Remix Songs n Poems made by U!!!-

[Renee]

hey dis poem really is very gud it touched my heart

luv ash
I'm glad it touched ur heart ash thank u so much for ur sweet words.

[divyaashimix]

na woh merizindagi meine aata...
na mujhe pyar hota....
na hume bichadna padta...
na mein aaj akeli hoti..
lekin yeh mere saath hi kyun hota hai...
kyun mere wajeh se kisi aur ko ukh jelna padta hai...
kyun kyun kyun kyun...


i knwo guys dis one is 2 small but cant thnnk of nethng else

luv ash
Hey ASH!
this was a real cute poem...................
I'm sure you'll get your Mr. perfect someday............
You are very sweet at heart babes!!!!!!!!:D

[divyaashimix]

Hey this is the latest one i wrote do tell me how is it

A Best Friend!
A friend that really cares!
All my secrets i can share!
There when i need a hand!
There to understand!

When i cry!
She will be by!
If i am away!
She will call me day by day!
If i need her at all!
She'll be there to stand tall!
Anything i say will be heard!
She will listen word by word!
If I am late!
She will open the gate!

As she looks in my eyes!
The sparkle she realize!
She is the one that cares!
And the one thats there!

That's a best Friend!!
Hey RENEE!!!!!!!!!
thats a lovely poem sweety!!!!!!!!!
You have described a best friend perfectly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really liked this poem...
Keep writing sweety!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:D

[rajinishivaram]

Hey Guyz,

I was also quite upset about not writing poems in this forum.So here I am with 2 poems.I hope u like it.


Ab hum sab hain wahaan
Apna 'REMIX'hain jahaan!
Us duniya mein khokar,Masti ko peekar,Khushiyaan manayenge!
Kya pata hum wahin reh jayeen!
Aur phir lautkar na aayen
Agar aisa hua to hum ye samjhenge ki
Duniya ki saari khushi hamari mutthi mein hain
Aur saari gham hamse door mein hain!

Kaisi thi?Ab ye suno!



Pehle to aisa nahhin hua tha!
Phir ab kyun?
Mein use jaanti tak nahiin thi,
Phir dheere dheere pyaar badta gaya!
Par pata nahin chala!
Ek din mein use kehna chahti thi
Woh bhi shayad kuch kehna chahta tha
Achanak ek tufaan aaya!

Aur sab kuch badal diya!
Shayad yahi hamari kismat mein likha tha!
Hum milke bhi na mil sake!




How is this?Which one is better?Please reply.Haan......Ash (Tum to kamaal ki cheez ho!)Good work Renee and all of u for ur wonderful,fantastic,and brilliant poems.I hope to see the same response.


Rajini:) :) :)

[animateash]

Hey Guyz,

I was also quite upset about not writing poems in this forum.So here I am with 2 poems.I hope u like it.


Ab hum sab hain wahaan
Apna 'REMIX'hain jahaan!
Us duniya mein khokar,Masti ko peekar,Khushiyaan manayenge!
Kya pata hum wahin reh jayeen!
Aur phir lautkar na aayen
Agar aisa hua to hum ye samjhenge ki
Duniya ki saari khushi hamari mutthi mein hain
Aur saari gham hamse door mein hain!

Kaisi thi?Ab ye suno!



Pehle to aisa nahhin hua tha!
Phir ab kyun?
Mein use jaanti tak nahiin thi,
Phir dheere dheere pyaar badta gaya!
Par pata nahin chala!
Ek din mein use kehna chahti thi
Woh bhi shayad kuch kehna chahta tha
Achanak ek tufaan aaya!

Aur sab kuch badal diya!
Shayad yahi hamari kismat mein likha tha!
Hum milke bhi na mil sake!




How is this?Which one is better?Please reply.Haan......Ash (Tum to kamaal ki cheez ho!)Good work Renee and all of u for ur wonderful,fantastic,and brilliant poems.I hope to see the same response.


Rajini:) :) :)

hey dats reallys weet poem loved it

luv ash

[animateash]

Hey ASH!
this was a real cute poem...................
I'm sure you'll get your Mr. perfect someday............
You are very sweet at heart babes!!!!!!!!:D
hye tahxn a lot...n u r d first one 2 comment so nicely abt me.......
iw ish i get my mr perfect lekin uskeliye bhot tiem haii have study a lot re

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

hye tahxn a lot...n u r d first one 2 comment so nicely abt me.......
iw ish i get my mr perfect lekin uskeliye bhot tiem haii have study a lot re

luv ash
hey.
You deserve it alllll!!!!!!!!!!!!:D

[animateash]

koi kho gaya tha...
bhot dhoonda lekin nahi mila....
nahi mila woh mujhe bata hai kyun...
kyunki deepak seghal ne ekta se rishvat li...
ekta ke roone dhoone se ekta ne sabko pyaar karne pe majboor kiya...
becahri shrishti ko deepak seghal ne apne decesion ke niche daba diya...
lekin mujhe bata hai mein ek din usse dhoond kar hi dam lungi...
ha frendz remix kko hamlog phirse dhoondkar n-air layenge..

i hope frendz u all wud like it dis i specially for serial remix

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

koi kho gaya tha...
bhot dhoonda lekin nahi mila....
nahi mila woh mujhe bata hai kyun...
kyunki deepak seghal ne ekta se rishvat li...
ekta ke roone dhoone se ekta ne sabko pyaar karne pe majboor kiya...
becahri shrishti ko deepak seghal ne apne decesion ke niche daba diya...
lekin mujhe bata hai mein ek din usse dhoond kar hi dam lungi...
ha frendz remix kko hamlog phirse dhoondkar n-air layenge..

i hope frendz u all wud like it dis i specially for serial remix

luv ash
PERFECT ASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great going!!!!!!!!!:D

[animateash]

PERFECT ASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great going!!!!!!!!!:D
hey tahxn a lot

luv ash

[rajinishivaram]

Hey Guyz,

Firstly let me congragulate u all for getting ur queries answered by RAJ.Hey guyz all ur poems rocked as usual.Other Guyz, wake up.Please write poems.I know u people can do it.

Rajini:) :) :)

[animateash]

kitne saalo ke baad aaj hum ek huye...
yeh mere liye sabse khushi ka pal tha...
lekin achanak ek toofan aaya aur woh khishi ka pal kuchhi der ke liye raha...
barish ke japte ne mere saare sapne chur chur kar diye...
barish aayi aur mere pyar ko mere paas se hamesha hamesha ke liye lekar gayi...
kyun bhagwan ko meri khushi sehen nahi hoti...
kyun mere hissmein sirf dukh hi likhe hai...
is ek toofan ne meri poori zindagi palat di jiske baaremien meine socha bhi nahi tha

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

kitne saalo ke baad aaj hum ek huye...
yeh mere liye sabse khushi ka pal tha...
lekin achanak ek toofan aaya aur woh khishi ka pal kuchhi der ke liye raha...
barish ke japte ne mere saare sapne chur chur kar diye...
barish aayi aur mere pyar ko mere paas se hamesha hamesha ke liye lekar gayi...
kyun bhagwan ko meri khushi sehen nahi hoti...
kyun mere hissmein sirf dukh hi likhe hai...
is ek toofan ne meri poori zindagi palat di jiske baaremien meine socha bhi nahi tha

luv ash
Kool poem ASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[animateash]

Kool poem ASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanx a lot i m happy dat u commented first

luv ash

[style_ashitia]

kitne saalo ke baad aaj hum ek huye...
yeh mere liye sabse khushi ka pal tha...
lekin achanak ek toofan aaya aur woh khishi ka pal kuchhi der ke liye raha...
barish ke japte ne mere saare sapne chur chur kar diye...
barish aayi aur mere pyar ko mere paas se hamesha hamesha ke liye lekar gayi...
kyun bhagwan ko meri khushi sehen nahi hoti...
kyun mere hissmein sirf dukh hi likhe hai...
is ek toofan ne meri poori zindagi palat di jiske baaremien meine socha bhi nahi tha

luv ash
arre aahni is roking aashni is roking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[animateash]

arre aahni is roking aashni is roking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
tahnx alot

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

thanx a lot i m happy dat u commented first

luv ash
AS USUAL HONEY!!!!!!!!!!:D
KYA KARU?
AADAT SEY MAJBOOOORRRRR HOOONNN!!!!!!!!!

[animateash]

hey divs thanx for a idea 2 rite a poemm


aajkal har baat mein hum aadat se maajboor hai...
kya kare bhagwan yeh aadat ****ne hi dete nahi...
lekin kabhi yeh aadat achchi hoti hai kabhi bhot hi bhuri...
lekin kya kare aajkal insaan ko sukh ke saath dukh bhi jelna padta hai...
aakhir yeh duniya hi aise rit se banai hai ke hum apni marzise chal bhi nahi sakhte ....
isliye kehte hai aadat se majoor hote hai kyunki hum usse sabke samne mushkil ka naam bhi nahi de sakhte

luv asha

[divyaashimix]

hey divs thanx for a idea 2 rite a poemm


aajkal har baat mein hum aadat se maajboor hai...
kya kare bhagwan yeh aadat ****ne hi dete nahi...
lekin kabhi yeh aadat achchi hoti hai kabhi bhot hi bhuri...
lekin kya kare aajkal insaan ko sukh ke saath dukh bhi jelna padta hai...
aakhir yeh duniya hi aise rit se banai hai ke hum apni marzise chal bhi nahi sakhte ....
isliye kehte hai aadat se majoor hote hai kyunki hum usse sabke samne mushkil ka naam bhi nahi de sakhte

luv asha
Tu philosophy ki classes liya karti ti kya??????????????
I mean.............Hey Bhaggu!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Age sey adhik...............
mind blowing!!!!!!!!
awesome work........

[animateash]

Tu philosophy ki classes liya karti ti kya??????????????
I mean.............Hey Bhaggu!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Age sey adhik...............
mind blowing!!!!!!!!
awesome work........
nahi re abhi tak mein bachi hoon re kisiki class lene jais nahi hoo......neways tahnx a lot

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

nahi re abhi tak mein bachi hoon re kisiki class lene jais nahi hoo......neways tahnx a lot

luv ash
Thats okkk..............:D
Waiting for your next poem!!!!!!;) :D

[rajinishivaram]

Hey Ash,

I liked ur poem very much.I dont think I need to say that everytime u write a poem.U ROCK!!!!I have always liked ur poems.U give me inspiration to write.So why dont u publish ur poems?Please do that.I feel u r a great poet!Please do give in ur views about Tia okay!U know there are many goodies awaiting u!

Rajini:) :) :)

[animateash]

Hey Ash,

I liked ur poem very much.I dont think I need to say that everytime u write a poem.U ROCK!!!!I have always liked ur poems.U give me inspiration to write.So why dont u publish ur poems?Please do that.I feel u r a great poet!Please do give in ur views about Tia okay!U know there are many goodies awaiting u!

Rajini:) :) :)



omg:D ...thanx alot.......i never kne wi wud become some1s inspiration but its nothing liek inspiration if u have talent u show n u do ahve n tahxn a lto for likin my poem yes i m planning 2 riet a poem on tia......lets hoep i get soemthng b4 contest gets over

luv ash

[animateash]

Thats okkk..............:D
Waiting for your next poem!!!!!!;) :D
yeahh i m riting anew one
luv ash

[divyaashimix]

hey RAJNI and ASH!!!!!!!!!!!!
you both rokkkkkkkkk...........................
Hey....
write your new poems na..............
waiting to read them...........:)

[divyaashimix]

hey friends.
this is a touchy story.........
Hi all,

This is one of the very few true love stories.......

There was a blind girl who used to hate everyone except his Boyfriend..

she always used to say that
I"ll marry you if i could see !!

Suddenly one day someone
donated her eyes..

And then when she saw her Boyfriend!

She was astonished to see that her Boyfriend was also blind..


Her boyfriend then asked...
WILL YOU MARRY ME NOW ?

she simply refused..

Her Boyfriend went away saying..
JUST TAKE CARE OF MY EYES !!

[animateash]

hey friends.
this is a touchy story.........
Hi all,

This is one of the very few true love stories.......

There was a blind girl who used to hate everyone except his Boyfriend..

she always used to say that
I"ll marry you if i could see !!

Suddenly one day someone
donated her eyes..

And then when she saw her Boyfriend!

She was astonished to see that her Boyfriend was also blind..


Her boyfriend then asked...
WILL YOU MARRY ME NOW ?

she simply refused..

Her Boyfriend went away saying..
JUST TAKE CARE OF MY EYES !!


hey did u rite dis its awesoem really i cried

luv ash

[animateash]

How to start that’s a big question?
She is just indescribable…
Not only has her talent made her rich in her personality ….
But even her nature has attracted many of them and inspired a gang of her fans…
She is sweet, young adorable and very beautiful person as a whole and even from her heart…
In remix she is “papa’s princess”….
But I think she really a princess from the land of angels…
Her social nature has given life to many of them whether it is an animal or a human being…
In remix her lingos have hit the bullseye…
Like “Tia Ahuja hona koi aisi vaisi baat nahi” ……
Yeahhh seriously even “Shweta Gulati hona koi aisi vaisi baat nahi”…..
Her “phuleeez” has become half o the people’s language
Her magnificent beauty has made so many of them’s heartbeat increase…
Her on-screen chemistry with everyone rocks…
She is mindblowing and her acting is just fantastic…
She believe is really a beautiful angel avoiding sweet things ….
This makes a perfect princess…
Now how to end even that is the question...
dont feel like ending it but everthing ends one day...
newyas...
May god bless her and always lead her to success…



luv ash

[rajinishivaram]

Hey Guyz,

Ash...........I am really happy that u wrote something in Tia's thread.The poem was just wonderful.This is one of ur best poems I have ever read.Hey Divya !tumhari poem to ek dum sufi hai yaar!I knew it when u described Ashi.

Rajini:) :) :) http://forum.indya.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=161&d=1131301793

[animateash]

Hey Guyz,

Ash...........I am really happy that u wrote something in Tia's thread.The poem was just wonderful.This is one of ur best poems I have ever read.Hey Divya !tumhari poem to ek dum sufi hai yaar!I knew it when u described Ashi.

Rajini:) :) :) http://forum.indya.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=161&d=1131301793



thanx a lot

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

Hey Guyz,

Ash...........I am really happy that u wrote something in Tia's thread.The poem was just wonderful.This is one of ur best poems I have ever read.Hey Divya !tumhari poem to ek dum sufi hai yaar!I knew it when u described Ashi.

Rajini:) :) :) http://forum.indya.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=161&d=1131301793

Thanks a lot RAJNI..........................
Even your poems are mind blasting just as ASH's............
both of you rokkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk......

[animateash]

He is the rockstar…
Kuch bhi kahe…
Bade mast hai yaar…
Kuch bhi kahe…
His stunning personality has made everyone mad…
His passion is acting and music….
He is a movie freak…
His brilliant lingos in remix has impressed many of them…
Just like sufi for cool dudes…
Phsyco for anvesha in remix…
Chillax man for all people who need to chill out…
In remix he is know has daddy`s boy…
But in real life he is very independent…
His curly hairs has made all girls heartbeat going zig-zag…
He is very passionate…
His smile is the first noticeable thing in him…
He is like a thundering who spins the world…
He is mindblowing and ever-blasting…
He is lawyer..
He is a vuideo-jockey..
And he is an actor…
He has a style a typical but sweet attitude…
He wants 2 flapper up high in the sky …
He is the coolest and dam cute person…
Yes he is yuvi of remix…
He is raj singh arora…
Who has never seen a set back in-life
And we hope so he never sees also…
And may god bless him with loads of surprises…

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

He is the rockstar…
Kuch bhi kahe…
Bade mast hai yaar…
Kuch bhi kahe…
His stunning personality has made everyone mad…
His passion is acting and music….
He is a movie freak…
His brilliant lingos in remix has impressed many of them…
Just like sufi for cool dudes…
Phsyco for anvesha in remix…
Chillax man for all people who need to chill out…
In remix he is know has daddy`s boy…
But in real life he is very independent…
His curly hairs has made all girls heartbeat going zig-zag…
He is very passionate…
His smile is the first noticeable thing in him…
He is like a thundering who spins the world…
He is mindblowing and ever-blasting…
He is lawyer..
He is a vuideo-jockey..
And he is an actor…
He has a style a typical but sweet attitude…
He wants 2 flapper up high in the sky …
He is the coolest and dam cute person…
Yes he is yuvi of remix…
He is raj singh arora…
Who has never seen a set back in-life
And we hope so he never sees also…
And may god bless him with loads of surprises…

luv ash
HEY AASSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
Dam Koolo man.................
excellent poem yaararr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[animateash]

HEY AASSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
Dam Koolo man.................
excellent poem yaararr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
tahnx a lot

luv ash

[rajinishivaram]

Hey Ash,

Ur poem was really good.... nahi!..."mind blowing".U deserve the credits,allright.Raj ise dekhega to paagal ho jaayega.May be he would send u an email too.Why dont u put this in his thread?Please do it.

Rajini




[/URL]



http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/data/thumbnails/132/StarOne_-REMIX-_9.jpg (http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/img25817.htm)




http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/data/thumbnails/132/StarOne_-REMIX-.jpg (http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/img25819.htm)

http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/data/thumbnails/132/StarOne_-REMIX-_1.jpg (http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/img25811.htm)

(http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/img25812.htm)

http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/data/thumbnails/132/StarOne_-REMIX-_4.jpg (http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/img25814.htm)
[URL="http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/img25807.htm"]

[divyaashimix]

Hey Ash,

Ur poem was really good.... nahi!..."mind blowing".U deserve the credits,allright.Raj ise dekhega to paagal ho jaayega.May be he would send u an email too.Why dont u put this in his thread?Please do it.

Rajini




[/URL]



http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/data/thumbnails/132/StarOne_-REMIX-_9.jpg (http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/img25817.htm)




http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/data/thumbnails/132/StarOne_-REMIX-.jpg (http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/img25819.htm)

http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/data/thumbnails/132/StarOne_-REMIX-_1.jpg (http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/img25811.htm)

(http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/img25812.htm)

http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/data/thumbnails/132/StarOne_-REMIX-_4.jpg (http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/img25814.htm)
[URL="http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/img25807.htm"]



Thanks RAJNI!!!!!!!!!
All the pics rokk.....

[animateash]

Hey Ash,

Ur poem was really good.... nahi!..."mind blowing".U deserve the credits,allright.Raj ise dekhega to paagal ho jaayega.May be he would send u an email too.Why dont u put this in his thread?Please do it.

Rajini










thanx a lot rajni for ur appreciation beco z of u alkl only i m able 2 rite dis poems otehrwise...u know at after coming2 dis forum onle i satrted riteing poems warna p[oems i used 2 yuk but now i love poems.....tahnx 2 aklll of u ...n ye i ahve alredy p[osted in his thread i ms un gonna psot ashi`s n karan`s poem

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

thanx a lot rajni for ur appreciation beco z of u alkl only i m able 2 rite dis poems otehrwise...u know at after coming2 dis forum onle i satrted riteing poems warna p[oems i used 2 yuk but now i love poems.....tahnx 2 aklll of u ...n ye i ahve alredy p[osted in his thread i ms un gonna psot ashi`s n karan`s poem

luv ash
AASHI's POEMMMMMMMMMMMMMM..............
Common..
jaldi............

[animateash]

AASHI's POEMMMMMMMMMMMMMM..............
Common..
jaldi............
hey deeraj ka phal hamesha meetha hota hai i will b posting sun dont wry i m working on it

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

hey deeraj ka phal hamesha meetha hota hai i will b posting sun dont wry i m working on it

luv ash
DUH-UH.........
Mujhey chatpata chahiye!!!!!

