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Wow .. NIKZIIIIII !! Amazing part .. this part was so funny and you know how much I love funny stuff ! idiot you have been my friend for like forever and you never told me you write ? Wait I'll come to your place and beat u .. lol ! Amazing .. please continue soon
and btw Niki Dsilva .. your FF is the ONLY lnmdj ff i read .. and its amazing !! Love ya !! 
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hey itz awsm!!!!!!
continue soon.....wow.. 
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hey guyzzz .. thnxx fr appreciating my work dearies .... thnxx komal .. n dhritzz .......
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AMAZING Nikki...
I loved both the parts... too funny.
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WOW Nikki....Its sooooo wonderful!!!
Loved every word of the parts.....especially those of Robert Pattinson and Breaking Dawn in the 1st part and the 2nd part was totally hilarious!!!Keep up the good work sis!
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here goes ... the third aprt .. njoy 
Chapter III
He looked at me and gave a wide smile. Let me make it clear he wasn’t smiling he was sneering at me, as if he had caught me putting my hand in the cookie jar. To add to that I could feel the entire table was staring at us, waiting for some drama to unfold, so that they could gossip. I didn’t want that. I tried my best to furrow my brow, and gave each one of them dirty looks; they immediately got back to eating. I shrugged my shoulders. Maybe I was popular for my short temper, as Sanaya had told.
‘Hmm, so you’re the boss around here?’ He was certainly not impressed. Heck! Who wanted to impress a rich snob like him?
‘No, I’m not. I’m just known for my temper’ I snapped back. What was his problem? It wasn’t that I bossed around people and bullied them. I was warm and friendly, and had many friends who had deserted me right know. I was just wondering where Sanu was, when he snapped his fingers in front of my eyes.
‘Down to earth Damini’ he said. I couldn’t bear it anymore; he was getting on my nerves and had already fried them up.
‘Listen Prithvi, I don’t know who the heck you are and what the hell do you want. But you have been eating my head throughout lunch, I have not been able to eat my lunch, I’m irritated and annoyed, my day was sick and my life totally sucks, and top it all of my best friend is freaking dead’ I yelled at him. The entire cafeteria stared at us. Tears welled in my eyes. Aditya was dead and it was a fact. I wiped my eyes roughly, while Prithvi tried to console me, patting my hand lightly. I shook his hand off, and ran outside, I ran and ran till I finally reached my room. I went inside and shut the door up. I couldn’t control myself, I burst out into loud wails. I was literally bawling, when someone knocked at my door. I continued crying and the person outside kept on knocking, till I finaly gave up. I got up, wiped away my tears and opened the door. It was Prithvi. He gave me a warm smile. I felt like shit. I had insulted him to the last degree, still he had taken the trouble to find my room and come up to see if I’m okay. I had to return his smile. It was genuine.
‘Are you alright?’ His smile faltered looking at my crappy face. I turned around.
‘Yeah of course’ I replied, not snapping back for a change. I was already feeling better. I guess it was because of the light of the smile that radiated from him. I actually felt cheerful. I asked him to sit, ran to the washroom splashed my face with water, wiped it smoothed down my clothes and went out, he was playing with Ash. I froze, utterly shocked. No one ever-made friends with Ash, I mean, yeah, they did, but not in so less time! He was a little possessive about me, and didn’t like my friends as I spent more time with them than with her. He used to usually whine grumpily and settle at my feet, protectively. Ash gave a small playful bark and cuddled up into Prithvi’s arms. Priithvi looked up at me.
‘You have an adorable dog.’ He told me, continuing to pat my pup. Who was he? I wondered. Can a rich guy like him be so warm and friendly, and most of all love pets? That was shocking.
‘Down to earth Damini!’ he repeated the same line again. It was like the third time that day. I was certainly daydreaming that.
‘Yeah, I know, I love him, he’s my favorite companion but at the moment he’s busy, I guess’ I felt a pang of jealousy. Ash never ever cuddled that way with me, he usually whined till I left him on the floor. Prithvi laughed, a sort of a musical laugh, reminding me of Edward. I sighed. I was a total Edward freak. He stopped laughing and looked at me quizzically, reminding me of that scene in the New Moon book, when Bella sighs, and he looks at her curiously. I smiled at him, His eyes widened a bit, but he smiled back. I must’ve certainly been pretty mean to him that day.
