Fan Fic... Jiya Dhardhak Dhardhak Jaye

[awall21]

Fan Fic… I don’t have a lot of imagination so I guess my Fan Fic will pick up from the Theej party when Bani and Pia are coming with the plate in their hand. Also I will write this one in English as it is taking me a long time to write anyways, but if you have a preference for it to be in Hindi for a better impact… I guess pick one and let me know or I can do both you’ll have to wait longer though… sorry!

FF Episode 1 Scene 1

Pia: Rano this is for you.

[Pia opens the plate and within you can see very heavy gold & silver jewelry with stone jewelry as well.]

Rano: [to Bani] Di, thanks you so much for coming and [to the both of them] this is way too much for me to accept from you guys.

Pia: Rano this is nothing, you’re our sister for you the sky is the limit.

Jigyasa: That is true; when it’s someone else’s money of course the sky is the limit.

Pia: Excuse me Jigyasa Auntie we didn’t spend your money, so you don’t have the right to speak to us this way and what’s your problem anyways?

Bani: Pia, leave this topic.

Pia: No Di, she has no right to insult us or Rano. Pushkar, you, and me all have jobs and put our hard earned money and bought these gifts for Rano, so who is she to say anything to us. She is the one that brought up.

Bani: [giving a dirty look to Jigyasa] It’s okay Pia, some people have a habit of needing to add their two cents in so why are you wasting your breathe.

Pia: [to Bani] No, I can’t be like you and try to play nice with people like them, especially since they are always so unfair, rude and insulting to us. [To Jigyasa] come to think of it you don’t work so where did you get the money for your gifts for Anu? I guess you are right the sky is the limit when you spend someone else’s money. At least what we got our sister is priceless as we gave it from the heart you just did it to show off.

Before the matter can go any further Massi and Dadi enter the scene.

Massi: [to all] Let’s go everyone, lunch is being served, so go and eat.

Everyone moves towards the kitchen, Jigyasa just glares at the three sisters and fumes can be seen coming out of her ears and leaves. She is lost in though and thinks to herself for the first time these sisters have left me speechless [um I know this isn’t true but let’s just assume okay guys] but they are right I don’t have an income of my own I am dependent. DAMN! I have to think of something I can’t let these middle class girls show me up. She follows all towards lunch.

Massi: Bani, can I talk to you for a minute.

Bani: [to her sisters] You two go, I’ll follow you guys in a bit.

Massi: I know about everything about the Park Road secret, you don’t need to hide anything from me.

Bani’s in shock and wondering how Massi knows everything.

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FF Episode 1 Scene 2

While this was going on with the gals the guys were in the next room over having drinks and discussing business of course.

Ranveer is talking with some investors and Saahil is talking with some co-workers regarding the Mount Abu project. Honestly Jai didn’t trust Ranveer with the property after the Phaug Phere incident. He knew Saahil had a vested interest with Rano like he did with Bani.

Aditya: Don’t worry Jai, everything will be okay with you and Bani, she’s probably just a little unsettled with becoming a mother. You remember Jigyasa, thank god we stopped after the third kid honestly she was a mad women especially near the end, she would drive me crazy… come to think of it she still does.

Jai: Come on Aditya be serious for a few minutes can we switch back to Bani. There was a time when I wanted to divorce Bani, but now I don’t want to lose her and it’s not only because of the baby that’s icing on top of the cake.

Aditya: Sorry Jai, but I can’t help myself when it comes to Jigyasa; I always feel I need to get one up on her. But yea back to Bani, do you want me to talk to her, she usually listens to me. I know she’s pretty damn upset with the whole faking your death thing and that’s why she still didn’t come back, but what happened between you and her for her to leave in the first place?

Jai: [he ponders what he should do, then he narrate the whole park road secret and what happened so far since Roshni came back into their lives] I don’t know what to do now and she is more upset after the hospital incident.

Aditya: So much happened and you are telling all this to me now, I’m hurt Jai. I’m your best friend and you couldn’t tell me. Does anyone besides from Bani know?

Jai: Yeah I’m really sorry Aditya, but only Massi knows, I told her last night, [let’s pretend again] I couldn’t take it anymore, I had to tell someone and you were busy with your three children’s wedding. I know that except for Ranvijay and Roshni no one else knows because Bani will never tell anyone else. She always takes everything on herself, she is so selfless and right now being pregnant that is too much stress for one person. DAMN IT! [People turn to look at him]

Aditya: Control yourself Jai; there are people around no need to have more people involved in this...don’t worry everything will be fine. I will not involve myself with Bani in this matter as it is between you two, but I am here for you and I will keep an eye on Bani for you, she treats me like her father so any help I can give her she will not be able to refuse. I can try and guilt her a little without making her feel bad or anything. As for you better take control of this situation before it spirals out of control. With Ranvijay we are at a standoff as we each have a daughter in the other house, but Roshni is who you need to worry out. I’m assuming she doesn’t have anything else on you so cut her out as much as you can.

Jai: I have cut her out of my business dealings with the pretext to all that we are a family now [says it with a bad taste in his mouth] and to maintain relations its good not to have business involved. I had her sign a gag order too that if she talks I will sue her for everything she has.

Aditya: Good one, now come on, lunch is being served let’s go eat and meet up with the ladies in the ballroom. Plus like I said I haven’t made fun of Jigyasa all day so I need to get in my daily does.

The guys head over with the rest of men into the ballroom. The women are heading in too. Jai and Aditya walk into the ballroom laughing and join the rest of the family and friends.


END SCENE 2
END EPISODE 1

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[awall21]

Preview: Jigs ask for a job.... lol I'm laughing even thinking about this. In another episode to come dance performances and one that holds a surprise for Bani and Raashi.


Later days.

[awall21]

Preview: Jigyasa asks Jai for a job? What will Jai say?

EPISODE 2 SCENE 1

Bani: [still in shock] what did you say Massi?

Massi: You heard right Bani, Jai has told me everything.

Bani: Then if you know Massi, you understand why I left this house and Mr. Wailia. Beside I have been asking him for the past month about this raaz, and he kept putting me off, you asked him once and he told you.

Massi: I know Bani but I’m his basically his mother and nothing a child can never hide anything from a mother even if he tries…

Bani: Well I am his wife and he shouldn’t try to hide anything for me.

Massi: It’s nice to hear that you still think of Jai as your husband, but Bani what happened with your mother was an accident. I know my Munna, he can’t hurt anyone.

Bani: Massi you forget that I have experience first hand all the hurt possible from Jai. Well not for long, I already left his house; I plan to leave him too. I am filing for divorce and then later leaving Mumbai too.

Massi: What! Where will you go, what will you do think about your child?!?!?!

Bani: I am! If I stay in this house the problems, the people, and the stress are going to be the end of my baby, and if anything happens to my baby I will not spare ANYONE! Besides that’s my concern and like everything else that has happened I will figure something out.

Massi: Ok ok, calm down, all this excitement is not good for the baby, let’s go eat okay. I know you’re stubborn like my Munna. [Divorce, ha! I know my Munna he’ll find a way to get you back in this house.]

They exit also to eat.

END OF SCENE 1


EPISODE 2 SCENE 2

Everyone is eating and mingling. Pushakar and Pia are busy romancing in the corner. Saahil and Rohit upon seeing Bani race over to see who gets there first to take ashirwad. Aditya looks at them and starts laughing. Jai who was also watching them rush Bani has an angry look on his face.

Jai: [thinking and half muttering] those two idiots, I’ll fix them, trying to bulldoze my pregnant wife, what if something happened.

Saahil: Hey I was here first, so I am going to get ashirwad first.

Rohit: No I was first

Saahil: NO I was

Rohit NO I was and I’m older.

Saahil, No younger ones go first, didn’t you watch Hum Saath Saath Haan.

Bani: Ok, ok, it was a tie, come on, [same time gives both of them ashirwad.]

Anu, Raashi, Rano, Dadi, and Massi all start laughing in with everyone else. Pi and Pushkar join the crowd also. In my fan fic Pia is not pregnant and she and Pushkar have no problems since the time Pushkar rescued her from the fire. Pushkar did allow her to work but she is working as a PR for a non-Wailia owned company. They fill them in on what happens and everyone burst out laughing again. Jai and Aditya are watching from afar.

Aditya: Jai isn’t it good to see the family laughing again.

Jai: Hmm, yea, I wish it could stay like this forever.

Aditya: It can, but you need to make this happen.

Jai: How Aditya, I can’t even have a two minute conversation with Bani without either being interrupted or getting into an argument. Jeez how is this so damn hard!

Aditya: It will come to yet, at least Roshni is out of the picture so now would be time to do damage control but yours and Bani’s relationship is in a fragile state. I’m sorry to say that in our own family Jigyasa and Ranveer worsen the situation.

Jai: I honestly don’t get what my sister’s problem is with these girls and Ranveer… all he sees is his mother and God. I was hoping he would change a little after marriage.

Aditya: what like Bani did for you, haha, but yea man I was hoping the same.

[both pause lost in their own thoughts when Jigyasa approaches them.…]

Jigyasa: Jai Bhaiya

Aditya: Oh Jigyasa, how are you? You look very happy today, whose day did you just ruin? [Jai suppresses a laugh]

Jigyasa: ADITYA! [With that classic Jigyasa look, you guys know which one I’m talking about, while Aditya just looks a little scared]

Jai: Come on Aditya, not today okay you guys can pick up this later. Ok Jigyasa what can I do for you.

Jigyasa: Jai Bhaiya I want a job. [Now its Aditya’s turn to suppress a laugh and Jai’s turn to look scared.]

Jai: [trying to recover] Why Jigyasa, why do you need to work?
Jigyasa: That’s not important I just do [she cast a look at Bani]

Jai sees this and knows that she probably just got told of by his lovely wife, but still Jigyasa work that and I wonder what argument brought this out?!!?, Man he didn’t want his business to crash; Jigyasa had a personality which could kill all his business.

Jai: I’m sorry, but we don’t have any positions open right now Jigyasa.

Jigyasa: Then make one! I won’t let this go Jai Bhaiya.

Aditya: [gets a brilliant idea. I’m sure you guys can figure this one out.]Come on Jai. Besides I’m the hiring manager and I know that one of the departments has a vacancy that needs to be filled.

Jai has this incredulous confused look on his face but plays along because Aditya has one of his looks.

Jigyasa: [Looks at Aditya speechless, but recovers quickly.] Good, I’ll see you guys Monday at the office. [She exits away to her kitty party in the corner]

Aditya: [Tells Jai of his plan of keeping Jigyasa occupied at work and this way he can spend his efforts getting back Bani. He figures Jigyasa is all about money so why not have her work with accounting. That’s what Jigyasa went to school for anyways.] This will keep her busy during the day so that’s one down. Now something for Ranveer…...

Jai: [laughing] Aditya I know how to take care of this one from experience. [Aditya has a very confused look while Jai literally spells it out for him with a smirk] J E A L O U S Y [Jai thinks back to the night that change everything for him and Bani and brought them to this crossroad in life. If Bani hadn't been jealous of Roshni him and Bani wouldn't have had a real marriage, etc.]

Aditya: You a genius Jai and I know exactly who.