[animateash]

hey frendz i m finally done wth my heartbeat`s poem.....plz have a luk and do comment on dis poem though it is bad or gudd

and priya di`s poem will b coming sun

O my god …..
I really don’t know how to start for my heartbeat…
Because every word would be valueless for him…
But I have to start…
He is my heartbeat….
He is the most handsome and dashing person in the world…
He has made all of them go mad specially girls…
And specially me…
His brilliant personality has marked his success top high up in the never-ending sky…
He is mind-blowing…
He is fantastic…
He is enchanting looks has crossed every` heartbeats making them run at much faster rate…
At such a young age he has achieved beyond his thoughts…
In remix he is the lover boy ….
But in real life also he is my lover boy…
In remix his lingos has taught us a lot…
Making us feel that every person is important…
Like “aap” for everyone…
“Banaa” for friends…
“Hum” for himself…
His acting skills have proved him to be the best actor…
He is the winner of the award for newcomer…
He is the person with respect and dignity…
He has a particular charm on his face that remains in every1’s memory and heart…
He is a kool man who is the most wanted in every girl’s list…
He is the thief who has stolen my heart…
He is innocent….
He is loving….
He is caring….
The first noticeable thing about him is his eyes…
I feel like getting lost in his eyes…
He is a complete package of man who is smart, handsome n very active…
He is very adorable…
He is the embodiment of sheer sweetness…
He is fun-loving and total prankster…
He is perfect ideal person who know what he wants in life…
He enlightens the message of “simple living with high thoughts”
He is like a bird with golden plunge…
A person landed from heaven and made me lost in some other world…
Yes it is our dear friends he is the heartthrob of the nation….
He is ranveer of remix…
Our dear Karan Wahi….
May god always be with him and bless him with success


Luv aashni

[divyaashimix]

hey frendz i m finally done wth my heartbeat`s poem.....plz have a luk and do comment on dis poem though it is bad or gudd

and priya di`s poem will b coming sun

O my god …..
I really don’t know how to start for my heartbeat…
Because every word would be valueless for him…
But I have to start…
He is my heartbeat….
He is the most handsome and dashing person in the world…
He has made all of them go mad specially girls…
And specially me…
His brilliant personality has marked his success top high up in the never-ending sky…
He is mind-blowing…
He is fantastic…
He is enchanting looks has crossed every` heartbeats making them run at much faster rate…
At such a young age he has achieved beyond his thoughts…
In remix he is the lover boy ….
But in real life also he is my lover boy…
In remix his lingos has taught us a lot…
Making us feel that every person is important…
Like “aap” for everyone…
“Banaa” for friends…
“Hum” for himself…
His acting skills have proved him to be the best actor…
He is the winner of the award for newcomer…
He is the person with respect and dignity…
He has a particular charm on his face that remains in every1’s memory and heart…
He is a kool man who is the most wanted in every girl’s list…
He is the thief who has stolen my heart…
He is innocent….
He is loving….
He is caring….
The first noticeable thing about him is his eyes…
I feel like getting lost in his eyes…
He is a complete package of man who is smart, handsome n very active…
He is very adorable…
He is the embodiment of sheer sweetness…
He is fun-loving and total prankster…
He is perfect ideal person who know what he wants in life…
He enlightens the message of “simple living with high thoughts”
He is like a bird with golden plunge…
A person landed from heaven and made me lost in some other world…
Yes it is our dear friends he is the heartthrob of the nation….
He is ranveer of remix…
Our dear Karan Wahi….
May god always be with him and bless him with success


Luv aashni

HHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ab tu aapni tareef khud hi kar yaarrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I mean, its a great poem..............
extremely fantastic.............
I really really enjoyed it.................................
And I'm waiting for PRIYA Di's poem.................:D

[animateash]

HHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ab tu aapni tareef khud hi kar yaarrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I mean, its a great poem..............
extremely fantastic.............
I really really enjoyed it.................................
And I'm waiting for PRIYA Di's poem.................:D


thanx a lot and yes i m working on her poem dont wry almost monday tak mil jayegi

luv ash

[style_ashitia]

hey frendz i m finally done wth my heartbeat`s poem.....plz have a luk and do comment on dis poem though it is bad or gudd

and priya di`s poem will b coming sun

O my god …..
I really don’t know how to start for my heartbeat…
Because every word would be valueless for him…
But I have to start…
He is my heartbeat….
He is the most handsome and dashing person in the world…
He has made all of them go mad specially girls…
And specially me…
His brilliant personality has marked his success top high up in the never-ending sky…
He is mind-blowing…
He is fantastic…
He is enchanting looks has crossed every` heartbeats making them run at much faster rate…
At such a young age he has achieved beyond his thoughts…
In remix he is the lover boy ….
But in real life also he is my lover boy…
In remix his lingos has taught us a lot…
Making us feel that every person is important…
Like “aap” for everyone…
“Banaa” for friends…
“Hum” for himself…
His acting skills have proved him to be the best actor…
He is the winner of the award for newcomer…
He is the person with respect and dignity…
He has a particular charm on his face that remains in every1’s memory and heart…
He is a kool man who is the most wanted in every girl’s list…
He is the thief who has stolen my heart…
He is innocent….
He is loving….
He is caring….
The first noticeable thing about him is his eyes…
I feel like getting lost in his eyes…
He is a complete package of man who is smart, handsome n very active…
He is very adorable…
He is the embodiment of sheer sweetness…
He is fun-loving and total prankster…
He is perfect ideal person who know what he wants in life…
He enlightens the message of “simple living with high thoughts”
He is like a bird with golden plunge…
A person landed from heaven and made me lost in some other world…
Yes it is our dear friends he is the heartthrob of the nation….
He is ranveer of remix…
Our dear Karan Wahi….
May god always be with him and bless him with success


Luv aashni
arre aaaaaassssshhhhhnnnnnniiii rrrrrrrrroooooooooooookkkkkkkkkking arre bahaut achhai haaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiii

[divyaashimix]

arre aaaaaassssshhhhhnnnnnniiii rrrrrrrrroooooooooooookkkkkkkkkking arre bahaut achhai haaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiii
TU BILKUL ACHHAI NAHI HAI IDIOT.............
empty your private message box stupid.........:mad:

[animateash]

arre aaaaaassssshhhhhnnnnnniiii rrrrrrrrroooooooooooookkkkkkkkkking arre bahaut achhai haaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiii


hey thnx a lot lekin ek baat smaj nahi aayi u and divya itna strech kyunb kar rahe ho sab words ko.....:D

luv aash

[divyaashimix]

hey thnx a lot lekin ek baat smaj nahi aayi u and divya itna strech kyunb kar rahe ho sab words ko.....:D

luv aash
Duh-Uh..............
Aapni khushi dikhaney key liye............
Dumbo..........
woh kya hai na..............
hum dono key PC mein woh facility nahi hai ki hum baat karey aur yahaan hamari voice record ho!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:p

[animateash]

divya specially for you......yeh le tere jaan ki poem.....

I always remember bhaggu when I think about her…
She is indeed a special girl ….
What to write about her…
Everyone knows how this person is….
She is funny…
She is cute…
She is adorable…
She is smart…
She is the girl full of colorful atmosphere…
No one could be like her…
She has amazing personality…
She has challenging guts….
Her smile makes us forget our sorrows…
In remix she is yuvi`s love…
Her lingos has become our inspiration…
Who rules over the whole TV industry…
Duh-uh comes to the mind on some mistakes….
Bhaggu is remembered on every occasion…
Psycho could be none other then her darling yuvi…
Morons and dufus is what she uses for idiot people…
She is a rebellion princess in remix…
She is shona and mumumm for her mother in remix...
But I am sure in real life also she is shona for her mom...
She is the girl with no fears…
But she is the girl who makes others get scared by her acts …lolzz
She is a twin personality with red hair girl in remix …
And before black hair girl who was steffi`s fan …
Yes indeed she is still her fan…
She is so simple and sweet yet very important…
She is like a twinkling star that would sure rise up high in the sky one day…
She is every’1’s idol…
She has made us realized to fight for our rights…
She is an inspiration,
She is a model…
She is tennis player…
She is an actress…
And she is our anvesha banerjee ray…
Yes friends she is priya wal…
Most simple actress with typical sweet and unique attitude….
May she always look up into the sky and never sees a set-back…
May god bless her…

and divya please tell me howz it is i really ened ur commenets agar kharab bhi ho to bol dena

lvua sh

[divyaashimix]

divya specially for you......yeh le tere jaan ki poem.....

I always remember bhaggu when I think about her…
She is indeed a special girl ….
What to write about her…
Everyone knows how this person is….
She is funny…
She is cute…
She is adorable…
She is smart…
She is the girl full of colorful atmosphere…
No one could be like her…
She has amazing personality…
She has challenging guts….
Her smile makes us forget our sorrows…
In remix she is yuvi`s love…
Her lingos has become our inspiration…
Who rules over the whole TV industry…
Duh-uh comes to the mind on some mistakes….
Bhaggu is remembered on every occasion…
Psycho could be none other then her darling yuvi…
Morons and dufus is what she uses for idiot people…
She is a rebellion princess in remix…
She is shona and mumumm for her mother in remix...
But I am sure in real life also she is shona for her mom...
She is the girl with no fears…
But she is the girl who makes others get scared by her acts …lolzz
She is a twin personality with red hair girl in remix …
And before black hair girl who was steffi`s fan …
Yes indeed she is still her fan…
She is so simple and sweet yet very important…
She is like a twinkling star that would sure rise up high in the sky one day…
She is every’1’s idol…
She has made us realized to fight for our rights…
She is an inspiration,
She is a model…
She is tennis player…
She is an actress…
And she is our anvesha banerjee ray…
Yes friends she is priya wal…
Most simple actress with typical sweet and unique attitude….
May she always look up into the sky and never sees a set-back…
May god bless her…

and divya please tell me howz it is i really ened ur commenets agar kharab bhi ho to bol dena

lvua sh
HHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY YYYYYY
BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ASH.....................
It is ......................................
A- AWESOME
B-BLASTING
C-CHARISMATIC
D-DUH-UH DASHING!!!
E-ENTHUSIASTIC
F-FANTASTIC
G-GEAR TAKING
H-HEY BHAGGU!!!
I-I DON'T HAVE WORDS..........
J-JOYFULLLLLLLLLLLLL
K-KIDDISH
L-LOVELY
M-MUCHOSGRACIOUS
N-NICE NICER NICEREST.............
O-OOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH WHAT NOT??????
P-PASSIONATE
.................................................. ......................
I seriously loved this poem a lotttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[amy_divinedevil]

hey ash both ur poems wer xcellent....keep it up!!!!:)
sigh...kash main bhi kuch likh sakti apne yuvi ke liye:o .....but i dont thnk i can even attempt anythin like tht...:D

[animateash]

HHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY YYYYYY
BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ASH.....................
It is ......................................
A- AWESOME
B-BLASTING
C-CHARISMATIC
D-DUH-UH DASHING!!!
E-ENTHUSIASTIC
F-FANTASTIC
G-GEAR TAKING
H-HEY BHAGGU!!!
I-I DON'T HAVE WORDS..........
J-JOYFULLLLLLLLLLLLL
K-KIDDISH
L-LOVELY
M-MUCHOSGRACIOUS
N-NICE NICER NICEREST.............
O-OOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH WHAT NOT??????
P-PASSIONATE
.................................................. ......................
I seriously loved this poem a lotttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!


hey sambhal .........tahxn a lot......dekha meine bola tha nah ke mon day se pehle de dungi aashi ki poem so here it was

lvua sh

[animateash]

hey ash both ur poems wer xcellent....keep it up!!!!:)
sigh...kash main bhi kuch likh sakti apne yuvi ke liye:o .....but i dont thnk i can even attempt anythin like tht...:D



hey tahxn ai ms ure try once u can rite and did u check my yuvi`s poem dat i ahve ritten it must be in last 2 or 3 pages do chcek

lvu ash

[divyaashimix]

hey ash both ur poems wer xcellent....keep it up!!!!:)
sigh...kash main bhi kuch likh sakti apne yuvi ke liye:o .....but i dont thnk i can even attempt anythin like tht...:D

Try it sweetheart,..........
even You'll be able to do it!!!!

[divyaashimix]

hey sambhal .........tahxn a lot......dekha meine bola tha nah ke mon day se pehle de dungi aashi ki poem so here it was

lvua sh
SAMBHAL!!!!!!!!!!!!
what Sambhal yarrr!!!!!!!!!!!!
I enjoyed the poem very much.......:D

[animateash]

SAMBHAL!!!!!!!!!!!!
what Sambhal yarrr!!!!!!!!!!!!
I enjoyed the poem very much.......:D


thanx a lot for liking it never xpecetd u wud love so much

luv ash

[amy_divinedevil]

He is the rockstar…
Kuch bhi kahe…
Bade mast hai yaar…
Kuch bhi kahe…
His stunning personality has made everyone mad…
His passion is acting and music….
He is a movie freak…
His brilliant lingos in remix has impressed many of them…
Just like sufi for cool dudes…
Phsyco for anvesha in remix…
Chillax man for all people who need to chill out…
In remix he is know has daddy`s boy…
But in real life he is very independent…
His curly hairs has made all girls heartbeat going zig-zag…
He is very passionate…
His smile is the first noticeable thing in him…
He is like a thundering who spins the world…
He is mindblowing and ever-blasting…
He is lawyer..
He is a vuideo-jockey..
And he is an actor…
He has a style a typical but sweet attitude…
He wants 2 flapper up high in the sky …
He is the coolest and dam cute person…
Yes he is yuvi of remix…
He is raj singh arora…
Who has never seen a set back in-life
And we hope so he never sees also…
And may god bless him with loads of surprises…

luv ash

ok....i knw dis is a bit late...but i had 2 say dis.....

I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CUD NOT HELP BUT LOVE IT......aftr all, itz my yuvi, isnt it??????:p

[animateash]

ok....i knw dis is a bit late...but i had 2 say dis.....

I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CUD NOT HELP BUT LOVE IT......aftr all, itz my yuvi, isnt it??????:p




thanx a lot for liking it i m ahppy dat u liked it

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

thanx a lot for liking it never xpecetd u wud love so much

luv ash
hey I seriously loved it sweety!!!!!!!!!!
freat work.....
simply great work........:D

[animateash]

hey I seriously loved it sweety!!!!!!!!!!
freat work.....
simply great work........:D
tahnx a ot

luv ash

[animateash]

aajkal mujhse aisa kyun hota hai..
har baat mein gadbad...
har soch mein gadbad...
kyun mujhse aisi silly bhoolo hoti hai...
kyun mein hamesha do cheez ko ek kar deti hu....
kyun hamesha mera saath hi aisa hota hai...
kyun mein ek ka gussa doosre pe utarti hoon...
kyun mein situation ko ulat pulat kar detia hu...
kyun mein sabko naraz kar deti hu...
aajkal mere saath hi kyun aisa hota hai...
kyun kyun kyun kyun...
is kyun ka mujhe kabhi jawab hi nahi milta

luv ash

[animateash]

aajkal mujhse aisa kyun hota hai..
har baat mein gadbad...
har soch mein gadbad...
kyun mujhse aisi silly bhoolo hoti hai...
kyun mein hamesha do cheez ko ek kar deti hu....
kyun hamesha mera saath hi aisa hota hai...
kyun mein ek ka gussa doosre pe utarti hoon...
kyun mein situation ko ulat pulat kar detia hu...
kyun mein sabko naraz kar deti hu...
aajkal mere saath hi kyun aisa hota hai...
kyun kyun kyun kyun...
is kyun ka mujhe kabhi jawab hi nahi milta

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

aajkal mujhse aisa kyun hota hai..
har baat mein gadbad...
har soch mein gadbad...
kyun mujhse aisi silly bhoolo hoti hai...
kyun mein hamesha do cheez ko ek kar deti hu....
kyun hamesha mera saath hi aisa hota hai...
kyun mein ek ka gussa doosre pe utarti hoon...
kyun mein situation ko ulat pulat kar detia hu...
kyun mein sabko naraz kar deti hu...
aajkal mere saath hi kyun aisa hota hai...
kyun kyun kyun kyun...
is kyun ka mujhe kabhi jawab hi nahi milta

luv ash

Hey bhaggu!!!!!!!!!!!!!
tujhey kya inspire karta hai yarrr...........
I seriously don't get it.........
This poem is as kool and as sufi as other ones............
great work ASH!!!!!!:cool:

[amy_divinedevil]

tht was awesum ash.....!!!!!!!!

[amit@bitspilani]

Hey This Is My First Visit To This Thread..
Oh My God.....
Kya Thread Hai Yeh...
I Mean Chalo Issi Bahane Mujhe Mere Friends Ke Writing Skills Dekhne Ko Milenge....
Wow All Of U Are Great Philosophers Yaar...yeh Sab Kar Kaise Lete Ho...
I Mean I For Nuts Cant Do That...
I M zero , Shoonya, Sifrrrr,round Boiled Egg,a Big Circle Wid Infinite Radius....in Writing A Poem...
Keep It Up Guys..
Waise I Cant Write A Poem In This Thread But I Will Also Be Appreciating Ur Work ...gud Going..

[animateash]

Hey bhaggu!!!!!!!!!!!!!
tujhey kya inspire karta hai yarrr...........
I seriously don't get it.........
This poem is as kool and as sufi as other ones............
great work ASH!!!!!!:cool:
tahxn a lto mujhe khud ko nahi pata mujhe kya inspire karta hai...lekin after coming 2 dis forum onle i satrted riting poems i used 2 hate poems b4 but now i m crazy behind dem re tahnx 2 dis forum

luv ash

[animateash]

tht was awesum ash.....!!!!!!!!
tahxn a lot

luv ash

[animateash]

Hey This Is My First Visit To This Thread..
Oh My God.....
Kya Thread Hai Yeh...
I Mean Chalo Issi Bahane Mujhe Mere Friends Ke Writing Skills Dekhne Ko Milenge....
Wow All Of U Are Great Philosophers Yaar...yeh Sab Kar Kaise Lete Ho...
I Mean I For Nuts Cant Do That...
I M zero , Shoonya, Sifrrrr,round Boiled Egg,a Big Circle Wid Infinite Radius....in Writing A Poem...
Keep It Up Guys..
Waise I Cant Write A Poem In This Thread But I Will Also Be Appreciating Ur Work ...gud Going..

gud u finaallly viisted dis thread.......hey hum ksi ko peoms klikhna nahi aati thi specially i an tekll abt em iw as also zero pome ki abcdef kuch nahi seriously lekin after cumin here i strted my peom thnsg and till now i ahev ritten mroe den 30 poems dat was also un belivable by m ere...ek baar poems likhna chalu kar den u will get 2 know

luv ash

[amit@bitspilani]

gud u finaallly viisted dis thread.......hey hum ksi ko peoms klikhna nahi aati thi specially i an tekll abt em iw as also zero pome ki abcdef kuch nahi seriously lekin after cumin here i strted my peom thnsg and till now i ahev ritten mroe den 30 poems dat was also un belivable by m ere...ek baar poems likhna chalu kar den u will get 2 know

luv ash
thanx 4 the encouragement ash.........
u know i cant help laughing think that i'll write a poem....
...ok i'll try agar bani to...
filhal tum poems likho...hum daad dene waalon mei se hain.....

[animateash]

thanx 4 the encouragement ash.........
u know i cant help laughing think that i'll write a poem....
...ok i'll try agar bani to...
filhal tum poems likho...hum daad dene waalon mei se hain.....
gud lekin try zarror karna

luv ash

[animateash]

he was indeed a special person for atleast me...
i dont know why but he was very very special...
he had special plzce in my life ...
i dont know what place but taht place is indeed very special...
he has special corner in my heart....
i dont know which corner but that corner is indeed very special....
we had a special relationship..
even i dont know what that realtionship was but it was really special...
god knows what magic he did over me that special attrction was created between us....
is it love....
am i falling in love....

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

he was indeed a special person for atleast me...
i dont know why but he was very very special...
he had special plzce in my life ...
i dont know what place but taht place is indeed very special...
he has special corner in my heart....
i dont know which corner but that corner is indeed very special....
we had a special relationship..
even i dont know what that realtionship was but it was really special...
god knows what magic he did over me that special attrction was created between us....
is it love....
am i falling in love....

luv ash
without a doubt.......
YOU WROTE THIS FOR KARAN RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

[animateash]

without a doubt.......
YOU WROTE THIS FOR KARAN RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
yeahh soemwat ............

lekin aksi hai

luv ash

[amit@bitspilani]

wah Wha Wah Wah............
Kya Baat Hai...
Heavy Words.........i Must Say

Hansa Style Mein..."supek (she Means Superb) Kavita Hai...tum Kitni Intelligence Ho...." Intelligent Hansa Bhabhi.......
Haan Haan Wo Bhi.......

[amit@bitspilani]

Plz Darr Mat Jaana Main Poem Likhne Wala Hoon...yes It's True.....par Kya Karoon Ash Ne Uksaya Hai....hope U Bear It........
Main Remix Se Behad Pyar Karta Hoon
Har Roz Sham Ke 8 Bajne Ka Intzar Karta Hoon
Remix Meri Zindagi Hai
Iske Characters Mujhe Bahut Priy Hain
Uv Ranny Tia Sab Se Main Pyar Karta Hoon
Lekin Main Sirf Anvesha Ka Hi Fan Hoon
Uske Dailogues,character,acting Se Main Bahut Inpire Hota Hoon
Aur In Sabki Jhalak Apne Aap Mein Dekhta Hoon
Aashi Main Tumhare Liye Itna Crazy Hoon
Ki Apne Doston Ko Bhi 'duh Uh'aur 'hey Bhaggu'keh Kar Pukarta Hoon
Jab Bhi Uv Tumse Ladta Hai
Mujhe Us Pyscho Par Gussa Atta Hai
Jab Tumhari Timbo Se Nok Jhonk Hoti Hai
Mujhe Bahut Maza Aata Hai
Thakur Tumhara Saath Deta Hai
Isliye Wo Bhi Mujhe Achha Lagta Hai
Sonia Ki Tum Mamam Ho
Mere Liye Ideal Ho
Tumhara Motto Bahut Rebeleous Hai
Isliye Meri Philosophy Bhi"live Life Kingsize Hai" Hai
Mere Dost Mujhe Anvesha Ke Naam Se Chidhate Hain
Par Main Bura Nahi Maanta Hoon
Kyonki
Main Ashi Ayr Remix Se Behad Pyar Karta Hoon..........


Finally I've Written A Poem...oh Ghosh.........i Cant Stop Laughing.....u Can Also Laugh At This So Called Poem....
Well I Just Tried...plz Dont Ask Me To Write More Poems...
Yeh Hi Mushkil Se Likhi Hai Aur Wo Bhi Aisi........
Hum To Sirf Daad Dene Waalon Mein Se Hain

[amy_divinedevil]

Plz Darr Mat Jaana Main Poem Likhne Wala Hoon...yes It's True.....par Kya Karoon Ash Ne Uksaya Hai....hope U Bear It........
Main Remix Se Behad Pyar Karta Hoon
Har Roz Sham Ke 8 Bajne Ka Intzar Karta Hoon
Remix Meri Zindagi Hai
Iske Characters Mujhe Bahut Priy Hain
Uv Ranny Tia Sab Se Main Pyar Karta Hoon
Lekin Main Sirf Anvesha Ka Hi Fan Hoon
Uske Dailogues,character,acting Se Main Bahut Inpire Hota Hoon
Aur In Sabki Jhalak Apne Aap Mein Dekhta Hoon
Aashi Main Tumhare Liye Itna Crazy Hoon
Ki Apne Doston Ko Bhi 'duh Uh'aur 'hey Bhaggu'keh Kar Pukarta Hoon
Jab Bhi Uv Tumse Ladta Hai
Mujhe Us Pyscho Par Gussa Atta Hai
Jab Tumhari Timbo Se Nok Jhonk Hoti Hai
Mujhe Bahut Maza Aata Hai
Thakur Tumhara Saath Deta Hai
Isliye Wo Bhi Mujhe Achha Lagta Hai
Sonia Ki Tum Mamam Ho
Mere Liye Ideal Ho
Tumhara Motto Bahut Rebeleous Hai
Isliye Meri Philosophy Bhi"live Life Kingsize Hai" Hai
Mere Dost Mujhe Anvesha Ke Naam Se Chidhate Hain
Par Main Bura Nahi Maanta Hoon
Kyonki
Main Ashi Ayr Remix Se Behad Pyar Karta Hoon..........


