View Full Version : kya yahi pyaar hai FF (AR IMAGIONARY STORY)
coolmimz
July 9, 2008, 07:50 PM
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HIRA,RIDZII,ANKITA AND MIMZ (ME)
PRESENTZ TO U......
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A JOURNEY OF 2 DIFFRENT SOULZ...BUT WILL THEY EVER FALL IN LOVE..
WILL THEY EVER CONFESS THERE FEELING TO EACH OTHER....
MORE INFORMATION WILL BE GIVEN OUT ON THRUSDAY OR FRIDAY
dedicated to the memeberz of this forum
SHITHI
July 9, 2008, 08:14 PM
waitin 4 d 1st epi ...:D
coolmimz
July 13, 2008, 01:40 AM
Karan Singh Grover as Armaan Malik
Shilpa Anand as Ridhima Armaan Malik
Naman Shaw as Aditiya Shah (Ridhima's friend)
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Barhka Bisht as Sonia Chopra (Armaan's girlfriend)
Ram Kapoor as Rajeev Malik (Armaan's dad)
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Mayank Anand as Rahul Malik (Armaan's brother)
Drushi Dhami as Muskaan Rahul Malik (Rahul's wife and Armaan's bhahi)
Monish Behl as Dr Shashank Gupta (Ridhima's dad)
Sunaina Gullia as Anjali Gupta (Ridhima's sister)
Vinita Malik as Nani (Ridhima's & Anjali's Nani)
Pankit Thakkar as Dr Atul Joshi (New DR ..born in london )
Prachi Desai as Prachi Malhotra (Adi's gf)
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more information will be added 2 this on tuesday or wednesday..there might be other charactors added on..n sorry..cudnt add pics of every1
shonarars
July 13, 2008, 11:05 AM
Karan Singh Grover as Armaan Malik
Shilpa Anand as Ridhima Armaan Malik
Naman Shaw as Aditiya Shah (Ridhima's friend)
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Barhka Bisht as Sonia Chopra (Armaan's girlfriend)
Ram Kapoor as Rajeev Malik (Armaan's dad)
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Mayank Anand as Rahul Malik (Armaan's brother)
Drushi Dhami as Muskaan Rahul Malik (Rahul's wife and Armaan's bhahi)
Monish Behl as Dr Shashank Gupta (Ridhima's dad)
Sunaina Gullia as Anjali Gupta (Ridhima's sister)
Vinita Malik as Nani (Ridhima's & Anjali's Nani)
Pankit Thakkar as Dr Atul Joshi (New DR ..born in london )
Prachi Desai as Prachi Malhotra (Adi's gf)
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more information will be added 2 this on tuesday or wednesday..there might be other charactors added on..n sorry..cudnt add pics of every1
wow..mariam..fantastic!!!
but temme huz adi??
rash1996
July 15, 2008, 07:22 PM
nice oneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
pls continue
neeha123
July 16, 2008, 02:07 AM
aaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so excitedddddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
waiting for thissssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!
:D :D :D :D
coolmimz
July 16, 2008, 11:34 PM
INDEX..CASTLIST PAGE1
PART1 PAGE 1
PART2A N 2B PAGE 3
PART3 PAGE 4
PART4 PAGE 6
coolmimz
July 16, 2008, 11:39 PM
PART 1ARMAAN :YO ..dad ......apnay..mujhe ..kyun....call kiya.
raj:armaan beta zara betho toh yahan par
armaan:''haan dad boliye any problem''
raj:beta woh mujhe tumse kuchh baat karni thi
armaan:yo dad boliye par jaldi sonia mujhse naraaz hai usse manana bhi hai
raj:beta pehle baitho toh aisi baatein iss tarhan nahi ki jaatin
armaan shocked
armaan shocked:kaisi baatein?
Raj: pehle tum baithon toh
arm:aap plz jaldi boliye dad mujhe late ho raha hai
n he sits down
raj:beta ab tum kaafi bade ho gaye ho aur ab toh tum intern bhi banne waale ho toh ab mujhe lagta hai ki tumhein zimedaariyon ka bojh bhi uthaana seekhna chahiye...
arm:bojh wat bojh? As if he’s asking d meaning of bojh)
raj:beta zimedaariyon ka bojh yani tumhein ab yeh ehsaas hojaana chahiye ki tum bhi iss ghar ke bete ho aur tumhari iss ghar ke tarf bhi kuchh zimedaariyan hain humesha rahul ne apne farz nibhayein hain aur ab tumhaari bhi baari hai
arm:sure dad main always ready hoon in sab cheezon ke liye
raj:i m glad beta ki tum samajh gaye
arm:yo dad boliye kya karna hoga
raj:shaadi
arm:wat?
raj:haan aise chaunko mat main tumhaari shaadi ki baat hi kar raha hoon
arm: par dad wat...maariage...shaadi
raj: ya son shaadi.tumhein yaad hain na shashank uncle job ere bachpan ke dost the aur jinhein tum bahut chahte ho unki beti riddhima jiske saath tum bachpan mein khelte the uske saath tumhari shaadi…
arm:dad main kisi nahi shashank uncle ko jaanta hoon aur na hi riddhima ko….mujhe toh kuchh yaad bhi nahi hai
raj:beta kuchh nahi hota agar tumhein who yaadein yaad nahi toh kya hua ab tum nayi yaadein banana…
arm:but dad main uss riddhima se aaj tak mila bhi nahi hoon…mujhe pata bhi nahi hai ki who kaisi dikhti hai,uska taste kya hai,uske nature kaisa hai…so how do u expect me 2 marry her?
Rajar beta tum nahi mile toh kya hua main toh mila hoon na…main jab last year apni business meeting ke liya gaya tha tab hi main riddhima se bhi mila tha bahut pyaari ladki hai,bahut sanskaari hai,bahut sundar hai aur tab hi maine shashank se tumhare aur riddhima ke rishte ki baat ki thi aur shashank ne kaha ki uski taraf se toh haan hai par ek baari who riddhima ki marzi bhi jaanna chahta that oh issiliye humne w8 kiya par riddhima neb hi rishte ke liye haan kardi hai usne kaha hai ki jaisa shashank uske liye faisla karega who uske liye sahi hi hoga
Arm:but dad I m sry I can’t marry her main usse pyaar bhi nahi karta hoon array pyaar toh chhodo main toh usse jaanta bhi nahi hoon
Rajar beta main toh unhein jaanta hoon na…
Arm:dad shaadi aapko karni hai ya mujhe?mujhe na toh plz mujhe apni zindagi ka faisla khud karne do…
Raj:hamesha se toh tum apni zindagi kef aisle khud karte aaye ho aur ussi ka nateeja hai ki tum itne bigad gaye ho ab main tumhare liye faisle lunga
Arm:hey dad dis is not done yaar dis is my life aur main isse apni marzi se jeena chahta hoon n I m sry I can’t marry ur…ur….wat was her name…ri…ri…riddhi…ya riddhima Plz I can’t
N he tries 2 stand n move away frm dere
Raj:toh fir theek hai agar yeh hi baat hai toh fir jaao tum apni zindagi apni tarhan se jiyo…jao abse tum is ghar se chale jao..meri saari daulat,meri property in sab se main tumhein bedakhal kardunga toh fir tum apne tarhan se,apne aap kama kar apni zindagi jeena….enjoy ur life
Armaan is stunned he stops dere only n just don’t have ne expression on his face…now he doesn’t noe how 2 react 2 dis…he has no idea wat was happening 2 him
EPI ENDZ
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rakshitaM
July 17, 2008, 12:16 AM
PART 1ARMAAN :YO ..dad ......apnay..mujhe ..kyun....call kiya.
raj:armaan beta zara betho toh yahan par
armaan:''haan dad boliye any problem''
raj:beta woh mujhe tumse kuchh baat karni thi
armaan:yo dad boliye par jaldi sonia mujhse naraaz hai usse manana bhi hai
raj:beta pehle baitho toh aisi baatein iss tarhan nahi ki jaatin
armaan shocked
armaan shocked:kaisi baatein?
Raj: pehle tum baithon toh
arm:aap plz jaldi boliye dad mujhe late ho raha hai
n he sits down
raj:beta ab tum kaafi bade ho gaye ho aur ab toh tum intern bhi banne waale ho toh ab mujhe lagta hai ki tumhein zimedaariyon ka bojh bhi uthaana seekhna chahiye...
arm:bojh wat bojh? As if he’s asking d meaning of bojh)
raj:beta zimedaariyon ka bojh yani tumhein ab yeh ehsaas hojaana chahiye ki tum bhi iss ghar ke bete ho aur tumhari iss ghar ke tarf bhi kuchh zimedaariyan hain humesha rahul ne apne farz nibhayein hain aur ab tumhaari bhi baari hai
arm:sure dad main always ready hoon in sab cheezon ke liye
raj:i m glad beta ki tum samajh gaye
arm:yo dad boliye kya karna hoga
raj:shaadi
arm:wat?
raj:haan aise chaunko mat main tumhaari shaadi ki baat hi kar raha hoon
arm: par dad wat...maariage...shaadi
raj: ya son shaadi.tumhein yaad hain na shashank uncle job ere bachpan ke dost the aur jinhein tum bahut chahte ho unki beti riddhima jiske saath tum bachpan mein khelte the uske saath tumhari shaadi…
arm:dad main kisi nahi shashank uncle ko jaanta hoon aur na hi riddhima ko….mujhe toh kuchh yaad bhi nahi hai
raj:beta kuchh nahi hota agar tumhein who yaadein yaad nahi toh kya hua ab tum nayi yaadein banana…
arm:but dad main uss riddhima se aaj tak mila bhi nahi hoon…mujhe pata bhi nahi hai ki who kaisi dikhti hai,uska taste kya hai,uske nature kaisa hai…so how do u expect me 2 marry her?
Rajar beta tum nahi mile toh kya hua main toh mila hoon na…main jab last year apni business meeting ke liya gaya tha tab hi main riddhima se bhi mila tha bahut pyaari ladki hai,bahut sanskaari hai,bahut sundar hai aur tab hi maine shashank se tumhare aur riddhima ke rishte ki baat ki thi aur shashank ne kaha ki uski taraf se toh haan hai par ek baari who riddhima ki marzi bhi jaanna chahta that oh issiliye humne w8 kiya par riddhima neb hi rishte ke liye haan kardi hai usne kaha hai ki jaisa shashank uske liye faisla karega who uske liye sahi hi hoga
Arm:but dad I m sry I can’t marry her main usse pyaar bhi nahi karta hoon array pyaar toh chhodo main toh usse jaanta bhi nahi hoon
Rajar beta main toh unhein jaanta hoon na…
Arm:dad shaadi aapko karni hai ya mujhe?mujhe na toh plz mujhe apni zindagi ka faisla khud karne do…
Raj:hamesha se toh tum apni zindagi kef aisle khud karte aaye ho aur ussi ka nateeja hai ki tum itne bigad gaye ho ab main tumhare liye faisle lunga
Arm:hey dad dis is not done yaar dis is my life aur main isse apni marzi se jeena chahta hoon n I m sry I can’t marry ur…ur….wat was her name…ri…ri…riddhi…ya riddhima Plz I can’t
N he tries 2 stand n move away frm dere
Raj:toh fir theek hai agar yeh hi baat hai toh fir jaao tum apni zindagi apni tarhan se jiyo…jao abse tum is ghar se chale jao..meri saari daulat,meri property in sab se main tumhein bedakhal kardunga toh fir tum apne tarhan se,apne aap kama kar apni zindagi jeena….enjoy ur life
Armaan is stunned he stops dere only n just don’t have ne expression on his face…now he doesn’t noe how 2 react 2 dis…he has no idea wat was happening 2 him
EPI ENDZ
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cool story guys............it's really interesting...........post the next part soon..........
vasantha90
July 17, 2008, 01:14 AM
koooooooooooooool...luved it.....
shilpa nd karan together wow....finally i can see them in ur story ..... ridzii,hira,ankitha nd mimz u rock......
waiting for part 2
neeha123
July 17, 2008, 06:43 AM
excellent start! i'm hooked!!! :D
123xx
July 17, 2008, 01:44 PM
excellent start fantastic four....keep going...
waiting for the next part..:D:D
niki_chill
July 17, 2008, 01:48 PM
omg!all my lovely ,darling four.........................superb.......mast.... ..its jzt so damn fab!carry on...all da bst!:p
shonarars
July 17, 2008, 03:35 PM
hey all..hira,riddhima,mariam nd ankita..
fantastic four,,ya!!
i ttly agree..
only one word--fantastic..
plz rite soon!!!
ridzii
July 17, 2008, 04:50 PM
thanxxxxxxxxx alotttttttttttttt all of u
for reading our first part n commenting on it
really frm d bottom of our hearts
v r glad da u all likd it
next part will b posted soon
plzzzzzzzz frndz v need more support
plzzzzzzzz comment on our first part
v'll b vryyy gr8ful
Armaan_Rhidz
July 17, 2008, 10:01 PM
Gr8 goin ppl..
Luvd it.. Keep it up..
Hint of improvement.. Dialogues need to have more potential.. and more of a realistic jist to them.. try to work on that..
Fab over all!!
reemz
July 17, 2008, 10:28 PM
hey it was really gud plzz continue soooonnn
srkcrazy
July 18, 2008, 12:07 AM
Hey girls....Superb,Fantastic,Mindblowing,and Rocking....Excellent casting...please cntue,and please dont paste Suku' photos,im imagining Karan&Shilpa in the SingisKing's song TeriOre vth dem..
