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View Poll Results: did you like pyar aya signal todkar ??
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May 21, 2008
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Pyar Aya Sgnal Todkar ( Dmg's New Style )
ye hain dmg aka dill mill gayye based story ..... par zara hatke . isbaar ye log doctors nehi balki teachers hain !!! Signal High School ke . sab kuch pehle jaise magar rup nayi . so enjoy dis new style of dmg doctorS ..... zaldi araha hai SERIAL KILLER main .........
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May 21, 2008
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ॐ ☼ яα∂нєкяιѕнηα 4 єνєя ۞
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Hi
Ya........
1st Comment.....
I am wating for episodes...
Thanx for asking name of story....
i hope this name will be good 4 your story....
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May 22, 2008
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Episode No. 1
[ANJALI AUR RIDHIMA PARK MAIN JOGGING KARRAHETHE ..TABHI RIDHIMA KO EHSAS HUA KE USKI MOBILE PHONE USKI PAS NEHI HAIN ........ KHO GAYI HAIN .. ]
RIDHIMA : oh no... di , di meri mobile nehi milrahi hain ....
ANJALI : what ? .... apni pockets thik se check karo ....
RIDHIMA : di maine dono pocket check karli hai ... nehi hain .... ha , shahed raste main gir gayi hain ... main abhi jake dhund ke le ati hu ....
ANJALI: main sath chalu ??
RIDHIMA : nehi di ... ap jayie , main khud hi dhund lungi ...
ANJALI : jaldi ana , late mat hona .... yaad hain na aj signal high me humari nokri ki pehli din hain ....
RIDHIMA : ha di , yaad hain .. ap jayie ....
ANJALI : ok, then see you ....
[RIDHIMA APNI MOBILE DHUNDNA SHURU KARTI HAIN .. USKO WO RASTE MAIN MIL JATI HAIN .. ]
RIDHIMA : mil gayi ... thank god. ab mujhe short cut lena parega . shortcut lungi to jaldi ghar pouch paungi .....
[ RIDHIMA SHORTCUT LETI HAIN . USE BOHOT PYAS LAGTI HAIN .. ISILIYE BASKET BALL COURT KE GATE JUICE PINE BETHTI HAIN ...ACHANAK EK BASKET BALL JORSE USKI SARPE LAGTI HAIN ..... RIDHIMA PICHE MURKE DEKHTI HAIN EK LADKA [ARMAAN ]AKELE KUCH BACCHOKE SAATH KHARA HAIN ..RIDHIMA BALL LEKE US LADKE KE PAS JATI HAIN ...]
RIDHIMA: [ GUSSE SE ] dekh kar nehi khel sakte ? andhe ho ?
ARMAAN : [ WITH FULL ATTITUDE ] actually ye bat mujhe tumse kehni chahiye ... dikhai nehi deta ye basket ball caurt hain ... koi cafeteria thodi jo tum khana khane beth gaye ...
RIDHIMA :[ AUR GUSSE ME] main khana nehi kha rahi thi . juice pi rahithi ...
ARMAAN :same thing ....
RIDHIMA : khudko bohot smart samajhte ho ????
ARMAAN : isme samajh ne wali kounsi bat hain main to waise hi smart hu .. right boys ????
bacche : right ...
RIDHIMA : so MR.SMART ekbar harna pasand karoge ??
ARMAAN : ye har word meri dictionary me nehi hain .... main jabbhi khelta hu humesha jitne ke liye hi khelta hu ....
RIDHIMA : lets see ....
ARMAAN : ok lets see .
[ RIDHIMA KUCH KARNE SE PEHLEHI ARMAAN USKI HATSE BALL LE LETA HAIN AUR BASKET KARTA HAIN ... PHIR RIDHIMA BHI JABARDAST EK BASKET KARTI HAIN .. DONO KE SCORE 1-1 ... EISE ME DONOKI MOBILE ME ALARM BAJTI HAIN ]
ARMAAN & RIDHIMA EK SATH : oh no i am late ...
ARMAAN : lagta hain mujhe phir kabhi jitna parega...
RIDHIMA: dekhenge kaun jitta hain ....
ARMAAN : dekhenge ...
[ RIDHIMA JANE KE LIYE PICHE MURTI HI ... TABHI ]
ARMAAN: hey Ms. BASKET janese pehle apna nam to boldo ..
RIDHIMA: main kisi ayre geyre ko apna nam nehi batati ......
ARMAAN :lekin main batata hu ... so my name is A....
RIDHIMA : tum apna bakwas nam kisi aur ko suna na ... main chali ....
[ARMAAN AUR RIDHIMA APNE APNE RASTO ME NIKAL PARTE HAIN ]
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May 22, 2008
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ॐ ☼ яα∂нєкяιѕнηα 4 єνєя ۞
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Hey
I Think I Am Going To Be A Big Fan Of Your Story......
Nice Starting......
I'm Waiting For Episode 2
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May 22, 2008
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grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeaaaaaaattttttttt going yaar..........awsome....mindblowing....fantabulas. ...!!!!!!!! keep posting plz..........cant wait to read the 2nd epi......i think u r gonna have another fan of ur story...........
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i would do anything 4 love.... but i wont do that.....
