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SHITHI
May 25, 2008, 12:18 PM
this is a story of three frnds - KISHOR , MUSA , ROBIN .... ye log bhi humure tarha chote bacche hai ...par dimag kafi sharp hain .... jab yeh tin hote hain sath toh har jaga khalbali mach jati hain ....toh sab se pehle chaliye jante hain ye tin dosto ke bare main ....

KISHOR :
FULL NAME KISHOR PASHA .... BACHPAN ME MUMMY PAPAKE DEATH HOGAYI .. TABSE APNE CHACHA CHACHI KE PAS REHTA HAIN .... CHACHA RASHED PASHA ... CHACHI MERRY PASHA ... DONOKI KHUDKE BACCHE NEHI HAIN PAR KISHOR KOHI APNA BACCHA MAN TEHE ..KISHOR EK BANGLADESHI LADKA HAIN ... DIMAG COMPUTER SE BHI TEZ ....

MUSA :
FULL NAME MUSA AMAN . AMERICAN NIGRO ... ROZ EXERCISE KARTE HAIN ... DIMAG UTNA CHALTA NEHI HAIN PAR BOHOTI STRONG HAIN ... BHUTSE DARTA HAIN PAR WAQT ANEPAR USSE JAYADA HIMMAT AUR KISIME NEHI HOTI ...KHATA BOHOT HAIN ...

ROBIN :
FULL NAME ROBIN MILFORD .AIRISH AMEMERICAN . KITAB PARNE ME MASTER HAIN ... DIN BHAR BAS KITAB HI PARTA REHTA HAIN....SIDHA SADHA HAIN ...

WRITER :
MR. ROKIB HASAN . BANGLADESH KI EK FAMOUS WRITER . BACCHE UNKE FAN HAIN. TIIN DITECTIVES KE JANM INHONE HI DIYA HAIN .

NOTE: THIS STORY IS NOT WRITTEN BY ME ... IT IS BY MR.ROKIB HASAN . I M JUST TRANSLATING THIS ON HINDI .. SO THE WHOLE CREDITE GOES TO MR.ROKIB HASAN ... :D

SO DOSTO WAIT KIJIYE TIIN DITECTIVES KE LIYE ... YE LOG BOHOT JALD DHOOM MACHANE ARAHE HAIN SERIAL KILLER ME ....;)

aaakjj
May 25, 2008, 12:30 PM
After "Intjaar Hai Kisi Ka .." this Is the 2nd detective story of our Indya forum...

Nice.... I am waiting for this story........

becoz i couldn't add more cases becoz of "Saaya"

so.. plz start soon.....

i'm waiting here.........

SHITHI
May 25, 2008, 01:46 PM
PART - 1

YE AWAZ KAFI DERSE ROBIN KE KAN ARAHETHE . ACHANAK PEHCHAN GAYA . PLANE KI AWAZ HAIN . PAR ITNI JORSE ??
KHIRKI KE PAS BYETHKE KITAB PARRAHETHE . EK BOHOTI INTERESTING ADVENTURE STORY HAIN .... KITAB KHULE RAKHKAR HI KHIRKISE ASMAAN KE AUR DEKHA .O .. TOH YE BAT HAIN SAT NAYI JET PLANE ... PRACTICE KARRAHE HAIN.. ROBIN INTEREST LEKAR DEKHA PLANES KO ...
ITNA LOUD AWAZ !!! BAPRE ... KAN KE PARDE FAT JAYENGE . KHIRKI KE KAANCH JHAN JHAN KARNE LAGA . JALDI KAN ME UNGLI DALA ROBINNE .
PLANES JANE KE BAD KITAB PHIRSE PARNA SHURU KIYA USNE .. SHAM HO GAYE HAIN . MUMMY PAPA GHAR NEHI HAIN . JARURI KAMSE SHEHER GAYE HAIN . KAB AYENGE PATA NEHI ..
KITAB PARTE PARTE USE PATAHI NEHI CHALA KE KAB SHAM HO GAYA ....USNE LIGHT ON KARDIYA . KHIRKISE TEZ HAWA ARAHI HAIN ....
KHIRKI BAND KARNE GAYA TOH DEKHA .....