SHITHI
July 18, 2008, 07:33 AM
fantastic 4 nehi fantabulastic 4 .... awsome guys .. mindblowing ...
Armaan Rocks
July 18, 2008, 12:17 PM
awesome
loved every bit of it
the storyline is damn gud
plzz continue:D
sash123
July 18, 2008, 12:56 PM
wow yar exellent start
u 4 r really fantastic
keep it up
my prayers r always with u guys
luv u all
muahXxX
rash1996
July 18, 2008, 04:58 PM
im dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wah wah!!!
cooll part.my fantastic four!!!!!!!!!
iNGi
July 22, 2008, 02:30 PM
gr8 start! im eeeeeeeeagerly w8ing 4 da next part so dat i can imagine karan n shilpa thru ur story. thnx!
hira77
July 31, 2008, 03:27 AM
Hey guys....firstly thanks for all your kind words...it really means alot to me, Mimz, Ridzii and Ankita, thanks guys...and sorry for the delay in part 2, but here it is...it is rather long...
Recap: Rajeev (Armaan's dad) wants Armaan to marry Ridhima who is his friend's daughter, on the other hand, Armaan already has a girlfriend Sonia, whom he wants to marry. Rajeev and Armaan have an arguement, and his dad threatnens him that he will disown him if he doesn't agree to see Ridhima, in sheer anger Rajeev leaves the room....ab aa gay....please have a read...sorry part 2 is rather long guys...
PART 2A...
Rajeev leaves the room and Armaan is still standing there, and after a few seconds he realizes that his dad has left the room in anger, so he goes to his boxing room.
In the boxing room, Armaan is boxing and thinking to himself.
Armaan: Dad ko kya hoga hai..?? Mujhe force kyun kar rahe hai, par main bhi unka beta hoon…aur main apni zidd mein nahi jaaonga uss Ridhima ke paas.
Armaan starts to box harder, and is furious with anger, and just then Rahul enters
Rahul: Armaan….Armaan…Tum phir se sharoo hoga hay.
Armaan: Kya matlab bhai…??
Rahul: Dekho tum jaante ho main kya keh raha hoon…iss tarah tum dad ko dukh de rahay hoo.
Armaan: Rahul bhaiya, apne apni marzi se Muskaan bhahi se shaadi ki, toh main kyon nahi kar sakta…??
Rahul: Woh tumhari baat theek hai, par Muskaan humare Khaandaan ke liye theek hai…aur….
Armaan: Aur…aap kehna chata hai ke meri Sonia iss khaandaan ke kabil nahi hai..??
Rahul: Dekh yaar…tu mujhe galat samahj raha hai. Main tumhari aur dad ke baatein sunn liye thi, aur mujhe Ridhima yaad hai, hum sab bachpan mein saat kehla karte the.
Armaan: Rahul…now you don’t start please…Mujhe koi Ridhima nahi yaad hai, aur main nahi jaara wahan pe..and that is final bro…!!!
Rahul begins to lose his temper
Rahul: Ok theek hai... aisa kar ke tu wahan pe jaa aur Ridhima ko dekh ke na karde…theek hai…Phir dad bhi khush aur tu bhi khush..problem, solved…!!!
Armaan: Niceee bhaiya...itna aasan hai na...???...No bhai don’t you get it…agar who mujse puche ga ke main na kyon kaha phir..???
Rahul: Armaan can you ever be positive…itni aage ke kyun soch raha hoo..??
and Rahul leaves Armaan…and goes to the garden…and Muskaan enters
Rahul is sitting in the garden on the bench thinking about Armaan,
Muskaan comes from behind and put her hands on Rahul's eyes....
Muskaan: guess karo main kon hun
Rahul pulls her hands away...
Rahul:Muskaan abhi nahi ...mera mood nahi hai
She sits next to Rahul on the bench
Muskaan: kya matlab tum mood main nahi ho
Rahul: Muskaan please..abhi nahi
Muskaan: kya matlab abhi nahi...main tumhari biwi hun…
Rahul in a very angry tone gets up from the bench.
Rahul (shouting): ek baat tujhe samaj nahi ati...kab se dekh raha hun ..toh bolha ja rahi hai
Muskaan get up from the bench ...With tears in her eyes..she is about to go from there...When Rahul grabs her fist
Rahul: Muskaan…
She is trying to avoid his dreamy eyes
Muskaan: Rahul ..mujha janna hai…
Rahul touches her cheek with his hand….Making her look into his blue eyes he grab her hands gently and kisses them
Rahul: Muskaan main pereshan tha armaan ki wajha se
Muskaan: nahi rahul..meri fault hai..keh main
but before finishing the sentence Rahul put his finger on her lips
Rahul: sshhhh
He puts his right hand around her waist..with a tight grip..and with the other hand he took a stray of hair behind her ear......Muskaan kept looking into
his eyes...she got so lost in his dreamy blue eyes that she couldn’t find her way back....
As he carried her in his secure arms.....making his way to the bedroom
Please carry on to read part 2B...thanks...xXx
hira77
July 31, 2008, 03:30 AM
Meanwhile that night....
Rajeev in his bedroom, reading a book, Armaan enters from behind
Armaan: Dad…dad woh main (Armaan is lost for words)….dad….I am so sorry…main kuch ziada he bol gaya tha.
Rajeev: (stares at Armaan gives him a rigid look) toh..??
Armaan: toh..??... dad…toh muhje maaf kar di jihe please..??..main tayaar hoon Ridhima ko dekh ne ke liya.
Rajeev: (taking off his glasses) Armaan, tum such keh raha hoon.. do you know what you are saying son??
Armaan: come on dad, ab main tayaar hoon…hum bhi toh dekh ke aap ki Ridhima kaise hai..!!!
Rajeev: Armaan….tum phir se…anyways…I am glad ke tum maan gahe, theek hai, hum kal he nil kaal li gay. Dekh beta, mujhe yakeen hai ke tum Ridhima ko dekh ke fida ho ja ho gay!!!
Armaan: (Armaan mumbles under his breath)…Fida toh main ho chukka hoon, par Ridhima pe nahi, bal ke aapni Sonia pe…!!!
Rajeev: Kuch kaha Armaan..??
Armaan: No dad…I think ke aapko phone kar na chahi hai…uncle Shahshank ko.
Rajeev: (hugging Armaan) that’s like my son, always sensible yet kabhi kabhi tum itne….(laughs) bilkul mujh pe ho..(he winks at Armaan, and Armaan smiles back).
Armaan: ok dad main chalta hoon.
Rajeev: theek hai Armaan…suno…thanks beta…meri baat rak ne ke lihay…
Armaan: oh dad, come on…afterall I am your son, (he smiles and leaves)
Rahul is holding his tie in his hand..trying 2 work out.......HOW TO WEAR IT
Rahul:(Shouting ) :Muskaan ...meri tie ...
Muskaan: (FROM THE KICHEN) :aiiii rahi hoon
Muskaan comes and asks
Muskaan: uff ho..kya hai..Rahul..??!!!
Rahul :woh main kay raha tha ki aap meri tie bandoho ..kyunki hamesha aap hi bandthi haan
Muskaan :lekin rahul ajj tum seenjeevini ..nahi ja raha
Rahul: (mumbles to himself ): pheli baar achi khabar suna rahi ho...
Muskaan :tum nah kuch kaha
Rahul :Nahi nahi...woh main kay raha tha...ki .....aaj kyun nahi...main hospital ja raha..??
Muskaan: Tum bhi na Rahul….bhool gahay…humne Ridhima ko dekh ne jaana hai.
Rahul: Oh haan, Thank God Armaan ko samjh aa ga hi
Muskaan: Haan yeh to hai (doing his tie)
Rahul: Muskaan, yeh kaun sa perfume hai..??
Muskaan: Kyon…??
Rahul: Buhat accha hai…haiiiiiiii maar java meri Punjab de kuri
Muskaan: (smiling) Oye kya baat hai perfume tum he toh lahay the, ‘Eternity moment’
Rajeev: Rahul, Muskaan aa jao ho, hum wait kar raha hai
Rahul and Muskaan together: aahey dad
Muskaan: Jaldi karo Rahul,
Rahul: accha ek kiss toh dedo….jaldi se……
Muskaan: Rahullll..kuch toh sharam karo…nechi dad hai…aur tum….. (she smiles, & runs away, Rahul follows her)
They all sit in the car, and leave to see Ridhima.
IMPORTANT
Guys...right now the story is focusing Rahul Muskaan, then...on Armaan and Ridhima, and then later Anjali and Atul and Shub-Keerti....thanks...xXx
neeha123
July 31, 2008, 04:21 AM
it's going great!!!! great, great, great!!!! :D
tina_dmg
July 31, 2008, 05:11 PM
hey...............your story is AWESOME yaar............!!!!!!!!Just waiting for the next part.................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
vasantha90
August 1, 2008, 02:40 AM
T0000000000000000000 GUD GUYS.....
u rck....luved the way u r sh0wing rm luv stry...ll be waiting f0r ur next part.........please post it soooooon................
iNGi
August 1, 2008, 03:36 AM
da track is going really nicely n its gud dat u'll b focusing on each couple so dat v'll b able 2 c lots of lovestories.gud going!
sash123
August 1, 2008, 05:05 PM
Meanwhile that night....
Rajeev in his bedroom, reading a book, Armaan enters from behind
Armaan: Dad…dad woh main (Armaan is lost for words)….dad….I am so sorry…main kuch ziada he bol gaya tha.
Rajeev: (stares at Armaan gives him a rigid look) toh..??
Armaan: toh..??... dad…toh muhje maaf kar di jihe please..??..main tayaar hoon Ridhima ko dekh ne ke liya.
Rajeev: (taking off his glasses) Armaan, tum such keh raha hoon.. do you know what you are saying son??
Armaan: come on dad, ab main tayaar hoon…hum bhi toh dekh ke aap ki Ridhima kaise hai..!!!
Rajeev: Armaan….tum phir se…anyways…I am glad ke tum maan gahe, theek hai, hum kal he nil kaal li gay. Dekh beta, mujhe yakeen hai ke tum Ridhima ko dekh ke fida ho ja ho gay!!!
Armaan: (Armaan mumbles under his breath)…Fida toh main ho chukka hoon, par Ridhima pe nahi, bal ke aapni Sonia pe…!!!
Rajeev: Kuch kaha Armaan..??
Armaan: No dad…I think ke aapko phone kar na chahi hai…uncle Shahshank ko.
Rajeev: (hugging Armaan) that’s like my son, always sensible yet kabhi kabhi tum itne….(laughs) bilkul mujh pe ho..(he winks at Armaan, and Armaan smiles back).
Armaan: ok dad main chalta hoon.
Rajeev: theek hai Armaan…suno…thanks beta…meri baat rak ne ke lihay…
Armaan: oh dad, come on…afterall I am your son, (he smiles and leaves)
Rahul is holding his tie in his hand..trying 2 work out.......HOW TO WEAR IT
Rahul:(Shouting ) :Muskaan ...meri tie ...
Muskaan: (FROM THE KICHEN) :aiiii rahi hoon
Muskaan comes and asks
Muskaan: uff ho..kya hai..Rahul..??!!!
Rahul :woh main kay raha tha ki aap meri tie bandoho ..kyunki hamesha aap hi bandthi haan
Muskaan :lekin rahul ajj tum seenjeevini ..nahi ja raha
Rahul: (mumbles to himself ): pheli baar achi khabar suna rahi ho...
Muskaan :tum nah kuch kaha
Rahul :Nahi nahi...woh main kay raha tha...ki .....aaj kyun nahi...main hospital ja raha..??
Muskaan: Tum bhi na Rahul….bhool gahay…humne Ridhima ko dekh ne jaana hai.
Rahul: Oh haan, Thank God Armaan ko samjh aa ga hi
Muskaan: Haan yeh to hai (doing his tie)
Rahul: Muskaan, yeh kaun sa perfume hai..??
Muskaan: Kyon…??
Rahul: Buhat accha hai…haiiiiiiii maar java meri Punjab de kuri
Muskaan: (smiling) Oye kya baat hai perfume tum he toh lahay the, ‘Eternity moment’
Rajeev: Rahul, Muskaan aa jao ho, hum wait kar raha hai
Rahul and Muskaan together: aahey dad
Muskaan: Jaldi karo Rahul,
Rahul: accha ek kiss toh dedo….jaldi se……
Muskaan: Rahullll..kuch toh sharam karo…nechi dad hai…aur tum….. (she smiles, & runs away, Rahul follows her)
They all sit in the car, and leave to see Ridhima.
IMPORTANT
Guys...right now the story is focusing Rahul Muskaan, then...on Armaan and Ridhima, and then later Anjali and Atul and Shub-Keerti....thanks...xXx
gggrrrrr8888888 guys luved it very nice i m waiting 4 next episode:D
coolmimz
August 1, 2008, 05:40 PM
THXZ 4 COMMENTING ..
BUT I WAS HOPEING 4 MORE COMMENTZ.....
reemz
August 1, 2008, 06:38 PM
hey nice story plzz continue sooooon..i hope a-r fall in love soon n armaan 4get her sonia:D
dolly2008
August 2, 2008, 12:03 PM
very nice yaar
its amazing
Waiting for next part
post it sooooooooooon
hira77
August 4, 2008, 05:01 AM
Hey guys...thank you soooo muchhhh for commenting...it means alot to us....thank you sooo much...love you guys...xXx...:D
shonarars
August 6, 2008, 06:45 PM
aha..fantasic..hira..my kareena..mimz..the gr8 an riddhima and ankita..gr8 all!!
coolmimz
August 7, 2008, 12:29 AM
PART 3....
