teri Yaariya, Kadmo Mein Tere Laakh Jannat Ho
Aankhon Mein Baatein Hai, Baaton Mein Vaadein Hai
Vaadon Mein Baahein Hain, Tu Baahon Mein Aaja Jara Lucky Boy
You Are My Lucky Boy, Jaane Kaun Banega Mera Lucky Boy
Lucky Boy You Are My Lucky Boy, Jaane Kaun Banega Mera Lucky Boy
Nain Pari Tu De..

Shivangi achanak se behosh ho gayi.

Agle din

{shivangi ko hosh aya. osey pata chala ke club mei woh jispar fidaa ho gayi thi osi Mr.Unknown ne shivangi ko ghar drop kia tha.}

[diipendu]

Shivangi : I just love dat guy !... kuch tou baat hai usmei....

[ Wahi mr.unknown car chalate hue apne ek friend se phone par baat kar raha tha. ]

Friend : tou kal janaab ek ladki ke saath thhey dats gr888 yaar !

Mr.Unknown : esmei gr8 kya hai ?.... huh ! she is not my type.....

Friend : haan haan... teri dosti aur mohobbat hai paisa sirf paisa.... tu jeeta

Mr.Unknown : http://i38.servimg.com/u/f38/12/68/57/82/pre10.jpg let me complete dis, main jeeta paise ke liye hoon aur marta bhi sirf paise ke liye hoon kyunki paise se saare power kharide jaate hain aur main paise ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon....

Friend : magar sabke zindagi ko badalne waale ke zindagi mei ek-na-ek din koi tou ayegi jo teri life badal kar rakh degi....

Mr.Unknown : agar yeh such houta tou, magar aisa namunkin hai !....

ACHAANAK OSKI GAARI KISI SE TAKRA JAATI HAI !

[ oski gaari ne ek car ko thokar maar dia. ]

[ oos saamne waali car ka darwaza khula aur koi bahar aya. ]

Minisha Lamba AS Gohar



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Gohar : hey you !.... dekhai nahi deta andhe ho:mad:

[ Mr.unknown car se bahar ata hai. ]

Mr.unknown :[ attitude se kehte hue ] iam sorry, jo bhi woh hua woh

Gohar : mistake tha !... aise hi kisi ke gaari ko thok dogey ?....:mad:

Mr.unknown : i said sorry agar damage zyada hua hai den main bill ka payment kar dunga....

Gohar : howwwww dare you !!!!.... :mad:

[ Mr.unknown wahaan se apne car mei beith kar chala jata hai. ]

INDIA - palankhet

[ edhar India mei palankhet naam ka ek chota sa jagah jahaan har jagah hariyaali hai. ]


[ Kuch bachhe aam ke payr se aam toud nahi paa rahey thhey. Tabhi wahaan se koi guzar kar jaa rahi thi. Osne dekha ke yeh bachhe aam ke payr se kachhe aam nahi toud paar rahe hain woh unke paas gayi.]

- hey bachha party, main kuch madad karu ?

- Arre ! yeh tou nandani didi hai....

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[diipendu]

[ woh bachhe osey nandani ke naam se jaante thhey. Nandani payr par se bahut saare aam toudkar bachho ko dey dia aur bachhe hayraan ho gaye ke jo unse na hou saka woh nandani didi ne ek minute mei kar dia ! ]

- agar aap na hoti tou woh chacha humari jaan ley leta magar aapne ek jhatke mei itne saare aam toudd liye ?...

Nandani : [ style se ] arre yeh chacha tou hamesha kur-kur karte hain... tum loug ekdum bindaas ho jaao aur jab bhi kabhi meri madad chahiye ho na tou ?????

- nandani didi ko yaad karne ka !

Nandani : haan !.... :cool:

[ Nandani wahaan se jaane hi waali thi ke tabhi mandir ki ghanti bajti hai. nandani mandir ke taraf chal deti hai. ]

[ woh mandir maa durga ka mandir tha. nandani maa durga se ashirwaad leti hai. ]

Baba ( mandir ke pujari ) : arre nandani bitiya, har roz tu yehan mandir ati hai aur chup si ho jaati hai maano maa durga se kuch poochna hai tujhe....

Nandani : [ waapas apne style mei ] arre baba ! aap tou hamesha yehin par din bhar puja-paath mei lage rehte ho eseliye aapko aisa lagta hai..... haan baaki mera yehaan aane ka ek aur lalach hai.... ke mujhe maa durga se ek hi chiz chahiye aur woh hai...

Baba : aur woh hai tere ees baar exam mei achhe results aajaye.... hahaha tu chinta mat kar... maa durga sab kuch theek kar degi....

Nandani : hey maa durga meri nayyiya ees baar bhi paar laga dey tou bari kripa hogi :D

[ Nandani ke sarr par ek fooll akar girta hai. Baba zor-zor se haste hain. ]

Baba : arre main eseliye nahi hass raha ke maa ne tujhe ashirwaad dia hai balki eseliye hass raha hoon ke maa ne tujhe Ees baar bhi aashirvaad dey hi dia.... lagta hai maa durga ki tu sabse chaheti bhakt hai.... hmmmm

Nandani : jo bhi bolo baba ! akhir maa ne meri sunn hi li :D

Gauri Tejwani AS Nandani | Hiten Tejwani AS Pratham Shergil
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[crYstal_in_love]

yupppieee my karan gauri r back !!!! i just lov dis epsidoe !!!:D

[khushi jain]

epi was ossim b'coz ght r back but epi bahaut chhot tha thoda zyada batao

[crYstal_in_love]

epi was ossim b'coz ght r back but epi bahaut chhot tha thoda zyada batao

agree wid u khushi ! :D

[crYstal_in_love]

hey diipendu i want 2 request somthing abt karam...

plzz make dis thread sticky coz i cant found dis serial anywhere due 2 ads so i want reach 2 dis serial soon so can u plzz make dis thread sticky ?...

if u r not mod. here so i want 2 req. mod wid all due respect make dis thread sticky coz it is my veryyy fav. :D :)

[diipendu]

[ Nandani ghar pahuchti hai. Saamne chachi khari thi bahut gusse mei. ]

Chachi : waqt mill gaya maharani ko !....

Nandani : [ style se ] arre chachi, kyun naraaz houti ho.... yeh dekho maine aapke liye kitneeeeeeeeee achhe-achhe churiya select ki hain socha.... ke ghar jaa rahi hoon saamne hamesha ki tarah muqambo chachi milegi so kyu na

Chachi : kyaaa !!!:mad:

Nandani : :D mera matbal hai ke saamne chachi khush ! khush milegi aur meri rah dekh rahi hogi.... tou kyu na unke liye yeh churiya lete chalu.... waise aajkal aise churiyon ka bahut fashion hai aur aap kisi madhuri dixit se kam thodi na lagti ho.... chachi !!!...

Chachi : kitniiiiiiiii achii hai meri nandani.... :D

[ Nandani apne kamre mei jaati hai ke dekhti hai ke mini bahut udaas si thi. (minni chachi ki beti nandani se badi ) ]

Nandani : arre mini, kya hua tu itni udaas kyun ? kisi se jaghra hua ?....

Mini : aaj college se aate waqt mujhe ek ladka door se dekhe jaa raha tha aur kuch deyr tak osne follow bhi kia... mujhe bahut darr laga....

Nandani : kyaaaaaa !!! kaun hai naam bata... oski tou ab shyamat agayi samjho !....

Mini : jaane dey na nandani.... chorr

Nandani : arrey ! aise kaise ? koi aake meri behen ko pareshaan karey aur main chup rahoo....

Mini : dheere bol agar maa ne soon lia tou

Nandani : achha theek hai magar tu promise kar ke kal college mei tu mujhe batayegi ke woh ladka hai kaun....

Mini : promise... :)

[diipendu]

AGLE DIN

[ college mei results ke listings hou chuke hain. Nandani apne marks notice board mei dekh rahi hai. ]

Nandani : yes !.... maa durga ne ees baar bhi mujhe paas karva hi dia woh bhi 1st !....

Mini : esmei nayi baat kya hai... http://illiweb.com/fa/i/smiles/icon_rolleyes.gif (javascript:emoticonp(':roll:'))

[ Library mei. ]

Nandani : arre mini tuney mujhe yehaan library mei kyun bethakar rakha hai ?...

Mini : kyunki wahi ladka yehaan aaney wala hai...

Nandani : awwwwww , ab uski kheyr nahi !.....:cool:

[ woh ladka(Naman) library mei enter karta hai. ]

[ Mini nandani ko ishara karti hai ke yehi woh ladka hai. Naman chupke se book ko saamne rakh kar mini ko dekhe jaa raha tha. Nandani ne osey pakar lia woh dono ke beech akar khari hoye jaa rahi thi. naman bahut koshish kar raha tha osey dekhne ki magar har baar nandani beech mei aja rahi thi. ]

[ library se jaate waqt nandani ne jaakar naman se pooch hi lia.]

Nandani : [ gusse se ] kya problem hai ! kyun meri behen ko yu line maarey jaa rahe thhey... :mad:

[ Naman darr gaya. ] http://illiweb.com/fa/i/smiles/icon_pale.gif (javascript:emoticonp(':pale:'))

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Naman : woh, main..... actually

Nandani : kya ! tum kuch bolte kyu nahi :mad: main sab samajhti hoon tum jaise ladko ko !

Naman : http://illiweb.com/fa/i/smiles/icon_pale.gif (http://javascript%3cb%3e%3c/b%3E:emoticonp(':pale:'))

Mini : nandani, chorr sab dekh rahey hain..... jaane dey...

Nandani : arre kya jaane du ! main eesey achhe se sabak sikhaungi !....

Mini : nandani jaane dey !....

[ naman wahaan se jaldi se chala jata hai. ]

Nandani : arrrrrrreee ! bhaag gaya.... tu dekhna, chorungi nahi esey....

[ ghar par ]

[ chachi edhar nandani ki maa ko bharkate hue ]

Chachi : arre bhabhi, aapne kabhi nandani ke shaadi ke baare mei bhi socha hai ya nahi !.....

Maa : kya kehna chahti ho ?

Chachi : bhai main kisi ke mutter(matter) mei tou nahi bolti magar baat ghar ki hai.... mujhe meri mini ke baare mei koi tinsion nahi haiiii.... magar nandani ki mujhe bahutttttt fikhar hai.... haan !

Chachi : aapne nandani ke liye koi ladka abhi tak nahi dekha ? nandani ki padhai bhi poori ho gayi hai aur abhi tou uske shaadi ki umar ho gayi hai.....

Maa : magar mini nandani se badi hai pehle uski shaadi ?

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Maa : magar mini nandani se badi hai pehle uski shaadi ?

Chachi : meri mini tou sidhi-sadhi i men(mean) look sidhi & sadhi hai.... main jahaan par osey shaadi karne ko kahungi woh meri baat nahi talegi.... magar nandani.......

[ chachi ki baaton se nandani ki maa soch mei padd jaati hai. ]

[ Chachi wahaan se uth kar bahaar jaati hai ke dekhti hai ke nandani aur mini dono arahey hain. ]

Nandani : arre chachi, yeh lo aapke liye special chocolates ! :D

Chachi : arre meri pyaari nandani tu kitniiiiiiiii achii hai :D

Nandani : main zara fresh houkar aati hoon tab tak aap khaayiye ! :cool:

ACHAANAK !

[ chachi bahuttttt zorr-zorr se "paani-paani" chillati hai aur pata chalta hai ke woh chocolates nahi lal mirchi ka powder tha. ]

Chachi : nandani !!!!!!!!!!!

[ Durga pooja ees hafte hai eseliye Nandani ke papa ne decide kia ke poora pariwaar ees baar kolkata jayenge. ]

[ Nandani apna packing kar rahi thi ke osne paper mei dekha ke International buisness companies mei business tycoon "Pratham shergil " ka article aya hai. ]

Nandani : huh ! yeh lougon ko aur koi kaam nahi hai jab dekho een faaltoo lougo ke baare mei chhapte rehte hain.... bhai agar chhapna hi tou humaare baare mei chhapo :cool:

Mini : wah wah !... tu na.... ek dum ajeeb hai !....

Nandani : thank you...thank you

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Newyork

[ edhar pratham ke paas news aya hai ke uske company ke shares mei kuch loss hua hai aur aise mei sirf ek hi aisa shaks hai jo pratham ki company ko help kar sakta hai. "Shivangi"]

[ Udhar shivangi ka ghar poore roses se bharr jate hai. shivangi ko ek letter milta hai: " duniya mei gulab tou bahut dekhe hain magar tum sa haseen chehra kahin na dekha hai... - Pratham Shergil" ]

Shivangi : hmmmm intresting !...

[ Udhar Gohar ]

Gohar : [ gusse se ] mere car par scratches par gayye aur woh bhi oske wajah se ! main chorrungi nahi oos mr.bakwaas ko :mad:

[ Ek restaurant mei - Pratham aur shivangi beithe hue ]

Shivangi : [ attitude se ] so mr.perfect, batao yun hi tumhara dil mujhpar agaya yaa.... kahin eske pechey bhi koi raaz hai ?

Pratham : pratham jo bhi karta hai duniya ke saamne karta hai aur osey koi zaroorat nahi hai kisi bhi chiz ko chhupane ki....

Shivangi : attitude, i like it !

Pratham : shivangi, kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi ?

Shivangi : http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/18219.jpg

Pratham : kahin maine kuch galat tou nahi keh dia ?

Shivangi : main tumse shaadi karungi...

Pratham : mere ek company mei aajkal kuch problem chal rahi hain.... jab woh problems ko main solve kar loo main tumse shaadi kar loonga....

Shivangi : jab shivangi ko koi pasand ata hai... tou problems uske problems mere problems ban jate hain.... aur koi bhi problems shivangi ko zara sa touch karey yeh oski aukat nahi....

Shivangi : dont worry, main tumhare oos company ko poora support karungi....

Pratham : http://illiweb.com/fa/i/smiles/icon_cool.gif

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[ Gohar bhi osi restaurant mei ayi thi aur osney pratham ko wahaan dekha. Gohar jaldi se pratham ke car ke paas gayii aur car ka tyre puncture kar dia. ]

Gohar : tumne mere car ko scratch kia tha... hmh ! lo ab maine tumhare car ki hawa mera matlab hai tumhare car ki tyre ko puncture kar dia...
http://illiweb.com/fa/i/smiles/icon_twisted.gif 1 all, ab game barabar hai !