Jai: Let me guess.......Suraj.

Aditya: You got it and he’s on his way here with one of his friends Abhi. Let me quickly give him a call and brief him on what we need him to do.

Jai: Alright man the performances are about to start , I’m going to head, meet you there.

END SCENE 2
END EPISODE 2
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I didn't read this through as I have to go eat, I'll do this tomorrow at work!

Later days!

[naaz123]

Hey Anita,
Very, very well done! You know, you said you weren't a good writer. My foot! (He, he...just trying to be funny). You are an awesome writer. Not only is the work interesting, but you also do very good character references. When I read Aditya's lines or Maasi's lines for example, I can hear and see them in my mind and nothing is out of character, so that's awesome! If you can come up with an episode a day (no, no, I'm not trying to get u fired!) then I'll quit watching the show. I know your version will keep us all happy. He, he! Thanks for doing this. Can't wait for the next one!
Naaz

[awall21]

Aww thanks Naaz! Wow everyday, um well it took me four days between the 1st and 2nd episode so you have to give me at least 4 days b/c I write some at work and the rest during the time slot at home which I used to watch KS. And yea I don't want to lose my job cuz then I won't be able to fund my shopping trips hehe. Well now I'm back to all my American shows starting up so it might really just be whatever I get through at work.

Question do you want to see this is in Hindi, I thing I might progressivly switch over and oh would you like to see the use of the smileys for emotions? I'll incorporate your feedback into ep3.

Thanks for the feedback I didn't think anyone was reading this as it was all they way on the bottom of the forum and I'm glad that I was able to keep the integrity of the characters on paper (well you know what I mean.)

Well back to work :rolleyes: and I have started writing episode 3 and have the 1st scene and 4 acts finsihed... lol you can call me Shakespeare. Currently working on scene 2 with 2 flashbacks.

Later days!

[naaz123]

Hey Shakespeare,
I hope you didn't think I was serious when I said to just write everyday. That would be awfully selfish of me! So far, I don't mind at all that you're writing in English. I think u should write in whatever you're more comfy with. A mixture of both or one language in particular. Kuch bhi challega. I like the emoticons and I also like your commentary in the middle (i.e. Let's pretend again, etc). If you're worried about no one seeing the fan fic since it is listed way down low, we could mention something in the chit chat section and discussion section. After reading your ff's, I feel like I should put my stuff down too. You had mentioned not minding reading some old stuff. Lekin, afsos, yeh bartan khattam nahin hotte. Aur jub hotte he to phir laundry, cleaning etc, etc. Kaash mere paas Tony hotta. :) I think u should introduce a Tina for Tony, just for me. He he..just kidding. I'm always looking out for the little people. Hey, did u notice? We're seniors now. No more newbies or regulars. It seems I started coming here only yesterday and now I'm a senior. Wah. How cool. Ok, gotta go. Can't wait to read more!
Naaz

[Devia]

Hi!

I noticed this section today and I've red it and it is fantastic! :D And funny.... especially the part where Jigs ask for a job! I agree with Naaz: I think your version would keep us all happy! :)

Devia

[awall21]

Thanks Devia, I'm happy to know that you liked it. I will be posting the third epsiode later today. Lol I'm currently working on it as we speak so check back later and let me know what you think. If you have any suggestions on what you want to see don't hesitate to let me know, it will help in giving me a sense of direction for the episodes too.


Naaz based on your suggestions episode three will have emotions as well as some Hindi in it. Also in later episodes I don't mind introducing a Tina for Tony. I'm not sure if shes going to be a new entrant or an exisitng wife but now just coming onto the scene.... will have to think about it unless u have a suggestion on this...

Oh Naaz I have an idea on your barthan problem... PAPER PLATES! Lol this should save you some time...haha, just kidding yaar. Yes I did notice we are Seniors I feel so special... is there anything after Seniors??? Umm what else, ah post your fan fics man I'm dying to read them, well not literally of course.

Okay back to writing so I can post the next part for you guys!

Later days!

[awall21]

EPISODE 3
SCENE 1 ACT 1

We see Aditya, Rano, and Saahil. The music starts, you hear "Rock 'N' Roll Soynie" from KANK. Just picture the song in the movie and replace the characters. Oh and Rano does not wear glasses in my fan fic.

Dadi: Oye mere Priety Zinta, tussi great ho!


SCENE 1 ACT 2
While the previous act changes back into their clothes, next performance Rohit "Dil Na Diya" from Krrish…. Lol JUST IMAGINE okay!

Dadi: Hailia :eek: HRITHIK ka ghana, Bilo this is my favorite song!!!! ( Yea the Hindi is starting to come out)

Massi: Biji aap bhi naa!!!! :rolleyes:


SCENE 1 ACT 3
Next performance Raashi "Mera Mahi Barda Sona Hai." From dhai Akshar Prem Ke. Saahil is standing behind Rano with his arms over her shoulders around her neck. Ranveer is standing next to them with Aditya and Jai.

Saahil: Daammmmn! Bhabhi can dance r on top of cooking amazingly well! Rano tell me again why I married you and not Raashi?

Rano: Shut up Saahil! [Pushes him off of her and stands but Aditya with her rude stare.]

Aditya: Yea Saahil or "Someone's gonna get a hurt real bad!" [says it like Russell Peters.]

Everyone laughs except Ranveer, come to think of it have we ever seen or heard him laugh? Yea I highly doubt that.

Saahil: Wow Bhaiya you hit a jackpot and to think I could have married her….um I'm thinking it's to late now…….. [Ranveer gives Saahil his one mile stares and Saahil being Saahil doesn't get it] Wait so is that a YES! :confused:

Ranveer: SAAHIL!:mad:

Saahil goes to run behind Rano!

Aditya: What did I tell, now be quiet and watch we missed half the performance with your antics.

As the song near ends she's dancing in a circle round and round, during where Abhishek Bachchan has the voice over and just like in the movie where Aishwariya Rai falls in his arm, Raashi falls in someone's arm…….it's Suraj's! Aditya and Jai share a look with a silent and let the games begin….the lights go out!
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I still have to post Act 4 of Scene 1 for the end of this episode, will post it first thing when I get into work in the morning. Thanks so much for your patience guys! Oh and I tried to put more smileys Naaz, but there is a limit of only 4!!! Can you believe, lol cuz I couldn't...

Later days!

[naaz123]

Hey Anita,
I liked the scenes today! Good job! I liked the Russell Peters reference! Do you like the movie Dhai Akshar Prem Ke? I just absolutly love the movie and all the songs. I also like A Walk In The Clouds (which Dhai Akshar is a copy of). Funny, how we like similar things. I know about the smiley thing. How silly, na? Can't wait to read the next part tomorrow. Keep it up! I started putting my fan fic in the computer. It's a Indian Idol 2 meets reality meets Fame Gurukul type of thing. I think u'll like it, but I have a ways to go. Also, u asked about good books to read...I'm not a big reader, but one book that I found years ago, I just couldn't put down. It's called Sunlight on a broken column and it's by Attia Hossain. It's older, so u may have to find it at your local library or request it thru interlibrary loan. I just found it in a pile of books that I was about to donate, so I think I'm going to start reading it again. (one more thing to do other than watch boring and unsatisfying KS episodes). :)
Naaz

[awall21]

SCENE 1 ACT 4
Music starts for "DUS BAHANE" from Dus…….spotlight shines on Suraj and then Abhi comes into the picture. Both of them are good dancers as well especially Suraj. Okay Suraj looks like Manathan from Kyunki and Abhi like Sagar in Dulhan. JUST IMAGINE.. :D Sorry guys I just watched this movie yesterday!

Pia: OMG, ABHI BHAIYA, here...oh shit…!
Pushkar: Tum inko jani te ho?
Pia: Haan Bhaiya aur Di...
Pushkar: Kya? :confused:

Pia narrates the whole thing for him and drags Pushkar towards Abhi Bhaiya when the song ends. (This will be in Bani’s flashback) On the other side the same scene plays with Rano, but unfortunately she has the Wailia clan around here…. Unlike Pia she half shouts it and is heard by Aditya, Jai and Saahil. (Ranveer a little off to the side with the scene of Raashi falling into Suraj’s arm playing in his head and is lost in a flashback.)

Rano: No, this can’t be, Abhi...
Aditya: Rano, tum Abhi ko kaise janti ho?
Rano: Woh Mount Abu se, I have to go talk to him.
Saahil: He wasn’t an old boyfriend was he? ;)
Rano: Yes he was…
Saahil: What! You are not going to talk to him!:mad:
Rano: Saahil shut up! Abhi BHAIYA wasn’t my old boyfriend he was Di’s….
Saahil: Bhaiya! Thank god, soooo how did Pia break his heart??
Rano: Pia? No I was talking about [notices that Jai and Aditya are looking at her and stops]
Saahil: [Saahil being Saahil, whistles] Wow you meant Bani Mami…[finally notices his Dad giving him a will you shut and understand the situation nodding his head over towards Jai]Chalo Rano lets go say hi! [Grabs and half drags her towards Abhi BHAIYA as the song ended!]

Aditya: Jai, kya soch rahe ho?
Jai: Mein yeh soch raha hoon ke mere problems kaam hone ki waja bard kyo jaati hai! Phele to Roshni, Jigyasa aur Ranveer jinko tum busy rakho ge ab aur upar se yeh Abhi!
Aditya: Come on Jai, tum yeh ko soch rahe ho? Phele Rano se baat karte hai phir kuch fasele, Shaiyad yeh bhi to ho sakta hai ke Abhi tumhari maadat kar sakta hai. Tum puri baat to nahi jante toh is se phele tum overreact karo puri baat araam se phata lagao.
Jai: Tumhare yea baat bhi sahi hai. This time I’m gonna get all the facts and then make a decision, my previous actions have cost me a lot. Besides, Jai Wailia never loses and that’s not about to change NOW!


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You got it Naaz! I do like that movie and yes I recently watched A Walk in the Clouds last month when I got back from vacation. I'm dying to read some of your fan fics, plus it would help occupy my time once Ii get home from work. I'll go look for Sunlight at my library, thanks for the suggestion! Hey let me know if the mix of Hindi is English is cool or if it gets too confusing. Thanks!

Later days,
Anita

[naaz123]

Hey Anita,
I love the suspense. Your version is so much more exciting than Ekta's. If I were to see Ekta today, I'd stick my hand out and say, Ekta, You're FIRED! (a la Donald Trump). I like the addition of Abhi. So fresh. You know Ekta introduced Tarun, but so far he hasn't done too much good. Let's see. Can't wait for the flashbacks! I'm going to go post some more of my story now. Hope you like it!
Naaz

[awall21]

Hey Naaz,

Thanks buddy... I'm writing up Ranveers flashback first then Bani's. Both Suraj and Abhi will be positive characters..... Don't worry due to Abhi there will NOT be any misunderstanding with Jai and Bani b/c of him, I'm writing fiction not a damn serial plus Jai has decided to think before he acts and well I'm not Ekta.

