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SHITHI
September 25, 2008, 07:36 PM
another new style of dill mill gayye ... 'KIDNAP BY CHANCE ' .... COMING VERY SOON .... only on SERIAL KILLER .............

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SHITHI
September 25, 2008, 10:32 PM
guys changes to har jaga hote hai na ??? is story

me bhi kuch changes hai .... aur wo changes kya

hai wo khud hi dekhlo .........

the changes :

1.atul aur anjali are married ...

2 . muskaan & rahul are going to marry

3. ridhima ab no more sidhi sadhi ...now she is western , shararati .... bilkul jhasi ki rani ....

4. aur armaan ??? wo ek surprise hai ......

to wait kijiye ye changes bhari dmg ke liye .....


the 1st epi will be here veryyyyyyyyy sooon .......

aaakjj
September 25, 2008, 10:54 PM
guys changes to har jaga hote hai na ??? is story

me bhi kuch changes hai .... aur wo changes kya

hai wo khud hi dekhlo .........

the changes :

1.atul aur anjali are married ...

2 . muskaan & rahul are going to marry

3. ridhima ab no more sidhi sadhi ...now she is western , shararati .... bilkul jhasi ki rani ....

4. aur armaan ??? wo ek surprise hai ......

to wait kijiye ye changes bhari dmg ke liye .....


the 1st epi will be here veryyyyyyyyy sooon .......


WOW ! I'm waiting dear ....

tina_dmg
September 26, 2008, 01:24 PM
:) woo.................what an introduction..........i'm really looking foward to read this story...KIDNAP BY CHANCE.......!!!!!!:rolleyes:

SHITHI
September 27, 2008, 01:02 PM
8:30 a.m [ atul & anjali's house ]

anjali tayar horahi hai ... atul waha ake ...

atul : are anjali jaldi karo .. agar hum airport time pe nehi pouche to

ridz ko bohot gussa ayega ...

anjali : ha ha hogaya bas ye sindoor laga lu ... rahul aur muskaan

agaye ???

atul : ha ... car me wait karrahe hai ... ab chalo bhi

anjali : ha hogaya .. chalo [ anjali smiles ]

atul bhi smile karta hai ...

dono car ke taraf barte hai ...

rahul : yaar kitna der kardiya tum logone ..

atul : ha anjali ko tayar hone time lagti hai na ..

anjali : what do you mean ???

atul : kuch nehi ...

muskaan : ab bate band karo aur chalo ... ridhima ki flight pouch gayi

hogi ..

sab air port pouchte hai ....

muskaan : kaha hai ridhima ?? uski flight to land karli hai ... par wo

kaha hai ??

rahul : aur kaha hogi ?? dekh kisiko pit to nehi rahi hai ... ???

rahul : aur kaha hogi ?? dekh kisiko pit to nehi rahi hai ... ???

muskaan ek crowed ke taraf ishara karke : i think waha koi pit raha hai .. hume waha dekhni chahiye ...

wo sab waha jate hai .. waha ridhima kisiko pit rahi thi .. ridhima jeans aur tops pehni hui thi ...

sab waha jake usey rokte hai ..

anjali ridhima ko pakar ke : ridz stop .. kya karrahi hai .. mar jayega bechara ..

ridhima : marne do .. he deserve it ..

boht samjhne ke bad ridz mani aur chor diya ..

ridz : agli bar kisi ladki ke sath battamizise bat karega to hat tor ke tang ke samne rakhdungi .. fer football khel lena ....

anjali : ridz !! tu yaha isko pit rahi hai .. hum tujhe dhund dhund ke

thak gaye ...
ridhima : really ?? khud jo late karke aye uska kuch nehi .. [ muskaan

aur rahul se gale lagake ] hi muskaan , hi rahul ... hi atul ...

ridhima sabse gale lagti hai ...

ridhima : ab yehi khare rahoge ya mujhe ghar bhi leke jaoge ???

atul : ha ha chalo ........