‘So, tell me something about yourself’ he felt a little relaxed that I had finally smiled back at him that is properly.
‘Uh, I’m from Darjeeling, I live with my dad and two sisters Roshni and Avni, and I love painting. I tried to sound cool, but failed miserably. He looked at me, as if wanting to say that was the worst introduction I have ever heard. But instead he just smiled at me and mumbled a small ‘oh’ I started to feel the heat in the room. He didn’t ask me anything after that, afraid to hear some crappy answers, I guessed. So I continued.
‘And, you didn’t tell me bout yourself?’ I sat down on the other end of the bed. His eyes were closed and it was as if he was looking at the ceiling. His arms were carrying all his weight as he stretched more, he’s sleeves were rolled up, and I don’t know when he did that, I didn’t even notice it. I looked at his arms; green tendons were standing out from his muscular white arms, which again reminded me of Edward, gosh!!! I had certainly gone crazy; I was comparing Prithvi to Edward. But he was a bit like Edward. !!!!!!!!!!!! . I’m a certified crackpot.
‘I’ve finished my schooling at New York’ I thought so. ‘I lived with my parents and big brother’ he literally growled while saying this. He must hate them, I guessed.
‘I didn’t want to stay with them one bit, that is why I came over here.’ He explained dipping his brows slightly. I didn’t know what to say to him; instead I just started blabbering some nonsensical talk. Looking at my attempt to change the topic, he smiled and played along. We talked a lot about different things and I came to know him better. He was a good person. After a lot of time, of whiling away, talking and chatting he said,
‘I got to go; it was very nice meeting you and talking to you. Take care, see you.’ He shook my hand gave me one of his super-duper warm smiles and left. I opened the door for him, and as he was leaving the corridor he popped his head back and smiled again, I smiled back and shut door.
I had made a new and true friend
Hey guyz hoped u’ll liked it .. thnxx everyone fr ur comments .. thnxx maitree .. srry cudint reply ..cya…
PS. Hope u’ll njoyed reading this part this one was inspired by Dhriti and Sanu … love ya’ll both babies!! muaahzz
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hey awsm part!!
continue soonest....am w8ing!
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Quote:
Originally Posted by niki_cute_dmg
here goes ... the third aprt .. njoy 
Chapter III
He looked at me and gave a wide smile. Let me make it clear he wasn’t smiling he was sneering at me, as if he had caught me putting my hand in the cookie jar. To add to that I could feel the entire table was staring at us, waiting for some drama to unfold, so that they could gossip. I didn’t want that. I tried my best to furrow my brow, and gave each one of them dirty looks; they immediately got back to eating. I shrugged my shoulders. Maybe I was popular for my short temper, as Sanaya had told.
‘Hmm, so you’re the boss around here?’ He was certainly not impressed. Heck! Who wanted to impress a rich snob like him?
‘No, I’m not. I’m just known for my temper’ I snapped back. What was his problem? It wasn’t that I bossed around people and bullied them. I was warm and friendly, and had many friends who had deserted me right know. I was just wondering where Sanu was, when he snapped his fingers in front of my eyes.
‘Down to earth Damini’ he said. I couldn’t bear it anymore; he was getting on my nerves and had already fried them up.
‘Listen Prithvi, I don’t know who the heck you are and what the hell do you want. But you have been eating my head throughout lunch, I have not been able to eat my lunch, I’m irritated and annoyed, my day was sick and my life totally sucks, and top it all of my best friend is freaking dead’ I yelled at him. The entire cafeteria stared at us. Tears welled in my eyes. Aditya was dead and it was a fact. I wiped my eyes roughly, while Prithvi tried to console me, patting my hand lightly. I shook his hand off, and ran outside, I ran and ran till I finally reached my room. I went inside and shut the door up. I couldn’t control myself, I burst out into loud wails. I was literally bawling, when someone knocked at my door. I continued crying and the person outside kept on knocking, till I finaly gave up. I got up, wiped away my tears and opened the door. It was Prithvi. He gave me a warm smile. I felt like shit. I had insulted him to the last degree, still he had taken the trouble to find my room and come up to see if I’m okay. I had to return his smile. It was genuine.