They all arrive at Shashank’s house, and Shashank ,Nani and Anjali are
already there to welcome them at the door
Rajeev: Arrey Shashi, my bum chum…!!!
Shashank: Raja mere yaar..aao aao
Rajeev: Balle balle
Shashank: Shava shava
Rajeev: Oh balle
Shashank: Oh shava
Rajeev: chain kuli ke
Shashank: main kuli ke
Rajeev & Shashank together: CHAIN…(both laugh)
Both of them hug each other tightly and crack a silly
joke. Everyone is looking at them surprised.
Rajeev touches nani’s feet and she does the aarti.
Nani: Rajeev teri lambhi umar ho
Meanwhile everyone goes inside and sit down.
Armaan touches Shashank’s and nani’s feet, she does Armaan’s aarti.
They sit down for a bit, and then breakfast is served.
Armaan (whispering to muskaan): Bhahi Ridhima kahan hai..??
Muskaan: (whispering back) itne bechain mat hoo Armaan…patience devar ji…!!
Rajeev: Aur Anjali beta, tum bato kaise ho…??
Anjali: Haan jee uncle, main bilkul theek hoon,
Rajeev: accha (serving himself with hot jalebis).
Nani: Armaan beta aur kuch lo na, tum toh sharma rahey ho..??
Armaan: nahi nahi nani main ka raha hoon, aap le ji hey na..!!
After that Shashank tells shows them their room and they all rest.
Armaan in his room, lying on the bed, his phone rings.
Armaan: ab yeh kaun hai..?? (looking at his phone) Oh mannnn Sonia….!!!
Armaan: Hello…?
Sonia: (on the phone): Armaan jaan kahan ho, itne rings hua..??
Armaan: Hey Sonia, meri jaan, main bilkul theek hoon tum kaise ho..??
Sonia: Not good Armaan, I miss you jaan, waise tum ho kahan..??
Armaan: (lost for words)….woh…woh..main woh…dad ke saath hoon..!!!,
he had some work and he wanted me to be with him. Main aa ja hoon ga,
by the weekend..!!
Sonia: KYA…?? Weekend tak..?? Armaan jaan you know ke…
maine mum se tumhari baat kar ne hai.., toh I need you to be with me.
Armaan: Oh haan, Soni don’t worry, don’t u trust me..??
Sonia: Nahi Armaan your Soni trusts you more than herself,
par mujhe ek ajib se feeling ho rahi hai..??
Armaan: Soni….yaar chill babe….just chill…main aa jao hoon ga..ok babe…
miss me….mwah..love you jaan..
Sonia: Ok dude…love you, and don’t do anything I wouldn’t, bye Armaan.
Armaan: Bye babe.
Armaan: (to himself) Oh God, maine Sonia se jhooth bola…
mannn I wish like crap…why why why..!!!
Just then Rahul and Muskaan enter in his room.
Rahul: Armaan, tayaar hai na..??
Armaan: Tayar…?? Kyon bhaiya…??
Muskaan: kyon ki…just then…Shashank enters the room.
Shas :hain. beta.main tumhai yahi battana chahta tha ke ridhima
tumhara studyroom main wait kar rahi hogi.
Arm:Kya ..study room.
Shas: tumnai kuch bolla
Arm :nahi nahi ..kuch nahi uncle.
Shas:Armaan beta tumhai pata hai ..ke ridhima ek doctor hai....
abhi abhi usna apni internship complete ke hai.
Arm:Kya doctor hai....agar meri sonia doctor hoti
Shas:Sonia
Ra:nahi ..nahi..iska matab tha ke iska favorite gaana tha ..
woh umm..haan ...soni de nakhre sone lagade ...
Shashank gives Rahul a weird look
Ra:kyun Muskaan..abhi armaan ne yahi kaha tha
Mu:nahi...matlab haan
Shas:Acha ..main..chaltha hun..
Ra:acha uncle...bye uncle..
Shashank leaves
Arm:mujhe is Ridhima se koi milna nahi hai
Ra:Armaan ...main papa ko batta dun.....
Arm:Kya hai bhai....haar baat ke upar. Mujhe blackmail karta hai....
.bhabi dekho na mujhe phir se mujhe blackmail kaar raha hai .......
armaan makes a cute face
Mu:Rahul meri hero ko kyun blackmail kaar raha ho......uski marzi hai..
Arm:dekliya bhabi ..bajpaan se...mujhe blackmail karta haan
Ra: Armaan ...main papa ko battana jaa raha hun
Arm(does a impression of raol):main papa ko battana jaa raha hun
Arm:acha acha main....jaa raha hoon...lekin iska yeh nahi matlaab..ke main apse darta hun.
Armaan goes....
Ra:Yeh sab tumhari wajha se ..aghh....
Mu:main ki kiya
Ra:bahoot kuch..
Mu: oii kanajoray....punjab ke kuri hun...
Ra:like I care....oii....mujhe bhi koi intrest nahi hai ..tujse baat kaarna ka...
Mu:Mujhe koi farrak nahi. Parta
Muskaan walks away..rahul goes after her....
PRECAP..Armaan is in the study room PICking up some books from the table and as he is doing that, he trips up from the computer wire and the books drop, just then Ridhima comes wearing a black salwaar kameez with silver sequins.There heads collid....armaan looks up n shes a beautifull face..with a weak smile on her face... Armaan is gazes at her beauti,. he sees a strand move on her face, making her irritated and then, he tucked that behind her ears..making her blush and she helps him to PICk up the books, and by accident Armaan’s hand touches Ridhima’s hand, she blushes n backs away,
note :thanx alotttttttt every1 4 ur appreciation.......who ever u imagion as your ridhima shilpa or sukriti..we just want u 2 imagion
neeha123
August 7, 2008, 12:43 AM
PART 3....
They all arrive at Shashank’s house, and Shashank ,Nani and Anjali are
already there to welcome them at the door
Rajeev: Arrey Shashi, my bum chum…!!!
Shashank: Raja mere yaar..aao aao
Rajeev: Balle balle
Shashank: Shava shava
Rajeev: Oh balle
Shashank: Oh shava
Rajeev: chain kuli ke
Shashank: main kuli ke
Rajeev & Shashank together: CHAIN…(both laugh)
Both of them hug each other tightly and crack a silly
joke. Everyone is looking at them surprised.
Rajeev touches nani’s feet and she does the aarti.
Nani: Rajeev teri lambhi umar ho
Meanwhile everyone goes inside and sit down.
Armaan touches Shashank’s and nani’s feet, she does Armaan’s aarti.
They sit down for a bit, and then breakfast is served.
Armaan (whispering to muskaan): Bhahi Ridhima kahan hai..??
Muskaan: (whispering back) itne bechain mat hoo Armaan…patience devar ji…!!
Rajeev: Aur Anjali beta, tum bato kaise ho…??
Anjali: Haan jee uncle, main bilkul theek hoon,
Rajeev: accha (serving himself with hot jalebis).
Nani: Armaan beta aur kuch lo na, tum toh sharma rahey ho..??
Armaan: nahi nahi nani main ka raha hoon, aap le ji hey na..!!
After that Shashank tells shows them their room and they all rest.
Armaan in his room, lying on the bed, his phone rings.
Armaan: ab yeh kaun hai..?? (looking at his phone) Oh mannnn Sonia….!!!
Armaan: Hello…?
Sonia: (on the phone): Armaan jaan kahan ho, itne rings hua..??
Armaan: Hey Sonia, meri jaan, main bilkul theek hoon tum kaise ho..??
Sonia: Not good Armaan, I miss you jaan, waise tum ho kahan..??
Armaan: (lost for words)….woh…woh..main woh…dad ke saath hoon..!!!,
he had some work and he wanted me to be with him. Main aa ja hoon ga,
by the weekend..!!
Sonia: KYA…?? Weekend tak..?? Armaan jaan you know ke…
maine mum se tumhari baat kar ne hai.., toh I need you to be with me.
Armaan: Oh haan, Soni don’t worry, don’t u trust me..??
Sonia: Nahi Armaan your Soni trusts you more than herself,
par mujhe ek ajib se feeling ho rahi hai..??
Armaan: Soni….yaar chill babe….just chill…main aa jao hoon ga..ok babe…
miss me….mwah..love you jaan..
Sonia: Ok dude…love you, and don’t do anything I wouldn’t, bye Armaan.
Armaan: Bye babe.
Armaan: (to himself) Oh God, maine Sonia se jhooth bola…
mannn I wish like crap…why why why..!!!
Just then Rahul and Muskaan enter in his room.
Rahul: Armaan, tayaar hai na..??
Armaan: Tayar…?? Kyon bhaiya…??
Muskaan: kyon ki…just then…Shashank enters the room.
Shas :hain. beta.main tumhai yahi battana chahta tha ke ridhima
tumhara studyroom main wait kar rahi hogi.
Arm:Kya ..study room.
Shas: tumnai kuch bolla
Arm :nahi nahi ..kuch nahi uncle.
Shas:Armaan beta tumhai pata hai ..ke ridhima ek doctor hai....
abhi abhi usna apni internship complete ke hai.
Arm:Kya doctor hai....agar meri sonia doctor hoti
Shas:Sonia
Ra:nahi ..nahi..iska matab tha ke iska favorite gaana tha ..
woh umm..haan ...soni de nakhre sone lagade ...
Shashank gives Rahul a weird look
Ra:kyun Muskaan..abhi armaan ne yahi kaha tha
Mu:nahi...matlab haan
Shas:Acha ..main..chaltha hun..
Ra:acha uncle...bye uncle..
Shashank leaves
Arm:mujhe is Ridhima se koi milna nahi hai
Ra:Armaan ...main papa ko batta dun.....
Arm:Kya hai bhai....haar baat ke upar. Mujhe blackmail karta hai....
.bhabi dekho na mujhe phir se mujhe blackmail kaar raha hai .......
armaan makes a cute face
Mu:Rahul meri hero ko kyun blackmail kaar raha ho......uski marzi hai..
Arm:dekliya bhabi ..bajpaan se...mujhe blackmail karta haan
Ra: Armaan ...main papa ko battana jaa raha hun
Arm(does a impression of raol):main papa ko battana jaa raha hun
Arm:acha acha main....jaa raha hoon...lekin iska yeh nahi matlaab..ke main apse darta hun.
Armaan goes....
Ra:Yeh sab tumhari wajha se ..aghh....
Mu:main ki kiya
Ra:bahoot kuch..
Mu: oii kanajoray....punjab ke kuri hun...
Ra:like I care....oii....mujhe bhi koi intrest nahi hai ..tujse baat kaarna ka...
Mu:Mujhe koi farrak nahi. Parta
Muskaan walks away..rahul goes after her....
PRECAP..Armaan is in the study room PICking up some books from the table and as he is doing that, he trips up from the computer wire and the books drop, just then Ridhima comes wearing a black salwaar kameez with silver sequins.There heads collid....armaan looks up n shes a beautifull face..with a weak smile on her face... Armaan is gazes at her beauti,. he sees a strand move on her face, making her irritated and then, he tucked that behind her ears..making her blush and she helps him to PICk up the books, and by accident Armaan’s hand touches Ridhima’s hand, she blushes n backs away,
note :thanx alotttttttt every1 4 ur appreciation.......who ever u imagion as your ridhima ..we just want u 2 imagion
wowwwwwwww...... love it so much!!!!!!!! great job!!!!!!!!
reemz
August 7, 2008, 01:03 AM
greatt man ....plzz continue plzz dnt take so much tym fr da nxt post we cnt wait yaar:D
armaan_ridz_rox
August 7, 2008, 01:21 AM
PART 3....
They all arrive at Shashank’s house, and Shashank ,Nani and Anjali are
already there to welcome them at the door
Rajeev: Arrey Shashi, my bum chum…!!!
Shashank: Raja mere yaar..aao aao
Rajeev: Balle balle
Shashank: Shava shava
Rajeev: Oh balle
Shashank: Oh shava
Rajeev: chain kuli ke
Shashank: main kuli ke
Rajeev & Shashank together: CHAIN…(both laugh)
Both of them hug each other tightly and crack a silly
joke. Everyone is looking at them surprised.
Rajeev touches nani’s feet and she does the aarti.
Nani: Rajeev teri lambhi umar ho
Meanwhile everyone goes inside and sit down.
Armaan touches Shashank’s and nani’s feet, she does Armaan’s aarti.
They sit down for a bit, and then breakfast is served.
Armaan (whispering to muskaan): Bhahi Ridhima kahan hai..??
Muskaan: (whispering back) itne bechain mat hoo Armaan…patience devar ji…!!
Rajeev: Aur Anjali beta, tum bato kaise ho…??
Anjali: Haan jee uncle, main bilkul theek hoon,
Rajeev: accha (serving himself with hot jalebis).
Nani: Armaan beta aur kuch lo na, tum toh sharma rahey ho..??
Armaan: nahi nahi nani main ka raha hoon, aap le ji hey na..!!
After that Shashank tells shows them their room and they all rest.
Armaan in his room, lying on the bed, his phone rings.
Armaan: ab yeh kaun hai..?? (looking at his phone) Oh mannnn Sonia….!!!
Armaan: Hello…?