IN ATUL & ANJI'S HOUSE :

sab breakfast karne bethte hai ...

atul : ye batao tumhari journey kaisi rahi ??? koi problem to nehi hui na

??

ridhima : kya problem hogi di ??? 1 sal pehlehi to ayi thi ...

anjali : aur mummy papa kaise hai ?? wo nehi aye ??

ridhima : mummy papa bilkul thik hai ... bas bohot busy hai isiliye nehi

apaye ... aur batao 2 din bad tumhari aur atul ke marriage anniversery

hai ... aur kuch din bad rahul aur muskaan ki shadi bhi hai ... sare

arrengement hogayi ??

rahul : nehi yaar ..

ridhima confuse hoke : kiu ???

muskaan : oye tere liye wait karrahi thi ..

atul : ha .. soch ke tum aogi to sab milke arrangement karenge ...

waise humuri anniversery ke tayari hogaya ...

ridhima : ha ha .. tum iske liye thodi na der karoge ??

sab hasne lagte hai ......

khana khatam honeke bad :

rahul : accha to phir hum chalte hai ..

ridhima : are ruk jao na .. itne din bad tum sabse mil rahi hu .. rat ko

sab milke bate karenge ..

rahul aur muskaan man jate hai ...

9 p.m :


sab hall room me hasi mazak karrahe hai ...

muskaan : waise ridhima tune to college khatam karke sidha newyork

chali gayi ... waha koi boy friend nehi hui teri ...

ridhima : boy friend aur meri ?? huh ... mai ye sab pyar vyar ke

chakkarme nehi parne wali ...

anjali : par kiu ridz ?? hume dekh ... hum kitne khush hai pyar karke ..

ridhima : because u guys are lucky ... mai itni lucky nehi hu .. mere liye

pyar ka matlab sirf problems hai .. kiu pyar me apna time waste karu

?? akeli hu aur bohot khush .. koi aur ake ye khushi chinle ye mujhe

manzoor nehi ...

atul : jis din pyar karogi usdin samjhogi pyar kitna khubsurat hai ..

ridhima : jis din !! aur ye jis din meri life me kabhi nehi ayegi .. mai ane

nehi dungi !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

glittershine
September 27, 2008, 07:15 PM
very nice
its different.....:D

SHITHI
September 27, 2008, 07:35 PM
very nice
its different.....:D

thanx for ur comment ......... :D

SHITHI
September 27, 2008, 07:49 PM
2 days later :

aj atul aur anji ke marriage anniversery hai .. ridhima ek normal si western dress pehenne jati hai ...

anjali : ridzi ye kya karrahi hai ??? tu ye pehnegi ??

ridhima : kiu isme kya problem hai ??? ye to meri fav hai ...

anjali : ha .. par ye indian ccasion me ye suite nehi karega ... tu sari pehenle ...

ridhima : sari !!!!!!!!!!!! di ap thik to hona ?? mai aur sari ?? maine to ajtak salwar kamiz bhi nehi pehni ..

anjali : tujhe salwar kamiz koun pehenneko kehraha hai ?? sirf ek sari hi to hai ... aur maine aur atulne milke tere liye ek sari kharid bhi li hai ... tu ise pehnegi to hume accha lagega ...

anjali ek gorgeous red sari nikal ke ridz ko deti hai ..

ridhima : par di sari ??

anjali : pls ... humure liye ..

ridhima : thik hai .. par mai ise pehnu kaise ?? mujhe ye pehenna nehi ata ..

anjali khush hoke : chal mai madat karti hu ...



in the party hall :

is hall me 2 party chal rahi hai ... niche atul aur anji ki anneversery party aur uper kisiki shadi ...

ridhima party me ati hai ...

muskaan : are yaar ye ridhima nehi ayi ..

ridhima : hi muskaan ..

muskaan ridhima ko pehchan nehi pati : ek minute behenji ... mai ridhima ko dhund rahi hu ...

ridhima gusse se : muskaan !!!!!!!!!

muskaan : oye ... ye to ridz jaisi lagti hai ..

ridhima : muskaan mai ridz hi hu ...

muskaan : kya ?? are ha ... sorry pehchan nehi payi .. pehli bar tujhe indian dress me dekhrahi hu na isiliye .. waise tu bari kamal lagragi hai ... ek bat bata raste me kitne ladko ke dil todke ayi hai ??