As for Ranveer, Suraj will bascially do as Aditya requested and make Ranveer jealous and you just have to wait...... I know the suspense sucks but thats why I'm writing his flashback first! It will take a while as all my shows are premiring this week. CSI MIAMI started yesterday, wohoo and well House and Bones are already on... and it only gets worse from there with Greys Anatomy, Lost, the Nine, and 6 degrees

Aight back to work, ttyl!

Toodles,
Anita

[naaz123]

:) Hey Anita,
Can't wait to read the flashbacks. You know, I should probably start watching Grey's Anatomy. I've heard great things about it. Anyway...
Ever look in the section where it says how many people have viewed our thread? People are reading our work, but you'd never know if it wasn't for that "people counter". I really wish people would comment, even if it was negative feedback, don't you? Maybe they're just guests and not registered users, and so don't say anything. Even if they don't say anything ever, I get comfort in seeing that more people are reading our work. It's sort of a feeling of fulfillment, know what I mean? :) I'll chat with ya later!
Naaz

[awall21]

You know how I said I didn't like writing well I lied.. lol I really like writing the problem is once I start I kind can't stop I keep going gong and going... kinda like the energizer bunny (but I'm more of a Duracell person:p )

I'm still writing Ranveers flashback, so once done I will submit in parts. I like the use of smilies and since I can only use 4 you can :rolleyes: just imagine. I'm half way through and will get through most of it tonight after watching Bones and before CSI:NY; that's if I don't find other ways to make it longer.

Hey Law and order SVU started last night, did you watch? House was good too! Greys Anatomy is a good show, I really enjoy watching it on Sundays though now it will come on Thursdays, don't know when it starts though... :confused:

Based on what you said I looked for the counter, wow, well glad to know people read it unless its just us like looney's looking for each others responses, just imagine Okie back to work.

Thanks for posting;) , i/j (inside joke)
Aight, later days buddy!

[naaz123]

Hey Anita,
Looking forward to whatever comes next. Take your time if you need to...no problem. However long it takes, I want to thank you. Thank you so much for writing these episodes. :p (ij) You're doing great, babe! I'll be posting my next chapter in a little bit.
Naaz

[awall21]

Hey did you watch Maine Pyar Kiya... I'm sure you did... "Dosti mein no sorry's aur no thank yous!" so quit it :D

Well I have finsihed Ranveers flashback... finally!:eek: Hard to believe no? I have it at home on the laptop though and not here at work so I will have to post it when I get home. I wrote through Bones, Criminal Minds, and have no idea about what happened on CSI:NY b/c I was in form by then, lol! :rolleyes:

Tonight Grey's Anatomy is premering, so excited I'm so hoping she picks McVet aka Finn whoes widowed and not McDreamy aka Derek whoes married. Derek so does not deserve her. Sorry that was off topic, but yea now working on Bani's I won't have time after tonight till Sunday. Do let me know where you want the Ranveer's story line to go after you read it... I'm a litle :confused: on how I want it to play out. Your feedback will help me out for sure.

Now for some work as its 10am and I haven't done anything work related for the past 2 hours.... oops!

Later days!

[awall21]

EPISODE 4
SCENE 1 ACT 1 FLASHBACK

Alright let's give you a background on Ranveer. He and Suraj have known each other since grade school; Suraj’s parents lived in the US but traveled a lot so they sent Suraj to live with his Massi. They became good friends during grade school.
There friendship blossomed over the years and well they were pretty much the same person, you wouldn’t see one with out the other and god help you if you messed with one…

On the playground:
Suraj: Eh!!! Yeh mera hai, give me back my lunchbox dude….
Bully: Listen buddy your new here so you don’t know that all new kids have to give me their lunches.
Suraj: Your lying dude!
Bully: Are you calling me a liar.
Suraj: Yea I am what are you gonna do about it dude.
Ranveer: Yea what you gonna do about. [Ranveer is pretty tall for his age and well now the bully is outnumbered.]
Bully: Nothing man, here’s the damn lunch box.
Suraj: Thanks dude, I really didn’t want to beat him.
Ranveer: You beat him, ya right……..
Suraj: Ya dude, but I promised my Mom I wouldn’t get into trouble especially on the first day, tomorrow he won't get away so easy...
Ranveer: Um yea right, okay....so friends?
Suraj: Ya dude, you had my back back there without even knowing me I give you mad props.
Ranveer: No problem, just stop saying dude
Suraj: Sure dude! ;p

ACT 2
One week later on the playground:
Jiayala: Hey can you help me with History, I kind suck at it.
Suraj: Aren’t girls supposed to be good with dates or something…:confused:
Jiayala: Shut up Suri!
Suraj: Okay Jia, sheesh dude you don’t got ya yell. Great here comes loser face… What up dude?
Bully: Hey don’t dude me…aaj tujhe kuan save kare ga, teri yeh girlfriend?
Suraj: Oye tameez se bhaath kar aur I can take you out myself. Jia get out of here.
Jiayala: But Suri.
Suraj: Jia!
Bully: yeah get out don’t embarrass him more by watching him get beat.
Jiayala: I’ll go get Veer…
Bully: Your all mine.
Suraj: Funny I was thinking the same thing. You should be I would have suggested you calling back up.
Bully: oh I’m so scared…

Our hero Suraj is very small for his age, just imagine, but the kid knew self defense…smart dude, incapacitates the guy and seconds and is later found standing over when Ranveer and Jiayala come !

Ranveer: Um what just happened here?:confused:
Suraj: Veer, I thought you were smart, dude I just beat him up…:rolleyes:
Jiayala: Yaar Suri, I’m impressed.
Ranveer: Me too, tujhe dekh kar lagta toh nahi ke tune isko mara.;)
Suraj: Aacha to ab chale, bell just rang.

END of SCENE 1

[awall21]

EPISODE 4 SCENE 2

High School days…
Ranveer: Yes, I came first in Mathematics, Finance, and Accounting.
Suraj: Dude I topped Science, English, and History!!!
Ranveer: Nice lets celebrate and throw a party! I know my Mama’s farm house is free and he won’t mind, especially if between the two of us we topped the whole school.
Suraj: Damn straight, but dude you’re saying to throw a party… wow dude I’m impressed. You do know there will be girls there naa? :D
Ranveer: Shut up, yea I know that’s why, it’s all about the entertainment…
Suraj: Wow that’s a change, thank god I thought you were gonna end up being a sexy sanyasi dude the rest of your life.
Ranveer: Suraj, shut the hell up, that’s not what I meant! Let’s just say there I can’t wait to see the fireworks at the party when ALL your girlfriends show up!
Suraj: Dude they are not my girlfriends, they are not my type and besides we’re leaving after two weeks anyways for college who gives.
Ranveer: You’re too much man, come on, lets go.

Both Ranveer and Suraj’s end up going to the same school. Ranveer majors in Business and Suraj in Law. Ranveer was usually shy from girls and dated here and there, but now he avoided girls like the plague. His parents just divorced a year back and all the trauma that Saahil and Anu had to go through he never wanted that to happen to him so he swore off ever being in that situation EVER!

SCENE 3
College ke din…
Jiayala: Hi boys!
Suraj: Hiya sweetheart, whats happening?;)
Jiayala: Don’t sweetheart me, I thought you were going to come over and help me with history.
Suraj: Yaar tum shaiyad duniya ke pelhe lardki hoon jise tarik yaad nahi.
Jiayala: Aur dum duniya ke pehle lardke jise saab kuch yaad hai.
Ranveer: Can you guys please stop arguing!:mad:
Jiayala: Chill out man its just masti, tu itna tense ko hura hai.
Ranveer: I’m not okay so just leave it.
Suraj: Veer I know your still upset and dealing with the aftermath of your parents divorce but dude you can’t let it bring you down, they are still together in the same house still.
Ranveer: I know man but still its was like watching on eggshells this past summer and you were gone too.
Suraj: Sorry dude, I promise never again okay.
Ranveer: Good, I am never gonna get married.
Jiayala: Okay no need to get dramatic.
Ranveer; I’m serious Suri, promise me that you’ll never let them marry me off and if they do you’ll get me out of it. Promise, I know you’ll never forget or break your promise.
Jiayala: What if you like her.
Ranveer: But I just said I don’t want to get married there is no reason to get married, what do you get out of it but pain.
Suraj: Ah Love dude…:rolleyes:
Jiayala: Yaar Suri tu to bardha romantic nikla.
Suraj: Jiayla…..
Jiayala: Suraj….
Ranveer: Guys!
Both: Sorry!
Ranver: Suriiiiiiiiiii, PROMISE!
Suraj: Promise dude.
Ranveer; Thanks.
Jiayala: Not to rain on your moment but we’re getting late for class.

During their third year Suraj’s dad got sick and Suraj and to transfer out needed treatment in the US so he was shifting back home to help his Mother out. This left Ranveer alone to finish though Jiayala and him were good friends. All were wrapped up in their own lives and three years have passed. There was limited interaction but not in the 2 past year.

Ranveer had his mother had the Dixit sisters to keep them busy. It’s not that he doesn’t love his Dad though it seems like he favors his mother more… it’s just he doesn’t trust women outside of his family. [You’’ll find out Suraj’s story later from him]

Ranveer comes out of his flashback with his and Suraj’s promise.
END OF SCENE 2 EPISODE 4

[naaz123]

He, he...I thought your flashbacks were really cute! I can't wait to see ke Suraj kya rang dikhayega. I guess from earlier, he's going to try to pataofy his bhabhi (Raashi)? Let's get Ranveer jealous and out of Sanyaasi mode. Then he can focus on married life a little and leave Bani alone for a while. That would give Jai and bani time to reconnect.
Well, between coughs I'm going to try to write some more. Writing is becoming addictive. My son's finally sleeping it's almost 11!!!!:mad: and so I can finally get to "work". :) Catchya on the flip side!
Naaz

[awall21]

Yea man! Well there is a twist b/c of Suraj's promise to Ranveer who will later have conflicting wishes now... then we have Aditya who asks him to help him out... this will be in suraj's flashback before he goes to talk to Ranveer. I'll have their conversation so you guys have a better understanding of what he wants down... and well remember I said he lived with his Massi..... yea that was foreshawdowing buddy!!!

Yo what is Aditya's last name in the show, did they ever mention?
How's the name G-all-Aa (thats how you pronounce Jiayala?... maybe I'll go back and change the name to Avantika..hmm? unless that will confuse you...
Dude, does Suraj say dude a lot. I thought it would be comic relief and well he says it in about every line....

Honestly I was so wrapped up in Grey's Anatomy last night and well straightening my hair for tonight, I have a friends birthday tonight, that I wrote nothing for bani's flashback.

I'm thinking of making Abhi a cross personality of Jai/Pushkar... b/c is an awesome damn good friend and Jai's understanding realtionship crap, good looks, and talking with the eyes thing... kinda like the perfect dude, just imagine. It's time for Jai to get a little jealous esp with everything that happened with Roshni and now supposedly with Pia... like I said Abhi won't cause any misunderstanding, Jai will do that on his own.

Well gotta go... later days and have a great weekend!

I'll brainstorm a little during lunch today and try to come up with some ideas.