Sonia: (on the phone): Armaan jaan kahan ho, itne rings hua..??
Armaan: Hey Sonia, meri jaan, main bilkul theek hoon tum kaise ho..??
Sonia: Not good Armaan, I miss you jaan, waise tum ho kahan..??
Armaan: (lost for words)….woh…woh..main woh…dad ke saath hoon..!!!,
he had some work and he wanted me to be with him. Main aa ja hoon ga,
by the weekend..!!
Sonia: KYA…?? Weekend tak..?? Armaan jaan you know ke…
maine mum se tumhari baat kar ne hai.., toh I need you to be with me.
Armaan: Oh haan, Soni don’t worry, don’t u trust me..??
Sonia: Nahi Armaan your Soni trusts you more than herself,
par mujhe ek ajib se feeling ho rahi hai..??
Armaan: Soni….yaar chill babe….just chill…main aa jao hoon ga..ok babe…
miss me….mwah..love you jaan..
Sonia: Ok dude…love you, and don’t do anything I wouldn’t, bye Armaan.
Armaan: Bye babe.
Armaan: (to himself) Oh God, maine Sonia se jhooth bola…
mannn I wish like crap…why why why..!!!
Just then Rahul and Muskaan enter in his room.
Rahul: Armaan, tayaar hai na..??
Armaan: Tayar…?? Kyon bhaiya…??
Muskaan: kyon ki…just then…Shashank enters the room.
Shas :hain. beta.main tumhai yahi battana chahta tha ke ridhima
tumhara studyroom main wait kar rahi hogi.
Arm:Kya ..study room.
Shas: tumnai kuch bolla
Arm :nahi nahi ..kuch nahi uncle.
Shas:Armaan beta tumhai pata hai ..ke ridhima ek doctor hai....
abhi abhi usna apni internship complete ke hai.
Arm:Kya doctor hai....agar meri sonia doctor hoti
Shas:Sonia
Ra:nahi ..nahi..iska matab tha ke iska favorite gaana tha ..
woh umm..haan ...soni de nakhre sone lagade ...
Shashank gives Rahul a weird look
Ra:kyun Muskaan..abhi armaan ne yahi kaha tha
Mu:nahi...matlab haan
Shas:Acha ..main..chaltha hun..
Ra:acha uncle...bye uncle..
Shashank leaves
Arm:mujhe is Ridhima se koi milna nahi hai
Ra:Armaan ...main papa ko batta dun.....
Arm:Kya hai bhai....haar baat ke upar. Mujhe blackmail karta hai....
.bhabi dekho na mujhe phir se mujhe blackmail kaar raha hai .......
armaan makes a cute face
Mu:Rahul meri hero ko kyun blackmail kaar raha ho......uski marzi hai..
Arm:dekliya bhabi ..bajpaan se...mujhe blackmail karta haan
Ra: Armaan ...main papa ko battana jaa raha hun
Arm(does a impression of raol):main papa ko battana jaa raha hun
Arm:acha acha main....jaa raha hoon...lekin iska yeh nahi matlaab..ke main apse darta hun.
Armaan goes....
Ra:Yeh sab tumhari wajha se ..aghh....
Mu:main ki kiya
Ra:bahoot kuch..
Mu: oii kanajoray....punjab ke kuri hun...
Ra:like I care....oii....mujhe bhi koi intrest nahi hai ..tujse baat kaarna ka...
Mu:Mujhe koi farrak nahi. Parta
Muskaan walks away..rahul goes after her....
PRECAP..Armaan is in the study room PICking up some books from the table and as he is doing that, he trips up from the computer wire and the books drop, just then Ridhima comes wearing a black salwaar kameez with silver sequins.There heads collid....armaan looks up n shes a beautifull face..with a weak smile on her face... Armaan is gazes at her beauti,. he sees a strand move on her face, making her irritated and then, he tucked that behind her ears..making her blush and she helps him to PICk up the books, and by accident Armaan’s hand touches Ridhima’s hand, she blushes n backs away,
note :thanx alotttttttt every1 4 ur appreciation.......who ever u imagion as your ridhima shilpa or sukriti..we just want u 2 imagion
clap clap clap clap. its amazing. just wow. i loved it. every single portion. oh no i have got a competitor now. hehe. just kidding. lovely.
soulcatcher
August 7, 2008, 02:18 AM
PART 1ARMAAN :YO ..dad ......apnay..mujhe ..kyun....call kiya.
raj:armaan beta zara betho toh yahan par
armaan:''haan dad boliye any problem''
raj:beta woh mujhe tumse kuchh baat karni thi
armaan:yo dad boliye par jaldi sonia mujhse naraaz hai usse manana bhi hai
raj:beta pehle baitho toh aisi baatein iss tarhan nahi ki jaatin
armaan shocked
armaan shocked:kaisi baatein?
Raj: pehle tum baithon toh
arm:aap plz jaldi boliye dad mujhe late ho raha hai
n he sits down
raj:beta ab tum kaafi bade ho gaye ho aur ab toh tum intern bhi banne waale ho toh ab mujhe lagta hai ki tumhein zimedaariyon ka bojh bhi uthaana seekhna chahiye...
arm:bojh wat bojh? As if he’s asking d meaning of bojh)
raj:beta zimedaariyon ka bojh yani tumhein ab yeh ehsaas hojaana chahiye ki tum bhi iss ghar ke bete ho aur tumhari iss ghar ke tarf bhi kuchh zimedaariyan hain humesha rahul ne apne farz nibhayein hain aur ab tumhaari bhi baari hai
arm:sure dad main always ready hoon in sab cheezon ke liye
raj:i m glad beta ki tum samajh gaye
arm:yo dad boliye kya karna hoga
raj:shaadi
arm:wat?
raj:haan aise chaunko mat main tumhaari shaadi ki baat hi kar raha hoon
arm: par dad wat...maariage...shaadi
raj: ya son shaadi.tumhein yaad hain na shashank uncle job ere bachpan ke dost the aur jinhein tum bahut chahte ho unki beti riddhima jiske saath tum bachpan mein khelte the uske saath tumhari shaadi…
arm:dad main kisi nahi shashank uncle ko jaanta hoon aur na hi riddhima ko….mujhe toh kuchh yaad bhi nahi hai
raj:beta kuchh nahi hota agar tumhein who yaadein yaad nahi toh kya hua ab tum nayi yaadein banana…
arm:but dad main uss riddhima se aaj tak mila bhi nahi hoon…mujhe pata bhi nahi hai ki who kaisi dikhti hai,uska taste kya hai,uske nature kaisa hai…so how do u expect me 2 marry her?
Rajar beta tum nahi mile toh kya hua main toh mila hoon na…main jab last year apni business meeting ke liya gaya tha tab hi main riddhima se bhi mila tha bahut pyaari ladki hai,bahut sanskaari hai,bahut sundar hai aur tab hi maine shashank se tumhare aur riddhima ke rishte ki baat ki thi aur shashank ne kaha ki uski taraf se toh haan hai par ek baari who riddhima ki marzi bhi jaanna chahta that oh issiliye humne w8 kiya par riddhima neb hi rishte ke liye haan kardi hai usne kaha hai ki jaisa shashank uske liye faisla karega who uske liye sahi hi hoga
Arm:but dad I m sry I can’t marry her main usse pyaar bhi nahi karta hoon array pyaar toh chhodo main toh usse jaanta bhi nahi hoon
Rajar beta main toh unhein jaanta hoon na…
Arm:dad shaadi aapko karni hai ya mujhe?mujhe na toh plz mujhe apni zindagi ka faisla khud karne do…
Raj:hamesha se toh tum apni zindagi kef aisle khud karte aaye ho aur ussi ka nateeja hai ki tum itne bigad gaye ho ab main tumhare liye faisle lunga
Arm:hey dad dis is not done yaar dis is my life aur main isse apni marzi se jeena chahta hoon n I m sry I can’t marry ur…ur….wat was her name…ri…ri…riddhi…ya riddhima Plz I can’t
N he tries 2 stand n move away frm dere
Raj:toh fir theek hai agar yeh hi baat hai toh fir jaao tum apni zindagi apni tarhan se jiyo…jao abse tum is ghar se chale jao..meri saari daulat,meri property in sab se main tumhein bedakhal kardunga toh fir tum apne tarhan se,apne aap kama kar apni zindagi jeena….enjoy ur life
Armaan is stunned he stops dere only n just don’t have ne expression on his face…now he doesn’t noe how 2 react 2 dis…he has no idea wat was happening 2 him
EPI ENDZ
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really good going marriam.....
shonarars
August 7, 2008, 03:49 AM
woho..all four..well..m loving evrything...the romance of Rm ad all...
Armaanrox!!!
August 7, 2008, 09:00 AM
PART 3....
They all arrive at Shashank’s house, and Shashank ,Nani and Anjali are
already there to welcome them at the door
Rajeev: Arrey Shashi, my bum chum…!!!
Shashank: Raja mere yaar..aao aao
Rajeev: Balle balle
Shashank: Shava shava
Rajeev: Oh balle
Shashank: Oh shava
Rajeev: chain kuli ke
Shashank: main kuli ke
Rajeev & Shashank together: CHAIN…(both laugh)
Both of them hug each other tightly and crack a silly
joke. Everyone is looking at them surprised.
Rajeev touches nani’s feet and she does the aarti.
Nani: Rajeev teri lambhi umar ho
Meanwhile everyone goes inside and sit down.
Armaan touches Shashank’s and nani’s feet, she does Armaan’s aarti.
They sit down for a bit, and then breakfast is served.
Armaan (whispering to muskaan): Bhahi Ridhima kahan hai..??
Muskaan: (whispering back) itne bechain mat hoo Armaan…patience devar ji…!!
Rajeev: Aur Anjali beta, tum bato kaise ho…??
Anjali: Haan jee uncle, main bilkul theek hoon,
Rajeev: accha (serving himself with hot jalebis).
Nani: Armaan beta aur kuch lo na, tum toh sharma rahey ho..??
Armaan: nahi nahi nani main ka raha hoon, aap le ji hey na..!!
After that Shashank tells shows them their room and they all rest.
Armaan in his room, lying on the bed, his phone rings.
Armaan: ab yeh kaun hai..?? (looking at his phone) Oh mannnn Sonia….!!!
Armaan: Hello…?
Sonia: (on the phone): Armaan jaan kahan ho, itne rings hua..??
Armaan: Hey Sonia, meri jaan, main bilkul theek hoon tum kaise ho..??
Sonia: Not good Armaan, I miss you jaan, waise tum ho kahan..??
Armaan: (lost for words)….woh…woh..main woh…dad ke saath hoon..!!!,
he had some work and he wanted me to be with him. Main aa ja hoon ga,
by the weekend..!!
Sonia: KYA…?? Weekend tak..?? Armaan jaan you know ke…
maine mum se tumhari baat kar ne hai.., toh I need you to be with me.
Armaan: Oh haan, Soni don’t worry, don’t u trust me..??
Sonia: Nahi Armaan your Soni trusts you more than herself,
par mujhe ek ajib se feeling ho rahi hai..??
Armaan: Soni….yaar chill babe….just chill…main aa jao hoon ga..ok babe…
miss me….mwah..love you jaan..
Sonia: Ok dude…love you, and don’t do anything I wouldn’t, bye Armaan.
Armaan: Bye babe.
Armaan: (to himself) Oh God, maine Sonia se jhooth bola…
mannn I wish like crap…why why why..!!!
Just then Rahul and Muskaan enter in his room.
Rahul: Armaan, tayaar hai na..??
Armaan: Tayar…?? Kyon bhaiya…??
Muskaan: kyon ki…just then…Shashank enters the room.
Shas :hain. beta.main tumhai yahi battana chahta tha ke ridhima
tumhara studyroom main wait kar rahi hogi.
Arm:Kya ..study room.
Shas: tumnai kuch bolla
Arm :nahi nahi ..kuch nahi uncle.
Shas:Armaan beta tumhai pata hai ..ke ridhima ek doctor hai....
abhi abhi usna apni internship complete ke hai.
Arm:Kya doctor hai....agar meri sonia doctor hoti
Shas:Sonia
Ra:nahi ..nahi..iska matab tha ke iska favorite gaana tha ..
woh umm..haan ...soni de nakhre sone lagade ...
Shashank gives Rahul a weird look
Ra:kyun Muskaan..abhi armaan ne yahi kaha tha
Mu:nahi...matlab haan
Shas:Acha ..main..chaltha hun..
Ra:acha uncle...bye uncle..
Shashank leaves
Arm:mujhe is Ridhima se koi milna nahi hai
Ra:Armaan ...main papa ko batta dun.....
Arm:Kya hai bhai....haar baat ke upar. Mujhe blackmail karta hai....
.bhabi dekho na mujhe phir se mujhe blackmail kaar raha hai .......
armaan makes a cute face
Mu:Rahul meri hero ko kyun blackmail kaar raha ho......uski marzi hai..
Arm:dekliya bhabi ..bajpaan se...mujhe blackmail karta haan
Ra: Armaan ...main papa ko battana jaa raha hun
Arm(does a impression of raol):main papa ko battana jaa raha hun
Arm:acha acha main....jaa raha hoon...lekin iska yeh nahi matlaab..ke main apse darta hun.
Armaan goes....
Ra:Yeh sab tumhari wajha se ..aghh....
Mu:main ki kiya
Ra:bahoot kuch..
Mu: oii kanajoray....punjab ke kuri hun...