ridhima : muskaan majak mat kar ... ek to ye sari ko sambhal nehi parahi hu aur tu hai ke ..

muskaan : accha acha sorry ... atul anji ko wish kiya ??

ridz : ya ...

muskaan : accha mai dekhti hu rahul kaha hai ...

ridz : thik hai ..

tabhi ridz ke mobile pe uski ek frnd ki call ati hai .. par waha itne jorse musik baj rahe the ke use kuch sunai nehi diya ... wo hall ke picheke gate ke pas jati hai .. waha bohot andhera tha ... par music ki awaz nehi arahi thi ...

bat khatam karke jab wo wapas jane ke liye murti hai tabhi koi pichese rumal uske nose ke samne rakhta hai ridz wo rumal hataneki koushish karti hai par wo rumal nehi hata pati aur behosh ho jati hai ... aur wo admi ek bagse uski face dhakke use wahase le jata hai ....

glittershine
September 27, 2008, 07:55 PM
very nice
in 2nd post only kidnap
post the next part soon
waiting 4 it

SHITHI
September 27, 2008, 08:55 PM
very nice
in 2nd post only kidnap
post the next part soon
waiting 4 it


are itni bhi kya jaldi hai ??? :D

SHITHI
September 28, 2008, 09:07 AM
guys the 1st epi is edited .. pls check it ... :D

SHITHI
September 28, 2008, 08:39 PM
ridhima jab hosh me ati hai to dekhti hai ke ek room me chairse use

bandke rakha gaya .. wo khud ko churane ki koushish karti hai ....

ridhima : pata nehi kis bewakuf ne uthake laya mujhe yaha ..

tabhi us room ka door khul jati hai aur koi andar ata hai ..

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ridhima : koun ho tum ??

armaan gusse se : tum koun ho ?? aur sapna kaha hai ??

ridhima : lo .. sapna ke liye mujhe uthake laye ho ... so jao sapna khud

bakhud dikhai degi ...

armaan : majak band karo sapna kaha hai ?? aur tum waha kya karrahi

thi ?? maine to sapna ko bulaya tha waha ...

ridhima : are koun sapna ?? kiski sapna ?? mai to bas phone pe bat

karrahi thi ke tum pata nehi kahase urke agaye aur mujhe behosh

karke le aye yaha ... waise tum ho koun ???

armaan dhire dhire uski pas ata hai ... ridhima ghabra jati hai .. armaan

uski hat khol deta hai ...

ridhima : ahhhhh ... thanx ...

ridhima jab uthti hai to table pe ek tasbir dekhti hai ..

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ridhima : are !! ye to wahi ladki hai jiski aj shadi horahi hai hall ke 2nd

floor me .. ooo to ye mamla hai .. mujhe ye samajhke utha laye ho .. to

ye love ka lafra hai ... kash meri diary hoti iswaqt .. u know mai ek diary

me love karnese kya kya problem hote hai wo likhti hu.. taki love

karnese pehle wo ek bar parlu aur sambhal jau ... ye meri hobby hai u

know .. waise tumhara hobby kya hai ?? are kuch to bolo .. kher jo bhi

ho .. agar tum mujhe seriosly kidnap karte to mai sidha police ke pas

jati .. par tumne galtise mujhe kidnap kiya isiliye chorraha hu ..

ridhima jane ke liye age barti hai .. par 2 kadam age barte hi rum jati

hai ...

ridhima armaan akho me akhe dalke serious voice me : dekho mr.

kidnapper .. kya nam hai uski ?? ha sapna .. use bhul jao .. mujhe ye

kehne ka hak to nehi hai par fer bhi kehrahi hu ... maine usey

dekhatha .. bohot khush hai wo .. mujhe nehi lagta wo tumse pyar karti

hai .. uski life me mushkile mat khare karo .... aur ye pyar ka chakkar

choro ... uske anese pehle tum jaise the waise ho jao ... sab kuch thik

ho jayega .... apne apko taklif mat do ... sapnako bhi khush rehne do

...