Finally I've Written A Poem...oh Ghosh.........i Cant Stop Laughing.....u Can Also Laugh At This So Called Poem....
Well I Just Tried...plz Dont Ask Me To Write More Poems...
Yeh Hi Mushkil Se Likhi Hai Aur Wo Bhi Aisi........
Hum To Sirf Daad Dene Waalon Mein Se Hain

toh iska matlab tum mere yuvi ko chod kar sab ke fan ho??????!!!!:mad: :p lol kiddin....

but seriously, tht was mindblowin!!!!!:)

[animateash]

wah Wha Wah Wah............
Kya Baat Hai...
Heavy Words.........i Must Say

Hansa Style Mein..."supek (she Means Superb) Kavita Hai...tum Kitni Intelligence Ho...." Intelligent Hansa Bhabhi.......
Haan Haan Wo Bhi.......



hey tahxn a lot.....lekin i m like u all only

luv ash

[animateash]

Plz Darr Mat Jaana Main Poem Likhne Wala Hoon...yes It's True.....par Kya Karoon Ash Ne Uksaya Hai....hope U Bear It........
Main Remix Se Behad Pyar Karta Hoon
Har Roz Sham Ke 8 Bajne Ka Intzar Karta Hoon
Remix Meri Zindagi Hai
Iske Characters Mujhe Bahut Priy Hain
Uv Ranny Tia Sab Se Main Pyar Karta Hoon
Lekin Main Sirf Anvesha Ka Hi Fan Hoon
Uske Dailogues,character,acting Se Main Bahut Inpire Hota Hoon
Aur In Sabki Jhalak Apne Aap Mein Dekhta Hoon
Aashi Main Tumhare Liye Itna Crazy Hoon
Ki Apne Doston Ko Bhi 'duh Uh'aur 'hey Bhaggu'keh Kar Pukarta Hoon
Jab Bhi Uv Tumse Ladta Hai
Mujhe Us Pyscho Par Gussa Atta Hai
Jab Tumhari Timbo Se Nok Jhonk Hoti Hai
Mujhe Bahut Maza Aata Hai
Thakur Tumhara Saath Deta Hai
Isliye Wo Bhi Mujhe Achha Lagta Hai
Sonia Ki Tum Mamam Ho
Mere Liye Ideal Ho
Tumhara Motto Bahut Rebeleous Hai
Isliye Meri Philosophy Bhi"live Life Kingsize Hai" Hai
Mere Dost Mujhe Anvesha Ke Naam Se Chidhate Hain
Par Main Bura Nahi Maanta Hoon
Kyonki
Main Ashi Ayr Remix Se Behad Pyar Karta Hoon..........


Finally I've Written A Poem...oh Ghosh.........i Cant Stop Laughing.....u Can Also Laugh At This So Called Poem....
Well I Just Tried...plz Dont Ask Me To Write More Poems...
Yeh Hi Mushkil Se Likhi Hai Aur Wo Bhi Aisi........
Hum To Sirf Daad Dene Waalon Mein Se Hain

omg:eek: ...wat is dis amit ...i never knew abt dis......wat is dis ...really cant believe my eyes never xpected dis from u......hmmmmmm......stilll i m amazed did u really rite dis....


hey hey tak e a chill-pilll d poem is xceellent midn-blowing ever-blsting as a first attempt just briliiant aakhir ek aur poet shamil hua hamare becch...aur tahnx tune mere kehene pe poem likhi i m really happy ke mere wajese kisine poem toh likhi gud adn v r xpecting mroe poems now fom u...
:D ;) :cool:
luv ash

[amit@bitspilani]

omg:eek: ...wat is dis amit ...i never knew abt dis......wat is dis ...really cant believe my eyes never xpected dis from u......hmmmmmm......stilll i m amazed did u really rite dis....


hey hey tak e a chill-pilll d poem is xceellent midn-blowing ever-blsting as a first attempt just briliiant aakhir ek aur poet shamil hua hamare becch...aur tahnx tune mere kehene pe poem likhi i m really happy ke mere wajese kisine poem toh likhi gud adn v r xpecting mroe poems now fom u...
:D ;) :cool:
luv ash
see even i m amazed that i could write...
well thanx u like the poem....
arre puhleez i cant handle the word 'poet' wid me ...its too big for me....
and yes u encouraged me...so thanks..
par more poems........oops.........
bhaggu help..........

[animateash]

see even i m amazed that i could write...
well thanx u like the poem....
arre puhleez i cant handle the word 'poet' wid me ...its too big for me....
and yes u encouraged me...so thanks..
par more poems........oops.........
bhaggu help..........


wlecoem but u know wat even was liek u in dis scetion poet s even big for me also even i cant handle.....i thnk u have d talent so y r hidng it

go on man

luv ash

[amit@bitspilani]

toh iska matlab tum mere yuvi ko chod kar sab ke fan ho??????!!!!:mad: :p lol kiddin....

but seriously, tht was mindblowin!!!!!:)

ARRE NAHI RE...

AUR HAAN ONE THING I TELL U....I M PLAYING UV'S ROLE IN THREAD ROLE PLAYING....

TO PHIR...


WAISE ..IS NACHEEJ KI TAREEF KARNE KE LIYE SHUKRIYA HUZOOOR...........

[divyaashimix]

Plz Darr Mat Jaana Main Poem Likhne Wala Hoon...yes It's True.....par Kya Karoon Ash Ne Uksaya Hai....hope U Bear It........
Main Remix Se Behad Pyar Karta Hoon
Har Roz Sham Ke 8 Bajne Ka Intzar Karta Hoon
Remix Meri Zindagi Hai
Iske Characters Mujhe Bahut Priy Hain
Uv Ranny Tia Sab Se Main Pyar Karta Hoon
Lekin Main Sirf Anvesha Ka Hi Fan Hoon
Uske Dailogues,character,acting Se Main Bahut Inpire Hota Hoon
Aur In Sabki Jhalak Apne Aap Mein Dekhta Hoon
Aashi Main Tumhare Liye Itna Crazy Hoon
Ki Apne Doston Ko Bhi 'duh Uh'aur 'hey Bhaggu'keh Kar Pukarta Hoon
Jab Bhi Uv Tumse Ladta Hai
Mujhe Us Pyscho Par Gussa Atta Hai
Jab Tumhari Timbo Se Nok Jhonk Hoti Hai
Mujhe Bahut Maza Aata Hai
Thakur Tumhara Saath Deta Hai
Isliye Wo Bhi Mujhe Achha Lagta Hai
Sonia Ki Tum Mamam Ho
Mere Liye Ideal Ho
Tumhara Motto Bahut Rebeleous Hai
Isliye Meri Philosophy Bhi"live Life Kingsize Hai" Hai
Mere Dost Mujhe Anvesha Ke Naam Se Chidhate Hain
Par Main Bura Nahi Maanta Hoon
Kyonki
Main Ashi Ayr Remix Se Behad Pyar Karta Hoon..........


Finally I've Written A Poem...oh Ghosh.........i Cant Stop Laughing.....u Can Also Laugh At This So Called Poem....
Well I Just Tried...plz Dont Ask Me To Write More Poems...
Yeh Hi Mushkil Se Likhi Hai Aur Wo Bhi Aisi........
Hum To Sirf Daad Dene Waalon Mein Se Hain


Hey AMIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that was indeed rocking...........
as a new writer...
that was great..........
keep it up.......:D

[amit@bitspilani]

arre Talent Walent Kuchh Nahin...
It Was Just A Fluke..

Waise Chalo I'll Try Later Sometimes....

But Not Now...

[divyaashimix]

arre Talent Walent Kuchh Nahin...
It Was Just A Fluke..

Waise Chalo I'll Try Later Sometimes....

But Not Now...

fluke agar aisa hai......
then acctual poem would be a blasttt.......:D

[amit@bitspilani]

arre Talent Walent Kuchh Nahin...
It Was Just A Fluke..

Waise Chalo I'll Try Later Sometimes....

But Not Now...

[amit@bitspilani]

fluke agar aisa hai......
then acctual poem would be a blasttt.......:D
arre aisa kuch nahi....
chaliye chaliye divya mujhe chane ke jhaad par mat chadhaiye........

[style_ashitia]

hey amit its really cool gr8 work

[animateash]

fluke agar aisa hai......
then acctual poem would be a blasttt.......:D
he amit i agree wth divya agar fluke aisa ho den i m sure catual mein toh u must b riting awsoem poems re gud workd\


luv ash

[amit@bitspilani]

oh god.........
divya,ash,roohi...........
thanx million tons ....
all of u simply rock..........

[animateash]

oh god.........
divya,ash,roohi...........
thanx million tons ....
all of u simply rock..........
okei but ab jaldi se nayi poem psot kar sab w8 kar rahe bro...

luv ash

[animateash]

why do we alwyas ignore it....
it has given us so much...
it has given us protection by hurting themselves...
it has given us refreshment by xpecting nethng from us...
it has gievn us beautiful idols vic fill our hears with beautiful songs...
it has given us such pleasing whethers which always do their job without any pride ...
it has given us so much that its uncountable...
yes i am talking about this beautiful nature whom we alwasy ignore

luv ash

[amit@bitspilani]

okei but ab jaldi se nayi poem psot kar sab w8 kar rahe bro...

luv ash
OK I'LL TRY TONITE...U HV TO WAIT....

[amit@bitspilani]

wow ash tum aise words kahan se laati ho.....meri to itni vocab hi nahi hai ki aisi poem likh sakoon....\
awesome ash....

ek aur poem PHENK raha hoon...bardhasht karo

REMIX KE IS FORUM MEIN MAINE BHI NAAM KAMAYA HAI
AB ASH NE PHIR SE MUJHE POEM LIKHNE KE LIYE UKSAYA HAI
ABHI MERE BAARE MEIN KOI ITNA JAANTA NAHI
MUJHE POEMS LIKHNA NAHI AATA YEH KOI MAANTA NAHI
REMIX KE IS FORUM KA SAFAR BAHUT HI SUHAVNA RAHA HAI
3 DIN MEIN 100 POSTS POORE KARNA YEH AMAZING RAHA HAI
IS FORUM KO ATTRACTIVE BANANE MEIN ISKE MEMBERS KA DIMAG HAI
SABHI KE POSTS KARNE KA DIFFERENT DIFFERENT ANDAAJ HAI
ASH JAISI MODERATOR HUM SABKA KHYAL RAKHTI HAI
DIVYA ASHI KA FAN HONE MEIN MUJHSE COMPETE KARTI HAI
WO DONO REMIX FORUM KI JAAN HAIN HAI
SABKI HELP KARNA DONO KA KAAM HAI
SHWETA AUR RUHI DONO KAAFI SASHAKT HAIN
UN DONO KE LIYE MERE ANDER RESPECT HAI
AMY KE REPLIES MIND BLOWING HOTE HAIN
AUR MERE SABSE JYADA POSTS PARI KE THREADS MEIN HOTE HAIN
SABKE THAT MERI ATTATCHMENT KAFI GAHRI HO CHUKI HAI
ABHI 4-5 DIN HUE HAI,PAR SALLON GUJR JANE KI FEELING MUJHME AA RAHI HAI
ABHI MAIN DIN BHAR IS FORUM MEIN POST KARTA REHTA HOON
AUR APNI FEELING SABKE SAATH SHARE KARTA HOON
REMIX KE IS FORUM JAISA PLACE AUR KAHAN
ASH KI LEADERSHIP DIVYA KI VERSATILITY SHWETA KI SINCERITY AMY KI UV KE SAATH DEEWANGI PARI AUR RUHI KE POSTS SE HI ROSHAN MERA JAHAN HAI...............

[amit@bitspilani]

chalo ash maine to poem likh di...

the poem which u write have very deep meaning..
i mean u have that tremendous potential.....

i sometimes wonder if i could write poems like these...
u rock ash....

[evilseye]

wow ash tum aise words kahan se laati ho.....meri to itni vocab hi nahi hai ki aisi poem likh sakoon....\
awesome ash....

ek aur poem PHENK raha hoon...bardhasht karo

REMIX KE IS FORUM MEIN MAINE BHI NAAM KAMAYA HAI
AB ASH NE PHIR SE MUJHE POEM LIKHNE KE LIYE UKSAYA HAI
ABHI MERE BAARE MEIN KOI ITNA JAANTA NAHI
MUJHE POEMS LIKHNA NAHI AATA YEH KOI MAANTA NAHI
REMIX KE IS FORUM KA SAFAR BAHUT HI SUHAVNA RAHA HAI
3 DIN MEIN 100 POSTS POORE KARNA YEH AMAZING RAHA HAI
IS FORUM KO ATTRACTIVE BANANE MEIN ISKE MEMBERS KA DIMAG HAI
SABHI KE POSTS KARNE KA DIFFERENT DIFFERENT ANDAAJ HAI
ASH JAISI MODERATOR HUM SABKA KHYAL RAKHTI HAI
DIVYA ASHI KA FAN HONE MEIN MUJHSE COMPETE KARTI HAI
WO DONO REMIX FORUM KI JAAN HAIN HAI
SABKI HELP KARNA DONO KA KAAM HAI
SHWETA AUR RUHI DONO KAAFI SASHAKT HAIN
UN DONO KE LIYE MERE ANDER RESPECT HAI
AMY KE REPLIES MIND BLOWING HOTE HAIN
AUR MERE SABSE JYADA POSTS PARI KE THREADS MEIN HOTE HAIN
SABKE THAT MERI ATTATCHMENT KAFI GAHRI HO CHUKI HAI
ABHI 4-5 DIN HUE HAI,PAR SALLON GUJR JANE KI FEELING MUJHME AA RAHI HAI
ABHI MAIN DIN BHAR IS FORUM MEIN POST KARTA REHTA HOON
AUR APNI FEELING SABKE SAATH SHARE KARTA HOON
REMIX KE IS FORUM JAISA PLACE AUR KAHAN
ASH KI LEADERSHIP DIVYA KI VERSATILITY SHWETA KI SINCERITY AMY KI UV KE SAATH DEEWANGI PARI AUR RUHI KE POSTS SE HI ROSHAN MERA JAHAN HAI...............



WOW Amit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This poem is so totally ROCKING!!!!!!!!!!
Keep up the gud work!!!!!!!!
Luv
Sur.

[amit@bitspilani]

WOW Amit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This poem is so totally ROCKING!!!!!!!!!!
Keep up the gud work!!!!!!!!
Luv
Sur.
thanx evilseye.....

[animateash]

wow ash tum aise words kahan se laati ho.....meri to itni vocab hi nahi hai ki aisi poem likh sakoon....\
awesome ash....

ek aur poem PHENK raha hoon...bardhasht karo

REMIX KE IS FORUM MEIN MAINE BHI NAAM KAMAYA HAI
AB ASH NE PHIR SE MUJHE POEM LIKHNE KE LIYE UKSAYA HAI
ABHI MERE BAARE MEIN KOI ITNA JAANTA NAHI
MUJHE POEMS LIKHNA NAHI AATA YEH KOI MAANTA NAHI
REMIX KE IS FORUM KA SAFAR BAHUT HI SUHAVNA RAHA HAI
3 DIN MEIN 100 POSTS POORE KARNA YEH AMAZING RAHA HAI
IS FORUM KO ATTRACTIVE BANANE MEIN ISKE MEMBERS KA DIMAG HAI
SABHI KE POSTS KARNE KA DIFFERENT DIFFERENT ANDAAJ HAI
ASH JAISI MODERATOR HUM SABKA KHYAL RAKHTI HAI
DIVYA ASHI KA FAN HONE MEIN MUJHSE COMPETE KARTI HAI
WO DONO REMIX FORUM KI JAAN HAIN HAI
SABKI HELP KARNA DONO KA KAAM HAI
SHWETA AUR RUHI DONO KAAFI SASHAKT HAIN
UN DONO KE LIYE MERE ANDER RESPECT HAI
AMY KE REPLIES MIND BLOWING HOTE HAIN
AUR MERE SABSE JYADA POSTS PARI KE THREADS MEIN HOTE HAIN
SABKE THAT MERI ATTATCHMENT KAFI GAHRI HO CHUKI HAI
ABHI 4-5 DIN HUE HAI,PAR SALLON GUJR JANE KI FEELING MUJHME AA RAHI HAI
ABHI MAIN DIN BHAR IS FORUM MEIN POST KARTA REHTA HOON
AUR APNI FEELING SABKE SAATH SHARE KARTA HOON
REMIX KE IS FORUM JAISA PLACE AUR KAHAN
ASH KI LEADERSHIP DIVYA KI VERSATILITY SHWETA KI SINCERITY AMY KI UV KE SAATH DEEWANGI PARI AUR RUHI KE POSTS SE HI ROSHAN MERA JAHAN HAI...............






taxhnx a lot...tank u tank u tank u tank u tank u for such sweet word si never knew how much imp i m for otehrs ....seriously ...i m crying rite now...dontvwryb yeh khushi ke aasoon hai....n tahnx for commenting ifrst on my poem waise oth divya hamesha pehle comment karti hai woow ab tum bhi divu ke competition mein aa gaye....but all of u rock.....i never kbnew wat all thot abt me......
and ur poem rocks plzz riote some mroe poems i loevd it tume ek talent chupui hai plz get da talent out of cukko`s nest and show all fo dem dt tumhe mein bhi hai koi baat

luv ash

[animateash]

chalo ash maine to poem likh di...

the poem which u write have very deep meaning..
i mean u have that tremendous potential.....

i sometimes wonder if i could write poems like these...
u rock ash....



tahnx a lto and rite some more okei will be w8in for mroe hey hey i m not a poet ...bas jo man mein aata hai woh likh leti hu....u shud wonder fat u wish dat u cud rite poems liek gr8 poet s and not liek me meri poems toh un gr8 poets ke sameen chitti jasii bhi nahi hai

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

wow ash tum aise words kahan se laati ho.....meri to itni vocab hi nahi hai ki aisi poem likh sakoon....\
awesome ash....

ek aur poem PHENK raha hoon...bardhasht karo

REMIX KE IS FORUM MEIN MAINE BHI NAAM KAMAYA HAI
AB ASH NE PHIR SE MUJHE POEM LIKHNE KE LIYE UKSAYA HAI
ABHI MERE BAARE MEIN KOI ITNA JAANTA NAHI
MUJHE POEMS LIKHNA NAHI AATA YEH KOI MAANTA NAHI
REMIX KE IS FORUM KA SAFAR BAHUT HI SUHAVNA RAHA HAI
3 DIN MEIN 100 POSTS POORE KARNA YEH AMAZING RAHA HAI
IS FORUM KO ATTRACTIVE BANANE MEIN ISKE MEMBERS KA DIMAG HAI
SABHI KE POSTS KARNE KA DIFFERENT DIFFERENT ANDAAJ HAI
ASH JAISI MODERATOR HUM SABKA KHYAL RAKHTI HAI
DIVYA ASHI KA FAN HONE MEIN MUJHSE COMPETE KARTI HAI
WO DONO REMIX FORUM KI JAAN HAIN HAI
SABKI HELP KARNA DONO KA KAAM HAI
SHWETA AUR RUHI DONO KAAFI SASHAKT HAIN
UN DONO KE LIYE MERE ANDER RESPECT HAI
AMY KE REPLIES MIND BLOWING HOTE HAIN
AUR MERE SABSE JYADA POSTS PARI KE THREADS MEIN HOTE HAIN
SABKE THAT MERI ATTATCHMENT KAFI GAHRI HO CHUKI HAI
ABHI 4-5 DIN HUE HAI,PAR SALLON GUJR JANE KI FEELING MUJHME AA RAHI HAI
ABHI MAIN DIN BHAR IS FORUM MEIN POST KARTA REHTA HOON
AUR APNI FEELING SABKE SAATH SHARE KARTA HOON
REMIX KE IS FORUM JAISA PLACE AUR KAHAN
ASH KI LEADERSHIP DIVYA KI VERSATILITY SHWETA KI SINCERITY AMY KI UV KE SAATH DEEWANGI PARI AUR RUHI KE POSTS SE HI ROSHAN MERA JAHAN HAI...............




Hey bhaggu!!!!!!!!!
AMIT!!!!!!!!!!!
seriously...........
you are becoming JAVED AKHTAR yarrr..........
great poem man.........
keep it up.......:D

and hey...........
kya compete.........
merey saath compete karna hai to GO KARTING mein karna.......
dumdum.........

NEWAYS............
keep writing.
ROSHASH SARABHAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[amit@bitspilani]

taxhnx a lot...tank u tank u tank u tank u tank u for such sweet word si never knew how much imp i m for otehrs ....seriously ...i m crying rite now...dontvwryb yeh khushi ke aasoon hai....n tahnx for commenting ifrst on my poem waise oth divya hamesha pehle comment karti hai woow ab tum bhi divu ke competition mein aa gaye....but all of u rock.....i never kbnew wat all thot abt me......
and ur poem rocks plzz riote some mroe poems i loevd it tume ek talent chupui hai plz get da talent out of cukko`s nest and show all fo dem dt tumhe mein bhi hai koi baat

luv ash
HEY BHAGGU...NOW I M GETTING EMOTIONAL...
OH PUHLEEZ....

THANX THANX THANX......
WAISE I LUV UR POEMS MORE...SO U HAVE TO WRITE NOW........

[animateash]

HEY BHAGGU...NOW I M GETTING EMOTIONAL...
OH PUHLEEZ....

THANX THANX THANX......
WAISE I LUV UR POEMS MORE...SO U HAVE TO WRITE NOW........
eyahh yeahh rte mor

luv ash

[amit@bitspilani]

tahnx a lto and rite some more okei will be w8in for mroe hey hey i m not a poet ...bas jo man mein aata hai woh likh leti hu....u shud wonder fat u wish dat u cud rite poems liek gr8 poet s and not liek me meri poems toh un gr8 poets ke sameen chitti jasii bhi nahi hai

luv ash
NO... I WONT BELIEVE.....SEE...THOSE FINE QUALITY OF VOCAB...THATS GREAT...KIND OF USED BY THE POETS.....

[animateash]

NO... I WONT BELIEVE.....SEE...THOSE FINE QUALITY OF VOCAB...THATS GREAT...KIND OF USED BY THE POETS.....
ha ha ha h yeh sirf mere dil ke word s hai koi poet jaise nahi i was thnikin dat kash mein ksi gr8 poet ke jaise mein likho

lvu ash

[amit@bitspilani]

Hey bhaggu!!!!!!!!!
AMIT!!!!!!!!!!!
seriously...........
you are becoming JAVED AKHTAR yarrr..........
great poem man.........
keep it up.......:D

and hey...........
kya compete.........
merey saath compete karna hai to GO KARTING mein karna.......
dumdum.........

NEWAYS............
keep writing.
ROSHASH SARABHAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


DIVYA...WAISE KYON JAVED AKHTER KO BADNAAM KAR RAHI HO..
WO SUNEGE TO SUICIDE KAR LENGE....HAAN ROSESH IS FINE..(MOMA WALA)...WAISE WAT IS GO KARTING ....KYA BALA HAI YEH....

WAISE MERI SARI POEMS ROSESH KE JAISI TO THI...