[ Pratham aur Shivangi jab car parking area mei aaye tou unhoune dekha ke pratham ka car ki tyre puncture hai. Pratham ko wahaan ek note milta hai jispar scratch mark houta hai. pratham ko samajh mei ajata hai. ]

[ AGLE DIN Pratham ko pata chalta hai ke osey bahut urgently mumbai jana hoga apne buisness meeting ke liye. ]

Pratham : mumbai ?.... yeh jagah, yeh naam kuch jana-pehchana sa lagta hai... but you dont worry main aaj hi mumbai ke liye nikal raha hoon...

[ Pratham mumbai ke liye chala jata hai. Shivangi ko pata chalta hai ke pratham ne osey bina bataye hi mumbai ke liye chala gaya. ]

[ Shivangi bhi mumbai ke liye tickets karvati hai magar tickets available nahi houte. Shivangi ko 3 hafta rukna padega. ]

MUMBAI

[ Pratham mumbai pahutch jata hai. ]

[ Pratham apne car mei beithta hai ke tabhi wahaan ek aurat aakar pratham ko KARAN ke naam se bulaati hai. Pratham ko woh aurat pagal lagti hai. Pratham wahaan se chala jata hai. ]

[crYstal_in_love]

wonderful episode ! hey i want 2 ask u somthing

i heard dis news frm india forum dat karam is soon going 2 b off air ? i think story line is g8 den why u making dis OnLine serial off ? Iam gr8 fan of karam dats why i always post my replies here :D

by d way kayaamat seems kasauti zindagi kay type na ? i think karam should continue i want karam 2 b continue plzzz :)

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i want 2 ask u somthing

i heard dis news frm india forum dat karam is soon going 2 b off air ? i think story line is g8 den why u making dis OnLine serial off ? Iam gr8 fan of karam :D

Yes this news is true now iam not denying any things or iam not intrested 2 saying no comments... dis news is totally correct ! Karam is soon going 2 b off-air in 1-3rd week of oct. and a new serial killer serial will replace karam... Karam got 9000 views(including GHT One site) wid gud responses but no critics thanks 2 all u viewers for making dis story sucessful :) Thank u indya !

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[crYstal_in_love]

Yes this news is true now iam not denying any things or iam not intrested 2 saying no comments... dis news is totally correct ! Karam is soon going 2 b off-air in 1-3rd week of oct. and a new serial killer serial will replace karam... Karam got 9000 views(including GHT One site) wid gud responses but no critics thanks 2 all u viewers for making dis story sucessful :) Thank u indya !

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so it means dat any K story replace dis k i mean any K serial replace dis karam ? plzz tell me d name of serial killer`s new story ? is dat K or ???:confused: u didnt done any comedy or thriller serial in serial killer what is the reason ? have decided any ? kya khichdi chal raha hai ?

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so it means dat any K story replace dis k i mean any K serial replace dis karam ? plzz tell me d name of serial killer`s new story ? is dat K or ???:confused: u didnt done any comedy or thriller serial in serial killer what is the reason ? have decided any ? kya khichdi chal raha hai ?

sorry no comments !

[crYstal_in_love]

sorry no comments !

okay now what u'll say abt kutumb ? dmg forum mei ek member(armanica) ne mujhe yeh bhi bataya hai ke kutumb bhi bahut jald apne low responses ke wajah se off air ho jayega ? is dat true ? i think ees oct. 1st tak ?

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okay now what u'll say abt kutumb ? dmg forum mei ek member(armanica) ne mujhe yeh bhi bataya hai ke kutumb bhi bahut jald apne low responses ke wajah se off air ho jayega ? is dat true ? i think ees oct. 1st tak ?

no comments !

i dont know who is saying dis ap agar kutumb 1st oct. ko dekhenge tou hi pata chal jayega k off-air hoga ya nahi...

[crYstal_in_love]

but u potrayed jodi of HITENGAURI as Karan-gauri veryyy well ! i dont want 2 see dis beautiful story 2 b off:(

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but u potrayed jodi of HITENGAURI as Karan-gauri veryyy well ! i dont want 2 see dis beautiful story 2 b off:(

thank u very much !:)

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[ Pratham soch mei padd gaya hai ke aakhir woh aurat thi kaun aur woh osey kaise pehchanti hai ? woh osey karan ke naam se kyun pukar rahi thi ? een saare sawaalo ke saath pratham mumbai mei apna pehla kadam rakhta hai. ]

[ Udhar gohar ko pata chalta hai ke oski sabse fav. cat (lolo) marr gayi hai. woh jaldi se apna bag pack karti hai aur india ke liye nikal jaati hai. ]

[ eedhar pratham apne buisness confrence ko attend karne ke baad office se nikal hi raha tha ke tabhi osey pata chalta hai ke mr.shubroto kolkata gayye hue hain durga puja ke wajah se. Pratham ko kolkata jana hi thik lagta hai warna oska 100 crores ka loss ho sakta hai. ]

[ edhar gohar bhi mumbai ajati hai. woh apne lolo ko akhri alvida kehne ayi hai. gohar bahut udaas hou jaati hai aur woh hamesha ke liye newyork jaakar rehne ka decision leti hai. ]

[ Pratham kolkata ke liye airport pahuchta hai KE TABHI wahaan se gohar bhi guzar hi rahi thi. ]

[ Gohar ki nazar pratham par padii. osne apna car rukvaya aur pratham ko follow karne lagi. gohar ko pata chala ke pratham kolkata jaa raha hai. gohar ne bhi kolkata ke liye tickets book karvaye. ]

Gohar : hmm ab ayega maza ! mr.faaltoo ko ab achha lesson teach karane ka ees se achha chance mujhe nahi milega....

[ edhar kolkata mei nandani ko kuch ajeeb sa lag raha hai. woh bahut pareshaan si lag rahi thi. mini ne nandani se oske aise behaviour ka reason poocha. ]

Nandani : pata nahi mini... mujhe subah se kuch ajeeb sa lag raha hai.... maano jaise mujhe kisi ke aaney ka intezaar sa ho.....

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Nandani : pata nahi mini... mujhe subah se kuch ajeeb sa lag raha hai.... maano jaise mujhe kisi ke aaney ka intezaar sa ho.....

Mini : hmmmm eska matlab ye hai ke humaari nandani ko apne sapno ka raajkumaar ke aaney ka intezaar hai...

Nandani : mini ! tu bhi kuch bhi bolti rehti hai.... arre mere sapno ka raajkumar sabke tarah laakhon mei nahi croro mei yaa phir arbo mei ek hai....

[ Pratham kolkata pahuch jata hai. ]

Nandani : osey dekhne se mujhe aisa lagey ke humara bahuttt purana koi rishta sa hai...

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Mini : dont worry nandani aisa koi zaroor ek na ek din tumhare zindagi mei zaroor ayega....:)

[ Gohar pratham ko follow karte hue kolkata pahuch jaati hai. ]

Nandani : arre yeh windcharms yehaan ?...

Mini : arre wah !

Nandani : esmei arre wah kehne ki kya zaroorat hai ?

Mini : nandani, pata hai agar do loug ees windcharms ke neechey milte hain aur agar onke aankhein ek dusre se touch ho ya woh oske baahon mei ho woh bhi ees windcharms ke neechey tou unke beech ek rishta bann jata hai jo sadiyo tak ankahee aur ansuni tou hoti hai magar woh dono janmo ke liye saath bandh jaate hain....

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Mini : nandani, pata hai agar do loug ees windcharms ke neechey milte hain aur agar onke aankhein ek dusre se touch ho ya woh oske baahon mei ho woh bhi ees windcharms ke neechey tou unke beech ek rishta bann jata hai jo sadiyo tak ankahee aur ansuni tou hoti hai magar woh dono janmo ke liye saath bandh jaate hain....

Nandani : aisa kuch nahi hota hai !...

[ nandani wahaan se chali jaati hai. ]

[ Ek bahut badii aarti chal rahi thi. Saare loug aarti mei busy thhey. Pratham wahaan se guzar raha tha osne apne driver se poocha. ]

Pratham : arey driver, yehaan kya chal raha hai ?...

Driver : sahaab, yehaan durga maa ki aarti chal rahi hai... kehte hain maa se jo mango woh mill jata hai...

[ Pratham gaari rukvata hai aur andar jata hai. ]

[ Nandani ke room mei kuch bachhe aate hain woh nandani ke sabse fav. dress jo ki bed par rakha tha ospar colours girakar saara dress kharaab kar dete hain. Woh dress nandani aaj pehenne waali thi puja mei. ]

[ nandani akar dekhti hai tou bachho ne sara dress ka kabara kar rakha tha. Nandani ko yeh dekh bahutt gussa aya woh oon bachho ko stick se maarne ke liye onke pechey bhaag rahi thi. bachhe bhaagte hue yehaan-wahan jaa rahey thhey. Nandani es waqt bahutt gusse mei thi aur woh unke peechey stick lekar bhaag rahi thi. ]


ACHAANAK !

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[ Nandani takra kar Pratham ke baahon mei girr jaati hai. ]

[ Nandani aur Pratham ke aankhon ke saamne kuch visuals aate hain jinmei dono ek car ke paas kharey thhey aur nandani ka payr fisal jata hai aur nandani pratham ke baahon mei girr jaati hai. ]

[ Tabhi wahan mini aati hai. ]

Mini : arre, yeh dono tou windcharms ke neechey woh bhi ekdusre ke aankhon mei dekh rahey hain aur nandani tou ooske bahon mei bhi hai... een sab ka sign hai ke een dono ka connection ab janmo ka ho gaya hai.....

[ Pratham nandani ko uthata hai. Nandani ko achaanka se aisa lagne laga ke aaj subah se jiska osey intezaar tha woh agaya hai. ]

(dono ek saath bol parey.)

Pratham-Nandani : kya main tumhe janta hoon ?/kya main tumhe jaanti hoon ?

arre nandani !!! jaldi aa kahan reh gayi tu...

Nandani : haan main aayi !... [ nandani wahaan se jaldi se bhaag jati hai. nandani jaate hue peechey murr kar oos anjaane ko dekhti hai. ]

Mumbai

[ woh aurat jisne pratham ko karan ke naam se pukara tha woh khush houte hue mandir jaati hai. ]

[ Woh aurat aur koi nahi gauri ki maa thi. woh aaj osi panditji ke paas jaati hai jisne 20 saal pehle ek bhavishya-vani ki thi ke karan aur gauri ke jeevan mei ek bahut badi musibat aaney waali hai. ]

[ Gauri ki maa panditji ko saari baat batati hai. Panditji yeh soon kar bahut khush houte hain ke onke mann mei jo shak tha woh aaj such ho gaya hai. ]

[ Panditji woh kundli dekhkar phir se unko kuch pata chalta hai aur yeh sab kuch kab-kaahan-kis jagah se shuru hua yeh samajh mei ajata hai. ]


[ panditji gauri ki maa ko woh sab kuch batate hain shuru se- gauri aur karan ke shaadi ke baad shilpa hi woh thi jisne karan ko maarne ki saajish ki thi magar har baar gauri beech mei ajati thi. ek din shilpa ne yeh saajish kia ke rakhi waale din woh apne bhai karan aur gauri ko apne raaste se ek baar mei hata degi. Shilpa ne rakshabandhan waale din apne hi bhai karan aur gauri ke saath yehi kia. woh din ek bahut khaas tha, eseliye ab waqt khud ko repeat karega aur shilpa ko apne karamo ka jawaab dena hoga. ]

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Karam | Mon-thu

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Panditji : aur ab woh waqt agaya hai jab itihaas khud ko phir se dohrayega...

Gauri`s maa : tou kya gauri aur karan zinda hai ?... kahaan hai woh ?...

Panditji : ek naye chehre lekar... nayi pehchaan lekar ees duniya mei waapas aaye hain... woh kahaan, yeh khud mujhe bhi nahi pata magar neyati mei jo likha hai woh hokar hi rahega...

KOLKATA


[ Nandani oos anjaan ke baare mei soch rahi thi jis se woh aaj mili thi. ]

[ Pratham apne meeting mei beitha tha. Oske aankhon ke saamne baar-baar wahi chehra araha tha jis se woh aaj mila tha. ]

[ Udhar mini nandani ke room mei aati hai aur dekhti hai ke nandani kahin khoyi hui si hai. Woh nandani ko oske khyaalon se jagati hai. ]

Mini : arre nandani, main tujhe ek baat batana chahti hoon aur tu hai ke khoyi-khoyi si hai !....

Nandani : [ gusse se ] kya hai ! kyun tangg kar rahi hai...

Mini : ( Bahut khush houte hue ) Tujhe saanjh aur Prem ke baare mei batana tha !...
Nandani : saanjh aur prem ? yeh kaun hain ?....

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Mini : ( Bahut khush houte hue ) Tujhe saanjh aur Prem ke baare mei batana tha !...

Nandani : saanjh aur prem ? yeh kaun hain ?....

Mini : saanjh aur Prem, Bhagwaan ne een dono ki kismat bahut hi pyaar se likhi hai... pyaar ke har oon mushkilon ko paar karke aur zindagi bharr ek dusre ka saath nibhakar dono ne apna pyaar amar kar dia.... ab tou duniya bhi een do pyaar karne waalon ko hamesha yaad rakhegi... yeh dono baney hi hain ek dusre ke liye...

Nandani : arre wah ! phir tou main bhi zaroor dekhungi ees kahaani ko... magar ees kahaani ka naam kya hai ?

Mini : des mei basta hogaa meraa dil...

Nandani : bahut hi pyaar naam hai...

[ Nandani ki maasi ne nandani aur mini ko market jakar kuch zaroori saaman laaney ko kaha. Nandani aur Mini market jaakar shopping kar rahey thhey. ]

Nandani raaste se guzar rahi thi aur uska dupatta kisi ke chehre ko chhu kar(touch houkar) chali gayi...


{ woh aur koi nahi PRATHAM tha }

[ Nandani ka dupatta Pratham ke wrest watch se attuck jaati hai. ]

[ Nandani rukk jaati hai. ]

Mini : kya hua nandani ?....
[ Nandani peechey murr kar dekhti hai tou yeh wahi Anjaana hai jis se woh aarti mei mili thi. ]

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Dono ek dusre ke aankhon mei dekhte hue kho jaate hain...