armaan aur ridhima kuch seconds tak ek dusre ko dekhte rehte hai ...

ridhima : byee...

ridhima wapas party me jati hai ....


in party :

atul : ridhima kaha chale gaye the ?? hum yaha tumhe dhund dhund

ke pareshan ho gaye ...

ridhima : ha .. wo bas ek important kam tha ..

anjali : humse bhi jyada important ??

ridhima : sorry di ..

muskaan : riddhima tumhari chehre ko kya hua .. ??? make up kharab

kaise hua ??

ridhima : aa... wo .. wo muskaan tum to jante ho na mujhe make up

karna pasand nehi .. adat bhi nehi hai .. isiliye shahed kharab hogaya

..

anjali : to fer chal .. mai thik kardeti hu ...

ridhima : ha chalo ...


party khatam hogayi ... sab log ghar pouchte hai ..

ridhima apne kamre mai sone ki tayari karti hai ... tabhi usey us

kidnapper ki yaad ati hai .. party me wo bhul hi gayi thi uske bareme ...

ridhima : mr. kidnapper !!! kash tumse ek aur bar mil sakti .....

tarin ahmed
September 28, 2008, 09:28 PM
nyc..liked very much..u shud keep writting...

glittershine
September 29, 2008, 06:50 PM
very nice
wt names armaan is having mr. kidnaper...:D

SHITHI
September 30, 2008, 10:29 AM
NEXT DAY MORNING :

sab breakfast karrahe hai ...

ridhima : hey guys aj kya plan hai ??

anjali : aj hum shopping ke liye jayenge ....

ridhima : great .. kya kharidenge ??

muskaan : tere liye sari ...

ridhima : what ?? sari ?? pagal hogayeho tum sab .... kal pehni to ji nehi bhara kya ?? mai nehi pehenne wali koi sari vari ..

anjali : pehenni paregi ... meri shadi me nehi ayi thi .. isiliye us time bach gayi .. barna usi waqt sari pehna deti tujhe ...

ridhima : par di ..

muskaan : kya ridhima pehenlena .. meri shadi me tu western dress pehnegi ?? ha ??? yaad hai anjali har diwali me hum salwar suite pehenke nikalte the .. aur humuri ye ridz apni western dress pehenke ...

anjali : ha .. aur mom dad bhi kuch nehi kehte ise ... tu muskaan aur rahul ke shadi me sari pehen rahi hai .. and that's final ...


IN SHOPPING MALL :

ridhima , anjali aur muskaan shopping karrahe hai ...

shopping khatam karke ...

anjali : well shopping ajke liye kafi hogayi .... i think hume ghar chalna chahiye .. late horahe hai ..

ridhima : thik hai .. di ek kam karo tum aur muskaan chali jao .. mai thodi ghum fir ke ati hu ...

muskaan : tu akeli ...

ridhima : dont worry guys ... 1 sal bad india ayi hu .. thoda ghum to lu ...

anjali : thik hai .. par jaldi ana ...

ridhima : lunch ke pehle ajaungi ...

muskaan : take care ..


anjali aur muskaan chale jate hai ... ridhima shopping mall me ghumne lagti hai ... tabhi achanak use wo kidnapper dikhai di ...

ridhima bohot excited hoke chillake : hey mr. kidnapper !!!!!!!!!

armaan ridhima ko dekhti hai .. aur mall ke sare log bhi undonoke taraf dekhte hai ....

ridhima ko samajh ati hai ke usey aise kidnapper kehke bulana nehi chahiye tha .. wo akho me dar leke logoko dekhti hai ..

ek admi ridhima aur armaan ke pas ake : kya hua madam ?? ye admi kidnapper hai ??

ridhima jaldise : nehi nehi .. inke shakal dekhiye kya ye kidnapper lagte hai ??

sab unke shakal dekhke confuse hojate hai .. armaan ka khatarnak chehra dekhke wakei ek kidnapper lagraha hai wo ..

ridhima situation sambhalke : actually ye admi ekdin mujhe kidnappers ke hato se bachaya tha .. isiliye mai inhe kidnapper kehke bulati hu ..