Ra:like I care....oii....mujhe bhi koi intrest nahi hai ..tujse baat kaarna ka...
Mu:Mujhe koi farrak nahi. Parta
Muskaan walks away..rahul goes after her....
PRECAP..Armaan is in the study room PICking up some books from the table and as he is doing that, he trips up from the computer wire and the books drop, just then Ridhima comes wearing a black salwaar kameez with silver sequins.There heads collid....armaan looks up n shes a beautifull face..with a weak smile on her face... Armaan is gazes at her beauti,. he sees a strand move on her face, making her irritated and then, he tucked that behind her ears..making her blush and she helps him to PICk up the books, and by accident Armaan’s hand touches Ridhima’s hand, she blushes n backs away,
note :thanx alotttttttt every1 4 ur appreciation.......who ever u imagion as your ridhima shilpa or sukriti..we just want u 2 imagion
cool part......luved it......gr8 work all of u
dolly2008
August 7, 2008, 11:25 AM
PART 3....
They all arrive at Shashank’s house, and Shashank ,Nani and Anjali are
already there to welcome them at the door
Rajeev: Arrey Shashi, my bum chum…!!!
Shashank: Raja mere yaar..aao aao
Rajeev: Balle balle
Shashank: Shava shava
Rajeev: Oh balle
Shashank: Oh shava
Rajeev: chain kuli ke
Shashank: main kuli ke
Rajeev & Shashank together: CHAIN…(both laugh)
Both of them hug each other tightly and crack a silly
joke. Everyone is looking at them surprised.
Rajeev touches nani’s feet and she does the aarti.
Nani: Rajeev teri lambhi umar ho
Meanwhile everyone goes inside and sit down.
Armaan touches Shashank’s and nani’s feet, she does Armaan’s aarti.
They sit down for a bit, and then breakfast is served.
Armaan (whispering to muskaan): Bhahi Ridhima kahan hai..??
Muskaan: (whispering back) itne bechain mat hoo Armaan…patience devar ji…!!
Rajeev: Aur Anjali beta, tum bato kaise ho…??
Anjali: Haan jee uncle, main bilkul theek hoon,
Rajeev: accha (serving himself with hot jalebis).
Nani: Armaan beta aur kuch lo na, tum toh sharma rahey ho..??
Armaan: nahi nahi nani main ka raha hoon, aap le ji hey na..!!
After that Shashank tells shows them their room and they all rest.
Armaan in his room, lying on the bed, his phone rings.
Armaan: ab yeh kaun hai..?? (looking at his phone) Oh mannnn Sonia….!!!
Armaan: Hello…?
Sonia: (on the phone): Armaan jaan kahan ho, itne rings hua..??
Armaan: Hey Sonia, meri jaan, main bilkul theek hoon tum kaise ho..??
Sonia: Not good Armaan, I miss you jaan, waise tum ho kahan..??
Armaan: (lost for words)….woh…woh..main woh…dad ke saath hoon..!!!,
he had some work and he wanted me to be with him. Main aa ja hoon ga,
by the weekend..!!
Sonia: KYA…?? Weekend tak..?? Armaan jaan you know ke…
maine mum se tumhari baat kar ne hai.., toh I need you to be with me.
Armaan: Oh haan, Soni don’t worry, don’t u trust me..??
Sonia: Nahi Armaan your Soni trusts you more than herself,
par mujhe ek ajib se feeling ho rahi hai..??
Armaan: Soni….yaar chill babe….just chill…main aa jao hoon ga..ok babe…
miss me….mwah..love you jaan..
Sonia: Ok dude…love you, and don’t do anything I wouldn’t, bye Armaan.
Armaan: Bye babe.
Armaan: (to himself) Oh God, maine Sonia se jhooth bola…
mannn I wish like crap…why why why..!!!
Just then Rahul and Muskaan enter in his room.
Rahul: Armaan, tayaar hai na..??
Armaan: Tayar…?? Kyon bhaiya…??
Muskaan: kyon ki…just then…Shashank enters the room.
Shas :hain. beta.main tumhai yahi battana chahta tha ke ridhima
tumhara studyroom main wait kar rahi hogi.
Arm:Kya ..study room.
Shas: tumnai kuch bolla
Arm :nahi nahi ..kuch nahi uncle.
Shas:Armaan beta tumhai pata hai ..ke ridhima ek doctor hai....
abhi abhi usna apni internship complete ke hai.
Arm:Kya doctor hai....agar meri sonia doctor hoti
Shas:Sonia
Ra:nahi ..nahi..iska matab tha ke iska favorite gaana tha ..
woh umm..haan ...soni de nakhre sone lagade ...
Shashank gives Rahul a weird look
Ra:kyun Muskaan..abhi armaan ne yahi kaha tha
Mu:nahi...matlab haan
Shas:Acha ..main..chaltha hun..
Ra:acha uncle...bye uncle..
Shashank leaves
Arm:mujhe is Ridhima se koi milna nahi hai
Ra:Armaan ...main papa ko batta dun.....
Arm:Kya hai bhai....haar baat ke upar. Mujhe blackmail karta hai....
.bhabi dekho na mujhe phir se mujhe blackmail kaar raha hai .......
armaan makes a cute face
Mu:Rahul meri hero ko kyun blackmail kaar raha ho......uski marzi hai..
Arm:dekliya bhabi ..bajpaan se...mujhe blackmail karta haan
Ra: Armaan ...main papa ko battana jaa raha hun
Arm(does a impression of raol):main papa ko battana jaa raha hun
Arm:acha acha main....jaa raha hoon...lekin iska yeh nahi matlaab..ke main apse darta hun.
Armaan goes....
Ra:Yeh sab tumhari wajha se ..aghh....
Mu:main ki kiya
Ra:bahoot kuch..
Mu: oii kanajoray....punjab ke kuri hun...
Ra:like I care....oii....mujhe bhi koi intrest nahi hai ..tujse baat kaarna ka...
Mu:Mujhe koi farrak nahi. Parta
Muskaan walks away..rahul goes after her....
PRECAP..Armaan is in the study room PICking up some books from the table and as he is doing that, he trips up from the computer wire and the books drop, just then Ridhima comes wearing a black salwaar kameez with silver sequins.There heads collid....armaan looks up n shes a beautifull face..with a weak smile on her face... Armaan is gazes at her beauti,. he sees a strand move on her face, making her irritated and then, he tucked that behind her ears..making her blush and she helps him to PICk up the books, and by accident Armaan’s hand touches Ridhima’s hand, she blushes n backs away,
note :thanx alotttttttt every1 4 ur appreciation.......who ever u imagion as your ridhima shilpa or sukriti..we just want u 2 imagion
thats amazing
i loved the part
and dun worry mimz ur Trps r goona b sky high
i hope the next part is coming very sooooooooooooooon
sash123
August 7, 2008, 05:42 PM
PART 3....
They all arrive at Shashank’s house, and Shashank ,Nani and Anjali are
already there to welcome them at the door
Rajeev: Arrey Shashi, my bum chum…!!!
Shashank: Raja mere yaar..aao aao
Rajeev: Balle balle
Shashank: Shava shava
Rajeev: Oh balle
Shashank: Oh shava
Rajeev: chain kuli ke
Shashank: main kuli ke
Rajeev & Shashank together: CHAIN…(both laugh)
Both of them hug each other tightly and crack a silly
joke. Everyone is looking at them surprised.
Rajeev touches nani’s feet and she does the aarti.
Nani: Rajeev teri lambhi umar ho
Meanwhile everyone goes inside and sit down.
Armaan touches Shashank’s and nani’s feet, she does Armaan’s aarti.
They sit down for a bit, and then breakfast is served.
Armaan (whispering to muskaan): Bhahi Ridhima kahan hai..??
Muskaan: (whispering back) itne bechain mat hoo Armaan…patience devar ji…!!
Rajeev: Aur Anjali beta, tum bato kaise ho…??
Anjali: Haan jee uncle, main bilkul theek hoon,
Rajeev: accha (serving himself with hot jalebis).
Nani: Armaan beta aur kuch lo na, tum toh sharma rahey ho..??
Armaan: nahi nahi nani main ka raha hoon, aap le ji hey na..!!
After that Shashank tells shows them their room and they all rest.
Armaan in his room, lying on the bed, his phone rings.
Armaan: ab yeh kaun hai..?? (looking at his phone) Oh mannnn Sonia….!!!
Armaan: Hello…?
Sonia: (on the phone): Armaan jaan kahan ho, itne rings hua..??
Armaan: Hey Sonia, meri jaan, main bilkul theek hoon tum kaise ho..??
Sonia: Not good Armaan, I miss you jaan, waise tum ho kahan..??
Armaan: (lost for words)….woh…woh..main woh…dad ke saath hoon..!!!,
he had some work and he wanted me to be with him. Main aa ja hoon ga,
by the weekend..!!
Sonia: KYA…?? Weekend tak..?? Armaan jaan you know ke…
maine mum se tumhari baat kar ne hai.., toh I need you to be with me.
Armaan: Oh haan, Soni don’t worry, don’t u trust me..??
Sonia: Nahi Armaan your Soni trusts you more than herself,
par mujhe ek ajib se feeling ho rahi hai..??
Armaan: Soni….yaar chill babe….just chill…main aa jao hoon ga..ok babe…
miss me….mwah..love you jaan..
Sonia: Ok dude…love you, and don’t do anything I wouldn’t, bye Armaan.
Armaan: Bye babe.
Armaan: (to himself) Oh God, maine Sonia se jhooth bola…
mannn I wish like crap…why why why..!!!
Just then Rahul and Muskaan enter in his room.
Rahul: Armaan, tayaar hai na..??
Armaan: Tayar…?? Kyon bhaiya…??
Muskaan: kyon ki…just then…Shashank enters the room.
Shas :hain. beta.main tumhai yahi battana chahta tha ke ridhima
tumhara studyroom main wait kar rahi hogi.
Arm:Kya ..study room.
Shas: tumnai kuch bolla
Arm :nahi nahi ..kuch nahi uncle.
Shas:Armaan beta tumhai pata hai ..ke ridhima ek doctor hai....
abhi abhi usna apni internship complete ke hai.
Arm:Kya doctor hai....agar meri sonia doctor hoti
Shas:Sonia
Ra:nahi ..nahi..iska matab tha ke iska favorite gaana tha ..
woh umm..haan ...soni de nakhre sone lagade ...
Shashank gives Rahul a weird look
Ra:kyun Muskaan..abhi armaan ne yahi kaha tha
Mu:nahi...matlab haan
Shas:Acha ..main..chaltha hun..
Ra:acha uncle...bye uncle..
Shashank leaves
Arm:mujhe is Ridhima se koi milna nahi hai
Ra:Armaan ...main papa ko batta dun.....
Arm:Kya hai bhai....haar baat ke upar. Mujhe blackmail karta hai....
.bhabi dekho na mujhe phir se mujhe blackmail kaar raha hai .......
armaan makes a cute face
Mu:Rahul meri hero ko kyun blackmail kaar raha ho......uski marzi hai..
Arm:dekliya bhabi ..bajpaan se...mujhe blackmail karta haan
Ra: Armaan ...main papa ko battana jaa raha hun
Arm(does a impression of raol):main papa ko battana jaa raha hun
Arm:acha acha main....jaa raha hoon...lekin iska yeh nahi matlaab..ke main apse darta hun.
Armaan goes....
Ra:Yeh sab tumhari wajha se ..aghh....
Mu:main ki kiya
Ra:bahoot kuch..
Mu: oii kanajoray....punjab ke kuri hun...
Ra:like I care....oii....mujhe bhi koi intrest nahi hai ..tujse baat kaarna ka...
Mu:Mujhe koi farrak nahi. Parta
Muskaan walks away..rahul goes after her....
PRECAP..Armaan is in the study room PICking up some books from the table and as he is doing that, he trips up from the computer wire and the books drop, just then Ridhima comes wearing a black salwaar kameez with silver sequins.There heads collid....armaan looks up n shes a beautifull face..with a weak smile on her face... Armaan is gazes at her beauti,. he sees a strand move on her face, making her irritated and then, he tucked that behind her ears..making her blush and she helps him to PICk up the books, and by accident Armaan’s hand touches Ridhima’s hand, she blushes n backs away,
note :thanx alotttttttt every1 4 ur appreciation.......who ever u imagion as your ridhima shilpa or sukriti..we just want u 2 imagion
wow yar kwl very gud epi nice very nice
chak de phatte
keep up the good work
waiting 4 next part:D
alizasheik
August 7, 2008, 08:58 PM
awesome dear.........
keep posting frndz
iNGi
August 8, 2008, 03:25 AM
oh wow really amazing yaar n da precap is even more amazing. 1 thing i wanted 2 say dat even though it's a written story plz do put back ground score wen u show dat library scene in da next part cuz wen v r imagining it da background score will give it more detail n u know wat background score im talking abt, asmani or ishq leta hai n none other. plz plz plz do think abt it n i juz can't w8 4 da next part after reading da precap
coolmimz
August 8, 2008, 07:13 PM
oh wow really amazing yaar n da precap is even more amazing. 1 thing i wanted 2 say dat even though it's a written story plz do put back ground score wen u show dat library scene in da next part cuz wen v r imagining it da background score will give it more detail n u know wat background score im talking abt, asmani or ishq leta hai n none other. plz plz plz do think abt it n i juz can't w8 4 da next part after reading da precap
ANYWAY..WE WERE..ACTULLEY..GONNA DO THAT....
shonarars
August 8, 2008, 07:21 PM
mimzy..and u three,,..ven r u riting nxt..im waiting..plz PM me abt it..any one of u..
xx
123xx
August 8, 2008, 07:49 PM
PART 3....