ONE THING I TELL U DIVYA...
HUMARI TUMHARI KHOOB JAMEGI....
U R MY BEST FRIEND IN THIS FORUMM....

[amit@bitspilani]

ha ha ha h yeh sirf mere dil ke word s hai koi poet jaise nahi i was thnikin dat kash mein ksi gr8 poet ke jaise mein likho

lvu ash
TO HAR POET APNE DIL KE HI WORDS LIKHTA HAI...SO AS U...

[ria_cute]

oh my god amit. :eek: ur poems r really amazing. maine to tumhari poems ko apne pc mein save bhi kia hai. lage raho.:D

[animateash]

arre bhai kisine hamari poem rerad ki sirf amit ne ki lagti hai:( ..first time i ahd taken soem difefrent topic dats nature d poem is on d previous page



luv ash

[ria_cute]

oops....sorry...i forgot to comment on ur poem. it was really very nice to know ki tum aise serious topics par bhi poems likhti ho. n ur vocabulary n writing style r awsum as usual

[animateash]

oops....sorry...i forgot to comment on ur poem. it was really very nice to know ki tum aise serious topics par bhi poems likhti ho. n ur vocabulary n writing style r awsum as usual
tahxn a lto meine pehli baar socha ke alld is topic s r also imp
and otehrs also shud realsie abt it just try
lvu ash

[amit@bitspilani]

oh my god amit. :eek: ur poems r really amazing. maine to tumhari poems ko apne pc mein save bhi kia hai. lage raho.:D
HEY SO NICE OF U RIA..
THANX VERY MUCH.........

[divyaashimix]

DIVYA...WAISE KYON JAVED AKHTER KO BADNAAM KAR RAHI HO..
WO SUNEGE TO SUICIDE KAR LENGE....HAAN ROSESH IS FINE..(MOMA WALA)...WAISE WAT IS GO KARTING ....KYA BALA HAI YEH....

WAISE MERI SARI POEMS ROSESH KE JAISI TO THI...

ONE THING I TELL U DIVYA...
HUMARI TUMHARI KHOOB JAMEGI....
U R MY BEST FRIEND IN THIS FORUMM....


BALA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:eek:
arrey.......
its fun.......................
there is racing track.......
we get karts........
ab mein kaisey samjhao????????
basically it is a sort of car race.........
we have to race and be careful from the tyres..................
My speed is great in it.............
and I really love the fast skids that I take....................
mainey aapney bro ko first time mein haraya hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
do try it once ever in your life.......
IT ROXXXXX!!!!!!!!!!!!:D
and thanks for your kind words!!!!!!

[amit@bitspilani]

BALA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:eek:
arrey.......
its fun.......................
there is racing track.......
we get karts........
ab mein kaisey samjhao????????
basically it is a sort of car race.........
we have to race and be careful from the tyres..................
My speed is great in it.............
and I really love the fast skids that I take....................
mainey aapney bro ko first time mein haraya hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
do try it once ever in your life.......
IT ROXXXXX!!!!!!!!!!!!:D
and thanks for your kind words!!!!!!
OKKKKKKKKKK....DIVYA...
CHALO TRY KARENGE KABHI...

HEY I NOTICED ONE THING TODAY....
U JOINED THIS FORUM ON MY BIRTHDAYYYY
THATS 24 MARCH....WOW......

[amit@bitspilani]

o yaar...waise abhi baithe baithe naya topic mila...
so m goin to write oce again...plz dont mind.......

"REMIX POORE TELEVISION INDUSTRY KI JAAN HAI
YEH HI TO AAJKAL KE GEN X KI PEHCHAAN HAI
TV KE BAAKI SERIALS KE BAARE MEIN MAIN KYA KAHOON
IN SILLY KEKTA SERIALS KE BHAROSE MAIN KAISE RAHOON
UNKO DEKHKAR TO MUJHE BAHUT HI HASI AATI HAI
KAHANI KA ATA PAT NAHIN PHIR BHI WO AAGE BADHTI JAATI HAI
KYONKI MAIN TULSI ACTING TO THEEK KARTI HAI
PAR KYA BHYANAK TAREEKE SE WO ROTI HAI
ROTE HUE WO AJEEB AJEEB EXPRESSIONS BANATI HAI
AUR PATA NAHIN CHALTA KI WO HASTI HAI YA ROTI HAI
AUR AISE MEIN STORY 20YRS AAGE CHALI JAATI HAI
AUR YEH TULSI SE "TULSA" BAN JATI HAI
KAHANI KI PARVATI KA BHI KHOOB NAAM HAI
HAR KISI KE KAAM MEIN TAANG ARRANA USKA KAAM
KEKTA KE BAAKI 'K' SERIALS KA BHI YAHI HAAL HAI
YEH USKE KHOOFIA DIMAAG KI HI CHAAL HAI
USKI STORIES MEIN CHARACTERS ITNI JALADI BADALTE HAIN
AUR BETE APNI MAA SE BADE HI DIKHTE HAIN
USKE CHARACTERS SE KOI YE SWAAL POOCH SAKO
KE TUM KAUN SI MOISTURISING CREAM LAGATE HO
KEKTA CHARACTERS KO MAAR KAR BHI ZINDA KAR DETI HAI
ARRE USSE POOCHO KI KYA WO YAMRAAJ HAI
AGAR KASSI KI DEATH HO JATI HAI
TEEN DIN TAK PARVATI SIRF ROTI REHTI HAI
USSE POOCHO KI KYA USNE AUR KUCH NAHI KARNA HAI
LEKIN KYA KARE SERIAL BHI TO AAGE BADHANA HAI
AGAR KISSI KO CHANTA LAGTA HAI
YE SCENE AT LEAST TEEN BAAR REPLAY HOTA HAI
KEKTA TUM APNE CHARACTERS KE SAATH AISA KYON KARTI HO
UNKI TO 4,5 SHADIAN KARVATI HI APNI KYON EK BHI NAHI KARTI HO
HEY BHAGGU REMIX SE SABKO INSIPIRATION DO
AUR IS STRAIGHT HEAD BIMBO KEKTA KO SADBUDHI DO
REMIX SE IN K SERIALS KA KYA COMPETITION
REMIX IS THE BEST AND IT MAKES ME FEELS LIKE HEAVEN
REMIX KE AAGE SAARE SERIALS BONE HAI
REMIX IS A STAR AUR BAAKI SAB AISE DIRTY CLOTHES HAIN JO KE DHONE HAI
REMIX MERI AAN BAAN AUR SHAAN HAI
SACH HAI KI REMIX POORE TV INDUSTRY KI JAAN HAI........"





HEY.....MAINE EK AUR LIKH DI

AB ASH,DIVYA TUM DONO KI BAARI HAI
EAGERLY WAITIN 4 UR POEMS....

[Archie]

I really like this song i thought to post it here
real love --- by massari




Girl, girl I'm goin' outta my mind
And even though I don't really know you
I must've been runnin' outta time
I'm waiting for the moment I can show you
And baby girl I want you to know
I'm watching you go
I'm watching you pass me by
It's real love that you don't know about

Baby I was there all alone
When you'd be doin things i would watch you
I picture you and me all alone
I'm wishing you was someone i can talk to
I gotta get you out of my head
But baby girl I gotta see you once again, again
It's real love that you don't know about

Girl, girl I'm goin' outta my mind
And even though I don't really know you
I must've been runnin' outta time
I'm waiting for the moment I can show you
And baby girl I want you to know
I"m watching you go
I'm watching you pass me by
It's real love that you don't know about

Every night when I would go to sleep
I couldn't stop dreaming about you
Your love has got me feeling kinda weak
I really can't see me without you
And now you're runnin' round in my head
I'm never gonna let you slip away again
It's real love that you don't know about

Every now and then when I want you
I wish that I could tell you that I want you
If I could have the chance to talk wit cha
If I could have the chance to walk wit cha
Then I would stop holding it in
And never have to go through this again, again
It's real love that you don't know about

Girl, girl I'm goin' outta my mind
And even though I don't really know you
I must've been runnin' outta time
I'm waiting for the moment I can show you
And baby girl I want you to know
I"m watching you go
I'm watching you pass me by
It's real love that you don't know about

Today when I saw you alone
I knew I had to come up and approach you
Cuz girl I really gotta let you know
All about the things you made me go through
And now she lookin' at me in the eye
And now you got me hopin' I ain't dreamin' again,

Again
It's real love that you don't know about

Every now and then when I want you
I wish that I could tell you that I want you
If I could have the chance to talk wit cha
If I could have the chance to walk wit cha
Then I would stop holding it in
And never have to go through this again, again
It's real love that you don't know about

Girl, girl I'm goin' outta my mind
And even though I don't really know you
I must've been runnin' outta time
I'm waiting for the moment I can show you
And baby girl I want you to know
I"m watching you go
I'm watching you pass me by
It's real love that you don't know about

You're the one that I want and no one can take

It from me
No, no, no, no, no
Even though I don't really know you
I got a lot of love I wanna show you
And you'd be right there in front of me
I can see you passin' in front of me
No, no, no
Girl I need your love
Baby I need your love

[animateash]

o yaar...waise abhi baithe baithe naya topic mila...
so m goin to write oce again...plz dont mind.......

"REMIX POORE TELEVISION INDUSTRY KI JAAN HAI
YEH HI TO AAJKAL KE GEN X KI PEHCHAAN HAI
TV KE BAAKI SERIALS KE BAARE MEIN MAIN KYA KAHOON
IN SILLY KEKTA SERIALS KE BHAROSE MAIN KAISE RAHOON
UNKO DEKHKAR TO MUJHE BAHUT HI HASI AATI HAI
KAHANI KA ATA PAT NAHIN PHIR BHI WO AAGE BADHTI JAATI HAI
KYONKI MAIN TULSI ACTING TO THEEK KARTI HAI
PAR KYA BHYANAK TAREEKE SE WO ROTI HAI
ROTE HUE WO AJEEB AJEEB EXPRESSIONS BANATI HAI
AUR PATA NAHIN CHALTA KI WO HASTI HAI YA ROTI HAI
AUR AISE MEIN STORY 20YRS AAGE CHALI JAATI HAI
AUR YEH TULSI SE "TULSA" BAN JATI HAI
KAHANI KI PARVATI KA BHI KHOOB NAAM HAI
HAR KISI KE KAAM MEIN TAANG ARRANA USKA KAAM
KEKTA KE BAAKI 'K' SERIALS KA BHI YAHI HAAL HAI
YEH USKE KHOOFIA DIMAAG KI HI CHAAL HAI
USKI STORIES MEIN CHARACTERS ITNI JALADI BADALTE HAIN
AUR BETE APNI MAA SE BADE HI DIKHTE HAIN
USKE CHARACTERS SE KOI YE SWAAL POOCH SAKO
KE TUM KAUN SI MOISTURISING CREAM LAGATE HO
KEKTA CHARACTERS KO MAAR KAR BHI ZINDA KAR DETI HAI
ARRE USSE POOCHO KI KYA WO YAMRAAJ HAI
AGAR KASSI KI DEATH HO JATI HAI
TEEN DIN TAK PARVATI SIRF ROTI REHTI HAI
USSE POOCHO KI KYA USNE AUR KUCH NAHI KARNA HAI
LEKIN KYA KARE SERIAL BHI TO AAGE BADHANA HAI
AGAR KISSI KO CHANTA LAGTA HAI
YE SCENE AT LEAST TEEN BAAR REPLAY HOTA HAI
KEKTA TUM APNE CHARACTERS KE SAATH AISA KYON KARTI HO
UNKI TO 4,5 SHADIAN KARVATI HI APNI KYON EK BHI NAHI KARTI HO
HEY BHAGGU REMIX SE SABKO INSIPIRATION DO
AUR IS STRAIGHT HEAD BIMBO KEKTA KO SADBUDHI DO
REMIX SE IN K SERIALS KA KYA COMPETITION
REMIX IS THE BEST AND IT MAKES ME FEELS LIKE HEAVEN
REMIX KE AAGE SAARE SERIALS BONE HAI
REMIX IS A STAR AUR BAAKI SAB AISE DIRTY CLOTHES HAIN JO KE DHONE HAI
REMIX MERI AAN BAAN AUR SHAAN HAI
SACH HAI KI REMIX POORE TV INDUSTRY KI JAAN HAI........"





HEY.....MAINE EK AUR LIKH DI

AB ASH,DIVYA TUM DONO KI BAARI HAI
EAGERLY WAITIN 4 UR POEMS....











hey awesoem poem my dear bro love dit kya baat hai re

lvu ash

[animateash]

I really like this song i thought to post it here
real love --- by massari




Girl, girl I'm goin' outta my mind
And even though I don't really know you
I must've been runnin' outta time
I'm waiting for the moment I can show you
And baby girl I want you to know
I'm watching you go
I'm watching you pass me by
It's real love that you don't know about

Baby I was there all alone
When you'd be doin things i would watch you
I picture you and me all alone
I'm wishing you was someone i can talk to
I gotta get you out of my head
But baby girl I gotta see you once again, again
It's real love that you don't know about

Girl, girl I'm goin' outta my mind
And even though I don't really know you
I must've been runnin' outta time
I'm waiting for the moment I can show you
And baby girl I want you to know
I"m watching you go
I'm watching you pass me by
It's real love that you don't know about

Every night when I would go to sleep
I couldn't stop dreaming about you
Your love has got me feeling kinda weak
I really can't see me without you
And now you're runnin' round in my head
I'm never gonna let you slip away again
It's real love that you don't know about

Every now and then when I want you
I wish that I could tell you that I want you
If I could have the chance to talk wit cha
If I could have the chance to walk wit cha
Then I would stop holding it in
And never have to go through this again, again
It's real love that you don't know about

Girl, girl I'm goin' outta my mind
And even though I don't really know you
I must've been runnin' outta time
I'm waiting for the moment I can show you
And baby girl I want you to know
I"m watching you go
I'm watching you pass me by
It's real love that you don't know about

Today when I saw you alone
I knew I had to come up and approach you
Cuz girl I really gotta let you know
All about the things you made me go through
And now she lookin' at me in the eye
And now you got me hopin' I ain't dreamin' again,

Again
It's real love that you don't know about

Every now and then when I want you
I wish that I could tell you that I want you
If I could have the chance to talk wit cha
If I could have the chance to walk wit cha
Then I would stop holding it in
And never have to go through this again, again
It's real love that you don't know about

Girl, girl I'm goin' outta my mind
And even though I don't really know you
I must've been runnin' outta time
I'm waiting for the moment I can show you
And baby girl I want you to know
I"m watching you go
I'm watching you pass me by
It's real love that you don't know about

You're the one that I want and no one can take

It from me
No, no, no, no, no
Even though I don't really know you
I got a lot of love I wanna show you
And you'd be right there in front of me
I can see you passin' in front of me
No, no, no
Girl I need your love
Baby I need your love


hey gud one

luv ash

[animateash]

na janne kyun hota hai aisa mere saath...
jo karna na chahu woh hi ho jata hai...
jiske baaremien sochna na chachu uske hi baaremien sochti hu
uske us dhoke ke baad mujhe uske baaremien sochna hi nahi chahiye lkein uska khyal mere dimag se jaat ahi nahi..
kyun mein usse abhi bhi pyaar karti hoon..
kyun woh mere dil se nahi nikalta
kyun mujhe uski yaad tadpati hai...
kash ek baar usse bhool jao ...
toh mujhe apni bhool nahi yaad aayegi..
ha meri bhool usse chuneki...
meri bhool usse pyaar karneki...
meri bhool usse apnaneki...
mere naseeb mein hi bhagwan ne yeh kyun likha hai...
mere naseeb mein hi kyun dhoka lika hai..
mere naseeb mein hi kyun pyar nahi likha...
mere naseeb mein bhagwan ne jo unchaha hai woh kyun likha....
aise haalat se mein hi kyun guzarti hoon
kyun kyun kyun kyun kyun....?????

luv ash

[amit@bitspilani]

I really like this song i thought to post it here
real love --- by massari




Girl, girl I'm goin' outta my mind
And even though I don't really know you
I must've been runnin' outta time
I'm waiting for the moment I can show you
And baby girl I want you to know
I'm watching you go
I'm watching you pass me by
It's real love that you don't know about

Baby I was there all alone
When you'd be doin things i would watch you
I picture you and me all alone
I'm wishing you was someone i can talk to
I gotta get you out of my head
But baby girl I gotta see you once again, again
It's real love that you don't know about

Girl, girl I'm goin' outta my mind
And even though I don't really know you
I must've been runnin' outta time
I'm waiting for the moment I can show you
And baby girl I want you to know
I"m watching you go
I'm watching you pass me by
It's real love that you don't know about

Every night when I would go to sleep
I couldn't stop dreaming about you
Your love has got me feeling kinda weak
I really can't see me without you
And now you're runnin' round in my head
I'm never gonna let you slip away again
It's real love that you don't know about

Every now and then when I want you
I wish that I could tell you that I want you
If I could have the chance to talk wit cha
If I could have the chance to walk wit cha
Then I would stop holding it in
And never have to go through this again, again
It's real love that you don't know about

Girl, girl I'm goin' outta my mind
And even though I don't really know you
I must've been runnin' outta time
I'm waiting for the moment I can show you
And baby girl I want you to know
I"m watching you go
I'm watching you pass me by
It's real love that you don't know about

Today when I saw you alone
I knew I had to come up and approach you
Cuz girl I really gotta let you know
All about the things you made me go through
And now she lookin' at me in the eye
And now you got me hopin' I ain't dreamin' again,

Again
It's real love that you don't know about

Every now and then when I want you
I wish that I could tell you that I want you
If I could have the chance to talk wit cha
If I could have the chance to walk wit cha
Then I would stop holding it in
And never have to go through this again, again
It's real love that you don't know about

Girl, girl I'm goin' outta my mind
And even though I don't really know you
I must've been runnin' outta time
I'm waiting for the moment I can show you
And baby girl I want you to know
I"m watching you go
I'm watching you pass me by
It's real love that you don't know about

You're the one that I want and no one can take

It from me
No, no, no, no, no
Even though I don't really know you
I got a lot of love I wanna show you
And you'd be right there in front of me
I can see you passin' in front of me
No, no, no
Girl I need your love
Baby I need your love
HEY,.....SO SWEET ARCHIE...
VERY WELL DONE....

[divyaashimix]

na janne kyun hota hai aisa mere saath...
jo karna na chahu woh hi ho jata hai...
jiske baaremien sochna na chachu uske hi baaremien sochti hu
uske us dhoke ke baad mujhe uske baaremien sochna hi nahi chahiye lkein uska khyal mere dimag se jaat ahi nahi..
kyun mein usse abhi bhi pyaar karti hoon..
kyun woh mere dil se nahi nikalta
kyun mujhe uski yaad tadpati hai...
kash ek baar usse bhool jao ...
toh mujhe apni bhool nahi yaad aayegi..
ha meri bhool usse chuneki...
meri bhool usse pyaar karneki...
meri bhool usse apnaneki...
mere naseeb mein hi bhagwan ne yeh kyun likha hai...
mere naseeb mein hi kyun dhoka lika hai..
mere naseeb mein hi kyun pyar nahi likha...
mere naseeb mein bhagwan ne jo unchaha hai woh kyun likha....
aise haalat se mein hi kyun guzarti hoon
kyun kyun kyun kyun kyun....?????

luv ash


Hey Thakur...............
a great poem yaarrrr..............
a touchy one.........
you know...........
you are a gr8 human.........
I get to know it from your poems.............
Kool stufff is presented by you.........:)

[divyaashimix]

I really like this song i thought to post it here
real love --- by massari




Girl, girl I'm goin' outta my mind
And even though I don't really know you
I must've been runnin' outta time
I'm waiting for the moment I can show you
And baby girl I want you to know
I'm watching you go
I'm watching you pass me by
It's real love that you don't know about

Baby I was there all alone
When you'd be doin things i would watch you
I picture you and me all alone
I'm wishing you was someone i can talk to
I gotta get you out of my head
But baby girl I gotta see you once again, again
It's real love that you don't know about

Girl, girl I'm goin' outta my mind
And even though I don't really know you
I must've been runnin' outta time
I'm waiting for the moment I can show you
And baby girl I want you to know
I"m watching you go
I'm watching you pass me by
It's real love that you don't know about

Every night when I would go to sleep
I couldn't stop dreaming about you
Your love has got me feeling kinda weak
I really can't see me without you
And now you're runnin' round in my head
I'm never gonna let you slip away again
It's real love that you don't know about

Every now and then when I want you
I wish that I could tell you that I want you
If I could have the chance to talk wit cha
If I could have the chance to walk wit cha
Then I would stop holding it in
And never have to go through this again, again
It's real love that you don't know about

Girl, girl I'm goin' outta my mind
And even though I don't really know you
I must've been runnin' outta time
I'm waiting for the moment I can show you
And baby girl I want you to know
I"m watching you go
I'm watching you pass me by
It's real love that you don't know about

Today when I saw you alone
I knew I had to come up and approach you
Cuz girl I really gotta let you know
All about the things you made me go through
And now she lookin' at me in the eye
And now you got me hopin' I ain't dreamin' again,

Again
It's real love that you don't know about

Every now and then when I want you
I wish that I could tell you that I want you
If I could have the chance to talk wit cha
If I could have the chance to walk wit cha
Then I would stop holding it in
And never have to go through this again, again
It's real love that you don't know about

Girl, girl I'm goin' outta my mind
And even though I don't really know you
I must've been runnin' outta time
I'm waiting for the moment I can show you
And baby girl I want you to know
I"m watching you go
I'm watching you pass me by
It's real love that you don't know about

You're the one that I want and no one can take

It from me
No, no, no, no, no
Even though I don't really know you
I got a lot of love I wanna show you
And you'd be right there in front of me
I can see you passin' in front of me
No, no, no
Girl I need your love
Baby I need your love

Hey ARCHIE!!!!!!!!!!
kool one.........:D

[divyaashimix]

OKKKKKKKKKK....DIVYA...
CHALO TRY KARENGE KABHI...

HEY I NOTICED ONE THING TODAY....
U JOINED THIS FORUM ON MY BIRTHDAYYYY
THATS 24 MARCH....WOW......

Okey........................
gr8 mannn.........
Belated HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D

[divyaashimix]

o yaar...waise abhi baithe baithe naya topic mila...
so m goin to write oce again...plz dont mind.......