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May 22, 2008
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Episode No . 2
[RIDHIMA GHAR PAUCHTI HAIN .]
RIDHIMA : nani ... nani kaha gayi ap ?
NANI:are main yaha hu kitchen main ... chilla mat ...
RIDHIMA :[ NANI KO GALESE LAGA KE ]sorry ....
NANI :mujhe bad me gale lagana .. tym kya hua uska khayal hain ? late nehi ho rahi hain kya ?jaldi ja .. tyar hoke school bhi toh jana hain ?
RIDHIMA:ha ha ja rahihu ... di chali gayi ?
NANI : woh to kab ki nikal gayi ...
RIDHIMA :aur mummy papa ...
NANI : wo dono toh usse bhi pehle nikal gaye ...
[ ridhima ye sunke jaldi se kamre me chali jati hain . kapre nikal ne ke waqt use armaan ki yaad ati hain ]
RIDHIMA: [GUSSE SE]AJ US IDIOTE KE WAJASE MAIN LATE HO JAOUNGI ... USE TOH MAIN CHORUNGI NEHI ....
[RIDHIMA SIGNAL HIGH ME POUCHTI HAIN . WAHA WOH DEKHTI HAIN KE EK BACCHA SCALE KI DO TUKRE HAT ME LEKE RO RAHI HAIN . RIDHIMA WO TUKRE APNE HAT ME LETI HAIN AUR BACCHESE PUCHTI HAIN KE WO KIU RO RAHIHAI .... TABHI KOI PICHE SE BOLTAHAI ....
'OHO AISE KOI BACCHI KO MARTI HAIN KYA ? ]
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May 22, 2008
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ॐ ☼ яα∂нєкяιѕнηα 4 єνєя ۞
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Yeh
Superb.....
Keep Posting...
Maza Aa Gaya .....
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May 23, 2008
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thank u guys for reading my story ............. thanx amit , dillependu , and my dhaka frnd mashika .... thank u so much .............. epi.3 will be there very soon ...

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May 23, 2008
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Episode No.4
OHO AISE BHI KOI BACCHI KO MARTI HAI KYA ?
[ RIDHIMA YE SUNKE PICHE MURTI HAIN AUR DEKHTI HAIN BOLNE WALA AUR KOI NEHI WOHI HAIN JISKE SATH SUBHA USNE JHAGGRA KI ]
RIDHIMA: tum?
ARMAAN: ha main .... lekin tumhe sharam nehi ati ma hoke apni beti par hat uthati ho ....
RIDHIMA: ye meri beti nehi hain .......
ARMAAN : oh ... lekin ferbhi... tumhe sharam nehi ati ek ma hoke kisi aur ke bacchi pe hat uthati ho ..... are re re ... dekho marte marte scale bhi tod diya .....
RIDHIMA: tum yaha kya karrahe ho ???
[AISE MAIN ARMAAN KA NAZAR RIDHIMA KI ID CARD ME PARTI HAIN ... WOH CHOUK JATA HAIN TE DEKHKAR KE RIDHIMA BHI USKE TARHA IS SCHOOL KA EK JUNIOR TEACHER HAIN ]
ARMAAN : main ? .... woh kya hai ki meri jo nana hain unke dost ki bete ki dost ki neighbour hain na .... unki dost ki behen ki sasur ki dost ki bete ki bacchi yaha parti hain ...... use drop karne aya tha .....
RIDHIMA : ha ?
ARMAAN : KYA ?
RIDHIMA : kuch nehi ...
RIDHIMA US BACCHI KO CHUP KARANE BATHTI HAIN .. ARMAAN EK CHOCOLATE US BACCHI KO DETA HAIN ... BACCHI HAS DETI HAIN . RIDHIMA KHUSH HOTI HAIN KE WO BACCHI RONA BAND KI PAR USE ARMAAN PAR AUR BHI GUSSA ATI HAIN ]
IN JUNIOUR TEACHER'S ROOM :
[RIDHIMA ANDAR JATI HAIN ]
ANJALI : RIDZ !itna der kiu kiya .. mobile mila ...
RIDHIMA : ha di mobile mila ....
ANJALI: accha chalo ... hume office room me jana hain ... humare do senior teachers wahape humare liye intejar karrahe hain ....
RIDHIMA: chalo di ......
IN OFFICE ROOM:
KIRTI MA'M: main aplogo ki ek senior teacher hu .... mere sath hai shubhankar sir .... hum dono upke senior hain .. humlog apko duties denge ... uplog usi hisab se kam karenge ...
[AISEME ARMAAN ENTER KARTA HAIN .... USEY DEKHKAR RIDHIMA CHOUK JATI HAIN ]
RIDHIMA :tum??????????????????????
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May 23, 2008
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ॐ ☼ яα∂нєкяιѕнηα 4 єνєя ۞
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Hahah
Mujhe Ridhima Ka Tummmmmmmmm Kehna
Aur....
Armaan Ka Ridhima Ko Bache Ki Maa Bana Dena..
Isse Mujhe Movie Akhiton Se Goli Mare Ki Scene Ki Yaad Aai Jab Govinda..Ravina Ji Ko 6 Bachon Ki Maa Kehta Hai....
Thanx..nice
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