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adorable_girl
September 29, 2008, 05:00 PM
hey guys actually aaj mera algebra paper tha n mera 1 hr mein finish hogaya tha..so i was just sitting n thinking abt veer-shera n suddenly i thot of making a poem sort of..like veer saying to shera..just thot of sharing wid u guyzz
heres have a look
zindagi k har mod par jhagadte rahe..
ruthte manate rahe..
yuhi chalta raha ruthne manane ka silsila..
pata hi nahi chala kab dil se dil mil gayye...
jab batana chaha apne pyaar k barenme ..
to malum hui uski asliyat..
theher si gayi meri zindagi..
jaise bhagwan ko hi na manzur ho hamari doori...
use bhulane ki koshish karte rahe..
uski pyarbhari yadon ko mitani ki koshish karte rahe..
kambakt dil hai ki manta nahi..
par wo bewafa hoke bhi hamse wafa karte rahe :D
plzz comment n tell me how it was..
dis was the 1st time i made a poem myself..
garvita
September 29, 2008, 05:03 PM
too gud
awesome
roopali.seth
September 29, 2008, 05:04 PM
hey itm is very sweet n nyc dear:)
adorable_girl
September 29, 2008, 05:06 PM
thnxx a lot garvita n roopali....:) :) :D
disha15
September 29, 2008, 05:08 PM
Bhai waah!Kya poem hai!Aap pls apna naam batayiye!:D
roopali.seth
September 29, 2008, 05:09 PM
thnxx a lot garvita n roopali....:) :) :D
no thanx or srry's
:)
rimita
September 29, 2008, 05:11 PM
gr88 yaar fab
adorable_girl
September 29, 2008, 05:12 PM
Bhai waah!Kya poem hai!Aap pls apna naam batayiye!:D
me binal...n thnxx
adorable_girl
September 29, 2008, 05:13 PM
gr88 yaar fab
thnxx a lot sweetie:D
disha15
September 29, 2008, 05:17 PM
Oh Binal..nice name:D
adorable_girl
September 29, 2008, 05:24 PM
Oh Binal..nice name:D
u know wat skool mein mere 3 best frnds mein se ek ka naam disha hi hai...:) :p
rimita
September 29, 2008, 05:24 PM
thnxx a lot sweetie:D
no thanksss ok mithi
disha15
September 29, 2008, 05:27 PM
Oh Wow!such A Co-incidence....:d :d :d
adorable_girl
September 29, 2008, 05:28 PM
Oh Wow!such A Co-incidence....:d :d :d
so i better behave nice wid u as i behave wid her...
disha15
September 29, 2008, 05:33 PM
Waise Tum Kaunsi Std Mein Padh Rahi Ho?
adorable_girl
September 29, 2008, 05:39 PM
Waise Tum Kaunsi Std Mein Padh Rahi Ho?
9th n u ????
disha15
September 29, 2008, 05:40 PM
Me In 10th...tumse 1 Saal Badi Hoon Bachchuuuu!hahahaha.....!!!!!
adorable_girl
September 29, 2008, 06:00 PM
Me In 10th...tumse 1 Saal Badi Hoon Bachchuuuu!hahahaha.....!!!!!
isme itna khush hone ki zarurat nahi hai .;) ...yaha pe mein tumse senior hoonn...1000 posts...hahahahahaha..!!:D :p :p
disha15
September 29, 2008, 06:04 PM
Toh Kyaaa?age Main Toh Hoon Na?hahahaha...
adorable_girl
September 29, 2008, 06:08 PM
Toh Kyaaa?age Main Toh Hoon Na?hahahaha...
tu age mein aage hai to main posts main ....700 posts....tu karte karte thak jaayegi but main aage rahungi...
waise wen is ur birthday??
simplycheenu
September 29, 2008, 06:54 PM
hey guys actually aaj mera algebra paper tha n mera 1 hr mein finish hogaya tha..so i was just sitting n thinking abt veer-shera n suddenly i thot of making a poem sort of..like veer saying to shera..just thot of sharing wid u guyzz
heres have a look
zindagi k har mod par jhagadte rahe..
ruthte manate rahe..
yuhi chalta raha ruthne manane ka silsila..
pata hi nahi chala kab dil se dil mil gayye...
jab batana chaha apne pyaar k barenme ..
to malum hui uski asliyat..
theher si gayi meri zindagi..
jaise bhagwan ko hi na manzur ho hamari doori...
use bhulane ki koshish karte rahe..
uski pyarbhari yadon ko mitani ki koshish karte rahe..
kambakt dil hai ki manta nahi..
par wo bewafa hoke bhi hamse wafa karte rahe :D
plzz comment n tell me how it was..
dis was the 1st time i made a poem myself..
omg r u a poetess?????????
adorable_girl
September 29, 2008, 08:17 PM
nahi...bas aise hi suddenly..
arre koi aur kaam hi nahi tha...exam hall mein to poem banana shuru kar diya...timepass bhi hogaya..
simplycheenu
September 29, 2008, 08:26 PM
bahut achi hai aur likhi hai kya tumne
Shania Sarabhai
September 29, 2008, 08:27 PM
superb binal..........:D
very good
adorable_girl
September 30, 2008, 08:19 PM
bahut achi hai aur likhi hai kya tumne
nahi this is my first poem...
baad mein exam hall mein aur poems banaungi...:p :p :D
simplycheenu
September 30, 2008, 08:21 PM
nahi this is my first poem...
baad mein exam hall mein aur poems banaungi...:p :p :D
gud keep postin
adorable_girl
September 30, 2008, 08:22 PM
superb binal..........:D
very good
thnxx shania:)
disha15
September 30, 2008, 08:27 PM
Yaar Binal....tu Toh Vo Ndtv Imagine Pe Aata Hena"jasuben......."us Serial Ke Prof.chandrakant Joshi Ki Tarha Boli"aise Hi Suddenly"vo Bhi Hamesha Aisa Hi Kehta Hai.......hahahaha!:d :d
simplycheenu
September 30, 2008, 08:29 PM
hey tum dekhti ho kya vo serial
disha15
September 30, 2008, 08:31 PM
Kabhi Kabhi.... Tv Pe Kuch Bhi Nahi Hota Hai To......
adorable_girl
September 30, 2008, 08:31 PM
Yaar Binal....tu Toh Vo Ndtv Imagine Pe Aata Hena"jasuben......."us Serial Ke Prof.chandrakant Joshi Ki Tarha Boli"aise Hi Suddenly"vo Bhi Hamesha Aisa Hi Kehta Hai.......hahahaha!:d :d
main wo dekhti thi na isliye...
neways hii...mujhe miss kar rahi thi kya..?? main tere post me dekha..!!:D
disha15
September 30, 2008, 08:36 PM
Haan Yaar...shaam Ke Waqt...yahaan Par Koi Bhi Nahi Tha....unka Bhoot Bhi Nahi.....:d
adorable_girl
September 30, 2008, 08:38 PM
Haan Yaar...shaam Ke Waqt...yahaan Par Koi Bhi Nahi Tha....unka Bhoot Bhi Nahi.....:d
waise bhi yaha bhoot allowed nahi hai....!!
ye insaano ka 4um hai bhooto ka nahi...!!
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