"REMIX POORE TELEVISION INDUSTRY KI JAAN HAI
YEH HI TO AAJKAL KE GEN X KI PEHCHAAN HAI
TV KE BAAKI SERIALS KE BAARE MEIN MAIN KYA KAHOON
IN SILLY KEKTA SERIALS KE BHAROSE MAIN KAISE RAHOON
UNKO DEKHKAR TO MUJHE BAHUT HI HASI AATI HAI
KAHANI KA ATA PAT NAHIN PHIR BHI WO AAGE BADHTI JAATI HAI
KYONKI MAIN TULSI ACTING TO THEEK KARTI HAI
PAR KYA BHYANAK TAREEKE SE WO ROTI HAI
ROTE HUE WO AJEEB AJEEB EXPRESSIONS BANATI HAI
AUR PATA NAHIN CHALTA KI WO HASTI HAI YA ROTI HAI
AUR AISE MEIN STORY 20YRS AAGE CHALI JAATI HAI
AUR YEH TULSI SE "TULSA" BAN JATI HAI
KAHANI KI PARVATI KA BHI KHOOB NAAM HAI
HAR KISI KE KAAM MEIN TAANG ARRANA USKA KAAM
KEKTA KE BAAKI 'K' SERIALS KA BHI YAHI HAAL HAI
YEH USKE KHOOFIA DIMAAG KI HI CHAAL HAI
USKI STORIES MEIN CHARACTERS ITNI JALADI BADALTE HAIN
AUR BETE APNI MAA SE BADE HI DIKHTE HAIN
USKE CHARACTERS SE KOI YE SWAAL POOCH SAKO
KE TUM KAUN SI MOISTURISING CREAM LAGATE HO
KEKTA CHARACTERS KO MAAR KAR BHI ZINDA KAR DETI HAI
ARRE USSE POOCHO KI KYA WO YAMRAAJ HAI
AGAR KASSI KI DEATH HO JATI HAI
TEEN DIN TAK PARVATI SIRF ROTI REHTI HAI
USSE POOCHO KI KYA USNE AUR KUCH NAHI KARNA HAI
LEKIN KYA KARE SERIAL BHI TO AAGE BADHANA HAI
AGAR KISSI KO CHANTA LAGTA HAI
YE SCENE AT LEAST TEEN BAAR REPLAY HOTA HAI
KEKTA TUM APNE CHARACTERS KE SAATH AISA KYON KARTI HO
UNKI TO 4,5 SHADIAN KARVATI HI APNI KYON EK BHI NAHI KARTI HO
HEY BHAGGU REMIX SE SABKO INSIPIRATION DO
AUR IS STRAIGHT HEAD BIMBO KEKTA KO SADBUDHI DO
REMIX SE IN K SERIALS KA KYA COMPETITION
REMIX IS THE BEST AND IT MAKES ME FEELS LIKE HEAVEN
REMIX KE AAGE SAARE SERIALS BONE HAI
REMIX IS A STAR AUR BAAKI SAB AISE DIRTY CLOTHES HAIN JO KE DHONE HAI
REMIX MERI AAN BAAN AUR SHAAN HAI
SACH HAI KI REMIX POORE TV INDUSTRY KI JAAN HAI........"





HEY.....MAINE EK AUR LIKH DI

AB ASH,DIVYA TUM DONO KI BAARI HAI
EAGERLY WAITIN 4 UR POEMS....









Hey BHaggu!!!!!!!!!!!
AMIT............
great poem man...........
and hey........
I'm a moody writer..........
this was the first poem that I had written


GUESS!!!!WHO IS SHE????

DUH-UH COMES IN MY MIND,
WHEN I THINK OF A GIRL,
SO FUNNY, CUTE AND KIND…….
SHE IS MUMUM FOR HER MOTHER,
LIKE HER!!! THERE IS NO ONE OTHER…..
SHE IS ONE AMONG THE THREE MUSKITEARS,
A GIRL FULL OF LIFE, WHO NEVER FEARS…….
AMAZING GUTS AND A FABULOUS SMILE,
HER PERSONALITY IS VERSATILE……..
RED HEADED DOLL, WITH A DEEP DIMPLE,
HER EYES TELL HER TRUTH,
“MAN!!!!! YOU ARE SO SIMPLE”……..
THE TOMBOY ATTITUDE, A MISCHEIVIOUS PITARA,
SHE WILL REACH HEIGHTS OF SUCCESS,
SHINING LIKE A SITARA……
PSYCO, DODO, AWESOME, MATEY VRINDESHWARI,
THESE WORDS ARE USED BY HER,
DIDN’T GUESS YET !!!! COMON LETS HURRY!!!!!!!!
YUVI’S QUEEN,
A REBELLIOUS TEEN,
SUCH AN EXPRESSIVE , ENTHUSIASTIC AND EXPERT DIVA!!!!!!
GOSH!!!!!!!!! I’VE NEVER SEEN…….
REMIX KI JAAN , DIVYA KI PYARI,
MAURYA KI SHAAN,
WHO HAI SABSEY NYARI……
AMONG THE REST,
SHE IS THE BEST…..
I’LL LOVE HER,
FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART HAMESHA,
HEY BHAGGU!!!!!!!!!!
YOU GOT HER RIGHT,
SHE IS ANVESHA…………..
I SALUTE THE ACTOR,
WHO HAS HER UNIQUE STYLE,
OF PLAYING THIS CHARACTER…..
SHE IS MY IDOL AND IS LOVED BY ALL,
SHE IS ONE,
SHE IS SPECIAL,
SHE IS PRIYA WAL…..
ALL THEASE WORDS,
ARE FROM THE DEPTH OF MY HEART,
I HOPE WE MEET SOON,
IT’LL BE A NEW START…………….

[animateash]

Hey BHaggu!!!!!!!!!!!
AMIT............
great poem man...........
and hey........
I'm a moody writer..........
this was the first poem that I had written


GUESS!!!!WHO IS SHE????

DUH-UH COMES IN MY MIND,
WHEN I THINK OF A GIRL,
SO FUNNY, CUTE AND KIND…….
SHE IS MUMUM FOR HER MOTHER,
LIKE HER!!! THERE IS NO ONE OTHER…..
SHE IS ONE AMONG THE THREE MUSKITEARS,
A GIRL FULL OF LIFE, WHO NEVER FEARS…….
AMAZING GUTS AND A FABULOUS SMILE,
HER PERSONALITY IS VERSATILE……..
RED HEADED DOLL, WITH A DEEP DIMPLE,
HER EYES TELL HER TRUTH,
“MAN!!!!! YOU ARE SO SIMPLE”……..
THE TOMBOY ATTITUDE, A MISCHEIVIOUS PITARA,
SHE WILL REACH HEIGHTS OF SUCCESS,
SHINING LIKE A SITARA……
PSYCO, DODO, AWESOME, MATEY VRINDESHWARI,
THESE WORDS ARE USED BY HER,
DIDN’T GUESS YET !!!! COMON LETS HURRY!!!!!!!!
YUVI’S QUEEN,
A REBELLIOUS TEEN,
SUCH AN EXPRESSIVE , ENTHUSIASTIC AND EXPERT DIVA!!!!!!
GOSH!!!!!!!!! I’VE NEVER SEEN…….
REMIX KI JAAN , DIVYA KI PYARI,
MAURYA KI SHAAN,
WHO HAI SABSEY NYARI……
AMONG THE REST,
SHE IS THE BEST…..
I’LL LOVE HER,
FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART HAMESHA,
HEY BHAGGU!!!!!!!!!!
YOU GOT HER RIGHT,
SHE IS ANVESHA…………..
I SALUTE THE ACTOR,
WHO HAS HER UNIQUE STYLE,
OF PLAYING THIS CHARACTER…..
SHE IS MY IDOL AND IS LOVED BY ALL,
SHE IS ONE,
SHE IS SPECIAL,
SHE IS PRIYA WAL…..
ALL THEASE WORDS,
ARE FROM THE DEPTH OF MY HEART,
I HOPE WE MEET SOON,
IT’LL BE A NEW START…………….


hey eyh toh teri pehli poem rite

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

hey eyh toh teri pehli poem rite

luv ash
absolutely right!!!!!!!:D

[animateash]

Hey Thakur...............
a great poem yaarrrr..............
a touchy one.........
you know...........
you are a gr8 human.........
I get to know it from your poems.............
Kool stufff is presented by you.........:)


tahnx alot

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

why do we alwyas ignore it....
it has given us so much...
it has given us protection by hurting themselves...
it has given us refreshment by xpecting nethng from us...
it has gievn us beautiful idols vic fill our hears with beautiful songs...
it has given us such pleasing whethers which always do their job without any pride ...
it has given us so much that its uncountable...
yes i am talking about this beautiful nature whom we alwasy ignore

luv ash

Hey Thakur........
I'm sorry I'm late in comenting........
but the poem is awesome.................
kool work nature lover........
even I love nature.......:D

[animateash]

Hey Thakur........
I'm sorry I'm late in comenting........
but the poem is awesome.................
kool work nature lover........
even I love nature.......:D


tahxn a lto yeahh i liek nature l
lvu ash

[amit@bitspilani]

na janne kyun hota hai aisa mere saath...
jo karna na chahu woh hi ho jata hai...
jiske baaremien sochna na chachu uske hi baaremien sochti hu
uske us dhoke ke baad mujhe uske baaremien sochna hi nahi chahiye lkein uska khyal mere dimag se jaat ahi nahi..
kyun mein usse abhi bhi pyaar karti hoon..
kyun woh mere dil se nahi nikalta
kyun mujhe uski yaad tadpati hai...
kash ek baar usse bhool jao ...
toh mujhe apni bhool nahi yaad aayegi..
ha meri bhool usse chuneki...
meri bhool usse pyaar karneki...
meri bhool usse apnaneki...
mere naseeb mein hi bhagwan ne yeh kyun likha hai...
mere naseeb mein hi kyun dhoka lika hai..
mere naseeb mein hi kyun pyar nahi likha...
mere naseeb mein bhagwan ne jo unchaha hai woh kyun likha....
aise haalat se mein hi kyun guzarti hoon
kyun kyun kyun kyun kyun....?????

luv ash
oh my god....

REALLY ASH THATS THE REAL STUFF....

SEE I'VE ALWAYS TOLD U THAT U R A REAL POET...TUM BHI NA...

WHY DONT U JUST PUBLISHUR POEMS IN SOME MAGAZINES...

I MEAN SO FULL OF FEELINGS....EMOTIONS...

A TOP CLASS POEM U HAVE WRITTEN..

HATS OFF....

I M FAN OF UR WRITINGG

YEAH.........WE WANT MORE.........MORE........

[amit@bitspilani]

Hey BHaggu!!!!!!!!!!!
AMIT............
great poem man...........
and hey........
I'm a moody writer..........
this was the first poem that I had written


GUESS!!!!WHO IS SHE????

DUH-UH COMES IN MY MIND,
WHEN I THINK OF A GIRL,
SO FUNNY, CUTE AND KIND…….
SHE IS MUMUM FOR HER MOTHER,
LIKE HER!!! THERE IS NO ONE OTHER…..
SHE IS ONE AMONG THE THREE MUSKITEARS,
A GIRL FULL OF LIFE, WHO NEVER FEARS…….
AMAZING GUTS AND A FABULOUS SMILE,
HER PERSONALITY IS VERSATILE……..
RED HEADED DOLL, WITH A DEEP DIMPLE,
HER EYES TELL HER TRUTH,
“MAN!!!!! YOU ARE SO SIMPLE”……..
THE TOMBOY ATTITUDE, A MISCHEIVIOUS PITARA,
SHE WILL REACH HEIGHTS OF SUCCESS,
SHINING LIKE A SITARA……
PSYCO, DODO, AWESOME, MATEY VRINDESHWARI,
THESE WORDS ARE USED BY HER,
DIDN’T GUESS YET !!!! COMON LETS HURRY!!!!!!!!
YUVI’S QUEEN,
A REBELLIOUS TEEN,
SUCH AN EXPRESSIVE , ENTHUSIASTIC AND EXPERT DIVA!!!!!!
GOSH!!!!!!!!! I’VE NEVER SEEN…….
REMIX KI JAAN , DIVYA KI PYARI,
MAURYA KI SHAAN,
WHO HAI SABSEY NYARI……
AMONG THE REST,
SHE IS THE BEST…..
I’LL LOVE HER,
FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART HAMESHA,
HEY BHAGGU!!!!!!!!!!
YOU GOT HER RIGHT,
SHE IS ANVESHA…………..
I SALUTE THE ACTOR,
WHO HAS HER UNIQUE STYLE,
OF PLAYING THIS CHARACTER…..
SHE IS MY IDOL AND IS LOVED BY ALL,
SHE IS ONE,
SHE IS SPECIAL,
SHE IS PRIYA WAL…..
ALL THEASE WORDS,
ARE FROM THE DEPTH OF MY HEART,
I HOPE WE MEET SOON,
IT’LL BE A NEW START…………….


WOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW

AMAZING....

TERRIFIC..........

MARVELOUS.........

RIGHT NOW THE FEELING I HAVE IS..
KI IS POEM KO BAAR BAAR READ KAROON..
AND I M DOING IT........
WHAT A POEM.....
AUR WAISE BHI ANVESHA'S POEM IS ALWAYS PRECIOUS........

WAISE DEKHA JAAYE TO WE HAVE TOO MANY SIMILARITIES IN US...

WE BOTH LUV ANVESHA .......

WE BOTH LUV TO CRACK JOKES

WE BOTH R FULL OF LIFE....

WE BOTH R MOODY WRITERS....

THE FIRST POEM WRITTEN BY US IS ON ANVESHA.........

GOD.......KYA HUM EK INSAAN KE DO ROOP TO NAHIN HAIN.......


LUVED UR POEM...........


NOW U HAVE TO WRITE MORE POEMS ON ANVESHA AND PLZ DEDICATE THOSE TO ME......I'LL KEEP THEM FOREVER........

[divyaashimix]

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW

AMAZING....

TERRIFIC..........

MARVELOUS.........

RIGHT NOW THE FEELING I HAVE IS..
KI IS POEM KO BAAR BAAR READ KAROON..
AND I M DOING IT........
WHAT A POEM.....
AUR WAISE BHI ANVESHA'S POEM IS ALWAYS PRECIOUS........

WAISE DEKHA JAAYE TO WE HAVE TOO MANY SIMILARITIES IN US...

WE BOTH LUV ANVESHA .......

WE BOTH LUV TO CRACK JOKES

WE BOTH R FULL OF LIFE....

WE BOTH R MOODY WRITERS....

THE FIRST POEM WRITTEN BY US IS ON ANVESHA.........

GOD.......KYA HUM EK INSAAN KE DO ROOP TO NAHIN HAIN.......


LUVED UR POEM...........


NOW U HAVE TO WRITE MORE POEMS ON ANVESHA AND PLZ DEDICATE THOSE TO ME......I'LL KEEP THEM FOREVER........

Hey very true............
and wah wah wah............
zabarzasti poems likhkar tuhjey dedicate karo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
gr8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:p

[amit@bitspilani]

Hey very true............
and wah wah wah............
zabarzasti poems likhkar tuhjey dedicate karo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
gr8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:p

NOE HOW RUDE WAS THAT............
TO KYA..........
I DONT KNOW ANYTHING.......
TO KYA MERE LIYE ITNA BHI NAHI KAR SAKTI...
DIVYA...MAINE TUMHE APNA DOST MANA AUR TUM...

OH.......JYADA DRAMA HO GAYA KYA..OOOPS

BUT U HAVE TO WRITE FOR ME...
KAHO TO TUMHARI BUTTERING BHI KAR DETA HOON..

PLZ PLZ PLZ...

[divyaashimix]

NOE HOW RUDE WAS THAT............
TO KYA..........
I DONT KNOW ANYTHING.......
TO KYA MERE LIYE ITNA BHI NAHI KAR SAKTI...
DIVYA...MAINE TUMHE APNA DOST MANA AUR TUM...

OH.......JYADA DRAMA HO GAYA KYA..OOOPS

BUT U HAVE TO WRITE FOR ME...
KAHO TO TUMHARI BUTTERING BHI KAR DETA HOON..

PLZ PLZ PLZ...


duh-uh!!!!!!!!!!!!
AMIT.....
I was just kidding.........
but yeah kya.....................
itna emmotional yaaarrrrr....................
bhang wang pi li hai kya???????????????????
bang on you,
dumbo..........
okey.........
I'll try to write.................:D
buttering bahut kar li...........
itna butter khaongi toh moti ho jaogi!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[amit@bitspilani]

duh-uh!!!!!!!!!!!!
AMIT.....
I was just kidding.........
but yeah kya.....................
itna emmotional yaaarrrrr....................
bhang wang pi li hai kya???????????????????
bang on you,
dumbo..........
okey.........
I'll try to write.................:D
buttering bahut kar li...........
itna butter khaongi toh moti ho jaogi!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HEY BHAGGU.......
PLZ YAAR...MAIN EMOTIONAL KAB THA...
ISILIYE KAHA HAI KI JYADA KEKTA SERIALS MAT DEKHO...
COMEDY KO BHI SERIOUSLY LE LETI HO...
(AAGE SE NEECHE LIKH DIYA KAROONGA KI JOKE THA NAHIN TO TUMHE SAMAJH HI NA AAYE...
HAHAHAHA.........
WAISE I M THRILLED TO IMAGINE U AS MOTI.....

[divyaashimix]

HEY BHAGGU.......
PLZ YAAR...MAIN EMOTIONAL KAB THA...
ISILIYE KAHA HAI KI JYADA KEKTA SERIALS MAT DEKHO...
COMEDY KO BHI SERIOUSLY LE LETI HO...
(AAGE SE NEECHE LIKH DIYA KAROONGA KI JOKE THA NAHIN TO TUMHE SAMAJH HI NA AAYE...
HAHAHAHA.........
WAISE I M THRILLED TO IMAGINE U AS MOTI.....

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK KKKKTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT TTTTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
SERIALS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK................... ..............
MEIN GUN POINT PAR BHI DEKHANEY KO TAIYAARRR NAHI HOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AUR COMEDY SIRF TUJHEY KARNI AATI HAI KYA???????????????
AUR HEY.............
LOAD MAT LEY YAAARRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D

[amit@bitspilani]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK KKKKTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT TTTTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
SERIALS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK................... ..............
MEIN GUN POINT PAR BHI DEKHANEY KO TAIYAARRR NAHI HOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AUR COMEDY SIRF TUJHEY KARNI AATI HAI KYA???????????????
AUR HEY.............
LOAD MAT LEY YAAARRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D
CHILL OUT YAAR...
I REALLY LUVED CHATING WID U.....

[animateash]

oh my god....

REALLY ASH THATS THE REAL STUFF....

SEE I'VE ALWAYS TOLD U THAT U R A REAL POET...TUM BHI NA...

WHY DONT U JUST PUBLISHUR POEMS IN SOME MAGAZINES...

I MEAN SO FULL OF FEELINGS....EMOTIONS...

A TOP CLASS POEM U HAVE WRITTEN..

HATS OFF....

I M FAN OF UR WRITINGG

YEAH.........WE WANT MORE.........MORE........

omg my bro itni tarif maat kar .......but tahxn did u ever reda cmy poems on our four soem i ean ashi ranver tia aur uv pe and onr emix if not den tell me i will piost for u

lvua sh

[animateash]

hey amit dis was my poe on anvesha i m posting otehr also vic i ahd rote ..on otehr chars also oethrs have read it lekin tune reda nahi ki so specially for u i m posting again all poems

I always remember bhaggu when I think about her…
She is indeed a special girl ….
What to write about her…
Everyone knows how this person is….
She is funny…
She is cute…
She is adorable…
She is smart…
She is the girl full of colorful atmosphere…
No one could be like her…
She has amazing personality…
She has challenging guts….
Her smile makes us forget our sorrows…
In remix she is yuvi`s love…
Her lingos has become our inspiration…
Who rules over the whole TV industry…
Duh-uh comes to the mind on some mistakes….
Bhaggu is remembered on every occasion…
Psycho could be none other then her darling yuvi…
Morons and dufus is what she uses for idiot people…
She is a rebellion princess in remix…
She is shona and mumumm for her mother in remix...
But I am sure in real life also she is shona for her mom...
She is the girl with no fears…
But she is the girl who makes others get scared by her acts …lolzz
She is a twin personality with red hair girl in remix …
And before black hair girl who was steffi`s fan …
Yes indeed she is still her fan…
She is so simple and sweet yet very important…
She is like a twinkling star that would sure rise up high in the sky one day…
She is every’1’s idol…
She has made us realized to fight for our rights…
She is an inspiration,
She is a model…
She is tennis player…
She is an actress…
And she is our anvesha banerjee ray…
Yes friends she is priya wal…
Most simple actress with typical sweet and unique attitude….
May she always look up into the sky and never sees a set-back…
May god bless her…

[animateash]

dis was on my loverboy.....as u liek rewdaing my poems i thot u must erad dis on remix chars

O my god …..
I really don’t know how to start for my heartbeat…
Because every word would be valueless for him…
But I have to start…
He is my heartbeat….
He is the most handsome and dashing person in the world…
He has made all of them go mad specially girls…
And specially me…
His brilliant personality has marked his success top high up in the never-ending sky…
He is mind-blowing…
He is fantastic…
He is enchanting looks has crossed every` heartbeats making them run at much faster rate…
At such a young age he has achieved beyond his thoughts…
In remix he is the lover boy ….
But in real life also he is my lover boy…
In remix his lingos has taught us a lot…
Making us feel that every person is important…
Like “aap” for everyone…
“Banaa” for friends…
“Hum” for himself…
His acting skills have proved him to be the best actor…
He is the winner of the award for newcomer…
He is the person with respect and dignity…
He has a particular charm on his face that remains in every1’s memory and heart…
He is a kool man who is the most wanted in every girl’s list…
He is the thief who has stolen my heart…
He is innocent….
He is loving….
He is caring….
The first noticeable thing about him is his eyes…
I feel like getting lost in his eyes…
He is a complete package of man who is smart, handsome n very active…
He is very adorable…
He is the embodiment of sheer sweetness…
He is fun-loving and total prankster…
He is perfect ideal person who know what he wants in life…
He enlightens the message of “simple living with high thoughts”
He is like a bird with golden plunge…
A person landed from heaven and made me lost in some other world…
Yes it is our dear friends he is the heartthrob of the nation….
He is ranveer of remix…
Our dear Karan Wahi….
May god always be with him and bless him with success


luv ash

[animateash]

yuvi...amit reda dis also

He is the rockstar…
Kuch bhi kahe…
Bade mast hai yaar…
Kuch bhi kahe…
His stunning personality has made everyone mad…
His passion is acting and music….
He is a movie freak…
His brilliant lingos in remix has impressed many of them…
Just like sufi for cool dudes…
Phsyco for anvesha in remix…
Chillax man for all people who need to chill out…
In remix he is know has daddy`s boy…
But in real life he is very independent…
His curly hairs has made all girls heartbeat going zig-zag…
He is very passionate…
His smile is the first noticeable thing in him…
He is like a thundering who spins the world…
He is mindblowing and ever-blasting…
He is lawyer..
He is a vuideo-jockey..
And he is an actor…
He has a style a typical but sweet attitude…
He wants 2 flapper up high in the sky …
He is the coolest and dam cute person…
Yes he is yuvi of remix…
He is raj singh arora…
Who has never seen a set back in-life
And we hope so he never sees also…
And may god bless him with loads of surprises…luv ash