[naaz123]

Hey Anita,
Did you realize we've both crossed the 100 mark in our posts? Over a hundred posts, my gosh!!! It's all good though.
You know, I really like the name Jia. I was gonna name Riya that, but felt that I like Riya even more. Avantika is nice too, but then what would they call her for short? Vanti, vantu, avanti, teeku? I will leave it up to you as both names are good.
I also wondered what Aditya's last name was since in one epidsode, someone called Jigs - Mrs. Walia. I commented on how not only does Aditya have no back bone and live in his wife's brother's house, but he adopted that last name too? And then I thought, maybe Jigs just never changed her last name, being the saucy witch that she is.
Well, don't worry about not writing. I didn't think I was going to write yesterday since I'm so pooped, but lo and behold, there I was, fingered glued to the keyboard (well, u know what I mean). But if it wasn't for my laptop, it wouldn't have happened. Well, that's all for now. U have a great weekend and a fun bday party.
Naaz:p

[awall21]

Well I would say Avi or maybe even Vinny though that one might be a little stretch...... well I'll use the name Avantika for Abhi's love interest later... can't leave him hanging :p

LAter days!

[awall21]

EPISODE 5
SCENE 1 ACT 1 FLASHBACK

Bani and Abhi met at college in their last year. Abhi was an architect major and Bani went to school for civil engineering. They never met before this b/c Bani just transferred into this school because it was closer to her job, she was getting a scholarship here also. Abhi was the campus playboy, unlike Suraj, he actually did have a few girlfriends at the same time which did cause some scenes. Bani being Bani never really paid attention as she was a commuter and just went to class and later went to her part time job at Mehra and Mehra Industries, fyi this is a construction firm. Their paths first crossed at café when she had to go to an architect's office.

In this fan fic we are going to pretend Pia is going to school for hotel management, while Rano who is smart skipped one year and is in the same university as Pia, Rano is going for finance and accounting. Bani is in her final year at an engineering college. All are their on scholarships. Her job pays for to run the household and stuff. Her father does work, but sometimes some of the money goes for the booze. So your basic middle class as Jigyays always reminds them.

College...
Abhi and his friend Karan are chilling out at the student lounge when three angry girls are approaching them.
Karan: Abhi woh dekh, tu toh gaya kam se aaj…
Abhi Shit yaar, they don’t look to happy either.
Karan: No shit Sherlock, you think? Come on what you expect when you are simultaneously dating three friends. Koi akal bhi hai, usually its girls at other schools, par tu bhi naa… tu toh gaya aaj.
Abhi: Thanks for the vote of confidence man….um, hi girls what’s going on?
Kajal: Don’t you hi girls us, you jerk, how dare date me and two of my friends.
Twinkle: [imitating Abhi’s voice] “Let’s keep it a secret; I don’t want your friends to be jealous because I know they have a crush on me.”
Leela: Yeah same thing he said to me too! Why did you do this?
Abhi: Well yea three together are the perfect girl. Kajal I like your body, Twinkle I like your personality, and Leela I like you intelligence.:eek:
Karen: Yaar tujhe mazak sujh ra hai…
Twinkle: You have got some nerve…
Leela: Abhi tu kabhi nahi sudre ga, forget you, your not worth it. Let’s go girls.
Abhi: Hey your loss!
Kajal: I have never been insulted like this, I hope someone comes along and teaches you a good lesson.
Twinkle: You played us girls and god knows how many more, watch your back b/c one of these days you’ll get what’s coming to you.
Karen: Thank god they left; I was worried ke tu aaj unki sandles se pite ga. Damn that was a close one.
Abhi: Yea I know, come on let’s get out of here.
Karan: Sounds like a plan, lets go to the Cool Coffee off campus, I’m afraid to run into any more of your girlfriends.
Abhi: Don’t worry that was the last of them, so I’m single… well at least for now.;)
Karan: Yaar you’re too much, chal you’re buying.

SCENE 1 ACT 2
@ Cool Coffee
Karan: Hi, I’ll have an iced caramel macchiato.
Abhi: I’ll have white chocolate mocha thanks.
Waitress: That will be 195 rupees.
Abhi: Here you go, keep the change.
Waitress: Thanks just wait here a moment.
The move aside and check out a few girls in the corner while behind them.
Waitress: miss, what can I get you?
Bani: Hi, mujhe ek cup chai chaiye.
Waitress: Kis type ke, vanilla, cinnamion, choc, etc.
Bani: Uh, sirf chai, you know pani, pathi, dhood aur 2 chumach chine…
Abhi: not turning around to see who it is says] Madam, en auntie ko apke jaise purane zamane wali type ke chai chaiye.
Bani: [softly cuz now cuz she feels out of place] Sorry, I’m new to a coffee shop of this sort and have no idea what any of those long names mean…
Waitress: Its okay, 45 rupees beta.
Bani: Here you go thanks.
Waitress: You’re welcome! Here you are gentlemen.
Bring out the guys drinks, they turn around and see Bani.
Abhi: Helloooooo beautiful, what would you like to have… my treat.
Bani: Thank you par is auntie ne already woh purane zamanne wali chai order karle hai, maybe next time.
Waitress: Miss your order.
Abhi’s face pales :eek: and realizes that he just called this gorgeous girl an auntie, Bani leaves him speechless with his mouth open and walks out.
Karen: yaar mujhe laagta hai ke aaj to tere din he nahi hai. But wow man she was a looker…
Abhi: Yea I know, I got to find out who she is I don’t even know here name.

SCENE 1 ACT 3
@Mehra and Mehra, Bani is smiling as she is sipping her chai thinking about the look on the guys face when she turned around.
Manish: So was he cute?
Bani: Ji, kyon? :o
Manish: The guy you are thinking about….
Bani: Nothing like that sir [she recounts what happened at Cool Coffee] you should have seen his face. But yea the guy was cute but didn’t seem to have a personality. Seemed arrogant too…
Manish: Wah Bani theen minute ke mulakat mein toh tum ne bhooth kuch janliya. You’re just the girl to put him in his place. You should go back there maybe you’ll see him again.
Bani: That’s quite alright sir, I’ll just go to a place near to find a normal chai ke dukhan, this one had all these long names and plus it’s so out of the way. I only went in b/c I had to drop something off at the architects.
Manish: Whatever you say Bani, whatever you say. [She’ll find out real soon that that’s the only place that serves a decent cup of chai.]
END SCENE 1

[naaz123]

He, he...that was cute how Bani was so simple back then too. The dating 3 girls reminded me of the movie Garam Masala. That was a funny movie! :) I'm glad your fan fic hasn't caught up to the show in India yet, because it is still bakwas. I've stopped watching again and just gloss thru the written updates. Anu doesn't even look pregnant, and yet she supposedly gave birth today. Whatever!!! Anyway...keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more!!!
Naaz

[awall21]

Mmm chai... I like ginger tea epecailly if I have a cold.

Yea of all the updates to read, I read the one where the baby dies so I'm very upset about that. :( :mad: I was under the impression as karva chouth approached, Jai and Bani would make up. Oct 10 is a week away,:confused: I guess someone let me know if this happends b/c I can alway backtrack then and watch the episodes I need to. I'm sorry to say I have written this show off till it gets better.

Basically I will be writing my fan fic for this show to feel better about this show. I'll post the more of episode 5 later when I get home (6pm EST.)

Later days!

[awall21]

EPISODE 5 SCENE 2 ACT 1

Cool Coffee 2 weeks later
Bani: Good morning: Ek cup chai please.
Waitress: Beta tum, let me guess purani wale zamanne ke chai.
Bani: Ji haan auntie.
Waitress: Bhooth dino se dekhi nahi.
Bani: Woh kya hai auntie, use din mujhe yaha kuch kaam tha isle, waise yeh mere kaam ke paas bhi nahi hai, its out of the way, but the places near my work place don’t have serve a decent cup of chai.
Waitress: That’s true. Beta ek bath bolu?
Bai : Ji...
Waitress: Woh lardka tum bohut dino se dhoond raha hai. Jab bhi atah hai poocha tha hai tumhare bare mein. Ek mulakat mein tumne use bhooth impress kardiya.
Bani: :o [Surprised that the guy inquired about her, figures he wanted to apologize.] Well Auntie if you see him you can let him know that I forgave him for his comment. Look at the time; I have 20 minutes to get to class on time! Here you go 50 rupeess, please keep the change.
Waitress: Thanks and I’ll pass the message on!

SCENE 2 ACT 2
A little bit later at Cool Coffee
Abhi: I can feel it Karan, today is the day that I’m gonna see her again.
Karan: :rolleyes: Man you say that everyday!
Abhi: No man, I really mean it today. Hi, we’ll take our usual. [They had come in so much the waitress/auntie knew their order by now] Karen it’s your turn to buy.
Waitress: Beta tum! You just missed her; she had to rush out for class.
Abhi: Damn, all because of you Karen.
Karan: Me! Give me a break Abhi, this girl is making you crazy.:D
Abhi: [To the waitress] did she say anything to you?
Waitress: She said she isn’t from this area, she had to drop something at an architect near by, and this is the only place that serves a decent purani wale zamanne ke chai, that and she forgave you for your comment and that she had to run to class.
Abhi: Thank you so much!
Karan: Chal tu use yaad to hai at least, but how do we find her from here.
Waitress: She mentioned she had 20 minutes to get to class anytime… so you boys know any school 20 min away.:confused:
Karan: Well only ours and you said architect right…
Abhi: That’s it! She goes to the same school as us, damn then why haven’t we ever seen her must be engineering major.
Karan: Who cares lets go, we’ll check to see what classes are held today at this time and we’ll stake them out. We’ll know by the end of the week.
Abhi: Brilliant, here's the money for the order and thanks! Wohooooo! Here I come beautiful.

END SCENE 2

Keep an eye out for scene 3, 4, and 5 for episode 5. Will post another scene on Sunday. Have a great weekend to all the reader active and silent.

LAter days!

[naaz123]

Hey Anita,
Unfortunately, u and me are each other's only active members. I did get one PM about something else and they mentioned that they read my story. Why oh why do u think people don't say anything? It really bothers me for some reason. Oh well. have a good weekend!
Naaz

[malik19]

Hey Anita,
Unfortunately, u and me are each other's only active members. I did get one PM about something else and they mentioned that they read my story. Why oh why do u think people don't say anything? It really bothers me for some reason. Oh well. have a good weekend!
Naaz

Hey, i read your stories and i really like them....so don't worry.....ur doing a great job..keep it up.;)

[naaz123]

YAY!!! Someone other than me or Anita wrote something. WOOOOOO HOOOOO! I'm so happy. Thanks, malik19, for saying something. I hope you continue to comment 'cuz we love to hear what others have to say. Thanks, again!
Naaz
Hey, i read your stories and i really like them....so don't worry.....ur doing a great job..keep it up.;)

[awall21]

Thanks so much for posting a comment. I appreciate it :D ! I'll post the next scene tomorrow for you guys tomorrow.

I'm keeping my fingers crossed for KS this coming week, I really miss watching the show and of course Jai aka Ram Kappoor:rolleyes: Hmmm, i need a guy like that my age.

Where are all the nice guys man, they say they finish last but hello its the same with nice girls!!!!

Have a great weekend and of course as always later days!