[ Mini wahaan aakar ****tki bajati hai. Nandani ko ehsaas hota hai ke uska dupatta oos anjaan ke wrest watch se atuck gayii hai. Nandani aagey badhti hai. Pratham dupatta nikaalne ki koshish karta hai magar sucess nahi hota. Nandani dheere se kehti hai "Main kar du ?" ]


SCENE :- Yeh pal dono ko peechley janam ki yaad dilata raha hai jab gauri aur karan ki shaadi hui thi aur pratham ke wrest watch se gauri ka dupatta atuck gaya tha.

woh dupatta nandani nikaal deti hai.


Pratham : hi, main hoon pratham... pratham shergil

Nandani : nandani...

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Mini : nandani hum late ho rahey hain... ab jaldi chal warna maa humey bahut daategi !....

[ Mini Nandani ko wahaan se ley jaati hai. ]


[ Ghar par ]

Mini : arre, yeh kya baat hui ! woh ladka ek tou aarti mein tujhse takraya aur tou aur aaj market mei osney tujhse... tujhse ! battamizi bhi ki....

Mini : mujhe nahi lagta hai ke aise mein nandani oos oos pratham ko maaf kar degi ?...

Nandani : kya ? haan haan !... main kyun oos chha-chhundar ko maaf karu ? oski himmat kaise hui mujhse battamizi karne ki !.... AB TOU WOH PACHHTAYEGA... BAHUTTTTT PACHHTAYEGA !...http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/916238.gif

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[ Nandani raat ko sou rahi thi aur sapne mei osey dikahyi deta hai ke woh pratham ke saath bahut khush hai. ]

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[ Nandani jhatt se jaag jaati hai. ]

Nandani : arrrrre.... yeh main kya soch rahi hoon... main aur oos lafange se galey mill rahi thi ?... yeh koi bura sapna hi ho sakta hai....

Nandani : agar aisa tha tou phir bhi mujhe oosey dekhne par aisa kyun lagta hai ke............ hamesha se hum dono ke beech koi rishta sa tha... koi purana rishta ???...

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[ Agle din ]


[ Nandani ke papa yehaan apne dono betiyon ke liye ek achha sa rishta kahin chalane ki baat kar rahey hain. Nandani aur uska pariwaar agle 3 dino mei kolkata se waapas palampur jaaney waaley thhey. ]


[ Nandani aur Mini baat karte hue kitchen ke taraf jaa hi rahey thhey ke tabhi wahaan koi ata hai. ]

[ badey-badey spectacles, baalon se chameli ki badboooo aur dekhne mei bahutt ghatiya uska naam tha 'champu ram'. ]


[ Nandani ke liye sabse pehla rishta aya tha ees champu ram ka jo ki aaj nandani se milne aya tha. ]

Nandani : http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/18219.jpg tum kaun ho ? (darrte hue awaaz mein) mini mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai... yaa tou main kisi horrow movie ko dekh rahi hoon yaa phir.... yeh mera bahut bura sapna hai...

Mini : same situation mera bhi hai nandu !...

Champu : helloji, mera naaaaaam champu raam hai...

[ Nandani behosh hou jaati hai. ]

Champu : hehehe... waise main itnaaa smart hoon ke mujhe dekh kar sabhi ladkiyaan mujhpar marti hain eseliye woh behosh hou jaati hain.... :D


Mini : [ mann mein sochte hue ] arre nandani, tu tou behosh ho gayi ab meraaa kya hoga ?....

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[ Udhar Pratham ]

[ Pratham is still thinking about the face which comes always in his dreams. ]

[ Pratham soch raha tha oos 'aarti mei nandani oske baahon mei thi aur woh uske aankhon ki geherayio mei kahin khoya hua tha'. pratham oos chehre ko bhulana chah raha tha magar phir bhi bhula nahi paa raha tha. woh oos chehre ko bahut pehle se jana-pehchana sa lag raha tha. ]

[ Pratham ne decide kia ke woh nandani se phir se milega. ]

[ Nandani ke ghar mei nandani ko dekhne kuch loug aaye thhey. Nandani ko majbooran kaha gaya tha ke woh saare pariwaar waalon ke saath saamne akar beithey. ]

[ woh guest nandani ko dekh bahutt khush ho rahey thhey jo apne bete champuram ke liye nandani ko pasand karne aaj aaye hain. ]

Guest 1 : arrrrrrrrrrrreeee, kitniiii sundaaarrr hai aapki beti !... bilkul fhamos asihwarya rai jaisi....

Guest 2 (champu`s mom ) : arrrrre woh aishwaria bhi tou kolkata ki hi hai !.... hehehehe.... betaaa

Champuram : haaaaannnnn maaaaaaa

Guest 2 : tumhe nandaaaani pasand hai na !

Champuram : kuch khaas nahi hai magar main een se shaadi kar lunga...http://jaanujodi.forumgogo.com/images/smilies/lol.gif

Guest 1 : jab hamaare bete ko nandani beti pasand hi hai tou hamey bhi pasand hai magar....

[ Nandani ke gharwale chinta mei padd gayye. ]

Guest 1 : magar humey dahejj bhi achhiii-khaasii chahiye !haaaaaaaaaaaannn...

Nandani : basss !!!!!!!!!!!!:mad:

Nandani : bahut ho gaya !....

[ nandani ke papa aur maa dekh hayraan ho gayye aur woh loug aur chinta mei padd gayye. ]

[diipendu]

Nandani : mere itne buree din nahi aagaye hian jo main ees laloo se shaadi karu aur aise saas-sasur tou mere dushmano ko bhi nasaab na ho !....

Nandani champuram aur uske family ke paas jaate hue

Nandani : agar kabhi apne es champu ke liye mere ghar ke aas-paas rishta dhoondne ki koshish bhi karte hue main aapsabko pakar lia na... kasam khaati hoon, JAAN LEY LOONGI !.... http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/916238.gif


Champu & his family : http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/18219.jpg http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/146687.gif

Papa : [ gusse se ] nandani !!!....

Papa : yeh kya tarika hai bado se baat karne ka !.... yeh hamare houne waale daamadji hain...

Nandani : houne waale magar hue tou nahi na !...

Papa Nandani ko zorr se thappar maarte hain !...

Champu : [ nandani par hasste hue ] http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/938464.gif

Maa : nandani, beta chup-chap beith jaao...

Champu`s mom : haaaaaaaaaan !!!!.... baapreeeee-baaaaap ! kitnaaaa chapar-chapar karti hai yeh chori... zabaan hai yaa keychi !...

Champu`s dad : yeh chori ke liye hum abhi bhi apne bete se shaadi karvane ko tyaar hai... yeh aap humara tehzeeb samajh lijiye...

Champu`s dad : ab humey dahejj mein 80 lakh rupaye, humaare champu ke liye ek ac waali car, champu ki maa ke liye kuch jewelleryzzzz bas itna hi...

Nandani ke papa champuram ke pariwaar ke ees maangey sunn kar pareshaan ho gaaye ke woh itnaa sab kuch itney kam dino mein kaise arrange karenge...

TABHI !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[diipendu]

Champu`s dad : ab humey dahejj mein 80 lakh rupaye, humaare champu ke liye ek ac waali car, champu ki maa ke liye kuch jewelleryzzzz bas itna hi... http://jaanujodi.forumgogo.com/images/smilies/lol.gif


Nandani ke papa champuram ke pariwaar ke ees maangey sunn kar pareshaan ho gaaye ke woh itnaa sab kuch itney kam dino mein kaise arrange karenge...

TABHI !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Darwaaza zorr se khulta hai aur Pratham wahaan ata hai.

Papa : kaun ?... humney apko nahi pehchana....

Pratham aagey badtey jaata hai aur aagey nandani ke taraf badta hai.

Pratham Nandani ka haath pakarta hai aur osey dekhta hai. Nandani hayraan ho jaati hai aur usey kuch samajh nahi araha tha.

Pratham bas nandani ko dekhe jaa raha tha...

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Sajde Mein Yun Hi Jhukta Hoon
Tum Pe Hi Aa Ke Rukhta Hoon
Kya Yeh Sab Ko Hota Hai
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Hum Ko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se
Tum Se Hi Sab Baatein Ab Se
Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua
Sajde Mein Yun Hi Jhukta Hoon
Tum Pe Hi Aa Ke Rukhta Hoon
Kya Yeh Sab Ko Hota Hai
Hum Ko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se
Tum Se Hi Sab Baatein Ab Se
Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua

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Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon
Khuda Jaane Mein Mitt Gaya
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai
Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda
Tu Kahe To Tere Hi Kadam Ke
Main Nishanon Pe
Chalun Rukun Ishaare Pe
Tu Kahe To Khwabon Ka Bana Ke
Main Bahana Sa
Mila Karun Sirhaane Pe
Ho Tum Pe Dil Ki Baatein Seekhi
Tum Se Hi Yeh Raahein Seekhi
Tum Pe Mar Ke Main To Jee Gaaya
Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon
Khuda Jaane Mein Mitt Gaya
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai
Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda
Dil Kahe Ke Aaj To Chupa Lo Tum
Panahon Mein
Ke Daar Hai Tum Ko Kha Doonga
Dil Kahe Sambhal Zara Khushi Ko
Na Nazar Laga
Ke Daar Hai Mein To Ro Doonga
O Karti Hoon Sau Vaade Tum Se
Baandhe Dil Ke Dhaage Tum Se
Yeh Tumhe Na Jaane Kya Hua
Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon
Khuda Jaane Mein Mitt Gaya
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai

Pratham aur Nandani ko kuch beetey lamhe aankhon ke saamne deekh rahey thhey...

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Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda
Sajde Mein Yun Hi Jhukta Hoon
Tum Pe Hi Aa Ke Rukhta Hoon
Kya Yeh Sab Ko Hota Hai
Hum Ko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se
Tum Se Hi Sab Baatein Ab Se
Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua

Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon
Khuda Jaane Mein Mitt Gaya
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai
Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda
Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda.

PRATHAM NANDANI KO KISS KARTA HAI...

[diipendu]

PRATHAM NANDANI KO KISS KARTA HAI...


Champu : http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/18219.jpg , Champu`s mom-dad : http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/18219.jpg

Papa : [ bahutt gusse se ] nandani !!!!!!!!!!!!!........

Nandani ke papa pratham ko dhakka dete hue nandani ko wahaan se khichh kar ley jaatey hue - Nandani peechey murr kar Pratham ko dekh rahi thi...

Pratham nandani ko dekh raha tha...

Champu`s dad : ( heart attack aajata hai ) http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/348595.gif

Minni : nandani ! yeh sab kya tha ???

Nandani chupp aur khoyi si thi. Oske mann mei abhi bhi woh sab saamne aarahey thhey. Kuch bhooli hui si yaadein saamne ana chahti thi magar kahin na kahin woh yaadein saamne nahi aaparhi thi...

Minni : nandu, ab tu tou gayii !... teri shaadi agle mahiney houne waali thi magar ab jo bhi hua tauji teri shaadi esi mahine mein kar denge... nandani, achha yehi hoga ke tu oos pratham ko bhool jaa.... :(

Nandani kya jawaab deti, kaise deti... woh tou abhi bhi pratham ke khaaylo se baahar aaney ki koshish mei hi lagi thi. Magar shayad koi purana rishta sa hai oska pratham se yeh baat ab nandani ko pata lagg raha tha...

Pratham building ke terrace par tha. Woh aur uppar charr gaya. Building 12 floors se bhi bahut zyada oonchi thi.

Pratham : koi rishta, koi purana rishta sa hai hum dono ke beech... jab maine osey chhua mujhe aisa laga ke main osey bahut pehle se janta hoon... kaun hai woh ? aakhir kya rishta hai mera oos se ?...

Pratham : kyun har waqt osi ka chehra saamne ata hai ? kyun oske khyaal se mann mein khushi si chha jaati hai ? kya aisa lagta hai... jaise.... ??? jaise ????

Pratham : mera oos se koi rishta... koi bahut purana rishta hai...

Tabhi pratham ko koi neechey utaar deta hai !

WOH SHAKS KOI AUR NAHI KARAN KA PURANA DOST GAUTAM THA !

Gautam : karan tum !...

Pratham : sorry, magar maine apko nahi pehchana...

Gautam : karan kaise baatein kar rahey ho... tum apne dost ko nahi pehchante ?... ek minute...( Gautam ko realize houta hai ke woh jisko dekh raha hai agar woh karan hi hai tou AAJ 20 SAAL BAAD BHI WOH WAHI ROOP MEI ? )

Gautam : nahi ! tum karan nahi ho saktey...

Pratham : aap kya keh rahey hain meri kuch samajh mei nahi araha hai... aap kiski baat kar rahey hain ? kaun hai yeh karan ?... { pratham ko yaad ata hai ke jab woh newyork se mumbai pahucha tha tab airport mei ek aurat ne osey karan ke naam se pukara tha. }

Pratham : aap please bataiye... kaun hai yeh karan aur eska mujhse kya rishta hai ?...

Gautam Pratham ke taraf gaurr se dekhta hai...

Gautam : [ mann mein sochte hue ] wahi aankhein, wahi chehra... na jaane kyun magar mera mann keh raha hai ke yeh karan hi hai !...

Gautam : nahi, main tumhe kuch nahi bataunga !...

Pratham : dekhiye, dekhiye please... mujhe yeh jaannna hai... har waqt, har pal mere mann mei yeh karan naam kyun gunjta hai ??? mujhe pata hai.. pata hai ke eska jawaab sirf aapke paas hai !....

Gautam : theek hai main tumhe karan ke baare mei sab bataunga... magar meri ek shart hai jo tum kabhi poora nahi kar sakte...

Pratham : kaisi shart ?

Gautam : jaan dena hoga tumhe !... dey sakoge apni jaan ??? kyunki main nahi chahta ke ees kahaani ko sunne ke baad koi teesra yeh kahaani jaaney...

[diipendu]

Pratham : manzoor hai !...

[ Udhar Nandani ]

Nandani ke aankhon ke saamne baar-baar woh tasveer saamne aaraha tha jisme woh dulhan bani thi. Nandani ko yeh sapna sa bahut achha lagg raha tha magar itne mein hi jab oske es sapne mei Pratham aya tab oski aankhein khool gaayi. Aankehin khulne par pata chala ke oski maa osey bula rahi thi.

Maa : nandani, aaj jo bhi hua... woh houna nahi chahiye tha.... magar meri ek baat samajh mei nahi ayi kya tu oos... oos ladke ko jaanti hai ?

Nandani : maa, mera yakeen karo.......... mera oos se koi rishta nahi hai...

Maa : tujhe par bharosa hai... tere papa ne tera aur champuram ka rishta agle mahine ke jagah... eesi mahine kar dia hai :(

Nandani yeh soon hayraan ho jaati hai...