[animateash]

dis was on tia..amit read dis also

How to start that’s a big question?
She is just indescribable…
Not only has her talent made her rich in her personality ….
But even her nature has attracted many of them and inspired a gang of her fans…
She is sweet, young adorable and very beautiful person as a whole and even from her heart…
In remix she is “papa’s princess”….
But I think she really a princess from the land of angels…
Her social nature has given life to many of them whether it is an animal or a human being…
In remix her lingos have hit the bullseye…
Like “Tia Ahuja hona koi aisi vaisi baat nahi” ……
Yeahhh seriously even “Shweta Gulati hona koi aisi vaisi baat nahi”…..
Her “phuleeez” has become half o the people’s language
Her magnificent beauty has made so many of them’s heartbeat increase…
Her on-screen chemistry with everyone rocks…
She is mindblowing and her acting is just fantastic…
She believe is really a beautiful angel avoiding sweet things ….
This makes a perfect princess…
Now how to end even that is the question...
dont feel like ending it but everthing ends one day...
newyas...
May god bless her and always lead her to success…

luv ash

[animateash]

dis was on remix

A day that could never be forgotten in life,
It was indeed a special day for many of them,
It gave us new spirit to live with,
On that day a new life was born,
That life was born on this special day of 1st November 2004,
This life changed this Indian nation to a great extent,
It gave a twist and some changes to this nation,
Today also one can feel the atmosphere of that day,
It didn’t came into our life with particular reason,
But then the reason was made on its own,
It gave us special four beautiful twinkling stars,
With their own light and attraction,
Who would always remain in their places but still they have affected out life,
They were accompanied by many other stars,
They all together gave us a reason to live the life,
This life...yes our (re)mix has taught us about us throughout its journey many things without expecting any reward except our love,
It made us believe in relationships,
It taught us about leadership,
It taught us to rebel against wrong,
It taught us to enjoy to our fullest,
It made us believe in equality,
It taught us to live in dignity,
Throughout its journey it has become our teacher who guides us at every step,
RANVEER, ANVESHA, YUVRAJ and TIA they have become one of the most important part of our life,
Our life our (re)mix has given us so much but what have we gave (re)mix,
So now it is our time to use the lessons given by (re)mix,
So wake up friends and save our precious life our (re)mix,
KARAN WAHI, PRIYA WAL, RAJ SINGH ARORA AND SHWETA GULATI don’t worry we will always be with you like you have been with us throughout your journey of (re)mix and we will always be loving you…


luv ash

[divyaashimix]

Hey Thakur.......
I Read All Your Poems Once Again..........
And Tell You.................
All Have The Same Charm As They Had Earlier!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:d

[amit@bitspilani]

hey amit dis was my poe on anvesha i m posting otehr also vic i ahd rote ..on otehr chars also oethrs have read it lekin tune reda nahi ki so specially for u i m posting again all poems

I always remember bhaggu when I think about her…
She is indeed a special girl ….
What to write about her…
Everyone knows how this person is….
She is funny…
She is cute…
She is adorable…
She is smart…
She is the girl full of colorful atmosphere…
No one could be like her…
She has amazing personality…
She has challenging guts….
Her smile makes us forget our sorrows…
In remix she is yuvi`s love…
Her lingos has become our inspiration…
Who rules over the whole TV industry…
Duh-uh comes to the mind on some mistakes….
Bhaggu is remembered on every occasion…
Psycho could be none other then her darling yuvi…
Morons and dufus is what she uses for idiot people…
She is a rebellion princess in remix…
She is shona and mumumm for her mother in remix...
But I am sure in real life also she is shona for her mom...
She is the girl with no fears…
But she is the girl who makes others get scared by her acts …lolzz
She is a twin personality with red hair girl in remix …
And before black hair girl who was steffi`s fan …
Yes indeed she is still her fan…
She is so simple and sweet yet very important…
She is like a twinkling star that would sure rise up high in the sky one day…
She is every’1’s idol…
She has made us realized to fight for our rights…
She is an inspiration,
She is a model…
She is tennis player…
She is an actress…
And she is our anvesha banerjee ray…
Yes friends she is priya wal…
Most simple actress with typical sweet and unique attitude….
May she always look up into the sky and never sees a set-back…
May god bless her…
OH I CANT BELEIVE IT...............


THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST GIFT GIVEN TO ME....
WHEN DID U WRITE THESE....
AND U WRITE THESE POEMS AGAIN SPECIALLY FOR ME....
THATS SIMPLY TOUCHING...
WELL POEM ABT ANVESHA DEDICATED TO ME....
THATS WAT I HAVE LONGED FOR JUST BEFORE WHILE TALKING TO DIVYA.
AND U FULFILLED THIS DESIRE OF MINE...
THANX....THANX...INFINITELY..

THIS POEM IS EXCELLENT...CANT DESCRIBE IN WORDS....

NOW I HAVE WRITTEN THIS POEM ON MY SCRAP BOOK ....AND THIS WILL ALWAYS REMAIN WITH ME....WELL NOW LET ME READ OTHER POEMS ALSO//

[amit@bitspilani]

"the Ultimate" Thats The Word That I Will Use....

Ash...not Only Ashi's But All The Other Poems R Too Good...

U Know I M Making Collection Of Remix Things Like Videos,pics,poems Etc... Thanx For Writing Such Brilliant Poems..i Have Stored Them In My Collection...

And Mind U ...u R Really Good Poet....i Showed Ur Previous Poems To Them...they All Were Amazed...gr8 Writing Skills Ash...
Now I'll These Poems To Them...wow ...
Thanx For All This....and Most Imp..u Did It For Me...
U R Such A Wonderful Sis..

[animateash]

Hey Thakur.......
I Read All Your Poems Once Again..........
And Tell You.................
All Have The Same Charm As They Had Earlier!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:d
tahxn a lot

lvua sh

[animateash]

OH I CANT BELEIVE IT...............


THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST GIFT GIVEN TO ME....
WHEN DID U WRITE THESE....
AND U WRITE THESE POEMS AGAIN SPECIALLY FOR ME....
THATS SIMPLY TOUCHING...
WELL POEM ABT ANVESHA DEDICATED TO ME....
THATS WAT I HAVE LONGED FOR JUST BEFORE WHILE TALKING TO DIVYA.
AND U FULFILLED THIS DESIRE OF MINE...
THANX....THANX...INFINITELY..

THIS POEM IS EXCELLENT...CANT DESCRIBE IN WORDS....

NOW I HAVE WRITTEN THIS POEM ON MY SCRAP BOOK ....AND THIS WILL ALWAYS REMAIN WITH ME....WELL NOW LET ME READ OTHER POEMS ALSO//

hey tahxn a ot for liking it i never xp-ected dat my poem ...u would liek my poem on aashi......as u loev ashi i thot u must read mine also i ahd ritten soem weeks back
lvua sh

[animateash]

"the Ultimate" Thats The Word That I Will Use....

Ash...not Only Ashi's But All The Other Poems R Too Good...

U Know I M Making Collection Of Remix Things Like Videos,pics,poems Etc... Thanx For Writing Such Brilliant Poems..i Have Stored Them In My Collection...

And Mind U ...u R Really Good Poet....i Showed Ur Previous Poems To Them...they All Were Amazed...gr8 Writing Skills Ash...
Now I'll These Poems To Them...wow ...
Thanx For All This....and Most Imp..u Did It For Me...
U R Such A Wonderful Sis..


omg tahxn a loo t for dose sweet and apprciatinh words and whom did u show my poems id idnt get u...u said all liekd it kisko dikhaya
:confused: :confused:
lvua sh

[amit@bitspilani]

omg tahxn a loo t for dose sweet and apprciatinh words and whom did u show my poems id idnt get u...u said all liekd it kisko dikhaya
:confused: :confused:
lvua sh
YEAH I SHOWED UR POEMS TO MY FRIENDS....ALL APPRECIATED .....I'VE EVEN WRITTEN THEM DOWN ON MY SCRAP BOOK...

[amit@bitspilani]

hey tahxn a ot for liking it i never xp-ected dat my poem ...u would liek my poem on aashi......as u loev ashi i thot u must read mine also i ahd ritten soem weeks back
lvua sh
OF COURSE....
EK TO YEH POEM ASHI KI HAI...
DOOSRA YEH TUMNE SPECIALLY MERE LIYE LIKHI HAI...
TEESRA WO BHI ITNI ACHHI LIKHI HAI ...
TO OF COURSE I LIKED IT A LOTTTTTTTTTT...
THANX....

HEY DIVYA.....SIKHO KUCHHH ASH SE...
SHE'S DEDICATED ASHI'S POEM TO ME...
NOW UR TURN ...
PLZ WRITE ASHI'S POEM FOR ME.....
TUMNE HAAN KAHA...SO SWEET...

[divyaashimix]

OF COURSE....
EK TO YEH POEM ASHI KI HAI...
DOOSRA YEH TUMNE SPECIALLY MERE LIYE LIKHI HAI...
TEESRA WO BHI ITNI ACHHI LIKHI HAI ...
TO OF COURSE I LIKED IT A LOTTTTTTTTTT...
THANX....

HEY DIVYA.....SIKHO KUCHHH ASH SE...
SHE'S DEDICATED ASHI'S POEM TO ME...
NOW UR TURN ...
PLZ WRITE ASHI'S POEM FOR ME.....
TUMNE HAAN KAHA...SO SWEET...

gr8 stuff AMIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mein toh Thakur sey inspired hoon........poems key mamaley mein.............

dekhoongi, soochoongi,
kal parsoon likhoongi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[amit@bitspilani]

gr8 stuff AMIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mein toh Thakur sey inspired hoon........poems key mamaley mein.............

dekhoongi, soochoongi,
kal parsoon likhoongi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WAH WAH
I GUESS YEH 'MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE"KA DIALOGUE HAI...

[rajinishivaram]

Hey Guyz,

I have not been visiting this forum for quite a long time but I am back.I read all ur poems.They were just amazing!Heres one more!

Apne aap ko kabhi akela mat hone dena
Ye mat samajhna ki koi nahin hai tumhare liye!
Is duniya bahut badi hai!
Koi na koi to mil hi jayega!
Bhaagna mat!
Hum haina!Tumse pyaar karne ke liye!
Tumhe samajhne ke liye!
Tumse woh pyaari baatein karne ke liye!
Is liye mere yaar,
Apne aap par aatmavishvaas rakh kar chalo!
Tumhe har jagah kaamiyaabi milne ke baad aage bado!

Rajini

http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/data/media/132/tia26.jpg

[animateash]

YEAH I SHOWED UR POEMS TO MY FRIENDS....ALL APPRECIATED .....I'VE EVEN WRITTEN THEM DOWN ON MY SCRAP BOOK...
omg sos weet of u

lvua sh

[animateash]

OF COURSE....
EK TO YEH POEM ASHI KI HAI...
DOOSRA YEH TUMNE SPECIALLY MERE LIYE LIKHI HAI...
TEESRA WO BHI ITNI ACHHI LIKHI HAI ...
TO OF COURSE I LIKED IT A LOTTTTTTTTTT...
THANX....

HEY DIVYA.....SIKHO KUCHHH ASH SE...
SHE'S DEDICATED ASHI'S POEM TO ME...
NOW UR TURN ...
PLZ WRITE ASHI'S POEM FOR ME.....
TUMNE HAAN KAHA...SO SWEET...



actually meine poem bhot pehle likhi thi us tme divu ko dedicate kiya tha is baar tumhe

lvua sh

[animateash]

gr8 stuff AMIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mein toh Thakur sey inspired hoon........poems key mamaley mein.............

dekhoongi, soochoongi,
kal parsoon likhoongi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


hey hey jaldi soc bhot din se teri koi dhamaal nahi dekhi is poem sce

lvua sh

[animateash]

Hey Guyz,

I have not been visiting this forum for quite a long time but I am back.I read all ur poems.They were just amazing!Heres one more!

Apne aap ko kabhi akela mat hone dena
Ye mat samajhna ki koi nahin hai tumhare liye!
Is duniya bahut badi hai!
Koi na koi to mil hi jayega!
Bhaagna mat!
Hum haina!Tumse pyaar karne ke liye!
Tumhe samajhne ke liye!
Tumse woh pyaari baatein karne ke liye!
Is liye mere yaar,
Apne aap par aatmavishvaas rakh kar chalo!
Tumhe har jagah kaamiyaabi milne ke baad aage bado!

Rajini

http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/data/media/132/tia26.jpg








hey athxn adn wat poem yeh toh mere typ[e ki poem hai re

lvua sh

[amit@bitspilani]

Hey Guyz,

I have not been visiting this forum for quite a long time but I am back.I read all ur poems.They were just amazing!Heres one more!

Apne aap ko kabhi akela mat hone dena
Ye mat samajhna ki koi nahin hai tumhare liye!
Is duniya bahut badi hai!
Koi na koi to mil hi jayega!
Bhaagna mat!
Hum haina!Tumse pyaar karne ke liye!
Tumhe samajhne ke liye!
Tumse woh pyaari baatein karne ke liye!
Is liye mere yaar,
Apne aap par aatmavishvaas rakh kar chalo!
Tumhe har jagah kaamiyaabi milne ke baad aage bado!

Rajini

http://www.discusstv.com/gallery/data/media/132/tia26.jpg






amazing poem....
really liked yaar........

[divyaashimix]

hey hey jaldi soc bhot din se teri koi dhamaal nahi dekhi is poem sce

lvua sh

bhajti hoon yaarrr.............

at present toh sirf tears dekh rahi hoon.............

[amit@bitspilani]

actually meine poem bhot pehle likhi thi us tme divu ko dedicate kiya tha is baar tumhe

lvua sh
WONDERFUL..
I JUST LUV THAT...
ASHI POEMS FOR ME.....
WHAT A NICE FEELING....

[animateash]

bhajti hoon yaarrr.............

at present toh sirf tears dekh rahi hoon.............
sam here sirf tears aur loneliness

lvua sh

[animateash]

WONDERFUL..
I JUST LUV THAT...
ASHI POEMS FOR ME.....
WHAT A NICE FEELING....
welcmoe dear

lvua sh

[amit@bitspilani]

sam here sirf tears aur loneliness

lvua sh
HEY ASH PLZ CHEER UP YAAR........

THIS IS AN OLD QUOTATION FROM A SAINT..
"SITARON KE AAGE JAHAN AUR BHI HAIN.........."

[animateash]

HEY ASH PLZ CHEER UP YAAR........

THIS IS AN OLD QUOTATION FROM A SAINT..
"SITARON KE AAGE JAHAN AUR BHI HAIN.........."




yeahh gud saying lekin u knwo nah ke remxi ke bian humlog kya kar payeenge

lvua sh

[divyaashimix]

exactly THAKUR..................
we are gonna face great............
I don't know wat.
I'm just lacking appropriate words.........

[evilseye]

Booo Hooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:( :( :( Remix ke khatam hone par main itni emotional ho rahi hoon ki poem likhne ka man karta hai..........................
But main tum logon ko Torture nahin karna chahti So aise hi kaam chala rahi hoon.
Luv
Sur(Completely depressed n distraught)

[animateash]

exactly THAKUR..................
we are gonna face great............
I don't know wat.
I'm just lacking appropriate words.........
same here ......i cant rite a poem also
becoz in dat akso all wprds would be less
luv ash

[amit@bitspilani]

yeahh gud saying lekin u knwo nah ke remxi ke bian humlog kya kar payeenge

lvua sh
YEH TO MAIN KHUD APNE AAP SE POOCHH RAHA HOON...

HEY BHAGGU...HELP US...

[divyaashimix]

This poem has my feelings with it.......

AAYE THEY HAMARI ZINDAGI MEIN HAMARI TAKAT BANKAR,
CHODKAR CHALEY GAYE YOON, AAPNA PYAAR DEKAR,
SOCHANEY PAR MAJBOOR THEY HUM,
KYA JAADUU KAR DIYA THA HUM PAR,
DIN RAAT SAPANEY DEKHA KARTEY THEY UNKEY,
BUS UNSEY MILNEY KI AKAANSHA THI,
POORI NA HO SAKI DO SAALOON MEIN BHI,
CHAAR ANMOL RATAN,
CHAAR ANMOL NAGINEY,
JUD GAYE HAIN AAB HUMSEY,
BHOOL NA PAYENGEY UNKO KABHI,
DO WARSH KA YEAH RANGEEN SAFAR,
BAN GAYA ATOOT BANDHAN,
BAN GAYE HUM EK PARIVAAR,
HASI, KHUSHI, DUKH, GHAM SAATH DEKHI THI MEREY YAAAR…
DOSAREY KYA SAMJHENGEY HAMARA UNKEY PRATI LAGAAV,
HAMARA UNKEY PRATI WISHVAAS,
PHIR ZAROOR AYENGEY VEY SAB HUMSEY MILNEY, HAMAREY PAAS,
DIL TOOTA ,
ROYE BHI HUM,
BANTI KUSHIYAAN, BAANTEY GHUM…..
AAKHRI PAL JAB YAAD AAYE,
DIKHA HUMEY WOHI PYAARR,
UNKI AANKHEN KEHGAI BAHUT KUCH…….
AUR WHO CHALEY GAYE US PARR…..

[evilseye]

This poem has my feelings with it.......

AAYE THEY HAMARI ZINDAGI MEIN HAMARI TAKAT BANKAR,
CHODKAR CHALEY GAYE YOON, AAPNA PYAAR DEKAR,
SOCHANEY PAR MAJBOOR THEY HUM,
KYA JAADUU KAR DIYA THA HUM PAR,
DIN RAAT SAPANEY DEKHA KARTEY THEY UNKEY,
BUS UNSEY MILNEY KI AKAANSHA THI,
POORI NA HO SAKI DO SAALOON MEIN BHI,
CHAAR ANMOL RATAN,
CHAAR ANMOL NAGINEY,
JUD GAYE HAIN AAB HUMSEY,
BHOOL NA PAYENGEY UNKO KABHI,
DO WARSH KA YEAH RANGEEN SAFAR,
BAN GAYA ATOOT BANDHAN,
BAN GAYE HUM EK PARIVAAR,
HASI, KHUSHI, DUKH, GHAM SAATH DEKHI THI MEREY YAAAR…
DOSAREY KYA SAMJHENGEY HAMARA UNKEY PRATI LAGAAV,
HAMARA UNKEY PRATI WISHVAAS,
PHIR ZAROOR AYENGEY VEY SAB HUMSEY MILNEY, HAMAREY PAAS,
DIL TOOTA ,
ROYE BHI HUM,
BANTI KUSHIYAAN, BAANTEY GHUM…..
AAKHRI PAL JAB YAAD AAYE,
DIKHA HUMEY WOHI PYAARR,
UNKI AANKHEN KEHGAI BAHUT KUCH…….
AUR WHO CHALEY GAYE US PARR…..
Oh my gosh.
Divu....ur making me really senti n emotional again...
I have no words to xpress...............
Shart laga sakti hoon ki these r xactly the things going on in all the forum members minds.
Hey Bhaggu!!!!!Main phir ro rahi hoon,But divuHats off to u.Uv done a grt job.
Luv
Sur

[divyaashimix]

Oh my gosh.
Divu....ur making me really senti n emotional again...
I have no words to xpress...............
Shart laga sakti hoon ki these r xactly the things going on in all the forum members minds.
Hey Bhaggu!!!!!Main phir ro rahi hoon,But divuHats off to u.Uv done a grt job.
Luv
Sur
thanks EVE.........
I knew it.
sabkey sweet hearts mein kya chal raha hoga....
so I dedicate this poem TO REMIX .........
and FORUM MEMBERS!!!!!

[evilseye]

thanks EVE.........
I knew it.
sabkey sweet hearts mein kya chal raha hoga....
so I dedicate this poem TO REMIX .........
and FORUM MEMBERS!!!!!
Anytime yaar.n Anything 4 REMIX!
Luv
Sur

[amit@bitspilani]

This poem has my feelings with it.......

AAYE THEY HAMARI ZINDAGI MEIN HAMARI TAKAT BANKAR,
CHODKAR CHALEY GAYE YOON, AAPNA PYAAR DEKAR,
SOCHANEY PAR MAJBOOR THEY HUM,
KYA JAADUU KAR DIYA THA HUM PAR,
DIN RAAT SAPANEY DEKHA KARTEY THEY UNKEY,
BUS UNSEY MILNEY KI AKAANSHA THI,
POORI NA HO SAKI DO SAALOON MEIN BHI,
CHAAR ANMOL RATAN,
CHAAR ANMOL NAGINEY,
JUD GAYE HAIN AAB HUMSEY,
BHOOL NA PAYENGEY UNKO KABHI,
DO WARSH KA YEAH RANGEEN SAFAR,
BAN GAYA ATOOT BANDHAN,
BAN GAYE HUM EK PARIVAAR,
HASI, KHUSHI, DUKH, GHAM SAATH DEKHI THI MEREY YAAAR…
DOSAREY KYA SAMJHENGEY HAMARA UNKEY PRATI LAGAAV,
HAMARA UNKEY PRATI WISHVAAS,
PHIR ZAROOR AYENGEY VEY SAB HUMSEY MILNEY, HAMAREY PAAS,
DIL TOOTA ,
ROYE BHI HUM,
BANTI KUSHIYAAN, BAANTEY GHUM…..
AAKHRI PAL JAB YAAD AAYE,
DIKHA HUMEY WOHI PYAARR,
UNKI AANKHEN KEHGAI BAHUT KUCH…….
AUR WHO CHALEY GAYE US PARR…..
REALLY DIVYA.........