[naaz123]

Hey Anita,
Can't wait to read more. Will see ya here tomorrow then! Byeeeeeeee.
Naaz

[awall21]

EPISODE 5 SCENE 3

Later that week at college...
Karan: Face it man, she doesn’t go here and we have been to more classes in this one week than we have been to all year.
Abhi: No man there’s only a few more left. Look class is letting out.
Karan: Come on man we’re wasting our time, she’s not….

Bani is coming out of class looking at her watch, she has a 3pm meeting with an architect in regards to the new project doesn’t see Abhi in front of her and crashes right into him.

Abhi: Helloooooooo beautiful.
Bani: Tum! :eek:
Abhi: Ji haan mein.
Bani: Mein aap ke le kuch kar sak the hoon, mein jaaldhi mein hoon.
Abhi: Please mujhe apna naam baathou.
Bani: Naam to paatha hai
Abhi: Paatha hai?:confused:
Bani: Hain Auntie, duh! Byeeee! [Races calling TAXI as she reaches the corner stop. Abhi races after her and as she gets into the cab gets in with her]
Bani: Yaar koi zabardasthi hai kya?
Abhi: Nahi, paar mujhe Cool Coffee jaana hai, jo use architect ke pass hai jahah tum ko jaana hai.
Bani: Wah, tum detective ho kya, puri information ke saath aaye ho.
Taxi Driver: Are apne bathe baandh karo aur bolo ke kahah jaana hai!
Bani: Grand Plaza and 2nd Ave, aur jaaldi.
Abhi: Okay ab bhi naraaz ho kya, chalo sorry, maine bina dehke tumhe aunite bola tha. Mera naam Abhi, I’m a third year management major, a scorpion, I like long walks on a beach…
Bani: Bhagwan, mute button kahah hai? I’ll forgive you if you will please shut up. [silence for the next 30 sec] Hello, kuch toh bolo!
Abhi: What you said you’d forgive me if I’d shut up.
Bani: Oh yea… :o
Abhi: Toh naam?
Bani: Bani, ab kush?
Abhi: Bani, beautiful name for a beautiful girl…so are you free Saturday night to go to the movie?
Bani: Wow you’re a fast one, I barely know you and you think I’m gonna go out with you.
Abhi: Look I’m not asking you to be my wife, :rolleyes: well not yet, but there’s no harm in making a new friend right? And how are you going to get to knowme if you don’t hang out with me.
Bani: True, do you always have to get the last word in? Really in that case you can pay the fare, gotta run. Thanks.
Abhi: Bye beautiful!
Taxi Driver: Hello, paise toh deh doh.!
Abhi: Here you go.

END SCENE 3

as always later days...

[naaz123]

Bani, in this scene reminds me of the way Prachi is in those tv interviews with Ram Kapoor. You know the one where she says "Woteva". It was so desi, but so cute! Hmmm...I really wanna know why these two don't end up together and why he shows up at the party. Can't wait!!!
Hey, u know there was a show on Sony today and it had Amey Date and Meenal in it! I would've called u to let u know if I had yr #. If I would've just come on here, I'd have found u. :mad: Oh well. It was an awesome show called Thodi Khushi Thodi Gham. Did u see it? Ok, gotta go. See ya on the flip side!
Naaz

[awall21]

Happy Dusherra....

I have class tonight after work, so I can't update tonight, but will tomorrow. Don't worry I covered all your questions. I did not watch the show you mentioned.

I know what you mean about Bani and now that Abhi is back you will see more of this old Bani come out, well at least the sarcasm and she is gonna give Jail Wailia and anyone else that messes with her a run for their lives....... muahahah (evil laugh) wait and watch.. okay in this case read ;)

Later days!

[awall21]

Abhi and Bani become really close friends really fast. They meet up at Cool Coffee during their breaks from work. Bani got him a job at the architects place. He wasn’t a bad kid after all, he just needed some guidance; he only has his father who was always traveling away on business. Both know about each others past and how hard it is to grow up without a mother. Each play a big role in each others lives. Abhi is your upper middle class guy just like Bani, okay compared to Jai Wailia probably not, but in Mount Abu hell yes, remember Bani’s house??? Light bulb moment, yea it was big. Okay continuing each is a good influence on the other, Abhi respects girls now, treats them well, he even pays attention in school. Bani learns to live a little, goes out to the movies, dinners, and parties, has a childhood of a sort with Abhi. Through Bani’s fathers’ drunken scenes and Abhi’s loneliness they are there for each other; Abhi and Bani are each others rock.

SCENE 4
Natural progression of their relationship leads to them dating. 6 months later both have now graduated; both are working fulltime and moving on up in their firms. (We will pretend that this is where she worked when the serial started and yea her dad knows about it.) Rano and Pia are taking summer classes, Pia has half year left now, but Rano still has 1 year with her double major. (Hence once their dad died why Pia didn’t go to school and Rano does when they go to Mumbai… let’s pretend)

Karan: Hey Bani, how’s it going?
Bani: Not to bad, so everything ready for the engagement tonight.
Karan: Yea Abhi went to make sure everything is set. I’m so nervous.
Bani: Yaar fikhar maat kar yaar, mein or Abhi haan na, besides the poor girl loves you as much as you love her so she won’t leave you at the mandap.;)
Karan: That’s true, when are you two going to take the plunge. You guys are so sad to watch but then also cute…always finishing each others thoughts, you’re so chummy.:D
Bani: Karan, phir wohi baath, you know the tensions going on right now. Uncle isn’t feeling well so all the responsibilities are on Abhi and Papa ke tabiet bhi dheele hai to ghar ke sarie zimadaree mere hi saar phar hai.
Karan: I know man sorry I brought it up.:(
Abhi: Hellooooooo beautiful :o ...Abhi, whats happening guys?
Karan: Just waiting for you.
Bani: Everything set for tonight?
Abhi: Yea, let’s go we need to get ready and then meet Uncle and Auntie for the engagement. Oh the wedding date is set for 8 months from now.
Bani: Yea lets go!
Karan: Meet you guys there.

END SCENE 4

[malik19]

hey,
i like these stories more than the actual drama this means u all r doing a great job, keep it up!!

Take care

[awall21]

Thanks Malik I agree with you. the storyline is utter garbage, glad to provide an alternate avenue for the story. I will post the last scene for this episode when I get back tonight.

Later days!

[awall21]

EPISODE 5 SCENE 5
Engagement was probably where Bani and Abhi’s relationship was going to be headed but fate had a different path for them. Abhi dad was real sick and he took him to the states for his treatment. Bani’s dad was getting more out of control with his drinking habits and even started gambling.

Cool Coffee
Abhi: I have to take Dad to the states for medical treatments. I hate having to leave you like this. [thinking : We should get married and all of them come with me.]
Bani: [reading his thoughts] No I can’t let you do that you’ll be busy taking care of your dad you don’t need more pressure.
Abhi: Damn it, I’m asking you to be my wife not baggage:D , well at least not until you get old and I have to carry you everywhere.
Bani: Abhi tu kabhi nahi sudhare ga… :rolleyes:
Abhi: I’m going to keep worrying about you while I’m out there.
Bani: Don’t worry I can take care of…
Abhi: [reading her thoughts] …everything and that I should take care of uncle. Bani I don’t know how long I’m gonna be away though, what if you find someone better and get married to him, mera kya hoga.
Bani: Well if I find someone better, then can you blame me? Plus I’ll help you find someone better than me. Deal?:p
Abhi: Deal? I’m going to miss you so much I’ll never forget you, if it’s meant to be it’s meant to be.
Bani: Hey at least let me get one chance to get the last word in! I’ll never forget you either. You’ll always be a part of me and hold a special place in my heart. You’re my first friend, love, everything and…
Abhi: yea I love you too.
Bani: Jeez you never let me get the last word.
Abhi: Okay, okay next time okay… let’s head out.
Bani: Let’s just say bye from here, I don’t think either of us can handle. Bye and take care of yourself.
Abhi: Same to you… bye beautiful.:(

They part ways. After that um lets say a month later everything spiraled out of control and that’s where our show started and brought up to the theej episode where my fan fic starts. Thanks so much for reading Naaz, Malik too and all the silent readers. I really appreciate your guy’s interest.

END EPISODE 5

[awall21]

EPISODE 6 SCENE 1 FLASHBACK

Suraj’s flashback conversation with Aditya and how he knew Suraj was coming to town cuz I'm sure you all were wondering.
Aditya: Hello kaun?
Suraj: I’m the terror that flaps in the night, main who kaun? (I really liked the Dark Wing Duck cartoon when I was little, hehe Disney Afternoon)
Aditya: Oye mera Shensha(Liked this movie a lot too), where were you hiding all this time? Do you know what has happened in all this time? Did you talk to Ranveer yet?
Suraj: Uncle, hold on hold on, are you going to let me talk. I know it’s been a while and no I haven’t been hiding. Dad just got better that’s why I have finally come back just in time for Veer’s birthday. I’m going to give him the surprise of his life.
Aditya: Surprise, acha surprise toh mein tumhe doonga.
Suraj: Toh bolo uncle.
Aditya: Ranveer ke shaadhi hogi.
Suraj: Kya.!!!!
Aditya: Haan aur bolo ghar kab arra hai?
Suraj: Ranveer ke birthday par, uski shaadhi hogi? [THINKING: my god what the hell have I missed, I really need to talk to Veer]
Aditya: Yea shaadhi hogi aur chal tuh ghar aaja, agle hafte ghar pe theej ke party pe zaroor ajaa na.
Suraj: Okay uncle I’ll be bringing my friend Abhi with me.
Aditya: Yeh Abhi kaun hai?
Suraj: Hum dono ke Dad ek he hospital mein treatment hoya tah. Uncle hume meeting mein janna hai, mein baadh phone karunga. (Small world huh, that's how he and Abhi met, their fathers were roomates.)
Aditya: Bye.

Suraj is thinking holy crap Veer ke shaadhi hogi, I have to help him get out of this mess… I promised him. I need to talk about him about this beforehand though a lot has changed since we have been apart, I have changed and maybe he has changed his mind or I can help him change his mind about this. Love can changes everything… and if it doesn’t then I know what I need to do

What our friend doesn’t know is that at helping his friend out it will cost someone else he cares for a lot of pain if he’s successful...

SCENE 2

Suraj and Abhi are on their way to the Wailia house.
Abhi: Yaar are you sure they won’t mind me tagging along.
Suraj: Dude, tension maath le, I told you that’s my second home. While I was studying in here staying with Massi I spent most of my time in this house.
Abhi: Okay I don’t need to hear this story again; I have heard it many times. Let’s just get this party over with I need to get back to Mount Abu.
Suraj: Don’t get smart with me dude and yea I can’t wait to see your friend Bani either but how are you going to tell her…(yep knows all about them just as Abhi knows all about the Wailia's)
Abhi: I’ll worry about that later.
Ring Ring, Ring Ring… Suraj’s cell phone rings. The called ID shows that Aditya Uncle on the phone.
Suraj: Hello uncle.
Aditya: Oye Shensha, kaise hai tuh? Tuh arra hai naa?
Suraj: Ji, hum raste mein he hai.
Aditya: I need you to help me in a matter. I need your help in making Ranveer jealous by flirting with his wife. I know he has a strong opinion in not marrying and I’ll have to give you the details later, but please I really need your help. He listens to you.
Suraj: Okay uncle I will try my best [THINKING: I planned on convincing him of the same, maybe this might work, but if it doesn’t… I made a promise] We will talk once we get to the party.
Aditya: Okay beta, see you later.