They all arrive at Shashank’s house, and Shashank ,Nani and Anjali are
already there to welcome them at the door
Rajeev: Arrey Shashi, my bum chum…!!!
Shashank: Raja mere yaar..aao aao
Rajeev: Balle balle
Shashank: Shava shava
Rajeev: Oh balle
Shashank: Oh shava
Rajeev: chain kuli ke
Shashank: main kuli ke
Rajeev & Shashank together: CHAIN…(both laugh)
Both of them hug each other tightly and crack a silly
joke. Everyone is looking at them surprised.
Rajeev touches nani’s feet and she does the aarti.
Nani: Rajeev teri lambhi umar ho
Meanwhile everyone goes inside and sit down.
Armaan touches Shashank’s and nani’s feet, she does Armaan’s aarti.
They sit down for a bit, and then breakfast is served.
Armaan (whispering to muskaan): Bhahi Ridhima kahan hai..??
Muskaan: (whispering back) itne bechain mat hoo Armaan…patience devar ji…!!
Rajeev: Aur Anjali beta, tum bato kaise ho…??
Anjali: Haan jee uncle, main bilkul theek hoon,
Rajeev: accha (serving himself with hot jalebis).
Nani: Armaan beta aur kuch lo na, tum toh sharma rahey ho..??
Armaan: nahi nahi nani main ka raha hoon, aap le ji hey na..!!
After that Shashank tells shows them their room and they all rest.
Armaan in his room, lying on the bed, his phone rings.
Armaan: ab yeh kaun hai..?? (looking at his phone) Oh mannnn Sonia….!!!
Armaan: Hello…?
Sonia: (on the phone): Armaan jaan kahan ho, itne rings hua..??
Armaan: Hey Sonia, meri jaan, main bilkul theek hoon tum kaise ho..??
Sonia: Not good Armaan, I miss you jaan, waise tum ho kahan..??
Armaan: (lost for words)….woh…woh..main woh…dad ke saath hoon..!!!,
he had some work and he wanted me to be with him. Main aa ja hoon ga,
by the weekend..!!
Sonia: KYA…?? Weekend tak..?? Armaan jaan you know ke…
maine mum se tumhari baat kar ne hai.., toh I need you to be with me.
Armaan: Oh haan, Soni don’t worry, don’t u trust me..??
Sonia: Nahi Armaan your Soni trusts you more than herself,
par mujhe ek ajib se feeling ho rahi hai..??
Armaan: Soni….yaar chill babe….just chill…main aa jao hoon ga..ok babe…
miss me….mwah..love you jaan..
Sonia: Ok dude…love you, and don’t do anything I wouldn’t, bye Armaan.
Armaan: Bye babe.
Armaan: (to himself) Oh God, maine Sonia se jhooth bola…
mannn I wish like crap…why why why..!!!
Just then Rahul and Muskaan enter in his room.
Rahul: Armaan, tayaar hai na..??
Armaan: Tayar…?? Kyon bhaiya…??
Muskaan: kyon ki…just then…Shashank enters the room.
Shas :hain. beta.main tumhai yahi battana chahta tha ke ridhima
tumhara studyroom main wait kar rahi hogi.
Arm:Kya ..study room.
Shas: tumnai kuch bolla
Arm :nahi nahi ..kuch nahi uncle.
Shas:Armaan beta tumhai pata hai ..ke ridhima ek doctor hai....
abhi abhi usna apni internship complete ke hai.
Arm:Kya doctor hai....agar meri sonia doctor hoti
Shas:Sonia
Ra:nahi ..nahi..iska matab tha ke iska favorite gaana tha ..
woh umm..haan ...soni de nakhre sone lagade ...
Shashank gives Rahul a weird look
Ra:kyun Muskaan..abhi armaan ne yahi kaha tha
Mu:nahi...matlab haan
Shas:Acha ..main..chaltha hun..
Ra:acha uncle...bye uncle..
Shashank leaves
Arm:mujhe is Ridhima se koi milna nahi hai
Ra:Armaan ...main papa ko batta dun.....
Arm:Kya hai bhai....haar baat ke upar. Mujhe blackmail karta hai....
.bhabi dekho na mujhe phir se mujhe blackmail kaar raha hai .......
armaan makes a cute face
Mu:Rahul meri hero ko kyun blackmail kaar raha ho......uski marzi hai..
Arm:dekliya bhabi ..bajpaan se...mujhe blackmail karta haan
Ra: Armaan ...main papa ko battana jaa raha hun
Arm(does a impression of raol):main papa ko battana jaa raha hun
Arm:acha acha main....jaa raha hoon...lekin iska yeh nahi matlaab..ke main apse darta hun.
Armaan goes....
Ra:Yeh sab tumhari wajha se ..aghh....
Mu:main ki kiya
Ra:bahoot kuch..
Mu: oii kanajoray....punjab ke kuri hun...
Ra:like I care....oii....mujhe bhi koi intrest nahi hai ..tujse baat kaarna ka...
Mu:Mujhe koi farrak nahi. Parta
Muskaan walks away..rahul goes after her....
PRECAP..Armaan is in the study room PICking up some books from the table and as he is doing that, he trips up from the computer wire and the books drop, just then Ridhima comes wearing a black salwaar kameez with silver sequins.There heads collid....armaan looks up n shes a beautifull face..with a weak smile on her face... Armaan is gazes at her beauti,. he sees a strand move on her face, making her irritated and then, he tucked that behind her ears..making her blush and she helps him to PICk up the books, and by accident Armaan’s hand touches Ridhima’s hand, she blushes n backs away,
note :thanx alotttttttt every1 4 ur appreciation.......who ever u imagion as your ridhima shilpa or sukriti..we just want u 2 imagion
gr8 going guys...loved it...... :D:D
ridhi_remix
August 9, 2008, 02:40 PM
wow!!!its really gud its amazin
well done hira my ksg...ridhima di
mimz n anki
itz awesome
bt wat will happn to sonia den??
vasantha90
August 10, 2008, 01:05 AM
PART 3....
They all arrive at Shashank’s house, and Shashank ,Nani and Anjali are
already there to welcome them at the door
Rajeev: Arrey Shashi, my bum chum…!!!
Shashank: Raja mere yaar..aao aao
Rajeev: Balle balle
Shashank: Shava shava
Rajeev: Oh balle
Shashank: Oh shava
Rajeev: chain kuli ke
Shashank: main kuli ke
Rajeev & Shashank together: CHAIN…(both laugh)
Both of them hug each other tightly and crack a silly
joke. Everyone is looking at them surprised.
Rajeev touches nani’s feet and she does the aarti.
Nani: Rajeev teri lambhi umar ho
Meanwhile everyone goes inside and sit down.
Armaan touches Shashank’s and nani’s feet, she does Armaan’s aarti.
They sit down for a bit, and then breakfast is served.
Armaan (whispering to muskaan): Bhahi Ridhima kahan hai..??
Muskaan: (whispering back) itne bechain mat hoo Armaan…patience devar ji…!!
Rajeev: Aur Anjali beta, tum bato kaise ho…??
Anjali: Haan jee uncle, main bilkul theek hoon,
Rajeev: accha (serving himself with hot jalebis).
Nani: Armaan beta aur kuch lo na, tum toh sharma rahey ho..??
Armaan: nahi nahi nani main ka raha hoon, aap le ji hey na..!!
After that Shashank tells shows them their room and they all rest.
Armaan in his room, lying on the bed, his phone rings.
Armaan: ab yeh kaun hai..?? (looking at his phone) Oh mannnn Sonia….!!!
Armaan: Hello…?
Sonia: (on the phone): Armaan jaan kahan ho, itne rings hua..??
Armaan: Hey Sonia, meri jaan, main bilkul theek hoon tum kaise ho..??
Sonia: Not good Armaan, I miss you jaan, waise tum ho kahan..??
Armaan: (lost for words)….woh…woh..main woh…dad ke saath hoon..!!!,
he had some work and he wanted me to be with him. Main aa ja hoon ga,
by the weekend..!!
Sonia: KYA…?? Weekend tak..?? Armaan jaan you know ke…
maine mum se tumhari baat kar ne hai.., toh I need you to be with me.
Armaan: Oh haan, Soni don’t worry, don’t u trust me..??
Sonia: Nahi Armaan your Soni trusts you more than herself,
par mujhe ek ajib se feeling ho rahi hai..??
Armaan: Soni….yaar chill babe….just chill…main aa jao hoon ga..ok babe…
miss me….mwah..love you jaan..
Sonia: Ok dude…love you, and don’t do anything I wouldn’t, bye Armaan.
Armaan: Bye babe.
Armaan: (to himself) Oh God, maine Sonia se jhooth bola…
mannn I wish like crap…why why why..!!!
Just then Rahul and Muskaan enter in his room.
Rahul: Armaan, tayaar hai na..??
Armaan: Tayar…?? Kyon bhaiya…??
Muskaan: kyon ki…just then…Shashank enters the room.
Shas :hain. beta.main tumhai yahi battana chahta tha ke ridhima
tumhara studyroom main wait kar rahi hogi.
Arm:Kya ..study room.
Shas: tumnai kuch bolla
Arm :nahi nahi ..kuch nahi uncle.
Shas:Armaan beta tumhai pata hai ..ke ridhima ek doctor hai....
abhi abhi usna apni internship complete ke hai.
Arm:Kya doctor hai....agar meri sonia doctor hoti
Shas:Sonia
Ra:nahi ..nahi..iska matab tha ke iska favorite gaana tha ..
woh umm..haan ...soni de nakhre sone lagade ...
Shashank gives Rahul a weird look
Ra:kyun Muskaan..abhi armaan ne yahi kaha tha
Mu:nahi...matlab haan
Shas:Acha ..main..chaltha hun..
Ra:acha uncle...bye uncle..
Shashank leaves
Arm:mujhe is Ridhima se koi milna nahi hai
Ra:Armaan ...main papa ko batta dun.....
Arm:Kya hai bhai....haar baat ke upar. Mujhe blackmail karta hai....
.bhabi dekho na mujhe phir se mujhe blackmail kaar raha hai .......
armaan makes a cute face
Mu:Rahul meri hero ko kyun blackmail kaar raha ho......uski marzi hai..
Arm:dekliya bhabi ..bajpaan se...mujhe blackmail karta haan
Ra: Armaan ...main papa ko battana jaa raha hun
Arm(does a impression of raol):main papa ko battana jaa raha hun
Arm:acha acha main....jaa raha hoon...lekin iska yeh nahi matlaab..ke main apse darta hun.
Armaan goes....
Ra:Yeh sab tumhari wajha se ..aghh....
Mu:main ki kiya
Ra:bahoot kuch..
Mu: oii kanajoray....punjab ke kuri hun...
Ra:like I care....oii....mujhe bhi koi intrest nahi hai ..tujse baat kaarna ka...
Mu:Mujhe koi farrak nahi. Parta
Muskaan walks away..rahul goes after her....
PRECAP..Armaan is in the study room PICking up some books from the table and as he is doing that, he trips up from the computer wire and the books drop, just then Ridhima comes wearing a black salwaar kameez with silver sequins.There heads collid....armaan looks up n shes a beautifull face..with a weak smile on her face... Armaan is gazes at her beauti,. he sees a strand move on her face, making her irritated and then, he tucked that behind her ears..making her blush and she helps him to PICk up the books, and by accident Armaan’s hand touches Ridhima’s hand, she blushes n backs away,
note :thanx alotttttttt every1 4 ur appreciation.......who ever u imagion as your ridhima shilpa or sukriti..we just want u 2 imagion
yaar tum l0g har part par suspEnce rakhte h0...jaldi kar...i want t0 kn0w their first meeting yaar....
ARMAAN -RIDDHIMA LUV AT FIRST SITE.........
c0ntinue s00n..me waiting eagerly.......
glam_ankita
August 12, 2008, 12:52 PM
Thanks a ton for your comment guys.... :D means a lot to us... the next part is going to be posted soon... :p love ya all....
hira77
August 13, 2008, 03:56 AM
Hey guys thank you soo much for ur support...:D
RECAP:-
Armaan and his family arrive at Ridhima's house
Sonia calls Armaan and asks him where is he, Armaan says that he is with his dad and tells her that he will be back by the weekend
Shashank tells Armaan to meet Ridhima in the study room
and...Rahul and Muskaan have a cute little fight...
NOW....here it is..PART 4...
Ridhima enters the study room, she is wearing a pink salwaar suit with pink chappals, she slowly walks over to armaan, he suddenly looks up at her. He is spellbound by her beauty & charm
Armaan: Aap…yahan…???
She doesn’t answer his question, and she sits on her knees
Ridhima: main aapki madat kar sakti hoon…???
Armaan gets lost in her freshness, her beauty, her innocence, the fragrance of her hair makes Armaan wonder and go crazy. (Background score aasmani rang ho, pyaar ke bhoond ho). She slowly begins to pick up the books, then she sees Armaan staring at her she blushes and looks down as she looks down Armaan comes back to his senses. Ridhima is still picking the books from the floor, Armaan also picks up 1 book
Then suddenly he sees that one of Ridhima’s hair strand is coming out, he wonders to himself that she looks damn beautiful, and again gets lost in Ridhima.