‘Are you alright?’ His smile faltered looking at my crappy face. I turned around.
‘Yeah of course’ I replied, not snapping back for a change. I was already feeling better. I guess it was because of the light of the smile that radiated from him. I actually felt cheerful. I asked him to sit, ran to the washroom splashed my face with water, wiped it smoothed down my clothes and went out, he was playing with Ash. I froze, utterly shocked. No one ever-made friends with Ash, I mean, yeah, they did, but not in so less time! He was a little possessive about me, and didn’t like my friends as I spent more time with them than with her. He used to usually whine grumpily and settle at my feet, protectively. Ash gave a small playful bark and cuddled up into Prithvi’s arms. Priithvi looked up at me.
‘You have an adorable dog.’ He told me, continuing to pat my pup. Who was he? I wondered. Can a rich guy like him be so warm and friendly, and most of all love pets? That was shocking.
‘Down to earth Damini!’ he repeated the same line again. It was like the third time that day. I was certainly daydreaming that.
‘Yeah, I know, I love him, he’s my favorite companion but at the moment he’s busy, I guess’ I felt a pang of jealousy. Ash never ever cuddled that way with me, he usually whined till I left him on the floor. Prithvi laughed, a sort of a musical laugh, reminding me of Edward. I sighed. I was a total Edward freak. He stopped laughing and looked at me quizzically, reminding me of that scene in the New Moon book, when Bella sighs, and he looks at her curiously. I smiled at him, His eyes widened a bit, but he smiled back. I must’ve certainly been pretty mean to him that day.
‘So, tell me something about yourself’ he felt a little relaxed that I had finally smiled back at him that is properly.
‘Uh, I’m from Darjeeling, I live with my dad and two sisters Roshni and Avni, and I love painting. I tried to sound cool, but failed miserably. He looked at me, as if wanting to say that was the worst introduction I have ever heard. But instead he just smiled at me and mumbled a small ‘oh’ I started to feel the heat in the room. He didn’t ask me anything after that, afraid to hear some crappy answers, I guessed. So I continued.
‘And, you didn’t tell me bout yourself?’ I sat down on the other end of the bed. His eyes were closed and it was as if he was looking at the ceiling. His arms were carrying all his weight as he stretched more, he’s sleeves were rolled up, and I don’t know when he did that, I didn’t even notice it. I looked at his arms; green tendons were standing out from his muscular white arms, which again reminded me of Edward, gosh!!! I had certainly gone crazy; I was comparing Prithvi to Edward. But he was a bit like Edward. !!!!!!!!!!!! . I’m a certified crackpot.
‘I’ve finished my schooling at New York’ I thought so. ‘I lived with my parents and big brother’ he literally growled while saying this. He must hate them, I guessed.
‘I didn’t want to stay with them one bit, that is why I came over here.’ He explained dipping his brows slightly. I didn’t know what to say to him; instead I just started blabbering some nonsensical talk. Looking at my attempt to change the topic, he smiled and played along. We talked a lot about different things and I came to know him better. He was a good person. After a lot of time, of whiling away, talking and chatting he said,
‘I got to go; it was very nice meeting you and talking to you. Take care, see you.’ He shook my hand gave me one of his super-duper warm smiles and left. I opened the door for him, and as he was leaving the corridor he popped his head back and smiled again, I smiled back and shut door.
I had made a new and true friend
Hey guyz hoped u’ll liked it .. thnxx everyone fr ur comments .. thnxx maitree .. srry cudint reply ..cya…
PS. Hope u’ll njoyed reading this part this one was inspired by Dhriti and Sanu … love ya’ll both babies!! muaahzz
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WOW !! This is an amazing part .. and my Nikzi ! You are so sweet .. But such an amazing part can't be inspired by me !! lol .. Great work Nikzi !
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Nice part niki..really enjoyed reading..and that too after 5 days of non-forumming this lifted my spirits hehehe..continue soon. I am a bit surprised at the fast pace of this part..they are friends already?? but good looking forward to the 'friendship'
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It's a fantabulous part Niki... and I loved the Edward Cullen comparisons... 
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Love all my friends on the forum.
Missing you Aditi and Nashi...
Winner of MJHT forum valentines day 2008 contest.
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