Nandani : kya !..........................

[ Udhar Pratham ]

Gautam : yeh kahaani 20 saal pehle ki hai, mera dost karan jo hamesha apne khyaalon mei khoya rehta tha... bahut ziddi tha eseliye ek din oske dadaji ne osey yeh kaha ke agar osne 1 mahine ke andar shaadi nahi ki tou osey aagey chalkar kapoor`s ki property mei se 1% bhi nahi milega... karan ne turant ek faisla lia ke woh contract marriage karega ek aisi ladki se jo 1 saal ke baad ees pati-patni ke jhoothe rishtey se osey khud bhi azaad kar degi aur esi tarah karan ko oski property mill jayegi...

Gautam : shayad kismat mei oske liye wahi ladki likhi thi jo aagey chalkar oske har problems mei oska saath deti... Gauri... gauri naam tha oska... gauri ne yeh contract marriage ke liye haan ek shart par kaha tha ke agar oska ghar neelam houne karan rouk dey tou woh gauri oos contract marriage karegi...

Gautam : hua bhi yehi !... magar dono yeh nahi jaante thhey ke onki kismat... saath juddi hai... waqt beetta gaya aur dono mein dosti aur dosti ka naya rang pyaar ne kab ley lia yeh dono ko bhi pata na chala... magar ab kismat palti aur aise palti ki dono ke zindagi badalne waali thi ees ek shaks ke aaney se... oos ek shaks ke aaney se karan aur gauri ki zindagi poori tarah badalne waali thi...

[diipendu]

Gautam : hua bhi yehi !... magar dono yeh nahi jaante thhey ke onki kismat... saath juddi hai... waqt beetta gaya aur dono mein dosti aur dosti ka naya rang pyaar ne kab ley lia yeh dono ko bhi pata na chala... magar ab kismat palti aur aise palti ki dono ke zindagi badalne waali thi ees ek shaks ke aaney se... oos ek shaks ke aaney se karan aur gauri ki zindagi poori tarah badalne waali thi...

Gautam : dono ki zindagi mei ek naye kirdaar ne dastak di aur woh thi "Shilpa didi" karan ki badii behen. Rishet se didi thhi magar dil mei jo nafrat thi woh bhi oske liye jo oos se pyaar karta tha... oska apna bhai... Waqt beet-ta gaya.. aur esi tarah 1 saal khatam houne ko aya aur dono ka yeh dikhave ka rishta khatam houne ko aya magar yeh kya ! karan aur gauri ko ab yeh ehsaas houne laga tha ke woh dono tou ek duje se pyaar karne lagey hain... dono ne yeh ekdusre se aakhir zahir kar diya aur sab kuch thik hou jata... hou jata agar... agar Rakhi waale din shilpa ne apna asli roop na dikhaya houta...............

Pratham : asli roop ??? aagey kya hua ?...

[ udhar Nandani ]

Nandani route hue apne kamre mei chali jaati hai...

Kamrey mei Nandani ka dupatta ek pin se attuck jata hai... nandani ke aankhon ke saamne phir se woh pal aatey hain jab woh karan se ruthh kar jaa rahi thi aur uska duppatta atuck gayaa tha aur osne socha ke uska dupatta karan ne peechey se pakra hua hai... woh karan ko dupatta chorrne ko kehti hai magar karan hai ke sunta hi nahi aur karan wahaan se aagey baddh jata hai... nandani peechey murr kar dekhti hai tou uska dupatta ek pin se atka hua tha same waise hi jaise gauri ne peechey murr kar jab dekha tou uska dupatta ek pin se atak gaya tha...

[diipendu]

[ Udhar Pratham ]

Gautam : Rakhi ka din tha... Shilpa ne karan aur gauri ko mandir ke peehey wale jagah par bulaya tha.. Karan ka shilpa par bahut vishwaas tha... Karan aur gauri mandir ke peechey waale jagah par shilpa ke bataye tarike se pahuch gaaye... Karan ne shilpa se rakhi bandhvaya... Karan bahut khush tha... magar osey kya pata tha ke peehchey se osi ki behen osko maarne ki poori tyaari karke aayi thi... jis thaali mei rakhi rakha tha osi thaali mei osne pistol bhi rakha tha aur TABHI usne karan par peechey se goli mara !.......


BAS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Pratham dheere se bolta hai...

Pratham : yeh sab kya hi raha hai.... maine kyun aise react kia ? mujhe yeh kahaani jaani-pehchani si lag rahi hai... magar ees kahaani mei kuch aur bhi tha jo missing hai...

[ gautam ki awaaz mei aise jaan aagayi jaise osey jeenye ke liye saasein mill gayii ho ]

Gautam : mujhe pata tha !....

Gautam : mujhe pata tha, tum hi karan ho !... magar tum es tarah ?..

Pratham : nahi ! main karan nahi hoon... yeh sab jhooth hai yeh aapki galat-fehmi hai...

Pratham wahaan se chala jata hai...

Gautam : aaj tum yakeen karo na karo... magar kal tumhe yeh realise zaroor hoga... tumhe yeh zaroor pata chalega ke tum hi.... tum hi karan ho ! yeh mera dil kehta hai... aur waise mei bhi, oos shilpa ka karz bhi chukana hai... osey apne karam o ke jawaab dene hain...

Gautam : gudluck shilpa ! ithihaas khud ko phir se dohraane wala hai...

[diipendu]

[ Udhar Nandani ]

Nandani : main hamesha oos pratham ko apne sapno mei kyun dekhti hoon ?... akhir mera oos se kya rishta hai ?... kahin mujhe ? oos pratham se pyaar ?................

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Nandani`s theme :
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Do, Pal Ruka, Khwaabon Ka Kaarvaan
Aur Phir, Chal Diye, Tum Kahaan, Ham Kahaan
Do Pal Ki Thi, Ye Dilon Ki Daastaan
Aur Phir, Chal Diye, Tum Kahaan, Ham Kahaan
Aur Phir Chal Diye, Tum Kahaan, Ham Kahaan
Tum The Ke Thi Koyi Ujli Kiran
Tum The Ya Koyi Kali Muskaayi Thi
Tum The Ya Tha Sapnon Ka Tha Saawan
Tum The Ke Khushiyon Ki Ghata Chhaayi Thi
Tum The Ke Tha Koyi Phool Khila
Tum The Ya Mila Tha Mujhe Naya Jahaan
Do Pal Ruka Khwaabon Ka Kaarvaan
Aur Phir Chal Diye Tum Kahaan Ham Kahaan
Do Pal Ki Thi, Ye Dilon Ki Daastaan
Aur Phir Chal Diye, Tum Kahaan, Ham Kahaan
Aur Phir Chal Diye, Tum Kahaan, Ham Kahaan

Aa... Aa... Aa...

Tum The Aa Khushboo Hawaaon Mein Thi
Tum The Ya Rang Saari Dishaaon Mein The
Tum The Ya Roshni Raahon Mein Thi
Tum The Ya Geet Goonje Fizaaon Mein The
Tum The Mile Ya Mili Thi Manzilein
Tum The Ke Tha Jaadoo Bhara Koyi Sama
Do Pal Ruka, Khwaabon Ka Kaarvaan
Aur Phir Chal Diye, Tum Kahaan, Ham Kahaan
Do Pal Ki Thi, Ye Dilon Ki Daastaan

Aur Phir Chal Diye, Tum Kahaan, Ham Kahaan
Aur Phir Chal Diye, Tum Kahaan, Ham Kahaan
Aur Phir Chal Diye, Tum Kahaan, Ham Kahaan
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[ Mini daudte hue nandani ke kamre mei aati hai. ]

Mini : arre nandani tu yehaan hai ! wahaan oos champuraaaaam ne meraa aadha sarr khaa lia hai... kab se tere baare mei pooch raha hai... tu sunn rahi hai na main kya keh rahi hoon ???....

Mini nandani ko notice karti hai. Nandani ke aankhon mei aasu thhey.

Mini : nandu, kya hua ? tu rou kyu rahi hai ?... dekh, main jaanti hoon ke papa ne yeh bahut galat kia magar abhi kuch kia bhi tou nahi jaa sakta... :( haan magar ek idea hai !

Nandani : idea ?.....

Mini : haan ! agar tu papa se yeh keh dey ke tu bhi pratham se pyaar karti hai... tou papa teri shaadi jaan-bhujkar zabardasti oos champuraaaaaaaaaaaam se nahi karvaenge....

Mini : bol kaisa laga mera idea !...

Nandani : awwww mini didi aap best ho !

Mini : heyyyy aaj tuney mujhe mini didi kaha ???? aur tuney mujhe AAP kaha ??? http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/18219.jpg

Nandani : sorry sorry main bhool gayii thi ke tu mini hai aur main nandani aurrrrr nandani jaisi ???

Mini : Koi nahi !.... :D

Nandani : :D

[diipendu]

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[crYstal_in_love]

Brilliant episodes !!! i seen karam in if & in KARAM GOT 980 RATINGS WID 5 starts EACH !!!!

awww i knew it ! this story gonna hit http://forum.indya.com/images/icons/icon14.gif

:)

hey karam is going 2 off air dis week na ??? after 9 months karam is getting over :(

9 months se yeh E-Serial ne bahutt achhe comments paaye hain widout any critics... iam quite sad but also happy dat karam is now hit E-Serial !

[diipendu]

Brilliant episodes !!! i seen karam in if & in KARAM GOT 980 RATINGS WID 5 starts EACH !!!!

awww i knew it ! this story gonna hit http://forum.indya.com/images/icons/icon14.gif

:)

hey karam is going 2 off air dis week na ??? after 9 months karam is getting over :(

9 months se yeh E-Serial ne bahutt achhe comments paaye hain widout any critics... iam quite sad but also happy dat karam is now hit E-Serial !

yea i agree wid ur words ! :) karam is all set 2 b off air dis week

do watch karam`s special episode (LAST EPISODE) on 17th oct. :)

[diipendu]

[ Pratham ke ghar par Gautam ka phone aata hai. Pratham phone recieve karta hai. ]

Gautam : dekho pratham, tumhe jo bhi apne sapno mein dikhai dete hain... ab tak tumhare saath jo bhi kuch hua hai oon sab ka rishta mumbai se hai...

Pratham : mumbai se ?... maine already aapse yeh keh dia hai... main na hi karan hoon aur na hi mera karan ki zindagi se koi rishta hai....

Gautam : thik hai, main maan leta hoon.... magar tum apne mann ko yeh baat kab tak dilasa dekar yunhi pareshaan rahoge ?... agar tumhara aaj tumhare ateet se judaa hai tou tumhe ek baar... sirf ek baar oos such ka pata lagana chahiye...

Pratham : magar mujhe mere sawaalon ka jawaab ?

Gautam : mumbai se milega... wahaan se jahaan... jahaan karan aur gauri ki zindagi khatam hui thi aur tumhari nayi zindagi ki shuruat...

Pratham : theek hai... main aaj hi mumbai ke liye nikal raha hoon...

[ Udhar Nandani ]

Nandani pratham ke baare mei soch rahi thi...

ACHAANAK !

[diipendu]

ACHAANAK !

Kuch awaaz hota hai... nandani jaakar dekhti hai tou pratham window se chupke se andarr ata hai...

Nandani bhaagkar pratham ke paas jaati hai...


Nandani : pratham ?... tum yehaan ?... ees tarah ?...

Pratham : nandani, woh main... mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni thi...

Nandani : tumne aaj jo kuch bhi kia... papa oos wajah se meri shaadi... meri shaadi esi mahine kar rahey hain...

pratham yeh soonkar hayraan hou jata hai...


Pratham : kya !...


Pratham : nandani, main tumse pyaar karta hoon...

Yeh soonkar nandani pratham ke taraf dekhti hai... nandani ko koi shabd nahi mill raha tha ke woh aise mein kya kahey... KYUNKI NANDANI BHI PRATHAM SE PYAAR KARNE LAGI THI. Anjaane mei hi sahi magar nandani ko aisa lagga ke oska pratham se bahut gehra aur koi purana rishta hai. Magar woh PYAAR hai...


Koi araha tha shaayad woh nandani ke papa thhey. Ees se pehle nandani ke papa pratham ko wahaan dekh lete Pratham Nandani ko ek Letter dekar wahaan se chala jata hai.

Nandani : yeh letter ???...

Nandani woh letter dekhti hai, usmei pratham ne likha tha ke osey ek zaroori kaam se aaj mumbai jaana padd raha hai eseliye woh mumbai se waapas aakar hi nandani ke papa se apne liye nandani ka haath maangega...


Nandani pratham ko yeh batana hi bhool gayii thi ke aaj teen din ho gayye hain aur eseliye aaj hi osey apne pariwaar ke saath waapas palampur jana hai.


Nandani : mujhe tumhara intezaar rahega pratham...

[diipendu]

[ Pratham Airport mei ]

Pratham ko aisa laga ke oske kaano mei kisi ne jaise keh dia ho "Mujhe tumhara intezaar rahega pratham..."

Pratham : mujhe pata hai, yeh tum hi ho gauri...


*_--`pratham yeh sochkar hayraan ho jata hai ke osne nandani ko gauri kyun kaha ?...'_-*


PRATHAM MUMBAI PAHUCH JATA HAI...

Gautam Pratham ko mumbai shivaji airport mein milta hai.

Gautam : chalo karan i mean pratham, aaj tumhe tumhare peechli zindagi se milne...

[ Gautam Pratham ko ek purane bunglow mei ley jaata hai jahaan bahut saalon se koi nahi aya tha. ]

Gautam : yeh raha kapoor`s mansion... yeh tumhara ghar tha..

Pratham wahaan har ek chiz ko bahut gehhrai se dekhe jaa raha tha.
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Pratham bahut khoya-khoya sa tha
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Pratham : ( khoye hue yaadon mei ) main yehaan pehle bhi aachuka hoon...

[diipendu]

[ Pratham upar bhaagkar jaata hai. ]

" Yeh Room mere DADAJI ka hai !..."

[ Pratham room ke andar jaata hai. ]

" Yeh room mere dadaji ka hai... "

Gautam : yaad karo pratham, tumhe kuch tou yaad araha hoga...

Pratham : haan, mujhe yeh yaad araha hai ke yeh room mere dadaji ka tha... agar !... agar yeh room mere dadaji ka hai aur main ees ghar ko jaanta hoon tou... main yehan pehle kabhi kyun nahi aya ?...

Gautam Pratham ko Karan aur Gauri ke room mein ley jata hai...