Armaan brings his right hand to put the hair strand back, he brings it near, more near, and nearer, then he suddenly comes to senses & then he tries to fake a hand gesture as if their was a mosquito near Ridhima.
Meanwhile Ridhima has picked up the books and she places them in a neat pile on the table. She gets up but as she is getting up she steps on her own dupatta and falls on top of Armaan.
For the first time, their eyes meet…Armaan is staring at her, she looks down in embarrassment and tries to get up again she re-falls on Armaan again coz her dupatta is tangled in her chappal.
Armaan gestures to her ‘’hang on’’ and helps her to get up and he makes her sit down
Armaan: aap theek hai na..??
Ridhima: jee… main theek hoon
Armaan: Kafee dangerous kamra hai….!!!
Ridhima: (looking confused) dangerous….. kyon..??
Armaan: kyon ki...pehle main gira aur phir aap.
Ridhima: lekin yeh toh humara study room hai..
Armaan: (smiling sarcastically) humara..??
Armaan: ok..cool (mumbles under his breath) Tab he toh itna dangerous kamra hai..!!
Ridhima: Kuck kaha aapne..?
Armaan: nahi toh....umm umm...(not recalling Ridhima’s name)
Ridhima: Dr Ridhima Shashank gupta
Armaan:..oh ok....nice name...aur main Dr….
Ridhima: (cutiing into his sentence) Dr. Armaan Malik
Armaan looks at Ridhima begins to wonder to himself that she knows his full name and he had forgotten her name, and then he thought to himself that why is he attracted to her, why because he has his Sonia, but still…what was this then..??
Suddenly, cool and fresh breeze enters the study room via the window, Ridhima goes to close the window so as she walks past armaan her hair gets stuck in his shirt button
so she is pulled towards armaan
Armaan looks down and says...
Armaan: main nikalta hoon….Ridhima…thoda sa paas aahey na tak ke main theek se bal ne kal doon…….aur paas….aur paas….(Ridhima starts to feel uneasy and starts breathing heavily and then she places her hands on Armaan’s shoulders)
Ridhima: aaahhh...
Armaan: Lagi kya…?? Oh I am very sorry.
Ridhima: (looks up smiling and blushes) Nahi…theek hai…it’s ok
Armaan: Bas ho gaya…there we go.
Ridhima: Thank you. (she tries to move away from him, but her dupatta gets stuck in the table and in a reflex action, she goes on top of armaan and he places his hands on her back to hold her so that she doesn’t fall and she holds onto his back so that she doesn't fall again)
JUST THEN Anjali and Muskaan see this….and to them it seems like Armaan and Ridhima are hugging eachother
Anjali: (whispering) Muskaan dekhko toh zara.. woh dono gale mill rahe hai!!
Muskaan: (happily) hai Rabba….main vari vari java
Anjali: lagta hai ke Armaan aur ridhima kuch zyada he paas paas ho gaye hai..??
Muskaan: bilkul
Anjali: Muskaan ahista se bolo koi sunn lega.
Muskaan: arrey sunne do na waise bhi jab miya biwi raazi toh phir kya karega kaazi ji haan (she laughs in her unique yet funny way).
Anjali ( smiling) :ya… par kitne pyaare lag rahe hain na dono
Muskaan: haiii bahut hi pyaare…. neeche aanedo in dono ki main toh nazar utaardungi
Anjali: ya ekdum perfect couple
Muskaan: haan ji bilkul
Anjali :achha aisa karte hain in dono love birds ko yahin akela chhod dete hain aur neeche jaake sab ko bata dete hain inke baare mein
Muskaan: haanji neeche woh sab bhi toh pareshaan ho rahe honge na
Anjali: haan lets go
They both leave and go downstairs.....
Anjali: sab log suniye....Armaan aur ridhima shaadi ke liye maan gaye hai….!!!
Rajeev: (shocked) kya..??
Armaan_Rhidz
August 13, 2008, 05:20 AM
WOW!!!! AMAZING!
I don't have words.. honestly!!
I luvvv the way the story is moving..!!
Gr8 going!
Armaanrox!!!
August 13, 2008, 08:13 AM
Hey guys thank you soo much for ur support...:D
RECAP:-
Armaan and his family arrive at Ridhima's house
Sonia calls Armaan and asks him where is he, Armaan says that he is with his dad and tells her that he will be back by the weekend
Shashank tells Armaan to meet Ridhima in the study room
and...Rahul and Muskaan have a cute little fight...
NOW....here it is..PART 4...
Ridhima enters the study room, she is wearing a pink salwaar suit with pink chappals, she slowly walks over to armaan, he suddenly looks up at her. He is spellbound by her beauty & charm
Armaan: Aap…yahan…???
She doesn’t answer his question, and she sits on her knees
Ridhima: main aapki madat kar sakti hoon…???
Armaan gets lost in her freshness, her beauty, her innocence, the fragrance of her hair makes Armaan wonder and go crazy. (Background score aasmani rang ho, pyaar ke bhoond ho). She slowly begins to pick up the books, then she sees Armaan staring at her she blushes and looks down as she looks down Armaan comes back to his senses. Ridhima is still picking the books from the floor, Armaan also picks up 1 book
Then suddenly he sees that one of Ridhima’s hair strand is coming out, he wonders to himself that she looks damn beautiful, and again gets lost in Ridhima.
Armaan brings his right hand to put the hair strand back, he brings it near, more near, and nearer, then he suddenly comes to senses & then he tries to fake a hand gesture as if their was a mosquito near Ridhima.
Meanwhile Ridhima has picked up the books and she places them in a neat pile on the table. She gets up but as she is getting up she steps on her own dupatta and falls on top of Armaan.
For the first time, their eyes meet…Armaan is staring at her, she looks down in embarrassment and tries to get up again she re-falls on Armaan again coz her dupatta is tangled in her chappal.
Armaan gestures to her ‘’hang on’’ and helps her to get up and he makes her sit down
Armaan: aap theek hai na..??
Ridhima: jee… main theek hoon
Armaan: Kafee dangerous kamra hai….!!!
Ridhima: (looking confused) dangerous….. kyon..??
Armaan: kyon ki...pehle main gira aur phir aap.
Ridhima: lekin yeh toh humara study room hai..
Armaan: (smiling sarcastically) humara..??
Armaan: ok..cool (mumbles under his breath) Tab he toh itna dangerous kamra hai..!!
Ridhima: Kuck kaha aapne..?
Armaan: nahi toh....umm umm...(not recalling Ridhima’s name)
Ridhima: Dr Ridhima Shashank gupta
Armaan:..oh ok....nice name...aur main Dr….
Ridhima: (cutiing into his sentence) Dr. Armaan Malik
Armaan looks at Ridhima begins to wonder to himself that she knows his full name and he had forgotten her name, and then he thought to himself that why is he attracted to her, why because he has his Sonia, but still…what was this then..??
Suddenly, cool and fresh breeze enters the study room via the window, Ridhima goes to close the window so as she walks past armaan her hair gets stuck in his shirt button
so she is pulled towards armaan
Armaan looks down and says...
Armaan: main nikalta hoon….Ridhima…thoda sa paas aahey na tak ke main theek se bal ne kal doon…….aur paas….aur paas….(Ridhima starts to feel uneasy and starts breathing heavily and then she places her hands on Armaan’s shoulders)
Ridhima: aaahhh...
Armaan: Lagi kya…?? Oh I am very sorry.
Ridhima: (looks up smiling and blushes) Nahi…theek hai…it’s ok
Armaan: Bas ho gaya…there we go.
Ridhima: Thank you. (she tries to move away from him, but her dupatta gets stuck in the table and in a reflex action, she goes on top of armaan and he places his hands on her back to hold her so that she doesn’t fall and she holds onto his back so that she doesn't fall again)
JUST THEN Anjali and Muskaan see this….and to them it seems like Armaan and Ridhima are hugging eachother
Anjali: (whispering) Muskaan dekhko toh zara.. woh dono gale mill rahe hai!!
Muskaan: (happily) hai Rabba….main vari vari java
Anjali: lagta hai ke Armaan aur ridhima kuch zyada he paas paas ho gaye hai..??
Muskaan: bilkul
Anjali: Muskaan ahista se bolo koi sunn lega.
Muskaan: arrey sunne do na waise bhi jab miya biwi raazi toh phir kya karega kaazi ji haan (she laughs in her unique yet funny way).
Anjali ( smiling) :ya… par kitne pyaare lag rahe hain na dono
Muskaan: haiii bahut hi pyaare…. neeche aanedo in dono ki main toh nazar utaardungi
Anjali: ya ekdum perfect couple
Muskaan: haan ji bilkul
Anjali :achha aisa karte hain in dono love birds ko yahin akela chhod dete hain aur neeche jaake sab ko bata dete hain inke baare mein
Muskaan: haanji neeche woh sab bhi toh pareshaan ho rahe honge na
Anjali: haan lets go
They both leave and go downstairs.....
Anjali: sab log suniye....Armaan aur ridhima shaadi ke liye maan gaye hai….!!!
Rajeev: (shocked) kya..??
omg!!!!! just luved da AR story.....it wz so sweet n romantic.....
n muskaan n anji....lolz....u guys srsly rock.......keep rocking......n post da next part soon......
123xx
August 13, 2008, 03:03 PM
wow....awesome...part....
wat a scene between AR...loved it..
n muskaan and anji...hehe....well lets see...
waiting for the next part....
shonarars
August 13, 2008, 04:40 PM
woho..u four..excellent..i mean..the way ridz blushes nd all!!
armaan_ridz_rox
August 13, 2008, 06:32 PM
Hey guys thank you soo much for ur support...:D
RECAP:-
Armaan and his family arrive at Ridhima's house
Sonia calls Armaan and asks him where is he, Armaan says that he is with his dad and tells her that he will be back by the weekend
Shashank tells Armaan to meet Ridhima in the study room
and...Rahul and Muskaan have a cute little fight...
NOW....here it is..PART 4...
Ridhima enters the study room, she is wearing a pink salwaar suit with pink chappals, she slowly walks over to armaan, he suddenly looks up at her. He is spellbound by her beauty & charm
Armaan: Aap…yahan…???
She doesn’t answer his question, and she sits on her knees
Ridhima: main aapki madat kar sakti hoon…???
Armaan gets lost in her freshness, her beauty, her innocence, the fragrance of her hair makes Armaan wonder and go crazy. (Background score aasmani rang ho, pyaar ke bhoond ho). She slowly begins to pick up the books, then she sees Armaan staring at her she blushes and looks down as she looks down Armaan comes back to his senses. Ridhima is still picking the books from the floor, Armaan also picks up 1 book
Then suddenly he sees that one of Ridhima’s hair strand is coming out, he wonders to himself that she looks damn beautiful, and again gets lost in Ridhima.
Armaan brings his right hand to put the hair strand back, he brings it near, more near, and nearer, then he suddenly comes to senses & then he tries to fake a hand gesture as if their was a mosquito near Ridhima.
Meanwhile Ridhima has picked up the books and she places them in a neat pile on the table. She gets up but as she is getting up she steps on her own dupatta and falls on top of Armaan.
For the first time, their eyes meet…Armaan is staring at her, she looks down in embarrassment and tries to get up again she re-falls on Armaan again coz her dupatta is tangled in her chappal.
Armaan gestures to her ‘’hang on’’ and helps her to get up and he makes her sit down
Armaan: aap theek hai na..??
Ridhima: jee… main theek hoon
Armaan: Kafee dangerous kamra hai….!!!
Ridhima: (looking confused) dangerous….. kyon..??
Armaan: kyon ki...pehle main gira aur phir aap.
Ridhima: lekin yeh toh humara study room hai..
Armaan: (smiling sarcastically) humara..??
Armaan: ok..cool (mumbles under his breath) Tab he toh itna dangerous kamra hai..!!
Ridhima: Kuck kaha aapne..?
Armaan: nahi toh....umm umm...(not recalling Ridhima’s name)
Ridhima: Dr Ridhima Shashank gupta
Armaan:..oh ok....nice name...aur main Dr….
Ridhima: (cutiing into his sentence) Dr. Armaan Malik
Armaan looks at Ridhima begins to wonder to himself that she knows his full name and he had forgotten her name, and then he thought to himself that why is he attracted to her, why because he has his Sonia, but still…what was this then..??
Suddenly, cool and fresh breeze enters the study room via the window, Ridhima goes to close the window so as she walks past armaan her hair gets stuck in his shirt button
so she is pulled towards armaan
Armaan looks down and says...
Armaan: main nikalta hoon….Ridhima…thoda sa paas aahey na tak ke main theek se bal ne kal doon…….aur paas….aur paas….(Ridhima starts to feel uneasy and starts breathing heavily and then she places her hands on Armaan’s shoulders)
Ridhima: aaahhh...
Armaan: Lagi kya…?? Oh I am very sorry.
Ridhima: (looks up smiling and blushes) Nahi…theek hai…it’s ok
Armaan: Bas ho gaya…there we go.
Ridhima: Thank you. (she tries to move away from him, but her dupatta gets stuck in the table and in a reflex action, she goes on top of armaan and he places his hands on her back to hold her so that she doesn’t fall and she holds onto his back so that she doesn't fall again)
JUST THEN Anjali and Muskaan see this….and to them it seems like Armaan and Ridhima are hugging eachother
Anjali: (whispering) Muskaan dekhko toh zara.. woh dono gale mill rahe hai!!
