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Indya Senior
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Join Date: Sep 2009
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very sweet part! 
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1 Week Ago
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Indya Senior
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: In India....Lost In Kajen land..
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WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW
WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was such a AWESUM part!!Loved every sentence of it!
Update soon!
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6 Days Ago
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Indya Senior
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Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: I live in Pune..!!
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hey guyz .... im very bzee these dayz with the load of studies on our backs .. n sorry i cudint update soon ... so frm here onwards i will be updating the ff evry two dayz .. but the partz wont b too big .. i hope thtz ok? thnzz guyz... muaahz
so here goes-
Chapter 4!
Now that Prithvi had gone I was all by myself, and it felt eerie. The entire afternoon I was around somebody, first Sanaya, then Prithvi. I smiled to myself. Prithvi was a nice guy, good-natured and all unlike the other low profile one’s, in our college. God only knows how they got an admission in our prestigious and respectable college. I shook my head in disgust at the thought of that rich father’s son, Neal. Let me tell you, about 30% of the college population was Indians. Most of them honest and hard working, but a few were very very irritating, selfish, and ill mannered, and portrayed a bad picture of Indian students. It was really annoying. I shook my head again; my eye caught the pile of books sitting on my table.
‘Oh freak! I forgot all about tomorrow’s assignment!’ I hid my face in the pillow. I knew I had to do it or otherwise I would be dead, so I got up, lifted up the pile of books dumped it on my bed and started. It wasn’t very difficult, just a report on a few English plays, I sighed with relief. Usually Professor. Carter loaded us with homework every day. Not just simple homework, but complex ones, I didn’t like him much. The assignment was tough since I had to refer to several books but I managed to complete my homework in three hours. I looked at my ticking clock, 7 pm. Heck! It was already seven. I immediately, shut my books, washed my face, like the hundredth time that day and sat to pray. It really sounds weird, but I loved praying. I had full faith in my God, and gave him at least half an hour out of my 24-hour hectic schedule. I kneeled near my big open window, shut my eyes and entered heaven. I felt so peaceful praying it made me feel lightheaded, I prayed for something’s which I am certainly not telling you’ll people. I got up; dressed up again and got ready to go down for dinner, time to face the world, I said to myself. I was wondering where my roomie was when she came bustling into the door with a big bag. I looked at her disheveled hair stained t-shirt and smudged make-up and burst into a fit of giggles. She looked at me raising one of her perfectly arched eyebrows at me, humpfed and flopped herself on the bed.
‘Jen? Did you just get lost in a garage sale?’ I asked, trying to stop myself from laughing, but couldn’t control it.
‘Ha Ha, remind me to laugh’ and she busied herself, left me laughing at my silly joke alone.
Jennifer Connaught. My roommate. She very loving and loyal to me, I loved her a lot, and she loved me too. But today wasn’t her day. It was better to leave her alone. Jen was European; she had a short mushroom sort of cut and deep brown eyes, which were so adorable!
‘D, did you finish Carter’s assignment?’ she asked me, her bad mood still lingering in the room.
‘Yes, I did finish Professor Carter’s assignment’ I replied looking at her with pity. She had no respect at all for Professors, I sighed thinking of the long day ahead tomorrow.
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6 Days Ago
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Indya Senior
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Join Date: Jul 2009
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chiki...i enjoyed reading it. It was short but precise and very crisp. how many times will i be praising your writing skills?
and its perfect if you will write shorter parts but update more often, so that the flow is maintained. And also because everyone here waits eagerly for them
Loved it!
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6 Days Ago
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Indya Senior
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: mera bharat mahan!!!
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nice part dear.......
loved it yaar.....ur reeli good...as long as u update im kool wid it all d best wid ur studies....love ya muwahhhhhhhhh 
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4 Days Ago
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Indya Senior
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Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: I live in Pune..!!
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hi guyzz here goes the fifth part as i promised .. muaahzz!!!
Chapter 5
I was really tired and wanted to catch some good sleep that day. So I went to take a shower. I removed my clothes and stepped into the warm, steamy cubicle and turned on the shower. The hot water felt like pinpricks on my cold skin, but it felt nice. The warm water washed over my body unknotting my muscles. I took deep breaths and exhaled loudly. I took my favorite apple-flavored shampoo from the shelf took a small glob of it on my hand and inhaled. Hmmm, the smell of green apples made me want to eat the shampoo, but I controlled myself and dumped it on my head, massaging my always-hot head. I should have taken this bath earlier. I thought to myself. I felt so relaxed and peaceful after the hot shower. I put on my soft green loose t-shirt and my sweatpants. I came out of the bathing room and looked at Jen. She was fast asleep in her same outing clothes. I sighed, went up to her pulled the warm blanket over her huddled body and switched of the table lamp. I dried my hair and cuddled into my own soft and cozy bed picked up my breaking dawn and started to read it. All over again. I chuckled to myself when Edward bought Bella the Mercedes Guardian. And she said, ‘What is wrong with good old bulletproof windows?’ because her car had missile proof windows. LOL. I couldn’t control myself. I burst out into a fit of laughter. Jen, twisted in her bed, grumbling something in her sleep. I gagged my mouth with my cover trying to stop myself from laughing. I don’t know why I was laughing so heartily. I guess I had lost it. I finally calmed myself down and looked at the watch it was 10:00 pm. I burped suddenly and started laughing again. I had ordered food in the room for dinner. I told them I was unwell actually I couldn’t face the crowd after my angry outburst on Prithvi. The food was delicious, chicken soup, chicken stir-fry, chicken nuggets and some noodle. I wasn’t a foodie I was a chicken-foodie!!! Plus for dessert I had Chocolate Mousse. Mmmm , super yummy I was full. I finally closed my book switched of my table lamp and cuddled into my warm blanket, my thoughts lingering in the twilight world. I finally drifted into a peaceful sleep.
hope u'lll njoyed it!!!
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4 Days Ago
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Indya Senior
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Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: In my dreamz....
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Fabulous Nikki... Loved both the parts... even though they were short, they were fun to read...
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Indya Senior
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Join Date: Oct 2008
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hey dear reeli nice part loved it........
continue soon... 
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