END EPISODE 6

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No class or work today due to Columbus day, nicceee! I think I tied everything together well so far, if you guys notice any loose ends along the way let me know, I'll take care of them. Thanks and feedback is always appreciated!

[naaz123]

Ah, so Abhi and Suraj are friends. Very good! Everything is starting to make sense! I hope things work out for Ranveer and Raashi in your fan fic since they're basically non existent lately on the real show. I can just see Aditya when he's talking in your script. You nail the characters very well. Keep it up!
Naaz

[naaz123]

Hey Anita,
You've reached the 1000 "viewed" mark! Wooooo hoooo! Let's say I've viewed your fan fic about 100 times (which is definitely more than I've viewed), that means that it's been viewed 900 times by other people!!! I think that means you're doing something right! Yay, this is cause for a celebration! Congrats!!!
Naaz

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[awall21]

Aww thanks buddy! I know I have class Mon and Wed and don't usually post but with Monday off I was able to post and write some extra....... so I will post the next part when I get home from work today before class.

Talk to you later!

[awall21]

EPISODE 7 SCENE 1

After the dance scene Suraj guns straight for Ranveer and walks over as Ranveer is just in shock that he can’t believe is Suraj is here and remembers the promise he took from Suraj. Ranveer is thankful that he’ll have someone to get him out of this marriage problem [well at least for now…just wait till the fireworks guys…]

Suraj: Veer, how’s it going dude? Long time, naw?
Ranveer: Suri, mere yaar, tuh to pura baadla wa dihk ra hai par ab toh ye dude bolna band kar.:p
Suraj: You call me a grown man, but still call me Suri, phir Suraj bol na.
Ranveer: Never par tuh mere gale to lag jaa. [They have a bear hug,awww]
Suraj: Let’s go grab a drink, we need to catch up on long times.
Ranveer: Yea you’re definitely gonna need it by the time we’re done, a lot has happened in your absence man.
Suraj: It seems so why don’t you tell me what I missed.

Ranveer tells him of how the Dixit sisters came from Mount Abu, ruined their lives (yea right more like the other way around.), want their money, how Pia left Jai Mamaji at the mandap, Ma got him married to Bani, Rano and Saahil issue on how he had to get married to Raashi, blah blah blah… Suraj already knows about the Dixit sisters from Abhi and is surprised on what he’s hearing from Ranveer, Suraj realizes that his friend has changed but not for the better, and has become a bitter cynical man. :( He knows that Ranveer will call in his promise in breaking up his marriage. Suraj doesn’t know how to tell him that Raashi is his Massi’s daughter :eek: (yup) that we was staying with while he was studying. Figures for now he shouldn’t say anything to Ranveer on this matter. (We will pretend that Raashi and Rohits parents got divorced and moved them to London while their Mom stayed in India. Rohit wanted to do college in India and Raashi was only brought back for the wedding ordeal.) Suraj had to figure out if this was what Raashi wanted, if she wanted out then no problem, but if she didn’t, he would do what he could but ultimately help Ranveer. He knew if Ranveer experienced love he would be okay, Suraj just lost as what to do plus Aditya Uncle had also asked him to help.

Ranveer: Suri I need you to get me out of this marriage, but I can’t break the marriage because it will affect Anu. I need you to make Raashi look bad so I have reason to break this marriage.
Suraj: Okay dude, I just got her let me get an idea of what the hell is going on and then we’ll move forward from there, for now let’s just chill out okay.
Ranveer: Thanks yaar, I know you would understand, I have missed you yaar.
Suraj: Me too dude, me too. :)

END SCENE 1

[naaz123]

So Suraj and Raashi are cousins? I was almost sure it would be Jai's maasi. We'll there can be more than one maasi, right? Even my story is full of masi's. No chachi's or bua's. Just masi's, he he....I think the effect of mother's sister is different. I'm really excited about what will happen next. Any chance Ranveer will become all jealous and good? I sure hope so! I'm not sure why I missed your post yesterday. Hmmmmmm? I'm glad you're doing better. It rained all day yesterday and now there's actually a litte bit of snow on the ground! Not a lot, just here and there. Kinda like powdered sugar. YUKKKKKKKKKK! I hate snow! Ok, that's all for now. :)
Naaz

[awall21]

Nope it's not Jai's Massi! This way since they are cousins they can be really close and well Ranveer will do the math all wrong everytime :D, but in the end be okay when he realizes their relationship.

Plus it would be odd because it you think about it Suraj would be related to Ranveer by being his Mama... (I know everyone calls her Massi but you get what I mean!):confused: That's just too much confusion.

What you don't like the snow:eek: , I love the snow!!!!! WINTER is my favorite season. :rolleyes: Hmm hot chocolate with marshmallows, cuddling up with a comfy blanket and a nice book, soooooooo love it!

Well time for lunch, talk to you later!

LATER DAYS!

[awall21]

I need to know because if not then I don't want to waste my time writing, especially when I barely find the time to write, you know? I can spend the extra time on the other threads where people actually visit and comment. I mean if I wanted to talk to myself I don't really want to have to document it in writing for the world to see....:D

[naaz123]

Hey there. You know if writing has become a chore rather than a passion, you might as well give it up until you get more inspiration. If you'd rather not write about KS, maybe you can dabble in something else, whenever you get time. You definitely have writing skills and always hold my interest, so please don't give it up entirely! I swear, the people that are reading this day after day or week after week are really rude. You know they're coming back to read, but they just don't comment. If they're not registered users, I mean how hard is it for them to register? It takes 30 seconds! It's kind of a morale beater when no one says anything!!! Well, whatever you decide, I'll supoort ya and definitely anticipate something new from you whenever you get around to it! Good luck!

[awall21]

EPISODE 7 SCENE 2

Abhi has Rano, Saahil, Pia, and Pushkar come up to him. He is in shocked to see Pia and Rano married and doing so well especially since he knew how things were when he left. Wonders if Bani is around too, but he lets Rano and Pia introduce their husbands. He hits it off with both Saahil and Pushkar immediately, but he wants to talk to Bani.

Abhi: Okay guys now that we have gone through all these introductions and I have met all of you and for sure we can talk later but I need to know if Bani is here… I have something important to discuss with her.

His question is met with pin drop silence as no one knows what to say or how to tell him that Bani is now married… and her being pregnant would just be a low blow.

Abhi: Um hello, did I just say something or was I speaking in my head is Bani here?:confused:
Rano: Woh Bhaiya di…

Just then Abhi feels Bani's presence behind him and turns around. (Guys think K3G) In a trance, just move past everyoneand walks towards her. She is talking to Raashi. As he's walking he notices ever detail about her, hello the man's an architect, she looks weak, even though she's laughing she seems sad and stressed. He also notices the sindoor and mangalsutra is shocked but for some reason relieved at the same time.

Bani who was helping Raashi get dressed in the back after her performance didn't see Abhi at the party, but as she was laughing when Raashi was telling about her falling into Suraj's arms and Ranveer's face. Raashi is telling Bani that he's her cousin and her Mom had raised him. She lived with her Dad who had gotten custody, but she was always away at boarding school because her Dad didn't know what to do with her. She never actually met Suraj until she went to college in the states. (I so hope all this adds up with what I said about Suraj, it has obviously been a while;) )

Raashi tell Bani she is gonna go catch up with Suraj and leaves from there. Bani for some reason thinks back to her time with Abhi and feels like he's right there. She knows it just her imagination but picks her head up at the same and is stunned. At the same time Jai wants to talk to Bani and see's that Raashi has just left her and starts walking towards her.

Bani see's Abhi and both of their eyes are brimming with tears. Bani starts walking towards Abhi, doesn't even see Jai, walks past him straight into Abhi's arms.

Bani: Abhi…
Abhi: Helloooo beautiful, long time no see.:D

Jai stops in his tracks and has a blank expression and then his eyes cloud and is very angry.:mad:

END SCENE 2

[naaz123]

The prospect of jealous husbands is so intriguing! I love it!!! Maybe I should use yr strategy on my own hubby. Hmmmmm...where am I gonna get an Abhi or Suraj though? Ha ha..just kidding. I think everything fits in just found and there aren't any loose connections or missing data (then your story would be just like Ekta's, now wouldn't it?). I like the K3G reference. That scene is awesome! Well, I have to say that I'm really glad that you decided to write more. It's a lot more fun than reading the written updates for KS. Thanks!

[awall21]

Well I'm not sure if I should continue or not but I will post the next scene to close out the episode. What do you guys say: continue or stop?

I have already started writing so I should be posting either later tonight or some time tomorrow.

[naaz123]

Hey Anita,
Long time no talk. How are ya? We're doing ok. Both Zain and I were feeling pretty decent on Saturday, and then we went to an Eid party and got worse. :mad: But we're not as bad as last time. (Thank God!)

About HK (My fan fic)...well, I always said when I was complaining about KS that the love interests should not doubt each other. The story can continue by outside forces making things wrong. The two lovers should not have problems within themselves that are not solvable. U know what I mean? So that's why the mother is now tang ardao-ing (meddling). So here's a new problem and hopefully our characters will be able to emerge from it stronger in their relationship. Or maybe not. Let's see!

OK...so, being your biggest fan, I'd say that I'd love to read more. Unlike Ekta and her writers, you listen to what your "viewers" want. But hey, like I've said before, if it's a chore now and u've got better things to occupy your time, then no problems, no worries. Maybe you could dabble into some other type of writing or not at all. Whatever u decide is fine by me. (Just remember, if u do write, I'll definitely read it!) Ok, that's all for now. Oh, btw, I created a new thread called Tasveer Humari, Geet Tumhaare. Please go check it out! Thanks,
Naaz

[awall21]

Naaz! Lol thanks for commenting as usual, I duly note and appreciate the time you take to post a comment. Glad to know that you and your son are feeling better.

I find it ironic when other members wonder why the threads are dying....its cuz you dont share your thoughts and then other people don't have anything to respond to. Come on make an effort; this makes me almost want to go join another forum but what can I say I'm loyal to my old KS buddies here, but even I'm starting to feel dejected.

The count is Continue 1 vs. Not Continue 0

I'm about to vote myself and change that 0 to a 1:p , but don't worry Naaz I'll still write, just probably won't make the effort to post. I mean if you can't evoke a response, might as well join em' you know.

So I went shopping again on Saturday, but that was mostly for my lil sister... but I still manged to walk about with a purchase:D . I still need to go back though...hehe I can't help myself, I'm an emotional shopper (not to be confused with impulsive)!!!

It's so sad but I have barely done an hours work all day so far and its almost noon.....:eek: yikes my boss just walked in, GOTTA GO, will check out your new thread soon..........

[awall21]

Recap: Bani see's Abhi and both of their eyes are brimming with tears. Bani starts walking towards Abhi, doesn't even see Jai, walks past him straight into Abhi's arms.