THIS POEM HAS TOUCHED MY SOUL...
ITS TRUE.....

THIS POEM HAS MADE ME SO EMOTIONAL...
REALLY GOOD WORK DIVYA...
THANX 4 GIVING ONE MORE POEM IN MY SCRAPBOOK
I'LL STORE IT IN MY COLLECTION....

HATS OFF TO U...

[devilish angel]

This poem has my feelings with it.......

AAYE THEY HAMARI ZINDAGI MEIN HAMARI TAKAT BANKAR,
CHODKAR CHALEY GAYE YOON, AAPNA PYAAR DEKAR,
SOCHANEY PAR MAJBOOR THEY HUM,
KYA JAADUU KAR DIYA THA HUM PAR,
DIN RAAT SAPANEY DEKHA KARTEY THEY UNKEY,
BUS UNSEY MILNEY KI AKAANSHA THI,
POORI NA HO SAKI DO SAALOON MEIN BHI,
CHAAR ANMOL RATAN,
CHAAR ANMOL NAGINEY,
JUD GAYE HAIN AAB HUMSEY,
BHOOL NA PAYENGEY UNKO KABHI,
DO WARSH KA YEAH RANGEEN SAFAR,
BAN GAYA ATOOT BANDHAN,
BAN GAYE HUM EK PARIVAAR,
HASI, KHUSHI, DUKH, GHAM SAATH DEKHI THI MEREY YAAAR…
DOSAREY KYA SAMJHENGEY HAMARA UNKEY PRATI LAGAAV,
HAMARA UNKEY PRATI WISHVAAS,
PHIR ZAROOR AYENGEY VEY SAB HUMSEY MILNEY, HAMAREY PAAS,
DIL TOOTA ,
ROYE BHI HUM,
BANTI KUSHIYAAN, BAANTEY GHUM…..
AAKHRI PAL JAB YAAD AAYE,
DIKHA HUMEY WOHI PYAARR,
UNKI AANKHEN KEHGAI BAHUT KUCH…….
AUR WHO CHALEY GAYE US PARR…..

hey divs
dat was beautyful. i swear, i started cryin agn. its like, everything, d magic, d luv, d lafter n d tears, everything jus came like a storm n went like a tornado! divsi, u really put all our feelings in dat one poem. its jus gr8! thnk u.

[animateash]

YEH TO MAIN KHUD APNE AAP SE POOCHH RAHA HOON...

HEY BHAGGU...HELP US...

really i need help mein ab kay karoongi i knwo va llr 2getjher lekin remix

lvua sh

[animateash]

This poem has my feelings with it.......

AAYE THEY HAMARI ZINDAGI MEIN HAMARI TAKAT BANKAR,
CHODKAR CHALEY GAYE YOON, AAPNA PYAAR DEKAR,
SOCHANEY PAR MAJBOOR THEY HUM,
KYA JAADUU KAR DIYA THA HUM PAR,
DIN RAAT SAPANEY DEKHA KARTEY THEY UNKEY,
BUS UNSEY MILNEY KI AKAANSHA THI,
POORI NA HO SAKI DO SAALOON MEIN BHI,
CHAAR ANMOL RATAN,
CHAAR ANMOL NAGINEY,
JUD GAYE HAIN AAB HUMSEY,
BHOOL NA PAYENGEY UNKO KABHI,
DO WARSH KA YEAH RANGEEN SAFAR,
BAN GAYA ATOOT BANDHAN,
BAN GAYE HUM EK PARIVAAR,
HASI, KHUSHI, DUKH, GHAM SAATH DEKHI THI MEREY YAAAR…
DOSAREY KYA SAMJHENGEY HAMARA UNKEY PRATI LAGAAV,
HAMARA UNKEY PRATI WISHVAAS,
PHIR ZAROOR AYENGEY VEY SAB HUMSEY MILNEY, HAMAREY PAAS,
DIL TOOTA ,
ROYE BHI HUM,
BANTI KUSHIYAAN, BAANTEY GHUM…..
AAKHRI PAL JAB YAAD AAYE,
DIKHA HUMEY WOHI PYAARR,
UNKI AANKHEN KEHGAI BAHUT KUCH…….
AUR WHO CHALEY GAYE US PARR…..


hey awesoem oen lekin meine phirse roo padi even i willr ite oen sun but abi is haalat emin kasie likh poongi phir bhi iw anna zxpress my efeling will psot sun

lvua sh

[divyaashimix]

REALLY DIVYA.........

THIS POEM HAS TOUCHED MY SOUL...
ITS TRUE.....

THIS POEM HAS MADE ME SO EMOTIONAL...
REALLY GOOD WORK DIVYA...
THANX 4 GIVING ONE MORE POEM IN MY SCRAPBOOK
I'LL STORE IT IN MY COLLECTION....

HATS OFF TO U...

thanks amit.
thanks for adding this poem in your scrap book......

[divyaashimix]

hey awesoem oen lekin meine phirse roo padi even i willr ite oen sun but abi is haalat emin kasie likh poongi phir bhi iw anna zxpress my efeling will psot sun

lvua sh
I can understand ASH.........
mujhey fever ho gaya hai..........
eyes swell ho gai hai.........

[divyaashimix]

really i need help mein ab kay karoongi i knwo va llr 2getjher lekin remix

lvua sh
REMIX wapas aayega....
I have trust.........
and we'll will bring it back with our love and support....

[divyaashimix]

hey divs
dat was beautyful. i swear, i started cryin agn. its like, everything, d magic, d luv, d lafter n d tears, everything jus came like a storm n went like a tornado! divsi, u really put all our feelings in dat one poem. its jus gr8! thnk u.
THANKS PARI........
even I was crying myself after reading the poem....

[animateash]

I can understand ASH.........
mujhey fever ho gaya hai..........
eyes swell ho gai hai.........
omg meri bhi aankhe lala la ho gayi .........still veryd epress plz sambhlna apne appko

luv ash

[animateash]

REMIX wapas aayega....
I have trust.........
and we'll will bring it back with our love and support....
hey i wish i wann irte a poem lekin kasie likhu yeh mujhe samaj anahi aa raha ...iw anan xpress my feelings lekin aksie i m stilld epreessed

lvu ash

[amit@bitspilani]

thanks amit.
thanks for adding this poem in your scrap book......
YEAH...ITS MY PLEASURE DIVYA..

[devilish angel]

REMIX wapas aayega....
I have trust.........
and we'll will bring it back with our love and support....
exactly! bhaggu ne agar remix humaare paas bheja,toh woh bhi is tarah humse use nahin jaane denge. itll DEFINITELY cum back! kyunki bhaggu bhi humaare saath hai!

[divyaashimix]

exactly! bhaggu ne agar remix humaare paas bheja,toh woh bhi is tarah humse use nahin jaane denge. itll DEFINITELY cum back! kyunki bhaggu bhi humaare saath hai!
sach Pari.......
kal I had a terrible fight with BHAGGU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aab toh he has to bring back remix....

[evilseye]

Ok guys.
Kal i was so upset ki i wrote this poem.Hope its nice.
AAye ek din jhoomte hue
Masti mein woh gate hue.

Badla humari zindagi ko
Sikhae kaee bateein hum ko.

Umeed dilayi,Vishwas Jagaya
Apne dil ki awaz ko sunna sikhaya.

Dheere dheere jeet liya dil sabka
Hum sab ko besabri se intezar hone laga 8 baja ka.

Ashi n Yuvi se seekha Rebellion
Tia n ranveer ne di pyar ko remixed definitions.

Apne gaano ki dhun par sab ko nachaya
Anokhe andaaz se sabko apna deewana banaya.

Phir ek din woh chale gaye,Chod kar bas yaad
Rokne ki humne ki bahut koshish,Par hue nakamyab

Ab toh gham ka thikana nahin hai
Jo hua woh galat hai ya sahi hai?

Phir bhi Humein hai aage badhna
Apne dukhon se jamke ladna.

Yaadon mein remix ko zinda rakheinge
Aur unki besabri se raah takenge.

Wapas woh aayenga yaken hai hum sabko
Hum unhein phir se dekh paayein,Dua karenge rab ko.


Hope its nice.Do give me ur feedback!!
Luv
Sur

[amit@bitspilani]

Ok guys.
Kal i was so upset ki i wrote this poem.Hope its nice.
AAye ek din jhoomte hue
Masti mein woh gate hue.

Badla humari zindagi ko
Sikhae kaee bateein hum ko.

Umeed dilayi,Vishwas Jagaya
Apne dil ki awaz ko sunna sikhaya.

Dheere dheere jeet liya dil sabka
Hum sab ko besabri se intezar hone laga 8 baja ka.

Ashi n Yuvi se seekha Rebellion
Tia n ranveer ne di pyar ko remixed definitions.

Apne gaano ki dhun par sab ko nachaya
Anokhe andaaz se sabko apna deewana banaya.

Phir ek din woh chale gaye,Chod kar bas yaad
Rokne ki humne ki bahut koshish,Par hue nakamyab

Ab toh gham ka thikana nahin hai
Jo hua woh galat hai ya sahi hai?

Phir bhi Humein hai aage badhna
Apne dukhon se jamke ladna.

Yaadon mein remix ko zinda rakheinge
Aur unki besabri se raah takenge.

Wapas woh aayenga yaken hai hum sabko
Hum unhein phir se dekh paayein,Dua karenge rab ko.


Hope its nice.Do give me ur feedback!!
Luv
Sur
SURBHI.............

SACH YAAR....
WAT A POEMM...
THATS REAALY GUD...
AN ENCOURAGING ONE....
TRUE DEFINITION OF REMIX...
A POEM TO BE REMEBERED ALWAYS
A REALLY GUD POEM AT THIS POINT OF TIME WEN EVERYBODY NEEDS ENCOURAGEMENT...............
DONT HAVE WORDS ABT WAT U HAVE WRITTEN........
ONE HECK OF A GR8 POEM.........

[divyaashimix]

Hey Surbhi.....................
That Was Indeed A Very Koooolll Poem...............
I Really Liked It A Lottttttttt...........
Seriously........

[animateash]

hey sur awesoem poem loevd it ab mein kaise likhu mein likhna chahti hoion lekin klikh hi nahi paati
i ahve 2 reday soem poem or soem painting for a compettition woh bhi anhi kar paati agar nahi huya dnbe i will nto abel 2 send fo rcompetition
lvua sh

[amit@bitspilani]

hey sur awesoem poem loevd it ab mein kaise likhu mein likhna chahti hoion lekin klikh hi nahi paati
i ahve 2 reday soem poem or soem painting for a compettition woh bhi anhi kar paati agar nahi huya dnbe i will nto abel 2 send fo rcompetition
lvua sh
THIS IS NOT DONE ASH....
I MEAN I KNOW IT'S PAINFUL...
BUT PLZ DONT LET IT AFFECT UR OTHER THINGS...
NOW PLZ PREPARE WELL FOR UR COMPETITION.....
I M SURE U'LL DO BETTER....

[evilseye]

Hey guys!!!Divu,amit,ash,
Thanx a ton 4 those marvellous comments.
this is my very first attempt at poetry,n agar tum sab ka encouragement raha toh ill surely write more.
N ash yeh kya baat hui?Remix humari zindagi mein aaya humein encourage karne ke liye,To teach us to face our sorrows n problems.Is tarah haar manne ke liye nahin.Pls prepare well 4 d competition.Hum sabka support n best wishes tumhare saath hai!!!
Luv
Sur

[animateash]

THIS IS NOT DONE ASH....
I MEAN I KNOW IT'S PAINFUL...
BUT PLZ DONT LET IT AFFECT UR OTHER THINGS...
NOW PLZ PREPARE WELL FOR UR COMPETITION.....
I M SURE U'LL DO BETTER....


hey i cant help pehe sir painting bhejti thi is ocmpetition mein but dis tiem wne i gto letter from der i thot let me sned a poem also as stated riting dis tiem.....lekin kcuh nahi ho ap raha nd ast date ppocchane ki 25th august hai...
but i will try
lvua sh

[animateash]

Hey guys!!!Divu,amit,ash,
Thanx a ton 4 those marvellous comments.
this is my very first attempt at poetry,n agar tum sab ka encouragement raha toh ill surely write more.
N ash yeh kya baat hui?Remix humari zindagi mein aaya humein encourage karne ke liye,To teach us to face our sorrows n problems.Is tarah haar manne ke liye nahin.Pls prepare well 4 d competition.Hum sabka support n best wishes tumhare saath hai!!!
Luv
Sur


hey welcome ..and i will try mmy best

lvua sh

[amit@bitspilani]

Hey guys!!!Divu,amit,ash,
Thanx a ton 4 those marvellous comments.
this is my very first attempt at poetry,n agar tum sab ka encouragement raha toh ill surely write more.
N ash yeh kya baat hui?Remix humari zindagi mein aaya humein encourage karne ke liye,To teach us to face our sorrows n problems.Is tarah haar manne ke liye nahin.Pls prepare well 4 d competition.Hum sabka support n best wishes tumhare saath hai!!!
Luv
Sur
UR MOST WELCOME SURBHI...
WAISE ANYTHING THAT DESERVES TO BE APPRECIATED SHOULD BE APPRECIATED..
AND UR POEM WAS INDEED A GUD ONE..

[amit@bitspilani]

hey i cant help pehe sir painting bhejti thi is ocmpetition mein but dis tiem wne i gto letter from der i thot let me sned a poem also as stated riting dis tiem.....lekin kcuh nahi ho ap raha nd ast date ppocchane ki 25th august hai...
but i will try
lvua sh
I KNOW U R A BRAVE GIRL....U'LL RECOVER SOON.........

U HAVE AMPLE TIME TO WRITE A POEM..
JUST CONCENTRATE ON UR COMPETITION..
I KNOW UR WRIRING SKILLS..
I M SURE U WILL WIN...

[animateash]

I KNOW U R A BRAVE GIRL....U'LL RECOVER SOON.........

U HAVE AMPLE TIME TO WRITE A POEM..
JUST CONCENTRATE ON UR COMPETITION..
I KNOW UR WRIRING SKILLS..
I M SURE U WILL WIN...
tahx a ,lto i hoep 2

lvu ash

[devilish angel]

Ok guys.
Kal i was so upset ki i wrote this poem.Hope its nice.
AAye ek din jhoomte hue
Masti mein woh gate hue.

Badla humari zindagi ko
Sikhae kaee bateein hum ko.

Umeed dilayi,Vishwas Jagaya
Apne dil ki awaz ko sunna sikhaya.

Dheere dheere jeet liya dil sabka
Hum sab ko besabri se intezar hone laga 8 baja ka.

Ashi n Yuvi se seekha Rebellion
Tia n ranveer ne di pyar ko remixed definitions.

Apne gaano ki dhun par sab ko nachaya
Anokhe andaaz se sabko apna deewana banaya.

Phir ek din woh chale gaye,Chod kar bas yaad
Rokne ki humne ki bahut koshish,Par hue nakamyab

Ab toh gham ka thikana nahin hai
Jo hua woh galat hai ya sahi hai?

Phir bhi Humein hai aage badhna
Apne dukhon se jamke ladna.

Yaadon mein remix ko zinda rakheinge
Aur unki besabri se raah takenge.

Wapas woh aayenga yaken hai hum sabko
Hum unhein phir se dekh paayein,Dua karenge rab ko.


Hope its nice.Do give me ur feedback!!
Luv
Sur

hey surbhi. dat was beautiful!! it really rockedd gurl!! n i dunno, it sort of gave me hope ki remix WILL cum back. specially dose last lines. keep it up!!!

[devilish angel]

hey i cant help pehe sir painting bhejti thi is ocmpetition mein but dis tiem wne i gto letter from der i thot let me sned a poem also as stated riting dis tiem.....lekin kcuh nahi ho ap raha nd ast date ppocchane ki 25th august hai...
but i will try
lvua sh
ash, sweetie, puhleese cheer up karo. plzzz. u no we cant bear 2 see u like dis. concentrate on d competition. m sure ull rock it!! n dekhna, ull also get remix back. dont lose hope. n ya, ALL D VERY BEST for d competition! cheer up n rock it gurl!every1s wid u!

[animateash]

ash, sweetie, puhleese cheer up karo. plzzz. u no we cant bear 2 see u like dis. concentrate on d competition. m sure ull rock it!! n dekhna, ull also get remix back. dont lose hope. n ya, ALL D VERY BEST for d competition! cheer up n rock it gurl!every1s wid u!


hey thanx a lto eyaqhh i m thinking at is hdu do

lvu ash

[divyaashimix]

Hey guys!!!Divu,amit,ash,
Thanx a ton 4 those marvellous comments.
this is my very first attempt at poetry,n agar tum sab ka encouragement raha toh ill surely write more.
N ash yeh kya baat hui?Remix humari zindagi mein aaya humein encourage karne ke liye,To teach us to face our sorrows n problems.Is tarah haar manne ke liye nahin.Pls prepare well 4 d competition.Hum sabka support n best wishes tumhare saath hai!!!
Luv
Sur

Hey EVE..............
your welcome sweety...
and in first attempt you have rocked...........
I'll surly look forward for your more poems......:)

[animateash]

okei fredn z finally i m riyting a poem

jab yeh aaya the hamari zindagi mein...
hume nahi pata tha yeh kaun hai...
hume nahi pata tha yeh kaha se aaye hai...
lekin achanak kuchi pal mein woh itne khas ho gaye ke unke bina jeena mushkil ho gaya...
woh humari takat bane...
humare guru bane..
hume jhoot se ladna sikhaya...
hume pyar ka sahi matlap sikhaya...
unke aanese ek naya umeed ka kiran jagah...
vishwas ka naya safar jagah...
do saal pehle wo aaye the hamari zindagi mein ...
kaisa alag sa andaz tha unka...
kaisa nasha kar diya hum pe...
woh sochney par hume majboor kiya...
kaise sunere spney dikhaye...
nayi duniya dikhai hume...
hume us duniya ka matlap sikhaya...
hume zindagi ki sachi raha dikhaya
hamari zindagi ka ruk badal diya..
humare zindagi ko ek pehechan mili...
hamare maan ko woh chu gaye...
hum sab sukh dukhu, khushiya gham har pal saath mien itane lage..
hume usse har pal ka ahesas hota tha ..
har pal ki ahemiyat pata chalti thi..
lekin ek toofan aaya aur sab bikhar gaya..
woh hume chod kar chale gaye...
humne jaane se unhe bhot roka...bhot pratigya bhi ki...
lekin kuch fyda nahi ..
jise jab jana hota hai tab jaate hai...
kyun gaye pata nhai...
woh kimti palo..
woh anmol lamhe...
kaise bhool jaye jo unke saath bitaye hai...
yeh do saalo mein hume jo pyar aur sikh mili hai woh hum kabhi nahi bholl sakhte...
yeh unka rangeela safar khatam ho gaya ....
wohdin jaise hamre pairo tale zameen khisak gayi..
humare bech ek aisa rishta ban gaya tha ke woh sabse atoot tha..
unhone hume kitna pyar diya.....
woh jaate samaye unke ahesaas hume bhot kuch aur sikhkar gayi..
hum yeh judaai sehen nahi kar paye...
kaise kar paate itne paalo saath bitaye hai...
itni yaadein hamari saathmein hai..
hum toote roye dukhi huye..
lekin humne haar nahi manhi..
hum phirse apne hosh mein aaye...
hume bhagwan pe akin hai..
hume bhagwan mein shraddha hai..
bhagwan pe vishwas hai...
hume pata hai ke woh wapas aayenge...
woh hamari zindagi mein phirse khushiya lekar aayenge..
woh zaroor ayenge ek naye andazz mein..
naye roop mein...
hume yakin hai
aur sab hosla rakho....
ha hamara remxi zaroor wapas aayega...
kyunki remix jaisa koi nahi hai...

i hoep you all like it

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhho oooooo..........................
amazing Thakur.
seriously...
I just loved this poem...........
gr8 work.......

[animateash]

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhho oooooo..........................
amazing Thakur.
seriously...
I just loved this poem...........
gr8 work.......
thanx alot i thot sabko thek tahk lagegi as abhi bhi sab thdoe bhot asad hai including me

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

thanx alot i thot sabko thek tahk lagegi as abhi bhi sab thdoe bhot asad hai including me

luv ash
me too......

[animateash]

me too......
yehha i knwo ab aur koi poem toh likh

luv ash

[evilseye]

hey surbhi. dat was beautiful!! it really rockedd gurl!! n i dunno, it sort of gave me hope ki remix WILL cum back. specially dose last lines. keep it up!!!
Hey thanx pari!!!
N ash ur poem was AMAZING!!!!!!!OUTSTANDING!!!!!AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
Luv
Sur

[animateash]

Hey thanx pari!!!
N ash ur poem was AMAZING!!!!!!!OUTSTANDING!!!!!AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
Luv
Sur
thanx a lot

luv ash

[amit@bitspilani]

okei fredn z finally i m riyting a poem

jab yeh aaya the hamari zindagi mein...
hume nahi pata tha yeh kaun hai...
hume nahi pata tha yeh kaha se aaye hai...
lekin achanak kuchi pal mein woh itne khas ho gaye ke unke bina jeena mushkil ho gaya...
woh humari takat bane...
humare guru bane..
hume jhoot se ladna sikhaya...
hume pyar ka sahi matlap sikhaya...
unke aanese ek naya umeed ka kiran jagah...
vishwas ka naya safar jagah...
do saal pehle wo aaye the hamari zindagi mein ...
kaisa alag sa andaz tha unka...
kaisa nasha kar diya hum pe...
woh sochney par hume majboor kiya...
kaise sunere spney dikhaye...
nayi duniya dikhai hume...
hume us duniya ka matlap sikhaya...
hume zindagi ki sachi raha dikhaya
hamari zindagi ka ruk badal diya..
humare zindagi ko ek pehechan mili...
hamare maan ko woh chu gaye...
hum sab sukh dukhu, khushiya gham har pal saath mien itane lage..
hume usse har pal ka ahesas hota tha ..
har pal ki ahemiyat pata chalti thi..
lekin ek toofan aaya aur sab bikhar gaya..
woh hume chod kar chale gaye...
humne jaane se unhe bhot roka...bhot pratigya bhi ki...
lekin kuch fyda nahi ..
jise jab jana hota hai tab jaate hai...
kyun gaye pata nhai...
woh kimti palo..
woh anmol lamhe...
kaise bhool jaye jo unke saath bitaye hai...
yeh do saalo mein hume jo pyar aur sikh mili hai woh hum kabhi nahi bholl sakhte...
yeh unka rangeela safar khatam ho gaya ....
wohdin jaise hamre pairo tale zameen khisak gayi..
humare bech ek aisa rishta ban gaya tha ke woh sabse atoot tha..
unhone hume kitna pyar diya.....
woh jaate samaye unke ahesaas hume bhot kuch aur sikhkar gayi..
hum yeh judaai sehen nahi kar paye...
kaise kar paate itne paalo saath bitaye hai...
itni yaadein hamari saathmein hai..
hum toote roye dukhi huye..
lekin humne haar nahi manhi..
hum phirse apne hosh mein aaye...
hume bhagwan pe akin hai..
hume bhagwan mein shraddha hai..
bhagwan pe vishwas hai...
hume pata hai ke woh wapas aayenge...
woh hamari zindagi mein phirse khushiya lekar aayenge..
woh zaroor ayenge ek naye andazz mein..
naye roop mein...
hume yakin hai
aur sab hosla rakho....
ha hamara remxi zaroor wapas aayega...
kyunki remix jaisa koi nahi hai...

i hoep you all like it

luv ash
I READ THE POEM JUST NOW..
AMAZING YAAR...
WAT A POEM...
REALLY REALLY GR8...
UR VOCAB IS SO GUD ASH...
I M SURE U'LL SURELY WIN IN THE COMPETITION...