Pratham room mein enter karta hai...

Room 20 saal pehle jaisa houta hai. Wahaan har chiz pehle jaisa apne jagah pe houta hai.

Pratham ki nazar KARAN aur GAURI KE SHAADI KI PHOTO FRAME PAR PADII.

Pratham yeh dekh kar hayraan hou jata hai ke uski aur nandani ki photo yehaan ?

Pratham : yeh tou nandani hai... nandani aur meri shaadi ki tasveer ?...

Gautam : Nandani ?... kaun nandani ?...

[ Pratham Gautam ko saari baat batata hai nandani ke baarey mein. ]

Gautam : eska matlab... karan aur gauri dono wapas agaye hain... karan, i mean pratham i think tumhe kisi se milna chahiye...

Pratham : kaun ?

Gautam : tum chalo mere saath...

Kapoor`s Mansion ke bahaar se Panditji guzar rahey thhey. Panditji ne Karan ko car mein beithte dekha aur woh hayraan ho gaye...

Panditji : eska matlab vidhi ka vidhan such ho raha hai... Karan agar wapas aya hai... tou.. tou eska matlab.. Gauri bhi wapaas aayi hai... yeh sab maa durga ka aashirwaad hai.. Joye maa durga !...

[ Udhar Nandani ]

Nandani ki family wapaas Palampur jaaney ko tyaar thi. Sab ghar se nikal hi rahey thhey ke tabhi pata chalta hai ke koi relative bahut bimaar hai eseliyeunhey abhi MUMBAI ke liye nikalna hoga...

[ yeh soon nandani ke papa bahut chinta mein padd gayye ke unka yeh relative sahi-salaamat ho. ]

Nandani ke papa decide karte hain ke woh Palampur ke jagah Mumbai jayenge...


Mini : nandani ! akhir bhagwaan ne teri sunn li... ab tu pratham se bhi mill payegi...


Chachi : kaun ? tumne abhi-abhi pratham ka naam lia ?..

Mini : nahi chachi, maine tou PARTH kaha... apko shayad pratham sunai diya hoga :D


Nandani : kaash hum mill paaye...

[diipendu]

[ Udhar Pratham ]

Gautam Pratham ko Hospital ley jata hai.

Pratham : hospital mein ?... apne mujhe yehaan ?...

Gautam : ek minute, tum sab samajh jaoge...

[ Gautam doctor se baat karke ek patient se milne ki permission ley leta hai. Gautam Pratham ko ward no.8 mein ley jata hai. ]

woh patient aur koi nahi KARAN KE DADAJI HOUTE HAIN.

Pratham dheere-dheere aagey badhta hai. Pratham ko kuch samajh mein nahi araha tha ke woh enhey kaise janta hai...

Praham ke aankhon se aasu girtey hain...

Pratham : dadaji...

ACHAANAK Dadaji ke haath movement karte hain...

Gautam : ( hayraan houte hue ) arre yeh kya ! dadaji ko hosh araha hai... main abhi doctor ko bulakar lata hoon...

Dadaji dheere se aankhein kholte hain...

Karan...

Dadaji karan ka naam letey hain...

Pratham : da...

es se pehle pratham kuch bolta Tabhi doctor akar checkup karte hain...

Doctor : oh my god, its a miracle !... 20 saalon ke baad inhey hosh aya hai... humne tou umeed hi chorr di thi...

Gautam : haan doctor, aaj waqai mein miracle hua hai... abhi tou aise aur bhi miracles hounge...

Nandani aur uski family Mumbai pahuch jaatey hain...
Nandani apna kadam pehli baar mumbai ke zameen mein rakhti hai...

ACHANAK Nandani ke saamne woh sab dikhai detey hain - Karan ka gauri se milna, Karan aur gauri ki shaadi, karan gauri ko galey lagate hue, Shilpa didi ka ghar mein aana, karan aur gauri ka woh divorce papers par sign karna, aur SHILPA DIDI KA KARAN aur GAURI PAR GOLI CHALANA

Nandani bahut darr jaati hai...

Mini : kya hua nandu ? tere sarr pe ye paseena kyun araha hai ?... kisi chiz se darr rahi hai ?...

Nandani : pata nahi mini... pata nahi...

[ Udhar Pratham ]

Dadaji pratham ke taraf lagatar dekhe jaa rahey thhey... Dadaji ke aankhon se aasu beh rahey thhey....... mahol bahut nazuk tha

Dadaji : karan... { dadaji pratham ko galey lagate hue }

Dadaji : kahaan tha tu, tu nahi tha tou aise lag raha tha jaise... zindagi hi ruthh gayii thi...

Pratham : dadaji...

[ Gautam dadaji ko saari baat batatey hain. ]

TABHI wahaan Panditji aatey hain...

[diipendu]

Gautam : panditji...

Gautam : [ khush houte hue ] achha hua panditji aap aagaye... dekhiye panditji... dekhiye... karan wapaas gaya hai...

Panditji : haan, maine dekha... maa durga ke saamne 20 saal pehle do pyaar karne waale alag hou gaye thhey aur... aaj , dono...

Panditji : yeh kya ? gauri... gauri kahan hai ?...

Gautam : panditji, gauri ko ab sab nandani ke naam se jaante hain...

Panditji : main janta tha !... gauri aur pratham ka punarjanam hua hai... yehi likha hai kismat mein... jab gauri ke gharwaale yeh janenge unhe bahut khushi hougi... magar abhi...

Panditji : abhi humey ees baat ko raaz rakhna hai ke... karan aur gauri wapas lout aaye hain... kyunki abhi bhi woh loug humaare aas-paas hou sakte hain... jinke wajah se...

Gautam : haan panditji...

Gautam : pratham, chalo mere saath tumhe... ek aur jagah dekhna hai...

Panditji : haan gautam, mujhe poora bharosa hai ke woh jagah dekhne ke baad pratham ko sab kuch yaad aajayega...

Pratham : thik hai...

Gautam Pratham ko osi jagah leykar jata hai jahaan SHILPA NE KARAN-GAURI KO GOLI MARA DIA THA...

Pratham ko woh jagah dekh oske aankhon ke saamne woh nazara ajata hai jismei woh KHUD KO AUR NANDANI KO DEKH RAHA THA...


SCENE - Karan ka gauri se milna, gauri aur karan ka woh contract deal, karan aur gauri ki shaadi, karan aur gauri ke beech woh badhta pyaar, karan aur gauri ki zindagi mein SHILPA ka ana, Shilpa ka kapoor`s empire karan se dhoke se chhin lena, shilpa ka karan ko saamne woh apologise karna aur apne kiye par maafi mangna, karan ka shilpa ke liye woh bhai ka pyaar, RAKHI WAALEY DIN SHILPA KA KARAN AUR GAURI KO GOLI SE MAAR DENA...


PRATHAM KO AKHIR SAB KUCH YAAD AJATA HAI...


[ Pratham apne aankhein kholta hai tou saamne se ek gaari jaa rahi thi jisme NANDANI THI... ]

Pratham Nandani ko zorr se pukaarta hai magar nandani ko sunai nahi deta hai...

Gautam : kya hua ?...

Pratham : nandani ! maine nandani ko dekha chalo uska peecha karna hai...
Gautam : chalo...

[diipendu]

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[diipendu]

Pratham car drive kar raha tha.

Gautam : thank god karan, tumhe sab yaad agaya hai...

Pratham : haan gautam, ab jo bhi hoga... woh hokar hi rahega... lekin mujhe sabse pehle nandani se milna hai... MERI GAURI SE...

Pratham car ko full speed mein drive karta hai aur nandani ke car ka peecha karta hai...

Nandani ki car ek bunglow ke saamne aakar rukta hai... wahaan nandani ke relatives rehte hain jinhoune nandani ke family ko inform kia tha mumbai aaney ke liye. Nandani car se utarti hai...

Dooorr Pratham ki car khari thi.

Gautam : my god ! mujhe yakeen nahi araha hai... nandani hubahu gauri jaisi dikhti hai...

Pratham : kyunki yehi meri gauri hai... magar ees janam mein... Nandani...

Pratham : aur ab koi bhi mujhe aur gauri ko alag nahi kar sakta hai...

Gautam : magar pratham, tumhara agla kadam kya hoga ?...

Pratham car se utarta hai aur sabke nazro se bachhte hue Nandani se chupke se milne jata hai...

Pratham : nandani !...

Nandani : pratham, tum yehaan ?... kisi ne dekh lia tou... pratham tum
yehaan se chale jaao warna papa ko pata chal gaya... tou humey kabhi milne nahi denge...

TABHI WAHAAN Mini ajati hai aur nandani ke room mein pratham ko dekh leti hai...

Mini : prathamji aap !... http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/18219.jpg

Mini room ka darwaaza aur khirki band kar deti hai

Pratham : nandani, tumhe mere saath abhi chalna hoga... tumhara chalna bahut zaroori hai...

Nandani : ( darrtey hue ) pratham, agar papa ko pata chal gaya... nahi pratham...

Mini : nandu, tu jaa main yehaan sab sambhaal lungi... ;)

Nandani : thik hai pratham, chalo...

Pratham Nandani ko oosi jagah par lata hai jahaan par 20 saal pehle Shilpa ne karan aur gauri ko goli mara dia tha.

Nandani : pratham, tum mujhe yehaan aisa kya dikhane laaye ho ?...

Pratham : yaad karo nandani, ees jagah ko achhey se dekho aur yaad karo...

Nandani oos jagah ko achhey se dekhe jaa rahi thi... nandani oos khaai ke paas bhi gayii... ACHAANAK Paas mein ek mandir mein mandir ki ghantiyaan bajne lagi...

Woh temple bells zorr-zorr se bajj rahey thhey... aur ACHAANAK bahut tez hawaa chalne lagii...

Pratham : yaad karo nandani, yaad karne ki koshish karo...

NANDANI KO PHIR SE WAHI SAB VISIONS AATEY HAIN JO OSNEY STATION PAR DEKHA THA. Magar ees baar woh saare visions clear hou jaatey hain... Nandani Pratham ko Karan ke roop mein aur khud ko Gauri ke roop mein dekh rahi thii...

SHILPA KARAN AUR OOSEY GOLI MAARTI HAI...

KARAN !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

Woh tez hawa bandd hou jaati hai. Temple bells bhi awaaz karna bandd kar dete hain...

Nandani apne aankhein kholti hai aur saamne apne Karan (Pratham) ko paati hai...

NANDANI DAURR KAR JAAKAR PRATHAM KE GALEY LAGG JAATI HAI...

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Nandani`s theme :
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Yeh jo sabke lakirey hain...
yeh tou ajab, paheli hain...
Likha hai jo bhi een lakeeron mein...
milta wahi hai, takdeeron mein...
Jo kho jaaye woh mitti hai........
Jo kho jaaye woh mitti hai,
jo mill jaaye woh souna..........
Yeh sab hai.... apna karam....
Yeh sab hai....... apnaa KARAM...

[diipendu]

Gautam : magar karan, i mean pratham... :)

Gautam : magar pratham, abhi humey aagey ke baarey mein sochna hoga... bhagwaan ne tum dono ko milaya hai sirf milne ke liye hi nahi... eska ek maksad bhi hai jo abhi baaki hai...

Nandani : maksad ?...

Pratham : haan gauri, maksad... jiske wajah se hum beechhar gayye thhey... jisne humey alag kar dia sirf apne swaarth ke liye... jisne humaare saath-saath sabko dhoka dia hai... usey apne karam-o ka jawaab dena hoga...

Nandani : haan pratham...

ACHAANAK NANDANI KA PAYR FISSAL JATA HAI AUR PEECHEY WOH POORA KHAI HAI...

Driver : mam, aagey traffic jam hai...

MYYYY FOOT !!!!!!!!!!!!....

Woh SHAKS aur koi nahi 20 Saal Baad waapas MUMBAI lout rahi "SHILPA" hai...

[ shilpa ko apne bete Aditya ka phone ata hai. ]

Shilpa : hello, beta adi... kaise ho ?... aur tumhari sis. ashka.. woh kahaan hai ?...

Aditya : ASH mom ! apko pata hai na ke osey agar koi ashka kahey tou osey bahut bura lagta hai...

Shilpa : bilkul apni mom pe gayii hai... yeh batao ke tumne mujhe phone kia.. hmm.. it means ke tumhe paison ki zaroorat hai am i right adi ?...

Aditya : yes mom, tou aap mujhe 40 lakhs dey rahi hain na ?...

Shilpa : i think mera adi ees se bhi zyada deserve karta hai... 40 lakhs nahi... 80 lakhs ley sakte ho... go and enjoy !.. :)

Aditya : thank you mom, u r world`s best mom !...

Shilpa : i know...

[ UDHAR Pratham aur Gauri ]

Pratham : pehle main tumhe kho chuka hoon... magar ees baar main tumhe kisi bhi haal mein nahi kho sakta...

[diipendu]

Pratham : pehle main tumhe kho chuka hoon... magar ees baar main tumhe kisi bhi haal mein nahi kho sakta...

Nandani : pratham, main hamesha tumhare saath hoon... zindagi aur maut dono mein... :)

[ Udhar Shilpa ek bunglow ke saamne aakar rukti hai. ]


Shilpa : Mr. & Mrs.Sen, aap apne family ke saath yehaan jab tak rehna chahey reh saktey hain...


SHILPA WAHIN AAGYI THI JAHAAN NANDANI AUR USKI FAMILY RUKI THI.


Papa : aapka bahut-bahut shukriya... thank you so much...

Shilpa : oh please mr. sen aap tou mujhe sharminda kar rahey hain... by the way aapne apne family se nahi milwaya...

Maa : aayiye... yeh rahi humari badii beti mini... aur...

Maa Nandani ko khoj rahi thi...

Maa : arre mini, nandani kahaan hai ?...

Mini : woh.........

Shilpa : koi baat nahi mrs. sen, kahin gayii hogi... baad mein mill lenge...:)

[diipendu]

Maa : [ mann mein sochtey hue ] yeh nandani kahaan jaa sakti hai ?...

Chachi chai lekar nandani ke room ke taraf se jaa rahi thi ke nandani ke room mein jaakar jhaank ke dekhti hai tou nandani wahaan nahi houti hai...

Chachi : aaye haaye ! yeh nandani kahaan chali gayi ?... woh bhi bina bataye ?... aag jal raha hai ghiya aur daal dena chahiye.... akhir oski chachi hoon...

[ Udhar Pratham aur Nandani ]

Pratham aur Nandani Dadaji se milne Hospital aatey hain...