Bani: Abhi…
Abhi: Helloooo beautiful, long time no see.

Jai stops in his tracks and has a blank expression and then his eyes cloud and is very angry.


EPISODE 7 SCENE 3 ACT 1

Jai can't bear to see this and just walks away because he doesn't want to cause a scene especially when this is a rare moment of happiness in his house in the past month since Bani has walked out... just imagine. (By the way incase if you are wondering if she found a job yet it's no; Bani can't find a job anywhere b/c Jai has put it out there anyone who hires his wife he'll destroy.. isn’t he such a sweetheart! Yea it’s a stretch but just imagine, this is fiction! The companies either tell her that they are not hiring or that the job is high stress and they cannot hire a pregnant employee due to endangerment.)

Jai makes a plan to find Bani later this week and reason with her that she can't stay with Pushkar and Pia and not to be a burden. He knows she won't stand for being a burden on them and this will definitely leave her no option and bring her back to him no matter how much she hates him at the moment. Aww he knows exactly how his wife works, so understanding nah?

Bani leaving the house cannot be good for the baby. Bani need to understand that it was an accident, it wasn't his fault and he didn't do it on purpose. There was no visibility and he never saw her mom on the road.

God when is this party going to be over :mad: … just leaves to his room and drink away to oblivion.

END SCENE 3 ACT 1


ACT 2

Bani: Tum bilkul nahi badale, abhi bhi wohi line... God I missed you so much.
Abhi: Hey I’m only speaking the truth and I missed you just as much babe.:o
Bani: Tum Rano aur Pia se mile? Unho ne kuch kaha… [says the next part really rushed] you can obviously tell I’m married, I’m sorry if you think that I didn’t wait for you, everything happened so quick after you left I think I’m still can’t grasp everything…
Abhi: Easy...come on yaar, zindagi kabhi aise halat peda karte hai ke agar chate hi bhi, kuch nahi ho pata ta. And yea I know you think I’m stupid, but itna bhi nahi. By the way you kinda have this glowing look that screams I’m married and ur defn pregnant… your happiness is now what is questionable…
Bani: Arre wah kitne understanding, intuitive, aur smart hogaye! Kya bath hai, lagta hai experience se bol rahe ho, haina?
Abhi: Hey!! :p No need to be sarcastic aur haan your right I’m also married and my wife is expecting also. I was actually scared in meeting you but now relieved. Oh yea and I already met Pia and Rano, they seem totally happy and totally in love.
Bani: Haha yea... sweetheart listen I have been gone a while and before anyone comes looking for me, I need to head back. Otherwise there will be too many questions that come up that I don't want to answer right now. Let’s go the party is ending anyways
Abhi: Yeah we should get together soon, theen din baad milte hai phir... mujhe Delhi mai kuch kaam hai.
Bani: It’s a date... handsome...:D
Abhi: Wow first time you got the last line babe, I’m impressed.
Bani: Told ya next time we’d meet it would be my turn.

They share a hug and a kiss and Abhi leaves waves quickly to Suraj and heads out. Bani heads over to Rano and Saahil and tells Pia and Pushkar that she’s gonna head back to the guest house they all say their byes and also leave with her.

END SCENE 3 ACT 2

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Hey incase you guys find this too be a stretch, a few things in mind... 1) I need to get this story moving along, 2) plus Abhi and Bani have a perfect understanding of each other. They are soulmates... and in my book soulmates don't always equate to spouses. 3) These two are not drama creating people; I think we have enough of those already in the show and I already said that Abhi was not here to cause problems, but help Bani.

Let me know what you guys think.

[naaz123]

Oh wow! I didn't know Abhi was going to be married and expecting too!!! What a shocker that one was! Way to go! I really want the world's longest running party (so long it's almost in the guiness book of world records!) to end too and I want to see how abhi is going to help and what's gonna happen between Raashi and Ranveer...but again, it's up to you, as to what you decide (whether to continue writing or not).

Hey, I really like what u said about soulmates not having to be spouses. I think that also goes to say that u can find love more than once (at least that's what I think!) Good job! Talk to ya later! :p

[awall21]

Dudeeeeeee, lol yea this is the longest party ever... but Episode 7 has one more act and then it's finally over... If I decide to end the fan fic at least the party will have steps to rectify people's relationship and then people can imagine it out however they like. Maybe I'll write an epilouge and cap it off, not sure still debating.

Here's something for the silent readers: lvangel143@yahoo.com..... I'm sure you have email so if you don't want to join the forum to comment, drop me a line with your feedback negative or positive.. this way you don't have to put yourself out there for everyone to see. Thanks in advance.

As for soulmates, did anyone watch the series finale of Dawson's Creek... Yea I do agree you can find love more than once... but then the question I present you with is do you believe there is also a one true love out there? I would define one true love as the person you love who is also is your soulmate...no? I need to find Love for Dummies and look this stuff up.

[naaz123]

Yes, I think that everyone has a one true love, (someone they love who loves them back and is their soulmate) but unfortunately only the very lucky few find that person. :(

[awall21]

Okay so I'm still working on the ending this never ending party and it's stariing to remind me of the never ending story movie...

Anyways I was writing the end conversation between Suraj and Ranveer when I realised I had four pages now and had also written another scene with Raashi and Ranveer which had me laughing outta my seat and decided it just wouldn't be fair to not share it with you guys so I'll be posting it sometime this weekend.

Oh and thanks guys for your emails, I appreciate it!!!! Being as I have more material for another epsidode afterwards I'll just continue till I'm out of ideas or get an idea to write some more.

[naaz123]

Hey, I'm so happy you decided to write more. I can't wait to read the funny part. That will be a nice change of pace. Thanks for keeping me entertained!

[pnt_sahni89]

hi
i m new member of this site.
plz tell me how can i watch the serial on my pc .
now i want to watch kasam se of 9th nov.
can it be possible.
if yes then how?
thanx

[naaz123]

Hey please go to http://forum.indya.com/forumdisplay.php?s=&daysprune=&f=259 and look for the daily video updates page. You can find the videos there.

hi
i m new member of this site.
plz tell me how can i watch the serial on my pc .
now i want to watch kasam se of 9th nov.
can it be possible.
if yes then how?
thanx

[awall21]

Thanks Naaz! Always happy to keep someone entertained.

[awall21]

NOTE: Due to the amount of narration, the characters name will be bolded.


EPISODE 7 SCENE 4

Raashi tells Bani she’s gonna go say hi to her cousin and catch up as it’s been a while. (As Raashi has no personality in the show I’m gonna base her off of mines.);)

At the bar Suraj tries again to convince Ranveer that maybe he should give the marriage thing a shot, but Ranveer doesn’t want to ruin her life and his. He feels that Raashi would be better off with someone that loves her to which Suraj counters but what if she loves you, then what. Ranveer is stunned as how anyone could ever love someone like him...

Ranveer: Some people just aren’t deserving of love.
Suraj: Are you serious, where do you come up with this stuff! Anyways where’s your wife, I can’t wait to meet her [again… yaar Reeces I missed you so much.]

Reeces is Suraj’s nickname for Raashi…Raashi Chopra, RC so Reecee’s. Suraj sees Raashi heading his way and his mouth hangs open, Raashi is wearing a sari!!! YEAH! I know it’s unlike her b/c she is usually wearing an unflattering suit and the outfit she was wearing before had an accident (will explain later.) Ranveer sees the change in his expression and smiles.

Ranveer: I know that smile, must be some hot sexy looking chick that you see, I can do an introduction if you need it.
Suraj: You got that right dude, but I don’t need a wingman, I got this.
Ranveer: Chal mein bhi to dekhu ke ye lardki kaun hai…

He turns around is floored :eek: also seeing Raashi in a sari with a halter blouse to of all things. Ranveer tuh to gaya kam se. Suraj just sees Ranveer’s reaction and knows that its definitely gonna be fun making Ranveer fall in love with his little Reeces pieces (I LOVE THIS CANDY), pretends like he doesn’t know that Raashi is Ranveer’s wife cuz its not like Ranveer introduced or has shown him a pic so everything’s game as of now. He stands up walks past Ranveer and goes to Raashi and snakes his hand around her waist and pulls her close.

Suraj: Hey, sorry to be too forward, but wanna go for a long drive somewhere… just me, you, and the moonlight.

Raashi is really confused at why Suraj is acting like this, but then she hears him whisper in her ear to play along and that he’d explain everything later at Massi’s (Raashi’s mom guys.) Raashi smiles and figures he probably has his reasons plus he’s her older brother so at least she can explain herself. Suraj was the brother that Rohit wasn’t. She sees Ranveer from the corner of her eye where he has a blank stare so she really can’t tell what’s going on in his head, but then glances at the glass in his hand. His grip is tightened around the glass and his knuckles are taut on their way to turning white. She feels maybe there’s a small chance that Ranveer might have some feelings towards her at least that she is his wife in the arms of another man… Anyways she figures she can use Suraj’s help to use this against Ranveer.

Suraj on the other hand knows that this is exactly the case as he can see Ranveer’s reflection in the mirror. Suraj knows that Ranveer has a temper but what he doesn’t know is that so does Raashi and well she is a perfect match for his best friend because she has was a patient person, and he knows from experience. Raashi gave him the silent treatment for one month without budging b/c he forgot her birthday. But he knows that Raashi is probably just had about as much she could take at least what he could get outta of Massi and now just Ranveer. Of course this is true and for Raashi there is enough tension in the house already with JB and honestly she’s to running the house as Bani Mami is gone, Rano works, Massi Dadi are too old, and Mummy Ji (Jigs) is a waste of space... plus she gets bored and needs to freaking do something. Ranveer is really not around either b/c of work or puja [As I said before there will be no property crap so need for the whole alimony crap or more reason of hating Jigs and Ranveer.]

Raashi: Hmm long drive… sounds great not like my husband will care or notice. He’s probably too busy with puja.

Ranveer just grips his glass tighter and thinks damn did she just make a dig about me and how dare she talk to other men she was his wife… wait did I just get possessive about her, damn must have had to much to drink. I want out of this marriage… right?

Suraj is trying to contain his laughter and Raashi the same as she’s hoping that she isn’t pushing Ranveer’s buttons to much, but honestly she doesn’t understand what his deal is with the whole sanyasi thing, she’d have to track down papaji (Aditya) or Saahil and get the scope, but she hasn’t had the time with helping Bani Mami.

Suraj: Well your husband must either be an idiot or blind is he’d waste any of his time with this Pooja girl when he can have a hot sexy babe like you.

Raashi just can’t contain her self any longer and throws her head back and starts laughing. She has one of this infectious laughs and then Suraj starts laughing but has no idea why, but is laughing along. Even Ranveer feels like laughing also, he’s never seen Raashi like this, normally she’s so reserved, so he is about to laugh when he realizes they are laughing at him and sobers up pretty quick because no one makes fun of Ranveer Khanna. (I know it came out that their last name is Bali, but that’s not a flowing fan fic so I have reinvented it.)