[animateash]

I READ THE POEM JUST NOW..
AMAZING YAAR...
WAT A POEM...
REALLY REALLY GR8...
UR VOCAB IS SO GUD ASH...
I M SURE U'LL SURELY WIN IN THE COMPETITION...
thanx a lot

lvu ash

[divyaashimix]

yehha i knwo ab aur koi poem toh likh

luv ash
thair jaa yarrr........
me teri tarah born poet nahi hoon.......
mujhey ek aisi cheese ka istamal karna padta hai jo bhaggu ney bahut kam di hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
duh-uh BRAIN......
NEWAYS.
I'll try...........

[animateash]

thair jaa yarrr........
me teri tarah born poet nahi hoon.......
mujhey ek aisi cheese ka istamal karna padta hai jo bhaggu ney bahut kam di hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
duh-uh BRAIN......
NEWAYS.
I'll try...........
hey hey give me abreak mein bhi koi born poet nahi hoon is mein i eman forum mein aake sikhi hoon

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

hey hey give me abreak mein bhi koi born poet nahi hoon is mein i eman forum mein aake sikhi hoon

luv ash
okkey....
I'll try..........

[animateash]

okkey....
I'll try..........
gud girl..

luv ash

[Renee]

Hello everyone this is wat i have written n divya thank u so much for giving me the courage to post it here.
My Friend

My Friend when I think of you.
I think of all that we've been through.
All the times we argue and fight,
I know deep inside that it isn't right.
I, then feel bad and alot of pain.
It feels like I've fallen from the sky like the rain.
I love you dear friend with all of my heart.
But now that you're gone I've fallen apart.
I'm getting better as the days go by.
I wish sometimes this was all a big lie.
I pray to you every night.
It's like you're my fire, a burning light.
My dear friend, I miss you alot.
I still wonder why you were put in that spot.
I know you're in a place much better than here.
Watching and helping me with all of my fear.
Our friendship my dear friend,
we will have to the end.
Friends til the end is what we will be.
Someday we'll be together,
together you and me.

[amit@bitspilani]

Hello everyone this is wat i have written n divya thank u so much for giving me the courage to post it here.
My Friend

My Friend when I think of you.
I think of all that we've been through.
All the times we argue and fight,
I know deep inside that it isn't right.
I, then feel bad and alot of pain.
It feels like I've fallen from the sky like the rain.
I love you dear friend with all of my heart.
But now that you're gone I've fallen apart.
I'm getting better as the days go by.
I wish sometimes this was all a big lie.
I pray to you every night.
It's like you're my fire, a burning light.
My dear friend, I miss you alot.
I still wonder why you were put in that spot.
I know you're in a place much better than here.
Watching and helping me with all of my fear.
Our friendship my dear friend,
we will have to the end.
Friends til the end is what we will be.
Someday we'll be together,
together you and me.
renee....simply gr8....
this was an awesome attempt as for the first time here...
now we expect more poems from ur side...
and i m sure they'll also rockkkkk as this poem does...

[divyaashimix]

Hello everyone this is wat i have written n divya thank u so much for giving me the courage to post it here.
My Friend

My Friend when I think of you.
I think of all that we've been through.
All the times we argue and fight,
I know deep inside that it isn't right.
I, then feel bad and alot of pain.
It feels like I've fallen from the sky like the rain.
I love you dear friend with all of my heart.
But now that you're gone I've fallen apart.
I'm getting better as the days go by.
I wish sometimes this was all a big lie.
I pray to you every night.
It's like you're my fire, a burning light.
My dear friend, I miss you alot.
I still wonder why you were put in that spot.
I know you're in a place much better than here.
Watching and helping me with all of my fear.
Our friendship my dear friend,
we will have to the end.
Friends til the end is what we will be.
Someday we'll be together,
together you and me.


Hey RENEE......
no problem at all chicklets......
NETIME.......
this poem roxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx....
please do write more poems.........
here all will surely apprecieate it....
and as a new writer...
this is a real kool work.......:)

[animateash]

Hello everyone this is wat i have written n divya thank u so much for giving me the courage to post it here.
My Friend

My Friend when I think of you.
I think of all that we've been through.
All the times we argue and fight,
I know deep inside that it isn't right.
I, then feel bad and alot of pain.
It feels like I've fallen from the sky like the rain.
I love you dear friend with all of my heart.
But now that you're gone I've fallen apart.
I'm getting better as the days go by.
I wish sometimes this was all a big lie.
I pray to you every night.
It's like you're my fire, a burning light.
My dear friend, I miss you alot.
I still wonder why you were put in that spot.
I know you're in a place much better than here.
Watching and helping me with all of my fear.
Our friendship my dear friend,
we will have to the end.
Friends til the end is what we will be.
Someday we'll be together,
together you and me.


hey bhaggu renee simply awesoekm poem

lvu ash

[riya_remix]

Hello everyone this is wat i have written n divya thank u so much for giving me the courage to post it here.
My Friend

My Friend when I think of you.
I think of all that we've been through.
All the times we argue and fight,
I know deep inside that it isn't right.
I, then feel bad and alot of pain.
It feels like I've fallen from the sky like the rain.
I love you dear friend with all of my heart.
But now that you're gone I've fallen apart.
I'm getting better as the days go by.
I wish sometimes this was all a big lie.
I pray to you every night.
It's like you're my fire, a burning light.
My dear friend, I miss you alot.
I still wonder why you were put in that spot.
I know you're in a place much better than here.
Watching and helping me with all of my fear.
Our friendship my dear friend,
we will have to the end.
Friends til the end is what we will be.
Someday we'll be together,
together you and me.
HI RENEE!absolutely fab poem!keep it up!:)

[evilseye]

Hello everyone this is wat i have written n divya thank u so much for giving me the courage to post it here.
My Friend

My Friend when I think of you.
I think of all that we've been through.
All the times we argue and fight,
I know deep inside that it isn't right.
I, then feel bad and alot of pain.
It feels like I've fallen from the sky like the rain.
I love you dear friend with all of my heart.
But now that you're gone I've fallen apart.
I'm getting better as the days go by.
I wish sometimes this was all a big lie.
I pray to you every night.
It's like you're my fire, a burning light.
My dear friend, I miss you alot.
I still wonder why you were put in that spot.
I know you're in a place much better than here.
Watching and helping me with all of my fear.
Our friendship my dear friend,
we will have to the end.
Friends til the end is what we will be.
Someday we'll be together,
together you and me.
WOW Rene!!!Awesome work yaar!!!!Superb!!!
Keep it going!!!
Luv
Sur

[animateash]

a new poem

mujhe abhi tak samaj nahi aaya meine aisa kyun kiya ...
kyun mere dost ko dukhi kiya...
kyun uski baat nahi maani....
woh bhi sirf meri bahlai hi chahta tha...
aur ab woh mujhe kahi nahi mil raha...
kitna dhoonda...
kitne jagah poocha lekin koi aata pata nhai...
kyun mein hamesha aisai unchahi gaaltiya karti reheti hoon...
aaj mujhe itna bhura lag raha hai ke mein apne aap ko roone se rok nahi paati...
plz mere dost ko jaldi se dhoond kar lao ....


i m sure u all ahve guessed wat is d motiev of riting dis peom

pzl amit come bak sun

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

a new poem

mujhe abhi tak samaj nahi aaya meine aisa kyun kiya ...
kyun mere dost ko dukhi kiya...
kyun uski baat nahi maani....
woh bhi sirf meri bahlai hi chahta tha...
aur ab woh mujhe kahi nahi mil raha...
kitna dhoonda...
kitne jagah poocha lekin koi aata pata nhai...
kyun mein hamesha aisai unchahi gaaltiya karti reheti hoon...
aaj mujhe itna bhura lag raha hai ke mein apne aap ko roone se rok nahi paati...
plz mere dost ko jaldi se dhoond kar lao ....


i m sure u all ahve guessed wat is d motiev of riting dis peom

pzl amit come bak sun

luv ash
Hey THAKUR.....
its a very kool poem.
I hope AMIT reads it......

[animateash]

Hey THAKUR.....
its a very kool poem.
I hope AMIT reads it......
hey tahxn a lot even i hope 2

lvu ash

[amit@bitspilani]

a new poem

mujhe abhi tak samaj nahi aaya meine aisa kyun kiya ...
kyun mere dost ko dukhi kiya...
kyun uski baat nahi maani....
woh bhi sirf meri bahlai hi chahta tha...
aur ab woh mujhe kahi nahi mil raha...
kitna dhoonda...
kitne jagah poocha lekin koi aata pata nhai...
kyun mein hamesha aisai unchahi gaaltiya karti reheti hoon...
aaj mujhe itna bhura lag raha hai ke mein apne aap ko roone se rok nahi paati...
plz mere dost ko jaldi se dhoond kar lao ....


i m sure u all ahve guessed wat is d motiev of riting dis peom

pzl amit come bak sun

luv ash
OH MY GOD....
I FEEL LIKE HITTING MYSELF...
HOW THE HELL CAN I HURT U PEOPLE...
I LUV ALL OF U GUYS..AND ASH U R MY SIS.....
THERE'S NO WAY I COULD LEAVE U LIKE THIS....

I M REALLY REALLY SORRY....

[animateash]

OH MY GOD....
I FEEL LIKE HITTING MYSELF...
HOW THE HELL CAN I HURT U PEOPLE...
I LUV ALL OF U GUYS..AND ASH U R MY SIS.....
THERE'S NO WAY I COULD LEAVE U LIKE THIS....

I M REALLY REALLY SORRY....




hey u dont need 2 be sry lekin poem kasi lagi

lvu ash

[amit@bitspilani]

hey u dont need 2 be sry lekin poem kasi lagi

lvu ash
OF COURSE.....IT WAS VERY NICE..

IT ACTUALLY MADE ME CRY.....

[animateash]

OF COURSE.....IT WAS VERY NICE..

IT ACTUALLY MADE ME CRY.....
hye tahxn a lot fo liking

lvu ash

[Renee]

another try.
Friends
Friends smile at you.
They like your face.
They want to be with you
Any old place.

Friends have fun with you.
Friends share
They’re glad when you’re happy---
When you’re sad, they care.

If you’re a friend
Then you care, too.
That’s why your friends
Are glad you’re you!!!

[riya_remix]

another try.
Friends
Friends smile at you.
They like your face.
They want to be with you
Any old place.

Friends have fun with you.
Friends share
They’re glad when you’re happy---
When you’re sad, they care.

If you’re a friend
Then you care, too.
That’s why your friends
Are glad you’re you!!!
hey RENEE!Another fab poem 4om ur side!:cool: gud work!

[animateash]

another try.
Friends
Friends smile at you.
They like your face.
They want to be with you
Any old place.

Friends have fun with you.
Friends share
They’re glad when you’re happy---
When you’re sad, they care.

If you’re a friend
Then you care, too.
That’s why your friends
Are glad you’re you!!!


hey gud one

luv ash

[divyaashimix]

another try.
Friends
Friends smile at you.
They like your face.
They want to be with you
Any old place.

Friends have fun with you.
Friends share
They’re glad when you’re happy---
When you’re sad, they care.

If you’re a friend
Then you care, too.
That’s why your friends
Are glad you’re you!!!

Hey REENEE!!!!!!!!!!
sweet one man.............
gr8 work.........:)

[style_ashitia]

another try.
Friends
Friends smile at you.
They like your face.
They want to be with you
Any old place.

Friends have fun with you.
Friends share
They’re glad when you’re happy---
When you’re sad, they care.

If you’re a friend
Then you care, too.
That’s why your friends
Are glad you’re you!!!
renee awsoem one dear!!!!!!!!!!

[amit@bitspilani]

another try.
Friends
Friends smile at you.
They like your face.
They want to be with you
Any old place.

Friends have fun with you.
Friends share
They’re glad when you’re happy---
When you’re sad, they care.

If you’re a friend
Then you care, too.
That’s why your friends
Are glad you’re you!!!
HEY RENEE,SORRY IF I M LATE TO COMMENT...

A SWEET POEM...REALLY LIKED IT...
HOPE U COME UP WITH MORE OF THESE/....

[evilseye]

another try.
Friends
Friends smile at you.
They like your face.
They want to be with you
Any old place.

Friends have fun with you.
Friends share
They’re glad when you’re happy---
When you’re sad, they care.

If you’re a friend
Then you care, too.
That’s why your friends
Are glad you’re you!!!
Hey rene!!Xcellent effort yaar!!!Keep it up!!!
Luv
Sur

[style_ashitia]

hey guyz here's oen!!!!!!!!!
hope u like it!!!!!!!!!!!!

Into the dim lit, bare walls of my world,
You entered, bringing light and life to me,
The vivid colors, painted with a swirl
Of wit and charm, of personality,
With tender care, you added comfort, warmth,
And images that line the now bright walls.
I look upon them fondly, bringing forth
A thankfulness that you walk in these halls
With me; our friendship has become a part
Of my world now; it has its special place,
Within my being, life, and in my heart,
Your name hangs right beside your smiling face.
Rememb'ring just how drab these walls had been,
I have to thank you for the light, my friends.




this is for we all frnds in this forum!!!!!!!!!!!

[animateash]

hey guyz here's oen!!!!!!!!!
hope u like it!!!!!!!!!!!!

Into the dim lit, bare walls of my world,
You entered, bringing light and life to me,
The vivid colors, painted with a swirl
Of wit and charm, of personality,
With tender care, you added comfort, warmth,
And images that line the now bright walls.
I look upon them fondly, bringing forth
A thankfulness that you walk in these halls
With me; our friendship has become a part
Of my world now; it has its special place,
Within my being, life, and in my heart,
Your name hangs right beside your smiling face.
Rememb'ring just how drab these walls had been,
I have to thank you for the light, my friends.




this is for we all frnds in this forum!!!!!!!!!!!


hey awesoem finally ek aur poet mil gaay i eman poetess

lvua sh

[divyaashimix]

hey guyz here's oen!!!!!!!!!
hope u like it!!!!!!!!!!!!

Into the dim lit, bare walls of my world,
You entered, bringing light and life to me,
The vivid colors, painted with a swirl
Of wit and charm, of personality,
With tender care, you added comfort, warmth,
And images that line the now bright walls.
I look upon them fondly, bringing forth
A thankfulness that you walk in these halls
With me; our friendship has become a part
Of my world now; it has its special place,
Within my being, life, and in my heart,
Your name hangs right beside your smiling face.
Rememb'ring just how drab these walls had been,
I have to thank you for the light, my friends.




this is for we all frnds in this forum!!!!!!!!!!!


HEY STYLY............
SORRY I'M LATE FOR COMMENTING.......................
BUT SERIOUSLY I LIKED THE POEM....................
WHEN I STARTED READING IT.
I THOUGHT IT IS FOR TIYA....
BUT YOU HAVE WRITTEN IT FOR FRIENDS.........
GOOD TOPIC AND GR8 WORK........

[animateash]

HEY STYLY............
SORRY I'M LATE FOR COMMENTING.......................
BUT SERIOUSLY I LIKED THE POEM....................
WHEN I STARTED READING IT.
I THOUGHT IT IS FOR TIYA....
BUT YOU HAVE WRITTEN IT FOR FRIENDS.........
GOOD TOPIC AND GR8 WORK........
same thot came in my mind meien bhi socha tia ke liye hai

lvu ash

[style_ashitia]

hey divs and ahs thanx alot!!!!!!!!!!!

[divyaashimix]

same thot came in my mind meien bhi socha tia ke liye hai

lvu ash
again...
kool coincidence.....
and hey RUHI...
your welcome........:D

[style_ashitia]

here's one poem for all forum frnds and for remix characters whom all r our frnds!!!!!!hope u like it!!!!!!!!!
Sometimes I feel sad and sometimes I feel blue
but whenever I see you, I'm as happy as can be
for you bring a smile upon my face
and a feeling of joy within my heart
you're like my sunshine in the morning
and my stars that glow at night
you're like the waves in the ocean
the cool breeze in the wind
like the call of the birds in the morning dew
like the sounds of beauty in the night
you see all of these things are of beauty and love
that's how I feel whenever you are near
for it was the passion and desire from both of us
that opened up the world for our eyes to see
for our love of each other will grow and grow
and our needs and desires will be more everyday
for a friend you once were and will always be
has turned into love as it should have been
so I want you to know as a friend and lover
that in my heart and arms you'll always stay
for our love for each other will never fade.

[animateash]

hey divs and ahs thanx alot!!!!!!!!!!!
hye welcome

luv ash

[animateash]

again...
kool coincidence.....
and hey RUHI...
your welcome........:D
aakhir best frendz re

lvu ash

[animateash]

here's one poem for all forum frnds and for remix characters whom all r our frnds!!!!!!hope u like it!!!!!!!!!
Sometimes I feel sad and sometimes I feel blue
but whenever I see you, I'm as happy as can be
for you bring a smile upon my face
and a feeling of joy within my heart
you're like my sunshine in the morning
and my stars that glow at night
you're like the waves in the ocean
the cool breeze in the wind
like the call of the birds in the morning dew
like the sounds of beauty in the night
you see all of these things are of beauty and love
that's how I feel whenever you are near
for it was the passion and desire from both of us
that opened up the world for our eyes to see
for our love of each other will grow and grow
and our needs and desires will be more everyday
for a friend you once were and will always be
has turned into love as it should have been
so I want you to know as a friend and lover
that in my heart and arms you'll always stay
for our love for each other will never fade.


hey bhaggu awesoem re lloved it

lvu ash

[divyaashimix]

here's one poem for all forum frnds and for remix characters whom all r our frnds!!!!!!hope u like it!!!!!!!!!
Sometimes I feel sad and sometimes I feel blue
but whenever I see you, I'm as happy as can be
for you bring a smile upon my face
and a feeling of joy within my heart
you're like my sunshine in the morning
and my stars that glow at night
you're like the waves in the ocean
the cool breeze in the wind
like the call of the birds in the morning dew
like the sounds of beauty in the night
you see all of these things are of beauty and love
that's how I feel whenever you are near
for it was the passion and desire from both of us
that opened up the world for our eyes to see
for our love of each other will grow and grow
and our needs and desires will be more everyday
for a friend you once were and will always be
has turned into love as it should have been
so I want you to know as a friend and lover
that in my heart and arms you'll always stay
for our love for each other will never fade.


HEY RUHI......................
I'M REALLY SPEECHLESS.......................
SIMPLY GR8 POEM.
ACCTUALY GR8 IS A REAL SMALL WORD.....................
I'VE SAVED IT TO MY COMP.
THANKS A LOTTTTTTTTTT...................

[style_ashitia]

hey divs nd ash tahnx a lot!!!!!!!!!!!

[divyaashimix]

hey divs nd ash tahnx a lot!!!!!!!!!!!
thats okkey yaarrrr..............
:D :D

[animateash]

hey divs nd ash tahnx a lot!!!!!!!!!!!
hey iots okei

lvu ash

[style_ashitia]

hey guyz se this mehnat ki hai waste mat jaane dena!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Don't find love, let love find you. That's why it's
called falling in love, because you don't force
yourself to fall, you just fall.
It takes a minute to have a crush on someone,
an hour to like someone, and an day to love someone...
but it takes a lifetime to forget someone.
Faith makes all things possible.
Love makes them easy.
Love makes life so confusing, but without love
would you really want to live?
Love me now, love me never,
but if you love me, love me forever.

[animateash]

hey guyz se this mehnat ki hai waste mat jaane dena!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Don't find love, let love find you. That's why it's
called falling in love, because you don't force
yourself to fall, you just fall.
It takes a minute to have a crush on someone,
an hour to like someone, and an day to love someone...
but it takes a lifetime to forget someone.
Faith makes all things possible.
Love makes them easy.
Love makes life so confusing, but without love
would you really want to live?
Love me now, love me never,
but if you love me, love me forever.


awesome one

lvu ash

[divyaashimix]

hey guyz se this mehnat ki hai waste mat jaane dena!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Don't find love, let love find you. That's why it's
called falling in love, because you don't force
yourself to fall, you just fall.
It takes a minute to have a crush on someone,
an hour to like someone, and an day to love someone...
but it takes a lifetime to forget someone.
Faith makes all things possible.
Love makes them easy.
Love makes life so confusing, but without love
would you really want to live?
Love me now, love me never,
but if you love me, love me forever.


Hey Styly.......
yeah poems tu hi likhti hai na.....................
nahi, kyunki all rokkkkk.................
and have gr8 meaning..........
awesome work...............:D

[style_ashitia]

Hey Styly.......
yeah poems tu hi likhti hai na.....................
nahi, kyunki all rokkkkk.................
and have gr8 meaning..........
awesome work...............:D
ya maien hi likhi hai any doubt??????????????:rolleyes:

[animateash]

ya maien hi likhi hai any doubt??????????????:rolleyes:
mujhe bhi initially diobt tah elkin cionfirm ho gaya ke yt hi likh rahi hai

kjust kididng

lvua sh