Dadaji Gauri aur karan ko saamne pratham aur nandani ke roop mein dekh hayraan reh jaatey hain... Dadaji apne bahu gauri ko dekh bahut khush houte hain aur dono ko galey laga lete hain...


Gautam : dadaji, 20 saal pehle banglore ki jo factory aur baaki property thi woh sab aapne shilpa ke naam kar di thi... agar aaj banglore ki woh property houti tou hum aaj 20 saal pehle ka yeh case re-open karva saktey thhey aur case file karne ki zaroorat bhi nahi houti kyunki...

Dadaji : haan gautam beta, karan... 20 saal pehle jab shilpa ne tumhe dhoka dekar kapoor empire ko apne naam par kar lia tha... thik osi waqt ! shilpa apne advocate ke saath mere paas aayi thi... mujhe kaha ke main banglore waali property oske naam transfer kar du... kyunki woh yeh jaanti thi ke WILL mein yeh saaf-saaf likha hai ke -banglore waali property jiske naam hougi Kapoor`s ka saara empire oske naam par ho jayega..-

Dadaji : magar maa durga ke aashirwaad se maine shilpa ko apne baaton mein oljha kar oon papers se apne papers replace kar liye aur... banglore waali poori property tumhare naam kar diye...

Gautam : eska matlab kapoor`s ki poori property karan kapoor ke naam hai...

Gautam : pratham tumhe yeh claim karna hoga ke... ke tum hi karan kapoor ho...

Gautam : magar eske liye humey oon papers ki zaroorat hogi... dadaji woh papers kahan honge ?...

Dadaji : rakhi waaley din shilpa ne khud oon papers ko kahin rakh diye thhey... ab yeh tou kisi ko bhi nahi pata ke shilpa ne oon papers ko kahaan rakhey thhey...

ACHANAK Dadaji ko kuch yaad ata hai...

Dadaji : shilpa... shilpa ke karam ab oska vinaash banenge...

Nandani : magar kaise dadaji ?...

Dadaji : Jail mein, shilpa mujhse milne aayi thi... osne mujhe jail mein bataya ke OSI NE TUM DONO KO... GOLI MAR KE OOS KHAI MEIN DHAKKA DEY DIA THA...

Dadaji : maine woh saari baatein ek tape recorder mein record kar lia hai...

" SHILPA NE KARAN AUR GAURI KO GOLI MAARKE ONKO KHAI MEIN DHAKKA DIA YEH SAB EK TAPE MEIN RECORD HAI "

[ yeh soonkar gautam, pratham aur nandani bahut khush houte hain ke shilpa ko expose karne ka ab ek proof hai. ]

Pratham : magar dadaji, woh tape kahaan hai ?...

Dadaji : [ yaad karte hue ] woh tape... woh tape...

[diipendu]

Dadaji : woh tape oosi police station mein reh gaya tha... kyunki jab mujhe yeh pata chala ke mere poute karan aur bahu gauri ko shilpa ne behrehmi se mar dia hai.. mujhe heartattack aya tha....

Pratham : koi baat nahi dadaji...

Nandani : haan dadaji, aap par aur shilpa ne jin par zulm kiye hain ab oon saare karmo ka hisaab shilpa ko dena houga... bahut jald !...

[ Gautam aur Pratham jaakar oosi police station mein pata laagte hain magar wahaan se onhe pata chalta hai ke dadaji ko jab heart attack aya tha oske ek din baad shilpa yehaan ayi thi dadaji ka pata karne aur SHILPA KO POLICE STATION SE WOH TAPE MILL GAYA THA. ]


Yeh soon Pratham ko kuch samajh nahi araha tha kyunki woh tape hi sabse mazboot karri tha shilpa ko barbaad karne kaa.


[ Pratham aur Gautam waapas arahey thhey ke TABHI ONHOUNE SHILPA KO EK CAR MEIN DEKHA. ]


Pratham : shilpa didi...

Gautam : shilpa ? itney saalon baad ?... shilpa ko tou...

Pratham : nahi gautam... abhi sahi waqt nahi aya hai... hum shilpa didi... i mean... shilpa se apna badla lenge... bahut jald lenge !...

Pratham : bas humey yeh koshish karni hougi ke nandani aur main shilpa ke saamne na aaye... kahin osey yeh na pata na chal jaaye ke hum waapas aagaye hain...

Gautam : haan pratham...

[ Pratham aur Gautam hospital pahuchtey hain. ]

Doctor : Mr. pratham, aapko yeh jaankar bahut khushi hougi ke aapke dadaji ab bilkul thik hou chuke hain !...

Pratham : what !... dat's a great news... doctor, kya main aaj hi apne dadaji ko ghar lekar jaa sakta hoon ?...

Doctor : hmm thik hai... magar aapko enka achhe se dhyaan rakhna hoga... enki tabiyat mein kuch kharaabi hou turrant enhe checkup ke liye ley aayega...

Pratham : je doctor...

[ Pratham dadaji ko apne ghar lekar jata hai. ]

Dadaji : such karan, aaj itney saalon baad tum dono ko dekhkar... mujhe bahut achha lagg raha hai...

Pratham : magar dadaji, abhi humey shilpa ko oske kiye ka anjaam dena houga...

Nandani : haan pratham, tum sahi keh rahey ho... naa jaaney itney saalon mein osne kin-kin lougo ko dhoka dia hoga...

Gautam : aaj humney SHILPA ko dekha...
Dadaji : kya !...

[diipendu]

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Do watch Karam`s Last episode on 19TH OCT.

[diipendu]

Pratham : haan dadaji... woh yehin... mumbai mein hai...

Pratham : dadaji, maine ek plan banaya hai...

Dadaji : kaisa plan ?...

Pratham : main shilpa se milunga...

Nandani : magar pratham...

Pratham : nahi nandani, main janta hoon ke shilpa bahut khatarnak hai... magar abhi sirf wahii yeh jaanti hai ke woh tape recorder aur woh papers kahaan hounge...

Dadaji : thik hai beta, maa durga tumhare saath hai...

[ Pratham bahaar jaatey hue Nandani se kehta hue ]

Pratham : nandani, ho sakta hai ke ees plan ko sucessful karne ke liye galati se hi sahi... main tumhe udaas karu... magar mera saath phir bhi dogii na ?...

Nandani : zindagi bhar... :) hamesha...

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Shilpa : myyyyyyyyyyyy foooooot !!!!!... ek bhi kaam dhung se nahi kar sakte ho tou naukari kyu kar rahey ho :x JUST GET LOST !...

[ shilpa ko phone ata hai uski beti Ash ke friend "GOHAR" kaa ]

Gohar : hello aunty, oops ! sorry hello shilpa aa...(aa= aunty) :D how r u ?... maine apko batane ke liye phone kia tha ke Ash ne bahutt zidd kia ke owh ekbaar India ana chahti hai...

Shilpa : awwwwww Realllyyy ??? huh ! india mein hai hi kya aisa dekhne ka ?... by d way tum ash ko keh dena ke woh jaldi aaye oski mom osey bahut miss karti hai... and ya mere taraf se say hello 2 ur kitty...

Gohar : shilpa aa, meri kitty ab nahi rahi :(

Shilpa : ooooooo dats sooo sad !...

Gohar : ok shilpa aa bye !

Shilpa : buh byeeee....

Servant : mam, apse koi milna chahta hai...

Shilpa : who is dat idiot !

Servant : mam, koi.... karan kapoor hai... aapka bhai..

Shilpa : what !....

SHILPA Karan kapoor ke ees naam se OSKI AANKHON KE SAAMNE WAHI YAADEIN PHIR SE TAZA HO JAATI HAI JO USKE BURE KARAM THHEY.

SHILPA darr ke maarey oos servant ko zorr se ek FLOWER POT MAARTI HAI !...

[diipendu]

Shilpa apne cabin ke baahar jaakar dekhti hai tou wahaan koi nahi hota hai...

Receptionist : mam, aapke liye kisi ne yeh note chora hai...

[ shilpa woh note dekhti hai. ]


IAM BACK ! SHILPA DIDI...


Yeh dekh Shilpa ko Shock laggta hai

Shilpa : Karan waapas agaya hai ?...

Shilpa : { darrtey hue } nahi ! aisa nahi ho sakta... aisa kaise hou sakta hai ?...

[ UDHAR Airport mein ]

[ Shilpa ki Beti ASHKA(Ash) Austrailia se aayi hai. Achaanak oska bag chori ho jata hai. Ashka pareshaan hou jaati hai. ]


Kahin yeh apka bag tou nahi ?...


[ Pratham wahaan ashka ka bag osey loutata hai. ]

Ashka : thanks... ( ashka pratham se impress hou jaati hai. )

[ Ashka airport ke bahaar apne car ka intezaar kar rahi thi. Achaanak ek van ata hai aur ashka ko Kidnap karke wahaan se chala jata hai. ]

Ashka : i said leave me !

Ashka ne dhyaan se dekha tou woh koi aur nahi pratham tha jisney ashka ko kidnap kia tha.

Ashka : tum !

[ pratham car drive karte hue ]

Pratham : haan main !... mujhe pata chala ke Shilpa dhanraj ki beti Ashka
dhanraj aaj waapas aarahi hai...

Ashka : awww just shut-up !!!... kaun ho tum..

Pratham : pratham... pratham shergil...

Ashka : tum mere mom ko kaise jaante ho ?... aur tumne mujhe ees tarah !.. yun kidnap kyu kia tumhari himmat kaise hui...

Pratham : bahut ghamand hai na tumhe apne mom par... jo asliat ab tum sunogi... osey sunne ke baad tum apne mom se nafrat karogi...

Ashka : kya matlab ?...
[ Pratham Ashka ko lekar apne ghar pahuchta hai jahaan gauri, dadaji aur gautam hain. ]

[diipendu]

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Do watch Karam`s Last episode on 19TH OCT.

[diipendu]

Ashka : yeh tum mujhe kahaan laaye ho !...

Nandani : tumhe suchhai bataney ka ab yehi ek tarika tha...

[ Ashka ghar ke andar jaati hai. ]

Ashka : suchhai ?...

Nandani : haan ashka, tumhare mom ke suchai...

Nandani Ashka ko Shilpa ki saari suchhai batati hai.

Ashka : kya !... nahi, meri mom aisi nahi ho sakti... aur waise mein bhi... main tum lougon ki baaton ka yakeen kyun karu ?... kya saboot hai ?...

Pratham : saboot hai !

Pratham : haan ashka, tumhare mom ne saare saboot kahin chhupa diye hain... ab sirf tum hi humaari madad kar sakti ho oon proofs ko hum tak pahuchane mein...

Nandani : haan ashka, please kya tum hamaari madad karogi ?...

Ashka : Pehli baat, mujhe abhi bhi yakeen nahi araha hai ke... meri mom ! meri mom aisa kar sakti hai ??? yeh such hai yaa jhooth... esey pata lagaane ke liye main oon proofs ka pata lagaungi...

Nandani : thanks ashka...

[ Ashka wahaan se chali jaati hai. ]

Pratham : nahi nandani, mujhe nahi lagta hai ke ashka humaari madad karegi...

Nandani : magar yeh such hai ya jhooth... yeh sawaal oske mann mein abhi toofaan bann kar daud raha hai... aise mein woh wahi karegi jo osne abhi yehaan kaha hai... mujhe poora bharosa hai...

Pratham : aur mujhe tumhare bharose par bharosa hai...

[ UDHAR Newyork se itney dino baad Shivangi India arahi hai Pratham se milney aur oos se shaadi karney. ]

Mumbai, INDIA

[ Shivangi Mumbai airport mein pahuch jaati hai. ]


Shivangi : Pratham, IAM BACK !...

[diipendu]

[ Ashka Pratham ke ghar ke bahaar se jab jaa rahi thi tabhi osey Gohar mill jati hai. ]

Gohar : awwwww myyyyy goddd !!! ash tum http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/18219.jpg

Gohar : how r u Sweety ? pata hai maine tumhe bahut miss kia... but yeh batao ke tum airport se gayii kahaan ? pata hai shilpa-aa ne tumhare baare mein mujhse poocha and mere paas tou kehne ko kuch thaaa hi nahi...

[ shilpa ka naam soon kar ashka udaas hou jaati hai. ]

Gohar Pratham ko ghar ke bahar dekhti hai...

Gohar : woh cheater yehaan bhi !... :mad:

Ashka : tum pratham ko jaanti ho ?...

Gohar : ohh myy god ! http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/733699.gif dont tell me ke tumhe oska naam pata hai and woh tumhara dost hai ?...

[ Ashka Gohar ko saari baat batati hai. Gohar yeh soonkar serious hou jaati hai. ]

Gohar : kya ? it means ke oska aur shilpa-aa ka koi connection hai ?... sweety, agar tum unke saath ho den main bhi hoon...

Ashka : thanks go !... http://hitengauri.niceboard.com/users/52/31/63/smiles/36486.gif

[ ashka aur gohar shilpa ke ghar pahuchte hain. ]

Ashka shilpa se milne oske room mein jaa hi rahi thi ke tabhi osey shilpa ki awaaz sunai deti hai...

[ woh awaaz shilpa ki thi. Shilpa kisi se phone par baat kar rahi thi. ]

Shilpa : aaj mujhe ek note mila aur mujhe pata nahi ke main os note par yakeen karu ya nahi... karan waapas nahi asakta wajah tumhe bhi pata hai...

Shilpa : haan haan mujhe sab pata hai ke maine oon puraane saboot ko kahaan rakha hai... maine woh saare saboot apni beti ashka ke room mein jo book-shelf hai oske peechey rakha hai... wahaan saboot hai eska pata kisi ke dimag mein bhi nahi ayega...

Ashka : book-shelf ke peechey ?...

Shilpa : arre !... haan haan... aise kaise main woh saboot ko mita du ?... woh mere aagey chalkar bahut kaam aasakte hain... agar woh karan waapas 10 ya 1000 janam lekar bhi ajaye tou woh bhi oon saboot ko nahi dhoond payega.. kyunki woh book-shelf ke neechey ek password box hai jispar main apna secret password type karke oos darwaaze ko khol sakti hoon... aur aisa karna naa-mukin hai... woh password mere elava aur kisi ko nahi pata hai...

Shilpa : huh !... password kya hai yeh main tumhe bhi nahi bataungi... abhi main phone rakhti hoon ashka ke aaney ka waqt hou gaya hai...