Muskaan: (happily) hai Rabba….main vari vari java
Anjali: lagta hai ke Armaan aur ridhima kuch zyada he paas paas ho gaye hai..??
Muskaan: bilkul
Anjali: Muskaan ahista se bolo koi sunn lega.
Muskaan: arrey sunne do na waise bhi jab miya biwi raazi toh phir kya karega kaazi ji haan (she laughs in her unique yet funny way).
Anjali ( smiling) :ya… par kitne pyaare lag rahe hain na dono
Muskaan: haiii bahut hi pyaare…. neeche aanedo in dono ki main toh nazar utaardungi
Anjali: ya ekdum perfect couple
Muskaan: haan ji bilkul
Anjali :achha aisa karte hain in dono love birds ko yahin akela chhod dete hain aur neeche jaake sab ko bata dete hain inke baare mein
Muskaan: haanji neeche woh sab bhi toh pareshaan ho rahe honge na
Anjali: haan lets go
They both leave and go downstairs.....
Anjali: sab log suniye....Armaan aur ridhima shaadi ke liye maan gaye hai….!!!
Rajeev: (shocked) kya..??
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! ROCKING ROCKING. JUST LOVED THE AR SCENE. FAB FANTASTIC. KEEP IT UP. YAAR U GUYS R AWESOME
neeha123
August 13, 2008, 09:02 PM
you Darlings Are Soooo Darn Good!!!!
Loved Part Four Sooooooooooooooo Much!!! :d
Especially The Ar Scenes... Very Well Done!!!! Keep It Up!! :d
dolly2008
August 14, 2008, 12:14 AM
u guys rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Another amazing part by FANTASTIC FOUR
loved all the ar scenes
Hope the next part coming soooon
Id b waiting 4 dat
teenorchid
August 14, 2008, 12:56 AM
Well i have got another fanfic to read
Wow
thats gr8
well have to read all the parts
then i ll comment
Farwa
vasantha90
August 14, 2008, 02:56 AM
w0w such an amazing part...luved it....
i cud see kash t0gether 0nce again thru this part...
thank u guys....
ll b waiting fr ur nxt part....
Lollipop
August 14, 2008, 02:58 PM
Wow!!!! I am speechless...........itz a lovely, wonderful, awesome story! Eagerly waiting 4 da next part.......toooooooooooo gud Fantastic Four!
ridzii
August 14, 2008, 05:26 PM
Thank U Soooo Much Every1 4 Appreciating Our Work
V R Really Glad Dat U Liked It
Ur Appreciation,luv N Support Really Means Alotttttttt 2 Us
It Encourages Us Alottttttttt
Thank U
I Luuuv Ya All
iNGi
August 14, 2008, 07:03 PM
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
awesummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
mind blowinggggggggggggggggggggggg
amazinggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
seriously guys dis epi was surely rocking but i juz wanna mention 1 thing dat in precap u mentioned dat ridz is wearing black n in da epi u said she wearin pink. not criticizing but juz telling n thank u sooooooooooooooooo nmuch 4 listening 2 my suggestion n putting asmani as background score. im ur big fan yaar :)
Sunaina_Sharma
August 17, 2008, 06:52 PM
awesum
My Fantastic Four
Kuls786
August 20, 2008, 06:37 PM
REALLY AWESUM...........!!!!!!!!!!!11 loved it...!!!!!!!!! keep it up........!!!!!!!!
saadhasan
August 24, 2008, 10:28 PM
Hey guys thank you soo much for ur support...:D
RECAP:-
Armaan and his family arrive at Ridhima's house
Sonia calls Armaan and asks him where is he, Armaan says that he is with his dad and tells her that he will be back by the weekend
Shashank tells Armaan to meet Ridhima in the study room
and...Rahul and Muskaan have a cute little fight...
NOW....here it is..PART 4...
Ridhima enters the study room, she is wearing a pink salwaar suit with pink chappals, she slowly walks over to armaan, he suddenly looks up at her. He is spellbound by her beauty & charm
Armaan: Aap…yahan…???
She doesn’t answer his question, and she sits on her knees
Ridhima: main aapki madat kar sakti hoon…???
Armaan gets lost in her freshness, her beauty, her innocence, the fragrance of her hair makes Armaan wonder and go crazy. (Background score aasmani rang ho, pyaar ke bhoond ho). She slowly begins to pick up the books, then she sees Armaan staring at her she blushes and looks down as she looks down Armaan comes back to his senses. Ridhima is still picking the books from the floor, Armaan also picks up 1 book
Then suddenly he sees that one of Ridhima’s hair strand is coming out, he wonders to himself that she looks damn beautiful, and again gets lost in Ridhima.
Armaan brings his right hand to put the hair strand back, he brings it near, more near, and nearer, then he suddenly comes to senses & then he tries to fake a hand gesture as if their was a mosquito near Ridhima.
Meanwhile Ridhima has picked up the books and she places them in a neat pile on the table. She gets up but as she is getting up she steps on her own dupatta and falls on top of Armaan.
For the first time, their eyes meet…Armaan is staring at her, she looks down in embarrassment and tries to get up again she re-falls on Armaan again coz her dupatta is tangled in her chappal.
Armaan gestures to her ‘’hang on’’ and helps her to get up and he makes her sit down
Armaan: aap theek hai na..??
Ridhima: jee… main theek hoon
Armaan: Kafee dangerous kamra hai….!!!
Ridhima: (looking confused) dangerous….. kyon..??
Armaan: kyon ki...pehle main gira aur phir aap.
Ridhima: lekin yeh toh humara study room hai..
Armaan: (smiling sarcastically) humara..??
Armaan: ok..cool (mumbles under his breath) Tab he toh itna dangerous kamra hai..!!
Ridhima: Kuck kaha aapne..?
Armaan: nahi toh....umm umm...(not recalling Ridhima’s name)
Ridhima: Dr Ridhima Shashank gupta
Armaan:..oh ok....nice name...aur main Dr….
Ridhima: (cutiing into his sentence) Dr. Armaan Malik
Armaan looks at Ridhima begins to wonder to himself that she knows his full name and he had forgotten her name, and then he thought to himself that why is he attracted to her, why because he has his Sonia, but still…what was this then..??
Suddenly, cool and fresh breeze enters the study room via the window, Ridhima goes to close the window so as she walks past armaan her hair gets stuck in his shirt button
so she is pulled towards armaan
Armaan looks down and says...
Armaan: main nikalta hoon….Ridhima…thoda sa paas aahey na tak ke main theek se bal ne kal doon…….aur paas….aur paas….(Ridhima starts to feel uneasy and starts breathing heavily and then she places her hands on Armaan’s shoulders)
Ridhima: aaahhh...
Armaan: Lagi kya…?? Oh I am very sorry.
Ridhima: (looks up smiling and blushes) Nahi…theek hai…it’s ok
Armaan: Bas ho gaya…there we go.
Ridhima: Thank you. (she tries to move away from him, but her dupatta gets stuck in the table and in a reflex action, she goes on top of armaan and he places his hands on her back to hold her so that she doesn’t fall and she holds onto his back so that she doesn't fall again)
JUST THEN Anjali and Muskaan see this….and to them it seems like Armaan and Ridhima are hugging eachother
Anjali: (whispering) Muskaan dekhko toh zara.. woh dono gale mill rahe hai!!
Muskaan: (happily) hai Rabba….main vari vari java
Anjali: lagta hai ke Armaan aur ridhima kuch zyada he paas paas ho gaye hai..??
Muskaan: bilkul
Anjali: Muskaan ahista se bolo koi sunn lega.
Muskaan: arrey sunne do na waise bhi jab miya biwi raazi toh phir kya karega kaazi ji haan (she laughs in her unique yet funny way).
Anjali ( smiling) :ya… par kitne pyaare lag rahe hain na dono
Muskaan: haiii bahut hi pyaare…. neeche aanedo in dono ki main toh nazar utaardungi
Anjali: ya ekdum perfect couple
Muskaan: haan ji bilkul
Anjali :achha aisa karte hain in dono love birds ko yahin akela chhod dete hain aur neeche jaake sab ko bata dete hain inke baare mein
Muskaan: haanji neeche woh sab bhi toh pareshaan ho rahe honge na
Anjali: haan lets go
They both leave and go downstairs.....
Anjali: sab log suniye....Armaan aur ridhima shaadi ke liye maan gaye hai….!!!
Rajeev: (shocked) kya..??
such a lovely story i loved it keep it up Hira superb......
& post the next part soon...
dolly2008
August 25, 2008, 01:14 PM
yaaaaro next part kab a raha hai???
itne din ho gaye
ab tu post karo na
Post it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
coolmimz
September 7, 2008, 04:26 PM
GUYZ...WILL BE CONTINUING SOON...SORRI 4 THE DELAY
sweetdamage
September 15, 2008, 01:44 PM
GUYZ...WILL BE CONTINUING SOON...SORRI 4 THE DELAY
c'mon guys post it soon...it's been too long :(
coolmimz
September 18, 2008, 01:42 AM
CLOSING THIS FANFIC IMPORTANT NOTE
GUYZ N GALZ.....SORRY 4 THIS..BUT WE HAVE 2 END THIS FANFIC..
WE DONT GET ENOUGH TIME 2 WORK ON IT..ESPECAILLY SKOOL N STUDIEZ.....SO SORRI....
BUT ONLY IF U WANT WE CAN START IT IN 2009...WITH A LOW
TRP..BUT......ACORRDING 2 ME I DONT CARE ABOUT THE
TRP THAT MUCH..CAUSE..THIS FANFIC ..2 ME...WAS ABOUT
IMPROVING UR CREATIVE SKILLZ..........I HAD FUN..N THAT MATTERZ
2 ME....I WUD LIKE 2 THANK U SOME PEOPLE...1ST OF ALL THE CREATIVE TEAM..
RIDZ...MY SUPER DUPER CREATIVE...I LOVE UR DESCRIBING SKILLZ...
ANKI...YAAR..UR JUST THE PERFECT CREATIVE IN THE WORLD RE...
JUST TAKE UR TIME RE..
HIRA...BABES...UR JUST PERFECT..N U SAID 2 ME THAT U CUDNT WRITE
A ROMANTIC SCENE..SO WHO WROTE THAT ROMANTIC SCENE WITH RIDZ...
LUV U 3 ...SERIOUSLY...WE HAD FUN..N ACORDING 2 ME WE IMPROVED..
REMEBER GUYZ..CREATIVE IN EVERY1...AS I SAY..N GUYZ...WE SUPPORTED
EACHEITHER..I MEAN..I WASNT EVEN GOOD @ SPELLING..N CAUSE OF U..
I CAN SPELL..HEHE........
I WUD ALSO LIKE 2 THANK U JABI....NEEHA.....ZAINAB..N MINNIE...4 ..........TELLING US...IF WE NEEDED 2 IMPROVE SUMTHING
N LAST BUT NOT @LEAST I WANNA THANK U GUYZ...4 ALL UR LOVE N SUPPORT..THANKZ ALOT 4 READING..N IN JULY 2009 ..IF GOD WANTS
WE WILL CONTINUE
dolly2008
September 24, 2008, 12:13 PM
Awwww mimzy
i'll miss ur FF
chalo i understand.............whenever u get time plz think of updating this
SHITHI
September 25, 2008, 09:15 AM
CLOSING THIS FANFIC IMPORTANT NOTE
GUYZ N GALZ.....SORRY 4 THIS..BUT WE HAVE 2 END THIS FANFIC..
WE DONT GET ENOUGH TIME 2 WORK ON IT..ESPECAILLY SKOOL N STUDIEZ.....SO SORRI....
BUT ONLY IF U WANT WE CAN START IT IN 2009...WITH A LOW
TRP..BUT......ACORRDING 2 ME I DONT CARE ABOUT THE
TRP THAT MUCH..CAUSE..THIS FANFIC ..2 ME...WAS ABOUT
IMPROVING UR CREATIVE SKILLZ..........I HAD FUN..N THAT MATTERZ
2 ME....I WUD LIKE 2 THANK U SOME PEOPLE...1ST OF ALL THE CREATIVE TEAM..
RIDZ...MY SUPER DUPER CREATIVE...I LOVE UR DESCRIBING SKILLZ...
ANKI...YAAR..UR JUST THE PERFECT CREATIVE IN THE WORLD RE...
JUST TAKE UR TIME RE..
HIRA...BABES...UR JUST PERFECT..N U SAID 2 ME THAT U CUDNT WRITE
A ROMANTIC SCENE..SO WHO WROTE THAT ROMANTIC SCENE WITH RIDZ...
LUV U 3 ...SERIOUSLY...WE HAD FUN..N ACORDING 2 ME WE IMPROVED..
REMEBER GUYZ..CREATIVE IN EVERY1...AS I SAY..N GUYZ...WE SUPPORTED
EACHEITHER..I MEAN..I WASNT EVEN GOOD @ SPELLING..N CAUSE OF U..
I CAN SPELL..HEHE........
I WUD ALSO LIKE 2 THANK U JABI....NEEHA.....ZAINAB..N MINNIE...4 ..........TELLING US...IF WE NEEDED 2 IMPROVE SUMTHING
N LAST BUT NOT @LEAST I WANNA THANK U GUYZ...4 ALL UR LOVE N SUPPORT..THANKZ ALOT 4 READING..N IN JULY 2009 ..IF GOD WANTS
WE WILL CONTINUE
oh nooooooooooo .. i'll miss this story .. it was going rockingly ... if possible then pls start it again ....
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