Suraj: Sweetheart what’s so funny, most women usually react in the opposite manner when their husband is with another women. :confused: By the way love the sari.
Raashi: I’m not talking about a woman Pooja, I’m taking prayer type puja… and thanks this is the first time I’m wearing one.
Suraj: Oh puja, not Pooja… I get it now, so this guy is both an idiot and blind…

Raashi is nodding her head and still laughing, while Ranveer has just had it with all the insults and polish’s off his drink and gets up from the bar and heads over to the two. Suraj sees Ranveer heading their way so backs off a bit cuz he realizes that Ranveer’s pretty sloshed and Ranveer is an angry drunk and he doesn’t want to see Raashi be the receiving end, cuz he knows that any guy would be in the hospital. He remembers the one time a guy messed with Jiayala while Suraj went to make a call and Ranveer went to go get drinks… Suraj basically came back to see Ranveer pushing the guy repeatedly and took two bouncers and Suraj to pry Ranveer away. Suraj hints for Raashi to back off and go away, Raashi takes the hint.

Raashi: Sorry I have to run, but a rain check on the long drive though… later days!
Suraj: Bye sweetheart, definitely see you later.

Raashi makes a hasty exit and just in time as Ranveer approaches. Suraj is like game face on!

Suraj: Man why are the good ones always taken. Damn and I didn’t even get her name. Hey Veer you know that sexy babe’s name
Ranveer: Raashi Khanna... as in Mrs Ranveer Khanna! :mad:
Suraj: Shit the was your wife, that was Raashi… yaar why didn’t you say anything god she’s like my sister.
Ranveer: Good you realize that now, make sure that doesn’t happen again.

Suraj was going to bring up that just an hour ago Ranveer was talking about getting his help to break up his marriage and now he was getting possessive about Reece’s. He knew that the shock of seeing Raashi in a sari and all that alcohol messing with his head. He knew tomorrow Ranveer would be back in form so he needed to take advantage of the situation tonight.

Suraj: Sure yaar.
Ranveer: No worries, I’m sorry my head is hurting I think I need to get to bed.
Suraj: Me too I’ll see you in a couple of days mujhe delhi mein kuch kaam hai Abhi ke saath.
Ranveer: Yea buddy talk to you later.

END EPISODE 7 SCENE 4


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There is one more scene before I end this episode, PROMISE!!!!! This is one LOOOONNNNnNGGGGGGGG freaking party I know, but we are almost out .

Hope everyone's having a great weekend, the funny part is to come. Let me know what you guys think!

[unaiza]

this is the first time i m reading a fan fic n tht epi was too good keep up the gud work

[naaz123]

Even more reasons to party!!! Unaiza commented! Woooo hooo!!! I hope more ppl will do so also! Hey, u know, I really wish the KS creatives would take yr lead and do something fun between Ranveer and Raashi. They should just hire you to do the work for them. Lemmie call Ekta. (Ha, ha...I wish!). Great job. I'm reeeeeeeeeeeeeally happy you decided to continue the fan fic. Can't wait for the funny part!

[awall21]

Dude I really do feel like breaking out the champagne!!! Thanks so much guys for commenting. Yea I'm so happy! I'll be posting the funny part soon....:D

[awall21]

Should I post the next part tonight or tomorrow?

Later days!

[naaz123]

Or should I say, Neyki aur puch puch??? Post it tonight, yaar!

[awall21]

Oops! Sowie my sister had control of my laptop when I came home from work so I was unable to post the next part. I'll try tonight, but I have a business get together to go to. If I get a chance I'll do it after and hopefully the rentz don't drain the battery by the time I get home.

I swear that my work laptop gets used for 0% of work by me and 100% fun by everyone else ;).

[naaz123]

Hey, take yr time. Seems like my hubby has the same complaint about me using "his" laptop for fun too. He he.
Naaz

Oops! Sowie my sister had control of my laptop when I came home from work so I was unable to post the next part. I'll try tonight, but I have a business get together to go to. If I get a chance I'll do it after and hopefully the rentz don't drain the battery by the time I get home.

I swear that my work laptop gets used for 0% of work by me and 100% fun by everyone else ;).

[awall21]

The most awaited scene... the last part to the never ending party YIPPIE! I'm really sorry for the delays, but it is a really busy time for me with holidays, work, and family.

Anyways,I hope you guys enjoy reading this. Let me know what you guys think and any ideas for the future, it will make me happy. I got nothing substaintial right now... so until an idea, time, and inspiration come across I probably won't have anything to post.

ENJOY!
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EPISODE 7 SCENE 5

Ranveer heads to the room, Raashi is already there and cursing off the idiot who spilled red wine all over her outfit. Now here she is stuck wearing one of Bani Mami’s sari… oh yea there are dori’s my friends. Bani playing cupid tied them extra tight, she knew that Raashi was busy at home taking over all her responsibilities and didn’t have time to work on her marriage. This task would require Ranveer’s help and maybe bring them closer like it had for her and Jai even though currently they were poles apart.

Raashi is freaking pissed trying to undue the halter strap at the top. Gives up and tries to undo the dori on the bottom cuz then she can at least pull it over her head… but no avail. Raashi’s patience is now at her breaking point. ( I know it seems extremes that she’s getting worked over a small thing like this, but its always the little things that push people over… and honestly after all the shit she had to go through with the wedding fiasco, first she’s marrying Saahil and the week before its Ranveer, talk about trauma and drama.) Life has always been tough… with divorced parents; having to live with her father since he had custody, her and Rohit not being close either. The only person who was there for her was Suraj, thank god for summer vacations when he would come and meet her in London.

Raashi: Bani Mami mein apko chordu ge nahi, itne tight bandhi hai dori ko, ke kulne ka naam he nahi lerhi. :mad:

Our boy Ranveer staggers into the room clutching his head.:( He looks up and sees his wife his beautiful wife struggling with her dori at her back and walks towards her, he has a few things he wants to say to her. Raashi hears the door lock and see Ranveer advancing towards her.

Raashi: Thank god, can you be of some use and help me untie this.
Ranveer: hmm.

Poor thing doesn’t get a chance to say anything and he is barely able to put a sentence together just jumbles sounds together. He is trying for a few minutes now and the only progress he makes is in pissing off Raashi.

Raashi: You’re totally useless, pata nahi kis pagal se pala pardha hai (we so know.. Adi and Jigs of course.) Ahhh just leave it, hell where are the scissors! Here you go.

Ranveer is just in awe is this really Raashi or someone else. He has her thrust a pair of scissors into his hands and just looks at them lost like... and you want me to do what with this?:confused:

Raashi: Hello genius what are you staring at, take the scissors and cut the strap for me. I can’t see behind me and make sure you don’t cut my hair or me, got it?

She holds her blouse from the front and somehow he manages to accomplish this task.

Raashi: Took you long enough.
Ranveer: YOUR WELCOME!

Ranveers just about had it, the poor man has a pounding headache, knows he’s gonna be nursing a killer hang over in the morning and he’s just about had enough attitude from Raashi. Raashi is just stunned and realizes she is being a brat.

Raashi: I’m sorry, thank you.

Heads towards the bathroom to change into her night clothes. Ranveer to wasted to really function takes of his jacket and throws it towards the chair and just flops face down on the bed. Raashi comes out and sees his condition and just shakes her head and rolls her eyes. :rolleyes: Comes towards him, takes his shoes off, picks his feet and puts them on the bed, pulls her side of the bedsheet over him. She then heads to the couch and falls asleep.

END SCENE 5
END EPISODE 7!!!!!!

[awall21]

... as KS seems to still be sucking does anyone want to see this continued or interested in a new fan fic from some salvageble point in the story...

[naaz123]

Hey Anita,
Long time no see! How have ya been? I don't mind reading whatever you'd like to put out for us. Just get yr groove back and I'm sure it'll be interesting. I had lost my groove for a while with all the planning to go to India and then being in India didn't help at all. I tried 2 or 3 times to write over there and nothing flowed. But I've got my groove back now. Yay! I should be posting something tonight or tomorrow night. So I hope to read something from you soon too! Good luck!
Naaz

[awall21]

I am going to end the fan fic. I will post the ending once I'm done writing it.

[naaz123]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW...so sad. :( But I'm hoping you'll write something different afterwards though, so I can still continue to read your work. I hope your ending has Krishna in it and everyone else walking into the sunset happily ever after. If it's not part of your grand scheme of things, that's fine, but it's kinda nice to know the writer as a friend! :)


I am going to end the fan fic. I will post the ending once I'm done writing it.

[awall21]

:D LMAO, I'll see what I can do for you Naaz.


AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW...so sad. :( But I'm hoping you'll write something different afterwards though, so I can still continue to read your work. I hope your ending has Krishna in it and everyone else walking into the sunset happily ever after. If it's not part of your grand scheme of things, that's fine, but it's kinda nice to know the writer as a friend! :)

[awall21]

5 months later

Jig:Aditya

Jigyasa has been kept busy at work by Aditya mostly so she didn't have the time to meddle in other peoples lives. Jigyasa excelled, her bossy nature and the ability to strike fears into people heart actually shot up productivity. The workers were used to Aditya and with his easy nature everyone used to weasel out more time when it came to doing work or meeting deadlines, or emergencies that would come up. Then Aditya ended up doing all the work because he was a nice guy and honestly its not like he had anyone waiting for him to come home early so it killed some time for him.

Jigyasa not used to not having what she told people getting done didn't stand for that. She house cleaned the ring leaders making everyone else slack. She told everyone in the department that if they wanted to keep their job they better start earning their paycheck or they can slam the door on the way out. The remaining people got to work and did their jobs; they also avoided having to keep her waiting. She ended up spending a lot of time with Aditya as they were working the same department. Go figure without other people interfering and taking sides in their matters they were able to solve their problems by themselves.

Aditya was so happy to see the that the woman he fell in love with was back. He can remember back when two months into the job Jigs had fired Satish, Rajan, and Shina. Jigs had noticed over the past month how these three were taking Adi for a ride on reports and proposals and how he ended up doing all the work. She defn had a new appreciation for everyone that worked especially the middle class. Plus she didn't hate Aditya it was just she didn't like being double teamed on and always thought to be wrong. She meant well, at least a few times. Plus she did feel some possessiveness towards Aditya, she did love him as he was the father of her children and still loved her as she was. She had fought her family to marry him, but bottom line no one had the right to take Adi for a ride but her. No one messes with Aditya but her!

The ended up reconciling in another next couple of month as they talked two months went by, and the 5th month had them renwing their vows and everything was good. In this time Jigyaysa had accepted Rano and their relation had improved a ten fold and Aditya had made her a partner in crime to get Ranveer and Raashi together.


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I wanted to focus on JB and RR so RS and PP will be like this also.

[naaz123]

Yay! Happily ever after for one couple. Aditya deserves to be happy since he's such a good guy. Can't wait to see how the rest of it turns out!!! Thanks for granting my wish (so far at least!) LOL.

[awall21]

Yah! Well as much as I wanted to have Jigs die a tragic death I didn't b/c you wanted happily ever after. Currently working on PP, and as much as I also want to off her in a very horrific way I'm not going to. I'll try to post something this week b/c I just want this story to be over as I don't have time to dedicate doing justice to the story.

Later days!

[naaz123]

Jigs and Pia dying would be happily ever after! LOL!!! Can't wait to read more!