[ Ashka wahaan se apne room mein chupke se chalii jaati hai. ]

Ashka : yeh mom karan naam ke shaks ka naam baar-baar kyun ley rahi thi ? karan ? kahi yeh wahi karan tou nahi jiska naam pratham aur nandani ne aaj mujhe wahaan bataya ?... hou na hou, onki baat such houni shuru hou chuki hai aur mom mujhse kuch chuppa rahi hai...

Ashka : mom book-shelf ki baat kar rahi thi...

[ ashka book-shelf ke paas jaati hai aur shilpa ke kehne ke mutabik book-shelf ke neechey oos password box ko khojti hai. ]

Ashka ko woh password box mill jata hai !

Ashka : yeh raha woh password box !... ab mujhe kaise bhi karke mom se woh password haasil karna hoga...

Ashka apne mom se milne unke room mein jaati hai magar wahaan koi nahi hota hai. Ashka ki nazar oos fish bowl mein padti hai jismein ek bahut pyaara sa goldfish hai.

Ashka : wow !... this goldfish is soo cute... hmm magar yeh kitna akru hai... eska naam aajse... hmm ??? haan ! Pratham... pratham hoga...

Ashka : magar ajeeb baat hai... mom ko tou fish pasand nahi hai... phir bhi onhoune apne room mein fish ?...

[ Ashka Gohar ke saath milkar Pratham ke ghar jaati hai. ]

Pratham : ashka, aao... tumhe kuch mila ?...

Nandani : ashka, tumhare saath yeh kaun hai ?...

Pratham : tum !...

[diipendu]

Nandani : ashka, tumhare saath yeh kaun hai ?...

Pratham : tum !...

Gohar : http://illiweb.com/fa/i/smiles/icon_rolleyes.gif now stop reacting like this !... ash meri bachhpan ki friend hai, eseliye main oska saath dey rahi hoon warna tumhara help karne mein mujhe koi shauk nahi...

Pratham : :mad:

Nandani : tum dono ek dusre ko jaantey ho ?

Gohar : bahut achhe se !...

Pratham : nandani tum eske baaton par dhyaan mat do...

Ashka : waise... main jab mom se milne jaa rahi thi tab { Ashka pratham ko saari baat batati hai. }

Ashka : magar mujhe koi khaas saboot nahi mila...

Nandani : achhe se yaad karo ashka... kuch aisa jo alag tha kuch ?... oos password box ka password sirf... tumhare mom ke room se pata chal sakta hai...

Ashka : haan ! ek chiz maine notice kia jo bahut alag tha...

Tabhi Nandani ko phone ata hai.


[ Nandani phone receive karti hai tou pata chalta hai ke phone mini ne kia tha. Ghar par sab nandani ke baare mein pooch rahey hain aur maa bahut gusse mein hai. ]

Nandani : thik hai mini, tu wahaan thoda deyr aur sambhal ley main abhi aarahi hoon...

[ nandani pratham ko kehti hai ke ab osey jana hoga woh late ho rahi hai. ]

Pratham : aaj hum beechhar ke phir miley hain... tum apna khyaal rakhna...

Nandani : :)

[ Pratham Nandani ko galey lagata hai aur uske sarr par kiss karta hue ]

Pratham : I love you...

Nandani : I love you too...

Pratham-Nandani : :)

[diipendu]

Nandani ghar pahucti hai.

Mini : nandani achha hua tu aagayi... yehaan maa ko pata chal gaya hai ke tu ghar par nahi hai aur upar se...

[ Chachi nandani ke maa aur papa ko nandani ke khilaaf bharkaate hue ]

Chachi : ab aap hi sochiye ! ghar se baahar aur woh bhi mumbai jaise itney badey jagah mein...

Nandani wahaan ajati hai.

Chachi : lo ! aagayi... aao aao nandani... abhi hum tumhare baare mein hi baat kar rahey thhey...

Maa : [ gusse se ] nandani, kahaan gayii thi tum ?... yehaan ghar par kisi ko bina bataye kahaan chaley gayii thi tum ?...

Nandani : maa woh pratham...

Papa : Pratham ???

[ Udhar Shivangi Pratham ke ghar pahuchti hai. ]

Pratham shivangi ko dekh shock hou jata hai.

Pratham : Shivangi tum ?...

[ Udhar Nandani ]

Papa : yeh pratham mumbai mein hai ?... { bahut gusse se } kahin tum
pratham se milne tou nahi gayii thi !...

Mini : Parth !... nandani ke kehne ka matlab tha parth... :D

Papa : parth ?... kaun hai yeh parth ?...

Mini : woh, haaaaaaannnnnnnn !... woh college mein humaare saath padta tha... osne humey bahut help kia padhai mein... haan :D

Papa : hmmm thik hai thik hai !...

Maa : ahinda agar kabhi bahaar jaao tou kisi ko batakar jana...

Nandani wahaan se chaley jaati hai... Nandani bahut chup si thi...

[ Udhar pratham se milney aayi shivangi oske ghar par. ]

Shivangi Pratham ko hugh karti hai.

Shivangi : kahaan thhey tum !... no phone no contact ??? maine tumhe bahut miss kia... ab jab main yehaan aagayi hoon... main soch rahi thi ke kyun na hum India mein hi shaadi kar ley ?...

Shivangi : pratham ??? pratham, tum meri baat sunn rahey ho ?...

Pratham : haan shivangi kaho... { Pratham shivangi ke baaton ko sunn pareshaan hou jata hai. }

Pratham : [ mann mein sochte hue ] ab main shivangi ko kaise samjhaoon ?... agar maine osey abhi kuch bhi bataya tou... shayad uska dil toot jaaye... nahi, main aisa nahi kar sakta... waqt aaney par main shivangi ko sab bata dunga...

Tabhi Ghar ke andar se wahaan Gohar aur Ashka bahaar aatey hain pratham ko dhundtey hue...

Gohar : [ suprise houte hue ] pratham, yeh kaun hai ?...

Pratham : [ pareshaan houte hue ] woh...

Shivangi : Pratham, who is she ?...

Pratham poorey tarah se pareshaan hou jata hai...

[ Udhar Nandani ]

Nandani : mini, mujhe phir se jana hoga... mera wahaan jana bahut zaroori hai... please meri madad kar ?...

Mini : thik hai, main kuch karti hoon ;) :)

[ Mini Nandani ke papa aur maa ko jaakar kehti hai ke nandani ko kuch zaroori saaman lena hai eseliye woh 1 ya 2 ghantey ghar waapas ajayegi. Maa aur Papa pehle mana kar dete hain magar phir permission dey dete hain magar ek shart par ke nandani 1 ghantey mein ghar waapas ajaye. ]

[ Udhar Pratham ]

Shivangi : jawaab do pratham !... who is she ???

Tabhi wahaan Nandani aati hai.

Pratham : nandani ?...

[diipendu]

Shivangi : nandani ?... tum esey jaantey ho ? tumhe eska naam bhi pata hai ?...

Nandani : pratham, yeh kaun hai ?...

Pratham nandani ko shivangi ke baare mein batata hai aur Shivangi ko apne aur Nandani ke baarey mein sab batata hai.

Gohar : it means ke tum shivangi se apne buisness ke profit ke liye shaadi karne jaa rahey thhey ?... veryy bad mr.pratham shergil !...

Pratham : kya maine tumse kuch pucha ?...

Gohar : http://illiweb.com/fa/i/smiles/icon_silent.png


[ Pratham Shivangi ko dadaji se milata hai. Pratham Shivangi ko apne aur nandani ke baare batata hai aur Shivangi ko yeh bhi batata hai ke osney shivangi se jo shaadi karne ke vaadey kiye thhey tab woh selfish hou gaya tha magar ab osey yeh realise hou gaya hai ke suchha pyaar kya houta hai. Nandani ko yeh soonkar bahut achha lagta hai ke pratham ne aaj bhi such ka saath dia. ]

Shivangi : nahi pratham !...

Shivangi : main tumhe itni asaani se jaane nahi dungi ! kyunki... main bhi tum sabka saath dungi... ees mission mein... :)

Sabko yeh dekh achha lagta hai.

Pratham : thank you soo much shivangi !...

Nandani : haan shivangi, tumne pratham ko maaf karke yeh saabit kia hai... ke tumhara dil bahut achha hai :) thanks...

Shivangi : :)

Pratham : ab humey aagye ka plan ke baare mein sochna hoga...

Gautam : magar plan kya hoga ?...

Nandani : ees se pehle koi aur naya plan hum banaye... achha hoga ke ashka tum yeh bataao ke tumne shilpa ke room mein aisa kuch alag chiz dekha hai ?... kuch aisa jo bahut ajeeb tha ?...

Ashka : haan !... maine mom ke room mein goldfish dekhi... aur sabse hayraani waali baat yeh hai ke

Pratham : Shilpa ko fishes pasand nahi !...

Ashka : haan, but tumhe ?... { ashka ko realise hou jata hai ke nandani aur pratham ne osey jo bhi bataya woh sab such tha } iam sorry pratham... magar mujhe abhi bhi yeh yakeen nahi araha hai ke meri mom aisa kuch bhi...

[ tabhi ashka ko ek sms milta hai. ]


Ashka woh sms check karti hai tou likha houta hai ke 20 saal pehle Aditya aur Shilpa ko adopt kia gaya tha. Shilpa onki asli mom nahi hai...


Yeh soonkar Ashka toot jaati hai...

Woh SMS koi aur nahi Aditya ne bheja tha.

Ashka : adii ???...

Pratham : kya hua ashka ?...

[ ashka pratham aur baaki sabko woh sms dekhati hai. ]

[ gohar ashka se dheere se kehti hai. ]

Gohar : Iam sorry ash, woh actually maine adii ko shilpa-aa ke baarey mein sab such-such bataya aur woh tab tak India bhi aachuka tha magar osne mujhse kaha ke main tumhe yeh na batau because woh tumhe suprise dena chahta tha... magar osney yeh sab...

Ashka : kya !...

Aditya wahaan ata hai.

Aditya : ashka...

Ashka : adii... tum yehaan ?...

[diipendu]

Aditya : haan ashka, mr. pratham, woh password jisko lekar aap sab itney pareshan hain... woh password, goldfish tha... maine yeh kuch saal pehle khud shilpa mom se suna tha... woh baar-baar kisi ko phone par password goldfish keh rahi thi...

Nandani : pratham eska matlab ke woh password goldfish hai...

Pratham : magar hum tumhara yakeen kyun karey ?... kya saboot hai ke tum humey dhoka nahi dogey ?...

Aditya : jisney khud humey dhoke mein rakha ho... jo khud dhoka khaaye ho wo kisi aur ko kya dhoka denge... haan ashka... main aaj hi louta hoon aur maine jab mom se baat karne chahi tab maine dekha ke table par ek note dekha jispar likha tha ke 20 saal pehle ek orphange se do bachho ko adopt kia gaya tha... aur woh koi aur nahi... hum thhey...

Ashka ko jab yeh pata chalta hai tou oska apni mom ke taraf se sara vishwaas khatam hou jata hai.

Nandani : tum dono shilpa ke wajah se khud udaas mat ho... woh tou hai hi aisi... sabka vishwaas toudna aur lougon ko dhoka dena uski fitrat hai...

Pratham : magar oos plan ke liye ek party ka houne aur woh party khaaskar shilpa ke ghar hona bahut zaroori hai... warna...

Ashka : haan !... aaj shaam mom ne Aditya ke aanye ke khushi mein ek party throw kia hai... shey-her ke bahut badey logon ko invite kia hai...

Pratham : tou thik hai, ab humara agla plan yeh hoga ke... { Pratham sabko apne agle plan ke baare mein batata hai. }

Pratham : maine tum sabko plan samjha dia hai... magar shivangi, are you sure ke tum yeh kar paogi ?...

Shivangi : mujhpar bharosa rakho... :)


Shilpa`s Grand Party

[ Shilpa ke yehaan bahut badii party hoti hai jahaan bahut badey loug aaye hain. Shilpa sabka swaagat kar rahi thi. ]


ACHAANAK Lights-off hou jaate hain. Sab loug pareshaan hou jaate hain.

[diipendu]

Shilpa`s Grand Party

[ Shilpa ke yehaan bahut badii party hoti hai jahaan bahut badey loug aaye hain. Shilpa sabka swaagat kar rahi thi. ]


ACHAANAK Lights-off hou jaate hain. Sab loug pareshaan hou jaate hain.

Shilpa ko party decorators par bahut gussa ata hai. Tabhi achaanak ek music shuru houta hai... ---

Shaam Hai Jaam Hai Aur Hai Nasha
Tan Bhi Hai Mann Bhi Hai Pighla Huaan

Guests Shilpa ka yeh anokha presentation dekh kar impress hou jaate hain aur shilpa ki taarif karte hain. Shilpa ko kuch samajh nahi araha tha kyunki yeh oske party mein plan nahi tha. Phir bhi jo guests ko pasand araha hai woh chup rehna hi zyada behtar samajhti hai.

Chhayi Hai Ranginiya Phir Bhi Hai Betaabiyan
Kyun Dhadakta Hai Dil
Kyun Yeh Kehta Hai Dil
Yeh item Shivangi kar rahi thi. Yeh item song par dance pratham ke plan ka ek hissa hai.
Deewanon Ko Ab Tak Nahi Hai Yeh Pata
Aaj Ki Raat Khona Hai Kya Paana Hai Kya
Khona Hai Kya
Aaj Ki Raat Khona Hai Kya Paana Hai Kya
Khona Hai Kya...


Achaanak Shilpa ko dekh koi curtain ke peechey chhup raha tha. Shilpa ne achhe se dekha tou osey KARAN ka chehra nazar aya... Shilpa darr gayii...


Do Ghadi Mein Yahaan Jaane Kya Ho Gaya
Jo Hamesha Tha Mera Dil Mera Ho Gaya
Kaun Kiske Dil Mein Hai Faisala Hoga
Faisala Hai Yahi Jeet Hogi Meri
Deewaanon Ab Tak Nahi Hai Yeh Pata
Aaj Ki Raat Khona Hai Kya Paana Hai Kya
Khona Hai Kya...

[ Udhar Gohar aur Nandani milkar Woh secret darwaza khol lete hain. Nandani wahaan oon papers ko dekhti hai. ]

Nandani : [ khush houte hue ] yeh rahe woh papers...

Aaj Ki Raat Khona Hai Kya Paana Hai Kya
Khona Hai Kya...



Shilpa ke saamne ek plate rakhi jaati hai jismein ek taraf Rakhi aur dusre taraf ek Pistol thi. Shilpa yeh dekh darr jaati hai aur uske saamne 20 saal pehle rakhi waala woh din yaad ata hai.