admi : to koi acche namse bulaye na .. aise nam se bulayenge log inhe pakar ke pitne lagenge ..

ridhima : ha ha .. mai badme soch koi accha sa nam rakhdungi ..

sab chale jate hai .. ridhima jorse sas leti hai ...

ridhima : ahhh ... bachgayi ..

armaan janeke liye kadam barata hai ..

ridhima jaldise : hey mr. kidnapper kaha jarahe ho ?? ruko ....

glittershine
September 30, 2008, 01:00 PM
nice
post the next part soon
u r showing armaan 2 b so like a kidnapper

SHITHI
October 2, 2008, 02:08 PM
ridhima : are ruko ...


armaan : kya hai ?

ridhima pretends to be surprised : oh god !!! tum bol sakte ho ??

mujhe to laga tum gunge ho .. chalo .. mai ridhima ... abse hum dono

dost hai thik hai ...?? apna nam batao ??

armaan chup chap ridhimako dekhta rehta hai ..

ridhima : hang kiu hogaye ?? btao na apna nam .. barna mai tumhe

mr. kidnapper bulaungi .. aur log tumhe pitne lagenge ...

armaan : armaan !!

ridhima : kya ??

armaan : mera nam armaan hai ...

ridhima : are wah .. itna bariya nam rehte mai tumhe kidnapper

bularahithi .. shahhh ... ab chalo .

armaan : kaha ??

ridhima : police station !! are lunch time hai to lunch karnehi jayenge

na?? chalo ...

ridhima anji ko phone karke : hello di .. mai lunch aj bahar karungi ..

ha ... ok byee..

ridhima : chaloooooooo..

ridhima armaan ko pakar ke ek resturant me le jati hai ...

ridhima khana order karti hai ..

ridhima : tum kya khaoge ??

armaan kuch nehi kehta ...

ridhima : inke liye gobar leke ayiye ...

armaan : gobar ???

ridhima : to aur kya bolu ?? kya khaoge batate kiu nehi ??

armaan apna khana order karta hai ..

ridhima : to armaan , tum karte kya ho ?

armaan chup betha rehata hai ..

ridhima : are yaar tumhara problem kya hai ? ek ladki kya **** gayi

devdas banke bethe ho .. bansali ji ko shahrukh ke jaga tumhe lena

chahiye tha .. bas tumhe dhoti kurta pehna do aur hatme pepsi ki jaga

... are ek crush to sab ko maaf hai ... ab choro bhi us ladki ko ...

armaan : tumhe kya pata mujhe kaisa lagraha hai ... mai sapnase

bohot pyar karta hu ..

ridhima : kis ullu ke patthe ne ye bat kaha tumse ? ha ..?? are pyar

vyar aisa kuch nehi hota hai ... bas ek attraction hai jo kabhi kabhi

kisike liye thoda jyada ho jata hai .. aur log use pyar samajh bethte hai

.. mujhe dekho ab tak kite heroes pe fida hui hu .. par mai kehrahi hu

ke mai unse pyar karti hu ? ha ?? wo sab pagal hi hai jo pyar karte hai

.. samjhe ??

SHITHI
October 4, 2008, 06:40 PM
guys good news ( not for me at all) ..

i m leaving indya forever ... i cant write here any more .....

mujhe lagatha ke yaha har koi full independece ke sath apna story likh sakte hai .. but i am wrong .... mai fer kabhi yaha nehi ayungi par meri story likhna band nehi hogi ... u guys still can read my story ..... the link is here ... whoever wants to read mah story click on it - http://funstar.omgforum.net/creative-story-zone-f6/


so guys good byeee ...... forever .. i got some fantastic frnds in this forum .. thanx for it .....

aur ha agar koi mujhe koi msg dena chahte hai den mail me : shithi_jans@yahoo.com


gud byee guys .. will miss u .... byeeeee :D :D :D

glittershine
October 4, 2008, 06:47 PM
but y r u leaving...........:mad:

SHITHI
October 4, 2008, 06:49 PM
but y r u leaving...........:mad:

well thats a long history .... & i dont want to say anything abt it .... it wont be gud ......