AAG

aaakjj
May 25, 2008, 02:04 PM
:)

Jaahir Hai Detective Story Hai To Case Samajhna Mushkil Hai..
Isliye Main Agle Episode Ka Wait Kar Raha Hoon............

:)

SHITHI
May 25, 2008, 02:32 PM
PART-2

ROBIN JALDISE TAIYAR HOKE AAG LAGNE WALI JAGE KE TARAF DOURA ... THODI DER JATEHI .. PICHESE PAYERO KE AWAZ AYE .. MURKE DEKHA TO MUSA THA .

ROBIN : O .. MUSA .. TUMNE BHI AAG DEKHA ?
MUSA KE SATH EK CHOTISI LADKI , USKA COUSIN FARIHA . USKI MUMMY PAPA DESH KE BAHAR HAIN .. ISILYE USE MUSA KE GHAR ME RAKHKE GAYE HAIN .

MUSA:HA , SONE JARAHE THE ... TABHI DEKHA . KISKI GHAR ME LAGI ?FIRE SERVICE KO KHABAR DIYA KISINE ?
ROBIN KAISE BATAU .MAIN BHI AAG DEKHKAR ABHI AYA .PAR JAISE AAG LAGI HAIN .. FIRE SERVICE AKAR KUCH NEHI KAR PAYENGE ..USSE PEHLEHI .. SAB JALKE RAKH HO JAYEGA ... CHALO DEKHTE HAIN .

WOH TIN DOUR KE GAYA . . RASTE MAIN AUR BHI LOG THE .. UNMESE EK BOLA MR.ARGAF KE GHAR LAGAHE ... !!

EK GALI KE MOR PE WO TIN RUK GAYE .. AAG BARTE JARAHA HAIN ...

ROBIN: GHAR ME NEHI ... UNKE WORK HOUSE ME LAGIHE ..!!!

SHITHI
May 27, 2008, 11:22 AM
PART-3
WORK HOUSE PAS JAB WO LOG POUCHE TAB KUCH BHI NEHI BACAH THA .. SARE JAGE AAG LAGE HUE THE ...
GAOKE POLICE CONSTABLE MR.FOGREMPERCOT BHI HAIN WAHA ... LAAL FOOTBAL KE TARA SHAKAL HAIN UNKA ... BOHOT MOTE HAIN .. SAB KO PANI DHALNE KE ORDER DE RAHE HAIN .
MR.FOGREMPERCOT : [ BACCHO KO DEKHKAR ] AH , MUSIBAT .. JAO .. BHAGO YAHA SE ....
FARIHA : HUMESHA MUSIBAT MUSIBAT BOLTA REHTA HAIN . ACCHA YE WORD ITNI BAR KIU USE KARTA HAIN ........
MUSA : ADAT HAIN ...
' ROZAR KAHA HAIN ? ROZAR ?? ' MR.ARGOF KE SHOFAR HAIN YE ROZAR ...

EK MOTISI LADY BOLI : WO TRAIN STATION ME GAYE HAIN ... MR. ARGOF KO RICIEVE KARNE ..
YE WORAT KA NAM MRS.DARBI .. MR.ARGOF KE COOK .

ROBIN : ITNI PYARI COTTEGE JALRAHA HAIN .. MUSA HUME KUCH KARNA HOGA ...
UNKE THIK PICHE HI THA EK LADKA .. BALTI BHAR PANI AAG ME PHEK RAHA THA ... THODA PANI AKAR MUSA PAR GIRA ..
MUSA : [CHILLAKAR ] DEKH NEHI SAKTE ...
LADKA : SORRY .......
KAFI MOTA HAIN . CURLY HAIR .. MEHENGI KAPRE PEHNE HUE .. CHAKU KE TARA TEZ AKHE ..