Darr ke maarey shilpa ko paseena aaney lagta hai...

Aaon Main Tumse Kahu Baat Chupke Se


Shivangi woh gana gaatey hue Shilpa ka paseena pouchti hai...


Rang Badlegi Pal Mein Raat Chupke Se


Shilpa woh kapraa jis se woh paseena pouch rahi thi osmei khoon laga tha. Shilpa khoon ko dekh darr jaati hai.


Deewaanon Ab Tak Nahi Hai Yeh Pata
Aaj Ki Raat Khona Hai Kya Paana Hai Kya
Khona Hai Kya
Aaj Ki Raat Khona Hai Kya Paana Hai Kya
Khona Hai Kya...


BAND KARO !!!!!!!!!!!!

Shilpa zorr se chilla uthti hai...

[diipendu]

[ Pratham, Gohar, Shivangi aur Nandani wahaan se woh tape aur papers lekar chaley jaatey hain. ]


Dadaji : [ khush houte hue ] tum lougo ne bahut achha kaam kar dikhaya hai... yeh kaam namukin tha...

Nandani : haan dadaji, magar shivangi, gohar, ashka sabke support se aaj humney shilpa ke khilaaf proof haasil ho gayye hain...

Pratham : magar shilpa abhi pehle se zyada aur khatarnaak hou gayii hai... eseliye humey apne kadam soch-samajhkar rakhne honge...

Nandani : haan pratham... pratham, main ab chalti hoon... ghar par mera sab intezar kar rahey honge...

Pratham : chalo main tumhe chorr deta hoon...

[ Shivangi Pratham ko Nandani ke liye yeh care dekh udaas si hou jaati hai. ]

[ Pratham Nandani ko ghar drop kar deta hai. ]

Nandani ka ring neechey zameen par kahin kho jata hai.

Nandani kuch khojti hai...

Pratham : kya hua Nandani kya kuch girr gaya ???

Nandani : dekho na pratham mera lagta hai mera ring neechey girr gaya...

[ Pratham aur Nandani neechey ring ko khojne ke liye jhukte hain ke aapas mein unka sarr takra jata hai. ]

Nandani : tum bilkul pehle jaise hi rahey !... hamesha humari takkar ho jati hai...

Pratham Nandani ko bolte dekh oos dekhta rehta hai...

Shilpa Pratham aur Nandani ko Saath dekh poori tarah hayraan reh jaati hai.

Shilpa : aisa kaise hou sakta hai ?... maine jinko apne raaste se 20 saal pehle hata dia tha... woh aaj mere saamne dobara aakar khare hou gayye hain ???...

Shilpa : aww ! ab mere samajh mein araha hai... aaj part mein maine jisko dekha tha woh yehi tha... magar yeh karan aur gauri nahi ho sakte... nahi !

Shilpa : agar een dono ke wajah se mujhpar koi musibat aayi..... tou main kal ka din Kayaamat ka din banakar rakh dungi !...

[ Pratham ghar pahuchta hai. Dadaji aur gautam pratham ko gudnews dete hain. ]

Gautam : pratham ek bahut badii goodnews hai !... Kapoor`s ki poori property kal tak tumhare naam yaane Karan Kapoor ke naam transfer hou jayegi... bas tumhe jaakar claim karna houga phir uske baad tumhe tumhari property mill jayegi...

Dadaji : haan beta... barso se yeh property galat haathon mein thhey... ab kal ka din bahut badaa din hoga...

Pratham : yeh sab aapka ashirwaad hai dadaji...

[diipendu]

Agle din...

Nandani tyaar hou rahi thi.

Mini : arre wah nandani, tu tou aaj bahut achii lag rahi hai... kahin jaa rahi hai ?...

Nandani : haan mini, aur mujhe aaj bhi...

Mini : pata hai pata hai... tu jaa main sab sambhal lungi ;)

[ room ke bahaar se chachi ne saari baatein soon li. ]

Chachi : hmmm main tou pehle se hi jaanti thi ke ye dono behene mill kar mere khilaaf koi saajhish kar rahi hain... magar main bhi tez hoon ! main bhai-saahab aur bhabhi ko unki ladli beti nandani ke baare mein sab batungi... haan !


Nandani ghar se bahaar thode doorr gayii hi thi ke tabhi kuch loug aate hain aur Nandani ko Kidnap karke ley jaate hain.


Pratham ko phone ata hai ke agar woh apni Nandani ko sahi-salaamat dekhna chahta hai tou woh Durga maa ke mandir ke peechey waale khai ke taraf jo jagah hai wahaan aakar miley.

Pratham Durga maa ke mandir ke peechey waale khai ke paas jo jagah hoti hai wahaan pahuch jata hai. Pratham wahaan aakar dekhta hai tou kidnappers ne Nandani ko baandh rakha tha.


WOH JAGAH JAHAAN NANDANI AUR PRATHAM THHEY WOH WAHI JAGAH THI JAHAAN 20 SAAL PEHLE SHILPA NE KARAN AUR GAURI PAR GOLI CHALAKAR ONHEY MAAR DIA THA.


Pratham : yeh tou wahi jagah jahaan shilpa...

HAAN PRATHAM... YA PHIR... KARAN ?...

Pratham aur Nandani Shilpa ko dekh hayraan hou jaate hain.

Shilpa : haan, mujhe pata chal chuka hai...

Mausam achanak biggarne lagta hai aur zorr ka toofaan shuru hou jata hai...

Shilpa : dekha karan, aaj mausam bhi mere saath hai aur waqt bhi aur ab haalat bhi !...

[ shilpa ka yeh roop dekh nandani aur pratham ke ummedey tootne se lagne lagte hain. ]

Durga maa ke mandir mein-

Panditji : yeh mausam... itna toofaan aur woh bhi achaanak ?.... { panditji ko kuch yaad ata hai. }

Panditji : 20 saal pehle bhi mausam thik aise hi tha jab kuch annarth hua tha... tou kya eska matlab ?... eska matlab aaj bhi waqt khud ko dohra raha hai ?... kya woh annarth phir se hoga ?... mujhe pratham aur nandani se abhi milna hoga !...

Pratham : nahi shilpa !... 20 saal pehle tumne apno ko dhoka dia tha... aaj tum phir se dhoke se nahi jeet sakti !...

Shilpa : dekhenge mere pyaare bhai karan... jab tumhari pyaari gauri ko main eesi khaai mein dhakka dungi jaise... 20 saal pehle dia tha... tab na hi tum zinda rahoge aur na hi tumhari yeh akkar... kyunki jab gauri hi nahi rahegi tou karan ki saasein bhi apne-aap uska saath chorr dengi ?...

Shilpa : chorr do oos ladki ko !...

Pratham Nandani ko galey lagata hai...

Shilpa : lagg lo galey jitna lagna hai kyunki aaj itihaas khud ko phir dohraega... waqt phir shilpa se haarega... aur 20 saal pehle esi jagah tum dono ko martey hue tumhare maa durga ne tumhe dekha aaj bhi dekhegi...


SHILPA PISTOL UTHATI HAI.

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[ Theek 20 saal pehle jaisa maahol hai jahaan khai ke paas Nandani aur Pratham khare thhey wahin Shilpa ke haath mein wahi pistol thi jis se osney apne bhai karan par aur gauri par goli chalai thi. ]


Shilpa bahut zorr-zorr se hastii hai apne ees jeet par.


Shilpa : dekho karan dekho ! aaj tumhari shilpa didi phir se tum par aur tumhari gauri par thik osi tarah aur thik osi pistol se goli chalane jaa rahi hai jaise osne 20 saal pehle chalai thi... haan yeh such hai ke maine hi ! maine hi apne bhai karan aur gauri ko esi jagah par maut dii thi... aur aaj !... aaj, phir se waqt khud ko dohra raha hai...

Shilpa : maine jab kal raat ko tumhe aur gauri ko saath dekha... tabhi maine soch lia tha ke nahi ! main koi chance nahi ;ey sakti... eseliye pehle aaj gauri ko kidnap kia aur phir...

Nandani : bahut giri hui ho ! tumhe insaan kehna yaane insaaniat ko gaali dena hoga...

Shilpa : myyyyyyyy foot !!!!!!

[ panditji mandir se pratham aur nandani se milne jaaney hi waale thhey ke tabhi unhoune neechey hou rahey nazare ko dekha. Panditji woh sab dekh hayraan reh gayye. ]

Panditji Maa durga se prarthna karte hue-

Panditji : hey maa, kya aaj bhi buraai jeet jayegi ? kyaa aaj bhi woh masoom pyaar haar jayega ? aaj apki bhakti par sawaal uthh rahey hain... unki raksha karo...

Mandir mein bahut zorr-zorr se mandir ki ghantiyan bajjne lagti hai.

ACHAANAK !

Mausam pehle se aur zyada kharaab hou jata hai aur bijli karakne lagti hai. Bahut khatarnaak tarah se aasmaan mein lightning houti hai.

Shilpa ne apne pistol ko tyaar kar lia aur sidha woh pistol pratham aur nandani par target kar dia.

Panditji : hey maa, rouk do yeh annarth houne se !... apna insaafkar do...

Shilpa ne goli chalane hi waali thi ke TABHI !


SHILPA PAR BIJLI GIRTI HAI !


Shilpa aag mein jall jaati hai... Shilpa ka aag mein jalne ka nazara bahut bhayanak houta hai. Pratham Nandani ko apne baahon mein leta hai...


Maa durga aakhir apna insaaf kar deti hai.


Shilpa ki dead-body khaai mein houti hai. Aasmaan saaf hou jata hai.

Police wahaan aati hai aur kidnappers ko arrest kar leti hai.

[ Nandani ke kidnap ki khabar sunn kar nandani ke maa aur papa bhi wahaan aatey hain. Gautam bhi dadaji ke saath wahaan ata hai. Gohar, Aditya aur Ashka wahaan aakar apne mom ke ees buraai ka anjaam dekhte hain. ]

Maa-Papa : nandani...

Nandani : maa-papa...

Papa : nandani, beta hum tou darr hi gayye thhey... tum thik tou ho na ?...

Nandani : haan papa...

Maa : pratham !... nandani, yeh ?...

SAB NORMAL HOU JATA HAI.

[ Dadaji aakar Nandani ke maa aur papa ko pratham aur nandani ke baare mein sab batate hain. Dadaji nandani ke parents ko karan aur gauri ki kahaani se lekar pratham aur nandani ke kahaani tak ki saari baatein batate hain. ]


[ yeh sab sunkar nandani ke maa aur papa ko kuch samajh mein nahi araha tha. Dadaji nandani ke parents se Pratham aur Nandani ki shaadi ki baat karte hain. Yeh soonkar Nandani ke parents maan jaate hain. ]


Dadaji, Nandani ke maa aur papa sab milkar Nandani aur Pratham ko Aashirwaad dete hain.


Papa : pratham, sorry beta.. humne tumhe bura samjha...

Maa : haan beta, humney tumhare aur nandani ke pyaar ko nahi samjha... eske liye hum tumse maafi

Pratham : nahi maa...

[ sab thik hou jata hai. ]

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Nandani : ashka-aditya, mujhe pata hai ke tum dono ko bahut bura laga hai apne mom ke... magar jo humaare Karam houte hain... humey oska anjaam bhi waisa hi milta hai...

Aditya : nandani, aap sahi keh rahi hain... magar jo hua oske liye...

Pratham : nahi adi, esmein tum dono ki koi galati nahi thi...

Ashka : pratham, maine tumse jo bura bartaav kia tha oos din... oske liye iam sorry ?...

Pratham : its ok :)

Ashka : :)


PRATHAM AUR NANDANI MAA DURGA KE MANDIR AATEY HAIN.


Pratham : panditji...

[ panditji pratham aur gauri ko dekh maa durga ko dhanyavaad dete hain. ]

Dadaji : aaj ka din, burai par achhai ka din hai... aur diwali bhi esi ka pratik hai... aaj se kuch hi dino baad diwaali bhi hai eseliye main chahta hoon ke aaj esi mandir mein pratham aur... nandani ki shaadi hou jaaye...

Panditji : yeh tou aapne bahut sahi faisla lia hai... tou shubh-karya mein deri nahi honi chahiye...


Saare musibaton ko paar karne ke baad aakhir yeh janmo ke prem Karan aur Gauri, Pratham aur Nandani ke roop mein ees janam mein mill jaatey hain...

MAA DURGA KE ESI MANDIR MEIN PRATHAM AUR NANDANI KI SHAADI KE BANDHAN MEIN PHIR SE EK BAAR BANDH JAATEY HAIN.

[ pratham aur nandani maa durga se aashirwaad letey hain. ]

[ Nandani mandir ke baahar aatey hue -

Nandani : aur esi tarah hum yaane main aur pratham aakhir mein mill jate hain...

Pratham : nandani, tou ab tum moral bhi bata do ees kahani ka ?...

Nandani : haan pratham, har kahaani ka ek moral houta hai... yeh kahaani tha ke loug jo Karam karte hain unka anjaam unhe esi janam mein milta hai... chahe aap achha karam karey ya bura... magar aapke karam hi apka bhaagya banate hain... aur ?

Pratham : unhey bigaarte bhi hain !... magar eske saath-saath humari yeh kahaani yeh bhi bata rahi hai ke suchha pyaar kabhi marta nahi... haan, woh kisi na kisi roop mein wapas zaroor ata hai... woh kehte hain na ke, agar aap kisi ko suchhe dil se chaho tou ?...

Nandani : woh loutkar waapas ata hai... aur jo nahi ata, woh kabhi aapka suchha pyaar tha hi nahi...

Pratham-Nandani : tou esi ke saath humaari yeh kahaani "Karam" yehin khatam houti hai... umeed hai aap sabhi viewers ko yeh kahaani pasand aayi aur aap ees kahaani KARAM ko kabhi nahi bhulenge... esi ke saath... alvida aur apna khyaal rakhiyega...


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Fanblous climax !

The way u ended karam is mindblowing http://forum.indya.com/images/icons/icon14.gif

gudjob !

Hey karam Serial ka 1st E-serial tha and now its end :( its really sad. But iam impress wid ur Kreations :) Great job !

Now WHICH E-SERIAL OF SERIAL KILLER IS ON UR TARGET ???

I heard lotss of things abt kutumb ??? plzz answer me there.

AND again, Karam is veryyy fav. story of mine and now its end. Gud bye Karam :)